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Itachi_Uchiha

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UPDATE - 09

Dosto last Update me aapne dekha ki Rider ka left pair cut ho gaya h Anjana use heal krti h fir big statue ke hath ke ishare se ak veede jamin me se nikalta h aur mai uske bare me sbko smjhata hu . Rahul apni bali dene jata h but waha kuch nahi hota h fir hm sb baki bache hue Hunter us veede me jate h aur hmare chro taraf red aur white aag ke gole bn jate hai , aur ant me sare corner wale statue move ho kr hamri taraf aane lagte h .....

AB AAGE ....

Mai chro taraf dekh raha hota hu tb mai ak baat notice krta hu der sare white aag ke gole jo ki 2nd circle ke chro taraf tha unme se kuch gole bhut dhire dhire apne aap ak ke baad ak bujh kr gayab hote ja rahe the . Abhi tk bs 2ya 3 gole hi bujhe the .

TAP..... TAP..... TAP.....

Aur wo corner ke sare statue hamari taraf hi aa rahe hote hai .

" Ab hm sb kya kare ? "
" Fuck ! Shit ! Kaha fas gaye hum . "

Meri tarah baki sb bhi chro taraf hmare taraf aane wale statue ko dekh rahe the .
Aur maine ak chij aur notice ki ....sbko batana wala hi hota hu ki tabhi mera dhyan Anjana ki taraf gaya . Jo dar ke mare apne hath se apna muh chupaye hue thi

Mai turant usase kahta hu " Miss Anjana tm apni aakhe band nahi kr skti !! "
ye bikul waisa hi hai , jaise hm bachpan me game khela karte the ,
Ye sare paas aayenge jb bhi humari aakhe in statue pr se hategi ,
Isi liye sabhi log apni aakhe in statue se bilkul bhi mt hatana . "

Meri baat sun kr sare log statue ki taraf dhyan se dekhne lagte h aur jaisa ki maine notice kiya tha sb statue apni apni jagah pr ruk jate hai .

TAP....
Tabhi mujhe piche se kisi ke kadmo ki aawaj sunayi deti h . Mai mud kr dekhta hu to jo only girl Hunter hamare group me bachi thi uski eye close thi , jiske karan uske samne ka statue aage aaya tha pr tabhi .....

" Ahhhhhhhhhhhh...."
tap....tap....tap....

Wo girl Hunter chillate huee bhagne lagyi hai. Mai use rokne ke liye chillata hu .
" Nahi ! "

Rohan " hey ! ruk jao "

Wo girl Hunter kisi ki baat sune bina bhagti rahti h , aur mai dekhta hu uske jane ke baad ek red colour ka aag ka gola dhire dhire karke bujh jata h . Door bhi halka sa move ho ke band hone ke side chla jata h . Aur wo Hunter lakdi door se bahar bhag kr chli jati h , aur hm sb use muh fade dekhte rah jate h .

Rohan ( akdam shocked ho kr door ke bahar bhag kr jati hui ladki ko dekh kr )

" kya ! "
" Mr. Rahul ye kaise ho skta hai ? "
" Wo abhi bhi jinda hai ? "
" Door bs thora tha band hua tha . "
" Aur wo door ke bahar chali gayi !! "

Mai bhi pura shocked tha aur soch raha tha ' kya ? Ye kya tha ? '
' ak white aag ka gola bujh jata h ak time limit ke baad '
' ye red aag ke gole , jitne person veede pr hai utne hi astitv me aaye hai , aur kisi ek ke veede se bahr jane ke turant baad koi ak red aag ka gola bujh jata h . '
' 1st rule tha Bhagwan ki pooja kro ,

2nd rule tha Bhagwan se prathna kro ,
Km se km ab tk ke steps itne jyada confused aur puzzled nahi thi .
Pr door open hona mtlb koi jaal hai .
Jaise ki juthi ummid dikhana ,
Jb sare red aag ke gole jaag gaye tb door open ho gaya ,
Jbki ye sirf thora sa band hua jb ak red aag ka gola bujha ,
Door pakka band ho jayega jb sare red aag ke gole bujh jayenge !!
Apna vishwas sabit kro ka matlab hai ki ...
Tmko dar , khatra aur man cahi chij bhi dikhayi jayegi ,
Fir bhi tmko apna bhagwan ke liye apna vishwas dikhana hoga . '

