Thriller Safar ek rahsya (secret of journey)~ Completed

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Introduction
Hero - Ajay Singh
Age 20
Maa - Meera singh
Age 40 looking average figure
Dad - Virendra pratap singh missing
Sister - Shruti Age 18
Bahut hi cute aur chanchal h
Baki ke character aate rahenge
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New entry
Maa ke ghar walo ki yani mere Mama ke ghar ki

Ram singh - nana age 78

Klawati devi nani dehant ho gaya h

Sher singh- mama age 52
Laxmi - mami age 48

Vishal - bada beta 26 saal sadi ho gai h

Sapna - vishal ki ptni age 23

Ruchi - beti age 22

Pawan singh - chote mama age 48

Rinki singh - choti mami age 46

Surya - beta age 23
Sneha - beti 20

 

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Update 1
Ek chota se gown me chote chote ghar bahut hi sandar tarike se basaye gaye the gaown ek santi chayi huwi thi
subha ka kusnuma mausam tha pede pe chidiyon ke chachane aawaje aa rahi thi jo mausam ko bahut man moha k bana raha tha
Gaon ke kinare ek manjila makan bana huwa tha jinme 3
2 kamre bane huwe the ek chota rasoi bana huwa tha aur ek chota sa store room bana huwa tha
ab bor na karte huwe story pe aata hu
ek kamre me ek bahut hi sundar ladka soya huwa thaa age xyz jo dekhne me bahut hi massom lag raha tha pass me ek bahut sundar si ladki jaga rahi age xyz thi bhaiya utho na dekho subha ho gayi h maa aapko kab se bula rahi h Ladka ek angdi lete hu baith jata aur bolta h are gudiya kyu jaga diya itni subh suba
ladki- are bhaiya dekho kab se subha ho gayi h aap abhi so rahe h sab log kab ka kam karne kheto ja chuke h aap abhi bhi so rahe h
Ladka - are mai to bhul hi gaya tha aaj khet me kaam karna achh gudiya maa kaha h
Ladki - maa khana bana rahi h
tabhi bahar se aawaj aati h are Shruti beta Ajay utha ya abhi nahi dekho duph bhi ho rahi khet me kaam pada h
Ye dono koi aur nahi hamre hero aur uski ladli bahen shruti h
Shruti - ha ma bhaiya utha gaye h
Ajay - achha gudiya chal mai naha ke aata hu
mai(ajay)-(height6fit 3inch body WWE ke wrestler ki trah hai aur chehra ek massom bache ki trah h) Mai fresh ho ke maa ke pass gaya aur bolo are maa aaj kya bana rahi ho khane me
Maa-beta aaj tere pasand ke aalu ke parathe bana rahi hu
tab tak mai rasoi me pahuch gaya tha
Maa - Beta kha le jaldi tumhe khet me bhi jana hai nahi to let ho jaoge
(Hamare pass 10 bigha ka ek plot h jisse ghar gujara hota h)
mai - ha ma jaldi dije ramu kaka intazar kar rahe honge
(Ramu kaka hare khete me suru se hi kaam kar rahe h jo bahut hi garib h
Unke ek beti h naam hai geeta jo thodi sawali h but chehara bahutsi sundar h aur ghar me koi nahi h)
Mai- are gUdiya kaha rah gayi tubhi aaja aaja aaj hamare man pasand aalu ke parathe bane h
Shruti- aai bhaiya
mai - achha maa mai bahar Baitha hu aap khana leke aayiye
tab tak Shruti bhi school ke liye taiyar ho ke aa gayi thi
(Shruti abhi 11 me hai gaon ke hi school me padhti h mai 12 me hu but school bahut hi kam jata hu mai koi chiz ek bar padh lu to muje yaad ho jata h)
Maa rasoi se bahar aa gayi thi
Maa - lo bacho khana kha lo aur maa ne Parthe ko do plate me nikal di
Shruti - bhaiya aapke agle mahine se exam bhi suru ho rahe h
mai- ha gudiya mai dekh lunga tu tension na le
Shruti - bhaiya principal sir hamesha pucht e h ki tumhare bhaiya ki tayari kaisi chal rahi h
Mai - are gudiya tu paresan na huwa kar meri tayari bahut hi achhi chal rahi chal kal mai bhi tere sath chalunga .
Shruti - Theek h bhaiya
batao batao me hamara kha bhi ho gaya
Mai - maa ham ja rahe h mai gudiya ko school chod dunga
school hamare khet ke raste me hi padta tha
Chale gudiya
Shruti - ha bhaiya chaliye mera bhi khana ho gaya
maine apni cycle nikli aur Shruti ko baithya aur chal diya school ki taraf
mai school pahucha aur Shruti ko school ke pass chod diya
Mai- to gudiya mai chal raha hu tu ghar chali jana
Shruti - ji bhaiya
uske baad mai apne khet ki taraf nikal liya jo ki gaon ke las me padta tha jaha kuch hi dur pe ek vishal jangal faila huwa tha
mai apni cycle se masti me gaana gungunate hue ja hi raha tha ki pass hi ek ganne ke khet ke pass se chikne ki aawaj aai
mai bhi apni cycle rok ke turant usi taraf dauda
waha pauch kar dekha ki ek jangli saand ek ladki ko marne ke liye dauda raha tha
ye ladki hamre hi muhale ki thi iska naam sitA tha
mai turant daud kar uske pas paucha aur us saand se bhid gaya jo bahut ji balwan tha uski seengh ko mai pakad liya aur wo mujhe ek hi bar me utha ke kuch dur pekh diya fir se utha mai aur is bar mai tayar tha mai dubara uski seengh ko pakad liya aur apni puri takat se use peeche ki taraf dakhelne laga wo bhi mujhe marne ki kosis kar raha tha isi bhidant me uski ek seengh aadhe par se tut gayi aur wo saand waha se pagal bail ki tarah rambhata huwa baag gaya

mai sita ki taraf ghuma to dekha jo abhi bhi dari aur sahmi khadi thi mai uske pas apni dul mitti jhadte huwe badha
Mai - are seet tum theek to ho na
Sita - ghabrai huwi awaj me ha mm- mai the ..-theek hu
mai - are itna ghabra ku rahu ho sant ho jao saand chala gaya
Are mai to sita ke bare me batana bhul hi gaya Sita mere hi umr ki ladki hai jo ek kisan ki beti h iski ghar me eski maa aur baapu hai aur iska khe hamare hi khet ke paas me h aur iski ek choti bahen h uska naam tiya h
Sita bahut hi sundar ladki h gaon ke kai ladke iske peeche pade rahte h
Sita tab tak sambhal chuki thi
sita - sukriya ajay aaj tum nahi aate to ye saand aaj mujhe mar gi deta
mai - mai haste huwe are aise kaise tumhe mar deta mere rahte huwe
Sita - ha dekh rahi hu tu bhi kisi saand se kam nahi itne khatarnak saand se akele hi bhid gaya
mai - are kya kya bole ja rahi mujhe mai koi saand nahi hu mai insan hu
Sita - ha wo to abhi abhi mujhe dikha
Mai -achha bata kaha ja rahi h
sita - khet me ja rahi thi sabji lane ke liye maa ne bulaya tha
Mai - achha chal mai bhi tere sath me chalta hu aur usko sath raste ki taraf aaya aur apni cycle utha ke uske sath baat karte huwe chlne laga jo mujhe bhaut hi pyar bhari nazro se lagatar ghure ja rahi thi zisse mai thoda Zep gay aur bola
mai - aise kya dekh rahi h kha jayegi kya mujhe
wo mre baat se hadbada gayi aur boli
sita - na n nahi mai kha dekh rahi hu mai to chal rahi hu
aur isi tarah baate karte huwe mai aur sita mhe t pahuch gaye

 

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Update - 2


Dushri taraf ek pakki sadak bani huwi thi aage jane par do raste bane huwe the aur waha par ek Pathar pe pratpghar likha huwa tha
hamara gaon isi riyasat me aata hai
Pathar ke samne se do raste bane huwe the dono rasto par bahut hi bade bade dwar bane huwe the
Dayi taraf wale raste se jane par jo ki ek bahut hi sandar gaon ki tarf jata hai gaon ke sabse ant me ek bahut hi sandar haweli bani huwi thi
jo kafi dur me fali huwi thi haweli ke samne bahut hi bada maidan tha jo ki haweli ke sath hi ek bahut unchi diwar ke sath ghera gaya tha aur haweli me aane ke liye bahut hi majbut ek lohe ka ek bavya gate bana huwa tha jo dekhne me hi rajsi khandan ka lag raha tha
ye haweli hai prtapghar ke raja bhanu prtap singh ki
ab rajaon ka jamana raha nahi phir bhi yaha pe inki hi hukumat chalti thi

Kuch new character ka arrival
introduction
Bhanu pratp singh -age 75 year
jo abhi bhi kisi se kam nahi lagte chere pe bahut hi tez dikhayi deta h
parvati singh age 65 haweli ki malkin jo abhi bhi 50 se kam ki nahi lagti
Sushil pratap singh age 48 Bhanu pratap ke Bada beta
Kushum singh Age44
Badan bahut hi bhara huwa h jo bahut hi sundar dikyi deti h
Jai parap - sushil ka bada beta age 25 year
Neha singh - jay ki biwi age 22 Dikhne me kisi heroin se kam nahi
Nitin - age 20 jai ka chota bhai
Komal - jay ki bahen age 18 kisi modal se kam nahi
Naam ke bilkul hi ulta swbhav h bahut hi jiddi aur ghar ki ladli
Virendra pratap singh - age 45 bhanu prtap ka chota beta missing
Meera singh - age 40 missing
Sushila singh Sushil pratap ki bahen age 42
Anirudh singh age 47 sushila ke pati ek bussinessman h
Priya age 19 badi beti
Nitu choti beti 18
Rohini singh age 37 shushi ki choti bahen
Jitendra singh age 41
Madhu badi beti Age 18
Kiran choti beti abhi 11th class me h
Ye h new character jinka story me role h

Dusre raste par jae par wha bhi ek sandar haweli bani huwi thi jo Bhanu pratap ka jani dusman tha
Introduction
Thakur Gajendra pratap singh age 72
Savitri Devi - jinka dehant ho chuka h
Ranvijay sing Age 49
thakur ka bada beta
Sheela singh - age 45 thakur ki badi bahu
Jaswant singh- thakur ka dusra beta age 44 isne sadi nahi ki h
Bheema singh - age 25 ranvijay ka bada beta
Birju singh singh - age 23 ranvijay ka dusra beta
Birju singh - 22 tisra beta

 

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Update-3


Haweli ke hal.me ek sanjeeda mahu Bana huwa tha jo kisi bahut hi bade khatre ke aane se pahle santi chayi ho ya hal us haal me baithe sabhi ke chero pe dekha ja sakta h jo kafi paresan the
is asanti ko todte huwe Bhanu pratap bole
mai bhanu pratap ko BP likunga
B.P.- is bar ke mele me kaun hamare taraf se us dangal me ladne ke liye jayega

Sushi pratap ko mai Sp likunga
Sp - ha pitaji is baar ke dangal ke liye kaun jayega

Bp - ha tujhe aur tere bete ko bas apne se hi mtlb hai is ghar ki izzat ka khyal nahi h
Sp - nahi pitaji mujhe bhi chinta h is khel ke liye ki apne khandan se kaun jayega

Nitin - pitaji mujhe is khooni khel me nahi samil hona h jisme ye na pta ho ki jaan bachegi ya nahi

Parvati - tum sab se rai nahi li gayi ki kaun jayega Agar mera virendra hota to hame paresani nahi hoti
Pta nahi mera beta kaha h kis hal me hoga

Sp - ha hame bhi apne bhai ki bahut yaad aati h pta nahi kha hoga

Bp - mahul ko emotional hote dekh bolte h
hamra beta jarur hamari madad karne ke liye jarur aayega

Bp - are Sp jai nahi dikhayi de raha h kaha h

Sp - Uski ek jaruri meeting hai aaj to meeting me gaya hai
Bp - kuch soachte huwe bolte h achha chlo theek h
chlo sab ab khana kha lo

Dushri taraf thakur Gajendra ki haweli me

Haweli ke bhar ek akhade me ek danav jaisa aadmi ek bahut hi banynkar saand se lad raha tha
achanak hi us aadmi ne us saad ko utha ke patak diye aur wo saand ekdam saant hogya maidan me ek taliyon ki gadgdahat ki awaj goonj gayi

Thakur Gajendra - sabas bheema aaj hame tum par garv hai ki tum is bar ye dangal jit ke is pratapghar ka raja banaoge
Bheema Gajendra ka pota Height 6 fit 11 inch kisi danav se kam nahi bahut hi nirdayi
Birju - wah bhaiya is bar to aap ke samne aane par sabki peesab hi nikal jayegi
*height 6 fit 4 inch bahut hi krur apne bhai ki trah

Ranvijay - is bar ham us Bp ko bataenge ki hamse dusmni lene ka kya anjam hota h
us ki ghar ki sabhi aurto ko nanga nachaenge tab sale ko uski aukat dikhyenge

Isi tarah mahol me ek rakshi tahaki se watawarnd goonj utha

Chlte hai hero ki taraf kya ho raha h waha

Ajay aur sita baat karte huwe apne apne kheto pe pahuch gaye sita apne khet ki taraf chali gayi aur ajay apne khet ki taraf chal diya

Khet ke suru me do kamre bane huwe the ek kamre me tubel laga huwa tha aur kheti karne ke hatiyar rakhe huwe the
aur dusre kamre me ek charpi padi thi aur kuch anaj rakha huwa tha jaha sone ki waywstha thi

Ajay khet me pahuch ke ramu kaka ko aawaj lagaya
Ajay - are kaka kaha ho
Dusri taraf se

Ramu kaka - ha beta mai ghobi ke kyariyon me ghobhi ke pedo ko mitti de raha hu
( 1 bighe me sabji lagi huwi thi aur 1 bighe me ganne lage huwe the baki je 3 bighe me gehu aur saso boya huwa tha )
kuki ye November ka mahina hai to kheto me yahi sab hoga


Note - Dangal ka mela pratapghar ke shiv mandir me hota hai dangal jitne ke baad baad jo koi shiv ka trishul jo jamin me aadhe se jayda gada huwa hai usko nikalega wahi pratapghar ka raja banta h kai salo se koi is trishul ko koi nikal nahi paaya is liye sab apne apne hisab gavo me hukum chalta hai pichli bar ye trisul Bhanupratap ke pita ne nikala tha

Ajay - aur kaka kaise h aap
kaka - theek hu ajay beta bas khet pani dene laya ho gaya h
Ajay - kisme pani dena h kaka
Kaka - ganne me pani dena ha jo lagbhag tayar ho gaya h iske baad pani nahi dena padega
Ajay - chaliye kaka mai tubel start kar deta hu aur mai tubel start kar diya
Uske baad kaka khetO me pani dekhne lage
mai kaka se bola kaka mai jar nadi hokar aata hu
Kaka - jaldi aana beta malkin jannengi aap us taraf gaye the to gussa hongi

Mai - theek h kaka jaldi laut aaunga
aur mai us taraf chal diya
hamre gaon ke last ek kone par jangal hai aur dusri taraf nadi jati h
Mai wha 10 min me pahuch jata hu
jaha ka watawarn kafi madhur tha yaha aane par meri kuch yaade taza ho jati thi mai hab 8 saal ka tha ti apne papa ke sath yaha ghumne aaya karta jaha aane se mujhe bahut hi sukun milta tha jaise mai papa ke pas aa gaya hu
Kuch der time bitane ke baad mai khet pe aa gaya aur dekha ganne me paani bhai gaya h to tubel jakar band kar diya
Aur kaka se bola
Mai - achha kaka ab ghar chlte h agar kuch chiye ho to aaj ghar pe aa jaiyega

Kaka- nahi beta abhi kuch nahi chahiye jab jarurat hogi bata doonga

Mai - ,achha kaka chlata hu school ki bhi chuti hone wali h
aur kaka se itna bol kar mai aage nikal aaya

School ke paas pahucha dekha chutti ho chuki h shruti gate pe khadi thi aur se le kar mai gjar aa gaya

Ghar pahuch kar muh haat doya aur maa se khana kha kar so gaya
saam ko need meri shruti ke jagane se khuli

Shruti - bhaiya maa aap ko kasart karne ke liye kab se bula rahi h aap abhi tak so rahe h

Mai - aacha gudiya ja maa se bol mai aa raha hu aur shruti chali gayai

Mai banya aur nikkar me waha pahucha

Ghar ke peeche me ek khali maidan h jisme mai daily kasart karta hu kuki hamara ghar sabse kinare h aur is taraf koi aata jata nahi h

Jaha cement ke bane huwe do dumble rakhe huwe the ek lagbhag 120kg ke aas pas aur dushra 80 kg ka bana huwa tha
Mai waha pahucha dekha maa aur shruti pahle se baithi mera intazar kar rahi thi


Mujhe dekhte hi maa boli
maa - aaj tum lete ho gaye ho
ground ke 30 chakar lagao
mai salo se ye sab kar raha tha kyu mujhe nahi pta maa hi mujhse ye sab kar wati thi
Mai daily 25 chakar lagata tha
aur mai bhagana start mar diye jo ki 30 chakar bahut hi jaldi pura ho gaya Phir maa boli

Maa - ab is dumble ko 50 bar uthao

Mai - maa aap ku daily badhati chali ja rahi ho

Maa - kuki beta tumhe aage bahut hi bade bade kaam ko anjam dena h is liye jo kahu wo karo

Uske baad mai dumble uthata raha eske baad 200 pusup mara aur phir last me 80 kg dumble lekar ground ke 10 chakkar lagaya aur mai jisse aaj kafi thak gaya

Mai kasarat kar ke kafi thak gaya tha tab maa boli chal beta mai pani gram kar deti hu tu naha le
kuki November ka mahina h thandhi padne lagi thi

Mai - theek h maa
uske baad maa ne pani garam kiya aur mai naha ke aaya aur bistar pe let gaya kuch der baad Shruti aur maa mere kamre me aayi
chuki maa aur Shruti dusre wale kamre me soti thi

Maa - le beta ye doodh aur kagha pee le thakawat nahi lagegi
daily mai doodh aur kadha peeta tha pta nahi maa usme kya kya mila ke deti thi jo bahut hi fayda karta tha
Aur mai dono pee liya

Maa - achha beta tu let ja mai tera sarir ki malis kar du

Aur mai upar ke kapde nikal ke let gaya

Shruti - maa mai bhi bhaiya ki malis karungi

Mai - are gudiya tu kyu mehnat karegi maa kar degi

Shruti - zid karte huwe nahi mujhe bhi karna h malish

Maa - achha aa tu bhi apne bhaiya ki malis kar de

Uske baad meri malis maa aur shruti karne lagi jisse mujhe bahut hi sukun mil raha tha

Achanak
Shruti - boli maa aap bhaiya ko itana kyu kasrat karwati h

Maa - kyu ki beta koi musibat aaygi to hamari raksha kaun karega

Shruti - fir bhi maa koi itna kasrat karwTa hai kya kisi se

Mai santi se dono ki baate sun raha tha isi prakar shruti maa se bahas karte huw meri malis kar di uske baad maa khana banane chali gayi aur mai aur shruti school ke bare me baate karne lage

Dusri taraf
Thakur Gajendra ki haweli me ek aadami Bheema ka pair pakad ke gid gida raha tha

Aadmi - malik mujhe chod dijiye ab dobara aisi galti nahi hogi

Bheema - Chal ja baag tuje jane deta ek bayankar bol phute Bheema ke mukh se

Wo aadmi kapte huwe utha aur bhagne laga

Uske baad Bheema ne waha rakhe huwe bhale ko uthya aur aadmi ko nisana banaya aur fenk diya

Aadmi - ahhhh aur ek dardnak cheek gunj uthi aur wo haweli ke gate pe gir ke dam tod diya
waha sab ke sab ye nazara dekh ke kaanp uthe

Bheema - gaddari karne wale ko Bheema ek hi saza deta h aur wo h maut ki saza ek raubdar awaj me garjana kya

Dusri taraf
Bp singh ke hweli me

Sabhi dinning table pe baithe huwe the jaha raat ke khane ki plate lag chuki thi haweli me khana ek dayi banati h jo verso se haweli me rahti h
Bp - Jai beta kaisi rahi meeting tumhari

Jai - Achhi rhi dada ji is baar tender hame mila h

Sp - achha beta badiya is bar ham apnegaon ko sahar ki sadko se jod denge

Jai - ha papa yaha ke log shar se na jude hone ke karan kafi samasya hoti h

Bp - ha beta isse to hamre gaon ka vikas hi hoga

Isi prakar ki baate hoti rahi aur sabka khana peena ho gaya aur sab sone chle gaye

Idhar mai aur shruti baate kar rhe the tabhi maa ne hame khane pe bulayaAur ham sab sath baith ke khane lage

Shruti achanak boli

Shruti - maa maa bhaiya ka 2 din baad bhaiya ka birthday h

Maa - are ha mai to bhul hi gayi thi ki mera beta parso 20 ka ho jayega

Mai - ha maa mai to bhul hi gaya tha ki mera parso birthday h

Shruti - bhaiya apne birthday pe is bar mujhe ghumane le chlo ge na

Mai - ha gudiya chal is bar ham khub maje karenge aur Raat me sab dost mil kar khoob maje karenge

Tab beech me maa boli

Maa - are bacho khanA khal lo bahut raat ho gayi kal tum dono ko school bhi jana h
aur fir ham sab khanA kha kar sone chle aaye jo
aur mai mitte spno ki wadiyon me kho gaya

 

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UPDATE 4


Uske baad raghav bola

Raghav - jisne bhi mere aadmi ko mara h samne aa jaye nahi to yaha pe khadi koi koi bhi ladki nahi bachegi

Jaise jaise gunde aage badh rahe the waha ke khade log dar se kampne lage the
gunde kul mila ke 15 16 ke aas pass the jo do gadiyo me aaye the

tab mai bole

Mai - ruk jao warna kisi ko nahi chodunga

Lakkha - dekho bhaiyon ek ladka hame dara raha raha

Aur sab thahake mar ke hasne lage

Lakkha - ja bache ja pahle apni maa ke doodh pe ke aa

Mai - agar aaj maine tumhe tumhari nani ki yaad na dila di to mera naam bhi ajay nahi

Raghav - sale ab tu nahi bachega dekh ke rahe ho maro sale ko hero ban raha h

Ek gunga ek hokey le ke meri taraf badhne laga aur mere paas aake jaise hi usne hokey marne ke liye uthya mai use ek bahut hi jor ka ghusa uske pet mera jisse wo udhta huwa raghav ke gaddi me ja ke lada aur uske muh se khoon aa gaya aur wahi wo dam tod diya

Iske baad do gunde ek sath meri taraf daude

Mai bhi dono ki taraf dauda aur udte hye un dono ko pakda aur apne ghuto ke niche le ke patka jisse wo jamin me dab gaye

Ye dekh ke baki gunde thoda dar gaye

Lakhha - salo es pille ko ek sath maro

Sbhibek sath mere taraf daude aur mai bhi daud laga diya kisi ka pair tuta kisi ka hath kisi ka sar phuta
aur sab jamin pe gire pade huwe krah rahe the

Lakka - ye bhache ab tuje koi nahi bacha sakta
lakha aur kalwa daudte huwe aaye aur mujhe ek ghusa mare jissi mai thodi dur ja kegira
phir mai utha aur dobara jaise hi marne ke liye do ne hath aage badhaya mai dono ke hath pakad ke lati aur ghuso ki barsat kar diya jissse Lakkha adhmar ho gaya aur kalwa ko todha kam mara jo pas jami pe karah raha tha

Raghav - gusse me haramkhor ab tujhe nahi chodunga aur apni bandook konmujhe marne ke liye jaise hi uthya

Mai kood ke uske paas gaya aur use utha ke patka diya jisse wo dard se tilmila gaya

Dubara utha aur jaise hi mujhe marne ko huwa mai hawa me kood ke ek jabardast ghoosa uske kan ke paas mara jisse wo wahi pe kisi ped ki traah gir gaya

Mai - kalwa se ja apne malik ko utha jaldi aur nikal yaha se

Aur wo kisi tarah sabko gadi me dala aur nikal gaya

Dusri taraf
Ek bahut hi ghana jungal tha jisme under jane par kafi bayawah lag raha tha jaha koi aam insan sapne me bhi jane ki kalpna kare
Ushi jangal me Bheema chalte huwe ja raha tha zhadiyo ko hatate huwe wo bhadha ja raha tha
kuch dur jane pe ek pahadi dikh rahi thi jaha kafi andhera dikh raha tha jo dekhne se hi kisi kali sakti ka aasry lag raha tha
Bheema us pahadi pe chadhne laga aur us par chala gaya jaha ek gufa dikh rahi thi wo us ghufa me chala gaya
waha ek danav jaisa aadmi ek havan kund ke paas baitha huwa tha aur samne ek bade se danav ki murti bani huwi thi
Bheema uske paas pahuch ke

Bheema - pranam gurudev
jo Bheema ka guru tha isliye mai use guru hi likhunga

Guru - apni aankhe khol ke aao aao Bheema mai tumhara hi intazar kar raha tha

Bheema - aisi kya baat hai gurudev jo aap mera intzar kar rahe the

Guru - aaj mai tumhe aisi sakti dunga ki jisse tumhe koi manav nahi hara paayega

Bheema - iske baad mai is dharti pe raj krunga aur ek bhyanak thahaka laga ke hasa jise gufa uske thahake se dahal gayi agar waha koi hota to wo dar se hi waha mar jata

Guru - aao bheema baitho mere paas baitho
aur Bheema apne guru ke paas baith gaya

Uske baad guru kuch mantr bolne lage aur uske baad wo bheeme ke sar pe hath rakh diye jisse Bheema ka sari jhatke dene laga aur saant ho gaya

Dushri taraf
Raghav ko le jane ke baad hamare gaon ke jamindar bhi apne aadmiyo ke le ke pahuch gaye the
jamindar inka naam
Shudhir singh h jo ki bahut hi achhe aadmi h aur unki ek beti h jiska naam Kajal h jo mere h class me h aur hamre ghar se inka aana jana rahta h

Shudhir singh ko mai jamindar hi likhunga

Jamindar - principal kya huwa kon tha wo

Pinci - ne sab bata diya jo bhi huwa tha uske baad jamindar bole

Jamindar - jo bhi yaha huwa koi kisi se nahi batayega sabhi log kaan khol ke sun lo Thakur ko nahi pta chalna cahiye uske bete ko kisne mara

Ladki mere paas aai aur boli

Ladki - dhanyawad bhaiya aaj aap nahi hote to mera kya hota

Mai - are bhaiya bol rahi ho aur dhanyawad bhi kah rahi ho kya ek bhai apni bahen ki raksha nahi kar sakta

Ladki - maaf kar dije bhaiya mere kahne ka wo mtlb nahi tha

Mai - chlo chodo in baato ko pahle aapne bhaiyon ko vaidh ji ke paas le chalo

Mai - zamindar ko chacha bolta tha jab unko aaya dekha to bola
chach in dono ko vaidh ji ke paas le chaliye
Tab chacha ne apne aadmiyon ko kaha aur wo dOno ko utha liyr aur sath me ladki bhi chali gayi

Tab chacha mere paas aaye aur mujhse bole

Zamindar - ajay beta kya jarurt thi ye sab karne ki agar tumhe kuch ho jata to mai bhabhi ko kya jawab deta

Mai - chacha muzse aanyaya hote huwe nahi dekha jata

Chacha - achha chlo koi baat nahi
aur sab apne apne ghar chaliye aur ha yaad rahe jo mai bola sabko yaad rahe
Zamindar - apne ek aadmi se jao Hukum ( Bhanu parap ji )ke yaha khabar kar do jo yaha huwa aur naam mat batana Ye sab kisne kiya
Aur sab apne apne ghar chale gaye kuki is lafde ke karan school bhi band ho gaya
aur ham bhi chacha ke sath ghar chal diye
is ghatna krm me Shruti abhi tak mujhse kuch nahi boli thi

Udhar kalwa gadi le ke pahle hospital pahucha jo gaon se 30 min ke rashte pe tha jaha se sahar suru hota tha
Uske baad sabko admit karwake turant wo gadi le ke haweli bhaga aur wo waha pauchA dekha haweli me koi dikh nahi raha tha any naukaro se pta karne pe pta chala ki sirf thakur(ab mai gajedra ko tkthakur likhunga)
wo unke paas pahucha

Kalwa - malik malik

Thakur jo baith ke hukka pee raha tha usko dekh ke

Thakur - are kalwa tu yaha kya kar raha h aur ye chot kaise lagi tujhe

Kalwa - wo wo mamamalik

Thakur - hakla kyu raha h jaldi bta

Kalwa - darte huwe malik chtchote malik hospital me h

Thakur - kaise wo hospital pahuch gaya aur baki ke aadmi kaha h

Kalwa ne purighatna bata diya thakur ko jisse wo aag babula ho gaya

Thakur - achha chal pahle mujhe hospital le ke chal
Aur wo dono gadi le ke hospital pahuch gaya aur raghav ke room ke pass pahuch gaye jaha uska operation ho raha tha
Kuki kalwa doctor ko bta diya tha ye kaun h jisse uska turant h ilaj hone laga tha

