Incest SAAJAN

[Akil]

Bahut bahut shukriya akil bhai iss khubsurat prati kriya ke liye..
Chitra ka character kafi interesting rahega..such as in present..payal.
Kulhadi uska pasandida weapon hai..kyo..? jab kahani pahle janam me pahuchegi, tab iska karan bhi pata chal jayega.

Hahahaha woh toh lag hi raha hai bhai and thanks for the clearence ke chitra hi paayal hai apne 7th janm mein aur I think ke anusuiya sha'ad sandhya ya chanchal ho?

 

[Raja thakur]

Fantastic update

 

[Akil]

SAAJAN
UPDATE- 285​

Devraj—swayamvar hoga aur jarur hoga.. vo bhi apne nishchit samay par hi…

Ye kah kar devraj phir se raas rang me mast ho gaye…shayad unhe apni taraf badh rahe khatre ka tanik bhi abhaas nahi tha ya phir unhone devraj hone ke mad me usko jaan bujh kar andekha kar diya tha..

Ki tabhi unhe kisi anya lok me kisi dev shakti ka abhaas hua....

Ab aage......

Kisi anya lok me iss shakti ka abhaas hote hi devraj sahit vaha upasthit anya devta bhi chounk gaye...kyon ki uss shakti ka tez dev lok tak prakirnit ho raha tha.

Pawan dev (PD)—devraj...ye kaisa aloukik prakash hai...jo dusre lok se yaha tak apni roshni bikher raha hai... ? devtao ke alawa itna tez kisi dusre lok ke prani me kaise ho sakta hai... ?

Devraj (hairan)—main bhi yahi soch raha hu..pawan dev....(mann me)..ho na ho...ye shakti avashya hi rajkumari priyadarshini ki hi ho sakti hai..mujhe abhi aur issi samay uske paas jana hoga..

Mann hi mann itna soch kar vo turant hi sabha barkhast kar ke vaha se antardhyan ho gaye...uss disha me jaha se iss urja ke prakashit hone ka abhaas hua tha.

Vo sidhe vrihadpur ki seema me ja kar prakat huye…kintu ab unhe uss urja ka koi sanket milna band ho chuka tha..kyon ki ab tak priyadarshini apne purane roop me aa chuki thi...unhone ankhe band kar ke priyadarshini ko dekhna chaha kintu safal nahi huye..unhe apni ankho ke samne ek ghor andhakar ke siwa kuch nazar nahi aaya.

Devraj (mann me)—roshni to yahi sthan se aa rahi thi... lekin itna jaldi mere pahuchne se pahle hi kaha gayab ho gayi.. ? aur meri divyadristi rajkumari tak kyo nahi pahuch pa rahi hai... ? mujhe thoda aage ja kar dekhna chahiye..

Devraj ne jaise hi vrihadpur ki seema me aage badhne ke liye apne kadam badhaye hi the ki ....

Udhar uss tilismi gufa ke bahar abhi sab uss aloukik roshni ko dekh kar sadme se ubre bhi nahi the ki tabhi vaha jamin me tezi daraar padna shuru ho gayi....vo log kuch samajh pate ki tabhi khaulte huye garam laave ke sath uss jamin ko phadte huye ek vishal chattani kaya bahar nikal aayi...jise dekhte hi sab ghabra gaye.

Chattani badan wali uss kaya ki banawat ek bade rakshasi kide jaisi thi…uska poora sharir patthar ka bana hua tha..usko dekh kar kisi ki bhi ankho me ek darr utar jana bilkul bhi bevajah nahi tha…uski badi badi lal ankhe jalte huye angaare ki bhanti dikh rahi thi...aisi khaufnak darawani cheez ke achanak iss tarah samne aa jane se sab ke dilo me dahshat bhar gayi...

Pushpak bhi use dekh kar vaha se bhagne laga kintu vo vaha se bhag pata usse pahle hi uss vishal kaya ne vahi khade khade apna muh khola aur phir sab ke dekhte hi dekhte ek taez hawa ka jhonka vaha uttapann hua aur pushpak ko apne sath udate huye uss vishal kaya ke muh me sama gaya...kuch aur bhi pret jo bhag rahe the unka bhi yahi haal hua.

Pushpak aur uske sathiyo ka khatma karne ke baad vo dusri taraf mud gaya jidhar ye sab khade the....uska aisa bhayanak roop dekh sab darr se cheekhne chillane lage...kyon ki uske sath bahar nikla garam lava vaha charo taraf phailne laga tha...jo ki tezab se bhi khatarnak lag raha tha.

Ruchi (cheekh kar)—betuuuu...bachaooooo

Neha (chillate huye)--rajjjjjj

Ye dekh sab ghabra kar veer ke piche chhupne lage...veer ke bagal me mrinal, priyadarshini, divya aur dusri side sandhya aur saloni kahi thi..baki sab unke piche chhup gaye.sab ko aise chhupte dekh kar vah jor jor se bhayanak attahas karne laga..aur dhire dhire sab ki taraf badhne laga...sath me vo garam lava bhi tezi se bah raha tha.

"Chamu chajh chase chaba chach chak chaar chaka chaha chaja chao chage....(mujhse bach kar kaha jaoge)...hahahahaha" jor jor se haste huye usne apni bhayanak awaz me kaha.

Usko apni taraf badhte dekh sab dahshat me aa gaye...khatre ko bhanp kar ek bar phir se veer ke andar ja jwalamukhi ubalne laga aur uske andar inject kiya hua formula active ho gaya...active hote hi ye formula behad taqatwar bana deta tha veer ko..kisi aam admi se lagbhag dus guna jyada powerful...sath hi sath ye veer ko kisi bhi chot se jaldi ubarne me madad karta tha...gusse me aate hi uski ankho ka rang ekdam hara ho jata tha...jabki baki sharir ka rang lal padne lagta tha...jis anupat me uska gussa badhega, ussi anupat me uski ankho aur sharir ka rang bhi badhta jata tha...poora sharir lal hote hi aag ki tarah garam ho jata tha...aur ankho se visfotak tarange nikalne lagti thi...

Vo chattani kaya jaise jaise sab ke karib aata ja raha tha vaise vaise sabhi piche khisakte ja rahe the...magar tabhi unhe apne piche dahakti huyi aag ki lapto ka ehsaas hua...sabne jaldi se piche ki taraf dekha to hairan rah gaye..kyon ki ab vo charo taraf se uss garam khaulte lava se ghir chuke the...yaha se nikalne ke sabhi marg band ho chuke the.

Ghabrahat ke karan sab ek bar phir se veer ke piche ja chhupe...magar agle hi pal unhe piche hatna pada kyon ki veer ka sharir aag ki tarah tap raha tha....vo chattani kaya unke samne aa kar khadi ho gayi....veer ki body ya phir uski ankho ki taraf kisi ka dhyan iss samay tha hi nahi..sab ka dhyan sirf uss rakshas par kendrit tha jisse sab bhaybheet the.

Veer (gusse me)—koun ho tum….?

Mrinal—ye dharti ki bhasa nahi samjhega…main puchti hu isse….chapa chaha chad chabha chai..chatu cham chako chaun chaho…? Chatu cham chasi char chase chale chak char chapa chair chat chaak chata chak chala chaka chai chan chase chahu chaye…? (pahad bhai, tum koun ho….? Tum sir se le kar pair tak takla kaise huye…?).

"chame chara chama chaja chak chau chada chati chaha chai....(mera majak udati hai) Hahaha…chatu cham chashi chaka char cham chai chashi chaka chari..(tum shikar, main shikari).hahahaha" usne gusse se mrinal ki taraf badhte huye kaha.

Uske mrinal ki taraf badhte hi turant veer uske samne khada ho gaya...veer ko apne lakshya ke aage aate dekh vo aur bhi kroadhit ho gaya..aur gusse se apna vikral mukh khol kar ek bar phir se hawa ka bawandar banane laga...khatre ka abhaas hote hi veer ki ankho se invisible vosfotak tarange nikal kar uss chattani kaya se takrane lagi.

Agle hi pal vaha ek bhayanak visfot hua aur uss chattani kaya ke sharir ke chithde ud gaye....uska patthar se bana jism chote chote barik tukdo me bikhar gaya....lekin ye kya... ? agle hi pal uske jism ke bikhre huye patthar ke vo tukde phir se aapas me jud gaye...aur pahle se bhi maha bhayanak chattani kaya unke samne khadi ho gayi..

Idhar gufa ke andar Maine ek baar phir se uss chamkile patthar ki shakti ka prayog gufa ki samne ki deewar par kiya...aur phir chattano ke ek taraf khisakte hi unn khuli chattano ke beech se jaise hi bahar jane ki koshish ki to mere pair jaise gufa ki jamin se chipak kar rah gaye.

Kyon ki theek ussi pal gufa ki deewar par dikhne wale nazare jis tarah se badle ki jisko main badi asani se mahsso kar sakta tha ki mere aage kadam uthane ki chahat ko samajhte huye poori chattani gufa hi mere irado ki disha me aage ko chal padi thi.

Main jaise jaise aage badhta ja raha tha vaise vaise samne ki chattane apne aap khisak kar mere liye rasta banati ja rahi thi.. kintu main jab bhi piche palat kar dekhta to apne aap ko vahi khada hua pata jaha se maine chalna shuru kiya tha...kintu iss patthar ki shakti ke prayog se ek baat main samajh chuka tha ki ab main deewar ya kisi bhi chattan ke aar paar hone wali ghatnao ko dekh sakta tha.

Main chalta raha aur vaha ki chattane ek taraf hat kar mere aage jane ke liye rasta banati rahi...aise hi na jane main kab tak chalta raha..lekin vo rasta tha ki khatam hone ka naam hi nahi le raha tha...akhir maine phir se ek bar rk kar palat ke dekha to hairan rah gaya.

Raj (mann me)—mujhe chalte huye do teen ghante se jyada ho gaya hoga lekin phir bhi main vahi ka vahi hu..aise me to main chalte chalte hi thak jaunga...iss tilism ne to mood hi kharab kar diya hai..pata nahi kaisa tilism hai ye.... ? thoda aur chal ke dekhta hu, akhir kya hota hai... ?

Ye soch kar main phir se aage badh gaya..iss bar maine piche mud kar nahi dekha bas chalta hi raha…chalte chalte mujhe kuch aisa nazar aaya jise dekh kar main chounk gaya.

