Horror Sauda (deal of life) | exclusively for xforum | written by Love 1994 |
- Thread starter Love 1994
- Start date
- 29,792
rahul.das
乂D??️
- 523
- 585
- 108
Hello, Ladies  & Gentleman, 
We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.
Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 10th, June 2020, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.
Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.
Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.
Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.
Rules Check Karne k Liye Ye Thread Use karein :- Rules And Queries Thread
Entry Post Karne k Liye Ye thread Use Karein :- Entry Thread
Reviews Post Karne K liye Ye thread Use karein :- Reviews Thread
On Behalf of Admin Team
Regards :- Xforum Staff..
- 16,088
- 13,862
- 229
Update 5 (daku Gabbar Singh)
Ab tak sanjay bhi bhagta huwa pass aaya tha lekin arjun bina use dekhe kud jata hai aur sida sanjay se takra jata hai
Jisse dono niche gir jate hai
Unko nicha gira huwa dekh ke baki bhi unke pass ruk jate hai
Tabhi arjun fatak se khada hota hai
Arjun - ye galat hai police bhaiyya aap aise chorni ke sath bhag ke nahi jaa sakte
Aur isi ke sath baki sab apna sar pit lete hai..
Ab aage...
"mai aap ki complaint karunga aap police hoke chorni se Ishq lada rahe ho aur to aur uske sath bhag ke bhi jaa rahe ho bina bataye"
Yaha arjun apni chapad chapad kar raha tha aur waha baki 4ro use ghur ke dekh rahe they
Kyu ki ek tarha se uski wajah se wo is sunsan se railway station pe fas gaye they..
Lekin wo use kuch bol bhi nahi sakte they kyu ki sabko pata tha ki usse usse kuch bhi bolke unka hi sar dard karna tha..
4ro ek dusre ki taraf dekhte hai ki ab kya kare..
Reema - hamari train to chhut gai hai ab kya kare
Sanjay uthke khada hota hai aur apne kapdo se mitti jhadne lagta hai
Sanjay - hame station master se baat karni chahiye shayad wo hamari kuch madad kare
Usse next train ka pata karte hai
Arjun - na na na na koi master sir madam wagera kuch nahi karegi ek police aur chorni ka milan kadapi nahi ho sakta uske liye tum dono ko dubara janam lena hoga
fir bade hoke achhe se padh likh kar safal hona hoga tab tumhari shadi panditji karwayenge
Sab - hainnn.. ??
Amar - bas bahut huwa agar aur ruka toh pagal ho jaunga mai ja raha hu yaha se pata nahi kaha fas gaya..
Itna bolke wo us chotese purane railway station ki taraf jane lagta hai aur uske piche baki sab bhi
Arjun - aise kaise chale be mujhe chhod ke wo bhi ek chorni ke liye mai ab sach me shikayat karunga bade sahab se tum logo ki
Aur naa jane kya kya bolta huwa arjun bhi unke piche ho leta hai...
Sab jab station pe pahuchte hai to waha koi nahi tha..
Aur station bhi dekhne se kafi purana lag raha tha ek cabin tha aur uske baju me adhi diwaro aur chat ka bana huwa shead tha shayad jiska use waiting room ki tarha use hota tha aur un done ke bich me ek chotasa bulb jal raha tha jo kharab wiring ki wajah se band chalu ho raha tha
Ek tarha se dekha jaye to ye station raat me bhutiya hi lag raha tha
Waise bhi ye ek pahadi ilaka tha to yaha pe ab tak itna development nahi huwa tha..
Cabin ke bahar khade hoke sab ek dusre ko dekhne lagte hai
Andar se machine's ki beep beep sunai de rahi thi
sonali sanjay ko ishara karti hai toh..
Sanjay - hello koi he??.. sir kya koi he??
Sanjay ki baat ka koi jawab nahi milta to ek baar fir sab ek dusre ko dekhne lagte hai..
Sab aage kya karna hai ye soch hi rahe they ki arjun jorse chilla padta hai
Arjun - Oye daku gabbar Singh bahar nikal dekh ham teri chorni basanti ko laye hai ab nachwa ise kutto ke samne..
Arjun ki is harkat pe sab firse apna sar pitne pe majbur ho jate hai..
Sanjay - Abe sale aisa kya nasha kiya tha jo abhi tak utra nahi hai
Itna keh kar sanjay arjun ki colar pakadne ke liye aage badhta hai ki arjun bahut dar jata hai jisse sanjay ko lagta hai ki ab wo arjun ko dara ke chup karwayega is liye wo aage badhta hai to arjun jorse chilla ke bhagne lagta hai
Arjun - daku Gabbar Singh.... bhagoooo.... Daku aaye..
Arjun ko aisa bhagte huwe dekh kar sab chonk jate hai lekin use koi awaj deta ya kuch aur usse pehle ek awaj aati hai..
"Ruk jao kon ho tum log.."
