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Sandy307

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Dekh bhai mene Dekha he jyad tar writer khani ko ek mukam pe le ja ke chod dete he or rahi riply ki bat to jub apse pucha jata he update kab doge to up ka koi fix tim nahi rehta ke ap kab update doge me ne esa nahi kaha ke khani ghatiya he khani acchi he isliye to coment dete he
Or rahi bat nafarat ki to asihique tumse hi me jese nafrat dikhai gai he vese app bi dikha sakte ho me copy karne ke liye nahi bol raha lekin uske jese milti julti nafrat dikha sakte ho to khani apne ek alag mukam pe phocegi inti jaldi nafrat khatam kardoge to maja nahi ayega

or apke chane wale bhto hoge hosla bdha te hoge
Lekin mene isliye ESA COMENT KIYA Ke
Apki story acchi jarahi to ap jara jya da dhan de story pe ke apke update ka intejar kiya ja raha he


Acche comnt to mebi desakta hu.
Har bar hosla badha ya nahi jata
Kabi kabi naege tiv rivew bi dena padte he Sandy bhai
Tabi ti writer ubher ke ayga


Ap vj bhai ki story padho ur unke riplay ko dekho kese hendal karte he unke viwer ko


To apbi esa try karo or update requler do


Bura lage to mafi

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Bhai negative comment/review se koyi issue nahi hai maine pehle bi kaha hai jo dil me aye dil khol ke bolo
Bs jab baat writing par uthi tab bura laga other wise no issue
Aur bhai abi maaf nahi kiya kisi ko abi filhal bohat kuch hai story me scene eysa hai ki kuch bhai galat assume kar leyte hai Bhai abi nafrat suru bi nahi huyi khatam kaha se hogi 2 3 bar to siraf mila hai adi behno se
Baki rahi update ki baat to bhai jaha tak mujey yaad hai main timing ka bata deyta hun update mere kheyal se eysa ek do baar huya hai ki main us time par update nahi diya par vo bi kisi reason ki vaja se
 

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Itna kehne ke baad jab main vapis palta to soniya di mere galey lag gayi par main vasey hi khada raha mera gussa bi shant ho gayea, kuch seconds baad maine uney khud se dur kiya

Soniya – thanks adi mujey pata tha tun aj bi hamse utna hi pyaar karta hai

Me –

AB AAGEEE

Me – galey lagne se pehle apko ye pata hai na ap ik rapist ke galey lag rahi hai

S(dur ho ke uchi avaj me) – adi khabardar agar tumne dubara ye word apni juban par layea

Me – isme meri keya galati hai ap sabne hi ye naam diya tha mujey sayad ap bhul gayi

S(ankho me anshu) – pls adi hame maff karde

Me – ye anshu kisi aur ko dikhaye ga muj par inka koyi aasar nahi honey vala

Itna kehne ke baad main apni jagha par ja ke beth gayea aur soniya apne table par chali gayi mayus ho ke

Vahi preet ke table par

R – preet ab bi soch le is se panga leyna hai, main to kehta hun is se dur rehne me hi bhalayi hai

P – keya rocky tun is se dar gayea bhul gayea tuney kitne ladko ko dhoyea hai school time me, aur agar tun sachme dar gayea to khakh tun president bane ga clg ko

R – nahi eysi baat nahi hai vo to bs

P – abi bata de ki tun mera kam kare ga ya nahi yan main kisi aur ko kahu

R – tun naraj kyon ho rahi hai tere liye to jaan hajir dekhti ja main iski keya halat karta hun

P – ye huyi na baat chal tujey badme milti hun tabtak koyi solid sa plan bana le

Fir preet rohit ke sath vaha se chali jati hai

Vahi adi ke table par

Jab main apni jagha par aa kar beth gayea to anju boli

A – baab re baab adi teri ye side ke bare me to mujey pata hi nahi tha, mujey to laga tha tun ladayi jhagde se dur hi rehta hai

Me – dur hi rehta hun bs aj kuch jada ho gayea tha aur main un logo me se nahi hun jo kisi ladki ke sath eysa bartav hota dekh chup betha rahe