Toh devraj ko priyadarshini ke vrihadpur mein hone ke sanket mil hi gaye par tilism ke kaaran unki divyadrushti us tak nahin pahunch paayi dekhte hn ab devraj ko unki putri kaise milti hai milegi bhi ke nahin
Yeh kaun hai jisne aate hi pushpak and band baja di ?
Veer ke andar scientific powers hain that's nice one lagta hai raj ke saath veer bhi bahut had tak ek raaz hi hai
Yeh kya veer ki powers ka bhi ispar koi asar nahin hua ab dekhte hain veer and family is pareshaani se kaise nibtegi
Yeh mrinal kabhi baaz nahin aayegi kya bhai us rakshas ka bhi usne aate hi mazaaq uda diya ab dekhna yeh ke mrinal ab kya comedy action karegi
Raj us gufa numa bhulbhulaiya mein se aage kaise nikalega
Raj chounk kyon gaya kya dekh liya usne jo woh chounk gaya?

 

[Naina]

Yeh kya..... veer ke war se tukde tukde hone ke baad phir se jud gaya yeh bishalkayi chattani chij ya rakshas joh bhi hain... upor se the great mrinal majak uda rahin hain.... jish se kuch zyada hi bhadak gaya hain yeh rakshas toh....
Udhar raj abhi tak nikal nahin paya hain.... ab kya dekh liya usne...
Let's see what happens next..
Brilliant update Anand ji... Great going

 

[Tony stark]

SAAJAN
UPDATE- 219
5th Janam Ki Love Story Continues....​

Tabhi usne thoda sa darwaja khol kar apna ek hath bahar nikala jisme kuch swarn mudraye thi, mujhe dene ke liye…maine jaldi se dhakka de kar poora darwaja khol diya …darwaja khulte hi vo dhadam se niche ja giri…niche girte hi usne turant apni kamar me phansa bada sa chaku nikal kar mere upar jhapti lekin maine beech me hi uska hath pakad liya…tab pahli bar meri nazar uske chehre par padi jise dekhte hi main buri tarah chounk gaya….

Jitu (chounk kar)—tummmmmm...

Ab aage……

Ladki (chounk kar)—kkkk….koun ho tummm….iss badsaluki ke liye tumhe mrityu dand dilwaungi yuvraj se….?

Ye ladki aur koi nahi balki chitralekha thi, jisse ki abhi main kuch din pahle hi mila tha hamirpur aate huye….usko yaha dekh kar aur vo bhi iss roop me..mera chounkna swabhavik hi tha…kyon ki jaha tak maine use jana aur samjha tha, vo ek behad hasin yuvti hone ke sath sath sanskaro se paripurna thi…lekin mere iss samay badle huye bhesh ke karan shayad chitra ne mujhe pahchana nahi tha ki main hi yuvraj hu.

Jitu (hairan)—achcha....to yuvraj se saza dilwayengi aap mujhe... ?

Chitra (gusse me)—jarur dilwaungi….main kahti hu ki hath chhod mera....

Jitu (mushkurate huye)—ulta kahi aisa na ho jaye ki yuvraj tumhe hi karagar me dalwa de…? Shayad tumhe pata nahi ki main yuvraj ka dost hu….main unhe tumhari sari kartoot bata dunga.

Chitra (ghabra kar)—kkkk…kya…tummm…matlab ki aap yuvraj ke dost ho….?

Jitu—jee haan….ab sach sach bata do ki loot ka maal kaha hai…?

Chitra—ll..loot ka maal…? Koun sa loot ka maal….?

Jitu—vahi jo abhi aap uss bechare vyapari ko loot kar layi hain...

Chitra—main kisi vyapari ko nahi janti..aur mere paas koi loot voot ka maal nahi hai…

Jitu—wah..! ek to chori, upar se seena jori….ab to yuvraj ko sab batana hi padega lagta hai..?

Chitra—are ja..ja…bata de….main bhi dekhti hu ki yuvraj apni biwi ki baat mante hain ya tumhari…

Jitu—biwi ..kaha ki biwi...kaisi biwi... ? uss bechare ki to ab tak shadi hi nahi huyi..

Chitra—dekh..main akhiri bar kahti hu..mera hath chhod de...mera gussa bahut kharab hai...kaat ke phenk dungi...

Jitu—kaise kategi...iss chaku se.... ? ye to ab mere paas hai...hihihi…haan, agar tu apne inn hasin hotho ki ek chummi de de to main tujhe chhod sakta hu…

Chitra (gusse me)—sale harami..kya kaha tune….?

Chitra ne gusse me mujhe jor se dhakka de kar tezi se andar bhagi aur phir turant hi ek kulhadi le kar mere paas aate hi usne mujh par vaar karne ke liye apne hath upar kiye..vaise hi maine apne naqli dadhi moonch aur baal nikal kar vastavik roop me aa gaya....mere chehre par nazar padte hi vo chounk gayi aur uske hath se kulhadi chhut kar uske hi pair me gir padi jisse uske gale se aaahhh nikal gayi...vo langdi ghodi ki tarah ek pair se uchakne lagi.

Chitra (chounk kar)—Yuvrajjjjj....aaappppp... ?.....aaaahhhh....uuuueee..maaaa...marr gayiiii..

Jitu—kya hua... ? are sambhal ke...

Maine uth kar usko pakadna chaha lekin uske pahle hi chitra lahrati jhumti mere upar hi gir padi…uske upar girte hi main phir se jamin par let gaya…vo apna dard bhul kar mere seene me apna sir rakh ke chupchap leti rahi.

Jitu—lagi to nahi chitra…?

Chitra—(chup)

Jitu—chitraaaaa...utho bhi ab...ya phir aise hi mere upar padi rahne ka irada hai ab... ?

Ye sunte hi vo sakpaka kar jaldi se khadi hone ko huyi to ladkhada kar phir se mere upar hi ludhak gayi...iss bar maine khud hi sahara de kar usko khada kiya.

Jitu—ye sab kya hai chitra.... ? jitni hairan tum mujhe dekh kar ho rahi ho, usse kahi jyada hairani to mujhe tumko iss roop me dekh kar ho rahi hai...akhir kyo kiya tumne aisa.... ?

Chitra (nazre jhukaye)—vo...vo...mujhe maaf kar dijiye yuvraj....ya phir jo chahe saza de dijiye...

Jitu—ye mere prashn ka uttar nahi hai chitra....main janna chahta hu ki jis sundar, sushil, vidusi chitra ko maine dekha tha..kya ye vahi hai... ? akhir aisa badnami aur jurm ka kaam kyo kiya tumne... ?

Chitra (sir jhukaye)—vo...main vivash thi...

Jitu (hairan)—vivash thi... ? main samjha nahi…tumhe to mukhiya ji ne apni putri ki tarah pala hai..unke paas to dhan sampatti sab kuch hai…phir kya vivashta aa gayi thi jo tumne ye rasta chuna... ?

Chitra (ankhe jhukaye)—main apne dil ke hatho vivash thi...yuvraj

Jitu (hairan)—dil ke hatho…! Main kuch samjha nahi…jara khul ke batane ka kasht karengi…?

Chitra—vo ek bar pita ji (mukhiya) ne guru ji se mere vivah ke baare me pucha tha..to unhone kaha tha ki kisi rajkumar se hogi. Jab pita ji uss rajkumar ka naam pucha to unhone kaha ki uska sparsh hote hi mujhe pata chal jayega…uss din jab mere ghar aaye to apko pani dete samay apke hatho ka sparsh mere hatho me ho gaya…uss samay na jane mujhe kya hua jaise ki dil me hazaro ghantiya baj uthi ho..mera rom rom pulkit hone laga tha…phir jab aap vaha se chale gaye to aisa laga ki apne sath aap mera sukh, chain, meri ankho ki neend sab kuch le gaye ho..mera dil aapse milne ke liye tadapne laga…tab mujhe samajh me aaya ki yahi to pyar hai…bas dil ke hatho vivash ho kar yaha khichi chali aayi…

Jitu (hairan)—agar aisa tha to tumne uss din mujhe ye kyo nahi bataya…? Aur iska chori karne se kya sambandh hai…?

Chitra—kaise batati..aap to thahre yuvraj…aur phir uss samay to main khud bhi nahi janti thi ki mujhe kya ho gaya hai..jab pata chala to aap yaha aa chuke the..yaha aane ke baad maine apko bahut talash kiya magar aap nahi mile…milte bhi kaise..? aapne to apna huliya hi badal liya tha jo…main apki khoj me bhatak hi rahi thi ki tabhi ek dhani admi ko maine gaon ki ek ladki ke sath jabardasti karte dekha,..maine kisi tarah se usko uske changul se bachaya..tab uss ladki ne kaha ki ye aaye din ka kaam ho gaya hai…ye dhani log apne dhan la lalach de kar hum garibo ki izzat se khelte hain…tabhi se maine aise logo ko lootna shuru kar diya aur loota hua maal unn garibo me baantne lagi.

Jitu—chalo..ye baat to samajh me aa gayi…par tumne sabse apne aap ko meri biwi kyo kaha…?

Chitra—to kya dusre ki biwi kahti..? jab pyar aapse karti hu to aapki hi biwi bataungi na..aur aisa karne se koi mujhe pakadta bhi nahi tha..aur ye janne ke baad koi dusri ladki aapke paas nahi ayegi….hihihi

Jitu—aisa kahne se kya fayda hua..akhir badnami to tumhari hi huyi na…? aur ye bachche ka kya lafda hai..?

Chitra (ghurte huye)—kyo, to kya aap mujhse shadi nahi karoge…?

Jitu—kyo koi jabardasti hai…?

Chitra—dekhiye yuvraj...main bataye deti hu...shadi to aapko mujhse karni hi padegi....nahi to main kaha jaungi... ? maine to pita ji ko bhi bata diya hai..

Jitu (chounk kar)—kya bata diya hai tumne mukhiya ji ko... ?

Chitra—yahi ki uss din aapne akele me mujhse gandharv vivah kiya tha aur phir..

Jitu (hairan)—aur kya... ?

Chitra (sharmate huye)—vo..vivah ke baad pati patni kya karte hain...vahi kiya tha aapne mere sath...

Jitu (sir me hath rakh ke)—satyanash ho tera... ! vaha ghar me to kitni sidhi aur bholi dikhti thi…ye to poori jwalamukhi hai..

Chitra—ye sab jhuth to maine sirf aapko paane ke liye bola hai…

Jitu—ho gaya na…chalo ab jao apne ghar..

Chitra—pahle bataiye ki hamari shadi kab hogi…?

Jitu—kabhi nahi..

Chitra—phir to lagta hai ki mujhe rajmahal ja kar maharani ji se hi baat karne jana hoga...

Jitu—kya baat karogi maa se... ?

Chitra—ek prem ki mari dukhiyari apna dukhda rone ke siwa aur kar bhi kya sakti hai...bas unhe itna bataungi ki main yuvraj ke bachche ki maa banne wali hu...mujh par na sahi to kam se kam apne hone wale pote par to daya kare..

