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[Lib am]

UPDATE - 10


Ab tk aapne last update me aapne read kiya ki kaise Hunter girl , fat man aur Rohan bhag kr room se bahar chale jate hai aur Rider, Anjana aur rahul hi bache rah gaye the door bhi half close ho cuka tha sare corner wale statue bhut paas aa gaye the.
Vedee pr bs 3 red aag ke gole bache the , white aag ka gola timing ka kaam kr raha tha . ​

AB AAGE......

Ab bs half door hi open tha .
Door ki taraf dekh kr Rahul bolta h
" Door bs band hi hone wala h ... "
" Ab bhut der ho gayi h lakin Aakhirkar mai smjh gaya hu yaha kya ho raha h . "
" Tum dono ko ab yaha se nikal jana chahiye . "

Ye sun ke mai chauk jata hu , aur Rahul ki taraf dekh kr bolta hu " Mr Rahul ? "

Lakin Rahul bich me hi meri baat kat krke statue ki taraf dekhte hue bolna jari rakhte hai " door tb tk puri tarah se band nahi hoga , jb tk km se km vedee pr ak person khada na rahe . Hai ki nahi ? "
" Tm dono abhi jawan ho aur tumhari life ke abhi bahut saal bache hue h .... Tum dono ko yaha se nikal jana chahiye . "
" Miss Anjana kya tum Rider ki madad kr dogi bahar jane me ? "

Aanjana ( Rahul ki taraf dekh kr jldi se bolti hai ) " ha mai kr dungi . "

DHHHHUUUUMMMMM............
AAAHHHHHHHHHH......

Tabhi achanak se Anjana niche jamin pr gir jati h .

Wo pain me thi aur confused bhi aur apne pairo ko dekh kr bs badbadaye ja rahi thi ...
" Kya .... "
" Ye kya ..... "
" Mere pair ... "
( Rider ki taraf dekh kr )
" Ye hil q nahi rahe hai ? "

Tabhi Rahul bolta hai
" Ye mana( power ) ke thakan ke karan hua hoga . "
" Qki Mr Rider ko heal krne ke liye tmne apni bhut jyada power ko use kr liya tha . "

Ye sb sun kr mai bilkul nirash ho jata hu aur jamin ki taraf dekhte hue bolta hu ..
" Mr. Rahul aap Miss Anjana ko yaha se bahar le jaiye . "

Rahul bolta h " maine kaha na mai yaha rukunga ! "

Mai " to Miss Anjana ki help kon krega yaha se bahar niklne me ? "
" Hamare paas jyada samay nahi hai . Jaldi se yaha se nikal jao . "

Rahul Anjana ki taraf dekhta hai aur Anjana chilla kr usase bolti h " nahi ! Rider tumhari jagah mai yaha rukungi ... "

Mai ( samne statue ki taraf dekhte hue ) " maine tumse promise kiya tha na mai tumhare liye dinner kharidunga . Hai ki nahi ? "
" Sbse Phle isase khana khridna !! "

Itna bol kr mai Ek E rank magical core Anjana ki taraf bada deta hu . Ye wahi magical core hai jo maine yaha badi muskil se E Rank monster ko maar kr paya tha .
Anjana rote hue mere taraf hi dekh rahi hoti hai , aur wo magical core apne hatho me le kr kas kr pakad leti hai .

Mai aage bolta hu " jb mai wapas aaunga to mai apne baki ke bache hue paise tmse wapas le lunga . "

Anjana ( gusse se ) " ye majak ka samay nahi hai . "

DUUUUDDDDD.......

Tabhi ak hath aata hai aur Anjana ko utha ke apne solder pr rakh leta h . Ji haa ye Rahul hi tha jo ki Anjana ko is time apne solder pr uthaye hue tha

Rahul " mujhe maaf kr dena ! Lakin abhi in sb bato ke liye bikul bhi samay nahi bacha h . "

Mai ( Rahul ki taraf dekh kr ) " please ! Inka ache se khyal rakhna . "

Rahul " ha ! Bilkul "

tap....tap.....tap.....tap....
Aur Rahul Anjana ko ke krdoor se bahar nikal jata h . Mai bikul niras ho kr niche ki taraf dekh raha hota hu aur Rahul ke pairo ki aawaj sun raha hota hu to dhire dhire bahut slow hone lagti h .

tap....tap.....

Aur aakhir me pairo ki aawaj aani band ho jati h .

CHUUUUUUU..........
BOOM.......

Aur ab jor ki awaj ke sath door bhi pura band ho jata h .
Mai sochta hu ..
' thank God ! '
' km se km mai akela hu jo mrne wala hu '

TAP..... TAP..... TAP..... TAP.....

Aur sare statue ab slowly slowly mere taraf bad rahe hote hai . Lakin mai kud ke khyalon me khoya hua hota hu ..
' mere paas to koi insurance bhi nahi h , agar mujhe phle pata hota ki ye sb hone wala hai to .....'

TAP..... TAP.... TAP..... TAP......

Tabhi mai apne left side me dekhta hu to mujhe ak sward dikhayi deti hai . Ye Rohan ki sward thi jo wo bhagte samay yaha chor gaya tha . Mai use uthane ke liye apna left hand piche krta hu .

" Ahhhh.. "

Aur us sward ko pakad leta hu , aur use apne dono hatho se pakd kr samne ki taraf kr leta hu .

Aur mai sochta hu...
' ab jb ye sward mere paas aa hi gayi h to mai apne marne se pahle km se km ak monster ( statue) ko to maar ke marunga .'

Sare statue mere paas aa gaye the aur chro taraf se mujhe ghere hue the , aur mai double layer stone ke sahare baitha hua tha . Sb statue mujhe meri hi taraf niche ki or dekh rahe the aur Mai jor jor se sanse le raha tha .

' huk '
' huk '
' huk '
' huk '

Mai puri tarah se taiyar tha , pasine se bhiga hua aur unki taraf hi dekh raha tha . Aakhir me chilla kr bolta hu " aago ! Aage badho . "

SWOOSSS............
BOOMMMM......

Ek statu apne bhale ko uthata h aur full force se meri taraf maar deta h , wo bhala mere body ke paar ho jati h aur niche jamin me dhas jati h . Mai bhut jor se chillata hu

" Ahhhhhhhhaaaaaa ....... "

Jaha bhala laga tha waha se bhut teji se blood niklne lagta h . Mere muh, naak , aakh sbse blood nikalne lagta h .

CRACK....... CRACK........
SWOOSSS.........
THUDDD.............

Wo statue fir bhi nahi rukta hai aur apne bhale ko mere body ke sath hi jamin se nikalta h aur mujhe apne bhale ke sath hawa me upar utha deta h , aur aakhir me us double layer stone ke upar fek deta h jiske upar inscription likhe hue the .
Mai akdam Bejan se us pr pada hua tha aur mere body se bahut sara blood nikal kr us double stone se hote hue niche jamin pr gir raha tha . Sb jagah bs blood hi blood ho gaya tha .

Mere muh se blood rah rah ke nikl raha tha . Mai upar ki taraf dekh raha tha , Aur apne aakhiri sanse leta hua bhut pain me bhut dhire bol raha tha ...
" Ahhhhh..."
" Uuu...... "
" Ahhaa ...uuuu... "
" Mai nahi ...."
" ....nahi marna cahta hu . "
" Mai nahi marna cahta hu . "
" Ahhhhh....."


Mere aakho ke saamne sari ghtnaye ghumne lagti hai jo sare Hunters yaha se jane se phle apni family aur mere bare me bol rahe the .
Yahi sb yaad krte hue mai kud se bol raha tha ...
" Nahi ! ye bilkul thik nahi h . "
" Thank you bolne ka tm logo ka kya matlab tha ? "
" Tm sb yaha se mere sath vishvaasaghaat krkr bhag gaye . "
" Mere paas bhi family hai...."
" Mai bhi tm sb ki tarah nahi marna cahta hu "
" Kya bola tha maine , acha hua mai akele yaha Mar raha hu !! "
" tum Kud se bhi juth bolna band kro Rider . "
" Mai jutha hu ! "
" Mai nahi marna cahta ..... "
" Kaas mere paas .."
" Sirf ak aur chance hota "


Mai upar dekhte hue ye sb bolta rahta hu . Tabhi aur aur statue apni sward ko upar uthata hai aur uski sward light ki speed se mere taraf aa rahi hoti h , sward mujhse bs touch hone wali hoti h ki aisa lagta h ki achanak se sb stop ho jata h .

TAD.....TAD....TAD.....

Sare inscription me se blue color ki light niklne lagti h aur mere aakho ke samne hawa me ek screen aa jati h jis pr kuch likha hua tha lakin mujhe thik se dikhayi nahi de raha tha .

" Ye kya hai ? "
Itna bol kr mai dhyan se us screen ko dekhne lagta hu . Ab mujhe kya likha hua tha wo clear dikhne lagta h .

[ ! Alarm ]
[ Aapne SECRET QUEST ki sari jruri requirements puri kr li hai , Aap " COURAGE OF THE WEAK " hai ]​

Ye sb padh kr mai confused ho jata hu ...
' SECRET QUEST ? '
' sari requirements puri karna ? '

Abhi mai ye sb soch hi raha tha ki , ek sound sunayi deta h ..

[ Aapne SECRET QUEST ki sari jruri requirements puri kr li hai , Aap " COURAGE OF THE WEAK " hai ]​

' are ye kya ab to ek awwaj bhi mujhe sunayi de rahi h ! '

Fir se awwaj aati h ...

[ AAPNE AK PLAYER BANANE KI KABILIYAT KAMAYI KI HAI. KYA AAP PLAYER BANANA CAHTE HAI ? ]​

' kamayi hai ? '
' player banana cahte hai ? '
' ye sb kya ho raha hai ? '

Mai pura confused ho gaya tha ki aakhir ye sb hai kya . Phle wo screen ka aana fir se aawaj sunayi dena aur ab ye sb .

Tabhi fir se aawaj aati h ..

[ AAPKE PAAS JYADA TIME NAHI BACHA HAI . ]

[ AGR AAPNE MANA KIYA TO AAPKI DIL KI DADKAN LAGBHAG 0.02 SECOND ME BAND HI JAYEGI . TO KYA AAP ACCEPT KRTE HAI ? ]​

' ah....'
' agr maine accept kr liya to .....'
' kya mai marne se bach jaunga ? '

Fir se blue color ka screen aata h ....

[ ! ALARM ]
[ AGR AAPNE MANA KIYA TO AAPKI DIL KI DADKAN LAGBHAG 0.02 SECOND ME BAND HI JAYEGI .
TO KYA AAP ACCEPT KRTE HAI ? ]
{ ACCEPT } { REFUSED }​

Mai turant hi bolta hu ..
" Haa ! ye chance ... "
" Mai accept krta hu . "

Agle hi pal new screen aati h ..

[ !ALARM ]
[ WELCOME , PLAYER . ]​

BOOM.........BOOM...........BOOM.....

Aur isi ke sath bhut tej dhamaka hota h aur us double layer stone ke inscription se aur meri body se goldan colour ki bahut tej light niklne lagti h . Wo Goldan light itni tej thi ki pura room hi tej light se bhr gaya .





Aaj ke liye itna hi dosto !!
Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through .
Apna pyar aise hi banaye rakhiye .

To Rider ab player ban gaya hai aur shayaad bahut jayada strong bhi, ab aayega maza

 

[Lib am]

UPDATE - 11
Last Update me dosto aapne dekha ki rahul Anjana ko mujhe door se bahr le jane ko bolte hai , tabhi achanak bahut jyada power use krne ke karan Anjana ke pair kaam krne bnd kr dete hai aur wo gir jati h . Aur aakhir me mai rahul ko Anajan ko bahar le jane ko bolta hu . Unke jane ke baad sare statue mere pr attack kr dete h aur tabhi achanak se mere same kuch screen dikhayi deti h sath me aawaje bhi sunayi deti h aur mujhe player banane ka puchti h so mai ha kr deta hu .​

AB AAGE....

[ ! ALARM ]
[ WELCOME , PLAYER ]​

AAAHHH........

HUHHHH......HUHHHH....
HUHHHH........ HUHHH.....
DAKKKKK.... DAKKKKKK.....DAKKK..... DAKKKK.....

Mai jldi se jaag jata hu , meri puri body pasine se bhigi hui thi . Aur mai bahut jor jor se sanse le raha hota hu mere dil ki dhadkan bhi bahut tej chl rahi hoti h. Mai apne right hath apne chest pr dil ke paas rak leta hu aur normal karne ke kosis karta hu .

" Ek dream ? "
" Kya ye ak dream tha ? "

Ye bol kr Mai apne chro taraf dekhta hu to akdam shocked ho jata hu Qki mai us statue wale room me nahi tha mai to kisi bed pe tha aur dekhne se lag raha tha mai kisi hospital me hu .

" Hospital ? "

CHUUUUUU.............

Aur tabhi room ka door open hota h aur 2 aadmi black nd white suite Boot me andar mere taraf aate h . Aur unme se ak aadmi bolta h ...

" To aakhirkar tumhe ab hose aa hi gaya ? "

Mai " tum kon ho ? "

1st man " mujhe maaf kr dena agr hmne tmko surprised kr diya ho to . "

Ye bol ke 1st man ne ak card meri taraf aage kiya aur m use ke kr dekhne lagta hu . Aur kahta hu .

" Indian Hunter guild ke inspectors ... "
" Inspectors mujhe q dekhne aaye h ..?"

Tb mujhe wo inspectors batate hai ki mai 3din se behos pada hua tha . Ye sun ke mai akdam shocked ho jata hu ..

" Kya ? Mai 3din se behos tha ? "

Tbhi mujhe Rahul , Anjana aur baki sb ki yaad aati h aur m inspectors se puchta hu ..

" Miss Anjana aur Mr Rahul unka kya hua ? "
" Kya wo surakshit hai ? "

1st inspector " ha wo surakshit hai lakin ..."

" Mr Rahul ka kata hua hath ab se unke kaam me baadha banega to wo ab retired ho jayenge jaha tk mujhe lgta h . "
"Aur Hunter miss Anjana ka abhi bhi ilaj chl rha h Qki unhe bhut hi gahra sadma laga hai. "
" Kuch kah nhi sakte ki wo aage bhi Hunter rakhengi ya nahi !! "

2nd inspector " aur baki ke Hunter jaise Mr Rohan ..... "

Abhi wo aage kuch bolta tbhi mai bich me hi bol deta hu ..

" Nahi ..... "
" Thik h !! "
" Itna kafi hai . "

Qki mujhe un sb ka waha se hme akela chor ke bhag jana yaad aane lagta h .

1st inspector " to kul 6 log hi double layer me bach paye hai . "
" Mai janta hu hunter hr time hi khtre me rahte hai . Lakin aisa hatyaakaand hona bhut hi rare hai ... "

" Jb inspectors aur white tiger guild wale us jagah phuche , "
" Tb tk sare ja chuke the "
" Waha us room me kewal tum hi the jo ki vedee pr lete hue the . "
" Koi bhi statue ya kuch bhi aisa ni mila jaisa baki sb ne bataya tha . "

Mai ( shock se ) " aisa nahi ho skta hai ? "

1st inspector " hme kud is baat pr Vishwas nahi ho raha tha . "
" yadi jeevit bache logon kee gavaahee mein thoda bhee antar hota "
" ya yadi mare hue logo ke shareer ke kuchh ang vahaan nahi pae jaate hain, to hamane ek alag spashteekaran ke baare mein socha hota .. "
" Ye bs hamari soch hai lakin .... "

Meri taraf ghur ke dekhte hue..
" Hame lagta h ki tmne DOUBLE AWAKEING payi hai "

Mai ( sadme se mn me sochta hu ) ' DOUBLE AWAKEING '


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Aap logo ko DOUBLE AWAKEING ke bare me bata deta hu phle .
Ak hunter ki stats fix ho jate hai jb uski AWAKENING ( power jagna ) hoti hai .
Lakin kuch hunters aise bhi hoti h jinki AWAKEING ak baar fir se hoti h phli baar hone ke baad .
Aise kai se example dekhne ke mile hai jinme C Rank ka Hunter directly A Rank ke Hunter me chla jata h aur A RANK ka direct S rank me qki unki power dubara jagti h .

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Mere samne ak instrument rakhte hue jiske bich me thik upar ak dark blue color ka crystal laga hua tha aur usase ak wire nikli hui thi jo kisi remot jaise device se connect thi usi me power ki reading dikhti thi .

1st inspector " ye ak magic power ka pata lagane wala instrument hai
" Tmhe bs is mana crystal pr apna hath rakhna hai "

Aur iske baad wo inspector sochne lagta hai ..
' agr waha such me aise death level ke monster the to normal huntur unse bilkul nahi bach sakte the . '
' kewal A Rank aur S Rank ke Hunter hi ek sath mil kr aise situation ka hal nikal skte hai . '
' lakin we sare monster akdam se gayab ho gaye '
' ye dekhne ke baad ki Mr Rider waha akele huntur the jo jinda rahe aise me ye namumkin hai ki aise situation m hum Mr Rider pr shak na kre ki unko DOUBLE AWAKEING na mili ho . '

Wo ye sb soch raha tha aur mai tb tk apna R8 hath us mana crystal pr rakh cuka tha aur wo crystal bilkul na kr barabar chmkne laga .

PEE PEE PEE PEE PEE........

Wo inspector ye aawaj sun kr device ke taraf dekhta h aur uske screen pr bs mana reading bs 10 hi show kr rahi thi .

Ye sb dekh kr mai sochta hu ....
' mere khyal se kabaad , kabaad hi rahega aaj bhi aur aage aane wale samay me bhi '
' ak sbse khrab E Rank HUNTER ka bhi mana reading km se km 70hota h . '

Mai inspector se puchta hu " result kya raha ? "

Inspector " dekh ke aisa lagta h hm bekar me tumhare upar sandeh kr rahe the . "

DUDDDDD.........

wo dono inspector aaps me baat krte hue room se chle jate h . Aur m unhe jate hue dekh kr sochta hu ' mtlb kuch nahi hua ? '
' lekin kya un logon ko isakee jaanakaaree nahin hai? '

Mai ye sb soch hi raha tha ki tabhi ......

DING........

[ MASSAGE ]
[ You have unread mail ]​

mere samne hawa me ak screen open ho jati h , Aur m kud se bolta hu ' kya undono ko ye screen nahi dikhi thi ? '

Aur mera dhyan mere left leg pr jata h aur ye kya ......
Mere kata hua pair ab thik h . Aur mere dil ki dhadkan ab thik h .
Mai abhi kuch nahi bata skta kya such hai ? Aur kya Sapna hai ?

Mai hawa me open hue screen ki taraf dekh kr ....
" kya mujhe un logo ko ye sb bata dena chahiye ? "
" Ki mai kya dekh skta hu ! "

Aur us screen ko touch krne ke liye apne ak ungli aage badhata hu aur screen ko touch krke kud se bolta hu " sayad ye touch screen nahi h ! "

CHUUUUU................

abhi mai apne bed pr khada ho kr us screen ko hawa me touch krne ki kosis krta hu tabhi ek bhut hi cute nd beautiful ladki school uniform me mere room me aa kr mujhe aisa krte Hue dekh kr confused ho jati h aur kahti h ..

" Bhai tum kya kr rahe ho ? "
" Kahi tmhare sir me bhi to chot nahi lagi h ? "

Ji ha ye koi aur nahi meri choti sister Kavya hi thi Aur mere bed ke paas aa kr mujhe gusse se chillate hue bolti h ..

Kavya " Kya maine tumse nahi kaha tha ki ab aur chot khana bnd kr do ? "
" Tmhe pata bhi hai mai kitna dar gayi thi tmhare liye ? "

Mai ( uski eye me dekh kr ) " sorry .. "

Kavya " dusre baki to safe bahar aa gaye to hamesa tm hi q chot khaa kr bahar aate ho ? "
"
Wo ye sb bole ja rahi thi aur m soch raha tha ' mujhe yakin nahi ho raha h , maine almost isko akela chor hi diya tha ! '
' mujhe abhi bhi nahi lag raha h ki mai us sapne se bahr aa paya hu abhi tk , lakin .... '

Kavya " kya tmhe smjh me aaya ? Agr tmhe ak aur baar chot lagi to mai study krna chor dungi uski jagah job krne lagungi taki tum ye Hunter ka job chor sako . "

Mai ( kavya se screen ki taraf isara krke ) " kavya !! "
" Kya tmhe ye dikh raha h ? "

Kavya ( confused ho kr ) " kya ? "

Mai smjh jata hu ise bhi ye screen nahi dikh rahi h mtkb sayad sirf mai hi ise dekh skta hu .
To mai usase aage bolta hu ( screen ki taraf dekhte hue ) ..
" Ohhh !! "
" Agar kisi game me koi unread mail pada ho to .."
" Tum kaise use read kr skte ho ? "

Kavya ( chinta aur confus ho kr ) " pakka na tumhare sir me chot nahi lagi h na ? "

Mai na me gardan hila deta hu .
To kavya kahti h " well ! Tmhe phle mail box ko open krna hoga "

Mai " mail box ko open kro ? "

Aur mere bolne se hi agle pal screen ka massage open ho gaya .

{ [ MASSAGE ]
[ Welcome player ( unread ) ]
[ Daily Quest : Prepared to become strong , Has arrived ( unread ) ] }​

Screen pr ye likha hua tha sath me ye mujhe sunayi bhi de raha tha . Ye sb dekh kr mai soch raha hota hu .
Tabhi kavya puchti h " kyu ! Kya huaa? "

Mai use aise hi idhar udhar ki bate bata kr kuch nahi batata . Tb wo khti b ..

Kavya " acha mai ab ja rahi hu . "

Mai " thik hai . "

Uske baad wo room se bahr chli jati h . Room se bahr aa kr wo apne ak frnd jo ki usi ke sath aayi thi ko bolti h " chlo hm chalte hai . "
Aur wo dono chle jati h .

Jbki idhar mai apne bed pr is system ko smjhne ki kosis krta hu . Mere samne ak ak krke kai screen hawa me open ho jata h .

DING.......
DING.......
DING.......

1st screen ...

[ ALARM !]
[ The system will help the 'players' growth. ]​

2nd screen...

[ ALARM !]
[ If he fails to obey the system's order . Their may be a penalty. ]​

3rd screen....

[ ALARM ! ]
[ Your rewards have arrived.]​

Ye sb padh kr mai kud se kahta hu " mujhe to kuch smjh hi nahi aa raha h ye sb kahna kya cahte hai ."
Jb mai ye sb ke bare me dekh aur soch raha tha tabhi mujhe yaad aaya h maine aisa hi kuch milta julta tb bhi dekha tha jb m vedee pr leta hua tha . Jo ki kuch aisa tha...

{ [ ALARM ! ]
[ You have completed all the necessary requirements of the SECRET QUEST " COURAGE OF THE WEAK " ] }​

Tbhi ak new screen aati hai aur mai use dekhne lg jata hu.

DING......

[ MASSAGE ]
[ Daily Quest : preparing to become strong ]
[ Has arrived ( unread ) ]​

Mai " preparing to become strong. Ab ye kya h ? "
" Check kro ise "

Mere itna Bolte hi ak new big screen open hoti h .

{ [ QUEST DIRECTION ]
Daily Quest - Getting ready to become powerful

GOLE

[ Push-ups ( 0/100 ) incomplete ]
[ Curl-ups ( 0/100 ) incomplete ]
[ Squats ( 0/100 ) incomplete ]
[ Running ( 0/10Km ) incomplete ]

Warning : - Failing to complete the daily Quest will bring a panishment associated with the quest. }​

Aur sbse last me ak watch bani hui thi jisme count down chl rahi thi .

Ye sb dekh kr mai kud se bolta hu ..
" Hahaha .... Ye sb kya hai ? "
" Ye ak majak hai . Hai ki nahi ? "
" Mere jaisa koi jo ki hospital me admit hai wo ye sb kaise kr skta hai ? "
" Mai ise baad me dekhunga . "
" Jb mai so kr uth jaunga tb . "

Aur mai apne bed pr let jata hu , aur so jata hu .
Lakin screen me jo watch thi iska timer chlta rahta h uska colour phle greens se yellow fir jb time khtam hone wala hota h to red colour me change ho jata h .
Aur jb time khtam ho jata h tb an new screen aati h ...

DING.....

[ALARM ]
[ Aapne Daily Quest ko pura nahi kiya . Ab aapko " PENALTY ZONE " me jana hoga ak nirdharit time ke liye .]
​

ZIKKKKKK.....ZIKKKKK....

achanak se mera bed hilne lagta h mai apni eye open krta hu aur tabhi mujhe lagta h mere niche ki jamin bahut tej hil rahi hai

Mai " earth quake ye kaise aa gaya ? "

CRACK...... CRACK......

Mai bed se niche gir jata hu aur mere niche ka floor tutne lagta h aur kuch second me hi mai dekhta hu mai floor pr nahi blki ret mai baitha hu .
Mai turant samne dekhta hu aur akdam shocked ho jata hu QKI mai achanak se hospital se registan me aa gaya tha mere chro taraf ret hi ret thi aur samne suraj tha .

Mai ( shocked ho kr ) " ye jagah ...."
" Ak registan ! "
" nahi ye nahi ho skta . Mai pakka koi spna dekh raha hu !! "

SISSSS.................

Tabhi mujhe mere piche ret ke girne ki aawaj sunayi deti h aur mai dhire se piche mud kr dekhta hu.
Aur bahut jayada dar jata hu QKI ret me se ak bahut bada , jahrile nakhun wala registani Bicchu nikla tha .
Sath me ak screen bhi open hoti h

DING......

{ [ QUEST DIRECTION ]
[ PENALTY QUEST : JINDA BACHE RAHNA ]

GOLE : time khtam hone tk jinda bache rahna.

[ Time required : 4 hour ]
[ Time remaining : 3H 59Min 55Sec] }​

Ye sb sun kr mai darte hue smile krne ki kosis krta hu aur us bicchu ki taraf dekh kr kahta hu jo ki apni lambhi jib nikal kr mujhe hi dekh raha tha " tum majak kar rahe ho na ... ? "






Aaj ke liye bs itna hi dosto !!
Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through !!
Apna pyar aise hi banaye rakhiye !!

Lagta hai ye hero taaqat se hi nahi, dimaag se bhi paidal hai. Ye kahani Werewolf bhai ki kahani se inspire lag rahi hai. Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai

 

[ROAN R]

UPDATE - 81



Ab tak aapne dekha dosto ki mai wapas se DEMON CASTLE ke DENGEON ke ander enter kar leta hu. To mujhe fir se System se ek Quest milta hai. Fir mai 76th foor par ja kr TUSK ko Apna ORB de deta hu. Aur TUSK akele hi samne aane wale sare Demon's ko jala kar raakh kr deta hai. Wahi hospital me admit Dilip ko pata chalta hai ki use INTERNAL SLUMBER name ki ek bimar ho gayi hai. Jiske wajah se bahut jldi wo kabhi na pura hone wali need me jane wala hai. Lakin Dilip kud se kahta hai abhi maine haar nahi mani hai. Mai kuch na kuch karke rahunga. Wahi Japan ke Island par ek Ant bina mare fly karte hue pahuch jata hai.​

AB AAGE.....


AN ISLAND, JAPAN
MORNING TIME

Japan ke ek island me morning ka time tha. Ye ek bahut hi khubsurat subah thi, charo taraf sani faili hui thi. Chidiya apne nest ko chod kr apne khane ki talash me nikal cuki thi.

Tap... Tap... Tap...

Usi island me kahi par 2 young age ke ladke chalte hue kahi ja rahe the.
Ek ladka jiska hair golden colour ka tha. Usne black t-shirt aur yellow color ki paint pahni hui thi sath me usne ek brown color ka rob pahna hua tha. Jisase uski mostly body cover thi. Uske hath me ? Symbol ki tarah ek long stick thi. Iska name Agamoto tha.
Wahi uske sath chl rahe dusre ladke gray color ki paint aur shirt pahani hui thi. Usne apne hatho aur solder par silver colour ka armour pahna tha. Aur uske kamar me ek sword latki hui thi. Iska name Nogawa-san tha.

Nagawa-san ek smile ke sath Agamoto ko dekhte hue " Peace such me sbse achi hoti hai. "

Tap... Tap... Tap....

Fir wo dono log kuch der aur chalne ke baad ek normal se ghar ke samne aa kar ruk jate hai.

CHUUU....

Us ghar ka door open ho ta hai. Aur fir usme se ek old age ka aadmi bahar aata hai. Uski sir ke almost sare baal gir chuke the.

Old man, Nagawa-san ko dekh kar kahta hai " Nagawa-san mai aaj bhi patrolling ka kaam tumhare hawale karta hu. "

Nagawa-san apna sir us old man me samne juka kar " Ji bilkul, aap befikar rahiye. "

Old man, Agamoto ki taraf dekh kar kahta hai " Kya ye ek naya ladka hai ? "

Nagawa-san ek smile ke sath " Ha ye ek naya ladka hai. "
" Please ! Iska khyal rakhiyega. "

Tap... Tap... Tap....

Ab wo dono log fir se aage badh jate hai. Nagawa-san chalte hue samne dekhte hue Agamoto se kahta hai " Bhale hi yaha jyada kuch nahi hota hai. Fir bhi hme yaha roj patrolling par jana hota hai. Aur sath me hmare liye hi acha hoga agar hum yaha ke villagers ke face yaad kar le to. "
" Quki agar Is remote island par kabhi koi Gate open ho gaya to hum bahut bade khatre me pad jayenge. "
" Hum sare log mare jayenge agar yaha koi DENGEON break hota hai. Aur hum uska time se pata nahi laga paye hai to. "
" Isi liye hme yaha roj patrolling karni hoti hai aur agar kabhi koi Gate dikha to hme Magical energy sensor ki help se pata karna hota hai ki aakhir us Gate ka Rank kya hai. "
" Fir hum yaha se uske hisab se hunturs ke liye is Island se bahar request bhejate hai. "
" Aur 3 din baad kahi ja kar help yaha aa pati hai. "
" Dusre sabdo me kahe to, Agar tum soch kar dekho to yaha help aane me 3 din lagte hai. To hume 3 din ke bhitar dikhne wale kisi bhi Gate ka pata lagana hota hai. "
" Is village me bus hum dono hi hunturs hai. Aur humdono D Rank aur E Rank huntur hai to hum dono ke upar bahut badi responsibly hai..... "

Abhi Nagawa-san aage aur bhi kuch bolta hai ki usase phle hi Agamoto samne kuch dekh kr ekdam se bahut Surprise ho jata hai. Aur kahta hai " Nagawa-san wo dekho... "

Nagawa-san bhi samne dekhta hai aur wo bhi shocked ho jata hai.

Nagawa-san ( samne dekhte hue confusion ke sath ) " Kya ? Kya ye koi aadmi hai ? "

Un dono ke samne Ek human size ka Ant tha. Jo apne do pairo par humans ki tarah chl raha tha. Ye Ant aur koi bhai wahi Ant tha jo jinda yaha fly karte hue aa paya tha.

Nagawa-san jor se chilla kr kahta hai " Kon ho tum ? "

Ye sunte hi wo Ant apni jagah par ruk jata hai. Uska face dekh kar aisa lag raha tha jaise ki wo ek evil smile kr raha ho.



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INSIDE THE DEAMON CASTLE


Jamin par na jane kitne dher sare Deamons ki mari hui body padi hui thi. Wo dikhne me bahut ajib aur alag alag size ke the. Aur in sub ko mere Shadow Soldiers ne hi mara tha.
Is Area ke jb sare demons khtam ho jate hai to mai apne sare shadow Soldiers ko dekhte hue apne man me kahta hu ' Quki maine apni intelligence stat ko phle se kafi jyada increase kar liya hai isi liye ab meri Shadow Soldiers ko EXTRACT aur unko Save krne ki, ye dono ability badh gayi hai. '

{ [ Shadow Soldiers ko EXTRACT kar skte hai : 127 / 820 ]
[ Shadow Soldiers ko save kar skte hai : 127 / 155 ] }​

Mai ( mare hue Demon's ke body ki taraf dekhte hue ) " Agar Demon's ke Shadow ko EXTRACT karna possible hota to is time mere paas ek Gigantic army hoti. "

Fir mai Apne shadow Soldiers ki taraf dekhte hue wapas apne man me sochta hu ' Sare army ka ek bade group me kahi bhi le jane me bahut problem hogi. Aur iska jyada koi fayda bhi nahi hai. '
' Mujhe ab inhe aur efficiently tarike se manag karna hoga. '

Mai " Mai abhi se tum logo ko Alag alag teams me divide kar raha hu. "
" Ab se yaha par total 6 team hogi. "

Itna kah kar mai un sub ko total 6 team me divide kar deta hu. Jo ki kuch is prkar thi....

1. TUSK TEAM
2. IGRIS TEAM
3. IRON TEAM
4. TANK TEAM
5. HIGH ORCS TEAM 'A'
6. HIGH ORCS TEAM 'B'

Sare teams ka name maine unke Leader ke hi name par rakha tha. Bs kewal High orcs team 'A' aur 'B' ka Leader maine baki ke bache hue dono high orcs Guard ko banaya tha. Aur in dono ki team me high orcs worries the. TUSK ki team me bhi high orcs worries hi the. IGRIS ki team me KNIGHTS se. IRON ki team me KNIGHTS nd magician the. Aur TANK ki team me ice bears the.

Mai sbko dekhte hue " Mere sirf 2 hi orders hai. "
" Phla apne apne group ke anusar sare 6 team me divide ho jao. Aur tumhare samne aane wale kisi ki dusman ko khtam kar dalo. "
" Aur dusra order hai, Jb kisi ko Entry paas mil jaye wo turant hi aa kar mujhe khabar karega. "
" Chlo jldi se ab sare mere aakho ke samne se gayab ho jao. "

SSSSSSSS......

Aur mere itna kahte hi mere sare Shadow Soldiers black color ki energy form me waha se gayab ho jate hai. Aur alag alag Direction me is floor par chle jate hai.

Mai us bade se aag ke gole ki taraf dekhte hue jisase hm next floor par jate hai " Mujhe Entry permit milne par baki ke bache hue drops ( items ) ko yahi chorna hoga. "
" Quki meri abhi ki priority, jitna jldi ho sake utna jldi top floor par puchna hai. "

DING.....

[ Aapko 1,500 EXP milte hai. ]
[ Aapko 1,500 EXP milte hai. ]
[ Aapko 900 EXP milte hai. ]
[ Aapko 1,100 EXP milte hai. ]​

Aise hi na jane kitne notification lagatar aane suru ho jate hai.

Mai, ye sare notification dekhte hue " Abhi mujhe in sub ko bheje hue bhut jyada time bhi nahi hua hai. Aur mujhe EXP milna suru bhi ho gaya hai. "
" Ye phle se bahut jyada convenient hai. Aise me ab mujhe yaha waha faltu me ghum kar apna time bhi waist nahi karna padega. Jisase mera bahut time save hoga. "
" Aur jb tak inme se koi marta nahi hai mai apna Mana bhi lose nahi karunga. "
" Lakin quki ab highest grade Deamons samne aana suru ho cuke hai. To mere Normal Soldiers ko ab bahut muskilo ka samna karna pad raha hai unko face karte hue. "
" Mujhe lagatar POTION ko pite rahna hoga jisase ki mera Mana recover hota rahe. "

Quki high grade Deamons se fight krte hue mere low level ke Soldiers distroy ho ja rahe the. Jiske karan mera Mana kam hone laga tha.
Isi liye mai store ko open krke usme se POTION ko buy karke pita bhi rahta hu.

Bhle hi mai Deamon Castle ke ander tha lakin mujhe yaha bhi apne daily Quest ko Complete karna pad raha tha. Warna mujhe PENALTY ZONE me jana pad sakta tha. Aur mai yaha apna jara bhi time bikul bhi khrab nahi karna chahta tha.


A FEW DAYS LATER...

Mere bagal me TANK khada tha. Mai use dekhta hu tbhi ek notification aata hai.

DING....

[ SHADOW MONSTER LV. 24 ]
[ ELITE RANK ]​

Mai ( thode surprise se ) " Huh ? "
" TANK ko maine jab last time dekha tha. Tab se ab tak TANK ne 10 times apna level increase kr liya hai. "
( Baki sare Shadow Soldiers ki taraf dekhte hue ) " Na sirf mera level increase hua hai. Balki mere Shadow Soldiers ka bhi level increase ho gaya hai. "
" Team bana kar sikar karne me to mere ummid se bhi jyada fayda hua hai. "

DING.....

[ SHADOW KNIGHT LV. 16 ]
[ NORMAL RANK ]

[ SHADOW MAGICIAN LV. 19 ]
[ ELITE RANK ]​

Aise hi mere sare SHADOW SOLDIERS ka level phle se kafi jyada increase ho gaya tha.

Mai, Usi bade se aag ke gole ki taraf dekhte hue " Abhi bhi 20 floors bache hue hai. "
" 80 floor tak maine jitna time socha tha mai usase kafi phle hi phuch gaya hu. "
" Mujhe 80th floor par phuche hue phle hi 2 din bit chuke hai. "
" Aur Main baat ye hai ki mujhe ab tak is floor par entry permit nahi mila hai. "
" Kya yaha is floor par kisi jagah koi strong Enemy hai ? "

[ MP : 4,583 / 5,672 ]
[ MP : 4,282 / 5,672 ]​

Mai is floor par ek unchi jagah par ja kar khada ho jata hu. Aur chro taraf dekhte hue apne man me kud se kahta hu ' Mera Mana bahut hi teji se kam ho raha hai. '
' Koi lagata mere Shadow Soldiers ko destroy kiye ja raha hai. '
( Ek Direction me dekhte hue ) ' kya ye us tarf ho raha hai ? '
' Is tarah se to mere Soldiers ke regeneration ki speed ise kabhi pakad hi nahi payegi. '
' Jarur ye Enemy mere un Shadow Soldiers par bhari pad raha hoga. '
" Ye sayad wahi team hogi jise IRON lead kar raha hai. "
" Ek aisa Enemy jo IRON ke upar baar baar bhari pad raha hai. Ye soch kar hi mai smjha skta hu wo Enemy kitna strong hoga. "

[ MP : 3,231 / 5,672 ]​

Ye dekhte hi mai kahta hu " Mere paas abhi filhal aur koi choice nahi hai. Mujhe mere sare Shadow Soldiers ko wapas bulana hi padega. "

Aur fir mai apne sare Shadow Soldiers ko apne man me order deta hu aur chro taraf se black color ki energy aa kar mere ander samane lagti hai.


NEXT DAY.....

lagatar mere Shadow Soldiers par hone, ghat laga kar hone wale Attack ke karan mujhe ek baar fir se mere sare Shadow Soldiers ko wapas bulana pada.

Mai ek jagah jamin par baith kar ek lakdi se jamin par ek drawing banata hu. Jisme mai central me tha. Aur mere chro taraf jis jis Directon me me mere Shadow Soldiers ki jo team jati hai unka name tha.



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Mai " High orcs ke B team par Attack karke unko destroy karne ke baad. Unhone IGRIS ke team par Attack kiya. "
" Jaisa ki maine socha tha wo baat sahi hai aur is floor ek strong Enemy hai. "
" Lakin ek baat ajib hai. "
" TUSK team IGRIS team ke thik aage thi. Lakin Enemy ne kisi taraf uske samne na ja karke, wo high orcs ke Team 'A' ke paas gaya. Aur use khtam kar diya. "
" Kya demons itne jyada Strong nahi hai ki wo TUSK ko hara sake. "
" Agar Enemy jaanbujh kar sirf unhi ko tar target kar raha hai. Jinse wo jit skta hai. "
" Iska matlb uske paas itna dimak hai ki wo ye soch skta hai ki wo kise hara skta hai aur kise nahi. "
" Agr wo jaanbujh kar High orcs ke team 'B' par Attack kar raha hai... "
( TANK ki taraf dekhte hue ) " Tab uska next target jrur TANK ki team hi hogi. "
" Ye definitely yahi team honi cahiye, warna in sb bato ka koi logic hi nahi banta hai. "

Fir Mai wapas se apne sare Shadow Soldiers ko unki jagah wapas bhej deta hu. Aur TANK ke team ke piche mai kud chup kar jane lagta hu.
Jab TANK ke team kafi aage nikal aati hai. Tab achanak se unke samne kuch Demons aa kar kuch duri par khade ho jate hai.

Mai ( chup kar un sub demons ko dekh kar apne man me kahta hu ) ' To ye rahe wo sub.'

Ye sare human ki body structure ki tarah ke hi demons the, unka face alag tha unke sir par horn lage hue the. Aur wo sare apne hatho me bhale, sword liye hue horse jaise dikhne wale demon animal par baithe hue the. In sare demons ki body par bhi kafi attractive armours the.

Mai ( dur khada chori se unko dekhte hue kud se kahta hu ) ' Ek demon NOBLE aur 3 Demon KNIGHTS. '

GWWAAAAAA.......
GWWAAAAAA.......