Mai abhi ye sb soch hi raha tha ki tabhi jis fat Hunter ne mujhe pakda hua tha wo bolta h " mujhe maaf kr dena ! "
" Mujhe nahi lagata mai yaha aur jyada der ruk paunga . "

BUMMM.....
Abhi mai kuch smjh pata usase phle hi wo mujhe chor deta hai mai niche 2 layer wale stone ke paas gir jata hu , aur wo fat Hunter door ki taraf bhag jata h .

Mai " nahi ! "

tap...tap....tap.....
Mai chillata rahta hu lakin wo bina kuch sune door se bhagte hue bahar nikla jata h .

CHUUU.....

Door fir se thora aur band ho jata h

Rohan ( door ki taraf dekhte hue ) " ye kya ? "

Mai ( baki bache hue logo ki taraf dekh kr ) " hilna mat ! Hamre paas aur aadmi nahi h jo chor ke ja sake !!
Agar ak aur km hua to hamre paas pryapt log nahi honge sare statue ki taraf dekhne ke liye . Aur hm sare mare jayenge . "

Rahul ( statue ki taraf dekhte hue ) " Mr Rider kya ho raha h please hmko smjhao !! "

Mai " kul mila ke hme bs itna krna hai ki yaha ruk kr in statue ko dekhna h ,
Jb tak ki white aag ke sare gole bujh nhi jate "
" White aag ke gole ak ghadi ka kaam kr rahe hai .
Hm sab yaha se nikal payenge bs ak baar ye sare white aag ke gole bujh jaye "

Rohan " hey ! Mr. Rider .."
" Sayad tum sahi ho . "
" Lakin kya pata door pura band ho jaye white aag ke gole ke bujhte hi . "
" Kya tm jo kah rahe ho , tmko us pr pura vishwas hai ? "

Ye sb sun kr mai fir se soch me pad jata hu

Rohan aage bolta h " mai bilkul such khunga , maine kabhi socha tk bhi nahi tha tumhare jaisa kamjor bhi itna jyada helpful ho skta h . "
" Mai hamesa tumhe sbse niche manta tha "
" Maine kabhi koi ummid bhi nahi ki thi ki tumhare taraf se kisi bhi tarah ki jb tm hamre party me aaye the . "
" Bahut sare log ab tk mare ja chuke hai jb se hm is room me aaye hai .."
" Lakin jo koi bhi jinda bacha h wo kewal tmhare karan jinda bacha hai "
" Ye sab sirf isi liye ho paya qki tmne yaha ke paheliyon ko solve kiya . "
" Mai bhi sirf tmhare wajah se jinda hu . "
" Uske liye thank you "

Mai ( Rohan ki taraf dekh kr ) " Mr. Rohan ..."

Abhi mai aage kuch bolta uske phle Rohan bich me bol padta hai ..
Rohan ( rote hue )" lakin ... Mera bhi ak parivar hai . "
" Mai yaha nahi marna cahta . "
" Mai marna nahi cahta . "
" Mujhe maaf kr dena ..."
" Mujhe nahi lagta ab mai yaha aur thori bhi der ruk skta hu . "

tap....tap.....tap.....
Mai " Mr. Rohan !!! "

Rohan ( bhagte hue ) " mujhe maaf kr dena "

Mai ( door ki taraf dekh kr jor se ) " suno to ..."

Lakin Rohan bhi room se bahar bhag gaya . Ak aur red aag ka gola bujh gaya . Mai aakho me aasu liye hue bs door ki taraf dekh raha tha aur soch raha tha ..

' thank you ? '
' mujhe hasne pr majbur mt kro !! '

Aur mai niche baith kr jor jor se rone lagta hu ....
' tum !... '
' tum yaha se bhag gaye '
' iska result ye hoga ki hme yaha marna hoga '

TAP ..... TAP..... TAP....

aur wo status jo Rohan ki taraf the wo aage badne lagte hai ...






