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bhai log mera chota sa accident ho gya
mere hath me fecthar ho gya
es liye me update or online nahi aa paya
aap sab se me mafi chauga...
me right hend se likhta hu
or usi hath se likhte nahi ban raha
jese hi me thik hota hu
me online aa kar update de duga dost...
tab tak ke liye muche maf kijiyega..
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2-3 rukiye,.. tum month kaha humne to din samjhe theI am sorry ye end nahi hai bhai..
Meri ek bhi story adhuri nahi hai...
Me ek line likhne me 10 minutes lag rahe hai..
Muche se left hend se likhte nahi banta..
Es liye 2 3 rukiye me fir se pahle jesa updates de duga...









nice update
Badhiya update bhai....great writing skills
Jalim?? kisika nam jalim nahi ho sakta, come on...Kya bakwas
Bhai maine ie nahi kaha ke story bakwas hai, ie jalim naam bakwas si lag raha hai, kaun mata pita apna beta ka naam jalim rakhega? Facebook ki bat alag hai, idme koi bhi apna nam kuch bhi dal sakte hai. Bhai ek fact samjho jo story jitna real lage usko utna padne me interest ata hai. Jaise ie nam absurd hai real nahi lag rahe, aur lower class admi ke muh me english word na hi dalo, koi reader story padte waqt pura scene visualise karte hai ie sab hone se dikkat ho jate hai thoda, anyway ie bas ek suggestion thi. Baki tumare marji..Keep writing, waiting for next update..
Nice
Good
Waiting update
No updates??
पढ़ कर दुख हुआ कि आपका एक्सीडेंट हुआ,
मेरी प्रार्थना रहेगी कि आप जल्द स्वस्थ हो जाए।
जब आप पूरी तरह से ठीक हो जाए तो पहले की तरह ही धमाकेदार अपडेट देना शुरू कर दिजीएगा।
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Update
2-3 rukiye,.. tum month kaha humne to din samjhe the
update post please chekIntazar