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UPDATE 5
Ye sab Mai Shanti se sun raha tha Mai Kya hamare Group me se sab sun rahe the par koi kuch nahi bol raha tha..
Kyu ki sabko pata tha wo Aag ke muh me hath dalne ja raha hai...
Aur Sab ek taraf se excited the ye scene dekhne ke liye aur khud Mai Bhi................................
AGE............................
Ladka1 Ritika ke pass jata hai aur uske pass jakar kahta hai...
Ladka1- hhhiiii... re.. Meri Chamak challo... Yaha kaha baithi ho.... Chalo hamare sath hum Tumhe jannat ki sair karate hai...
Mai to us Ladke ke himmat par daad deta hu. Aur ek taraf se Gussa.. Sala Meri GF par line maar raha hai..
Ritu-(Uski taraf dekhti huye) Kya tum mujhse kah rahe ho....
Ladka1- (Ankh marte huye) Kya yaha tumhare alawa koi aur Patakha hai Kya Meri Janeman....
Us ladke ki baat sunkar shayad Sab ladkiya Ritika se jal gayi hogi..
Kyu ki sab ladkiyo ko apne samne kisi aur ladki ki Tarif pasand nahi hai phir age chahe koi bhi ho ya koi bhi situation ho...
Ritu-(Apni Jagah se khade hote huye) Acha... To Aao mujhe sirf chukar dekho... Agar tumne mujhe chhuu liya to I am all Yours....
Ritu ka ye sunte hi Mai uske muh ki taraf dekhne laga.. Aur Mai ye soch raha tha ki akhir ye ladki karna Kya chahati hai....
Ladka1-(Us DSP boy ki taraf dekhte huye) Bhai... Ye ladki to Bahut jaldi maan gayi...
DSP boy- to phir soch Kya raha hai ja na use Pakad le...
Wo Ladka Ritika ko chune ke liye agr bada aur aur Apna hath age badakar Chune hi Wala tha ki....
Tabhi kuch aisa huva ki wo Ladka Hawa me udte huye us DSP boy ke pairo ke pass soya huva tha...Matlab behosh Pada huva tha...
Ab ye Sab huva kaise vahi sab soch rahe the.. par Maine to full slow motion ke sath Sab scene dekh liya tha...
Us ladke ka hath jaise hi Ritika ko chune Wala tha waise hi Ritu ne uska vahi hath pakadkar jor se marod Diya...
Aur wo chilla pata use pahle hi uske Chati par ek Tamacha laga Diya...
Jisse wo Ek baar jamin par girkar Aur phir Hawa me udte huye piche ja gira...(Jaise Singham me huva tha)
Ye dekhkar wo DSP boy apni Jagah se khada huva aur us apne dost ko uthane ki koshish karne laga par Sab bekar...
Kyu ki wo Shayad Behosh ho Gaya tha.. lagta hai Ritu ne jyada jor se Marne ki koshish nahi ki thi...
lekin ye dekhkar us DSP boy ko Bahut gussa aa Gaya tha..
Ladka2- Bhai Maine aapse pahle hi kaha tha iske age mat jao ye bahut pahuchi huyi chij hai...
DSP boy- Ab ye koi bhi ho mere age kuch bhi nahi hai..
(Apne Dosto ki taraf ishara karte huye) Jao re us ladki ko lekar mere pass le Aao.. ab khud Mai use Dekhta hu ...
Uska ye sunte hi uske sare Dost hamare Matlab Ritu ke pass Jane lage lekin Ritu to ab full Josh me thi...
Ritu-Agar aap Sab ko Apni jaan pyari hai to yaha se chale jayiye varna tum sabka wo hashar karungi ki Tum Sab mujhe bhik mangoge ki mujhe maar do...
Ye baat Maine bhi sun li thi isiliye Maine Ritu ko man hi man me kaha....
Mai-(Man me) Itna bhi dard mat de unko sirf sabak sikha de..wo Sab us DSP ke ladke ke kahne par ye Sab Kar rahe hai..
isme Inka koi dosh nahi hai sirf inko Behosh Kar de..
