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UPDATE - 1

Delhi , India

Mera name RIDER hai aur mai Ak E-Rank HUNTER hu.
yadi aap meree thodee asaamaany strength aur regeneration ko najar andaaj karate hain to mujhe khud ko hunter kahana me bhee sharm lagta h .
Mai itta weak hu Jiske karan Hamesa hi mujhe bahut baar chote lagi hai aur kai baar to nearly death ka experience kiya h.

Ak aisa kaam jisme aapke life and death ke bich bs ak line ka anter ho use hunter kahte h , aur mai ye job is liye nahi karta qki ye mujhe pasand hai ....!
Mai badi muskil se apni bimar maa ke medical bills ko pay kr pata hu jo mujhe HUNTER GUILD pay krta h is kaam ke liye isi liye mai ye kaam krta hu .
Ak aam insan ke liye jiske paas koi particular talent na ho , aise me mere paas aur koi choice nahi h siway hunter banane ke.


Ak construction site in delhi....

Ak food truck khada tha aur uske aas paas bahut se log tea nd breakfast kr rahe the....

Food truck wala ak customer se ..
"Ye rahi tmhari tea nd good luck tmhare aaj ke raid ke liye."

Coustomer "thanks"

Tabhi piche se koi us coustomer ko aawaj deta h " hey Rohan ! "
" Bahut samay ho gaye tmse mile hue "

Rohan " are abhi tm yaha kya kar rahe ho ? Tmne to chor diya tha na tha na qki tm hunter nahi banana cahte the !! "

Abhi " actually meri wife 2nd time pregnant hai , ha ha..."

Rohan " sahi kaha raid ke jaisa kuch nahi h jaha aap apni kismat aajma skte ho "

Abhi " jindgi jina aasan nahi hai . Mujhe fikar hai ki ... Itna kafi time bita gaya h kahi mai piche na rah jau "
" Meri skill phle se hi khrab hai , aur ab to wo aur khrab ho gayi h itte time ke break ke karan jo maine liya h "

Tabhi samne se kuch aawaj aati h ...
" Rider tum aa gaye ! "
" Rider aane ke liye sukriya "
"Bahar thand hai na ? "


Rider " haha ... aisa kuch nahi h , mai aaj bhi tmhare sath hi rahunga "
Wo aadmi " Achi baat hai "


Tabhi Rohan riderko aawaj lagata hai ..
" rider tmne ab tk breakfast kiya ? "

Rider " haa Mr Rohan maine khaa liya , mere bare me fikar krne ke liye sukriya "

Itta kah kr rider aage nikal jata hai aur abhi use dekh kr Rohan se puchta hai..
"Kya ye ladka powerful hunter hai ? Har koi ise dekh kr bahut happy hai !"

Rohan " hehehehe.... Tm ise nahi jante qki jb tmne chora tha ye uske baad aaya hai . Iska nike name hai WORLD WEAKEST "

Abhi " kya duniya me sbse kamjor ? na ki sbse powerful!! "

Rohan " bro tabhi to aise logo ko hm S - Rank hunter kahte hai . Rider unmen sbse weak hai "
"Mera matlab hai ki wo itta weak hai ki wo E rank ke Dengoun se bhi hurt ho jata h "

Abhi " kya such me wo itta weak hai "

Rohan " haa !! Mere hisab se to wo hm sb me sbse weak hai "

Abhi " kya such me !!"

Rohan " ha iska mtlb hai humara Dengoun iske aane ke baad se weak ho gaya h "

Abhi " ahhh !! Aisa hai kya "


Rohan " hay ! Sayad wo hame sun skta hai hame. Is baat ko hm yahi khtam krte hai fu fu..."

(Ab Rider ke views se story )


Mai apne mn me 'mai suru se sb sun raha hu you old geezers '

Mai food truck ke paas chla jata hu usse bolta hu " kya mujhe ak cup coffee milegi ?"

Food truck wala " are hunter rider .. I m sorry , bs abhi kuch der phle hi sari coffee khtam ho gayi "

Mai bad feel karte hue sochta hu coffee bhi ni mili..

Food truck wala " I m really sorry rider coffee khtam hone ke liye "

Mai " koi baat nahi "


Aur m waha se aage chla jata hu .
Kuch der chalne ke baad ak ladki ki aawaj aati h " rider tmko fir se chot lag gayi !! "

Mai " ohh hi ! Aisa lagta h miss Anjana bhi raid me sath chl rahi h ?"

Anjana " of course , lakin problem ye nahi h ! Tmhare face pr fir se chot kaise lagi ?"

Mai " pata nahi .... Sayad tb laga hoga jb mai hunting kr raha hunga haha..."

Anjana " really..ab such such batao kya huaa tha. Kya tm hospital bhi gaye the ?"

Mai " ha mai gaya tha . Hm sb ak E rank dungeon me the aur mai akela hi jise chot lagi "

Anjana " huh ? Ye kaise ho gaya ?"

Mai " baki dusre hunter mere se higher ranked ke the to wo apne sath ak bhi healer nahi le gaye the "

Anjana " fir bhi wo bs is liye healer nahi le gaye qki unko lagta tha wo safe rahenge "

Mai " it's ok , ye sb is liye huaa qki mai weak hu , mujhe in sb ki aadat ho gayi h miss Anjana bhi ye baat janti h ,right ? "
" Well lagta h sb log gate ke ander jane ke liye ready h hme bhi chlna cahiye ..."

Anjana " ok "


Hm sb gate ke samne ikatha ho gaye the tabhi ak aadmi bich me ja kr sbke samne kahta hai " sun log suniye . Hm sb hunting pr jane ko taiyar aur khush hai , mai ye kahane ke liye qualified to nahi hu pr fhir bhi mai is raid ke liye party ka leader banane ko ready hu , isme aap me se kisi ko koi dikkat to nahi hai ?"

Rohan " Mr Rahul aap yaha present sb logo me sbse high rank wale h mujhe aapke leader bananese koi problem nahi hai "

Abhi " well Mr Rahul hame aap pr pura yakin hai . Mujhe bahut time ho gaya h aapke skills dekhe hue "

Baki sb log bhi Bolte hai
"Mai aapke leader banane se sahmat hu "
"Mai bhi "
" Meri bhi haa hai "

Mai " hamara dhyan rakhiyega Mr Rahul"

Rahul " all right to hm chlte hai Dungeon me "
Aur sb chl dete hai gate ke ander tb chlte chlte Mr Rahul mujhse kahte hai " Mr rider kosis karna hamare piche chot mt khaa jana "
Mai haste huee " haha okay"

Anjana " rider jldi chlo "

Mai " ha chlo "

Mai chlte huee kud se kahta hu 'mai aaj apna best karne ki kosis karunga '




aaj ke liye itta hi .
Bhai log 1st story hai to koi bhi problem ya suggestions ho comments krke jarur
bataiyega . Bs aapka pyar milte rahe story jarur complete hogi enjoy story....
Nice and superb starting of the story...
 

parkas

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UPDATE - 02
Aise krte huee sb gate ke ander chale jate h . Waha bs food truck wale hi bachte h .

Tabhi ak food truck wala 1st food truck wale se puchta hai " tm kya soch rahe ho ?"