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Apna pyar aise hi banaye rakhiye .
 

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Xabhi

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UPDATE - 08

Jaisa ki last update me aapne read kiya ki hm sb big statue se bhag rahe hote h aur corner wale statue bhi unke paas phuchne pr hm pr attack kr dete h , fir mere dimak me instrument wale status ka khyal aata h aur hm sb unki taraf bahgne lagte h aur end m mai bhi ak instrument pakde hue statue ke paas pahuch jata hu .

AB AAGE ......

Mera left pair shield wake status ke attack ke karan cut ke alag ho cuka tha . Aur Anjana apne power ke trough mere left pair ko heal kr rahi thi jisase blood ka flow ruk jaye . Uske dono hath se ak goldan light nikal kr mere left pair ko cover kiye hue tha aur blood nikalna bnd ho cuka h . Anjana bahut jayada paresan lg rahi thi .

Mai " ye ab thik hai Miss Anjana ..... Aap ab heal krna band kr skti ho ... "

Anjana ( mere pair ko heal krte hue )" thori der aur ruk jao . Mai promise krti hu mai tmko heal kr dungi . "

" Cough ..... Cough....."
Tabhi Anjana ke muh aur naak se blood niklne lagta h qki usne apni energy bahut jyada use kr li thi . Mai Miss Anjana ki taraf dekhta hu chinta se .

Baki sb Hunter bhi mere paas hi aa gaye the.

Rahul ( Anjana ki taraf isara krke) " kya ye thik hai ? "

Rohan ( meri taraf dekh kr ) " kitna bura hua .. "

Ak female Hunter " chlo km se km wo bach to gaya . "

Rohan ( gusse se ) " jb hm yaha aaye the to hm 17 members the but ab hm sirf 6 members hi bache h . "

Rahul " aur unme se 2 member bahut jyada injured hai .... "
( Apne aur mere bare me Bolte hue )

Rohan ( Rahul ki broken hand ki taraf dekhte hue ) " ye to bahut bura hua ki tumhe apna hath khona pada , lakin ye sb kewal is liye hua qki tmne team leader hote hue bhi itne jldi me aisa faisla liya "
" Mr Rahul tm bs apne panishment ka wait kro ... "

Rahul " haa "

CRACK.......CRACK......

Hm sb sound ki taraf dekhte h to pate h ki wo big statue fir se move ho raha h .

" Nahi ! Fir se nahi !!! "

CRACK.... CRACK......

KAD.....KAD....KAD.....

Hm sb us big statue ko hi dhyan se dekh rahe the aur wo big statue hamri taraf mud gaya aur usne apna right hand upar ki taraf uthaya uske aisa krte hi ....

CRACK...... CRACK.......

Aur jamin ke andar se kuch bahar nikalne laga hm sb apni aakhe fade usi ki taraf dekh rahe the .
Aur jb wo pura bahar nikal jata h to hm dekhte h ki jamin pr 2 big circle form me kuch bahar nikla hua tha aur unke thik bich me ek double layer ka stone jamin se bahar nikal aaya tha ( like two layer of cack ) .

Rohan " ab ye kya h ? "

Mai ( usi taraf dekhte hue ) " ye ak vedee hai "

Sb mere taraf dekhne lagte h .

Rahul " vedee ! Ye kya hota h ? "

Mai " jaisa ki purano , grantho ya old book me Bataya jata tha ,
Jaha log apne bhagwan to kush krne ke liye jinda logo ki bali dete the ,
Jaise cows , pigs , sheep's , children aur kuwari ladkiya etc...."

" Aur aakhiri rule tha .....
Tum is bhagwan pr vishwas krte ho , to apne vishwas ko sabit kro !! "
" Mere khyal se yahi ak aakhiri rasta hoga . "

Ye sb sun kr Rohan vedee ki taraf dekhte hue apne power ka use krta h aur apne sward ko yaad krta h aur ak white energy uske left hand se niklne lagti h aur Rohan usme apna right hand le ja kar apni sward us energy se bahar nikal leta h .