Charo piche mud kar dekhte hai to unke chehre pe jor se flash lagne ki wajah se ankhe chondhiya jati hai
cabin ke darwaje pe ek aadmi khada tha ki jisne thand se bachne ke liye sweater aur monkey hat pehni hui thi jaise aksar gaav me log pehnte he
wo hath me badisi torch liye sabke chehre bari bari dekhta hai wahi arjun bhag ke shead ke aad me chup jata hai..
"tum waha kyu chup rahe ho bahar aajao"
Wo aadmi arjun ki taraf torch ki flash karke bolta hai
Gharbra to wo bhi raha tha itne logo ko dekh kar aur upar se arjun ke aise harkat se lekin yaha pahadiyo me akele rehkar shayad itni himmat to aayi thi ki aise mamlo ko nipat sake
Arjun - nahi Gabbar jii mujhe kuch mat karna maine kuch nahi kiya ye sab daroga sahab ka kiya huwa hai usne hi basanti ko cheda tha aap unko toop se uda do
Aadmi - kya bol rahe ho kon gabbar aur konsi toop
Pehle tum bahar niklo aur batao kon ho tum sab
To be continued.....
Ab tak sanjay bhi bhagta huwa pass aaya tha lekin arjun bina use dekhe kud jata hai aur sida sanjay se takra jata hai
Jisse dono niche gir jate hai
Unko nicha gira huwa dekh ke baki bhi unke pass ruk jate hai
Tabhi arjun fatak se khada hota hai
Arjun - ye galat hai police bhaiyya aap aise chorni ke sath bhag ke nahi jaa sakte
Aur isi ke sath baki sab apna sar pit lete hai..
Ab aage...
"mai aap ki complaint karunga aap police hoke chorni se Ishq lada rahe ho aur to aur uske sath bhag ke bhi jaa rahe ho bina bataye"
Yaha arjun apni chapad chapad kar raha tha aur waha baki 4ro use ghur ke dekh rahe they
Kyu ki ek tarha se uski wajah se wo is sunsan se railway station pe fas gaye they..
Lekin wo use kuch bol bhi nahi sakte they kyu ki sabko pata tha ki usse usse kuch bhi bolke unka hi sar dard karna tha..
4ro ek dusre ki taraf dekhte hai ki ab kya kare..
Reema - hamari train to chhut gai hai ab kya kare
Sanjay uthke khada hota hai aur apne kapdo se mitti jhadne lagta hai
Sanjay - hame station master se baat karni chahiye shayad wo hamari kuch madad kare
Usse next train ka pata karte hai
Arjun - na na na na koi master sir madam wagera kuch nahi karegi ek police aur chorni ka milan kadapi nahi ho sakta uske liye tum dono ko dubara janam lena hoga
fir bade hoke achhe se padh likh kar safal hona hoga tab tumhari shadi panditji karwayenge
Sab - hainnn.. ??
Amar - bas bahut huwa agar aur ruka toh pagal ho jaunga mai ja raha hu yaha se pata nahi kaha fas gaya..
Itna bolke wo us chotese purane railway station ki taraf jane lagta hai aur uske piche baki sab bhi
Arjun - aise kaise chale be mujhe chhod ke wo bhi ek chorni ke liye mai ab sach me shikayat karunga bade sahab se tum logo ki
Aur naa jane kya kya bolta huwa arjun bhi unke piche ho leta hai...
Sab jab station pe pahuchte hai to waha koi nahi tha..
Aur station bhi dekhne se kafi purana lag raha tha ek cabin tha aur uske baju me adhi diwaro aur chat ka bana huwa shead tha shayad jiska use waiting room ki tarha use hota tha aur un done ke bich me ek chotasa bulb jal raha tha jo kharab wiring ki wajah se band chalu ho raha tha
Ek tarha se dekha jaye to ye station raat me bhutiya hi lag raha tha
Waise bhi ye ek pahadi ilaka tha to yaha pe ab tak itna development nahi huwa tha..
Cabin ke bahar khade hoke sab ek dusre ko dekhne lagte hai
Andar se machine's ki beep beep sunai de rahi thi
sonali sanjay ko ishara karti hai toh..
Sanjay - hello koi he??.. sir kya koi he??
Sanjay ki baat ka koi jawab nahi milta to ek baar fir sab ek dusre ko dekhne lagte hai..
Sab aage kya karna hai ye soch hi rahe they ki arjun jorse chilla padta hai
Arjun - Oye daku gabbar Singh bahar nikal dekh ham teri chorni basanti ko laye hai ab nachwa ise kutto ke samne..
Arjun ki is harkat pe sab firse apna sar pitne pe majbur ho jate hai..
Sanjay - Abe sale aisa kya nasha kiya tha jo abhi tak utra nahi hai
Itna keh kar sanjay arjun ki colar pakadne ke liye aage badhta hai ki arjun bahut dar jata hai jisse sanjay ko lagta hai ki ab wo arjun ko dara ke chup karwayega is liye wo aage badhta hai to arjun jorse chilla ke bhagne lagta hai
Arjun - daku Gabbar Singh.... bhagoooo.... Daku aaye..