Ye sunkar Ritika ne Meri taraf dekha lekin boli kuch nahi.. aur nahi usne apne man me kuch Socha Jo Mai pad saku...
Tabhi ek ladke ne aakar Ritu ka hath pakadne ki koshish ki tabhi Ritu ne apne Dusre hath se Sidha gaal par bahut jor se tamacha maar Diya jisse wo vahi let Gaya..
Ye dekhkar to dusre Ladke bhi dar Gaye the Ritu se. Lekin ab wo sab piche nahi hat sakte...
Ek ladke ke hath cricket ki bat thi to wo Bat Ritika ko Marne ke liye uthaya lekin Ritu ne niche jhukkar us Bat ko jane diya...
Par wo Bat sidha usi ke side me khade ladke ko bahut Jor se lagi isliye wo vahi Behosh ho Gaya. Aur uske sir se khun nikalne laga...
Phir Ritu ne us ladke ko Ek back kick dekar use bhi vahi pahucha Diya jaha sab ladke ja rahe the Matlab behoshi me....
Phir Kya Jo bhi Ladka Ritika ke samne aata uska vahi haal hota kisi na kisi tarah..
mai Khush tha kyu ki Ritu ne Meri baat man li thi... Jab ye fighting scene chal raha tha tabhi bhi hum vahi Apni Jagah cool hokar baithe huye the...
Lekin baki ke Sab us fighting ko khade hokar dekh rahe the.. balki wo canteen pure students se bhar Gaya tha..
Kyu ki jaise hi jis kisi ko pata chal raha tha yaha par fighting chal rahi hai waise hi Sab yahi chalte huye aa rahe the...
Aur isi bich Maine ambulance ko bhi bula liya tha.. ab sirf wo Ladka2 Aur DSP Boy hi bacha tha..
Aur wo Dono bhi bahut Shock me the ye scene dekhkar wo Dono hi Kya vaha ke Sab students shock me the yaha Tak ki mere friends bhi kuch isi halat me the....
Un Sab ke behosh ho Jane ke baad Ritu Us DSP ke Boy se kahne lagi...
Ritu-Aur bhi hai ya bus itna hi Dum hai tujhme ya Tere Dum pe udne wale in Sab Ladko me...
Ye sunkar DSP ka bacha Gussa karne laga.. Waise dar Aur Gusse ke milap Kya kahte hai malum nahi par uska kuch aisa hi Hal tha...
Tabhi us Ladke ne Apni jeb se Gun nikali.. Gun dekhkar Sab students halla karne lage...
Matlab jor jor se chillate huye idhar udhar bhag rahe the..Par Ritika Normal thi ye Mai janta tha...
Lekin ab bus bahut huva ye khel ab in sabko dikhana hi padega Ki RD is Back...
Matlab Waise nahi jaise aap Sab soch rahe ho.. just Hero ki tarah Without Use power...
Mai-(Jor se chillate hu) Ruuukkkkk..... Jjjaaooo.... Saabbbb.....
Ye sunte hi Sab jaha the vahi ruk Gaye Kyu ki Mai Chillaya hi bahut Jor se tha..
Ritu mere Piche Un Sab ladko ko Marne ke baad vahi khadi thi...
Aur mere sare friends bhi Sab Apni Jagah khade ho Gaye the.. lekin Mai akela hi Apni Jagah baitha huva tha...
Mai Apni Jagah se khada huva aur jaise hi Baki sare students ne mujhe Dekha un sab logo me kuch hulchul hone lagi..
Matlab wo Sab Apas me kuch bate karne lage.. aur Jaise hi Mai us Ladke ki taraf Palta Mujhe dekhkar us Dusre Ladke ki jaan hath me aa gayi thi...
Kyu ki usne expect hi nahi Kiya tha ki Mai vaha par hounga.. Aur nahi us DSP ke ladke ne..
Waise wo bhi mujhe janta tha.. Aur dar ke mare uske bhi hath pair thar thar kanp rahe the..
Lekin usko laga ki uske pass Ek plus point hai Jo uske hath me Gun hai..
par shayad usko ye pata nahi tha ki Hum Kon hai...
Usne Bina soche samje gun chalani chahi.. to Waise hi speed me Maine Ritu ko side kiya Aur uske pass pahuchkar Uski gun upar Kar di...
Aur Gun ki goli Chat ki taraf chal gayi.. Mai itne Jaldi yaha par kaise aaya...
ye sochne ke liye Maine use waqt hi nahi Diya aur jhat se uske muh par ek halka sa Punch maar Diya..
Jiski bajah se wo Behosh hokar niche gir Gaya tha.tabhi Bahar se ambulance ki aabaj ane lagi.. to Maine us Ladka2 se kaha...
Mai- Dekho Mai Tumhe is liye chod raha hu Kyu ki tum ek ache ladke ho aur ab inhe yaha se Hospital le Jao isiliye...
Phir kuch doctor Aur nurse vaha par aa Gaye Aur Un sabko yaha se le Gaye..
Waise ye Sab jab ho raha tha tab principal ke sath Sab teachers bhi vaha aa Gaye the.. unke sath subah wali mam bhi thi...
Tabhi principal sir mere pass aa jate hai aur kahte hai...
Principal- Mr. Purohit ab tum apne Ghar jao Aur Chalo bacho tum Sab bhi apne Ghar jao..
Phir principal sir ke kahne par Sab students vaha se Nikal jate hai aur sath me hum Sab bhi..
phir mere Dost bhi unke Ghar Nikal padte hai.. Aur yaha rah Gaye hum Tino to Mai Ritika ko sath lekar Divya ko Bye kahkar apne Ghar ki taraf Nikal padta hu..
Aur Divya Ritu ki scooty lekar uske Ghar ki taraf Chali jati hai...................................
Ye sab Mai Shanti se sun raha tha Mai Kya hamare Group me se sab sun rahe the par koi kuch nahi bol raha tha..
Kyu ki sabko pata tha wo Aag ke muh me hath dalne ja raha hai...
Aur Sab ek taraf se excited the ye scene dekhne ke liye aur khud Mai Bhi................................
AGE............................
Ladka1 Ritika ke pass jata hai aur uske pass jakar kahta hai...
Ladka1- hhhiiii... re.. Meri Chamak challo... Yaha kaha baithi ho.... Chalo hamare sath hum Tumhe jannat ki sair karate hai...
Mai to us Ladke ke himmat par daad deta hu. Aur ek taraf se Gussa.. Sala Meri GF par line maar raha hai..
Ritu-(Uski taraf dekhti huye) Kya tum mujhse kah rahe ho....
Ladka1- (Ankh marte huye) Kya yaha tumhare alawa koi aur Patakha hai Kya Meri Janeman....
Us ladke ki baat sunkar shayad Sab ladkiya Ritika se jal gayi hogi..
Kyu ki sab ladkiyo ko apne samne kisi aur ladki ki Tarif pasand nahi hai phir age chahe koi bhi ho ya koi bhi situation ho...
Ritu-(Apni Jagah se khade hote huye) Acha... To Aao mujhe sirf chukar dekho... Agar tumne mujhe chhuu liya to I am all Yours....
Ritu ka ye sunte hi Mai uske muh ki taraf dekhne laga.. Aur Mai ye soch raha tha ki akhir ye ladki karna Kya chahati hai....
Ladka1-(Us DSP boy ki taraf dekhte huye) Bhai... Ye ladki to Bahut jaldi maan gayi...
DSP boy- to phir soch Kya raha hai ja na use Pakad le...
Wo Ladka Ritika ko chune ke liye agr bada aur aur Apna hath age badakar Chune hi Wala tha ki....
Tabhi kuch aisa huva ki wo Ladka Hawa me udte huye us DSP boy ke pairo ke pass soya huva tha...Matlab behosh Pada huva tha...
Ab ye Sab huva kaise vahi sab soch rahe the.. par Maine to full slow motion ke sath Sab scene dekh liya tha...
