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jo bhi mujhe like ke liye bate bana raha hai. un logo ko bata du bhai aaj ke time me kuch bhi free nahi hai. aur mere update bich me kyu ruke the wo mostly logo ko pata hi hai aur nahi hai to bata du meri small siste r ki marrige thi to usme almost sare arrengment maine hi kiye the. then mera major accident hua jiske karan mere dono hatho me plaster laga tha. ab kahi ja kar mai 80 percent recover ho paya hu. uske baad bhi life me aur bhi bahut chije hoti hai jo is story se mere liye bahut hi impotant hai.
aur aap log kud ja kar check kar lo update diye kuch hi hour hue hai but 45+ likes aa cuke hai. jabki normal itne like 3-4 din me aata hai. to aisa kyu hota hai bhai. quki mostly reader read karke nikal lete hai to jab bhai read kiye pasand aaya to like kyu nahi kar skte ek reason bata do ?
quki wo apna 2-3 second bhi kharch nahi karna cahte hai like dene ke liye. aur yaha hum kai kai hour laga kar ek update likhte hai to aise me like ki demand kyu na rakhe. jinhe bhi problem hai mere like ke demand se wo na bhi read krenge story to mujhe fark nahi padega. merew paas genuion 5 reader bhi honge to mai sirf unse bahut happy hounga. aur aise reader kon hai mai unko ache se janta hu to sirf itna hi wapas se kahunga apna muft ka advice apne paas rakhe.
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UPDATE NO - 147
TAKING DOWN WORLD'S NO. 1 HUNTER




AB AAGE.......




Factory ki taraf aane Wale raste ke highway par is time kafi sari aur black car full speed me factory ki taraf aane me lagi Hui thi. Unhi gadiyo me se ek me Mr. White back seat par baithe hue the. Aur unka driver full speed me gadi ko bhgaye ja Raha tha.


Driver jo ki baki sabhi ki tarah ek black nd white suit uniform me tha wo serious tone me car drive krte hue piche baithe Mr. White se puchta hai " Mr. Kya aap is samay mujhe bata skte hai ki aakhir yaha ho kya raha hai ? "

Mr. White apni seat se window se bahar ki taraf dekhte hue kehta hai " Abhi itna time nahi hai ki mai tmko sari bate detailed me smjha saku. "

Driver rear mirror se Mr.white ko dekhte hue aage kehta hai " Aakhir chal kya Raha hai ? "
" Mere ek normal civilian hone ke karan sayad aap mujhe nahi bata rahe hai, lakin... Agar hum yaha se aage gaye to hum hmari life ko risk me daal rahe hai. "
" Ye baad yaad rakhiega. "



~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


IN FACTORY, USA


Wahi factory me Mai, Sandy ko dekhte hue is time me soch raha tha....
Is duniya me total 4 human's hai Jo Rulers ki strength borrow karte hai.
Aur sayad wo wahi 5 logo me se hai Jo Kamish Raid se jinda bach paye the.
Aur wahi 4 log " National Level Rank Huntur kehlate hai. "
Aur Sandy Nirwana unse alag nahi hai. Wo bhi unme se ek hai.

Mai ye sub is liyesoch raha tha quki Sandy Nirwana ke REINFORCEMENT kehte hi uski body change hone lagi. Uske puri body par ek armour type ka kawach ban Gaya. Uske log hair ab aise ho gaye the jaise unse fire nikal Rahi ho. Wo kisi aag ke jaise lag rahe the. Uske pure body yaha tak ki face par bhi ek bahut hi strong kawach type kuch ban Gaya tha. Uska size bhi phle se 1.5 Guna ho gaya tha.
Uske chlne se uske pairo ke niche ki jamin buri tarah se Tutati ja rahi thi.

Ab wo bikul alag hi person najar aa rah tha. Wo koi human to lag hi nahi Raha tha. Aur ab uski confidance ek alag hi level par tha. Uska attitude bikul change ho cuka tha. Wo slowly slowly chalte hue mere taraf aa raha tha.


RUN.....

Mai uske taraf speed me AK baar fir se attack karne jata hu. Aur mujhe apne paas aata hua dekh kar wo is baar turant hi apne dono hatho ko hawa me utha kar mujhe buri taraf Marne wala tha ki mai aakhiri moment par ye dekh leta hu. Aur mujhe ye samjh me aa jata hai ye attack phle ke attacks se bikul alag hi level ka hai.
Aur ye smjh kar Mai turant hi apne jagah se jump laga kar waha se hat jata hu. Jiska pata sayad Sandy ko bhi nahi lag pata hai.


BAAAMMMMM....
BAAAMMMMM......


Lakin Sandy ka attack mere hatane ke karan niche jamin par j lagta hai aur waha jaise koi bhukamp sa aa jata hai. Waha ki almost 100 meter ki jamin buri tarah se Tut jati hai. Aur jiske karan FACTORY ki dilwale aur waha lage hue Machine sub Tut kar ya apna santulan kho kar idhar udhar girne lagti hai.
Aur jaha Sandy ne apne donk hatho se mara tha waha ki 15-20 metart ki jamin ka to aur bhi bura haal hota hai.
Waha I jamin Tut kar bade chote tukdo me itni jyada force se hawa me kai meter upar tak uad jate hai.

Mai abhi bhi hawa me jamp lagaye hue ye sub hota hua dekh Raha tha. Ki tabhi ek baar fir se Sandy apne right hath ko mere taraf karke apne Psychokinesis skill ka use krte hue ek blackhole type kuch banata hai jo mujhe apni taraf phle se kai times jyada force se khichne lagta hai.
Wo blackhole ka centre to bikul black tha but uske side me golden color ka ring bana hu tha. Jo dekhne me kafi terrifying lag raha tha.

Wahi hum dono ke aas paas fight kar rahe Scavenger Guild ke kuch hunters jab ye dekhte hai to unme se ek chilla kar turant hi sbko kehta hai " Master se dur bhago. "
" Jaldi Karo. "
" Master se jitn ho sake utna dur ho jao. "

Ye sun kar sare Hunturs ur shadows ke bich ki fight band ho jati hai. Aur Scavenger Guild ke hunters jo hmare paas fight kar rahe the. Wo jldi se hmlogo se ur ek safe distance par bhagne lagte hai. Wo subhi Hunturs kafi jyada dare nd shocked' lag rahe the. Sayad unme se almost sbne Sandy ka ye roop 1st time dekha tha.

Mere shadow soldiers jo ki hmare paas se to us black hole me khiche chle Jane lagte hai. Sirf mere shadow soldiers hi nahi blki aas paas ke sare saman, instument weapons building materials baki sub bhi us black hole me Jane lagte hai.

Wahi mai jo ki is time factory ke hi ek piller ko majbuti se pakade latka hua tha sath me Maine apne Ruler Authority skill ka bhi use Kiya hu tha warna Mai bhi us black hole me khich chala jata ye dekh kar mai apne man me sochta hu ' Kya incredible strength hai ! '
' Ye to kisi Black hole ke jaise hai. '
' Agar mere paas Ruler's Authority skill nahi hoti to mai bhi abhi tak iske ander khicha chala jata. '


Boommmmm.....

Tabhi mai dekhta hu ki Sandy us Black hole me apni energy dalta hai jaise aur wo golden color ka ring bada hone lagta hai aur end me kuch hi second me wo kafi bada ho jata hai tob Sandy us Gole ko mere taraf full speed me fek deta hai.

Aur palk jpakte hi wo puri factory blast ho jati hai. Ab tak factory ka almost 60 percent hissa kisi kandhar me badal cuka tha. Aur aap sub ko yaha batana cahunga ki ye factory koi choti moti factory nahi thi. Apne time me ye country ki sbse badi factorys me sumar thi.
Ye balast itna jordar tha ki Aisa lagta hai ki 1000+ cylinder fate ho.

Sandy ko chor kar baki sub sochte hai ki mai khtam ho cuka hu. Aur agar Meri jagah koi aur hota to use isase bachne ka koi chance na milta aur wo pakka ya to mara jata ya bahut buri tarah ghyal ho jata.

Lakin meri speed aur reaction timing alg hi level par pahuch cuki hai. Isiliye Mai turant hi apne jagah se hat Gaya th jiske karan mai is attack se bach gaya. Aur is time me factory ke hi roof ke ek tute hue bade se pillor par land karta hu.

Jabki Scavenger Guild ke kafi Hunturs ko chote aayi thi is blast se.

Chandani raat ki roshni me Mai waha khada kafi khatarnak aur attractive lag raha tha. Aur ab waha ka yehaal tha hamari fight ke karan waha pura area maidan me badal cuka tha. Mere piche hi factory ka baki ka Bach hu hissa tha.

Aur jab waha se sari dust hatati hai to sabko mai aur Sandy dikhayi dete hai.

Sandy mere taraf niche se dekhte hue kehta hai " Mai is baar miss nahi karunga. "

Iske baad ek baar fir se hum dono ke body se Kami amount me energy nikalne lagti hai.
Ye dekh kar Scavenger Guild ke kuch old aur powerful Hunters turant waha khade ho kar hum dono ko dekh rahe baki sbhi Hunturs ko chilla kar kehne lagte hai.

" Sare injured Hunters ko yaha se jldi le chalo. "

" Jitna jldi ho sake utna jldi aur master se jitna jyada dur ho sake utna dur ho jao, abhi turant. "


SUUUU...............

Aur agle hi pal Sandy jo ki mujhe hi ektak ghure ja raha tha wo apni jagah se apne ghutno ko halka se bend karta aur kafi speed me ek high jump lagate hue meri taraf upar ki or aane lagta hai.

Mai is time jamin se karib 50 meter ki hight par hounga. Aur itni distance palak jpkte hi Sandy paar kar leta hai. Meri taraf aate hue wo apne left hath se ek punch bana karere ko Marne hi wala hota hai to Mai turant hi uske armour pehne muh ke upar apne right pair ko rakh kar uske kuch karne se phle hi hawa me ek jump laga deta hu.

Lakin wo bhi turant hi apna plan change karke mere taraf apne right hath ko karke kehta hai " Pakad liya. "

Aur ek baar fir se wo apne Psychokinesis skill ka use krte hue mujhe apni taraf khichne ki kosis karta hai.

Jiske jawab me Mai bhi apne left hath ko uski taraf krte hue Ruler's Authority skill ko activate kar deta hu. Jo ki apne full power me thi. Aur iske wajah se Mai Jo ki Sandy ke skill ke karan uski taraf ja raha tha, ab Sandy bhi mere se kai guna jyada speed me mere taraf aane lagta hai. Aur mai apne dusrehath ka punch bana kar Sandy ko Marne ke liye ready ho jata hu.

Sandy jab ye dekhta hai to wo apne MN me sochta hai ' Wo is baar mujhe apne taraf khich rah hai aur wo bhi speed me khich raha hai. '
' kya wo mujhse direct fight Karn cahta hai ? '
' Agar aisi baat hai to mai bhi tmhari ye iccha khusi ke sath pura karunga. '

.itna soch kar Sandy bhi apne left hath ko aage punch ki tarah karke jor se fir kehta hi " REINFORCEMENT "

Aur is baar uska sirf left hath ke upar hi shield ke layer ke upar ek aur shield ka layer ban jata hai. Aur uska left hath phle se double strong ho jat hai. Aur total 8guna strong.


BAMMMM.........

Uske baad Mera aur Sandy ka hath ka mukka ek dusre se takraya hai aur jaisehi ye hota hai hmare hatho ke muuke se waha ek bahut bada energy ka jhtka creat hota hai aur wo charo taraf ek loud sound ke sath fail jata hai.

KAD... KAD... KAD...

Fir uske baad ek aur sound aati hai. Jo ki sayad haddiyo ke tutne ki hoti hai. Aur iske sath hi Sandy mere mukke ke force se piche ki taraf jane lagta hai. Aur uska doubt time shield wae hath se shield kai jagah se buri tarah se crack ho jata hai. Aur kafi damage ho jata hai.

BAAAMMMMM......
Badhammm.......


Tik isi samay meri aur Sandy ki najar ekduare se takrati hai aur is baar mai apne punch ka power increase karke ek punch Sandy ko fir se wahi hawa me Marta hu aur us punch se direct hit hone ke karan Sandy bache hue factory ke hisse ke roof ko toda hua iske ander ghus jata hai ek loud sound ke sath.

Aaahhhh.......

Sandy Factory ke dher me se jor se chillate hue niklta hai. Lakin mai jo ki ab tak niche jamin par aa gaya tha isi baat ka wait karta hu aur mai sidhe ja kar Sandy ko Marne hi wala hota hu ki Sandy mujhe ek punch Marta hai lakin mai usase niche juk kar Bach jata hu.

BISOOM.....

Uske baad Mai niche juke hue hi Sandy ki sir ke upar shield me lage 2 horn ko dono hatho se pakdta hu aur Sandy ke muh me apne left leg ke ghutne se ek jabardast kick maar deta hu. Jiske karan uske face ka shield bhi crack ho jata hai.


Wahi America Hunter association ke sare log ab tak factory aa cuke the. Wo yaha aate hi wo sare niche utar kar samne k najara dekhte hai. Jaha baki ke sare Scavenger Guild ke hunters unhe injured milte hai aur unme jo healer the wo un sub ko heal kar rahe hote hai. Fir bhi sbka dhyan sirf mere aur Sandy ke fight ke upar hi rehta hai.

Ye dekh kr sare Hunters associate Wale bhi hmari fight ki taraf dekhne lagte hai aur samne ka najara dekhte hi unka muh aur aakhe shocked se khusi ki khuli reh jati hai.

