Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

Ristrcted · Apr 11, 2020

Hi friend maine xforum pr kafi stories padi hai aur ab mai bhi apni ek story post karne ja raha hu ab jyada wakt na lete huye
story p chalte h jaise jaise log milte rahenge unke bare m batata jaunga .
so lets go

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Amir · Apr 16, 2020

Bro jHa Tak apne post Kiya tha us say agy kr do na plz

Ristrcted · Apr 16, 2020

Amir said:
Bro jHa Tak apne post Kiya tha us say agy kr do na plz

update ready h pr agar isko abhi post kiya to reader ko hi dikat hogi q ki sequence bigad jaayega na agar aap bas aaj raat wait kr lo to main subah tk saare updates new update k sath post kr dunga

Amir · Apr 16, 2020

Ristrcted said:
update ready h pr agar isko abhi post kiya to reader ko hi dikat hogi q ki sequence bigad jaayega na agar aap bas aaj raat wait kr lo to main subah tk saare updates new update k sath post kr dunga

ok bro I am waiting . Apki store bohat achai hai plz isy pora zaror krna

Agent lucifer · Apr 16, 2020

Bro baki k updates de 2 jo delete ho gae hein

Vickey1211 · Apr 16, 2020

Ristrcted said:
update ready h pr agar isko abhi post kiya to reader ko hi dikat hogi q ki sequence bigad jaayega na agar aap bas aaj raat wait kr lo to main subah tk saare updates new update k sath post kr dunga

OK bhai

Ristrcted · Apr 17, 2020

UPDATE - 5

New characters -:
Agent02-Sameera RAW m meri phli dost.Ye ek tech expert hai aur reverse engineer bhi.Iska dimag hamesa garam rahta hai

Agent06-Sameer,Sameera ka chota bhai ye hamare team ka weaponary expert hai ye bandi har tarah k weapons chala sakta hai

Agent05-Ritvik,Sameera k premi.Dono lambe samay s relation m hai aur shadi krna chahte hai. ye ek mast shooter hai aur sath hi hamare group ka local support provider bhi hai iske bahut connections hai saale ko saare info mil jate hai

ABTAK

Main headquater m pahucha aur Sameera k paas chala gaya jo interogation room m baithi thi ki tabhi mera phone baja.

AAGE

Phone mom ka tha maine pick kiya
Mom - tu kaha hai aur ghar q nhi aaya
Main-mom main abhi apne school k dost k ghar p hu sham tk wapas aa jaunga
Mom-thik h pr aapna dhyan rakhna.
Main-ok mom
call cut
Sameera-Arre yaar tum na thoda bahar jao tb tk main iski puchtach krti hu jb ye kuch batane layak ho jayega to tumhe bulla lungi.
Main - Thik hai pr pyar s samajh rahi ho na
Sameera- Ha baba pyar s hi karungi ab tum jao aur kisi ko bol mera red toolbox yaha pahuchwa dena
Main - ok
itna bol main interogation room s nikal aaya aur ek agent ko Sameera ka saman bejne bol diya

Chaliye dekhte hai kya ho raha hai .

