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Thanks johar ji..bahut badhiya update! bahut accha likhte h bhai aap, kahaani sahi disha mien jaa rahe hain
kgb bhai aap ka me rah dil se sukriya jiwow bro wow!! What a wonderfully narrated update. your narrative description is just fantastic and mind blowing. you never leave a single detail in your narration, this is the part I admire in your writing. you are just awesome my dear. Hats off
thanks Harriet bhaikia update likha hai apne bhai ,ekdom kamaal hai kamal
bahut hi majedaar aur fadu update hai yeh bhai
bahut hi maja aya padhkar bhai
shukriya to muche aap ka karna chahiye ki aap ko ye story etni pasand aa rahi hai..kia ek kahaani likha hai aapne,dhamaal machaane wali hai mujhe lagta hai
aur aap ka bahut shukriya hamare liye itne ache kahani ikhne ke liye
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Bhut hi mast aur majedaar update, ekdom mast aur fadu kahaani. Thanks very much. Eise hi likhte raho bhai.
superb! bahut bahut mast update, lajawab kahaani
Thanks too all firendMIND BLOWING UPDATE
sumit bhai abhi to kahani suru hue hai..