Mr. White ka drive bhi Mr. White ke sath ye dekh kr shocked ke sath kehta hai " Hey bhagwan..... ! "
" Aakhir ye dono kis tarah ke monsters hai Jo itni jyada amount me magical energy ko emitte kar rahe hai ? "
" Ye bahut hi khatarnak hai. To aapko such me smbhal ke rehna hoga. "

Uske baad to waha Mai aur Sandy Nirwana light ke speed me ek dusre se yaha waha sidhe fight karne lagte hai. Aur Sandy mere har ek punch se dur ja girta tha.

Mr. White shocked ke sath chillate hue " Wo kya tha ? "
" Agar mai galt nahi hu to wo... "

Mr. White ka driver usase bhi jyada surprise me " Ha wo Sandy Nirwana hi hai. "
( Mr. White ke taraf dekhte hue ) " Mr. White ab hame kya karna cahiye ? "

Mr. White bhi samne dekhte hue " hme kya karn cahiye ? ! Se Tmhara matlab kya hai ! "
" Hme unhe rokna hoga. "

Driver " Hum ? Unhe rokenge ? "
" Aap majak to nahi kar rahe ho ? "
" Hose me to ho na aap ? "
" Master Sandy rider ke hatho pite ja rahe hai. Wo bhi bhut buri tarah se. "

Is time sare log ek big shocked ke sath samne Jo ho raha tha wo dekh rahe the. Kisi ko yakin hi nahi ho Raha tha ki samne jo chal raha hai wo such hai.

Samne Sandy factory ke kandder ke dher par leta pad hua tha. Aur mai uske sine aur pet par apne pairo ke Bal khada uske muh par apne dono hatho se punches barsaye ja raha tha. Jisase waha bas mere khatarnak punches aur Sandy ke dard se chillane ki aawaj hi aa rahi thi.

Sandy Nirwana ka haal bahut bura ho gaya tha uske body par ka shield har jagah se carck ho cuka tha. Us par kai jagah dent pad chuke the. Aur mere se pitate hue bhi wo apne man me soch raha tha.

' Kaise.... '
' Kaise ek mage type Huntur ke paas itni speed aur strength ho skti hai ? '
' Mai.... Kya Mai haarne wala hu ? '
' Aisa nahi ho skta hai. '
' Nahi, aisa nahi ho skta hai. '
' Jab koi mujhe niche dabata hai ya bully karta hai use uski jagah dikhana use harana yahi to chij mujhe, mai banati hai. '

Bas itna sub sochte hue Sandy apne sari himmat juta kar itne time Tak pitane ke baad bhi chillate hue apne pairo par khada hota hai aur jor se gusse me meri taraf dekhte hue kehta hai " Mai Sandy Nirwana hu. "
" Tum kya sochte ho, bas itna kuch karke tum mujhe Hara doge. "


BISOOM....
BAAAMMMMM.....


Lakin uski baat khtam hone tak mai apni jagah se ek jump laga kar uske piche aa jata hu aur uske sir par apne right elbow se ek jordar aur powerful punch marte hue kehta hu " Maine tmne phle hi kaha tha na, tmhe yaad nahi hai kya ? "
" Isase farak nahi padta hai ki tum kon ho ? "

Ye kehte hue Mai wapas se Sandy ke uper ek punch Marne hi wala hota hi hu ki Dur khada Mr. White chilla kar kehta hai " Hunter Rider ruk jaiye. "
" Please Ruk jaiye. "


BISOOM.... Crack....

BISOOM.... Crack....
BISOOM.... Crack....
BISOOM.... Crack....


Lakin mai is baat ko najarandaj karte hue wapas se Sandy ke upar ab tak ke sbse powerful punches Marne lagta hu. Aur is baar ke mere har ek punches ke padte hi Waha ka shield puri tarah se Tut jata aur Sandy ki waha ki body exposed hoti ja Rahi thi. Aisa karte hue maine Sandy ke almost upper body se pura shield hata hi Diya tha. Aur mai ek aur mukka use Marne hi wala hota hu ki tabhi Sandy Nirwana aakhirkar dard aur nirasa se kehta hai " Ye khtam ho gaya. "
" Mai haar Manta hu. "

Ye sun kar Mai apne punch ko rok leta hu. Aur Sandy ko

chor deta hu.













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so ab next Update mai tab hi likhna start karunga jab is Update par 80+ likes aa jayenge. Matlab aise jo update week me 1 aa ja raha hai. Wo ab like ke Target ke pura hone ke baad likhna start karunga to kitna din lagega wo ab aapke upar hai.
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UPDATE NO - 147
TAKING DOWN WORLD'S NO. 1 HUNTER




AB AAGE.......




Factory ki taraf aane Wale raste ke highway par is time kafi sari aur black car full speed me factory ki taraf aane me lagi Hui thi. Unhi gadiyo me se ek me Mr. White back seat par baithe hue the. Aur unka driver full speed me gadi ko bhgaye ja Raha tha.


Driver jo ki baki sabhi ki tarah ek black nd white suit uniform me tha wo serious tone me car drive krte hue piche baithe Mr. White se puchta hai " Mr. Kya aap is samay mujhe bata skte hai ki aakhir yaha ho kya raha hai ? "

Mr. White apni seat se window se bahar ki taraf dekhte hue kehta hai " Abhi itna time nahi hai ki mai tmko sari bate detailed me smjha saku. "

Driver rear mirror se Mr.white ko dekhte hue aage kehta hai " Aakhir chal kya Raha hai ? "
" Mere ek normal civilian hone ke karan sayad aap mujhe nahi bata rahe hai, lakin... Agar hum yaha se aage gaye to hum hmari life ko risk me daal rahe hai. "
" Ye baad yaad rakhiega. "



~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


IN FACTORY, USA


Wahi factory me Mai, Sandy ko dekhte hue is time me soch raha tha....
Is duniya me total 4 human's hai Jo Rulers ki strength borrow karte hai.
Aur sayad wo wahi 5 logo me se hai Jo Kamish Raid se jinda bach paye the.
Aur wahi 4 log " National Level Rank Huntur kehlate hai. "
Aur Sandy Nirwana unse alag nahi hai. Wo bhi unme se ek hai.

Mai ye sub is liyesoch raha tha quki Sandy Nirwana ke REINFORCEMENT kehte hi uski body change hone lagi. Uske puri body par ek armour type ka kawach ban Gaya. Uske log hair ab aise ho gaye the jaise unse fire nikal Rahi ho. Wo kisi aag ke jaise lag rahe the. Uske pure body yaha tak ki face par bhi ek bahut hi strong kawach type kuch ban Gaya tha. Uska size bhi phle se 1.5 Guna ho gaya tha.
Uske chlne se uske pairo ke niche ki jamin buri tarah se Tutati ja rahi thi.

Ab wo bikul alag hi person najar aa rah tha. Wo koi human to lag hi nahi Raha tha. Aur ab uski confidance ek alag hi level par tha. Uska attitude bikul change ho cuka tha. Wo slowly slowly chalte hue mere taraf aa raha tha.


RUN.....

Mai uske taraf speed me AK baar fir se attack karne jata hu. Aur mujhe apne paas aata hua dekh kar wo is baar turant hi apne dono hatho ko hawa me utha kar mujhe buri taraf Marne wala tha ki mai aakhiri moment par ye dekh leta hu. Aur mujhe ye samjh me aa jata hai ye attack phle ke attacks se bikul alag hi level ka hai.
Aur ye smjh kar Mai turant hi apne jagah se jump laga kar waha se hat jata hu. Jiska pata sayad Sandy ko bhi nahi lag pata hai.


BAAAMMMMM....
BAAAMMMMM......


Lakin Sandy ka attack mere hatane ke karan niche jamin par j lagta hai aur waha jaise koi bhukamp sa aa jata hai. Waha ki almost 100 meter ki jamin buri tarah se Tut jati hai. Aur jiske karan FACTORY ki dilwale aur waha lage hue Machine sub Tut kar ya apna santulan kho kar idhar udhar girne lagti hai.
Aur jaha Sandy ne apne donk hatho se mara tha waha ki 15-20 metart ki jamin ka to aur bhi bura haal hota hai.
Waha I jamin Tut kar bade chote tukdo me itni jyada force se hawa me kai meter upar tak uad jate hai.

Mai abhi bhi hawa me jamp lagaye hue ye sub hota hua dekh Raha tha. Ki tabhi ek baar fir se Sandy apne right hath ko mere taraf karke apne Psychokinesis skill ka use krte hue ek blackhole type kuch banata hai jo mujhe apni taraf phle se kai times jyada force se khichne lagta hai.
Wo blackhole ka centre to bikul black tha but uske side me golden color ka ring bana hu tha. Jo dekhne me kafi terrifying lag raha tha.

Wahi hum dono ke aas paas fight kar rahe Scavenger Guild ke kuch hunters jab ye dekhte hai to unme se ek chilla kar turant hi sbko kehta hai " Master se dur bhago. "
" Jaldi Karo. "
" Master se jitn ho sake utna dur ho jao. "

Ye sun kar sare Hunturs ur shadows ke bich ki fight band ho jati hai. Aur Scavenger Guild ke hunters jo hmare paas fight kar rahe the. Wo jldi se hmlogo se ur ek safe distance par bhagne lagte hai. Wo subhi Hunturs kafi jyada dare nd shocked' lag rahe the. Sayad unme se almost sbne Sandy ka ye roop 1st time dekha tha.

Mere shadow soldiers jo ki hmare paas se to us black hole me khiche chle Jane lagte hai. Sirf mere shadow soldiers hi nahi blki aas paas ke sare saman, instument weapons building materials baki sub bhi us black hole me Jane lagte hai.

Wahi mai jo ki is time factory ke hi ek piller ko majbuti se pakade latka hua tha sath me Maine apne Ruler Authority skill ka bhi use Kiya hu tha warna Mai bhi us black hole me khich chala jata ye dekh kar mai apne man me sochta hu ' Kya incredible strength hai ! '
' Ye to kisi Black hole ke jaise hai. '
' Agar mere paas Ruler's Authority skill nahi hoti to mai bhi abhi tak iske ander khicha chala jata. '


Boommmmm.....

Tabhi mai dekhta hu ki Sandy us Black hole me apni energy dalta hai jaise aur wo golden color ka ring bada hone lagta hai aur end me kuch hi second me wo kafi bada ho jata hai tob Sandy us Gole ko mere taraf full speed me fek deta hai.

Aur palk jpakte hi wo puri factory blast ho jati hai. Ab tak factory ka almost 60 percent hissa kisi kandhar me badal cuka tha. Aur aap sub ko yaha batana cahunga ki ye factory koi choti moti factory nahi thi. Apne time me ye country ki sbse badi factorys me sumar thi.
Ye balast itna jordar tha ki Aisa lagta hai ki 1000+ cylinder fate ho.

Sandy ko chor kar baki sub sochte hai ki mai khtam ho cuka hu. Aur agar Meri jagah koi aur hota to use isase bachne ka koi chance na milta aur wo pakka ya to mara jata ya bahut buri tarah ghyal ho jata.

Lakin meri speed aur reaction timing alg hi level par pahuch cuki hai. Isiliye Mai turant hi apne jagah se hat Gaya th jiske karan mai is attack se bach gaya. Aur is time me factory ke hi roof ke ek tute hue bade se pillor par land karta hu.

Jabki Scavenger Guild ke kafi Hunturs ko chote aayi thi is blast se.

Chandani raat ki roshni me Mai waha khada kafi khatarnak aur attractive lag raha tha. Aur ab waha ka yehaal tha hamari fight ke karan waha pura area maidan me badal cuka tha. Mere piche hi factory ka baki ka Bach hu hissa tha.

Aur jab waha se sari dust hatati hai to sabko mai aur Sandy dikhayi dete hai.

Sandy mere taraf niche se dekhte hue kehta hai " Mai is baar miss nahi karunga. "

Iske baad ek baar fir se hum dono ke body se Kami amount me energy nikalne lagti hai.
Ye dekh kar Scavenger Guild ke kuch old aur powerful Hunters turant waha khade ho kar hum dono ko dekh rahe baki sbhi Hunturs ko chilla kar kehne lagte hai.

" Sare injured Hunters ko yaha se jldi le chalo. "

" Jitna jldi ho sake utna jldi aur master se jitna jyada dur ho sake utna dur ho jao, abhi turant. "


SUUUU...............

Aur agle hi pal Sandy jo ki mujhe hi ektak ghure ja raha tha wo apni jagah se apne ghutno ko halka se bend karta aur kafi speed me ek high jump lagate hue meri taraf upar ki or aane lagta hai.

Mai is time jamin se karib 50 meter ki hight par hounga. Aur itni distance palak jpkte hi Sandy paar kar leta hai. Meri taraf aate hue wo apne left hath se ek punch bana karere ko Marne hi wala hota hai to Mai turant hi uske armour pehne muh ke upar apne right pair ko rakh kar uske kuch karne se phle hi hawa me ek jump laga deta hu.

Lakin wo bhi turant hi apna plan change karke mere taraf apne right hath ko karke kehta hai " Pakad liya. "

Aur ek baar fir se wo apne Psychokinesis skill ka use krte hue mujhe apni taraf khichne ki kosis karta hai.

Jiske jawab me Mai bhi apne left hath ko uski taraf krte hue Ruler's Authority skill ko activate kar deta hu. Jo ki apne full power me thi. Aur iske wajah se Mai Jo ki Sandy ke skill ke karan uski taraf ja raha tha, ab Sandy bhi mere se kai guna jyada speed me mere taraf aane lagta hai. Aur mai apne dusrehath ka punch bana kar Sandy ko Marne ke liye ready ho jata hu.

Sandy jab ye dekhta hai to wo apne MN me sochta hai ' Wo is baar mujhe apne taraf khich rah hai aur wo bhi speed me khich raha hai. '
' kya wo mujhse direct fight Karn cahta hai ? '
' Agar aisi baat hai to mai bhi tmhari ye iccha khusi ke sath pura karunga. '

.itna soch kar Sandy bhi apne left hath ko aage punch ki tarah karke jor se fir kehta hi " REINFORCEMENT "

Aur is baar uska sirf left hath ke upar hi shield ke layer ke upar ek aur shield ka layer ban jata hai. Aur uska left hath phle se double strong ho jat hai. Aur total 8guna strong.


BAMMMM.........

Uske baad Mera aur Sandy ka hath ka mukka ek dusre se takraya hai aur jaisehi ye hota hai hmare hatho ke muuke se waha ek bahut bada energy ka jhtka creat hota hai aur wo charo taraf ek loud sound ke sath fail jata hai.

KAD... KAD... KAD...

Fir uske baad ek aur sound aati hai. Jo ki sayad haddiyo ke tutne ki hoti hai. Aur iske sath hi Sandy mere mukke ke force se piche ki taraf jane lagta hai. Aur uska doubt time shield wae hath se shield kai jagah se buri tarah se crack ho jata hai. Aur kafi damage ho jata hai.

BAAAMMMMM......
Badhammm.......


Tik isi samay meri aur Sandy ki najar ekduare se takrati hai aur is baar mai apne punch ka power increase karke ek punch Sandy ko fir se wahi hawa me Marta hu aur us punch se direct hit hone ke karan Sandy bache hue factory ke hisse ke roof ko toda hua iske ander ghus jata hai ek loud sound ke sath.

Aaahhhh.......

Sandy Factory ke dher me se jor se chillate hue niklta hai. Lakin mai jo ki ab tak niche jamin par aa gaya tha isi baat ka wait karta hu aur mai sidhe ja kar Sandy ko Marne hi wala hota hu ki Sandy mujhe ek punch Marta hai lakin mai usase niche juk kar Bach jata hu.

BISOOM.....

Uske baad Mai niche juke hue hi Sandy ki sir ke upar shield me lage 2 horn ko dono hatho se pakdta hu aur Sandy ke muh me apne left leg ke ghutne se ek jabardast kick maar deta hu. Jiske karan uske face ka shield bhi crack ho jata hai.


Wahi America Hunter association ke sare log ab tak factory aa cuke the. Wo yaha aate hi wo sare niche utar kar samne k najara dekhte hai. Jaha baki ke sare Scavenger Guild ke hunters unhe injured milte hai aur unme jo healer the wo un sub ko heal kar rahe hote hai. Fir bhi sbka dhyan sirf mere aur Sandy ke fight ke upar hi rehta hai.

Ye dekh kr sare Hunters associate Wale bhi hmari fight ki taraf dekhne lagte hai aur samne ka najara dekhte hi unka muh aur aakhe shocked se khusi ki khuli reh jati hai.

Mr. White ka drive bhi Mr. White ke sath ye dekh kr shocked ke sath kehta hai " Hey bhagwan..... ! "
" Aakhir ye dono kis tarah ke monsters hai Jo itni jyada amount me magical energy ko emitte kar rahe hai ? "
" Ye bahut hi khatarnak hai. To aapko such me smbhal ke rehna hoga. "

Uske baad to waha Mai aur Sandy Nirwana light ke speed me ek dusre se yaha waha sidhe fight karne lagte hai. Aur Sandy mere har ek punch se dur ja girta tha.

Mr. White shocked ke sath chillate hue " Wo kya tha ? "
" Agar mai galt nahi hu to wo... "

Mr. White ka driver usase bhi jyada surprise me " Ha wo Sandy Nirwana hi hai. "
( Mr. White ke taraf dekhte hue ) " Mr. White ab hame kya karna cahiye ? "

Mr. White bhi samne dekhte hue " hme kya karn cahiye ? ! Se Tmhara matlab kya hai ! "
" Hme unhe rokna hoga. "

Driver " Hum ? Unhe rokenge ? "
" Aap majak to nahi kar rahe ho ? "
" Hose me to ho na aap ? "
" Master Sandy rider ke hatho pite ja rahe hai. Wo bhi bhut buri tarah se. "

Is time sare log ek big shocked ke sath samne Jo ho raha tha wo dekh rahe the. Kisi ko yakin hi nahi ho Raha tha ki samne jo chal raha hai wo such hai.

Samne Sandy factory ke kandder ke dher par leta pad hua tha. Aur mai uske sine aur pet par apne pairo ke Bal khada uske muh par apne dono hatho se punches barsaye ja raha tha. Jisase waha bas mere khatarnak punches aur Sandy ke dard se chillane ki aawaj hi aa rahi thi.

Sandy Nirwana ka haal bahut bura ho gaya tha uske body par ka shield har jagah se carck ho cuka tha. Us par kai jagah dent pad chuke the. Aur mere se pitate hue bhi wo apne man me soch raha tha.

' Kaise.... '
' Kaise ek mage type Huntur ke paas itni speed aur strength ho skti hai ? '
' Mai.... Kya Mai haarne wala hu ? '
' Aisa nahi ho skta hai. '
' Nahi, aisa nahi ho skta hai. '
' Jab koi mujhe niche dabata hai ya bully karta hai use uski jagah dikhana use harana yahi to chij mujhe, mai banati hai. '

Bas itna sub sochte hue Sandy apne sari himmat juta kar itne time Tak pitane ke baad bhi chillate hue apne pairo par khada hota hai aur jor se gusse me meri taraf dekhte hue kehta hai " Mai Sandy Nirwana hu. "
" Tum kya sochte ho, bas itna kuch karke tum mujhe Hara doge. "


BISOOM....
BAAAMMMMM.....


Lakin uski baat khtam hone tak mai apni jagah se ek jump laga kar uske piche aa jata hu aur uske sir par apne right elbow se ek jordar aur powerful punch marte hue kehta hu " Maine tmne phle hi kaha tha na, tmhe yaad nahi hai kya ? "
" Isase farak nahi padta hai ki tum kon ho ? "

Ye kehte hue Mai wapas se Sandy ke uper ek punch Marne hi wala hota hi hu ki Dur khada Mr. White chilla kar kehta hai " Hunter Rider ruk jaiye. "
" Please Ruk jaiye. "


BISOOM.... Crack....

BISOOM.... Crack....
BISOOM.... Crack....
BISOOM.... Crack....


Lakin mai is baat ko najarandaj karte hue wapas se Sandy ke upar ab tak ke sbse powerful punches Marne lagta hu. Aur is baar ke mere har ek punches ke padte hi Waha ka shield puri tarah se Tut jata aur Sandy ki waha ki body exposed hoti ja Rahi thi. Aisa karte hue maine Sandy ke almost upper body se pura shield hata hi Diya tha. Aur mai ek aur mukka use Marne hi wala hota hu ki tabhi Sandy Nirwana aakhirkar dard aur nirasa se kehta hai " Ye khtam ho gaya. "
" Mai haar Manta hu. "

Ye sun kar Mai apne punch ko rok leta hu. Aur Sandy ko

chor deta hu.













