Incest SAAJAN

[shahnaz123]

Wow...Marvelous Update
Yaar your too good yaar flash back ke saath saath age kya ho raha hai ye bi bata diya
Apko reader ka man me kya hai ye pata karna ata hai shayad sirf flashback batane se kuch log bore ho jate hai include to me
Weldone yar super salute apko
Main kabhi sochi bhi nahi thi ki aage chal kar ye story itni achi banegi
Divya aur saajan ki love chemistry gajab hai
Flashback itna interesting hoga..maine expect nahi ki thi
Kya satik jagah lakar flashback break mara hai...
Vo bhi new style me...excellent...I Like it
Saloni to bahut kuch raj ke bare me janti hai..par kaise...?
Mera doubt sahi tha...raj ke pas pahle se powers hain
Durjan ko chunouti dene wala shayad saajan hi ho..?
Is competition ki sabhi sharte bhi baki stories se different hain...aur behtar bhi
Over all superbbb...mind blowing update dear

 

[shahnaz123]

bhai sabse pahle thanks ki aapne
meri comment ka itna achha
Response diya,
bhai ek mahan writer ki yahi
pahchan hai ki vo kabhi khud ko
mahan nhi samajhta hai,
aur jo khud hi ye samajhne lagta hai ki
vo sarvshresth hai uski shresthata
swatah hi khatm ho jati hai,
bhai beshak yaha par aur bhi bahot
achhe writer hai,
lekin ghatnao ka varnan aur pyar ki
bhavna ka varnan karne ki jo kshamta
aapke bhitar hai wo maine bahot hi kam
lekhako me dekhi hai,
aapki ek ghatna se dusri ghatna ko jodne
ki kala itni shandaar hai ki mai
bata nhi sakta,
kis ghatna ko kaha par break karna
hai aur gatnao ka kram kis prakar
hoga ye hi thriller stories ki khasiyat
hoti hai,
aur jo lekhak inka sahi istemal kar leta
hai uski kahani khud hi shresth ho jati hai,
aur aapne 100% inka sahi istemal kiya
hai,
bhai aapki story me itni shakti hai ki ye logo ko apne se bandh kar rakh sake,
ab mai aur adhik bolkar comment
ko adhik lamba nhi karna chahta,
lekin mai ye janta hoon ki maine
aaj tak na aisi kahani padhi hai
aur na hi aapke jaisi lekhan shaili
kisi writer ka hai

I agree with u dear
Ye story baki sabhi stories se different hai
Aur har mamle me lajawab bhi

 

[anrohit]

Awesome Update ....

 

[Alex123]

Awesome update brother

 

[Prince surya]

UPDATE**116​

6th Janam ki Love Story Continues……..


Divya nadi ke kinare saajan ke sine par sar rakh ke leti huyi thi…dono is hasin lamho ko apne nishchal pyar ki gawahi de rahe rahe the..


Divya—saajan mujhe na ….aaj poora din tere sath rahna hai….


Saajan—roj to milte hain hum


Divya—phir bhi..mai hamesha tere paas rahna chahti hu…mujhe akele kuch bhi achcha nahi lagta…bas har pal teri in baho me rahne ko dil karta hai


Saajan—mera bhi to yahi haal hai


Divya—to phir kar le na mujhse shadi…phir hum hamesha ke liye ek ho jayenge

Mai—haa…divya mai bhi to yahi chahta hu


Divya—kabhi kabhi to mujhe aisa lagta hai ki hum kabhi ek ho hi nahi payenge....sara jamana hamara dushman bana hua hai


Mai—mujhe kisi ki parwah nahi hai....bas agar tum sath ho to


Divya—mai to hamesha se sirf tumhari hu..saajan..sirf tumhari…mere tan…mere mann…meri atma par kewal saajan ka hi adhikar hai aur har janam me rahega…tumhare alawa dusra aur koi mujhe hath bhi nahi laga sakta


Mai—mai ye janta hu…mera dil bhi to hamesha tera hi talabgar hai


Divya—phir bhi mujhe aisa kyo lagta hai ki koi hai jo hame alag karna chahta hai....mujhe bahut darr lagta hai saajan jab mai tumse alag hone ke bare me sochti hu


Mai—hame mout bhi alag nahi kar sakti divya....mout sirf hamara sharir mita sakti hai....hamare dilo ka pyar nahi....hum ek duje ki atma me bas chuke hain aur atma amar hai...to hua na hamara pyar bhi amar


Divya—tumhe itni achchhi bate koun sikhata hai..