Tabhi ot ka darwaja khulta h aur doctor apna mask nikalte huwe nikalta h

Thakur - doctor mera pota kaisa h ab

Doctor - sir wo ab koma me h kuki uske dimag ke nichle hisse ki nase dab gayi h aur uske kamar ki haddi bhi jod se thodi bagal ho gayi h
Ye sunke thakur badak gaya
Aur kalwa se pucha

Thakur - kon tha wo jo apni jindgi se ub gaya jo itni himmat uski ki thakur se dusmani mol le li

kalwa - malik jo hamare gaon ke pachim me h waha

Thakur - chal turant haweli aur apne aadmiyon ko le chal aaj uki us gaon se arthi hi uthegi

wo dhadhadhate huwe nikal liye waha se

Idar
Zamin dar ka aadmi haweli pahuch gaya aur Bp singh ko sari baat bta diya kyu huwa kya huwa aur Bp bole chlo abhi ham thode der me aate h aur wo chala aaya

Idahar
ham sab ghar pahuch gaye aur chacha apne ghar ghar pe pahuchne pe dekha ki maa baharhi mera intazar kar rahi thi sayad jo huwa wo maa ko bhi pta chal gaya tha
Ha chalte huw maa ke paas pahuch gay jaha mujhe maa kuch nahi boli mere liye ye kisi zhatke se kam nahi tha
Kahir ham sab ghar me aagaye Aur mai apne kamre aaya aur kapde nikal ke half lower aur banyan dal ke bistar pe let gaya tab tak dekha maa aur Shruti mere kamre me aa gayi thi

maa mere paaa ayi aur boli
.
Maa - chal thoda khada ho ja
Aur mai khada ho gaya maa mere hath pair dekhne lagi aur meri banyan bhi utrwa di jaha mere pheeth me 3, 4 nisan pade the sayadladai karte huwe lag gaya hi but us samay mujhe pta nahi chal tha jo ab halka halka dard ho raha tha

Maa - ja Shruti beta tel garam kar ke le aa dekh kitne bade bade nisan pad gaye h aur Shruti tel garam kar le aayi

Maa - ab tu pet ke bal let ja

Mai let gaya aur maa meri malish karne lagi

Maa - kya jarurat thi akele ulajhne ki agar kuch ho jata to

Shruti - ha maa wha itne gunde the bhaiya akele hi ladne lage jo sab kisi bhaise se kam nahi the
mai dar hi gayi thi agar aapko kuch ho jata to mai kya karti
Aur wo roni si surat bana li jo dekhne me bahut hi maasum lag rahi thi jisse dekh mujhe uspe bahut hi pyar aa raha tha

Mai - are gudiya tu kyu dar gayi kya tera bhai isiliye itni mehnat karta h ha

Maa - abhi chup raho dono baad me baat karna pahle dono aaram kar lo

Aur meri malis kar ke maa aur shruti chali gayi aur mai kuch der me so gaya

Bhar gaon me sabhi chaupal pe baithe huwe the thabhi waha 5 ,6 Scorpio aa ke ruki aur usme se thakur sahit aur Uske hathiyar band bande utre

Tabhi do min baad 6 Scorpio aur aa ke ruki
unme se Bp aur unke aadmi utre

Thakur - Bp ko dekh ke man me ye yaha kya karne aaya h yahi sichte huwe chaupal pe pahuch gaya

Thakur - kiski himmat huwi mere pote ko chune ko uski boti boti kaat dunga

Tab tak Bp bhi waha pabuch gaye the

Bp - thakur auwKat me baat karo ye mera ilaka h aur tere bete ne glti ki thi saza use milni hi thi chahe jo de use

Thakur - jissne mere bete ko mara use nahi chodu ga

Aur Bp sabka hisab mai lunga

Bp - agar mele ke pahle tu ya tere bete ya tere kisi aadmi ne kisi gaon wale pe hAth uthya to tu mele me bhaag nahi le paayega

Thakur ye sun ke til mila gaya
thakur - Bp bahut hi jald phir hamari mulakat hogi
aur wo babhanate huwe waha se nikal liya

Bp - achha sudhir mai chalta hu mujhe aur bhi kaam
aur ha mujhe tum us bahadur se kab mila rahe ho

Sudhi yani zamindar

Zamindar - hukum jald h

Aur sabhi khade ho ke parnam kiye aur Bp chle gaye
is prakar se mere naam ko daba diya gaya
jo ki kisi bade kkam ki taraf isara kar raha tha

Udhr gupha me
Us gupha me ab Bheema ko hosh aa gaya tha jo dikhne me aur hi bhayanak ho gaya tha chehare pe ur hi krurta aa gayi thi aur wo waha se apne guru se aagya le ke apni haweli ki taraf chal pada
jaha pahuch kar us ghatna ki jankari mili ki uska chota bhai koma me h jisse bahut h gussa aaya use ki koi uske bhai ko marne ki himmat kiya
philhal wo mele ka soach ke sant ho gaya aur usse mele ke baad milne ki socha

Idhar
ham sab khana kha ke so gaye aur agli subha apne kamo me lag gaye

Shruti - maa bhaiya ka kal birthday h mai kajal didi ko bulane ja rahi hu
kaja zamindar ki beti inka ana janna laga rahtaa h

Maaa - achga ja jaldi aana

Shruti - theek h ma

Mai kahi ghumne gaya tha mai ghar pe nahi tha

Shruti zamindar ke ghar pahuch gayi zamindar ka ghar ek khothi ki trah tha jo dekhne me kafi sundar tha

Shruti khothi ke andar chali gayi khothi me kaam karne wale apne apne kaam kar rahe the Shruti sidhe Kajal ke room me chali gayi
jaha kaja apne bed pe let ke padh rahi thi Shruti kamre me pahuchi aur boli

Shruti - are didi aap kab mama ke ghar se aayi

Kajal - are choti tu kab aayi mai to kal hi aayi hu

Shruti - mai to abhi abhi aayi jab aap padhne me busy thi

Kajal - aur bata kya ho raha h aur chachi kaisi h

Shruti - maa theek h mai aapko bulane aayi thi kal bhaiya ka birthday h

Kajal - chaukte huwe kya kal ajay ka birthday h mai to bhul h gayi thi
ruk mai abhi tayar ho ke aayi