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UPDATE NO - 147
TAKING DOWN WORLD'S NO. 1 HUNTER




AB AAGE.......




Factory ki taraf aane Wale raste ke highway par is time kafi sari aur black car full speed me factory ki taraf aane me lagi Hui thi. Unhi gadiyo me se ek me Mr. White back seat par baithe hue the. Aur unka driver full speed me gadi ko bhgaye ja Raha tha.


Driver jo ki baki sabhi ki tarah ek black nd white suit uniform me tha wo serious tone me car drive krte hue piche baithe Mr. White se puchta hai " Mr. Kya aap is samay mujhe bata skte hai ki aakhir yaha ho kya raha hai ? "

Mr. White apni seat se window se bahar ki taraf dekhte hue kehta hai " Abhi itna time nahi hai ki mai tmko sari bate detailed me smjha saku. "

Driver rear mirror se Mr.white ko dekhte hue aage kehta hai " Aakhir chal kya Raha hai ? "
" Mere ek normal civilian hone ke karan sayad aap mujhe nahi bata rahe hai, lakin... Agar hum yaha se aage gaye to hum hmari life ko risk me daal rahe hai. "
" Ye baad yaad rakhiega. "



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IN FACTORY, USA


Wahi factory me Mai, Sandy ko dekhte hue is time me soch raha tha....
Is duniya me total 4 human's hai Jo Rulers ki strength borrow karte hai.
Aur sayad wo wahi 5 logo me se hai Jo Kamish Raid se jinda bach paye the.
Aur wahi 4 log " National Level Rank Huntur kehlate hai. "
Aur Sandy Nirwana unse alag nahi hai. Wo bhi unme se ek hai.

Mai ye sub is liyesoch raha tha quki Sandy Nirwana ke REINFORCEMENT kehte hi uski body change hone lagi. Uske puri body par ek armour type ka kawach ban Gaya. Uske log hair ab aise ho gaye the jaise unse fire nikal Rahi ho. Wo kisi aag ke jaise lag rahe the. Uske pure body yaha tak ki face par bhi ek bahut hi strong kawach type kuch ban Gaya tha. Uska size bhi phle se 1.5 Guna ho gaya tha.
Uske chlne se uske pairo ke niche ki jamin buri tarah se Tutati ja rahi thi.

Ab wo bikul alag hi person najar aa rah tha. Wo koi human to lag hi nahi Raha tha. Aur ab uski confidance ek alag hi level par tha. Uska attitude bikul change ho cuka tha. Wo slowly slowly chalte hue mere taraf aa raha tha.


RUN.....

Mai uske taraf speed me AK baar fir se attack karne jata hu. Aur mujhe apne paas aata hua dekh kar wo is baar turant hi apne dono hatho ko hawa me utha kar mujhe buri taraf Marne wala tha ki mai aakhiri moment par ye dekh leta hu. Aur mujhe ye samjh me aa jata hai ye attack phle ke attacks se bikul alag hi level ka hai.
Aur ye smjh kar Mai turant hi apne jagah se jump laga kar waha se hat jata hu. Jiska pata sayad Sandy ko bhi nahi lag pata hai.


BAAAMMMMM....
BAAAMMMMM......


Lakin Sandy ka attack mere hatane ke karan niche jamin par j lagta hai aur waha jaise koi bhukamp sa aa jata hai. Waha ki almost 100 meter ki jamin buri tarah se Tut jati hai. Aur jiske karan FACTORY ki dilwale aur waha lage hue Machine sub Tut kar ya apna santulan kho kar idhar udhar girne lagti hai.
Aur jaha Sandy ne apne donk hatho se mara tha waha ki 15-20 metart ki jamin ka to aur bhi bura haal hota hai.
Waha I jamin Tut kar bade chote tukdo me itni jyada force se hawa me kai meter upar tak uad jate hai.

Mai abhi bhi hawa me jamp lagaye hue ye sub hota hua dekh Raha tha. Ki tabhi ek baar fir se Sandy apne right hath ko mere taraf karke apne Psychokinesis skill ka use krte hue ek blackhole type kuch banata hai jo mujhe apni taraf phle se kai times jyada force se khichne lagta hai.
Wo blackhole ka centre to bikul black tha but uske side me golden color ka ring bana hu tha. Jo dekhne me kafi terrifying lag raha tha.

Wahi hum dono ke aas paas fight kar rahe Scavenger Guild ke kuch hunters jab ye dekhte hai to unme se ek chilla kar turant hi sbko kehta hai " Master se dur bhago. "
" Jaldi Karo. "
" Master se jitn ho sake utna dur ho jao. "

Ye sun kar sare Hunturs ur shadows ke bich ki fight band ho jati hai. Aur Scavenger Guild ke hunters jo hmare paas fight kar rahe the. Wo jldi se hmlogo se ur ek safe distance par bhagne lagte hai. Wo subhi Hunturs kafi jyada dare nd shocked' lag rahe the. Sayad unme se almost sbne Sandy ka ye roop 1st time dekha tha.

Mere shadow soldiers jo ki hmare paas se to us black hole me khiche chle Jane lagte hai. Sirf mere shadow soldiers hi nahi blki aas paas ke sare saman, instument weapons building materials baki sub bhi us black hole me Jane lagte hai.

Wahi mai jo ki is time factory ke hi ek piller ko majbuti se pakade latka hua tha sath me Maine apne Ruler Authority skill ka bhi use Kiya hu tha warna Mai bhi us black hole me khich chala jata ye dekh kar mai apne man me sochta hu ' Kya incredible strength hai ! '
' Ye to kisi Black hole ke jaise hai. '
' Agar mere paas Ruler's Authority skill nahi hoti to mai bhi abhi tak iske ander khicha chala jata. '


Boommmmm.....

Tabhi mai dekhta hu ki Sandy us Black hole me apni energy dalta hai jaise aur wo golden color ka ring bada hone lagta hai aur end me kuch hi second me wo kafi bada ho jata hai tob Sandy us Gole ko mere taraf full speed me fek deta hai.

Aur palk jpakte hi wo puri factory blast ho jati hai. Ab tak factory ka almost 60 percent hissa kisi kandhar me badal cuka tha. Aur aap sub ko yaha batana cahunga ki ye factory koi choti moti factory nahi thi. Apne time me ye country ki sbse badi factorys me sumar thi.
Ye balast itna jordar tha ki Aisa lagta hai ki 1000+ cylinder fate ho.

Sandy ko chor kar baki sub sochte hai ki mai khtam ho cuka hu. Aur agar Meri jagah koi aur hota to use isase bachne ka koi chance na milta aur wo pakka ya to mara jata ya bahut buri tarah ghyal ho jata.