Rohan " bhle hi mai kitna hi mand buddhi q na hu , lakin jitna mai smjh skta hu us hisab se aage kya hoga wo mai bata skta hu .
Mr. Rahul iska mtlb hme kisi na kisi ki bali deni hogi . Kya mai sahi bol raha hu ? "

Aur turant hi Rohan apni sward Rahul ke gardan ke paas laga deta h aur kahta h ..
" Hame yaha le kr kon aaya tha ?
Mr. Rahul wo tum the ! "

Rohan ( Abhi ko yaad krte hue )
" Koi aisa jo apne wife aur 2kids ki tarif karte nahi thakta tha , uski body 2part me divide ho gayi .
Uske sath 10 aur log mare gaye ....
Abhi kuch der phle hi tmne yaha jo hua h uski responsible li thi . Hai ki nahi ?
To ab is baat ko prove karke dikhao . "

Mai " Mr. Rohan ! Ye to bilkul ........"

Rohan ( bich me hi meri baat kaat kr gusse se chillate hue ) " tum chup ho jao aur jaha pade ho wahi baithe raho . "

Rahul ( bhut hi sad se ) " Mr. Rohan sahi kah rahe hai . Mujhe ye jimmedari uthani hi hogi .
Mai vedee pr kud chla jaunga . So please ye sward hata lo "

Mai ye sb dekh kr khada hone ki kosis karta hu but ho nahi pata hu aur sochta hu
' lakin ye Mr. Rahul ki galti nahi thi . '
' hm sb ne yaha aane ke liye voting kiya tha '
' ye to kayarta hogi , ki ye kahna ki sari galti unki h . '

Jb mai khada hone ki kosis me gir jata hu to Anjana mujhse kahti h " Rider tmhari chot abhi ....... "

Pr mujhe kuch sunayi nahi deta h q ki mai Mr. Rahul Ko veede pr jate hue dek raha tha .

TAP... TAP... TAP... TAP...

Mr. Rahul veede ke central me jaha double layer stone tha waha phuch kr dekhne lagte h . Us pure double layer stone pr inscription bane hue the .

BUZZZZZZZZ..........

Abhi wo ye sb dekh hi rahe hote hai ki unke piche 1st circle ke ak corner me fire ka ak gola aa jata h aur hawa me hi jalne lagta h .

Rohan " ye kya ? Ab Ye kya ho raha h ? "

Rahul ( meri taraf dekh kr ) " hey Rider kya ye wo nahi h jo hum sb karne ja rahe the ? "

Mai ( aag ke gole ki taraf dekhte hue )
' ak aag ka gola .

Iska kya matlab hai ? Kahi aisa to nahi ise balidan nahi cahiye ? '

Sb meri hi taraf dekh rahe hote h fir mai kahta hu " kya koi meri veede tk jane help karega ? "

Ye sun kar mere , Anjana , Rahul aur Rohan ko chor kr jo do Hunter bache the wo mere paas aate h aur mujhe uthne me help krte h aur veede ki taraf le jate h, unme ek strong , fat man tha dusra ak girl thi .

Mai unse kahta hu " hme veede ke bilkul bich me jana h . "

Fat man " kya ! Kya kaha tmne ? "

Mai " fikar mt kro . Kuch nahi hoga . "

Anjana " Rider aaram se "

BUZZZZZZ......
BUZZZZZZ......
BUZZZZZZ......

jaise hi hm tino veede ke center me pahuchte hai , 3 aur aag ke gole 1st circle ke charo taraf hawa me jal jate hai .
Aur mai sochta hu ...
' to ye aisa hai '

Mai ( Rahul se ) " aapko kya lagta h dusre Hunter hme bacha lenge agr hm yahi rahe rahe to ? "

Rahul ( mujhe dekh ke ) " yaha ke mark bata rahe hai ki 7din baad gate pura open ho jayega .
Baki HUNTERS ki help aane se pahle hi ye sare statue yaha se bahar nikal jayengi . "

Mai " wo sb ise najar andaj kr denge qki ye ak kewal D rank Dungeon hai .... "

Rahul " well ! guild kuch bhi acha nahi krta h , aur ye koi new baat nahi h . "

Ye sb sun kr mai sochne lagta hu ....
' mtlb 7 din baad gate puri tarah se open ho jayega .
Tb bahut se monster yaha se ander aa skte hai agr ye gate pura open raha to .
Raid ka maksad hi yahi hota hai ki 7 din ke andar boss ko marna hai aur gate band karna hai .'