Shruti - chachi nahi dikhiye di kaha h
kajal ki maa Suneeta jo bahut hi achE swabhav ki h ye apni eklauti beti se bahut pyar karti h aur ajay ko bahut manti h

Kajal tayar ho ke apni maa ke room ke taraf chal di aur room me pahuch ke

Kajal - maa mai ajay ke ghar ja rahi hu kal uska birthday h

Suneeta - Ajay ka birthday h kal aur mujhe aaj pta chala

Kajal - ha maa aur Shruti mujhe bulane aayi h

Suneeta - ek kaam karna tu bhabhi ji ko mana lena is bar ajay ka birthday hamre ghar manya jaya

Kajal - sach ma tab to mai chachi ko jarur tayar kar lungi

Suneeta - theek h ja beta .
aur dono ghar aaya gayi jaha maa baithi thi

Kalal - maa ke pair chu kar namste chachi

Maa - kush raho beti jug jug jio

Maa - aur betI maat kaisi h tumhari

Kajal - theek h
aur yahi gupsup chalu ho gaya aur kajal emotional blackmail kar ke tayar kar li ki ajay ka birthday uske ghar manya jayaega
Aur jab mai ghar aaya tabtak kajal ja chuki thi
kajal je ke apni maa se bta di chachi tayar ho gayi h
isi prakar aaj ka din beet gaya aur raat ho gayi aur ham kha pe ke sone chal diye

 

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Update 5

Kisi ek bhayanak mahal me jaha kafi andhera chaya huwa tha jaha pe insani sarir sad gal gayi the ek bhaut hi dam ghotu badbu aa rahi thi
jaha ek pal bhi koi ruk jaye r
To badbu se hi mar jata wahi us wiran mahal me chirag Aur massale jal rahi thi jisse us biavan mahal ke andhkar ko dur kar raha tha
andar mahal me kafi chal pahal thi jaha bhaut hi bhadhe aur kurup prani thahal rahe the jisse dekh ke kisi bhi insan ki peesab nikal jaye

Aage ek tahkhana bana huwa tha jaha kai log bandi bane huwe the
aur ek taraf kuch haywan ek wakti ko baandh ke mar rahe the uski halat bhahut hi kharab thi jo dekhne se hi pta chalta tha ki use salo se aise hi torcher kiya ja raha tha
uski dardnak chikho se pura mahal dahal jata tha jis chikh ko sun ke koi bhi dahal jaye
aadmi ke face pe ek tez dikhayi de raha tha
aadmi dard se tadpte huwe beta kaha h mujhe in hayono se bacha kab aayega tu betaaaaaa aur uski lambi chitakar se wo behos ho Gaya

Mai ek bahut hi tez awaj ke sath chilya papaaaa
Aur isi ke sath mai uth ke baithi gaya maa bhi daudh ke mere kamre me aayi
maa ne dekha ki mai bhaut hi gabrya aur is thadhi ke mausam me bhi mere mathe se passina tapak raha tha

maa - kya huwa beta itna tez se chikha kyu koi bura sapna dekha kya

Tab tak mai sambhal chuka tha aur maine sari baat maa ko bata diya
is samay subha hone wali thi
jisse maa ke face pe ek chinta ki lakir aa gayi
Mai maa se bola

Mai - maa maine suna h bhor ka sapna sach ho jata h

Maa - gHabra kar apne aap ko sambhalte huwe nahi beta ye sab sirf kahawte h kabhi sapna bhi sach hotha h kya tu itna mat soch

Maa - man me lagta h mujhe baba se milna padega

hamri bate ho rahi thi dekha shruti bhi aa gayi mere kamre me

Shruti - maa aap itni subha bhaiya ke kamre me kaise aa gayi

Maa - kya mai apne beta ke kamre me itni subha nahi aa sakti kya

Shruti - hadada kar n na nahi maa aisi baat nahi h

Maa - haste Huwe Shruti ke dekh ke achha chalo ab subha bhi ho gayi h jao sab fresh ho jao

Mai utha aur fresh hUwa maa ne pahle maa ne mujhe kasarat karwya aur uske baad hamne mil ke nashta kiya nasta kar ke Shruti boli

Shruti - bhaiya aapne wada kiya tha ki aaj aap apne birthday pe ghumane le chalenge

Mai - ha ha bola tha jao tayar ho jao ham chalte h
shruti Tayar hone chali gayi aur mai bhi naye kapde pahan liya aur maa boli jaldi aana beta
Aur ham nikal liye raaste me Shruti ne bataya ki Kajal bhi chalegi hamare sath aur ham usko bhi sath le ke sair pe nikal liye

Aur maa bhi ghar me tala laga ke Baba se milne nikal padi aur baba ke kutiya me pahuch gayi waha ja ke baba ko prnam ki aur mere sapne ke bare me batai jise sun ke baba ne meri kundali manga
aur use kafi dyan se padhe aur jo baba ne bataya
meri kundali dekhne ke baad kuch der baad bole

Baba - ye ladka kisi khas karya ko pura karne ke liye is manav yoni me jnam liya h
jld hi duniya iske dwara kiye gaye karyon ko yugo tak yaad rakhegi

Maa - baba par mera beta to ek aam insan h to phir kaise

Baba - beti ye wakt hi to sab kuch nirdharit karta h ab tumhare bete ka wakt ghum gaya h jld hi wah ek unsuljhe rahse ke sagar me pravesh karne wala h

Maa - prantu baba abhi mere bete ko is duniya ke bare me bhi achhe se nahi pta ki duniya kya hoti h

Baba - beti sab wakt pe chod do kuch baate wakt ke pahle kisi ko na pta chle to hi behtar hota h nahi to is sristi pe asar padta

Aur use is rahsye ke banwar se nikalna hoga

Isi tarah baba ne bahut baate maa ko mere jivan ke bare me bataye aur uske baad baba se vida le ke ghar aa gayi

Idhar

Ham sab ghumte huwe gaon ke bahar nikal aaye aur kajal mujhse boli

Kajal - are ajay jab se mai aai hu mai tumhare hi karname sun rahi h kya baat h ek hi baar me hero ban gaye

Mai - kaha ye to bas gaon wale ki itni choti baat ko badha chadha kr batane ki aadat h

Kajal - mere baaju ko daba kar chek karte huwe ha wo to mai dekh hi rahi hu

Yu hi baate karte huwe ham nadi pe aa gaye

Shruti - bhaiya chalo na ham nadi me nahate h

Mai - kaise nahaogi dushre kapde bhi nahi laayi ho

Kajal - ha Shruti ajay sahi kah raha h

Shruti - theek h udas hote huwe

Mai - Shruti ko udas hote dekh ke are gudiya tu udas kyu hoti h ham phir khabhi aayenge ye sun ke Shruti kafi khush ho gayi

Mai - chalo us ped ke niche baithe h pas me ek kadam ka ped tha jo kafi purana lag raha tha jo kabfi ghana tha
aur ham uske niche aa ke ped ki ot leke baith gaye
Shruti waha idhar udhar se chidiyon ko udane lagi aur ek khargosh bhi mil gaya jise wo paresan karne lagi

Tabhi kajal mujhse boli

Kajal - ajay

Mai - hmmm

Kajal - dekho kitna suhana mausam h aur kitni santi hai yaha

Mai - Hmm

Kajal - yaha aa ke dil ko kitna sukun mila raha h man kar raha h yahi pe puri jindagi hi rah jaUn

Mai - ha kajal yaha aane pe mujhe bahut hi sukun milta h

Kajal - yani tum pahle bhi yaha aa chuke ho

Mai - ha mai aksar yaha aata hu

Kajal - agar tumhe kuch ho jata to ham sab ka kya hota tum akele hi unse ladne lage the tumhe dar nahi laga

Mai - are tum sab ka pyar jab tak sath ho tab tak mujhe kuch nahi ho sakta

Mere duniya hi tum sab se suru hoti h aur wahi khatam ho jati h

mai - waise agar mujhe kuch ho jane par tumhe meri kyu fikar h chutki lete huwe

Kajal - man me bewkoof samjhta nahi h kaise batau mai tumse pyar karti hu tumhare bina mai nahi rahi sakti

Mai - tum kuch bol rahi ho kya

Kajal - hadbada kar na nahi mai mai kuch nahi bol rahi hu

Tab tak Shruti aa gayi ar boli bhaiya chaliye ghar chalte h sham ho gayi
kajal chalo jan bachi nahi to abhi peeche h pad jata kuch boli

Mai - ha chalo kafi time bhi ho gaya h
aur ham sab ghar ki taraf nikal liye gaon me pahuchte pahuchte sham ho gyi

Shruti - bhaiya chaliye aaj kajal didi ke ghar chalna h

Mai - are maa kab se intazar kar rahi hogi ghar pe aur raat bhi hone wali h

Shruti - chalo to sahi pahle aap sawal bahut karte h aur mai chap unke sath chal diya

Mai kajal ke ghar ke paas pahucha to dekha ki
Kajal ghar bahut hi sandar tarike se sajaya gaya tha jo dekhne .e bahut hi khubsurat lag raha tha
aur ham andar aa gaye jaha ghar me andhera andhera tha aur pura haAl me bahut hi santi chai huwui thi
mai jaise hi ghuma to dekha Shruti aur kajal bhi gayab ho gayii mai soachne laga ye dono kaha chali gayi aur baki ke ghar wale sab kaha h abhi mai apni soacho me guM tha dekha achanak haal me rosni ho gayi aur mere upar phulo ki barsat hone lagi

Jaha maa chacha chachi aur gaon ke kafi log happy birthday to you ajay ki awaj se haal goonj utha
mai to pura sock ho gaya

Shruti - kyu bhaiya surprise kais raha

Mai - abhi bhi muh faade ye sab dekh raha tha achanak Shruti ki awaj sun ke hadbada gaya
jisse sabhi log hasne lage mai jhep gaya

Iske baad mai ne cake kata jispe mera naam likha gaya tha aur pahle maa ko khillaya aur phir Shruti aur kajal ko
iske baad sabhi jo mere liye gift laye the mijhe de diye
aise hi sabka khana peena ho gaya
aur kajal sab se najar bacha ke mujhe kichte huwe chat pe le gayi

Mai - ,ye kya h tu mujhe yaha kyu le aayi koi dekh liya to kya soachega

Kajal - kyu tumhe mere sath rahna pasand nahi h

Mai - nahi aisi baat nahi h agar koi dekhta to kya soachta

Kajal - dekhne do koi kya soache ga

Mai - achha theek h ye batao tum mujhe yaha kyu lai

Kajal - ha ha ma... mai.. mai
Haklate huwe

Mai - ye kya mai mai laga rakhi ho jaldi bolo nahi to mai ja raha hu

Kajal - man me kaise bolu mai tumse pyar karti Hu

Mai - are kha kho gayi mai jao kya

Kajal - jaldi se ajay mai tumse bahut pyar karti hu aur mai tumhare bina nahi ji sakti

Mai - gussa hone ka nakat karte huwe Tez se kya
Kajal mujhe guss e me dekh ke thodha dar gayi aur sar neeche kar li aur siskne lagi

Mai ye dekh ke
Natak khatam karte hue

use kheech ke gale laga liya aur bola mai bhi tumse pyar karta hu kajal agar tumhare papa ko pata chala to kya soachenge

Kajal mere gale lagte hi siskana band kar di aur kas ke mere gale lag gayi aur boli kuch nahi bolenge kaha dungi mai ki ajay se pyar karti hu mai

Mai - achha

Aur kajal sarma ke aur tej se mere gale lag gayi
yu hi ham aise hi kafj der tak pade rahe jisse dil ko kafi sukun mil raha THa

Mai bola chalo neeche chalte h kafi time ho gaya aaye huwe aur ham neeche aa gaye
jaha lagbhag sab ja chuke the
aur hamne khana khya aur wahi so gaye

 

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