Un sab ko dekh kar TANK aur uske sathi jor se chillane lagte hai. Aur unki taraf Attack krne ke liye teji se badh jate hai.

RUN......
JUMP......
SWOSSSSSS........
GWWAAAA......

Tabhi unme se ek demon KNIGHT apne horse se utar kar teji se bhagte hue TANK ki taraf aata hai. Aur ek jump laga kar apne bhale se TANK ke sir par ek Attack karta hai aur TANK destroy ho jata hai.

RUN.... RUN....
SWOSSSSSS.......
SWOSSSSSS......

Isi taraf baki ke dono demon KNIGHTS bhi teji se baki ke bache hue ice bears ki taraf jate hai. Aur kuch hi der me tino demons KNIGHT ne puri TANK ki team ko khtam kar diya.

Ye sb dekhne ke baad mai STEALTH skill se kud ko jo chupaye hue tha. Mai un logo ke samne aa jata hu aur kahta hu " Shadow Monsters ka inke samne jitne ka koi chance hi nahi hai. "

RUN.....
SWOSSSSSS.....

Mujhe samne dekh kr sbse aage khada demon KNIGHT bhagte hue mere taraf aate hai aur apne bhale se mere tarf ek Attack karta hai. Lakin mai aasani se niche jukh kar uske is Attack se bach jata hu.

BAAAMMMM........
DHADAAMMMM.....

Aur fir mai turant hi apne right pair se uske muh par apne pure strength se ek last marta hu. Aur wo ulta udte hue kafi dur ja kr jamin me girta hai aur wahi mar jata hai.

DING....

[ Aapne ek demon KNIGHT ko hara diya hai. ]
[ Aapko 3,000 EXP. Mila hai. ]​

Uske piche khade baki ke dono demon KNIGHTS mujhe hi ghur kar dekh rahe hote hai. Lakin mai fir se apni STEALTH skill ka use karke gayab ho jata hu.
Ye dekh kr wo dono demon KNIGHTS kafi shocked hote hai aur idhar udhar dekhne lagte hai.

SWOSSSSSS.....
SWOSSSSSS......
SWOSSSSSS.....
SWOSSSSSS......

Tab tak mai unke samne pahuch jata hu aur apne dagger se aas paas hi khade dono demon KNIGHTS ke upar dher sare Attack kar deta hu. Aur agle hi pal un dono demon KNIGHTS ki body kai parts me wahi niche gir jati hai.
Aur wapas se mujhe inko marne par EXP. Point mil jata hai.

In sub ko marne ke baad mai bina ruke teji se us Demon NOBLE ke paas pauchta hu aur uske samne ja kar khada ho jata hu.
Wo Demon NOBLE to dar ke mare thar thar kaap raha hota hai. Usne hath me sword pakdi hui thi. Aur usne apne pure body par red and white color ka full armor pahna hua tha.

Mai ( use dekhte hue ) " mai soch raha tha ki kya monsters ko bhi dar mehsoos hota hai. "

Fir mai Apne aura ko relese karte hue apne blue eye se us demon NOBLE ko dekh kr cold tone me kahta hu " Lakin ab mujhe pata chal gaya hai. "













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Bahut Hi Gajab Ka Update Hai Bhai....

 

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UPDATE - 35


Ab tk aapne dekha dosto kaise anil ko marne ke baad me uski ability ke leta hu fir Anjana aur rahul monitoring department ko report dene bahar chle jate hai. Aur mai apne sath ek jinda bache hue criminal ko le ke boss ke room me jata hu. Waha pr sbko marne ke baad mai DENGEON creak krke bahar aa jata hu. Fir anurag aa kr hmse kuch swal puchta hai. Uske baad mujhe lalit ke bhai Namit ke bare me batata hai. Investigation khtam hone ke baad jb hum apne ghr ko niklte hai tum Anjana mujhse kuch puchti hai.​

AB AAGE......

Evening time....

Tap... Tap....

Mai aur Anjana sath me apne ghr ki taraf chlte hue ja rahe the. street light jal rahi thi. Anjana ne apna jacket utar diya tha aur use wo apne hath me pakde hue thi. Wo ek solderless white top nd skin fit black paint me thi. Usne apne balo ki ponny tail banayi hui thi.
Is time Anjana bahut hi jyada beautiful lag rahi thi. Din bhar itna sb kuch hone ke baad bhi Uska face bahut hi jyada shine kr raha tha.

Anjana ( aage chalte hue ) " Rider tum bahut jyada badal gaye ho. "
( Sad hote hue ) " Aur mai us din ke baad se thoda bhi badal nahi payi hu. "

Mai ( chlte hue samne dekh kr ) " Tmne bhi bahut se alag alag khatarnak ghatnao ka experience kiya hai. "
" Her ek ke liye badlaw alg hota hai. "

Anjana ( piche mud kr mujhe dekhte hue smile ke sath ) " Tumne sahi kaha. "
" Tumhe pata hai, ek huntur hone ke bawjood mai bahut jldi dar jati hu. "
" Maine apne dar ko kam karne ki bahut kosis ki, lakin ye itna bhi aasan kaam nahi hai. "
" Agr aap ek B Rank healer ho to normally aap A Rank ya B Rank DENGOUN me jaoge. "
" Lakin fir bhi mai D Rank aur E Rank ke raid me hissa leti rahi hu. "
" Aur fir mai lagatar tumse milne lagi Rider. "
" Maine hamesa tmhe lagne wali injury ko heal krti rahi. "
" Such kahu to tumhe hamesa hi chot lagti rahti thi jisase mai bahut paresan ho jati thi. "
" Mai sochti thi tum stupid aur useless ho. "
" Lakin, tum hamesa kud ko bacha hi lete the. "
" Tmhari ye jo aakhe hai ye jindgi se bhari hui hai. "
" Inhe dekh kr aisa lagta hai jaiseye chill chilla kr sbko kah rahi ho mujhe kl ke liye jinda rahna hai. "
( Mujhe dekh ke haste hue ) " lakin mujhe nahi lagata hai ki mai kbhi bhi waisi aakhe pane me kamayab ho paungi. "

Fir Anjana ek Magic crystal nikal kr apne hath me leti hai. Aur mujhe dikhate hue kahti hai " Tmne promise kiya tha ki hum dono sath me khana khayenge, jb hum dono waha se jinda wapas nikal jayenge to. Kiya tha na ? "
( Magic crystal meri taraf bada kr ) " Mai ise wapas de rahi hu. "

Mai ( shock se ) " Ruko !! Kahi tum .... "

Anjana " Haa !! Mai retire ho rahi hu. "
" Mai apne hometown Dehradun chli jaungi. "
" Agr tumhe kabhi waha jana ho to mujhe batana. "
" Mai tumhe waha ka special khana khilaungi. "

Mai Anjana se wo magic crystal le leta hu. Aur use apne paas rakh leta hu.

Mai " Agr mai waha aaya to, mai tumhe mere sath bahar chlne ke liye phir se puchunga. "

Anjana ( smile ke sath ) " Thik hai. "

Fir Anjana by bol kr apne ghr ki taraf chli jati hai. Mai kuch der use jate hue dekhta hu. Jb wo meri aakho se ojhal ho jati hai. To mai wo magic crystal apne hath me le kr kas kr pakd leta hu.
Aur Namit ke bare me sochte hue kud se kahta hu " Mujhe ab ek aur reason mil gaya hai, Mere strong banane ka. "
" S Rank huntur Namit. "
" Mujhe jld se jld takatvar banana hoga. "
" Tabhi mai jinda bacha rah skta hu. "

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Next Day
Morning Time, Unknown Place

Mai ek track suit pahne hue kisi jagah khada tha. Mere paas hi Shubham bhi tha.
Aur hmare samne 8 aur log the. Unhe dekh kr mai Shubham se kahta hu.

Mai ( confused hote hue ) " Dekho Shubham, ye sb kya hai ? "

Shubham ( smile aur excitement ke sath ) " Tumhara kya kyon hai ' ye sb se ' ? "
" Ye sb hmare teammates hai aaj ke liye. "

Mai sbko ghur ke dekhta hu.

Shubham " Ye sb we log hai jinke paas hunturs ka license hai. Lakin alg alg karan se ye sb raid me hissa nahi le skte hai. "
" Ye wo log hai jo apni life me struggle kr rahe hai alg alg reason ki wajah se. In sb ko maine apne team ke liye choose kiya hai. "

Ye sun ke mai sb hunturs ko dekhne lagta hu
Ek huntur ke ek pair me plaster laga tha,
Ek huntur alcohol pii raha tha, aise baki sb log the.

Shubham ( ek school girl ki tarf dikha kr ) " yaha kuch aise bhi hai jo jldi paise kamane ke chakkar me yaha aaye hai. "

Mai us school girl ko dekh ke haste hue Shubham se phuchta hu " kya baccho ko bhi raid me hissa lena allow hai ? "

Shubham ( haste hue ) " Agr koi underage AWAKING ho gaya hai to aisa koi bhi Kanoon nahi hai ki wo raid nahi kr skta hai. "

Wo school girl kud ko baccha bole jane or gussa ho jati hai.

School girl ( gusse se )" kid ? Ye bahut rude baat hai. "
" Mai bhi ek puri huntur hu. "

Mai ( school girl se ) " Tum ek school girl ho maine sahi kaha na ? Aur kya tumhe raid ka koi experience hai ? "

School girl " Nahi ! "

Tap.. tap..

Fir mai aage badhte hue school girl se kahta hu " Well ! Koi baat nahi hai. Tumhe DENGEON me jane ke liye mere piche nahi aana hoga. Bs bahar rah kr wait Krna hoga. "
" Sirf mai aur Shubham DENGOUN ke andar jayenge. "

Mai aage chlta rahta hu aur mujhse thoda piche ruk kr apna armour phnte hue baki sb Hunters se baat krta hai.

Shubham ( baki sb ko dekh ke batate hue ) " C Rank DENGOUN me sirf hum dono nahi ja skte. Isi liye hmne tum sb ko yaha bulaya hai. "
" Rule ke hisab se C Rank DENGOUN me jane ke liye 10 log hone cahiye. "

Shubham ke baat sun kr wo sb hunturs apne man me sochte hai...
' C Rank DENGOUN wo bhi bs ye dono ? '
' kya ye dono such me itne jyada strong hai ? '

Fir un sb me seek headphones gale me latkaye hue ladka kahta hai " um..... Well !! Kya tum such me 3 million rupee hmlogo me se hr ek ko doge. Jbki hum sb bs bahar hi rahenge ? "

Shubham ( apni 3 fingers unki taraf dikhate hue ) " Haa !! Bilkul , 3 million rupee her ek ko, her ek raid ke liye. "
" Isase acha deal tmhe kabhi nahi mil sakta jisme bina kuch kuliye tum sb ko itne rupee milenge. "
" Tum sb ko bs itna karna hi ki hamara bahar aane tk tum sb ko yaha hmara wait Krna hai. " Yaad rahe, tm kisi ko bhi kuch nahi bataoge ki tmne yaha kya suna aur dekha. "
" Agr tmne kisi ko kuch bhi bata diya to jitna tmne kamaya hai tumhe uska 10 times jyada mujhe wapas dena hoga. Ye sb us contract me likha hai jise tum sb logo ne sign kiya hai. "

Mai ( Shubham ko dekh ke upar sky ki taraf dekhte hue kahta hu ) " Lakin tm jante ho, mai chuk kyu gaya..... "
" Ye tmne kya bakwas phna hua hain "

Shubham ne ek red aur brown colour ka full body armour phna hua tha. Jisme sirf uska samne se face dikh raha tha. Baki ki puri body armour se cover thi.

Shubham ( smile ke sath ) " Ye hundred armour ka ek full set hai. Jise Italian artisan Guild ne banaya hai. "
" Agr raid ke liye bs hum dono hi ander jane wale hai to tumhe nahi lagta hme km se km itna to taiyar rahna hi cahiye ? "

BOOOMMM......

Mai Shubham ke paas aa kr bs apni ek ungli se usko halka sa dhakka deta hu aur Shubham piche ki taraf gir jata hai.

Mai ( series ho kr ) " Jb mai ache se kah raha hu to jldi se apna armour nikal do. "

Shubham ( rote hue ) " Thik hai. "

Aahhhh...
BOOM... BOOM....

Uske baad Shubham uthne ki kosis krta hai lakin wo uth nahi pata hai. Wo armour itna bhari tha hi ki wo kud se khada nahi ho pata hai. Aur hath pair jamin pr marne lagta hai.

Shubham ( rote hue ) " Bhai !! Please meri madad kro. "

Fir mai Shubham ko uthata hua. Aur wo apna armour utar deta hai. Sirf apne sir pr ek helmet phne hue rahta hai. Uske baad Shubham ek bag ko utha ke apne back pr rakh leta hai.

Shubham ( aage dekhte hue ) " Thik hai !! Chlo ander chalte hai bhai. "
" Mai ghbraya hua hu. "

Mai ( haste hue Shubham ko dekh kr ) " Ab ye kya hai ? "
" Kya tum series ho ? "

Tap... Tap....

Shubham ( chalte hue ) " Maine km se km ye to le hi skta hu. "

Mai " Haa !! Thik hai !! thik hai !! Ab jldi kro. "

Hamare waha se DENGEON ke ander jane ke baad baki sb Hunters aaps me baate krne lag jate hai.

" Kya wo such C Rank DENGOUN me kud se hi raid krne ja rahe hai ? "

Plaster wala huntur " Agr ye dono itne hi strong hai ki kud se C Rank DENGOUN ko clear kr skte hai, to isase acha to ye dono kisi bade Guild se mile hue kisi high Ranked DENGOUN ko clear kyu nahi krte hai ? "
" Kya hoga agr ye dono mar gaye to ? "

Headphone wala huntur " Well !! Hme isi baat ke paise mile hai ki hum yaha unka wait kre. "
" Unme se ek E Rank huntur Rider hai, mai use janta hu. "
" Use world weakest huntur ke name se jana jata hai. "

Plaster wala huntur " Ye name kyu ? "

Ek dusra huntur " Aur hamare raid ka leader ek D Rank huntur hai. "

Alcoholic huntur ( sigrate pite hue ) " Mere khyal se ye dono show off kr rahe hai. "
" In jaise youths ke show off se normally bahut se logo ko pareshani hoti hai. "

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At 3 O' Clock

Runnn..... Run.......
Huuuuu.... Huuuu......

DENGEON ke gate se Shubham bhagte hue baki hunturs ke paas hi aa raha hota hai.
Fir wo sbke paas phuch kr bhut tej tej hafne lagta hai.

Headphone wala huntur ( Shubham ko dekh ke ) " Ohhh !!! Tum jinda wapas aa gaye ? "

Plaster wala huntur " Dekh kr aisa lagta hai ki tum successful waha se bhag kr aa gaye ho. "

Alcoholic huntur " Thank God !! "

Shubham ke piche mai bhi aaram se chalte hue gate se bahr aata hu.
Abhi sub hmdono ko hi dekh rahe the ki ek huntur chilla kr bolta hai " Ruko !! Wo waha se bhag kr nahi aaya hai. "
" Ye dekho !! "

ZIZZZZZZZ......
CRACK..... CRACK.....

Ye sun ke baki sub hunturs piche mud kr gate ki taraf dekhne lagte hai. Aur fir smne jo hota hai wo dekh kr sb shocked ho jate hai. Sbka muh khula ka khula rah jata hai.

" Gate band ho raha hai. "
" Kya !! Inhone BOSS ko maar diya. "

Mai santi se apne track suit ke pocket me apna dono hath dale Shubham se puchta hu " Agla DENGOUN kaha hai ? "

Shubham ( niche jamin pr baithe hue ) " Yaha se lagbhag 1hour dur hai wo. "

Kuch minute baad...

Shubham " Thik hai !! Sb chlo yaha se. "
" Hme aaj total 3 DENGEON clear krne hai. "

Ye sun ke sare logo ka face bilkul blank ho jata hai. Sub bs mujhe aur Shubham ko hi dekh rahe hote hai.

Shubham " Mere khyal se tum sb chloge hmare sath, waise bhi socho tm me se har ek ko aaram se 9 million milega. "

Headphone wala huntur ( shock se ) " Ah.. Ha hum sb chlenge. "

Fir hum sb waha se dusre DENGOUN ki taraf nikal padte hai.
Pure raste baki sare hunturs bs yahi soch rahe hote hai.

' Ye dono fir se raid karne ja rahe hai, ek C Rank ke DENGOUN ko kud se clear krne ke baad. '
' aakhir ye dono hai kya ? '

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WHITE TIGER GUILD'S BUILDING, Delhi

Ek employee jiska name vinay tha wo apne boss jiska name manoj tha se kahta hai.

Vinay " Sir !! Ek min jara ise dekhiye. "

Manoj ( shock se ) " kya 200 million aur 5 thousand ? "
" Kisi ne such me 200 million aur 5 thousand rupee use kiya hai. C Rank ke DENGOUN ko clear krne ke adhikar ko khridne ke liye ? "

Vinay ( kuch papers or ki tarf badhate hue ) " Haal hi me ek team ne her ek C Rank DENGOUN jo ki appear ho raha hai, Uske adhikaar khridhne suru kr diye hai. Isiliye ab hamare, hmare low tier ke hunturs ke raid krne ke liye koi bhi gate nahi bache hai. "
" Iski Actually price bs 7,000 rupee hai. Lakin jb mai ise khridhne ke liye price badate hue 100 million tk phucha to, unhone iske adhikar 200 million aur 5 thousand rupee de kr khrid liya. "

Manoj un papers ko dekhne ke baad apne samne table pr rakhe hue computer me mukh der type krta hai fir computer se dekh kr kahta hai " Team leader ka name Shubham hai. "
" Maine iske bare me kabhi bhi kuch suna nahi hai. "

Vinay " Mujhe pata hai ye The Heven architectures ke CEO ka dusra beta hai. "
" Aisa lagta hai ki ye apne company ki madad se ye sare gate khrid raha hai. "

Manoj ( computer me dekhte hue ) " Lakin fir bhi ye uske liye ghate ka sauda hai. "
"Kisi Future CEO ke hisab se iske hrkete kuch jyada hi extreme nahi hai ? "
" Vinay, inme se ek wahi hai na jo abhi 2 ya 3 month phle DOUBLE LAYER me jinda bach gaya tha. "

Vinay " Haa ! Uska name tha... "

Manoj ( computer me dekhte hue ) " Rider ! Maine sahi kaha na. "

Vinay " Ha !! Sir aapne bikul thik kaha. "

Ye sunte hi Manoj smile krte hue apni chair pr baithe bithe kuch sochne lagte hai ' ye.... Ye to kisi opportunity ke jaise lag rahi hai. "

Manoj ( turant hi apne chair se khade ho kr chilla kr ) " Sblog jo bhi tum kaam kar rahe ho rok do. D Rank huntur Shubham aur E Rank huntur Rider. "
" Jo bhi mil paye wo sb indono ke bare me pata kro. "
" Abhi se is kaam pr lag jao. "







Aaj ke liye bs itna hi dosto !!
Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through !!
Apna pyar aise hi banaye rakhiye !!

Nice and lovely update....

 

[Itachi_Uchiha]

Rider bhau mast ja rhi hai story keep it up

Sukriya DeepHeart💘 bhai.
Keep supporting

Bhai mast story hai next update kb aaega

Sukriya Proud pandit bhai.
Update 1pm tak ready ho jayega aap sb batao kab tak post kar du mai.

mast update dear waiting for next

1pm tak ready ho jayega bro.

Lagta hai ye hero taaqat se hi nahi, dimaag se bhi paidal hai. Ye kahani Werewolf bhai ki kahani se inspire lag rahi hai. Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai

Haa kuch kuch aap kah skte hai System me similarly hai. Lakin Werewolf bhai me story me ek pari ko hata de to. Almost sb chije real hai koi bhi part unke story ka imagination wala nahi hai. Sb real world se related hai.
Lakin meri story me almost sb kuch imagination par based hai.
Aur dono ke system me bs 5 percent hi similarly hai baki ka sb kuch puri tarah alag hai.
Nd aapka bahut bahut sukriya Lib am bhai. Jo aapko meri story pasand aayi aur aapne itne sandar review diye hai ab tak.

Bahut Hi Gajab Ka Update Hai Bhai....

Sukriya ROAN R bhai.
Keep supporting

nice1

Sukriya Arvind Sharma bhai.
Keep supporting

 

[Itachi_Uchiha]

Aaj ka Update 1pm tak ready ho jayega. Ab aap sub frnds batayiye ki mai update kis time post kru.
Aaj aapke suggestion ke hisab se hi post krunga.

 

[Surya_021]

Aaj ka Update 1pm tak ready ho jayega. Ab aap sub frnds batayiye ki mai update kis time post kru.
Aaj aapke suggestion ke hisab se hi post krunga.

2 baje Nirvana bhai ka update aayega, to aap 3 Baje post kardena

 

[Werewolf]

Haa kuch kuch aap kah skte hai System me similarly hai. Lakin Werewolf bhai me story me ek pari ko hata de to. Almost sb chije real hai koi bhi part unke story ka imagination wala nahi hai. Sb real world se related hai.
Lakin meri story me almost sb kuch imagination par based hai.
Aur dono ke system me bs 5 percent hi similarly hai baki ka sb kuch puri tarah alag hai.
Nd aapka bahut bahut sukriya Lib am bhai. Jo aapko meri story pasand aayi aur aapne itne sandar review diye hai ab tak.

What you should say is...
Ki meri kahani ka universe real world par based hai. And ju ki kahani ka universe real world se hatke hai.

Meri story me sab kuch real world par based hai. Siwae Pari ke. Par Pari ka bhi ek logic hai. Woh aise hi nahi kahi se paida ho gayi. Lekin imagination toh bhai meri bhi hai. Ye poore plots sab imagination ki hi toh den hai.

Wahi dusri orr ju ki story me na keval plot imagination ka hai balki world bhi real logic se alag hai.

And yes, system me boht antar hai hamaare. Mera system mene khud banaya hai. You won't find a system like this in the whole manga, novel world. Quest Hunt, Scroll Hunt, ye cards, Pari ki different personalities. Ye sab apun ki imagination ki den hai.

And this is where things differ.

 

[Itachi_Uchiha]

What you should say is...
Ki meri kahani ka universe real world par based hai. And ju ki kahani ka universe real world se hatke hai.

Werewolf bhai mai kabhi bhi aapki story ko meri story se comparison nahi kar skta hu. Sayad maine hi thik tarah se nahi samjhaya hai. Mere kahne ka matlb tha ki aapki story read leke reality ki feeling aati hai ki ha ye ho skta hai. Ye possible hai. Like Hollywood movie jinme wo bs koi bhi scene aise hi nahi daal dete hai. Unke her ek scene ke piche logical, science sub hota hai. Wo koi bhi chij movie me put up karne se pahle lott's of research karte hai. Aur no dought aap bhi same chij karte ho.

Meri story me sab kuch real world par based hai. Siwae Pari ke. Par Pari ka bhi ek logic hai. Woh aise hi nahi kahi se paida ho gayi. Lekin imagination toh bhai meri bhi hai. Ye poore plots sab imagination ki hi toh den hai.

Ya tabhi to maine bs pari ko chor kar sb kuch real kaha tha. Aur as a reader mai kud janta hu ki aapki story ko read krte smay ek ek emotional ache se feel hota hai. Aur bina hard work aur imagination ke ye kabhi nahi ho skta hai.

Wahi dusri orr ju ki story me na keval plot imagination ka hai balki world bhi real logic se alag hai.

Haa mai bhi yahi kahna cahta tha. Jo aapne bikul sahi tarike se batayi hai.

And yes, system me boht antar hai hamaare. Mera system mene khud banaya hai. You won't find a system like this in the whole manga, novel world. Quest Hunt, Scroll Hunt, ye cards, Pari ki different personalities. Ye sab apun ki imagination ki den hai.

And this is where things differ.

Ji bhai ye baat main kud accept karta hu.
Quki xform par jitni bhi story aise system par based hai maine almost sabhi read kr dali hai ab tak aur maine har ek story ki original story, anim cahe wo manga ho manhwa ho sb dundh dali hai.
Aur admit karta hu ki mujhe suru me aapki story bhi kahi se copy ki hui lagi thi. Aur maine na jane kaha kaha aur kitne dino nahi weeks tak ise sub jagah find kiya lakin mujhe kahi bhi kuch bhi hath nahi laga.
Aur tab se aapke story me mera Interest 1000000...... Times increase ho gaya. Wiki ek to ye original hai. Sath me ab tak ke sare System se bilkul alag bhi hai.
Isi liye mai kud kah kahta hu ki ye meri 4th favt. Story hai is site ki aur currently running no. 1 story hai meri ye.