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Fantasy Tha great warrior

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When I was said
"Never mind
All Stories writer start a story with full potential but maximum writer didn't complete his story some writer's didn't give regular updates
It's a bitter truth"


Writer reply me this statement
"Jo bolo pehle dekh lia karo me e apne new I d se Update number 32 se Update de raha hu"

Can you explain this statement because writer didn't follow his words and his comments Kuwar Thakur Raj Rajput
I am wright
 
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When I was said
"Never mind
All Stories writer start a story with full potential but maximum writer didn't complete his story some writer's didn't give regular updates
It's a bitter truth"


Writer reply me this statement
"Jo bolo pehle dekh lia karo me e apne new I d se Update number 32 se Update de raha hu"

Can you explain this statement because writer didn't follow his words and his comments Kuwar Thakur Raj Rajput
I am wright
app ne ye bola ki writer story start karte hi lekin puri nhai karte regular updates nhai dete mera mobile reset ho gya tha is liye mughe new I d banani padi bhai
Mene apni sari story ke Update de raha hu app log fir kyo negative comments kar rahe hi
 

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Update number.....33.......Tha great warrior










JAb ham log Teleport hoker earth 1 par pahuche to ham kahi jungle me the bagal me road thi koi aadmi nhai tha waha



White sprit king.......malik ye ham kaha a gaye hi

hamara magic bhi yaha kam nhai kar raha hi

jin king.......ha malik

me.......is samay ham earth 1 nam ke planet par hi

yaha 5 year tak hame rahna hi aur ab koi sawal nhai

dragon king..........ji malik



me........chalo mere sath tum tino kahi rahne ki byawastha karta hu me

fir tino mere sath chalne lage kuch der chalne ke bad bahut sari car aur bike par bethe aadmi dikhe



mene Andes mountains par hi earth 1 ki language

tino ke mind me dal di thi

White sprite king...... malik ye wahan kitne ache hi



ham yaha se jate samay inhe apne sath le chalenge

jin king.........tum sahi kah rahe ho tumhare pas

dimag hi lakin mugh se thoda kam hi

Mughe inki bate sun hasi a rahi



tavhi ek ladki ne hme awaj dekar bulaya

ladki...........ye bikhari yaha a thoda meri car

ko Dhakka de 2000 dungi tum charo ko



me......mughe bulaya tumne

Dregon king...........( Gusse se) bhikhari kise kaha

tumne badtameez ladki tumhe jine ka shok nhai

ha kya

white sprit king......tumhari ye majal mugjhe bhikari

kaha me king Tha White sprite king pura universe mughe janta hi

jin king...............aur me kya koi bikhari dikhta hu tumhe me hu Tha jin king



is sab ki baat sun wo ladki hasne lagi

ladki........kisi pagal khane se aye ho tum charo jo esi

bate kar rahe ho 5 year ke bache jisi ye cartoon ki

duniya nhai hi

bol to ese rahe ho jise kahi ke Raja hi bhikari kahi ke



Dragon king ( gusse se )...........malik app is badtameez ladki ko bta de nhai to ajj me ise

bahut buri mout dunga ajj tak kisi ne bhi hmara apman nhai kia hi

Ladki.............
badtameez kahi ke jante ho me kon hu
R . K group of industries ki woner apni car se gun
nikal kar

ladki..........ager jada awaj nikal rahi ho to btao
YAhi goli mar dungi

white sprit king..........tum kya hame koi dudh pita bacha samajh rakaha hin jo dhamki de rahi ho

me ne dekha ki ab baat bigad rahi hi is samay mere pas
power to hi
mene jaker tino ko tin - tin thapad mare

me.........ji maf karna ye tino pagal hi ja raha tha inko
mental hospital me barti krane app
inki bato ka bura maniye
me.......chalo tino mere sath nhai to yahi chod kar
chala jaunga

mere piche - piche wo tino bhi chane lage
kuch dur jane ke baad me ek jagah ruka jaha koi
nhai tha

pehle tino ko 5 thappad mere
me.......tum tino ka pas dimag nhai hi dubara ager kisi
se bhi ladayi jaghde kie to bahut marunga
tumhari wajah se ajj mughe do take ki ladki
ke samne sir jhukana pada
me.....is samay tumhare pas power nhai hi aur
ager kisi ne pakad lia to bahut mrega


white sprit king aur jin king........lakin Malik
apne dekha nhai wo namakul do take ki
ladki hamse kese bate kar rahi thi
Dregon king.........aur to aur malik us e hame bhikari
bhi kaha ham apna apman sah nhai paye

unka itna hi kahna tha ki mene gusse me aker un sab
ko aue mara
me ( gusse me ).......ager dubara ijjat ki bqqt ki
to death chain me kaid krunga tum tino ko
jitna bola jaye bas utna hi karo
TIno ne jese hi death chain ka nam

suna kapne lage
Tino ( dar se kapte hue )..........nhai malik kripya hame app
death chain me mat kaid kriye ab ham kisi
se nhai krenge

fir uske baad ham log kuch der chalne ke baad
ek dukan pr a gaye ab jab se me earth 1 par aya
tha tab se mughe bhi pyas aur bukh lag rahi

thi ab mere pas rupaye to the bhai to socha ki kyona
thoda pani hi pi liya jaye
me............ Dregon king jao aur pani ki Byawastha karo
hame pyas
lag rahi hi

dragon king.....ji malik
iske baad wo gaya
dukan dar ke pas
Dregon king......ye dukan wale ja jaker acha aur
saf pani lekar a
dukan dar......bol to esa raha hi ki jese kahi


ke raja ho jao jaker le lo balti me hi
Dregon king.........tum mughe kah rahe ho
dukandar......nhai tumhare baap ko kah raha hu
Dregon king ne man me socha ud le beta tu bhi
abhi apna hi din bekar hi ik bar meri power wapas
a jaye fir btata hu tum sab ko


Dregon king ne ik jag me pani liya aur laker
mughe dia
mene pani piya fir socha ki koi kam karna padega nhai to rahenge kaha aur khayege kya

fir ham sab waha se city ki traf chal die
Nice update bhai...
Waiting for next update.....
 
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