Sameera k hath m ek file thi jisse wo dekh rahi thi wahi uske bagal m uska tool box pada hua tha .
Sameera (Aadmi s)-Ha to Buntty main ab tere bare m jo bhi mujhe pata hai wo bataungi agar kuch galat ho to tu mere baat khatam hone p usse sudhar dena.
Fir Sameera n uske saare kukarm usse bataye jaise rapes , murder aur kidnaping etc.
Buntty ye sab sun aur khus ho gaya aur to aur saala bola
Buntty - jitne bhi rape aur murder cases hai na un sab ki ginti bada do q ki yaha s nikalte hi tera aur teri family k sath....aaaaaahhaaaah
Abhi Buntty apna line complete karta usse pahle hi Sameera n usko ek jor ka lafa maara
Sameera - rape ka bada saukh hai na tujhe chal m ab main bhi dekhti hu kitna dum h tere m
Itna bol Sameera n projector on kr usme porn chala di aur apne haath m ek carbon ka rod le liya. phir kya tha Buntty ka hatiyar khada hua aur madam ji n uske maar maar k bitha dia. Sayad issi ko KLPD kahte hai.Buntty dard s chillata raha pr sameera ko to aisa karne m maza aa raha tha ussne lagbhag Buntty ka pura sharir maar maar k sujja diya.
Fir mujhe call kr k ander aane ko kaha. Ander aate hi
Main: kya ye ready h jawab dene ko.
Sameera : tu puch k to dekh ready h ya nahi.
Main- (buntty ko apna photo dikha k) chal bata kon hai ye aur q maarna chahta hai isse
Bunnty: Mere ko bas itna pata hai k iska naam Deep hai aur ye mere boss ka dusman h issiliye boss n isse marne ko bola h
Jab maine aur sameera n ye jawab sunna to ek dusre ko dekhne lage.
Main: Chal apne boss k bare m bata.
Buntty : tumlog kabhi bos tk nahi pahuch payoge unko kisi n nahi dekha hai wo to bus phone s operate krte hai.Koi unko nahi pahchanta
Main(Sameera s) - iske phone ko chek karo aur dekho koi aisa no jisse isse akshar call aate aur isse khatam kro ye saala kutta aur kuch nahi janta
Itna bol main room s wapas aane laga aur Sameera apne haath m apni ninja blade le chuki thi. Mere bahar aane k kuch der baad Sameera bhi Bunnty ka phone liye bahar aayi aur ek agent ko room saaf krne bol apne computer room ki or chal padi aur main bhi uske piche ho liya.

Sameera n phone ko apne system s connect kiya kuch der ki mehnat k baad uske haath 2 private no lage jinse aksar phone aate the aur call time 3 min s jyada ka nhi hota tha.Aisa tabhi hota hai jab koi kisi s bas kaam ki baat kare usne mujhe wo dono no bataye pr yaha pr dikkat ye hui ki koi bhi aera-gaira iss no ko locate nhi kr skta tha.

Pr Sameera k liye ye koi badi baat nahi thi usne kuch hi pal m dono no k phone k IMEI no ka pata laga liya aur mujhse pucha.
Sameera - ye 2 no alag alag no hai sayad iske 2 boss ho. main abhi inhe locate krti hu

Main - Abhi nahi abhi hame kahi aur jana hai aur tumhe waha bada mazza ayega .
Sameera - sach m. Aaj to meri chandi hi chandi h chalo jaldi s batao kaha jana hai aur kya kaam hai.
Main - Kuch der phle khabar milli hai k kuch log Goa airport p utre hai jo koi bada deal karne jaa rahe hai ajr isme 2no group k leader bhi honge
Sameera - to unko uddana hai na thik hai main ready hu chalo.
Main - kya chalo, Meri Janshi ki rani hm unko uddayege pr puch tach k baad. pahle jao Sameer aur Ritvik ko bula k au tb tk hame deal ki location k pata chal jayega. Karib 30 minute baad sabhi aa gai aur hame deal ki location bhi pata chal gai jo ki ek band padi purani sugar factory thi Shivpur mai. Hamne apna plan bana liya.

Time - 4:37

Kuch cars shivpur k ussi sugar factory m gate p rukki.Usme s karib 12 log nikle sare k sare ek dum hadde-gadde shivaye ek k aur issi ek k hath m 2 suitcases thi .
Ye aadmi bakio k sath factory k ander aaya . Ek taraf ek bada s table rakha tha jiske pass 3 log khade the aur us table k ek end p ek chair p ek banda baitha hua tha .
Abhi iska chahra table k piche ki or tha abhi bas uski ek lal colour ki topi hi dikh rahi thi bus. Tbhi wo suitcase wala banda waha aata hai aur thik uske saamne lage chir p baith jaata hai aur bolta hai.
Aadmi- Guddu, maal ready hai to dikha mere ko yaha s niklna bhi hai.
Us aadmi ka itna bolna tha k jo 3 log khade the unhone table p 2 bade - bade bags rakh diye. Unke zip ko khol k dikhaya bags m drugs bhare the.
Aadmi - ye to thik hai Guddu pr weapons kaha hai wo bhi to dikhao.
Fir s tino m s ek waha s chalta hua ek room k pass gaya aur gate khola ander andera tha to usne waha k light k swich ko o kiya pr ye kya light on hote hi suitcase wale aadmi k sath aaye sare logo k bheje s goliya paar ho gai aur wo Nark shidhar gaye.
Jaise hi suitcase wale aadmi n ye dekha usne turant apni pistol nikali pr tb tk der ho chuki thi kisi n uske face p koi spray maar diya tha jisse wo behosh ho gaya.