Lakin meri speed aur reaction timing alg hi level par pahuch cuki hai. Isiliye Mai turant hi apne jagah se hat Gaya th jiske karan mai is attack se bach gaya. Aur is time me factory ke hi roof ke ek tute hue bade se pillor par land karta hu.

Jabki Scavenger Guild ke kafi Hunturs ko chote aayi thi is blast se.

Chandani raat ki roshni me Mai waha khada kafi khatarnak aur attractive lag raha tha. Aur ab waha ka yehaal tha hamari fight ke karan waha pura area maidan me badal cuka tha. Mere piche hi factory ka baki ka Bach hu hissa tha.

Aur jab waha se sari dust hatati hai to sabko mai aur Sandy dikhayi dete hai.

Sandy mere taraf niche se dekhte hue kehta hai " Mai is baar miss nahi karunga. "

Iske baad ek baar fir se hum dono ke body se Kami amount me energy nikalne lagti hai.
Ye dekh kar Scavenger Guild ke kuch old aur powerful Hunters turant waha khade ho kar hum dono ko dekh rahe baki sbhi Hunturs ko chilla kar kehne lagte hai.

" Sare injured Hunters ko yaha se jldi le chalo. "

" Jitna jldi ho sake utna jldi aur master se jitna jyada dur ho sake utna dur ho jao, abhi turant. "


SUUUU...............

Aur agle hi pal Sandy jo ki mujhe hi ektak ghure ja raha tha wo apni jagah se apne ghutno ko halka se bend karta aur kafi speed me ek high jump lagate hue meri taraf upar ki or aane lagta hai.

Mai is time jamin se karib 50 meter ki hight par hounga. Aur itni distance palak jpkte hi Sandy paar kar leta hai. Meri taraf aate hue wo apne left hath se ek punch bana karere ko Marne hi wala hota hai to Mai turant hi uske armour pehne muh ke upar apne right pair ko rakh kar uske kuch karne se phle hi hawa me ek jump laga deta hu.

Lakin wo bhi turant hi apna plan change karke mere taraf apne right hath ko karke kehta hai " Pakad liya. "

Aur ek baar fir se wo apne Psychokinesis skill ka use krte hue mujhe apni taraf khichne ki kosis karta hai.

Jiske jawab me Mai bhi apne left hath ko uski taraf krte hue Ruler's Authority skill ko activate kar deta hu. Jo ki apne full power me thi. Aur iske wajah se Mai Jo ki Sandy ke skill ke karan uski taraf ja raha tha, ab Sandy bhi mere se kai guna jyada speed me mere taraf aane lagta hai. Aur mai apne dusrehath ka punch bana kar Sandy ko Marne ke liye ready ho jata hu.

Sandy jab ye dekhta hai to wo apne MN me sochta hai ' Wo is baar mujhe apne taraf khich rah hai aur wo bhi speed me khich raha hai. '
' kya wo mujhse direct fight Karn cahta hai ? '
' Agar aisi baat hai to mai bhi tmhari ye iccha khusi ke sath pura karunga. '

.itna soch kar Sandy bhi apne left hath ko aage punch ki tarah karke jor se fir kehta hi " REINFORCEMENT "

Aur is baar uska sirf left hath ke upar hi shield ke layer ke upar ek aur shield ka layer ban jata hai. Aur uska left hath phle se double strong ho jat hai. Aur total 8guna strong.


BAMMMM.........

Uske baad Mera aur Sandy ka hath ka mukka ek dusre se takraya hai aur jaisehi ye hota hai hmare hatho ke muuke se waha ek bahut bada energy ka jhtka creat hota hai aur wo charo taraf ek loud sound ke sath fail jata hai.

KAD... KAD... KAD...

Fir uske baad ek aur sound aati hai. Jo ki sayad haddiyo ke tutne ki hoti hai. Aur iske sath hi Sandy mere mukke ke force se piche ki taraf jane lagta hai. Aur uska doubt time shield wae hath se shield kai jagah se buri tarah se crack ho jata hai. Aur kafi damage ho jata hai.

BAAAMMMMM......
Badhammm.......


Tik isi samay meri aur Sandy ki najar ekduare se takrati hai aur is baar mai apne punch ka power increase karke ek punch Sandy ko fir se wahi hawa me Marta hu aur us punch se direct hit hone ke karan Sandy bache hue factory ke hisse ke roof ko toda hua iske ander ghus jata hai ek loud sound ke sath.

Aaahhhh.......

Sandy Factory ke dher me se jor se chillate hue niklta hai. Lakin mai jo ki ab tak niche jamin par aa gaya tha isi baat ka wait karta hu aur mai sidhe ja kar Sandy ko Marne hi wala hota hu ki Sandy mujhe ek punch Marta hai lakin mai usase niche juk kar Bach jata hu.

BISOOM.....

Uske baad Mai niche juke hue hi Sandy ki sir ke upar shield me lage 2 horn ko dono hatho se pakdta hu aur Sandy ke muh me apne left leg ke ghutne se ek jabardast kick maar deta hu. Jiske karan uske face ka shield bhi crack ho jata hai.


Wahi America Hunter association ke sare log ab tak factory aa cuke the. Wo yaha aate hi wo sare niche utar kar samne k najara dekhte hai. Jaha baki ke sare Scavenger Guild ke hunters unhe injured milte hai aur unme jo healer the wo un sub ko heal kar rahe hote hai. Fir bhi sbka dhyan sirf mere aur Sandy ke fight ke upar hi rehta hai.

Ye dekh kr sare Hunters associate Wale bhi hmari fight ki taraf dekhne lagte hai aur samne ka najara dekhte hi unka muh aur aakhe shocked se khusi ki khuli reh jati hai.

Mr. White ka drive bhi Mr. White ke sath ye dekh kr shocked ke sath kehta hai " Hey bhagwan..... ! "
" Aakhir ye dono kis tarah ke monsters hai Jo itni jyada amount me magical energy ko emitte kar rahe hai ? "
" Ye bahut hi khatarnak hai. To aapko such me smbhal ke rehna hoga. "

Uske baad to waha Mai aur Sandy Nirwana light ke speed me ek dusre se yaha waha sidhe fight karne lagte hai. Aur Sandy mere har ek punch se dur ja girta tha.

Mr. White shocked ke sath chillate hue " Wo kya tha ? "
" Agar mai galt nahi hu to wo... "

Mr. White ka driver usase bhi jyada surprise me " Ha wo Sandy Nirwana hi hai. "
( Mr. White ke taraf dekhte hue ) " Mr. White ab hame kya karna cahiye ? "

Mr. White bhi samne dekhte hue " hme kya karn cahiye ? ! Se Tmhara matlab kya hai ! "
" Hme unhe rokna hoga. "

Driver " Hum ? Unhe rokenge ? "
" Aap majak to nahi kar rahe ho ? "
" Hose me to ho na aap ? "
" Master Sandy rider ke hatho pite ja rahe hai. Wo bhi bhut buri tarah se. "

Is time sare log ek big shocked ke sath samne Jo ho raha tha wo dekh rahe the. Kisi ko yakin hi nahi ho Raha tha ki samne jo chal raha hai wo such hai.