Arjun ko aisa bhagte huwe dekh kar sab chonk jate hai lekin use koi awaj deta ya kuch aur usse pehle ek awaj aati hai..
"Ruk jao kon ho tum log.."
Charo piche mud kar dekhte hai to unke chehre pe jor se flash lagne ki wajah se ankhe chondhiya jati hai
cabin ke darwaje pe ek aadmi khada tha ki jisne thand se bachne ke liye sweater aur monkey hat pehni hui thi jaise aksar gaav me log pehnte he
wo hath me badisi torch liye sabke chehre bari bari dekhta hai wahi arjun bhag ke shead ke aad me chup jata hai..
"tum waha kyu chup rahe ho bahar aajao"
Wo aadmi arjun ki taraf torch ki flash karke bolta hai
Gharbra to wo bhi raha tha itne logo ko dekh kar aur upar se arjun ke aise harkat se lekin yaha pahadiyo me akele rehkar shayad itni himmat to aayi thi ki aise mamlo ko nipat sake
Arjun - nahi Gabbar jii mujhe kuch mat karna maine kuch nahi kiya ye sab daroga sahab ka kiya huwa hai usne hi basanti ko cheda tha aap unko toop se uda do
Aadmi - kya bol rahe ho kon gabbar aur konsi toop
Pehle tum bahar niklo aur batao kon ho tum sab
To be continued.....
- 16,088
- 13,862
- 229
- 2,946
- 1,356
- 159
Hello Everyone 
We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of Xforum "The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).
Jaisa ki aap sabko maalum hai abhi pichle hafte he humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time Pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit chat thread toh pehle se he Hind section mein khulla hai.
Iske baare Mein thoda aapko btaadun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kissi bhi prefix ki short story post kar shaktey ho jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words takk ho shakti hai. Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap Iss contest Mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa Rupp dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko pura Xforum dekhega ye ek bahot acha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories k liye kyunki USC Ki stories ko pure Xforum k readers read kartey hain.. Or jo readers likhna nahi caahtey woh bhi Iss contest Mein participate kar shaktey hain "Best Readers Award" k liye aapko bus karna ye hoga ki contest Mein posted stories ko read karke unke Uppar apne views dene honge.
Winning Writer's ko well deserved Awards milenge, uske aalwa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne kaa mouka bhi milega Taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab k liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai Xforum k sabhi readers k Uppar apni chaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.
Entry thread 7th February ko open hoga matlab aap 7 February se story daalna suru kar shaktey hain or woh thread 21st February takk open rahega Iss dauraan aap apni story daal shaktey hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna suru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.
Koi bhi issue ho toh aap kissi bhi staff member ko Message kar shaktey hain..
Regards : XForum Staff.
We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of Xforum "The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).
Jaisa ki aap sabko maalum hai abhi pichle hafte he humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time Pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit chat thread toh pehle se he Hind section mein khulla hai.
Iske baare Mein thoda aapko btaadun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kissi bhi prefix ki short story post kar shaktey ho jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words takk ho shakti hai. Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap Iss contest Mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa Rupp dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko pura Xforum dekhega ye ek bahot acha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories k liye kyunki USC Ki stories ko pure Xforum k readers read kartey hain.. Or jo readers likhna nahi caahtey woh bhi Iss contest Mein participate kar shaktey hain "Best Readers Award" k liye aapko bus karna ye hoga ki contest Mein posted stories ko read karke unke Uppar apne views dene honge.
Winning Writer's ko well deserved Awards milenge, uske aalwa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne kaa mouka bhi milega Taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab k liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai Xforum k sabhi readers k Uppar apni chaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.
Entry thread 7th February ko open hoga matlab aap 7 February se story daalna suru kar shaktey hain or woh thread 21st February takk open rahega Iss dauraan aap apni story daal shaktey hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna suru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.
Koi bhi issue ho toh aap kissi bhi staff member ko Message kar shaktey hain..
| Rules Check karne k liye Iss thread kaa use karein :- Rules And Queries Thread. |
|---|
| Contest k regarding Chit chat karne k liye Iss thread kaa use karein :- Chit Chat Thread. |
|---|
Regards : XForum Staff.
Dev the lover
Well-Known Member
- 3,738
- 15,882
- 159
WAISE BATA DU AAJ 7 HAIUpdate posted
Next update 3rd ko ayega intazar karne ke liye
Naina
Nain11ster creation... a monter in me
- 31,619
- 92,350
- 304
horror stories pe ye sunsan ilake mein hi aake kyun fansh jaate hai lead characters 
aur se daya aaye in kirdaaro ke upor ki abhi jo hanshi majak ya yunhi halla kar rahe hai wo dardnaak aur khaufnaak chikho mein tabdil ho jayegi
Btw kahani kaafi dilachasp mod pe hai..
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills
aur se daya aaye in kirdaaro ke upor ki abhi jo hanshi majak ya yunhi halla kar rahe hai wo dardnaak aur khaufnaak chikho mein tabdil ho jayegi Btw kahani kaafi dilachasp mod pe hai..
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills