thanks a lot bro...keep commenting please.Bahut hi lajwab, dono scene bahut hi lajwab hai, keep Writing![]()
thanks a lot bro...keep commenting please.Bahut hi lajwab, dono scene bahut hi lajwab hai, keep Writing![]()
thanks a lot bro...Update boss . Waiting
aisi baat nahi hai soniee ji...thaan lo to insaan kuchh bhi kar sakta hai. Waise Soniee ji yahan likhne ka koi fayda nahi hai. log normal comments to karte nahi bas kahani ko badnam karne aa jaate hain. kuchh writers bhi hain jo bekar mein story ko poora padhe bina galat galat comments kar rahe hain. main unse dukhi ho gaya hun sach mein...Stories likhna har kisi ki bas ki nhi h...
Aesi bat mat kijiye manikmittalme07 bhai...aisi baat nahi hai soniee ji...thaan lo to insaan kuchh bhi kar sakta hai. Waise Soniee ji yahan likhne ka koi fayda nahi hai. log normal comments to karte nahi bas kahani ko badnam karne aa jaate hain. kuchh writers bhi hain jo bekar mein story ko poora padhe bina galat galat comments kar rahe hain. main unse dukhi ho gaya hun sach mein...
bhai aap khud ek behtarin writer ho...isliye aapne jo kayas lagaye hain wo bahut hi achhe hain. abhi story do teen episodes ke baad change honi shuru ho jayegi. ek episode aaj diya hai. doosra sunday ko aur uske baad monday ko. tab tak kahani mein kafi badlav aa chuka hoga...please be with the story bro...I need your moral supportFabulous Mind Blowing Updated...
★ Kya vini thik ho jyegi...?
★ kya Vini dubara sex nhi kar payegi...?
★ kya varsha hath se gyi ya fir kuch hoga jisse varsha aur vinay dubara milege Mumbai me...?
★ mehak ka kya ab to wo apne papa ki ho gyi kya ab vinay ko bhi chans milega...?
★ kya vini ki bimari se koi badi problem aa jyegi...?
★ aur kon sa mod aane wala hai vinay aur vini ki life me...?
Dekhte hai aage kya likha hai samayye ke garabh mai....
Waiting For next update....![]()
thank you so much bro...please be with the story...aane wale time mein aapko kafi kuchh different aur aapke hisab se achha hi milega padhne ko...thanks for your comment...I totally agree with you
thanks a lot bro...Nice and superb update...
bhai aap to mujhe very beginning se support kar rahe ho. meri do stories line mein hain abhi...ek to aaahhh sisak ka next part jiske liye mujhe ankita ji se permission bhi mil chuki hai uske baad ek aur story hai jiska kuchh par maine likha hai. par main itni mehnat kyun karun bhai. kitni mushkilon ke baad main kuchh likh pata hun. uske baad kuchh log aa jaate hain jo mujhe demoralise karte hain. ek do bhai hain jinki baat mujhe kabhi buri nahi lagti jaise fallen angel. kyunki wo mere regular supporter hain. par ek do to aise log hain jo kabhi normally comment daalte nahi par haan negative comment jarur likhenge. main soch raha hun ke stories shuru karun ya nahi.Aesi bat mat kijiye manikmittalme07 bhai...
Aap apne moral mat todiye...
Apki story ke reader apke sath hai hamensha...
manikmittalme07 bhai me to apka regular se apko follow kar raha hu...
manikmittalme07 bhai start karo aap hum sab apke sath hai...bhai aap to mujhe very beginning se support kar rahe ho. meri do stories line mein hain abhi...ek to aaahhh sisak ka next part jiske liye mujhe ankita ji se permission bhi mil chuki hai uske baad ek aur story hai jiska kuchh par maine likha hai. par main itni mehnat kyun karun bhai. kitni mushkilon ke baad main kuchh likh pata hun. uske baad kuchh log aa jaate hain jo mujhe demoralise karte hain. ek do bhai hain jinki baat mujhe kabhi buri nahi lagti jaise fallen angel. kyunki wo mere regular supporter hain. par ek do to aise log hain jo kabhi normally comment daalte nahi par haan negative comment jarur likhenge. main soch raha hun ke stories shuru karun ya nahi.