1st food truck wala " mai bs hunter rider ke bare me soch kr paresan hu , ki hum use coffee bhi nahi de paye "

2nd food truck wala " acha , wahi hunter na jo E category me sbse weakest hunter hai ? Is Dungeon ka rank kya hai ? "

1sy food truck wala gate ki taraf dekhte hue " wo kah rahe the ye ak D rank Dungeon ke barabar hai "
" Jb se main kaam kar raha hu, maine hunter rider ko kabhi bhi bina chot lage is hunter guild me nahi dekha hai "

2nd food truck wala " ak D rank Dungeon , well kuch bura hoga aisa mt socho , chalo hm chlte hai !!"


D rank Dungeon ke ander ak jagah mai niche baitha huaa tha . Mujhe kai jagah chot lagi hui thi aur anjana mujhe heal kr rahi thi qki Anjana ak healer thi . Uske hatho se green colour ke anergy ka gola nikalta hai aur mujhe heal krna start kr deta hai .

Wo heal krte hue mujhse bolti hai " rider tum hunter ka kaam chor q nahi dete .."
"Is tarah fight krne se to tum kewal kud ke liye risk bada rahe ho "

Mai " sorry "

Anjana " maine tumhe ye is liye nahi kah rahi hu ki tm mujhse mafi mango ."
Meri aankho me dekhte hue " Mujhe bs tmhari fikar hai "

Humse hi kuch duri pr baki sb members monster se fight kr rahe the . Rahul apne fire ability to use kr raha tha , Rohan apni sward se monster ko tukdo me cut kr raha tha , aise hi sb log apni apni power ka use krke monster ko maar rahe the .

Kuch der baad Anjana kahti hai " aakhirkar ye raid to khatam to hui "

Anjana abhi bhi mere knee ko heal kr rahi thi , mai piche mud kr dekhta hu to fight end ho gayi thi aur sare log aapas me bate kr rahe the .

Rohan abhi se majak karte hue kahta h " are Abhi, tm abhi tk mare nahi !!"

Abhi " nahi ye to mere liye bhut aasan tha "

Tabhi rahul kahta h " lagta h sb monster mar cuke hai ab yaha karne ko kuch nahi h "

Mai ye sb sun hi raha tha ki abhi Anjana kahti h " raider tumhare paas koi ak reason hai ki tum hunter ka kaam na choro ? "

Mai " mai hunter bs is liye bna hu qki mujhe isme maza aata h , agar mai ye kaam na kru to mai actually bore ho ke mar jaunga "
Mai apne mn me sochta hu ' agar maine Anjana ko such bataunga to mujhe aur jyada sharminda hona padega '

Anjana " jaisa ki tm kah rahe ho ki tm maze ke liye krte ho but iske karan two time raid marte hue tmharai jaan jate jate bachi h "

Ye sun kr mai hasne lagta hu aur mujhe hasta huaa dekh kr Anjana gusse se aag babula ho jati h " haso mat , isase tmhare chot wapas se ubhar aayenge "

Mai bs apni gardan haa me hila deta hu


Sb wapas se ak jagah iktha ho jate h tb rahul kahta h " ak monster ko marne ke baad tmlogo ko ye milta h THE MAGICAL CORE "


Ak magical core jo ki ak c rank ke monster ka ho uski kimat thousands me hoti h !!

Pr Rider ak E rank hunter hai to uske liye C Rank monster ko marna impossible hi hai !!

Mai kud se kahta hu ' itti chot aur paresaniya uthane ke baad mai kewal ak E rank magical core hi earn kr paya '
' jabki maine apni life ko risk pr laga diya tha us hisab se to ye bahut kam hai , is tarah se paise kamana ......'

Mai abhi aage soch hi raha tha ki piche se kisi ki aawaj sunayi deti hai " are sb suno yaha ak aur gate hai ......"

Hm sb jldi se us gate se saamne ja kr khadhe ho jate hai aur dekhne lagte hai

Rahul " ye to Double Lair hai , dekh ke to lagta h ye such me asli hai "

Uske baad Rahul apne hath se fire power ka use krke ak aag ka gola banata hai aur use gufa me fek deta hai , aur us fire se hme pata chlta h ki gufa bahut jyada lambi hai

Fir Rahul kahta hai " ak min sb log meri baat suno " bos ke jinda rahane par get band nahin hota .
Qki gate abhi bhi open hai , to aisa ho skta hai ki boss iske ander hi hoga
Usually hme aise situation me apne guild ko contact krke unhe ye sb batana hoga aur unke order ka wait krna hoga lakin ....
Agr dusre hunters waha tk phle phuch gaye to humara profit km ho jayega
To mai cahta hu ki hm sb ander jaye aur boss ko maar de .
Qki ye bahut kahtarnak kaam hai to hm sare 17log iske liye vote kr leta hai
Aur vote ka result jo bhi ho uske baad koi complaint nahi krega "

Aur abhi apna apna vote dene lage !!

Rohan aur abhi sath me " hum dono fight krenge "

" Nahi "

" Mai chalunga "

" Meri tarf se naa hai "

" Chlo fight krte hai "

Anjana " sorry but mai nahi jana cahti "

Sbke vote hone ke baad Rahul kahta hai " to abhi tk 8:8 vote hue h "

Ab sirf mera vote bacha huaa tha to Rahul mujhse puchta h " tmhara kya kahna h rahul ? "

Sb kuch mere vote pr depends krta h sb meri taraf dekh rahe the aur mai soch raha tha ' mere paas abhi enough money nahi huee hai , jldi hi mujhe meri choti sister ko college bhejna hoga ....'
Aur mujhe meri bimar maa ki aur meri family condition ki yaad aane lagti h

Ye sb sochte hi mai turat bolta hu " mai cahlunga "


Aur sb bol padta hai " bs ak baar aur chlo ye krte hai "






Aaj ke liye itta hi !!
Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through .
Apna pyar banaye rakhiye qki aage story bhut achi h abhi bs base ready ho raha h !!
Nice and lovely update....
 

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UPDATE - 03

Jaisa ki last update me aapne padha ki sb gate ke ander jate h raid ke liye . Waha Rider ko chot lagti h , fir Anjana usko heal krti h . Uske baad unhe pata chlta h ki boss abhi jinda h to uske piche jane ke liye sb vote krte h.....

AB AAGE...


Hm guffa me bhut der se chl rahe the aur bahut ander tak aa gaye the sb aaps me bate kr rahe the .

" Kya hum bahut ander nahi aa gaye hai ? "

"Hme kitne der se chl rahe hai ? "

" Lagbhag 40 min se "

" Boss ko maarane ke ek ghante baad gate band ho jaata hai isalie hamaare paas lagabhag 20 minat bache hain "


Mai aur Anjana sath chl rahe the tabhi m bolta hu Anjana se " hey sorry "

Anjana " kis liye ? "

Mai " mere haa kahne ke karan tmko jabardasti groups ke sath aana pada "

Anjana " m thik hu , to tumhe mere bare me fikar krne ki jarurat nahi h "

Mai " kya tm ... Such me thik ho ? "

Mere itta puchte hi wo gusse me aane lagti h aur bolti h " agr such kahu to ... Nahi mai bilkul thik nahi hu "

Gusse se aag babula hote huee " kya tum paagal ho? abhee agar thodi der phle tmko thoda upar se chhura ghopa gaya hota to tmhare dil mein chhed hota !!!
Aur yaha maine tmhare hath aur pairo ko to count hi nahi kiya jabki maine badi mushkil se unko heal kiya h .
Uske baad bhi kya soch ke tmne andar aane ko haa kaha tha bolo ? Kya tumhare head me bhi chot lagi h ?
Bolo ? "

Aur ye sb sun kr mai sochne lagta hu ' ye such hai ... Mai sirf isi liye jinda hu qki miss Anjana ak B rank healer hai . Mai fir se inka karjdar ho gaya hu ...'