Chaliye inko chod chalte hai jungle m bane aashrm m

Yaha p aaj sabhi log bade khus najar aa rahe .2 log aapas m baat kr rahe h

Sadhu1-Mitr aaj to chamatkar hi ho gaya wo jo 2 log pichle 17 saalo s behosh pade h aaj achank unke sarir m partikiya hui h unke aakhon s aashu gir rahe the.
Sadhu2-mitr ye to chinta ka visay h k unke aakhon s aasu gir rahe the sayad unhe dard ho raha ho
Sadhu1 - arre mitr tumhe Gurudev ki baat yaad nhi kya ki ukne sarir m tab hi koi pratikriya hogi jab hmare mashiha ko uski shaktiyo ka aabhash hoga.
Sadhu2-yaad aaya mitr matlab ab kuch hi waqt shesh rah gaya h hmare dukho ka

Sadhu1- haa mitr haa.

Aur dono aise hi chal dete hai waha s .

Hm bhi chalte hai Saayon ki duniya m.

Yaha p ek bahut hi bade aur sundar mahal hai. Mahal k darbar m ek bada sha singhasan hai uske aage ek chota sa singhashan hai jispe ek budha saaya baita hua kuch soch raha hai.
Tabhi waha p ek aur saaya prkat hota h aur bolta h

Saaya-Maharaj Hamare malik ki shaktiya jaag rahi h.

Maharaj(phle to khush ho phir pareshan ho kr)-pr abhi to waqt hua nhi hai agar ye abhi hogaya to unke pran sankat m pad sakte hai. ek kaam karo un tino(inke baare m aage pata chalega) ko unki shurakha aur kadi krne ko bolo Sena Nayak.
Saaya(Sena Nayak)-maine unhe purv hi eske aadesh d diye h aur aap bhijante hai wo tino Malik ko kuch nhi hone denge.
Fir Maharaj Sena Nayak ko kisi s mil kr baat krne ko khte h aur usse waha s bhej dete hai

Rocky2602 · Apr 17, 2020

Ristrcted · Apr 17, 2020

Update- 6

NEW CHARACTERS
Gurudev(phle k episode walle) -Rishi Gautam ye ek vaidya hai jo apne aashram jo ki jungle m hai jiska naam kalp-aashrm h waha rah kr logo ki madad krte hai

ABTAK
Shivpur m sugar factory m pahuche suitcase wale aadmi k logo ki maut ho chuki thi aur wo behosh tha

AAGE

Chaliye ab dekhte hai aakhir shivpur k sugar factory m hua kya tha.

