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Story main apko sabkuch miley ga abi to survat hai dhere dhere jo jo missing hai vo bi aye ga
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Bhai yoga kab kiya hero ne apne kaha padh liya hero ko yoga karte huye
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dada g ke hukam anusar ik maid mere liye rakh li gayi thi, aur main in 2 mahino me bahar thodi bohat exercise karne bi suru kar di thi ki tabi
Me – ye nahi ho sakta, kyon mere sath hi eysa kyon ho raha hai
AB AAGEEE
Chalo dekhte hai keya huya
Eyse hi ik din main apne kamre me betha huya tha ki tabi mere pass raghav bhaiya aye aur boley
Raghav – adi us din keya huya tha
Mujey andaja tha eysa kuch hoga kyoki mujey abhi se pata chala tha ki raghav bhaiya us se bohat bar puch chukey hai mere aur nelam ke bare me par maine abhi ko mana kiya huya tha kisi ko bi batane se, aur sayad bhaiya ne kisi tarha se abhi se kuch na kuch to pata kar hi liya tha jo aj vo mere pass aye hai
Me – ap kis bare me baat kar rahe ho bhai
Raghav – dekh adi mujey itna to apne bhai par bharosha tha ki vo kuch galat nahi kar sakta par usdin condition kuch eysi thi ki galat tun lag raha tha isi liye main bi kuch bol nahi payea, par ik din jab tun aur abhi baat kar rahe thay tab maine tumhari kuch batey sun li thi, isi liye maine abhi se puchna suru kiya par usne mujey kuch nahi batayea par maine bi har nahi mani aur kal mujey pata chala ki tera aur nelam ka realtion tha, aur agar tum dono relation me thay to tun eysi harkat to nahi kar sakta is liye mujey sach bata hakhir kar us din huya keya tha
(Sandy – adi aur abhi ki bataye sun ne vala aur koyi nahi raghav hi tha)
Me – bhai us baat ko bitey 2 mahine ho chuke hai ab ap keya karo gaye jan kar, chhod jo ho gayea so ho gayea
Raghav – eyse keyse chhod dun jaha tak mujey lag raha hai teri koyi galati nahi thi fir tun kyon sabki nafrat jehl raha hai, tun mujey sach bata main fir sabko bata dunga fir sabkuch thik ho jaye ga
Me – bhai ap mujey ik baat batayo keya mujey sabi usdin se pehle sachme pyaar karte thay
Raghav – adi ye bi koyi puchne vali baat hai tujey sabi bohat pyaar karte thay
Me – mujey to eysa nahi lagta
Raghav – kyon
Me – bhai agar sab sachne mujse pyaar karte thay to keya unko mujpar itna bi bharosha nahi tha ki main eysa harkat karna to dur eysi harkat karne ke bare me soch bi nahi sakta, keya kisi ne ik bar bi meri baat sun ne ki kosis ki, tab to chhod uske baad bi mujey bi yaad nahi hai ki maine kitni baar sabke pass ja kar unse baat karne ki kosis ki hai par maine jitni baar bi ja kar unse baat karne ki kosis ki sabne mujey eyse khud dur kar diya jeyse main bohat bada apradhi hun, to main keyse mann lun ki sabi mujse pyaar karte thay
Raghav – chup
Bhai bolta bi keya meri harik baat sach jo thi
Me – thik hai bhai main apko sach batayu ga par ik shart pe
Raghav – keysi shart
Me – ap ye baat kisi ko nahi batayo gaye
Raghav – eysa kyon kya tun nahi chahta ki sab pehle jeysa ho jaye
Me – mujey nahi pata apko meri kasam ap kisi ko nahi batayo gaye
Fir ham dono kuch der shant bethey rahe fir bhai chupi thodte huye bole
Raghav – chal thik hai teri kasam main kisi ko nahi batau ga
Bhai ka javab sun ne ke baad maine uney sab kuch bata diya jo usdin huya tha, sach pata chalne ke baad
Raghav – main sabko batane ja raha hun
Me – bhai apne meri kasam khayi hai
Raghav – adi tun eysa kyon kar raha hai keya miley ga tujey eysa karke
Fir raghav bhaiya ne bohat kosis ki ki main aoni kasam vapis le lun par maine eysa kuch nahi kiya, jab main nahi mana to raghav bhaiya gusse se vaha se chale gaye.
Do din baad jab main subha school ke liye ready honey ke baad niche aa raha tha ki jeyse hi meri najar hall me gayi meri pario ke niche se jamin nikal gaye
Me – nahi ye nahi ho sakta daduuuuu
(Sandy – adi ke dada ki death ho chuki thi heart attack ki vaja se)
Main bhagta huye niche ayea meri ankho se lagatar anshu nikal rahe thay, mujey apni ankho par yakin nahi ho raha tha, main dada g se rotey huye lipat kar bola
Me – dadu uthiye ap mujey eyse chhod kar nahi ja sakte uthiye uthiye
Mujey raghav bhaiya ne khada kar ke apne galey laga liyea to main rotey huye bola
Me – bhaiya dekho na dadu uth nahi rahe hain uney uthaiyea na
Raghav(rotey huye) – ab dadu kabi nahi uthey gaye vo hamshe bohat dur chale gaye hai
Me – ap jhuth bol rahe ho dadu mujey chhod kar nahi ja sakte
Raghav – shant ho ja adi shambal khud ko agar tun eyse roye ga to keya dadu ko aacha lagey ga
Main kuch der bhaiyea ke gale lag kar rota raha, fir purey riti rivaj se dadu ka antim sansakar kiya gayea, dadu ka janey ki vaja se main andar se puri tarh tut chuka tha, main unki vaja se thoda sambla tha ab unke jane ki vaja se pura bikhar chuka tha, raghav bhaiyea aur abhi mujeh sambal rahe thay.
Eyse hi ghum me do teen din nikal gaye, puri family me ik vo hi thay jinse me khul ke baat kar sakta tha ab to main bilkul hi ekala pad gayea tha, sabi family vale ruchi ko kuch kahe na isi kiye main us se kam hi baat karta tha aur abhi apni family ki vaja se mujse kam baat karta tha, main apne kamre me betha soch raha tha
Me – ye sab mere sath hi kyon ho raha hai, pehle mujse meri family dur ho gayi, sabke dur honey ke baad jisne mujey sambala ab vo mujse dur ho gaye, bhagwan tun keya chahta hai mujse keya galti hai meri, kyon sabko mujse dur kar raha hai
Eyse hi kud se batey karte huye main kab so gayea oata hi nahi chala.
Fir eyse gi dhere dhere din nikal lagey, mujey laga tha ki sabi ka gussa apne ap shant ho jaye ga par main galat tha dhere dhere sabi ke dil me meri liye nafrat badti ja rahi thi, agar main kisi ke samne chala jata tha to sab eyse react karte thay ki pata nahi uno ne kisi shakal dekh li ho, dhere dhere mera behavior bi sabke parti badlne laga jaha pehle vo sab mujeh ignor karte thay ab main uney ignor karne laga mera ab dil hi nahi karta tha unke samne janey ka isi liye ya to main apne kamre me rehta tha ta fir ghar se bahar, eyse hi dekhte dekhte 2 saal bit gayea, jaha meri family ne ye mann liyea tha ki main is ghar beta nahi hun vahi maine bi mann liya tha ki ab ye meri family nahi hai.
10th ke result vale din sham ko jab main ghar ja raha tha ki tabi jab main ik building ke pass se janey laga ki tabi mujey building ke andar se ik ladki ke cheekha ne ki avaj ayi, avaj sun kar main building ke anadr janey laga, ye ik under construction building thi, jeyse hi main building ke ander ki tarf poncha to maine dekha ik do ladke ik ladki ke sath jabardasti karne ki kosis kar rahe hai aur ladki madad ke liye chila rahi thi dono ladke ladki ki upar thay jis vaja se main us ladki ka cehra nahi dekh payea, uney dekh kar main bola
Me – ye tum keya kar rahe ho chhodo us ladki ko
Meri avaj sun kar un dono ladko ne meri tarf dekha aur khade hotey huye boley
Ladka 1 – chal bache shanti se nikal ja yaha se hame apna kam karne de
Jeyse hi vo dono khade huye to mujey ladki ka cehra dikha jisey dekh kar main hairan ho gayea kyoki vo ladki aur koyi nahi nelam thi, jab main vaha se nahi hila to ladka 2 ladke 1 se bola
Ladka 2 – tum isi sambala main is hero ko samja ke ayea
Fir vo chalta huya mere pass ayea aur bola
Ladka 2 – kyon hero sidhu tarh se yaha se jaye ga ya
Abi usne itna hi bola tha ki main di ik rakh ke laat uske main point pe jiski vaja se vo apne andey pakad ke vahi beth gayea, ladke 2 ki halat dekh jab ladka 1 meri tarf ayea to main vahi padey ik dande ko uthayea aur diya rakh kar uske sar par jis vaja se uska sar phat gayea aur main vahi niche gir gayea fir maine ladke 2 ke sar par ik mara aur vo bi vahi jamin par dhear ho gayea, dono kp sulane ke baad main nelam ke pass gayea aur usey aoni jacket di kyoki uski kamiz halki halki phat chuki, jacket pehan ne ke baad ham dono building se bahar aa gayea bahar ana ke baad nelam
Nelam – thanks adi maine tumhare satg aacha nahi kiya fir bi tumne meri izat bachayi
Me – tumey kuch keyse honey deyta maine to tumse pyaar kiya tha tumhari tarah soda nahi
Meri baat sun kar vo sharminda ho gayi
Me – chalo tumey ghar chhod deyta hun
Fir maine usey uske ghar tak chhoda pure raste hamre bich koyi baat nahi huyi, usne to kosis ki mujse baat karne ki mar maine koyi response nahi diya, uske ghar ke pass ponchne par main bola
Me – tumse ik baat kehna chahuga ki agar agee tumey kisi ke sath dhokha karna ho to pls itna kheyal rakhna ki uske sath itna bhura bi mat karna ki us se uski family ko chin lo
Itna kehne ke baad maij bina uski baat suney vaha se chala gayea
Mom – ye hamse keya ho gayea
Dad – hamse bohat badi galti ho gayi
Soniya – sorry bhai
TO BE CONTINUE...
dada g ke hukam anusar ik maid mere liye rakh li gayi thi, aur main in 2 mahino me bahar thodi bohat exercise karne bi suru kar di thi ki tabi
Me – ye nahi ho sakta, kyon mere sath hi eysa kyon ho raha hai
AB AAGEEE
Chalo dekhte hai keya huya
Eyse hi ik din main apne kamre me betha huya tha ki tabi mere pass raghav bhaiya aye aur boley
Raghav – adi us din keya huya tha
Mujey andaja tha eysa kuch hoga kyoki mujey abhi se pata chala tha ki raghav bhaiya us se bohat bar puch chukey hai mere aur nelam ke bare me par maine abhi ko mana kiya huya tha kisi ko bi batane se, aur sayad bhaiya ne kisi tarha se abhi se kuch na kuch to pata kar hi liya tha jo aj vo mere pass aye hai
Me – ap kis bare me baat kar rahe ho bhai
Raghav – dekh adi mujey itna to apne bhai par bharosha tha ki vo kuch galat nahi kar sakta par usdin condition kuch eysi thi ki galat tun lag raha tha isi liye main bi kuch bol nahi payea, par ik din jab tun aur abhi baat kar rahe thay tab maine tumhari kuch batey sun li thi, isi liye maine abhi se puchna suru kiya par usne mujey kuch nahi batayea par maine bi har nahi mani aur kal mujey pata chala ki tera aur nelam ka realtion tha, aur agar tum dono relation me thay to tun eysi harkat to nahi kar sakta is liye mujey sach bata hakhir kar us din huya keya tha
(Sandy – adi aur abhi ki bataye sun ne vala aur koyi nahi raghav hi tha)
Me – bhai us baat ko bitey 2 mahine ho chuke hai ab ap keya karo gaye jan kar, chhod jo ho gayea so ho gayea
Raghav – eyse keyse chhod dun jaha tak mujey lag raha hai teri koyi galati nahi thi fir tun kyon sabki nafrat jehl raha hai, tun mujey sach bata main fir sabko bata dunga fir sabkuch thik ho jaye ga
Me – bhai ap mujey ik baat batayo keya mujey sabi usdin se pehle sachme pyaar karte thay
Raghav – adi ye bi koyi puchne vali baat hai tujey sabi bohat pyaar karte thay
Me – mujey to eysa nahi lagta
Raghav – kyon
Me – bhai agar sab sachne mujse pyaar karte thay to keya unko mujpar itna bi bharosha nahi tha ki main eysa harkat karna to dur eysi harkat karne ke bare me soch bi nahi sakta, keya kisi ne ik bar bi meri baat sun ne ki kosis ki, tab to chhod uske baad bi mujey bi yaad nahi hai ki maine kitni baar sabke pass ja kar unse baat karne ki kosis ki hai par maine jitni baar bi ja kar unse baat karne ki kosis ki sabne mujey eyse khud dur kar diya jeyse main bohat bada apradhi hun, to main keyse mann lun ki sabi mujse pyaar karte thay
Raghav – chup
Bhai bolta bi keya meri harik baat sach jo thi
Me – thik hai bhai main apko sach batayu ga par ik shart pe
Raghav – keysi shart
Me – ap ye baat kisi ko nahi batayo gaye
Raghav – eysa kyon kya tun nahi chahta ki sab pehle jeysa ho jaye
Me – mujey nahi pata apko meri kasam ap kisi ko nahi batayo gaye
Fir ham dono kuch der shant bethey rahe fir bhai chupi thodte huye bole
Raghav – chal thik hai teri kasam main kisi ko nahi batau ga
Bhai ka javab sun ne ke baad maine uney sab kuch bata diya jo usdin huya tha, sach pata chalne ke baad
Raghav – main sabko batane ja raha hun
Me – bhai apne meri kasam khayi hai
Raghav – adi tun eysa kyon kar raha hai keya miley ga tujey eysa karke
Fir raghav bhaiya ne bohat kosis ki ki main aoni kasam vapis le lun par maine eysa kuch nahi kiya, jab main nahi mana to raghav bhaiya gusse se vaha se chale gaye.
Do din baad jab main subha school ke liye ready honey ke baad niche aa raha tha ki jeyse hi meri najar hall me gayi meri pario ke niche se jamin nikal gaye
Me – nahi ye nahi ho sakta daduuuuu
(Sandy – adi ke dada ki death ho chuki thi heart attack ki vaja se)
Main bhagta huye niche ayea meri ankho se lagatar anshu nikal rahe thay, mujey apni ankho par yakin nahi ho raha tha, main dada g se rotey huye lipat kar bola
Me – dadu uthiye ap mujey eyse chhod kar nahi ja sakte uthiye uthiye
Mujey raghav bhaiya ne khada kar ke apne galey laga liyea to main rotey huye bola
Me – bhaiya dekho na dadu uth nahi rahe hain uney uthaiyea na
Raghav(rotey huye) – ab dadu kabi nahi uthey gaye vo hamshe bohat dur chale gaye hai
Me – ap jhuth bol rahe ho dadu mujey chhod kar nahi ja sakte
Raghav – shant ho ja adi shambal khud ko agar tun eyse roye ga to keya dadu ko aacha lagey ga
Main kuch der bhaiyea ke gale lag kar rota raha, fir purey riti rivaj se dadu ka antim sansakar kiya gayea, dadu ka janey ki vaja se main andar se puri tarh tut chuka tha, main unki vaja se thoda sambla tha ab unke jane ki vaja se pura bikhar chuka tha, raghav bhaiyea aur abhi mujeh sambal rahe thay.
Eyse hi ghum me do teen din nikal gaye, puri family me ik vo hi thay jinse me khul ke baat kar sakta tha ab to main bilkul hi ekala pad gayea tha, sabi family vale ruchi ko kuch kahe na isi kiye main us se kam hi baat karta tha aur abhi apni family ki vaja se mujse kam baat karta tha, main apne kamre me betha soch raha tha
Me – ye sab mere sath hi kyon ho raha hai, pehle mujse meri family dur ho gayi, sabke dur honey ke baad jisne mujey sambala ab vo mujse dur ho gaye, bhagwan tun keya chahta hai mujse keya galti hai meri, kyon sabko mujse dur kar raha hai
Eyse hi kud se batey karte huye main kab so gayea oata hi nahi chala.
Fir eyse gi dhere dhere din nikal lagey, mujey laga tha ki sabi ka gussa apne ap shant ho jaye ga par main galat tha dhere dhere sabi ke dil me meri liye nafrat badti ja rahi thi, agar main kisi ke samne chala jata tha to sab eyse react karte thay ki pata nahi uno ne kisi shakal dekh li ho, dhere dhere mera behavior bi sabke parti badlne laga jaha pehle vo sab mujeh ignor karte thay ab main uney ignor karne laga mera ab dil hi nahi karta tha unke samne janey ka isi liye ya to main apne kamre me rehta tha ta fir ghar se bahar, eyse hi dekhte dekhte 2 saal bit gayea, jaha meri family ne ye mann liyea tha ki main is ghar beta nahi hun vahi maine bi mann liya tha ki ab ye meri family nahi hai.
10th ke result vale din sham ko jab main ghar ja raha tha ki tabi jab main ik building ke pass se janey laga ki tabi mujey building ke andar se ik ladki ke cheekha ne ki avaj ayi, avaj sun kar main building ke anadr janey laga, ye ik under construction building thi, jeyse hi main building ke ander ki tarf poncha to maine dekha ik do ladke ik ladki ke sath jabardasti karne ki kosis kar rahe hai aur ladki madad ke liye chila rahi thi dono ladke ladki ki upar thay jis vaja se main us ladki ka cehra nahi dekh payea, uney dekh kar main bola
Me – ye tum keya kar rahe ho chhodo us ladki ko
Meri avaj sun kar un dono ladko ne meri tarf dekha aur khade hotey huye boley
Ladka 1 – chal bache shanti se nikal ja yaha se hame apna kam karne de
Jeyse hi vo dono khade huye to mujey ladki ka cehra dikha jisey dekh kar main hairan ho gayea kyoki vo ladki aur koyi nahi nelam thi, jab main vaha se nahi hila to ladka 2 ladke 1 se bola
Ladka 2 – tum isi sambala main is hero ko samja ke ayea
Fir vo chalta huya mere pass ayea aur bola
Ladka 2 – kyon hero sidhu tarh se yaha se jaye ga ya
Abi usne itna hi bola tha ki main di ik rakh ke laat uske main point pe jiski vaja se vo apne andey pakad ke vahi beth gayea, ladke 2 ki halat dekh jab ladka 1 meri tarf ayea to main vahi padey ik dande ko uthayea aur diya rakh kar uske sar par jis vaja se uska sar phat gayea aur main vahi niche gir gayea fir maine ladke 2 ke sar par ik mara aur vo bi vahi jamin par dhear ho gayea, dono kp sulane ke baad main nelam ke pass gayea aur usey aoni jacket di kyoki uski kamiz halki halki phat chuki, jacket pehan ne ke baad ham dono building se bahar aa gayea bahar ana ke baad nelam
Nelam – thanks adi maine tumhare satg aacha nahi kiya fir bi tumne meri izat bachayi
Me – tumey kuch keyse honey deyta maine to tumse pyaar kiya tha tumhari tarah soda nahi
Meri baat sun kar vo sharminda ho gayi
Me – chalo tumey ghar chhod deyta hun
Fir maine usey uske ghar tak chhoda pure raste hamre bich koyi baat nahi huyi, usne to kosis ki mujse baat karne ki mar maine koyi response nahi diya, uske ghar ke pass ponchne par main bola
Me – tumse ik baat kehna chahuga ki agar agee tumey kisi ke sath dhokha karna ho to pls itna kheyal rakhna ki uske sath itna bhura bi mat karna ki us se uski family ko chin lo
Itna kehne ke baad maij bina uski baat suney vaha se chala gayea
Mom – ye hamse keya ho gayea
Dad – hamse bohat badi galti ho gayi
Soniya – sorry bhai
TO BE CONTINUE...
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