Mai—tumhara..yeeeeee..dilllll


Divya—aahhh...hath hatao gande kahi ke....shadi ke baad vaha hath lagana


Mai—mai to tumhe bata raha tha bas


Divya—pata hai...kuch na kuch batane ke bahane aaj kal tumhara hath roj vahi jata hai


Mai—achcha baba....aaj se vaha nahi lagaunga ..ab khush


Divya—naraz ho gaye...sab to tumhara hi hai saajan...ab muh mat fulao dekho na meri oor…saajan..dekh na


Lekin saajan kuch bole bagair vaha se uth ke jane lagta hai..tabhi saajan ka pair kisi cheez se takra jata hai aur vo jor se niche girta hai...ye dekhte hi divya jor se chilla uthati hai


Divya—Saajaaaannnnn


Divya sote huye achanak chilla kar bistar se uth jati hai...aur lambi lambi saanse lene lagti hai..


"Kya hua Putri.....tum chillayi kyo"…kaksha me pravesh karte huye maharani Jenifar ne kaha.


"Kuch nahi maa..isne aaj phir saajan ka koi sapna dekha hoga" ..piche aate huye Ratna ne kaha


Jenifar—na jane is sapne se kab picha chhutega....pareshan kar rakha hai meri phool si bachchi ko is kambakht saajan ne


Divya—maaaaa....aisa to na bole


Jenifar—to aur kya bolu….kabhi koi din khali jata hai jab tujhe uska sapna na aata ho


Ratna—maa aap bhi kaha apna sar phod rahi hain…aaj rang mahal me utsav bhi to dekhne jana hai…chal divya jaldi taiyar ho ja….


Divya—mujhe nahi jana ..aap jao


Ratna (haste huye)—arey chal bhi….aaj vaha jagah jagah se log ayenge kya pata tera saajan bhi vaha aaye aaj


Ratna ki ye baat sunte hi divya turant fresh hone chali gayi aur jaldi hi taiyar ho gayi..


Divya—chaliye didi….utsav dekhne


Jenifar—hnnnn….itni jaldi ye kaise taiyar ho gayi

Ratna (mushkurate huye)—aaj kahi uska saajan bhi na aaye utsav me..isliye..


Phir ratna ne maa ko sari baat bata di …jise sun vo bhi hasne lagi..dono ko haste dekh kar divya tunakne lagi


Divya (bhole pan se)—jaiye hame nahi jana…aap dono hamara majak uda rahi hain


Divya ne itni masumiyat se kaha ki dono ko uss par pyar aa gaya…


Jenifar—kisi ki buri nazar na lage..meri putri ko


Ratna—jiski nazar lagni thi uski to kab ki lag chuki


Jenifar—kiski….?


Ratna—saajan ki……hahahha


Divya—maaaa…..dekho na didi ko….ab to sach me nahi jayenge hum


Ratna—achcha yar….ye le main kaan pakad ke mafi mangti hu..


Tabhi maharaj ka adesh aa gaya ki sawari taiyar hai…pratiyogita sthal tak jane ke liye…

Dono bagghi se rang mahal ke liye nikal gayi….jenifar maharaj ke sath gayi…


Rang Mahal ko shandar dhang se sajaya gaya tha…vaha ki technology earth ki tulna me bahut advance thi….log halka fulka magic bhi jante the….


To kuch log aise bhi the jinhe magic me maharat hasil thi…poora maidan darshako se khacha khach bhara hua tha…


Is pratiyogita ko dekhne aur kuch hissa lene dur dur se lakho ki sankhya me log yaha aaye huye the


Tabhi kuch der me hi maharaj alexander aur maharani jenifar ne ayojan sthal par pravesh kiya….


Logo ne apne sar jhuka kar dono ka abhivadan kiya....tatpashchat dono rajkumariyo ka rang mahal me aagman hua....


Dono ke bagghi se niche utarte hi sabhi ki nigaho ko jaise paralisis ho gaya...sab thage se dono ki sundarta me kho gaye....


Kuch manchale jo shayad bhid me apni ankhe sekne hi aaye the...vo aahe bharne lage....


Maharaj ne sab ko baithne ko kah kar raj kumar sushant aur raj guru ko pratiyogita shuru karne ko kaha…

Sushant—aap log shant ho jaiye aur dhyan se meri baat suniye…har varsh ki tarah is baar bhi ye ayojan aaj ho raha hai…kintu iski ek vajah aur bhi hai ki aaj hamari rajkumari divya ka janam din bhi hai…


Logo ne rajkumari divya ki jaykar karne lage…sushant ne baat aage badhayi..


Sushant—is baar pratiyogita me kuch badlav kiye gaye hain...isme kul dus round honge...akhiri round ke vijeta ko rajya ka sarva shreshtha veer hone ka gourav prapt hoga...


Isme kayi rajyo ke rajkumar aur magician bhi aaye huye hain...sabhi ka mai abhi nandan karta hu


Is pratiyogita me kul 500 logo ne hissa liya hai ...iske pahle round me kushti ka muqabla hoga....shart ye hai ki sabhi 500 pratiyogi hamare utne hi pahalwano se kushti ladenge...


Jo jo pratiyogi in pahalwano se jitege vo agle round me pravesh karege to pahla round shuru kiya jaye…….


Adhe pratiyogiyo ki halat to un bhari bharkam pahalwano ko dekhte hi kharab ho gayi…unhone apne naam vapis le liye


Baki bache logo me se 50 agle round me pahuche unko hara kar..el pahalwan mara bhi gaya apne pratidwandwi ke hatho…


Pahla round khatam hone ke baad…


Sushant—kewal 50 log hi hamare bahadur pahalwano par jeet hasil kar ke agle charan me pahuche hain….dusra round aur bhi kathin hai…iski shart ye hai ki har ek pratiyogi ko nishana sadhna hai…isme teen chance milenge…


Apke samne 100 mtr ki duri par ek nakli ullu rakha gaya hai apko uski ankh ka nishana lagana hai….dhyan rahe kewal teen chance hain apke paas….


Sabhi apna nishana sadhne lage....hari jhandi milte hi unhone nishana lagana shuru kar diya…


Kul 50 me se 10 log isme safal rahe lekin teesre chance me... kewal ek ko chhod kar jiske hatho pahalwan ki mrityu huyi thi


Third round ………..Magic Round (normal)


Isme 5 pratiyogi safal rahe…


Sushant—ab is round se hamare rajya ke pratiyogi bhi next round me jeetne par pravesh karenge….yaha se aap log apas me bhidoge…5 logo ke 5 group honge…har group se jeetne wala agle round me jayega


Baki bache 7 round me se 5 me magic hai…aur har ek round me hamare naye 5 log shamil hote jayenge ….ye sabhi purva varsho ke vijeta hain

Isi tarah 8 round complete ho gaye….sabhi pratiyogita ka anand le rahe the….kintu divya ki ankhe uss bhid me saajan ko talash karne me lagi huyi thi…..


Sushant—ab is pratiyogita ka 9th round chalu hoga jo bahut hi kathin aur jaan leva hai….is round ke liye dur desho se aaye 500 pratiyogi me se sirf ek hi yaha tak pahucha hai….shesh char pahle varsho ke vijeta hain….


Is round me apko apas me talwar baji ka muqabla karenge…jo baki char ko hara dega usko us pinjare me band sher se ladna hoga vo bhi bina hathiyar….


Kintu ye round shuru karne se pahle main aap sab ko ye bata du ki aaj tak is sher ko hara kar antim round me koi nahi pahucha...


Har saal ki tarah baki char ko harane wala agar chahe to aage ke liye haar swikar kar sakta hai…


Uss surat me bhi kyo ki vo akela yaha tak ka safar karne wala veer hoga isliye usko vijeta mana jayega…agar koi uski chunouti ko accept nahi karega to……


Maharaj ki oor se anumati milte hi sab ek sath talwar bazi me bhid gaye ek dusre ke upar prahar aur apna bachao karne lage…..kafi der tak apas me ladne ke baad char mare gaye..kewal ek jinda bacha jo shuru se is pratiyogita me shamil tha….


Halanki vo bhi buri tarah se ghayal ho chuka tha…usne ab aur aage badhne se mana kar diya……


Sushant—mubarak ho rajkumar durjan singh…koi hai nexas ke rajkumar durjan singh ko chunouti dene wala…agar nahi to phir unko vijeta ghosit kar diya jayega….


Durjan singh nexas state ka rajkumar hone ke sath kayi shaitani shaktiyo ka malik tha…hawas aur ghamanduske andar kut kut kar bhara hua tha..


Jab kafi der tak sushant ki baat ka koi prattiuttar nahi aaya to durjan singh ko manch par aane ko kaha gaya…tabhi..


"Thahariye Rajkumar Sushant…..Itni bhi kya Jaldi Hai"….sabhi ka dhyan is awaz ki oor chala gaya…


Ye awaz sunte hi divya chounk kar udhar dekhne lagi….us awaz wale shakhs ka chehra dekhte hi uski ankho me ajeeb si chamak aa gayi….


Flashback is Break ke Baad…….


Raj—divya kaha hai…?


Saloni—abhi behosh hai..


Raj—meri help aur jaan bachane ke liye thanks saloni ji


Saloni—meri fees abhi tak baki hai..raj


Raj—waqt aane par mil jayegi fees apko


Saloni—vaise tumhe mera nahi us aurat ka shukriya karna chahiye jisne tumhe bachane ke liye apni jaan de di


Raj—unka karz to mai ab kabhi nahi utar sakta….ha unke liye dua karunga


Saloni—meri samajh me ye nahi aaya ki tumhari kidney theek kyo nahi huyi thi….jabki tumhare paas to pahle se hi adbhut shaktiya hain


Raj—kyo ki mai nahi chahta tha....ye sach hai ki ye meri liye normal baat thi…..mai insani life insano ki tarah jeena chahta hu…shaktiyo ka gulam ban ke nahi


Saloni—tum apne apko pahad se girne se bhi to bacha sakte the…


Raj—nahi bacha sakta tha…..kyo ki sandhya ne shakti prayog kiya tha us patthar par…anjane me hi sahi….magar us pagal pari ko ye nahi malum ki raj ko sirf khud raj hi maar sakta hai…..dusra koi nahi


Saloni—mai samjhi nahi…

Raj—matlab ye ki…Sandhya mujhe shakti se maar to sakti hai lekin tabhi jab mai khud chahu marna tab…..


Saloni—to divya ko theek kar do


Raj—abhi vo pichhle janam ki yaado se jud gayi hai use dekhne do…is neel mani ke prabhav se….


Saloni—ye mani us aurat ke paas dil ke roop me kaise pahuchi aur kab


Raj—ye sawal divya se karna…..kyo ki ye divya aur ratna hi janti hain


Saloni—ratna se nahi miloge


Raj—divya ke hosh me aane ke baad...​

Wah ... Bhai Wah...super duper bomper update hai bhai... Lekin update ko ese suspense pe mat end karo...age kya hoga soch soch ke kahin hame heart attack hi na ajaye....mast update ke liye thanks..

 

[RAJIV SHAW]

Super update hai bhai waiting for next update

 

[Prince sarkash]

Awesome update bro

 

[Aryan s.]

Waiting for more

 

[agyant]

Waiting..

 

[Loveshuda111]

Waiting bhai