Mere muh se bs itta hi nikala " sorry "

Anjana (abhi bhi gusse se mujhe dekhte hue) " kya tum such me mafi maang rahe ho ? "

Mai (apna head niche kiye hue dhire se bola ) " haa "

Ye sun ke Anjana kuch saant ho gayi aur aage chlte hue mujhse boli " agr tm such me mafi magna cahte ho to .... Mujhe khane ke liye le jana kaisa rahega ? "

Mai ( shock ho kr ) " kya ? "

Anjana ( mujhe ghurte hue ) " kya .. tumhe mere sath khana khane me koi problem hai kya ? "

Mai ( jldi se ) " nahi ! Nahi ! Bilkul bhi nahi "

Hm abhi aage kuch baat krte tabhi hamre group me se ak member chillate hue kahta h " ye raha boss ka room !! "

Hm sb samne dekhne lagte h gufa ke bicho bich ak bahut bada door tha akdam ajib sa

Rohan ( Abhi se door ki tarf dekhte hue ) " hey ...ye jagah kahtarnak nahi lag rahi ? "

Abhi ( door ki taraf hi dekhte hue) " sahi kaha "

Baki sb bhi aisa hi soch rahe hote h tabhi Rahul kahta h " yaha phuchne ke baad bhi kya tm yaha se khali hath jana cahte ho ? "

Rahul door ki tarf badh kr use open krne ki kosis krte hue aage bolta h " sayad hm sb sbse phle log ho sakte hai jo is Dungeon me enter kr rahe ho .... Jo jana cahte h wo ja skte hai . Bhle mujhe akele jana pade pr mai andar jaunga "

Ye sb sun kr baki members bate krne lagte h
" Mr Rahul ki skills amazing hai . Aur wo C rank ke hunters me se sbse jyada offensive style wale hunter hai "

" Ye agar yaha aana nahin hota to vah kisee bade gild mein hote , qki hm Mr Rahul pr trust krte hai tabhi to hm yaha aaye hai, isi liye hme unhen end tk follow krna cahiye "

CREAK.......CREAK.....
Tb tk Rahul ne door open kr diya aur sb usi taraf dekhne lagte hai .

Rahul " jitna maine socha tha ye to usase bhi aaram se open ho gaya , chlo ander chalte hai "

Jaise hi sb door ke ander enter krte hai
Diwar pr lagi sari massal ak ak krke apne aap jal jati h .



Door ke Ander sb phuch kr dekhne lagte h ye ak bahut big room h jo ki circle shape me hai aur uske chro taraf bhut se statues bane huee the aur unke bich me ak bahut big statue bana huaa tha jo ki ak chair pr baitha huaa tha .

Sb ander ka view dekh kr aaps me baat krne lagte h ...
" Ohh light chalu ho gayi , bahut acha hua "

" Maine aisa Dungeon aaj se phle kabhi nahi dekha hai . Chlo sb chro taraf fail jao nd dundho kuch kaam ka milta hai kya "

Is jagah ko dekh ke aisa lag raha tha jaise bahut time se yaha koi nahi aaya h Qki hr taraf dhuul, mitti aur jale lage hue the .
Ye sare statues bhi ... Bahut hi ajeeb lag rahe the dekhne me .
Ye sare statues alg - alg kuch na kuch pakde hue the . Inmen se kuch ne to instrument bhi pakda hua tha .

Mai sochta hu ' ye to bahut sare hai ... Inke karan dar bhi lag raha h Qki ye bahut sare h '

Mai (surprise ho kr ) " wow "

"Aisa nahi lag raha h jaise koi hme dekh raha ho !! "
" Aisi buri bate karna band kro "

Us sbse big statue ko dekh ke ak hunter bolta h " Are wahhh ise dekho ye kitta huge hai !! "

" Ye mt bolna ki yahi boss hai ? "

" Aisa sochna bhi mt , Aakhirkar ye bs ak statue hi hai "

Mai " yaha bs yahi ak itna huge hai "

" Yaha aisa kuch bhi nahi h jise dekh kr ye kah sake yaha koi monster mil sakta h "

"Sahi kaha "

" Huh , ak bhi monster nahi mila "

TAP...TAP...
Tabhi Rahul Ko chlte hue niche kuch aawaj sunayi deti h wo niche dekhta h apne pairo ke paas" Hmm !! Ye kya h ....? Koi magical seal "

" Mr Rahul ... Yaha kuch likha hua hai ! Mere khyal se ye aapko dekhna chahiye "

Mr Rahul piche mud kr aawaj dene wale ke paas chle jaye h sath me baki members bhi .
Waha pr ak statue jiske back pr wings the wo ak big stone apne hath me hold kiye hue tha jispe kuch likha huaa tha .

Rahul " ye to runic language(inke world ki ak old language) me likha hua hai , ruko padh ke dekhta hu .."

" Ye to CARTHENON TEMPLE'S ke rules like hue hai "
" 1st bhagawaan ki pooja kre "
" 2nd bhagwaan se prathna kre "
" 3rd apne faith ko prove kre "

Rahul ye sb read krraha tha aur tabhi Anjana piche se mere shirt ko apni taraf khichti h aur thodi ghbrayi hui voice mebolti h " hey Rider !! "
Big statue ki tarah ishara karke " wo big statue hai na maine uski eye ko jst abhi
move hote hue dekha tha wo hamari hi taraf dekh raha tha "

Mai " huh ! Tm such to bol rahi ho ..? Jarur tmne thik se nahi dekha hoga "

Tabhi suddenly mujhe kuch ajeeb sa feel hone lagta h aur air bhi phle se chilled ho gayi thi aisa mujhe feel hota h .

Rahul " ....................... jo koi bhi ye sare rule follow nahi krega wo , jinda wapas nahi ja payega "

Tabbhi piche se THUDDDD........ ki jor se aawaj aati h hm sb mud kr dekhte h to door close ho cuka tha .

" Ye kya door closed ho gaya "
" Ab hm kya karenge ? "

" Damm !! Mai aur yaha aise hi bina wajagh nahi ruk skta , tm sb faltu me apna time khrab kr rahe ho , yaha aana hi humari ak galti thi !
Mai ja raha hu .."

Itta bol kr ak hunter door ki taraf jane lagta h aur kahta h " wo monster ka boss , khjana aur jo kuch bhi mile sb tm log rakh sakte ho mujhe kuch nahi cahiye .
Good luck "
Aur wo ja kr door ko open krne lagta h .

Tabhi Mr Rahul chilla kr bolte h " ruk jao apna hath door ke handle pr math rakhna ...."

Pr jb tak wo pura bol pate wo hunter apna hath rakh cuka tha handle pr aur tabhi bahut tej Ak sound sunayi diya...

SWOOSSS.......
aur pl bhr me hi us hunter ki body 2part me divide ho cuki thi .
Qki gate ke paas jo status khada tha usne handle pr hath lagte h apne sward se hunter ko bina koi chance diye bahut teji se 2part me divide kr cuka tha . Uske pure sward pr blood hi blood tha aur wo wapas se apni position me khada ho gaya

Yaha hm sb dar aur shock se samne ka najara bs dekhte rah gaye. Hmare muh khule hue the . Anjana ye sb dekh kr bahut dar gayi thi aur apni eye close krke mere gale lagi hui thi baki sb ka bhi haal kuch aisa hi tha....