Jitu (chounk kar)—kkkk....kyaaaaa..... ?

Last me meri ek chhoti si rachna......

Suraj Ne Phir Ankhe Kholi,
Ye Dharti Tab Usse Boli,
Bahut Roshni Phailate Ho,
Khud Hi Khud Me Itrate Ho,
Unke Ghar Bhi Lao Savera,
Jinko Andhiyaro Ne Ghera,
Jisne ghar Ke Diye Bujhaye,
Unko Praatah Kaal Mubarak,
SabKo Naya Saal Mubarak.

Siski Bharti Ankh Bechari,​

Khoob Bhari Isme Lachari,
Khwab Hamare Toot Gaye Sab,
Apne Saare Rooth Gaye Sab,
Jinki Baate Khoob Nirali,
Unke Hatho Jahar Ki Pyali,
Hum Uttar Hi Khoj Rahe Hain,
Bheje Koi Sawal Mubarak,
Sab Ko Naya Saal Mubarak.​

Aapas Me Ho Bhai Chara,​

Prem Ki Bahti Rahe Ye Dhara,
Khushiyo Se Bhi Yaari Ho,
Aur Mohabbat Saari Ho,
Hum Nafrat Ko Jaye Bhool,
Ban Jaye Upwan Ke Phool,
Har Mushkate Gaal Par Jo,
Lag Jaye Gulaal Mubarak,
Sab Ko Naya Saal Mubarak.​

SABHI KO NAYE SAAL KI HARDIK SHUBH KAMNAYE.
HAPPY NEW YEAR 2020
​

YUVRAJ JITU KI TO LAG GAI

AWESOME UPDATE !!!!!!!

 

[Tony stark]

SAAJAN
UPDATE- 285​

Devraj—swayamvar hoga aur jarur hoga.. vo bhi apne nishchit samay par hi…

Ye kah kar devraj phir se raas rang me mast ho gaye…shayad unhe apni taraf badh rahe khatre ka tanik bhi abhaas nahi tha ya phir unhone devraj hone ke mad me usko jaan bujh kar andekha kar diya tha..

Ki tabhi unhe kisi anya lok me kisi dev shakti ka abhaas hua....

Ab aage......

Kisi anya lok me iss shakti ka abhaas hote hi devraj sahit vaha upasthit anya devta bhi chounk gaye...kyon ki uss shakti ka tez dev lok tak prakirnit ho raha tha.

Pawan dev (PD)—devraj...ye kaisa aloukik prakash hai...jo dusre lok se yaha tak apni roshni bikher raha hai... ? devtao ke alawa itna tez kisi dusre lok ke prani me kaise ho sakta hai... ?

Devraj (hairan)—main bhi yahi soch raha hu..pawan dev....(mann me)..ho na ho...ye shakti avashya hi rajkumari priyadarshini ki hi ho sakti hai..mujhe abhi aur issi samay uske paas jana hoga..

Mann hi mann itna soch kar vo turant hi sabha barkhast kar ke vaha se antardhyan ho gaye...uss disha me jaha se iss urja ke prakashit hone ka abhaas hua tha.

Vo sidhe vrihadpur ki seema me ja kar prakat huye…kintu ab unhe uss urja ka koi sanket milna band ho chuka tha..kyon ki ab tak priyadarshini apne purane roop me aa chuki thi...unhone ankhe band kar ke priyadarshini ko dekhna chaha kintu safal nahi huye..unhe apni ankho ke samne ek ghor andhakar ke siwa kuch nazar nahi aaya.

Devraj (mann me)—roshni to yahi sthan se aa rahi thi... lekin itna jaldi mere pahuchne se pahle hi kaha gayab ho gayi.. ? aur meri divyadristi rajkumari tak kyo nahi pahuch pa rahi hai... ? mujhe thoda aage ja kar dekhna chahiye..

Devraj ne jaise hi vrihadpur ki seema me aage badhne ke liye apne kadam badhaye hi the ki ....

Udhar uss tilismi gufa ke bahar abhi sab uss aloukik roshni ko dekh kar sadme se ubre bhi nahi the ki tabhi vaha jamin me tezi daraar padna shuru ho gayi....vo log kuch samajh pate ki tabhi khaulte huye garam laave ke sath uss jamin ko phadte huye ek vishal chattani kaya bahar nikal aayi...jise dekhte hi sab ghabra gaye.

Chattani badan wali uss kaya ki banawat ek bade rakshasi kide jaisi thi…uska poora sharir patthar ka bana hua tha..usko dekh kar kisi ki bhi ankho me ek darr utar jana bilkul bhi bevajah nahi tha…uski badi badi lal ankhe jalte huye angaare ki bhanti dikh rahi thi...aisi khaufnak darawani cheez ke achanak iss tarah samne aa jane se sab ke dilo me dahshat bhar gayi...

Pushpak bhi use dekh kar vaha se bhagne laga kintu vo vaha se bhag pata usse pahle hi uss vishal kaya ne vahi khade khade apna muh khola aur phir sab ke dekhte hi dekhte ek taez hawa ka jhonka vaha uttapann hua aur pushpak ko apne sath udate huye uss vishal kaya ke muh me sama gaya...kuch aur bhi pret jo bhag rahe the unka bhi yahi haal hua.

Pushpak aur uske sathiyo ka khatma karne ke baad vo dusri taraf mud gaya jidhar ye sab khade the....uska aisa bhayanak roop dekh sab darr se cheekhne chillane lage...kyon ki uske sath bahar nikla garam lava vaha charo taraf phailne laga tha...jo ki tezab se bhi khatarnak lag raha tha.

Ruchi (cheekh kar)—betuuuu...bachaooooo

Neha (chillate huye)--rajjjjjj

Ye dekh sab ghabra kar veer ke piche chhupne lage...veer ke bagal me mrinal, priyadarshini, divya aur dusri side sandhya aur saloni kahi thi..baki sab unke piche chhup gaye.sab ko aise chhupte dekh kar vah jor jor se bhayanak attahas karne laga..aur dhire dhire sab ki taraf badhne laga...sath me vo garam lava bhi tezi se bah raha tha.

"Chamu chajh chase chaba chach chak chaar chaka chaha chaja chao chage....(mujhse bach kar kaha jaoge)...hahahahaha" jor jor se haste huye usne apni bhayanak awaz me kaha.

Usko apni taraf badhte dekh sab dahshat me aa gaye...khatre ko bhanp kar ek bar phir se veer ke andar ja jwalamukhi ubalne laga aur uske andar inject kiya hua formula active ho gaya...active hote hi ye formula behad taqatwar bana deta tha veer ko..kisi aam admi se lagbhag dus guna jyada powerful...sath hi sath ye veer ko kisi bhi chot se jaldi ubarne me madad karta tha...gusse me aate hi uski ankho ka rang ekdam hara ho jata tha...jabki baki sharir ka rang lal padne lagta tha...jis anupat me uska gussa badhega, ussi anupat me uski ankho aur sharir ka rang bhi badhta jata tha...poora sharir lal hote hi aag ki tarah garam ho jata tha...aur ankho se visfotak tarange nikalne lagti thi...

Vo chattani kaya jaise jaise sab ke karib aata ja raha tha vaise vaise sabhi piche khisakte ja rahe the...magar tabhi unhe apne piche dahakti huyi aag ki lapto ka ehsaas hua...sabne jaldi se piche ki taraf dekha to hairan rah gaye..kyon ki ab vo charo taraf se uss garam khaulte lava se ghir chuke the...yaha se nikalne ke sabhi marg band ho chuke the.

Ghabrahat ke karan sab ek bar phir se veer ke piche ja chhupe...magar agle hi pal unhe piche hatna pada kyon ki veer ka sharir aag ki tarah tap raha tha....vo chattani kaya unke samne aa kar khadi ho gayi....veer ki body ya phir uski ankho ki taraf kisi ka dhyan iss samay tha hi nahi..sab ka dhyan sirf uss rakshas par kendrit tha jisse sab bhaybheet the.

Veer (gusse me)—koun ho tum….?

Mrinal—ye dharti ki bhasa nahi samjhega…main puchti hu isse….chapa chaha chad chabha chai..chatu cham chako chaun chaho…? Chatu cham chasi char chase chale chak char chapa chair chat chaak chata chak chala chaka chai chan chase chahu chaye…? (pahad bhai, tum koun ho….? Tum sir se le kar pair tak takla kaise huye…?).

"chame chara chama chaja chak chau chada chati chaha chai....(mera majak udati hai) Hahaha…chatu cham chashi chaka char cham chai chashi chaka chari..(tum shikar, main shikari).hahahaha" usne gusse se mrinal ki taraf badhte huye kaha.

Uske mrinal ki taraf badhte hi turant veer uske samne khada ho gaya...veer ko apne lakshya ke aage aate dekh vo aur bhi kroadhit ho gaya..aur gusse se apna vikral mukh khol kar ek bar phir se hawa ka bawandar banane laga...khatre ka abhaas hote hi veer ki ankho se invisible vosfotak tarange nikal kar uss chattani kaya se takrane lagi.

Agle hi pal vaha ek bhayanak visfot hua aur uss chattani kaya ke sharir ke chithde ud gaye....uska patthar se bana jism chote chote barik tukdo me bikhar gaya....lekin ye kya... ? agle hi pal uske jism ke bikhre huye patthar ke vo tukde phir se aapas me jud gaye...aur pahle se bhi maha bhayanak chattani kaya unke samne khadi ho gayi..

Idhar gufa ke andar Maine ek baar phir se uss chamkile patthar ki shakti ka prayog gufa ki samne ki deewar par kiya...aur phir chattano ke ek taraf khisakte hi unn khuli chattano ke beech se jaise hi bahar jane ki koshish ki to mere pair jaise gufa ki jamin se chipak kar rah gaye.

Kyon ki theek ussi pal gufa ki deewar par dikhne wale nazare jis tarah se badle ki jisko main badi asani se mahsso kar sakta tha ki mere aage kadam uthane ki chahat ko samajhte huye poori chattani gufa hi mere irado ki disha me aage ko chal padi thi.

Main jaise jaise aage badhta ja raha tha vaise vaise samne ki chattane apne aap khisak kar mere liye rasta banati ja rahi thi.. kintu main jab bhi piche palat kar dekhta to apne aap ko vahi khada hua pata jaha se maine chalna shuru kiya tha...kintu iss patthar ki shakti ke prayog se ek baat main samajh chuka tha ki ab main deewar ya kisi bhi chattan ke aar paar hone wali ghatnao ko dekh sakta tha.