Samne Sandy factory ke kandder ke dher par leta pad hua tha. Aur mai uske sine aur pet par apne pairo ke Bal khada uske muh par apne dono hatho se punches barsaye ja raha tha. Jisase waha bas mere khatarnak punches aur Sandy ke dard se chillane ki aawaj hi aa rahi thi.

Sandy Nirwana ka haal bahut bura ho gaya tha uske body par ka shield har jagah se carck ho cuka tha. Us par kai jagah dent pad chuke the. Aur mere se pitate hue bhi wo apne man me soch raha tha.

' Kaise.... '
' Kaise ek mage type Huntur ke paas itni speed aur strength ho skti hai ? '
' Mai.... Kya Mai haarne wala hu ? '
' Aisa nahi ho skta hai. '
' Nahi, aisa nahi ho skta hai. '
' Jab koi mujhe niche dabata hai ya bully karta hai use uski jagah dikhana use harana yahi to chij mujhe, mai banati hai. '

Bas itna sub sochte hue Sandy apne sari himmat juta kar itne time Tak pitane ke baad bhi chillate hue apne pairo par khada hota hai aur jor se gusse me meri taraf dekhte hue kehta hai " Mai Sandy Nirwana hu. "
" Tum kya sochte ho, bas itna kuch karke tum mujhe Hara doge. "


BISOOM....
BAAAMMMMM.....


Lakin uski baat khtam hone tak mai apni jagah se ek jump laga kar uske piche aa jata hu aur uske sir par apne right elbow se ek jordar aur powerful punch marte hue kehta hu " Maine tmne phle hi kaha tha na, tmhe yaad nahi hai kya ? "
" Isase farak nahi padta hai ki tum kon ho ? "

Ye kehte hue Mai wapas se Sandy ke uper ek punch Marne hi wala hota hi hu ki Dur khada Mr. White chilla kar kehta hai " Hunter Rider ruk jaiye. "
" Please Ruk jaiye. "


BISOOM.... Crack....

BISOOM.... Crack....
BISOOM.... Crack....
BISOOM.... Crack....


Lakin mai is baat ko najarandaj karte hue wapas se Sandy ke upar ab tak ke sbse powerful punches Marne lagta hu. Aur is baar ke mere har ek punches ke padte hi Waha ka shield puri tarah se Tut jata aur Sandy ki waha ki body exposed hoti ja Rahi thi. Aisa karte hue maine Sandy ke almost upper body se pura shield hata hi Diya tha. Aur mai ek aur mukka use Marne hi wala hota hu ki tabhi Sandy Nirwana aakhirkar dard aur nirasa se kehta hai " Ye khtam ho gaya. "
" Mai haar Manta hu. "

Ye sun kar Mai apne punch ko rok leta hu. Aur Sandy ko

chor deta hu.













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jo bhi mujhe like ke liye bate bana raha hai. un logo ko bata du bhai aaj ke time me kuch bhi free nahi hai. aur mere update bich me kyu ruke the wo mostly logo ko pata hi hai aur nahi hai to bata du meri small siste r ki marrige thi to usme almost sare arrengment maine hi kiye the. then mera major accident hua jiske karan mere dono hatho me plaster laga tha. ab kahi ja kar mai 80 percent recover ho paya hu. uske baad bhi life me aur bhi bahut chije hoti hai jo is story se mere liye bahut hi impotant hai.
aur aap log kud ja kar check kar lo update diye kuch hi hour hue hai but 45+ likes aa cuke hai. jabki normal itne like 3-4 din me aata hai. to aisa kyu hota hai bhai. quki mostly reader read karke nikal lete hai to jab bhai read kiye pasand aaya to like kyu nahi kar skte ek reason bata do ?
quki wo apna 2-3 second bhi kharch nahi karna cahte hai like dene ke liye. aur yaha hum kai kai hour laga kar ek update likhte hai to aise me like ki demand kyu na rakhe. jinhe bhi problem hai mere like ke demand se wo na bhi read krenge story to mujhe fark nahi padega. merew paas genuion 5 reader bhi honge to mai sirf unse bahut happy hounga. aur aise reader kon hai mai unko ache se janta hu to sirf itna hi wapas se kahunga apna muft ka advice apne paas rakhe.
story se releted to comment kabhi nahi karenge. lakin like ka target kya rakh diya sub comment karne aa gaye.
Update bahot hi acha tha Bhai jab bhi mauka mile update dena and ache se recover Karo get well soon bro
 
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jo bhi mujhe like ke liye bate bana raha hai. un logo ko bata du bhai aaj ke time me kuch bhi free nahi hai. aur mere update bich me kyu ruke the wo mostly logo ko pata hi hai aur nahi hai to bata du meri small siste r ki marrige thi to usme almost sare arrengment maine hi kiye the. then mera major accident hua jiske karan mere dono hatho me plaster laga tha. ab kahi ja kar mai 80 percent recover ho paya hu. uske baad bhi life me aur bhi bahut chije hoti hai jo is story se mere liye bahut hi impotant hai.
aur aap log kud ja kar check kar lo update diye kuch hi hour hue hai but 45+ likes aa cuke hai. jabki normal itne like 3-4 din me aata hai. to aisa kyu hota hai bhai. quki mostly reader read karke nikal lete hai to jab bhai read kiye pasand aaya to like kyu nahi kar skte ek reason bata do ?
quki wo apna 2-3 second bhi kharch nahi karna cahte hai like dene ke liye. aur yaha hum kai kai hour laga kar ek update likhte hai to aise me like ki demand kyu na rakhe. jinhe bhi problem hai mere like ke demand se wo na bhi read krenge story to mujhe fark nahi padega. merew paas genuion 5 reader bhi honge to mai sirf unse bahut happy hounga. aur aise reader kon hai mai unko ache se janta hu to sirf itna hi wapas se kahunga apna muft ka advice apne paas rakhe.
story se releted to comment kabhi nahi karenge. lakin like ka target kya rakh diya sub comment karne aa gaye.
Sorry bhai lagta hain kuchh jada salha de diya mene bhi. Ok bhai ab se no salha bhai👍👍
 

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UPDATE NO - 147 post kar diya hai dosto.
Read ne enjoy it.
Aur ha ab se wapas se aap sub logo ke comments ka reply milega. To story se releted jo bhi quarry hai wo aap puch skte hai. But obviously future me kya hoga uske bare me nahi bataunga. :slap:
Very Nice Fantastic And Excellent Update Bhai
Majedar Bhai Sandy nirwan ki to achhi dhulai karwa di
Maine ye story Puri read ki hui English font me lekin jo mja Hindi me padhne me aata hai Utna English me nhi aaya
 
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