Time-1:37
Main meri team k sath jo ki kul 16 logo ki thi nikl pade shivpur ki taraf aapne plan ko aanjam dene.Hum log factory s kuch dur phle hi utar gaye aur Sameera n apne insect Camera s waha k baare pata lagaya.
Ander kul 25 log the 2 log gate p khade the 5 log ek room m chair s bandhe hue the ek bandha table k paas k kursi p baitha kisi s baat kr raha tha aur baaki k saare waha p bag m drugs aur weapon pack kr rahe the.
Phone p baat kr rhe aadmi n call cut kiya aur un 5 logo ki taraf badh gaya aur unme s ek k kanpati p banduk laga k bola.
Aadmi - Bola tha na tere ko ki apan k raste m nhi asne ka pr tu saala imandarri ki dukan nahi mani meri baat ab dekh tere samne kaise phle tere ghar k ladkiyon ko masalta hu phir aapne logo s masalwaata aur fir inko maarta hu.Tu saala kuch bhi nhi kr payega inspector.
{5 logo m ek inspector ,ek 40 saal k karib ka aadmi , ek aurat jo sayad uski biwi ho aur do jawan khubshurat ladkiyan thi }
Inspector- Dekh Guddu ye mamla mere aur tere bich ka hai inhe chod de aur mujhse lad agar mard ka baccha hai to.
Guddu-Mard ka bachha to apun h aur ye baat abhi inka rape tere samne kr proof karta hai apun.
Itna bol wo apna hath aage badane ko ho jaata hai par achanak s ek talwar aati hai aur uske haath ko kohni tk kaat deti hai jis wajah s wo dard s chikhne lagta aur aapne aadmiyon ko bulane lagta hai
Guddu-are madhar***d haath kaat diya re apun ka behen***d arre kaha mar gaye saare log (meri taraf dekh)bhadwo ye ander kaise aagaya. Kon hai be tu madar***d apun ka hath q kata bahen***d.
Main- aur chilla chilla k bula apne saathiyon ko pr wo ab tere paas nhi aayenge tere ko hi jana padega unke paas.
Maine abhi itna bola tha k room m mere teammates ki entry hui.
Kisi k haath m gun to koi talwar aur khanjar liye khada tha.Sabhi k sharir khun k nishan s bhare pade the.Sameera k talwar p abhi bhi kisi ka bhejha chipka hua tha.Maine abhitak un 5 ko dhyan s dekha bhi nhi tha aur wo saare to Guddu k haath katne wale scene k baad shock m hi chale gaye the aur fir jab mere teammates ko dekha to chup hi rhna thik samjha.Maine apne teammates ko.
Main-Agents bahar pura clear kr do saare bodies iisi room m le aao(Sameera s ) iss chutiye ko behosh kr iski first aid krdo.
Mere itna bolne s hi wo sabhi aapne aapne kammo p lag gaye.Mujhe un 5 ka pata tab chala jab unhone wo adhkathe bodies dekhi aur ultiya kari suru ki tab.Ultiyan krte hue hi 3 no female behosh ho gayi aur jb maine unko dekha to mujhe khud p bada gussa aaya(aage pata chalega q )
Abhi main kuch kahta ki wo inspector aur aadmi dono bole
Aadmi-Sir please hame jaane do hmne kuch nhi kiya h dekho hme inko bahar le jane do kahi in tino ko kuch ho gaya to hum dono jee nahi payenge please.
Inspector - sir please sir hame jaane do agar inhe ku....
abhi wo aage kuch bolta maine Sameera ko bola
Main-Agent02 in sabhi ki rassiya kholo aur hmare van tk le jao waha doctor s inki treatment krane bolo (inspector ki taraf) dekho abhi hm tumhe jaane nhi de sakte jb tk hmara mission complete n hojaye. Aap log Agent02 k sath jaaye aur abhi van m rah k hme coprate kare agar bhagne ki kosis ki to Agent02 aapko shoot kr degi.
Sameera n ek ladki ko uthaya aur baki dono ko inspector aur aadmi n aur chale gaye van k pass.Unke aane s phle hi maine aapne saare teammates ko unko apni position lene ko kaha aur ye bhi kaha ki jaise hi bodies wale room ki light jale sabko udda dena shivay head k.
sabhi ok bol aapne aspne position p pahuch gaye tabhi mere phone p ek notification aaya aur ussi k saath Sameera bhi pahuch gai mere paad apna phone liye aur mujhe phone dikhaya phone jisme mere phone wala notification hi tha
Notification-your target is comming near you.
ye notification hamare banaye gaye aap ka tha iss aap ka kaam ye tha ki jis bhi no ko ya fir IMEI no ko hm sameera k system m dalte agar wo no hamare location k 1 km radius k ander aaye to ye aap hme na sirf inform krta h balki us no ko track bhi krne lagta hai
Ye unhi dono no. m s ek hoga jo kl system m input kia gaya tha aur ab wo hmari hi taraf aa raha tha.
Main - Sameera hm plan p hi chalenge ok ab sunno is bande ko kuch mat hone dena iski to main khatirdaari krunga