K – par tumhari body dekh ke to kuch aur hi lagta hai

Me – keya lagta hai apko

K – yahi ki eyse chote motey jhagde tumahre liye normal hai

Me – ye tumhari galatfehmi hai main aj pehli baar kisi par hath uthayea hai

Dimag – sala jhutha

Me(dimag se) – kyon jhuth keya hai isme pehle maine kisi par hath uthayea hi nahi unko jan se mara hai bs

Dimag – is hisab se to thik hai fir, main apne word vapis leyta hun

K – par mujey to eysa nahi lagta

Me – agar tumko yakeen nahi to abhi aur anju se puch lo, abhi bachpan se mere sath raha hai aur anju DIU me meri classmate thi

K – chalo agar tum keh rahe ho to maan leyti hun

A – bhai jara bach ke rehna kyoki monty ka bhai ik gunda hai so ho sakta hai vo tujey nuksan pohchane ki kosish kare

Uski baat sun ke main kuch bola nahi bs usey ik smile de di to vo samj gayea ki main uski bi eysi hi halat karu ga agar vo mujse bhida, fir hamne halka fulka khayea aur uske baad next lecture ke liye class me chale gayea

Vahi rocky bi apne chamcho ke sath nikal gayea apne adey par jo rocky ka farmhouse tha, vaha ponch ke ander bethne ke baad

C 1(chamcha 1) – rocky bhai mujey ik baat samj nahi tumhare agge koyi kuch bolne ki himmat nahi karta aur vahi vo ladki tumse eysa baat karti hai aur tum usey kuch kehte nahi

R – ye sab uski chut ke liye kar raha hun Sali bohat garam hai bs ik moka dund raha hun aur vo us ladke ki vaja se mujey milne vala hai

C 2 – bhai agar baat uski chut ki hau to vo to ap eyse bi le sakte ho jeyse ajtak jitni bi ladkiyo ki li hai

R – itni aasan hota to abtak vo ham sabke noche hoti ek to uska baap cm hai jiski vaja se koyi risk nahi le sakta nahi to mera baab meri gand mar leyga agar kuch galat huya, pehle to sali mujey apne pass bi nahi aney deyti thi badi muskil se uske itne karib ayea hun bs ik baar us ladke ko hospital ki seyar karva dun fir preet ko party ke keh ke vaha sab set karke ham sab uski jawani ka savad chakey gaye

R – bs us ladke ke bare me sab detail mujey jaldi se jaldi la kar do fir jaldi preet ham sabke niche hogi

Fir sabi party karne lagey

Back to adi

Class lagane kr baad ham sab ik dusare ko kal milne ka keh ke ghar ki tarf nikal gaye, clg se nikalne ke baad main ghar gayea vaha se car uthayi fir sonam ko ruchi ko school se pick kiya, fir ghar ki tarf chal padey tabi

Ruchi – bhaiya keya ap aj ghar ayo gaye aj soniya di ka b’day hai

Me – sona tujey pata hai na main ghar nahi aa sakta fir bi

Ruchi – pls bhaiya mere liye aa jayo na

Me – sona

Ruchi – pls pls pls bhaiya maan jayo na

Sonam – pls bhaiya maan bi jayo pls pls pls

Dono ne mil kar mujey fasa liya tha ab uney mana karne ki himmat mujme nahi thi to

Me – chal thik hai aa jayu ga

Ruchi(adi ke gale lagte huye) – thank u bhaiya mujey pata tha ap jaror ayo gaye

Me – keya kar rahi hai sona accident ho jaye ga

Mere kehne par sona vapis beth gayi uske beth te hi sonam ne mere gaal par kiss kiya jo piche bethi thi

Sonam – thank u bhaiya

Me – chal pagal bhai ko thank u bolti hai

Me(ruchi se) – par gudiya main vaha jada der nahi ruku ga

Ruchi – ok bhaiya

Fir maine pehle ruchi ko drop kiya to vo car se utarne se pehle

Ruchi – bhaiya yaad se aa jana bhul mat jana

Me – sona agar tujey kaha hai to jaror ayun ga

Fir ruchi mujey kiss karke khushi se uchalti huyi ghar ke ander chali gayi, uske jane ke baad sonam agge aa ke beth gayi aur ham dono ghar ki tarf chal padey

Sonam – bhaiya soniya di ke liye b’day gift abi leynge ya badme

Uski baat sun ke main uski tarf dekhne laga to

Sonam – ab ye mat kehna ki gift nahi leyna agar ab ja hi rahe hai to gift ke bina jatey huye aache lagey ke keya

Me – badme me le leynge

Sonam – hmmm

Fir ham ghar ponche ghar ponch ke ham dono ne lunch kiya fir rest karne ke liye late gaye

Vahi adi ke ghar

Sabi behne jab ghar ponchi to sabi soniya ke kamre ikathi ho gayi aaditi aur dimple bi ghar aa chuki thi lunch ke liye, room me ponch ne ke baad

Dimple – to soniya keya tumahri baat huyi adi se

Soniya(sad) – han di

Aaditi – itni sad kyon ho gayi kuch huya keya

Aaditi ke bolne ke baad to soniya ro hi padi to ragni ne sabko sari baat batayi jo aj huyi, sari baat jan ne baad jaha sabi behne khush thi ki adi ne soniya ke liye monty ko sabak shikayea vahi adi ke baato se dukhi bi thi, fir dimpla soniya ko chup karate huye

Dimple – soniya chup ho ja agar tun hi himmat har jayr gi to fir adi ko ghar vapis kon laye ga, sabko pata hai tere elava ye kam koyi nahi kar sakta

Soniya – keya karu di uski naraj gi sahi nahi jati

Aaditi – sehni to padey gi hi soniya hamne hi usey eyss banayea hai aur ab usey badalna bi hame hi hai

Abi iske aage koyi kuch bolta ki ruchi room me enter huye to sab behne usey dekh chup ho gayi, ruchi ne soniya ki ankho me anshu dekh liye to vo soniya ke pass ponch ke

Ruchi – keya huya di ap ro kyon rahe ho

Soniya(ankhe saff karte huye) – main kaha ro rahi hun sona vo meri ankh me kuch chala gayea tha

Ruchi – sachi na

Soniya – han sona

Ruchi – fir thik hai aacha di ap cake kab cut karo gaye aj

Ruchi ki baat sun ke sabi behne ik dusare ko dekhne lagi vahi soniya ki ankho me anshu aney valey thay par ruchi ki vaja se usne uney bahar aney nahi diya, sabne to socha tha ki soniya adi ko mana leygi aj ghar aney ke liye par yaha to sab ulta ho gayea, ab ruchi ko koyi javab to deyna hi tha to

Soniya – sona main to kehti hun rehne deyte hai mera mann nahi hai

Ruchi – eyse keyse di apka b’day hai agar ap cake cut nahi karo gaye to keyse chale ga, cake to apko cut karna padey ga

Soniya – mann ja na sona mera bilkul bi mann nahi hai main tujey bahar party de dun gi

Ruchi – ap bi na di agar apko cake cut nahi karna tha to pehle bata deyte maine itni muskil se maine adi bhaiya ko aney ke liye manayea tha ab uney mana kar deyti hun nah to vo kehe gaye main unse jhuth bola

Ruchi ki baat sun ke sabi behne shock ho gayi kyoki unko to laga tha adi nahi aye ga, soniya jhat se

Soniya(khushi se) – sona tun sach keh rahi hai adi aney vala hai aj mere b’day par

Ruchi – han di maine aur sonam ne badi muskil se uney manayea tha par ab uney mana karna hoga

Soniya – sona tun adi mana mat karna main cake cut karu gi

Ruchi – sachi di

Soniya – han sachi sona

Ruchi – aacha di vo chocolate vala cake order karna mujey bohat pasand hai

Soniya – jo tun kahe gi vahi order kare

Fir ruchi vaha se uchalti huyi apne kamre me chali jati hai, piche sabi behne to ye sun ke hi khush ho gayi thi adi ghar aa raha haj uney is se jada aur keya chhaiyea tha

Taniya(haste huye) – vasey di ham to bhul hi gaye thay hamare pass jadu ki chadi hai jiske aage adi bi nahi tik sakta

Taniya ki baat sun ke sabi behne hasne lagti hai, jaha pehle sabke cehro par sadness thi vaha ab smile aa gayi thi

Fir sabi khushi niche lunch karne chali jati hai

Back to adi

Rest karne ke baad ham dono uthey abi main utha hi tha ki mere cell baj utha to mainr dekha ruchi ki call thi to main call pick ki

Ruchi – bhaiya ap teyar ho gaye

Me – kyon keya huya

Ruchi – ufff ap bi na bhiayea keya ap bhul gayea apko ghar ana hai soniya di ka b’day hai

Me – par abi to kafi time pada hai

Ruchi – kaha time pada hai ik 1.5 hour baad cake cut karna hai di ne

Me – chal thik hai ata hun thodi der me

Ruchi – aacha jaldi ana main apka wait kar rahi hun

Me – phone rakhe gi tabi to main ready hoyu ga

Ruchi – main bi na

Fir usne call cut kardi aur mere honto par smile aa gayi aur fir smile chali bi gayi ye soch ke ki main fir vahi vapis ja raha hun jitna main us ghar se dur rehne ki kosish kar raha hun utna mujey baar baar us ghar me jana pad raha hai, abi main soch hi raha tha ki

Sonam – sochne se kuch nahi hoga bhiyea ab apne ruchi ko aney ke bare me kaha hai to jana to padey ga hi is liye jaldi se ready ho jayu

Me – ruk tujey main batata hun

Is pehle main uske pass jata vo bathroom me bhag kar ghus gayi, to main utha fir haste huye dusare bathroom me ja kar fresh huya fir ham dono ready honey ke baad ghar se nikal gaye, ghar janey se pehle ham shop par gaye gift leyne ke liye to shop me jane ke baad main ik jagha khada ho gayea to sonam ne shop me ghum ghum ke ik gift pasand kiya fir mere pass ayi

Sonam – bhaiyea apne gift nahi keyna di ke liyea

Me – tuney le to liyea mujey keya jarort hai leyne ki tuney diya maine diya ik hi baat hai

Sonam – ye keya baat huyi ye gift meri tarf se hai agar apko gift deyna hai to khud leyna padey

Me – that’s not fair gudiya

Sonam – mujey nahi pata main to nahi share karne vali apna gift

Me – aacha chal mere liye bi ik pasand karde fir

Sonam – agar khud deyna to pasand bi khud karna padey ga main koyi help nahi karne vali

Me – pls gudiya karde na help

Sonam – no no

Me – matlab ab mujey khud hi pasand karna padey ga

Sonam – bilkul, aur ye mat sochna ap bina gift liye is shop se bahar chale jayo gaye, aur gift bi aacha hona chaiyea

Ab main marta aur keya karta dekhne laga gift, ghumte ghumte main wristwatch valey section par poncha

Me – watch le leyta hun uney wristwatch pehn ni bohat pasand thi, par unke hath par wristwatch dekhi nahi jitni baar bi dekha hai unko

(Adi ko nafrat karne se pehle soniya vahi wristwatch pehnti thi jisey adi pasand karta tha, 4 saal se soniya ne kabi wristwatch ki tarf dekha bi nahi)

Fit maine ik wristwatch ko pack karvayea aur sonam ke gift ko bi pack karvayea jo ik hand bag tha pyaara sa, gift pack karvane ke baad ham dono ghar ki tarf nikal gaye