Main chalta raha aur vaha ki chattane ek taraf hat kar mere aage jane ke liye rasta banati rahi...aise hi na jane main kab tak chalta raha..lekin vo rasta tha ki khatam hone ka naam hi nahi le raha tha...akhir maine phir se ek bar rk kar palat ke dekha to hairan rah gaya.

Raj (mann me)—mujhe chalte huye do teen ghante se jyada ho gaya hoga lekin phir bhi main vahi ka vahi hu..aise me to main chalte chalte hi thak jaunga...iss tilism ne to mood hi kharab kar diya hai..pata nahi kaisa tilism hai ye.... ? thoda aur chal ke dekhta hu, akhir kya hota hai... ?

Ye soch kar main phir se aage badh gaya..iss bar maine piche mud kar nahi dekha bas chalta hi raha…chalte chalte mujhe kuch aisa nazar aaya jise dekh kar main chounk gaya.

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Devraj—swayamvar hoga aur jarur hoga.. vo bhi apne nishchit samay par hi…

Ye kah kar devraj phir se raas rang me mast ho gaye…shayad unhe apni taraf badh rahe khatre ka tanik bhi abhaas nahi tha ya phir unhone devraj hone ke mad me usko jaan bujh kar andekha kar diya tha..

Ki tabhi unhe kisi anya lok me kisi dev shakti ka abhaas hua....

Ab aage......

Kisi anya lok me iss shakti ka abhaas hote hi devraj sahit vaha upasthit anya devta bhi chounk gaye...kyon ki uss shakti ka tez dev lok tak prakirnit ho raha tha.

Pawan dev (PD)—devraj...ye kaisa aloukik prakash hai...jo dusre lok se yaha tak apni roshni bikher raha hai... ? devtao ke alawa itna tez kisi dusre lok ke prani me kaise ho sakta hai... ?

Devraj (hairan)—main bhi yahi soch raha hu..pawan dev....(mann me)..ho na ho...ye shakti avashya hi rajkumari priyadarshini ki hi ho sakti hai..mujhe abhi aur issi samay uske paas jana hoga..

Mann hi mann itna soch kar vo turant hi sabha barkhast kar ke vaha se antardhyan ho gaye...uss disha me jaha se iss urja ke prakashit hone ka abhaas hua tha.

Vo sidhe vrihadpur ki seema me ja kar prakat huye…kintu ab unhe uss urja ka koi sanket milna band ho chuka tha..kyon ki ab tak priyadarshini apne purane roop me aa chuki thi...unhone ankhe band kar ke priyadarshini ko dekhna chaha kintu safal nahi huye..unhe apni ankho ke samne ek ghor andhakar ke siwa kuch nazar nahi aaya.

Devraj (mann me)—roshni to yahi sthan se aa rahi thi... lekin itna jaldi mere pahuchne se pahle hi kaha gayab ho gayi.. ? aur meri divyadristi rajkumari tak kyo nahi pahuch pa rahi hai... ? mujhe thoda aage ja kar dekhna chahiye..

Devraj ne jaise hi vrihadpur ki seema me aage badhne ke liye apne kadam badhaye hi the ki ....

Udhar uss tilismi gufa ke bahar abhi sab uss aloukik roshni ko dekh kar sadme se ubre bhi nahi the ki tabhi vaha jamin me tezi daraar padna shuru ho gayi....vo log kuch samajh pate ki tabhi khaulte huye garam laave ke sath uss jamin ko phadte huye ek vishal chattani kaya bahar nikal aayi...jise dekhte hi sab ghabra gaye.

Chattani badan wali uss kaya ki banawat ek bade rakshasi kide jaisi thi…uska poora sharir patthar ka bana hua tha..usko dekh kar kisi ki bhi ankho me ek darr utar jana bilkul bhi bevajah nahi tha…uski badi badi lal ankhe jalte huye angaare ki bhanti dikh rahi thi...aisi khaufnak darawani cheez ke achanak iss tarah samne aa jane se sab ke dilo me dahshat bhar gayi...

Pushpak bhi use dekh kar vaha se bhagne laga kintu vo vaha se bhag pata usse pahle hi uss vishal kaya ne vahi khade khade apna muh khola aur phir sab ke dekhte hi dekhte ek taez hawa ka jhonka vaha uttapann hua aur pushpak ko apne sath udate huye uss vishal kaya ke muh me sama gaya...kuch aur bhi pret jo bhag rahe the unka bhi yahi haal hua.

Pushpak aur uske sathiyo ka khatma karne ke baad vo dusri taraf mud gaya jidhar ye sab khade the....uska aisa bhayanak roop dekh sab darr se cheekhne chillane lage...kyon ki uske sath bahar nikla garam lava vaha charo taraf phailne laga tha...jo ki tezab se bhi khatarnak lag raha tha.

Ruchi (cheekh kar)—betuuuu...bachaooooo

Neha (chillate huye)--rajjjjjj

Ye dekh sab ghabra kar veer ke piche chhupne lage...veer ke bagal me mrinal, priyadarshini, divya aur dusri side sandhya aur saloni kahi thi..baki sab unke piche chhup gaye.sab ko aise chhupte dekh kar vah jor jor se bhayanak attahas karne laga..aur dhire dhire sab ki taraf badhne laga...sath me vo garam lava bhi tezi se bah raha tha.