Aage jo hua wo aapko pata hi hai iske baad maine sameera s bola
Main - Sameera ab tum handle karogi ok phle to acche tarah s cheak karo iss jagah ko agar kuch khaash mile to usse apne naye base p pahucha dena,in dono ko bhi interogation room m baand dena,m kal base p aaunga aur ha jaane s pahle bodies ko dispose kr dena.
Itna bol main chal pada van ki taraf.waha pahucha to ab sabhi thik the pr darre hue the main pahuch gaya inspector k paas aur bola
Main-(uske batch p uska naam dekh )Pradeep tum yaha inke sath kaise.
Pradeep-sir ye meri family hai.(main ye sun chowk gaya)Main Shivpur ka ACP hu sir yaha aaye din ye log (Guddu & gang) kuch-n-kuch ulta seedha krte rhte the aur main inke kaamo taang aadatha rhta inhone mujhe suru m kharidne ki kosis ki pr main nhi bika ulta inpe aur kade actions lene laga.Mere karan Department k curropt log bhi paresan the iss liye unlogo ne inke sath milke mujhe aur mere faimly ko marwane ki planning ki aur ye kamayab bhi ho jaate agar aap sahi waqt p na aate to.Thank you sir.
Main-ye to aap sabhi ka luck tha ki main pahucha yaha fir bhi welcome ab aap hme apni family s to millao.
Pradeep-je sir ye(aadmi ki taraf) hai mere uncle Pawan kashyap (aurat ki taraf) meri aunty Anuradha kashyap (ladkiyon ki taraf ishara kr) meri bahne Pragati aur Nidhima.
{ab pata chala mujhe gussa q aaya tha arre meri vajah s meri badi maasi aur bahne behosh ho gayi thi}
Main-Hello everyone ab aap sab jaa sakte hai hmara mission complete ho gaya hai aur main sorry bhi kahana chahunga ki meri wajah s aap sabhi ko wo sab dekhna pada (pradeep ki taraf) dost aage s apni family ki safty ka dhyan rakhna taki fir essi condition na aaye
A.Maasi- Sorry bolne kibjarurat nhi hai aapko aaj aapne hme bacha k hmpe bahut bada upkar kiya hai(pradeep ki taraf dekh pyar s) beta is naukri ko chod apne uncle k business m hath batao ab to tumne bhi dekh liya ki is naukri m koi tumhare sath nahi tumhare apne department k logo n hi tumhe fasa diya.
Pradeep-Sahi kaha aunty m aaj hi resign de dunga mujhe meri family s jyada important kuch nhi hai mom-dad k jaane k baad ab m kisi aur ko khona nhi chahta.
Main-Main chalta hu.
A.massi-sir apna naam to bata dijiye taki hame bhi pata ho k hme kisne bachaya hai.
Main-Kingg
Itna bol main waha s chala gaya.

Time-7:21

Mai ghar m aaya to dad aur Mausa ji garden m baithe kuch baate kr rhe the main bhi unki taraf chal diya.
Mausaji- beta aapka result kb hai
Main-abhi to time h usme.
Dad-to kya socha hai tumne aapne future k baare m.
main-Dad abhi to B.Tech ki soch raha hu aaplogo k hi collage s XYZ COLLAGE S
Collage ka naam sunte hi dad aur mausaji thode chintit ho gaye phir normal ho k bole
Dad-Accha socha h.tum jao hm dekh lenge isse.
Mausa ji-Haa tum jao aur jo tumhare room k left side wala room hai na usme maine gym k equipments rakhwa diye h dekh lo agar kuch km pade to bata dena ok.
Main to ye sun bahut khus ho gaya phir chal diya ghar k ander.
Jab ander aaya to sare k saare TV p serial dekh rahe the wo bhi bade dhyan s.Agar abhi yaha koi gun s fire bhi kr deta tb bhi inhe kuch pata nhi calta.
Maine bhi inhe bina disturb kiye apne room m chala gaya aur fir change kr gym ko dekha sarre equipments dekhe sab kuch thik tha.
Fir main nichhe gaya khana khane. Dinning table p mere ek taraf Saifali(meri angel) baithi thi aur ek side Tiya & Tanya aur tino mujhe us ghatiya s serial ki kahani sunna rahe the.Maine jaldi s aapna khana khatam kiya aur chal diya soone .
soote hi m pahuch gaya jungle m aur baith gaya dhyan m 2nd chakra jagane

Amir · Apr 17, 2020

Bro Wait for new updates

Arjun Singh 72 · Apr 17, 2020

Ye old update h

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Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

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nahi aise hi sahi hai

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