TO BE CONTINUE...
FANTASTIC UPDATE HAI BRO
AB ADI KE GHAR KYA HOGA YE DEKHNA HAI
WAITING FOR NEXT
 
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BAHUT ACCHA UPDATE BHAI MAZZA AA GAYA.
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Hlo dosto maine sabke comment pahde to jinko update pasand ayea unka sukriya
Par bichme kuch bhaiyo ko update pasand nahi ayea aur kuch ko to meri writing pasand nahi to unse main kuch puchna chahata hun jinko meri writing aachi nahi lagi yan update pasand nahi ayea
To ap sabke according Adi ko apni behno ke sath keya karna chahiyea
1. Keya behno ki har roj sabke samne insult karni chahiyea
2. Uney baat baat par humiliate karna chahiyea
3. Jab vo baat karne aye kya un par hath uthana chahiyea
4. Yan fir unki saza unke sath rape karke deyni chahiyea
5. Yan uney jaan se hi maar deyna chahiyea, na rahe gi behne na unka jikar aye ga
Ap sab batayea inme se konsa point agar main add karu to story padhne me maza aye ga?
Main batau ik bi nahi agar isme se ik bi point ayea to story itni ghatiya ho jaye gi ki main khud nahi likh payu ga.

Dusari baat
Ik bhai jisey bachpan se le ke badey honey tak uski behno ne usey itna pyaar diya to keya vo apni behno ke sath kuch bura kar sakta hai, mana gussa hai naraj hai chalo thodi bohat nafart bi karta hai par hai to ik bhai hi, vo to bs chahata hai sabko pata chale usne keya saha hai
Bhai choti behno ki baat main to nahi tal sakta real life me bi to story me character keyse tal sakta hai, uper se jab dono ko vo itna pyaar karta ho, agar dono ke liye itni logo ki jaan le sakta hai to unke liye ghar nahi ja sakta
Mana story main super powers vala area hai par story hai to human ke uper hi isme konsa koyi aliens hai jinki feelings kuch aur hongi

Tesari baat
Bhai ye revenge story nahi jisme hero apni insult ka badla apni family se leyne ayea hai,
Hero keh raha hai apni family se tum sabne meri bezati ki 2 saal mujey nafrat di main tumey jaan se mar dunga
Eysa kuch nahi hoga bhai, agar eysa kuch mujse expect kar rahe ho to main pehle hi bata dun eysa ik bi scene story me nahi aye ga
Bhai title incest hai agar hero family se nafrat hi karta rahe ga to fir ye title ka keya matlab

Chothi baat
Bhai mujey ye bi samja do nafrat keyse dikhayi jati hai, mere hisab se to jabtak 2 log apse me baat nahi karte ik dusare ke samne nahi atey tabtak unme se kisi ik ko pata keyse chale ga dusara us se nafrat karta hai
Apke according to ye hoga
adi apne ghar betha hai aur uski behne apne ghar, adi ghar par beth khud se keh raha hai main ap sabse nafrat karta hun, aur uski behne apne ghar bethi khud se batey karte huye adi ko mana rahi hai
Yan adi ik table par betha hai clg me aur uski behne 3 4 table chhod ke bethi hai dono ik dusare ik tarf dekh nahi rahe par vahi bethe bethe adi nafrat dikha raha hai aur uski behne mana rahi hai
agar ap eysa kuch padhna chahte ho to fir to sachi me mujey likhna nahi ata ap me se koyi mujey eysa kuch likh ke send kar do jisme 2 logo ik dusare se nafrat karte hai par vo ik dusare se milte nahi ik dusare me samne nahi jatey par ik dusare ko bina miley apni nafart dikhate hai tan jo mujey likhna aa sake fir main next update post karta hun
Agar meri koyi baat buri lagi ho to maffi chahunga
Bhai kuch bhi ho story jaisi chal rahi hai bahot acchi chal rahi hai in sabko app ignore kardo
 