" Ye statue move bhi kr skte hai ? "
" The hell !!! Hme inse fight krni hogi ? "

Tabhi achanak se mere dimak me khyal aata h ' wait 1min agar kuch der phle Anjana ne jo bola wo agar such hua to '
Aur m turant piche mud kr us big statue ki tarf dekhta hu aur bhut jyada shock me chla jata hu ...
Qki us big statue ki eye chmkne lagti h !!






Aaj ke liye itna hi dosto !!

Aaj ke liye itta hi !!
Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through !!!

Nice and awesome update....
 

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Ab tak aapne dekha dosto ki mai Association ke ander jane lagta hu to Sangam ka driver mujhe rokne lagta hai. Lakin tabhi Chairman Xabhi aa kar kud mujhe apne sath anderle jate hai. Aur Sangam ko Anurag ander nahi jane deta hai. Fir mai apni shadow Soldiers ki ability Xabhi ko aur ek Evaluation lene wale worker ko dikhaya hu. Jise dekh kar dono sadme me chle jate hai. Jab mai apni new S Rank wali I'd le kar bahar nikalta hu to Sachin aur Anubhav mujhse baat karne ki kosis karte hai lakin mai pyar se manakar deta hu. To wo mujhe yaha se bahar jane ko mana krte hai lakin mai unki baat na maan kar jaise hi bahar jata hu mujhe bahut sare reporters nd camera mans gher lete.



AB AAGE....


Kavya apne school me, classroom me apne seat par baith kar kuch padh rahi thi. Sayad ye lacture off tha uska. Uske class ke baki students bhi aapas me gappe maar rahe the. Koi study kar raha tha. Aise hi sub lage hue the.
Uske bagal me hi next seat par baithi kirti bhi apne smartphone me kuch kar rahi thi.
Aur achanak se wo kuch aisa dekhti hai ki wo shocked ho jati hai. Aur wo Turant hi Kavya ko apne mobile me kuch dikhate hue bahut jyada shocked ke sath lagbhag chilla kar kahti hai " Hey Kavya tmhare bahiya.... "
" Tmhare baiya TV par hai. "

Aur Kavya ke sath uske aas paas baithi uski kuch frnds curiosity se kirti ke smartphone me dekhne lagti hai. Usme live news dikha rahe the. Jisne meri wahi shocked wali face dikha rahe the. Aur Jiska headline tha...

" Ek naya S Rank huntur janam le cuka hai. "

Kavya, kirti ke hath me pakde smartphone ki taraf dekhte hue normally kahti hai " ye kaisi bekar ki baat hai ? "
" Mere bhaiya kyu ..... ? "

Lakin jaise hi wo Kirti ke hath me pakde smartphone me chl rahi news dekhti hai wo bhi chup ho jati hai aur Surprise se uski bhi aakhe badi badi ho jati hai.
Fir wo sub mil kar news dekhne lagti hai.



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HUNTUR ASSOCIATION
10 MINUTES EARLIER



Anurag ke darane ke baad Sangam fir se building ke ander jane ki kosis karna chor deta hai. Aur ye sochne lagta hai ki aakhir ab mai reporters ka dhyan kud ki taraf kaise karu. Tabhi kuch soch kar wo ja kr sabke samne kuch duri par khada hi jata hai.

Sangam ( Samne sbke taraf dekhte hue ) " Bhle hi mera Evaluation thik na jaye aur akhair me mujhe ek low Rank mile. "
" Lakin mai aaj tak aap sub logo se mile pyar ko wapas lautane ke liye apne life ki aakhiri saas tak Monsters se fight karta rahunga. "
" Evaluation results ki parwah kiye bina, mai Sangam is country ke sare citizens ko ek huntur ke roop me Hmesa protact karta rahunga. "

Ye sunte hi Reporters log to sawalo ki jahdi laga ete hai. Camera mans log video aur photo lene ki hod laga dete hai.

1st Reporter " Kya ? Sangram aap retired ho rahe hai ? "
" Apna Rank jane bagair ? "

2nd reporter " Aap kahna cahte hai ki aap apne Asia's no. 1 star ke Tital ko chor kar ek low Rank ka Hunter banane ke liye ready hai ? "

Aise hi sare reporters apne apne swal puchne lagte hai. Aur Sangam santi se apne dono hath faila kar unke samne khada apne man me khush hote hue sochta hai ' Ab sab thik hai. Sare logo ka dhyan mere taraf hi hai. '
' Mai no. 1 star apni entertainment industry se retirement ki announcement kar raha hu. To aisa to hona hi tha. '

3rd Reporter " Mr. Sangam idhar dekhiye. "

4th Reporter " Agar aap Ek low Rank huntur ban jate hai to bhi kya aap apna sab kuch chor dene denge ? "

Sangam abhi bhi sare Reporters ki taraf dekhte hue bs smile kar raha tha. Koi reply nahi kar raha tha.

Sangam apne man me ' Jahir si baat hai ye sb ek saaf juth hai. '
' Mera evaluation phle hi ho cuka hai aur mujhe A Rank phle hi mil chuka hai. '
' Sirf 2 year. '
' Mera plan hai ki mai REAPER GUILD'S ke public relations Employ ke roop me kaam karte hue 2 year ke ander kafi moti rakam earn kar lu. '
' Aur yahi sbse best tarika hai isase mere purane sabhi aur aane wali sbki weird rumours bhi khatam ho jayengi. Aur mere upar koi kabhi shak bhi nahi karega. '
' Apne career ke sbse Highest point se niche aa kar logo ko protact karne ke liye kud ki life ko risk me dalna. '
' Kya ye bahut sandar role nahi hai ? '


Tap... Tap... Tap...

Ye sub sochte hue apne man me Sangam bahut jyada khus ho raha tha. Aur Tabhi uske piche aa kar Hari khada ho jata hai. Jise dekhne ke baad ab kahi ja kar wo kuch kahta hai " Aur ab yaha khade Reaper guild ke GUILD Master Hari wo mera aage ka vision aur.... "

TRIN.... TRIN....
TRIN.... TRIN....


Abhi wo itna hi kah paya tha ki use samne khade reporters logo me kai Reporters ke phone bajne lagta hai. Aur wo sare ke sare call utha kr baat karne lagte hai. Aur jaise hi un sari ne dusre side se kuch suna un sub ko achanak se bahut bada jhatka lagta hai. Aur wo sub kafi jor jor se baat karne lagta hai.

1st Reporter ( phone par baat karte hue ) " Kya ? S Rank huntur ? "

2nd Reporter ( shocked se ) " Kya ? Tmhe abhi turant hi Association se news mili hai ? "

3rd Reporter ( chillate hue ) " kya ? Tum ab mujhe is bare me kyu bata rahe ho ? "

4th Reporter " Kya ye such baat hai ki 10th S Rank huntur announced ho cuka hai ? "

Sare reporters ab aise hi phone par baat karne lagte hai. Aur ye sb khur pusur sunte hue Sangam bhi apne man me sabke samne smiles karte hue sochta hai ' huh ? Kya ho raha hai ? '

Tabhi ek Reporter apne phone screen ko dekhte hue chilla kar kahta hai " Association ka homepage such me update ho gaya hai. "
" Kya yahi wo ladka hai !? "
" Yahi wo 10th S Rank huntur hai !? "

Sare Reporters us reporter ke hi smartphone me dekhne lagte hai. Jaha par Association ke home page par mere photo ke sath headline likha hua tha " 10th S Rank huntur. "

Ye dekhte hi sare Reporters apne man me entrance gate ki taraf dekhte hue apne man me sochne lagte hai.

1st Reporter ' Kya unhone morning me nahi kaha tha ki Evaluation room busy hai? '

2nd Reporter ' To Ye Sangam ki wajagh se busy nahi tha ? '

3rd reporter ' To fir kya Evaluation room Sangam ke liye nahi balki new S Rank huntur ke liye book tha morning se ? '


Run... Run... Run...
Run... Run... Run...


Aur sare Reporters aur camera mans yahi sb sochte hue entrances gate ki taraf bhgane lagte hai. Jaha pahle se hi Anurag aur uski team Gate ko cover kiye hue the. Taki koi ander na ja paye.

Ek Reporter Gate ki taraf bhagte hue " Mai is country ke 10th S Rank huntur ki news reporting karne ki opportunity ko aise hi miss nahi hone de skta hu. "

Sangam sare reporters aur camera mans ko aise bhagte dekh kr abhi bhi smjh nahi pa raha tha ki ye sub ho kya raha hai.

Sangam " Everyone meri baat to suniye.... "

Nahi sare reporters yaha tak ki usko dhakka dete hue gate ke paas ja kar khade ho jate hai. Anurag aur uski team ko dekh ke sb kahne lagte hai.

1st reporter " Hme ander jane do. "

2nd reporter " Maine suna hai yaha ek naya S Rank huntur aaya hai. "

3rd reporter " kya aap logko hme aisi chijo ke bare me pahle hi notify nahi kar dena cahiye ? "

4th Reporter " piche hato aap log. Hme ander jane do. "

Wahi sare Reporters ke piche niche jamin par gira hua Sangam ye sub sun kr sadme me chla jata hai aur blank face ke sath sb dekhte hue kahta hai " K... Kya ? S Rank huntur ? "
" Yaha Aaj ek naya S Rank huntur aaya hai ? Sare dino me use aaj hi aana tha ? "

Tabhi Sangam ko apne sath car me baitha hua wo reporter dikhta hai. Jo kisi se phone par baat kar raha tha. Use dekh kr Sangam kahta hai " Hey Reporter Lim ? "

Reporter Lim, Sangam ko dekhte hue " Ohh ! Mr. Sangam mai aapko baad me contact karta hu. "


Tap... Tap... Tap...

Itna kah kar wo jldi se aage jate hue phone par kahne lagta hai " Ha tmne bikul sahi suna. Kal ka headline change krke likho.

" Ek E Rank huntur jo kal tak problems ke karan rota tha aaj wo S Rank banane ke baad khusi ke aasu baha raha hai. "

Usase kuch duri par gira hua Sangam bhi ye sun leta hai. Aur lagbhag rote hue kud se kahta hai " Ye sub kya hai ? "
" Ye galat baat hai. "


FLASH.... FLASH......

Aur tabhi door ko open krke mai bahar aata hu. Aur sare camera man mere photo aur video lene ke jut jate hai.


Mining incharge Aaj bhi apne team ke sath kisi raid par aaye the. Abhi wo lunch karke free hue the. Aur apne phone me news dekh rahe the ki achanak se unhe live news me mai dikhayi deta hu.

Mining incharge thode surprise hote hue " kahi ye Mr. Rider to nahi lag raha hai ? "
" Mr. Rider aakhir news me kya kar rahe hai ? "

Ye sunte hi aas paas ke sare Mining team ke members aur wo bodybuilder sb aa jate hai aur phone me chl rahe news ko dekhne lagte hai.

Cahme wala member ( thode surprise se) " Are ha aap to sahi kah rahe hai. Ye to Mr. Rider hi hai. "

Bodybuilder member gusse se " Mai janta tha. Jb usne mere aakho me dekha tha tabhi mai smjh gaya tha ye banda gadbad hai. "
" Mujhe bhi dekhne do ki aakhir isne kya galat kaam kiya hai ? "

Ye sun kar baki members ko bhi kuch dought hone lagta hai aur wo bhi kahne lagte hai " Mr. Rider ? "
" Aakhir kon sa galat kaam usnekiya hoga ? "

Sbka dhyan live news par hi tha jisme mai dikhaya ja raha tha. Aur tabhi report ki aawaj aati hai " India ke 10th S Rank huntur, Rider bs abhi abhi hi Association se apna evaluation karwa kar.... "

Ye sunte hi sare Mining Members ko ek bahut bada jhatka lagta hai ki abhi kuch din hi unke sath kaam karne wala banda ek S Rank huntur tha. Lakin sbse jyada sadma lagta hai us bodybuilder ko.
Sare Mining team ke members bhi use gusse se ghur ke dekhne lagte hai. Aur wo saram aur dar se apna sir niche jukha leta hai.


Anjana bhi apne ghar me apne mother ke sath table pr baith kar lunch kar rahi thi. Aur samne TV chl raha tha.
Jaise hi usne ye news suna use bhi phle bahut bada jhatka lagta hai. Ki ek E Rank huntur jise wahi Hmesa heal karti thi. Wo aaj ek S Rank huntur ban chuka hai.
Aur fir kuch der me hi uske face par ek pyari si smile aa jati hai.


Rahul bhi apne kuch students ko sword ki tranning de raha tha. Aur is time wo bhi sbko kuch round ki practice ke baad thoda aaram kar raha tha.
Tabhi uska ek student aa kr apne phone me chl rahe is live news ko unko dikhata hai.
Aur Rahul bhi ye dekh kr bahut jyada surprise ho jata hai.
Quki mai jab last time unse mila tha tab mai itna jyada strong nahi tha. Lakin wo bhi mere liye khush the.


Shubham ke papa apne office me, apne cabin me rakhe sofe par baithe hue the. Aur wo bhi apne phone me chl rahe is live news ko dekhte hai. Shock to wo bhi hote hai ise dekh kar lakin utna jyada bhi nahi.

Dilip ( news dekhte hue ) " Unhone just abhi use Ek S Rank Mage class Hunter announced kiya hai. "

Unke samne ke single sofe par Shubham baitha hua tha.

Dilip ( Shubham ko dekhte hue ) " To kya tum Rider ko Recruit karne me safal rahe ? "

Shubham ( apna sir niche jhukate hue ) " Mujhe maaf kar dijiye papa. "
" Mai Rider se jit nahi saka. "
( Apne papa ko dekhte hue ) " Rider ne decide kiya hai ki wo apna kud ka ek Guild banayega. "
" Aur usne apne Guild me mujhe Vice Master ki position offer ki hai. "

Ye sunte hi Dilip ko ab kahi ja kar ek bada jhatka lagta hai. Lakin fir bhi kuch ko control karte hue wo Shubham ko dekh ke kahte hai " Tumhe pata hai mai The Heven Guild kyu banana cahta hu ? "

Shubham " Kya yah paise ke liye nahi hai ? "

Dilip " Agar ye paise ke liye hota to mere paas pahle se hi bahut jyada paise hai. "
" Kya tumhe such me lagta hai ki mai ek major guild banaunga aur uske karan hone wali paresaniya ka samna karunga bs thode se aur paise ke liye ? "

Shubham ( thode curiosity se) " To fir aap aisa kyu kar rahe hai ? "

Dilip " Ye mai, Hum sub ko bachane ke liye kar raha hu. "
" Jis hisab se hunturs logo ki power aur unki pahuch har badalte din ke sath increase hoti ja rahi hai. "
" Uske karan aaj ke time me kuch aise case bhi samne aa cuke hai jaha ek huntur ki power aur pahuch ek pure nation ke equal ho gayi hai. "
" Aaj ke is so called world me kuch aise bhi hunturs aa chuke hai. Jinhone S Rank ke bhi paar kar diya hai. Aur wo itne jyada strong ho gaye hai ki unhen NATIONAL LEVEL HUNTURS kaha jane laga hai. "
" Aisi situation me jaha kuch small nations hunturs ko abhi se King ki tarah treat karne lage hai. "
" Tumhe kya lagta hai aur kitne dino tak ye law, govt Aur govt Authority hme bacha payengi ? "
" Mai ek guild bana kr kuch trustworthy hunturs ko ek sath ekatha karna chahta tha. "
" Aise dependable hunturs jo paiso aur apne person connection ki wajagh se hmko chor kar kisi aur ke sath na mil jaye. "
" Aur aisa lagta hai tmne phle hi aise ek huntur ko dhundh liya hai. "

Apne samne cup me rakhe coffee ko utha kar pite hue dilip " Tum paas ho gaye ho. "
" Mai The Heven Guild ko tmhare upar chorta hu. "

Ye sunte hi Shubham ki aakhe shocked se badi badi ho jati hai aur wo apne papa ko hi ek tak dekhne lagta hai.

Dilip " The Heven Guild ko devlop kro. "
" Trustworthy aur strong hunturs ke sath apne connection banao. Aur unhe apna allies banao. "
" Bahut jald hi ye kisi bhi welth se bahut jyada kimati ban jayenge. "

Ye sb kahte hue aakhir me Dilip ek pyari si smile karne lagta hai Shubham ko dekh kar.

Lakin tabhi Shubham apne papa ko dekh kr kahta hai " Aapka bahut sukriya papa. "
" Lakin mujhe nahi lagta hai ki ye ye sub kar paunga. "

Dilip ( thode surprise se ) " huh ? "

Shubham ( full confidence se ) " Mai Rider ki Guild join karunga. "



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ASSOCIATION ENTRANCE GATE


Mai Gate ke bahar khada tha. Aur mere samne 100 se bhi jyada Reporters nd camera man kahde the.
Aur unko Association ke hi 20+ Worker Anurag ke sath sidhiyo se niche khade roke hue the.

Mai ( ye sb dekh kr apne men me ) ' Ye camera man Sangam ki jagah meri picture kyu click kr kar hai ? '

1st Reporter " Mr. Rider kya aap wahi E Rank huntur Rider hai jo Association ke under kaam karte the ? "
" Aap just abhi double Awakened hone wale bahut hi kam logo me se ek ban gaye hai. Aapko abhi kaisa lag raha hai ? "

2nd reporter " Mr. Rider please idhar dekhiye. "

Ek camera man " Mr. Rider please hamare liye smile kijiye. Is time aapko pura nation dekh raha hai. "

Aur na jane kya kya sb sawal hi sawal puche ja rahe the.


Tap.. Tap... Tap...

Tabhi mere piche se Sachin aata hai aur mere right solder par apna hath rakhte hue kahta hai " Agar tum inse nipatne jaoge to mai to tab tak thak jaunga. "
" Chlo chalte hai. Hum tmko jaha jana hai waha chor denge. "


Jump....
Run... Run...


Lakin mai Sachin ke baat ke pure hote hi, agle hi second plak japkte hi apne jagah se jump karke waha se sida sare Reporters ke ur paar pahuch jata hu.
Aur apni Jacket ka huddi phnte hue wahi se Sachin ko dekh kr kahta hu " Mai thik hu. "

Sachin, Anubhav aur sare Reporters, camera man, Association wale sb achanak mere waha se gayab hone se ekdam se surprise ho jate hai.
Lakin jaise hi sub meri aawaj sun kr meri taraf dekhte hai wo aur bhi jyada shocked ho jaye hai. Unki aakhi fati ki fati rah jati hai.sub yahi soch rahe hote hai ki mai ekdam se yaha se waha kaise chla gaya.
Sbke muh se bs yahi niklta hai.

" Huh ? "
" Ye kaise ho gaya ? "

Anubhav kud ko sambhal kr Sachin ke paas aata hai aur ek smile ke sath kahta hai " Ek Mage class Hunter, jiske paas aisi speed ho ? "
" Mr. Sachin ? "

Lakin Sachin koi reply nahi deta hai. Wo to jaise sadme me ja cuka tha. Wo waha tha hi nahi. Sachin bs ek tak mujhe dekhte hue apne man me soche ja raha tha ' Ye bahut fast hai. '
' Itna jyada fast ki meri aakhe bhi usko itni tej jate hue nahi nahi dekh payi. '

Sachin ne jis hath se mera solder pakda hua tha. Ab uska wo hath kaap raha tha.
' Mai phle se janta tha ki wo strong hai. '
' Lakin currently ye problem nahi hai. '
' Uski abhi ki jo movement thi. '
' Aur jo Magical energy jo evaluation room ke ander se jo flow ho rahi thi. '
' Ye ab phle se bahut jyada strong hai. '

Sachin ( halka darte hue Anubhav se ) " Abhi ka jo Rider hai wo hum dono se definately Strong hai. "


Tap... Tap... Tap...

Itna kah kar Sachin waha se apne Car ke taraf jane lagta hai. Aur Anubha use jata hua bs confusion ke sath dekh raha hota hai. Ki ise kya ho gaya hai.

Sachin car ke paas jate hue apne man me ' Iska double Awakened sayad kuch samay pahle hue hai. '
' Tab to Iska koi Matlb hi nahi banta ki wo ab aur bhi strong ho gaya hai. '
( Kuch min sochne ke baad ek dar ke sath ) ' Nahi, mere khyal se ye sayad Double awakening nahi hai. '
' Sayad... '
( Mujhe jate hue piche se dekh kr dar ke sath haklate hue ) ' Y.... Ye ek aisa h....Huntur hai jo lagatar grow karta ja raha hai...? '










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UPDATE - 4
Last Update me aapne dekha kaise hm guffa ke ander ja rahe hote h , aur m Anjana ko manata hu . Uske baad guffa me hme kya kya milta h aur last me ak hunter ki death ho jati h aur end me sbse big statue ki eye chmakne lagti h......

AB AAGE....

" kya ..... Kya such me ye statue hil skte h ? "
" The hell !! hme inse fight krni hogi ? "
" Kya such me hme in sb se fight krni hogi ? "
Mai us hunter ki body aur us statue ko dekhte hue sochta hu ' abhi kuch der phle jo hunter mara uska Rank kya tha ?
Haa yaad aaya sayad D Rank ?
Maan lo agr ye utna acha hunter na hua , but fir bhi wo mere jaise ak E Rank ke hunter se to bahut strong tha .
Lakin wo bhi mara gaya bs ak hi war ne !!
Wait ,wait a second...'

Ab mai shocked ke sath confuse bhi hone laga Qki m soch raha tha ' jitna mujhe yaad hai ye Dungeon jyada se jyada ak D Rank ka hai .
Maine aisa kabhi nahi suna hai ki kisi D Rank ke Dungeon ka monster is statue ke monster jitna powerful ho . '

Tbhi Rahul kahta hai " agar yaha kitne statue hai wo sare hil skte ho to ??
Mai to aisa soch bhi nahi skta "

Tabhi kisi ne kaha " Kya ye sbse big statue bhi move kr skta h ? "
Itna sunte h chro taraf silence ho gaya

Mai mud kr fir se wo big statue dekhta hu aur m bhut jyada dar jata hu Qki uski eye fir se bright ho gayi thi aur is baar mere hi taraf dekh rahi thi !!


Ye pahli baar nahi tha jb mera death se saamna itni paas se hua h ...
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In past ~~

Mere phle Raid ke time mai galti se apne Guild se alag ho gaya tha aur khoo gaya tha !!!

Ak baar ak E Rank monster ne mere back pr bahut gahra ghaw bana diya tha jiske karan mujhe kai week hospital me rahna pada tha !!!

Ak baar mai ak Dungeon ke ander fas kr almost marne hi wala tha !!!

Jbki socha jaye to sare hi Dungeon low Rank wale hi the tb bhi mostly time mujhe apni jaan jokhim me dalni padi ...

Jaha baki hunter apne Magical core km a use new aur advance weapons khridne me karte hai , taki wo strong monster ko hara kr maar sake aur jyada treasures dundh sake .

Pr mai aisa nahi kr skta . Qki mujhe apni bimar maa ke hospital ka bill pay krna hota h , apni choti sister ka khrcha uthana hota h .
In sb ke karan hi mai hmesa khali hath hi rahta hu , aur agar mai koi purani sword buy kru to uska result ye niklega ki wo bhut jldi hi tut jayegi .
Aur Healer ke rahne ke karan meri chot jldi heal ho jati h , bs wo chot jyada bada aur gahra na ho tabhi .

Mai hmesa se logo ki bs bate sunta rahta hu jo ki mere bare me hoti hai ....
" Ye ullu fir se chot kha ke bahar aaya h !! "
" Ye E Rank Dungeon me se bhi chot kha ke aaya h ? "
" Mujhe un healer pr taras aata h jo iske sath Raid me jate h !! "
" Unhe double mehnat krni padti h iske rahne se !! "
" Kya tum jante ho ?
Aaj kl ise world ka sbse weakest hunter kahte h !! "
" yani Hunter hote hue bhi vah bekaar hai "

na jane kitani baar Mere shoe's kharab ho gaye the !!
Jis bhi din mai chot kha kr bahar aata tha mai baki sb ki bato pr koi dhyan nahi deta tha aur puri mehnat krke apna kaam karta tha jisme kabhi bhi meri jaan ja sakti thi .
Mere khyal se wo ise liye Qki ye such mai bhi bahut ache se janta tha .

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BUZZZZZZZZ........

Mai abhi inhi yado me khoya hua tha ki achanak mai dekhta hu us sbse big statue ke eye se bahut teji se koi power niklne lagti h . Ye dekh kr mai shock ho gaya aur apne bagal me khadi Anjana ko pakad kr( jo bhi abhi bhi bahut dari hui thi ) jldi se power se bachane ke liye dusri taraf kud jata hu !!
Aur sath me bahut jor se chillata hu " sb log niche jhuk jao !!!!!!!

Sb dar aur shock se apne hi khyalo me khoye hue the tabhi suddenly meri aawaj sun kr meri taraf dekhte h , fir aur bhi jyada shock me chle jate h Qki unki taraf koi power bahut teji se aa rahi thi fir sb jldi se power se bachane ke liye dusri taraf jamin pr kud jate h

Uske baad bahut tej BUZZZZZZZZ....... ke sound ke sath power aati h aur hm sb jaha khade the waha ke jamin se takrati hai !!!

Kuch der baad power aani band ho jati h aur jaha hm khade se wo jagah melt ho cuki thi . Hm sb abhi bhi apni eye close kiye hue the . Jb sb silence hota h to hm sb dhire dhire uthte h .

" Hey utho "
"Hey "


Abhi Rohan se " tm thik to ho ? "

Rohan " haa .. aur tm ? "

Abhi " mai bhi thik hu ."

Ak HUNTER girl kisi ka cuta hua hath dekh kr chillane lagti h " ahhhhhhhhh...... "

Abhi bhi wo dekh kr bolta h " ye to kuch nahi h , bahut se Hunter mar cuke hai !! "

Rohan (udhar hi dekhte hue ) " main badi muskil se usase bach paya , agar Rider ne chillaya na hota to ..
Hm kuch nahi kr pate , hm sb bhi mare jate "

Mai Anjana ko uthane ki kosis kar raha hota hu " Miss Anjana .... Miss Anjana...."

Tabhi Rahul ( jor se chillata hue )" koi bhi khada mt hona jaise ho waise hi raho , Qki agar hm fir se khade hue to wo dubara attack kr skta h "

" Thik h Mr Rahul "
" Jaisa aap kahe "

Mai rahul se " Mr Rahul, Anjana ko dekhiye !! "
Rahul " Miss Anjana behos ho gayi h, Qki ye jyada dar sahan nahi kr payi . Isi liye ye bs low level ke Raid me hi participate krti h jbki ye ak B Rank healer h . "
" Lakin yaha ....
Ye basic level ka Dungeon nahi lag raha h "
" Jisne bhi tmhari baat mani wo hi bs bach paye aur jisne nahi mani wo sare mar cuke hai "

Mai " kya .... Ye such hai ? "

Rahul " wait ! Kya Tm is liye nahi chillaye the ki tmko pata tha kya hone wala h ? "

Mai " nahi ... Mai to bs is liye chillaya tha qki mujhe kuch dangerous hone ka feel hua tha "

Tabhi suddenly mera dhyan Rahul ke hath pr gaya aur meri eye fati ki fati rah gayi .

Mai ( unke hath ke taraf isara krte hue ) " sir aapka hath !!! "

Rahul " mai thik hu ! Bs meri madad kr do blood ka flow rokne me . thik h ? "
(Qki unka left hand elbow se pura alag ho gaya tha )

Mai unke hath me patti bandh kr blood ka flow rokne lagta hu aur wo mere se baat krte rahte h .

Rahul ( upar ki taraf dekhte hue ) " Rider tumhe kya lagta tha is Raid ka rank kya hoga ? "

Mai " mai nahi janta .
Mai aaj tk kabhi bhi kisi aisi Raid ka hissa nahi bana jo D Rank se upar ho "

Rahul " maine kewal ak ya do time hi B Rank raid ka hissa raha hu . Mai pakka bata skta hu ye place ak B Rank Dungeon se bhi upar ka hai ."

Us big statue ki taraf dekhte hue

" Balki B rank ke monster bhi itne powerful nahi hote h .
Kya ye A Rank ka h ......
Nahi !! Mere khyal se S Rank ...... "

Rahul wo wing wale statue ke tarf dekh kr
" Abhi to hmare paas kewal ye CARTHENON TEMPLE'S ke rule hi hai "


" 1st bhagawaan ki pooja kre "
" 2nd bhagwaan se prathna kre "
" 3rd apne faith ko prove kre "
" Jo koi bhi ye rule follow nahi krega wo wapas jinda nahi ja sakta . Ba yahi likha huaa h is pr ... "

" Mr. Rider... Aapke hisab se bhagwan kon ho skta h ? "

Mai ( big statue ki taraf dekhte hue ) " mere khyal se ...."

Rahul " tmhara mtlb ye big statue ..."
" In sb statue ko marne me bhi to bahut jyada time lagega "







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Last updated me aapne read kiya kaise sare Hunter dare hue the aur achanak se big statue bhi attack kr deta h , tbhi Rider unhe warn krta h fir bhi bhut se Hunter mare jate h . Uske baad wo kaise bache yahi soch rahe hote h .....

AB AAGE .....

THE GATE
Ak aisa tunnel jo dusre worlds ko hmare World se connect krta h .

10 YEAR AGO

Jb GATE ka astitva hamare duniya me aaya , uske baad se hmare World me bhut si vichitr ghtnaye ghati .