( Big statue ki taraf dekhte hue )
' agr ab hm isme fail ho gaye to ...
Iska matlab ye hoga ki is big statue jaise monster hamari duniya me aa jayenge ..'

Ye sb soch kr mai kuch decided krta hu aur piche mud kr Anjana aur Rohan se kahta hu
" Aap dono ko bhi yaha aana padega . "
" Hr ak person ke liye veede me ak aag ka gola jala h ..
Ise dekh kr yahi lagta h ki sare log yaha veede me honge tabhi aage ka rasta khulega "

TAP..... TAP..... TAP....

Ye sun kar Anjana aur Rohan ak dusre ki taraf dekhte h aur chl kr veede me aa jaye hai .

BUZZZZZZ.......
BUZZZZZZ.......

Aur unke aate hi 2 aur aag ke gole 1st circle ke corner me hawa me aa kr jlne lagte hai .

BUZZZZZZZ......
RUMBLE...............
BOOM.........

kuch der baad 2nd circle ke corner me white aag ke gole charo taraf hawa me jalne lagte hai aur pure veede me jaha jaha inscription tha waha lightning run hone lagti h . Aur pura veede glow krne lagta h .

THUDDDDDD.........

Aur isi ke sath ak tej awwaj ke sath door open ho jata h . Hm sb bs door ki hi taraf dekhne lagte hai .

Rahul " kya door khul gaya ? "

Rohan " kya ? "

Rahul " ye kya h ? "

Rohan " kya hum such me bahar ja skte hai ? "

Sb shocked the aur open door ko dekh kr bs ak hi chij soch rahe the ..
' nahi ! Kuch aur hi abhi hoga ...'

TAP.... TAP.... TAP...

aur hm abhi soch hi rahe the ki dekhte hai ki sare corner wale statue hamari hi taraf chl kr aa rahe hote hai . Hum sb bahut jyada dar jate hai .

Rohan " ye kya ho raha h ? "

Rahul " ye sare hamri taraf hi aa rahe hai . "

" Sare ke sare hi statue hamari taraf aa rahe hai !! "








Aaj ke liye itna hi dosto !!
Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through .
Apna pyar aise hi banaye rakhiye .
Rider ne ek bar fir apni sujh bujh ke pradarsan kiya or apne sath sare bache huye member ko yagya vedi me le gya hai, Har vyakti ke liye ek aag ka gola jal rha hai, unke andar jate hi bahar ka darvaja bhi khul gya hai Lekin ye unke nikalne ke liye nhi hai, rider ko anchal ne apni healing power ki madad se thik karne ki Kosis ki pr Usne apni jyada power ka use kr liya hai to vo abhi ke liye nakam rhi... dekhte hai kya hota hai aage sandar update bhai jabarjast superb
 

Xabhi

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UPDATE - 09

Dosto last Update me aapne dekha ki Rider ka left pair cut ho gaya h Anjana use heal krti h fir big statue ke hath ke ishare se ak veede jamin me se nikalta h aur mai uske bare me sbko smjhata hu . Rahul apni bali dene jata h but waha kuch nahi hota h fir hm sb baki bache hue Hunter us veede me jate h aur hmare chro taraf red aur white aag ke gole bn jate hai , aur ant me sare corner wale statue move ho kr hamri taraf aane lagte h .....

AB AAGE ....

Mai chro taraf dekh raha hota hu tb mai ak baat notice krta hu der sare white aag ke gole jo ki 2nd circle ke chro taraf tha unme se kuch gole bhut dhire dhire apne aap ak ke baad ak bujh kr gayab hote ja rahe the . Abhi tk bs 2ya 3 gole hi bujhe the .

TAP..... TAP..... TAP.....

Aur wo corner ke sare statue hamari taraf hi aa rahe hote hai .

" Ab hm sb kya kare ? "
" Fuck ! Shit ! Kaha fas gaye hum . "

Meri tarah baki sb bhi chro taraf hmare taraf aane wale statue ko dekh rahe the .
Aur maine ak chij aur notice ki ....sbko batana wala hi hota hu ki tabhi mera dhyan Anjana ki taraf gaya . Jo dar ke mare apne hath se apna muh chupaye hue thi

Mai turant usase kahta hu " Miss Anjana tm apni aakhe band nahi kr skti !! "
ye bikul waisa hi hai , jaise hm bachpan me game khela karte the ,
Ye sare paas aayenge jb bhi humari aakhe in statue pr se hategi ,
Isi liye sabhi log apni aakhe in statue se bilkul bhi mt hatana . "

Meri baat sun kr sare log statue ki taraf dhyan se dekhne lagte h aur jaisa ki maine notice kiya tha sb statue apni apni jagah pr ruk jate hai .

TAP....
Tabhi mujhe piche se kisi ke kadmo ki aawaj sunayi deti h . Mai mud kr dekhta hu to jo only girl Hunter hamare group me bachi thi uski eye close thi , jiske karan uske samne ka statue aage aaya tha pr tabhi .....

" Ahhhhhhhhhhhh...."
tap....tap....tap....

Wo girl Hunter chillate huee bhagne lagyi hai. Mai use rokne ke liye chillata hu .
" Nahi ! "

Rohan " hey ! ruk jao "

Wo girl Hunter kisi ki baat sune bina bhagti rahti h , aur mai dekhta hu uske jane ke baad ek red colour ka aag ka gola dhire dhire karke bujh jata h . Door bhi halka sa move ho ke band hone ke side chla jata h . Aur wo Hunter lakdi door se bahar bhag kr chli jati h , aur hm sb use muh fade dekhte rah jate h .

Rohan ( akdam shocked ho kr door ke bahar bhag kr jati hui ladki ko dekh kr )

" kya ! "
" Mr. Rahul ye kaise ho skta hai ? "
" Wo abhi bhi jinda hai ? "
" Door bs thora tha band hua tha . "
" Aur wo door ke bahar chali gayi !! "

Mai bhi pura shocked tha aur soch raha tha ' kya ? Ye kya tha ? '
' ak white aag ka gola bujh jata h ak time limit ke baad '
' ye red aag ke gole , jitne person veede pr hai utne hi astitv me aaye hai , aur kisi ek ke veede se bahr jane ke turant baad koi ak red aag ka gola bujh jata h . '
' 1st rule tha Bhagwan ki pooja kro ,

2nd rule tha Bhagwan se prathna kro ,
Km se km ab tk ke steps itne jyada confused aur puzzled nahi thi .
Pr door open hona mtlb koi jaal hai .
Jaise ki juthi ummid dikhana ,
Jb sare red aag ke gole jaag gaye tb door open ho gaya ,
Jbki ye sirf thora sa band hua jb ak red aag ka gola bujha ,
Door pakka band ho jayega jb sare red aag ke gole bujh jayenge !!
Apna vishwas sabit kro ka matlab hai ki ...
Tmko dar , khatra aur man cahi chij bhi dikhayi jayegi ,
Fir bhi tmko apna bhagwan ke liye apna vishwas dikhana hoga . '

Mai abhi ye sb soch hi raha tha ki tabhi jis fat Hunter ne mujhe pakda hua tha wo bolta h " mujhe maaf kr dena ! "
" Mujhe nahi lagata mai yaha aur jyada der ruk paunga . "

BUMMM.....
Abhi mai kuch smjh pata usase phle hi wo mujhe chor deta hai mai niche 2 layer wale stone ke paas gir jata hu , aur wo fat Hunter door ki taraf bhag jata h .

Mai " nahi ! "

tap...tap....tap.....
Mai chillata rahta hu lakin wo bina kuch sune door se bhagte hue bahar nikla jata h .

CHUUU.....

Door fir se thora aur band ho jata h

Rohan ( door ki taraf dekhte hue ) " ye kya ? "

Mai ( baki bache hue logo ki taraf dekh kr ) " hilna mat ! Hamre paas aur aadmi nahi h jo chor ke ja sake !!
Agar ak aur km hua to hamre paas pryapt log nahi honge sare statue ki taraf dekhne ke liye . Aur hm sare mare jayenge . "

Rahul ( statue ki taraf dekhte hue ) " Mr Rider kya ho raha h please hmko smjhao !! "

Mai " kul mila ke hme bs itna krna hai ki yaha ruk kr in statue ko dekhna h ,
Jb tak ki white aag ke sare gole bujh nhi jate "
" White aag ke gole ak ghadi ka kaam kr rahe hai .
Hm sab yaha se nikal payenge bs ak baar ye sare white aag ke gole bujh jaye "

Rohan " hey ! Mr. Rider .."
" Sayad tum sahi ho . "
" Lakin kya pata door pura band ho jaye white aag ke gole ke bujhte hi . "
" Kya tm jo kah rahe ho , tmko us pr pura vishwas hai ? "

Ye sb sun kr mai fir se soch me pad jata hu

Rohan aage bolta h " mai bilkul such khunga , maine kabhi socha tk bhi nahi tha tumhare jaisa kamjor bhi itna jyada helpful ho skta h . "
" Mai hamesa tumhe sbse niche manta tha "
" Maine kabhi koi ummid bhi nahi ki thi ki tumhare taraf se kisi bhi tarah ki jb tm hamre party me aaye the . "
" Bahut sare log ab tk mare ja chuke hai jb se hm is room me aaye hai .."
" Lakin jo koi bhi jinda bacha h wo kewal tmhare karan jinda bacha hai "
" Ye sab sirf isi liye ho paya qki tmne yaha ke paheliyon ko solve kiya . "
" Mai bhi sirf tmhare wajah se jinda hu . "
" Uske liye thank you "

Mai ( Rohan ki taraf dekh kr ) " Mr. Rohan ..."

Abhi mai aage kuch bolta uske phle Rohan bich me bol padta hai ..
Rohan ( rote hue )" lakin ... Mera bhi ak parivar hai . "
" Mai yaha nahi marna cahta . "
" Mai marna nahi cahta . "
" Mujhe maaf kr dena ..."
" Mujhe nahi lagta ab mai yaha aur thori bhi der ruk skta hu . "

tap....tap.....tap.....
Mai " Mr. Rohan !!! "

Rohan ( bhagte hue ) " mujhe maaf kr dena "

Mai ( door ki taraf dekh kr jor se ) " suno to ..."

Lakin Rohan bhi room se bahar bhag gaya . Ak aur red aag ka gola bujh gaya . Mai aakho me aasu liye hue bs door ki taraf dekh raha tha aur soch raha tha ..

' thank you ? '
' mujhe hasne pr majbur mt kro !! '

Aur mai niche baith kr jor jor se rone lagta hu ....
' tum !... '
' tum yaha se bhag gaye '
' iska result ye hoga ki hme yaha marna hoga '

TAP ..... TAP..... TAP....

aur wo status jo Rohan ki taraf the wo aage badne lagte hai ...







Aaj ke liye itna hi dosto !!
Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through .
Apna pyar aise hi banaye rakhiye .
Wao amazing update bhai superb kya baat hai maza hi aa gya padh kr
Rider apni baat puri hi nhi kr pata uske Pahle hi ek fat admi or rohan us Pahle vali girl ki tarah hi vha se bhag gye pr kya vo sach me hi bach ke bhage hai ya fir ek or nyi musibat me pad gye hai... Rider ne pta lga liya tha ki hame un stachuo ko ghurte rahna hai or white fire ko bujhne tk usi yagya vedi me rahna hai... Lekin ab aisa hone ke aasar Bahut kam najar aa rhe hai kyoki Mr Rahul, rider or anchal ya anjna Jo bhi hai unka sath chhodkr bhag gya hai... Dekhte hai kya hoga aage...
 
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