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Hlo dosto maine sabke comment pahde to jinko update pasand ayea unka sukriya
Par bichme kuch bhaiyo ko update pasand nahi ayea aur kuch ko to meri writing pasand nahi to unse main kuch puchna chahata hun jinko meri writing aachi nahi lagi yan update pasand nahi ayea
To ap sabke according Adi ko apni behno ke sath keya karna chahiyea
1. Keya behno ki har roj sabke samne insult karni chahiyea
2. Uney baat baat par humiliate karna chahiyea
3. Jab vo baat karne aye kya un par hath uthana chahiyea
4. Yan fir unki saza unke sath rape karke deyni chahiyea
5. Yan uney jaan se hi maar deyna chahiyea, na rahe gi behne na unka jikar aye ga
Ap sab batayea inme se konsa point agar main add karu to story padhne me maza aye ga?
Main batau ik bi nahi agar isme se ik bi point ayea to story itni ghatiya ho jaye gi ki main khud nahi likh payu ga.

Dusari baat
Ik bhai jisey bachpan se le ke badey honey tak uski behno ne usey itna pyaar diya to keya vo apni behno ke sath kuch bura kar sakta hai, mana gussa hai naraj hai chalo thodi bohat nafart bi karta hai par hai to ik bhai hi, vo to bs chahata hai sabko pata chale usne keya saha hai
Bhai choti behno ki baat main to nahi tal sakta real life me bi to story me character keyse tal sakta hai, uper se jab dono ko vo itna pyaar karta ho, agar dono ke liye itni logo ki jaan le sakta hai to unke liye ghar nahi ja sakta
Mana story main super powers vala area hai par story hai to human ke uper hi isme konsa koyi aliens hai jinki feelings kuch aur hongi

Tesari baat
Bhai ye revenge story nahi jisme hero apni insult ka badla apni family se leyne ayea hai,
Hero keh raha hai apni family se tum sabne meri bezati ki 2 saal mujey nafrat di main tumey jaan se mar dunga
Eysa kuch nahi hoga bhai, agar eysa kuch mujse expect kar rahe ho to main pehle hi bata dun eysa ik bi scene story me nahi aye ga
Bhai title incest hai agar hero family se nafrat hi karta rahe ga to fir ye title ka keya matlab

Chothi baat
Bhai mujey ye bi samja do nafrat keyse dikhayi jati hai, mere hisab se to jabtak 2 log apse me baat nahi karte ik dusare ke samne nahi atey tabtak unme se kisi ik ko pata keyse chale ga dusara us se nafrat karta hai
Apke according to ye hoga
adi apne ghar betha hai aur uski behne apne ghar, adi ghar par beth khud se keh raha hai main ap sabse nafrat karta hun, aur uski behne apne ghar bethi khud se batey karte huye adi ko mana rahi hai
Yan adi ik table par betha hai clg me aur uski behne 3 4 table chhod ke bethi hai dono ik dusare ik tarf dekh nahi rahe par vahi bethe bethe adi nafrat dikha raha hai aur uski behne mana rahi hai
agar ap eysa kuch padhna chahte ho to fir to sachi me mujey likhna nahi ata ap me se koyi mujey eysa kuch likh ke send kar do jisme 2 logo ik dusare se nafrat karte hai par vo ik dusare se milte nahi ik dusare me samne nahi jatey par ik dusare ko bina miley apni nafart dikhate hai tan jo mujey likhna aa sake fir main next update post karta hun
Agar meri koyi baat buri lagi ho to maffi chahunga
Dekho bhai aap jo likh rahen hain sahi dikha main likh rahen hain aur family ke aage to sabhi apni nafrat bhul hi jaten hain chahe eah koi bhi ho ya family ne kuch bhi kiya ho koi chahe bahar se kitna bhi nafrat dikhaye gussa rahe par dil se wo unka kabhi bura nahin chahega aur na hi karega

Aur agar main kuch kahna chahu to itna hi kahunga ki bhai Soniya n baki bahno se duri to bahut rahi ab jab inke beech aakarshan ya pyar panapte dikhana to badhiya si chemistry ke sath dikhna to aur bhi achha lagega yesa mat karna ki unki shadi jo ek bar sapne ke jariye dikhai thi conform h uske base pe jaldbazi mt karna pyar ko hote dikhna bas romantic kar ke :D :daru:
 
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