"Chamu chajh chase chaba chach chak chaar chaka chaha chaja chao chage....(mujhse bach kar kaha jaoge)...hahahahaha" jor jor se haste huye usne apni bhayanak awaz me kaha.

Usko apni taraf badhte dekh sab dahshat me aa gaye...khatre ko bhanp kar ek bar phir se veer ke andar ja jwalamukhi ubalne laga aur uske andar inject kiya hua formula active ho gaya...active hote hi ye formula behad taqatwar bana deta tha veer ko..kisi aam admi se lagbhag dus guna jyada powerful...sath hi sath ye veer ko kisi bhi chot se jaldi ubarne me madad karta tha...gusse me aate hi uski ankho ka rang ekdam hara ho jata tha...jabki baki sharir ka rang lal padne lagta tha...jis anupat me uska gussa badhega, ussi anupat me uski ankho aur sharir ka rang bhi badhta jata tha...poora sharir lal hote hi aag ki tarah garam ho jata tha...aur ankho se visfotak tarange nikalne lagti thi...

Vo chattani kaya jaise jaise sab ke karib aata ja raha tha vaise vaise sabhi piche khisakte ja rahe the...magar tabhi unhe apne piche dahakti huyi aag ki lapto ka ehsaas hua...sabne jaldi se piche ki taraf dekha to hairan rah gaye..kyon ki ab vo charo taraf se uss garam khaulte lava se ghir chuke the...yaha se nikalne ke sabhi marg band ho chuke the.

Ghabrahat ke karan sab ek bar phir se veer ke piche ja chhupe...magar agle hi pal unhe piche hatna pada kyon ki veer ka sharir aag ki tarah tap raha tha....vo chattani kaya unke samne aa kar khadi ho gayi....veer ki body ya phir uski ankho ki taraf kisi ka dhyan iss samay tha hi nahi..sab ka dhyan sirf uss rakshas par kendrit tha jisse sab bhaybheet the.

Veer (gusse me)—koun ho tum….?

Mrinal—ye dharti ki bhasa nahi samjhega…main puchti hu isse….chapa chaha chad chabha chai..chatu cham chako chaun chaho…? Chatu cham chasi char chase chale chak char chapa chair chat chaak chata chak chala chaka chai chan chase chahu chaye…? (pahad bhai, tum koun ho….? Tum sir se le kar pair tak takla kaise huye…?).

"chame chara chama chaja chak chau chada chati chaha chai....(mera majak udati hai) Hahaha…chatu cham chashi chaka char cham chai chashi chaka chari..(tum shikar, main shikari).hahahaha" usne gusse se mrinal ki taraf badhte huye kaha.

Uske mrinal ki taraf badhte hi turant veer uske samne khada ho gaya...veer ko apne lakshya ke aage aate dekh vo aur bhi kroadhit ho gaya..aur gusse se apna vikral mukh khol kar ek bar phir se hawa ka bawandar banane laga...khatre ka abhaas hote hi veer ki ankho se invisible vosfotak tarange nikal kar uss chattani kaya se takrane lagi.

Agle hi pal vaha ek bhayanak visfot hua aur uss chattani kaya ke sharir ke chithde ud gaye....uska patthar se bana jism chote chote barik tukdo me bikhar gaya....lekin ye kya... ? agle hi pal uske jism ke bikhre huye patthar ke vo tukde phir se aapas me jud gaye...aur pahle se bhi maha bhayanak chattani kaya unke samne khadi ho gayi..

Idhar gufa ke andar Maine ek baar phir se uss chamkile patthar ki shakti ka prayog gufa ki samne ki deewar par kiya...aur phir chattano ke ek taraf khisakte hi unn khuli chattano ke beech se jaise hi bahar jane ki koshish ki to mere pair jaise gufa ki jamin se chipak kar rah gaye.

Kyon ki theek ussi pal gufa ki deewar par dikhne wale nazare jis tarah se badle ki jisko main badi asani se mahsso kar sakta tha ki mere aage kadam uthane ki chahat ko samajhte huye poori chattani gufa hi mere irado ki disha me aage ko chal padi thi.

Main jaise jaise aage badhta ja raha tha vaise vaise samne ki chattane apne aap khisak kar mere liye rasta banati ja rahi thi.. kintu main jab bhi piche palat kar dekhta to apne aap ko vahi khada hua pata jaha se maine chalna shuru kiya tha...kintu iss patthar ki shakti ke prayog se ek baat main samajh chuka tha ki ab main deewar ya kisi bhi chattan ke aar paar hone wali ghatnao ko dekh sakta tha.

Main chalta raha aur vaha ki chattane ek taraf hat kar mere aage jane ke liye rasta banati rahi...aise hi na jane main kab tak chalta raha..lekin vo rasta tha ki khatam hone ka naam hi nahi le raha tha...akhir maine phir se ek bar rk kar palat ke dekha to hairan rah gaya.

Raj (mann me)—mujhe chalte huye do teen ghante se jyada ho gaya hoga lekin phir bhi main vahi ka vahi hu..aise me to main chalte chalte hi thak jaunga...iss tilism ne to mood hi kharab kar diya hai..pata nahi kaisa tilism hai ye.... ? thoda aur chal ke dekhta hu, akhir kya hota hai... ?

Ye soch kar main phir se aage badh gaya..iss bar maine piche mud kar nahi dekha bas chalta hi raha…chalte chalte mujhe kuch aisa nazar aaya jise dekh kar main chounk gaya.

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