Jiska ak EXAMPLE HUNTERS the.

Inki saktiya jb bhi jagati thi uske baad wo kabhi Change nahi hoti thi . Na hi badalti thi

Mai bhi ak HUNTER bana but meri saktiya only ak E Rank HUNTER ke layak thi .
Wo alag baat h ki mai baki jyadatar dusre humane se bahut strong hu but mere aur unke Rank ke bich bahut bada gap hai .

Jis kisi ko bhi power mila h ki wo GATE ke paar ja sake aur monster ko mar sake .

Aur agar usne use apne career ke roop me chun liya h use HUNTER kahte h .

Kabhi kabhi GATE ke paar ak OMINOUS ( bad luck) chupa hota h .
Ab powerful aur mad monster kahi se bhi bahar nahi aate h wo sb bhut phle hi khtam ho chuke h .

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Mai ( Rahul ke broken hath ki taraf dekhte hue )" kya aap thik h ? Khoon bahna abhi tk nahi ruka hai ! "

Rahul " abhi yaha hm kuch nahi kr skte , hai ki nahi ? "
" Mai yaha bs 3 healer le ke aaya tha , qki maine socha tha yaha sb kuch jldi hi khtam ho jayega ....."

Us taraf dekhte hue jaha jamin melt ho gayi thi aur usme se abhi bhi smok nikal raha tha , big statue ke powerful attack se " ak healer to is kahtarnak attack se phle hi mar gaya, uski laas tak nahi bachi "

Ak man ki tarah ishara krte hue jo ak patthar ke sahare apne ghutno pr baitha hua tha aur apne dono hatho se sir ko pakd ke pahli ki tarah badbada raha tha .....
" Mai abhi aur jina cahta hu .."
" Save me ... Save me.... "

Rahul " Ak ye hai jisse itna bada sadma laga h ki ye paglo jaisi harkat kr raha h ! "

Rahul ( Anjana ki taraf dekhte hue jo ki abhi bhi leti hui thi ) " Ak B Rank ki healer ho ke bhi , Miss Anjana ne bhi aaj se phle aisa kuch experience nahi kiya h . Jo kuch bhi aaj hua h . Isi liye filhal ke liye mujhe healing milna thora muskil hai . "

" Is liye filhal sbse acha yahi hoga ki hm abhi jaise h waise hi rahe , in statues jaise enemy ke against "
" Jb situation thodi thik hogi tb , tb hm yaha se bhagane ki kosis kr skte h "
" Jabki hm sb jante hai ki ye aasan bilkul nahi hoga !! "

Wahi baki sb Hunter abhi bhi dar me the aur kuch ro rahe the ...
" Hu hu ~~ huuuuuuukkk "
" Ab hum kya karenge ? "
(Gusse se ) " Ye sirf ak D Rank Dungeon hai ......sirf ak D Rank Dungeon ??? "

Wahi ak HUNTER soch raha tha ' jaise ki Mr Rahul aur Rider ne kaha hm pr tabhi attack hoga jb hm apni jagah se hilenge '
' Agr kisi tarah hm is big statue se bach bhi gaye tb bhi hme door ke gate pr khade guard wale statue ko paar krke jana hoga . '
' Jo ki sayadh hi hme kabhi yaha se bahr jane dega . '

Ye sb sochte hue usne kuch decided kiya aur aur apni jagah se khada ho kr jor se bolta h " Mai yaha aise nahi mar sakta !!! "
" Maine finally ak big Guild join kiya h "
" To mai yaha yaha to bilkul nahi mar sakta !! "
Aur wo apne ghutno ke bal baith kr apne full power ko use krne ko ready ho raha tha .

Hm sb usi ki taraf dekh rahe the .


Tabhi Rahul chilla kr usase bolte h " tum kya kr rahe ho ? Apni jagah se hilna bhi mat !! "

Lakin wo to kisi ki bhi baat nahi sun raha tha bs apne mn ki kr raha tha " mai ye kr skta hu "
" Agr kisi chij ko le kr mujhe pura vishwas hai to wo hai meri speed !! "
" Mai is door ko ak second me paar kr dunga ... "

Itna sb bol kr wo apni full power ko use krke light speed se door ki taraf bhagne lagta h , Qki uski Power uski speed thi jo ki speed of light ke equal thi .

Wo full confidence me tha aur door ke paas phucha hi tha ki tabhi mai aur rahul dekhte hai us big statue ke eye se wapas se power release hone lagti h aur bahut hi teji se us Hunter ki taraf chli jati h . Ye sb itna fast hua ki hme kuch dikhayi hi nahi deta h ki hua kya , jb hm sb hose me aaye aur samne dekhte h to hme us hunter ke bs ghutno ke niche ke bs leg hi dikhe jo ki abhi bhi hawale the jaise bhag koi person bhag raha ho aur uski baki body jal kr raakh me badal gayi thi .

Ye sb dekh kr sb log aur bhi jyada sadme me chle gaye aur dar ke bahut tej tej rone lage .

Mai ( apne mukke ko jamin pr marte hue ) " fuck !!! "
" Ye sare statues Wale hme jb cahe tb maar skte h . Hai ki nahi !!? "

Rahul " ye to ak makkhi ko masalne se bhi aasan hai "

Mai " ye hamara isi samay safaya kr skte hai . "
" To ye hme maar q nahi rahe hai ? "

Rahul " pata nahi !! "

Kuch sochne ke baad Rahul ne mujhse bola " bhle hi ye hme maar skte hai . Pr ye hame maar nahi rahe hai ..."
" Qki ye un pagal monster se alag hai , jo hme kahi bhi dekhte hi andho ki tarah marna suru kr dete hai "
" Wo Guard wala status tabhi attack karta h jb koi door kholne ki kosis karta h "
" Wo big statue apni eye se beams tabhi nikalta h jb koi move hota h "
" Ye sabhi ak pattern me attack kr rahe hai .

" Ak pattern me ...!!! "
Ye sunte hi mai turant piche mud kr us wing wale statue ko dekhne lagta hu aur sochne lagta hu ' ye nahi ho skta.... !! '
'Kya is room me koi rule hai ? '
'Haa , CARTHENON ke rule !! '
' haa , yahi ho skta h !!! '


Aur mai turant Rahul se puchta hu " Mr Rahul 1st rule kya tha ? "

Rahul ( confuse ho kr ) " rule ? "

Mai wings wale statue ki taraf isara karta hu tb unhe kuch smjh me aata h . Aur wo bolte h " 1st rule tha..... Bhagwan ki pooja kre . "

Fir mai big statue ki taraf ghur ke dekhta hu aur apne man me kahta hu ' yahi hoga yaha ka bhagwan ! '

Mai khada hote hue Mr. Rahul se bolta hu " sir yaha is Dungeon me ak niyam hai ..."

Rahul ( mujhe dekh ke shock se dekhte hue ) " ye tum kya karne ja rahe ho ? "

Mai " agar mai sahi hu to !!! "

Rahul ( chillate hue ) " kya tum pagal ho gaye ho ? "

Pr mai bina kuch sune khada ho jata hu aur ghur kr us big statue ki taraf dekhta hu . Rahul meri eye ko dekhta h aur kud se kahta h " ye us aadmi ki aakh nahi h jisme death ka koi dar najar aaye "

Aur m us big statue ki taraf dekhte hue bolta hu " ye us par attack nahi krte hai jo move hota h !!! "




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Apna pyar banaye rakhiyega !!
Nice and superb update....
 
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