Us ladke ka hath jaise hi Ritika ko chune Wala tha waise hi Ritu ne uska vahi hath pakadkar jor se marod Diya...
Aur wo chilla pata use pahle hi uske Chati par ek Tamacha laga Diya...
Jisse wo Ek baar jamin par girkar Aur phir Hawa me udte huye piche ja gira...(Jaise Singham me huva tha)
Ye dekhkar wo DSP boy apni Jagah se khada huva aur us apne dost ko uthane ki koshish karne laga par Sab bekar...
Kyu ki wo Shayad Behosh ho Gaya tha.. lagta hai Ritu ne jyada jor se Marne ki koshish nahi ki thi...
lekin ye dekhkar us DSP boy ko Bahut gussa aa Gaya tha..
Ladka2- Bhai Maine aapse pahle hi kaha tha iske age mat jao ye bahut pahuchi huyi chij hai...
DSP boy- Ab ye koi bhi ho mere age kuch bhi nahi hai..
(Apne Dosto ki taraf ishara karte huye) Jao re us ladki ko lekar mere pass le Aao.. ab khud Mai use Dekhta hu ...
Uska ye sunte hi uske sare Dost hamare Matlab Ritu ke pass Jane lage lekin Ritu to ab full Josh me thi...
Ritu-Agar aap Sab ko Apni jaan pyari hai to yaha se chale jayiye varna tum sabka wo hashar karungi ki Tum Sab mujhe bhik mangoge ki mujhe maar do...
Ye baat Maine bhi sun li thi isiliye Maine Ritu ko man hi man me kaha....
Mai-(Man me) Itna bhi dard mat de unko sirf sabak sikha de..wo Sab us DSP ke ladke ke kahne par ye Sab Kar rahe hai..
isme Inka koi dosh nahi hai sirf inko Behosh Kar de..
Ye sunkar Ritika ne Meri taraf dekha lekin boli kuch nahi.. aur nahi usne apne man me kuch Socha Jo Mai pad saku...
Tabhi ek ladke ne aakar Ritu ka hath pakadne ki koshish ki tabhi Ritu ne apne Dusre hath se Sidha gaal par bahut jor se tamacha maar Diya jisse wo vahi let Gaya..
Ye dekhkar to dusre Ladke bhi dar Gaye the Ritu se. Lekin ab wo sab piche nahi hat sakte...
Ek ladke ke hath cricket ki bat thi to wo Bat Ritika ko Marne ke liye uthaya lekin Ritu ne niche jhukkar us Bat ko jane diya...
Par wo Bat sidha usi ke side me khade ladke ko bahut Jor se lagi isliye wo vahi Behosh ho Gaya. Aur uske sir se khun nikalne laga...
Phir Ritu ne us ladke ko Ek back kick dekar use bhi vahi pahucha Diya jaha sab ladke ja rahe the Matlab behoshi me....
Phir Kya Jo bhi Ladka Ritika ke samne aata uska vahi haal hota kisi na kisi tarah..
mai Khush tha kyu ki Ritu ne Meri baat man li thi... Jab ye fighting scene chal raha tha tabhi bhi hum vahi Apni Jagah cool hokar baithe huye the...
Lekin baki ke Sab us fighting ko khade hokar dekh rahe the.. balki wo canteen pure students se bhar Gaya tha..
Kyu ki jaise hi jis kisi ko pata chal raha tha yaha par fighting chal rahi hai waise hi Sab yahi chalte huye aa rahe the...
Aur isi bich Maine ambulance ko bhi bula liya tha.. ab sirf wo Ladka2 Aur DSP Boy hi bacha tha..
Aur wo Dono bhi bahut Shock me the ye scene dekhkar wo Dono hi Kya vaha ke Sab students shock me the yaha Tak ki mere friends bhi kuch isi halat me the....
Un Sab ke behosh ho Jane ke baad Ritu Us DSP ke Boy se kahne lagi...
Ritu-Aur bhi hai ya bus itna hi Dum hai tujhme ya Tere Dum pe udne wale in Sab Ladko me...
Ye sunkar DSP ka bacha Gussa karne laga.. Waise dar Aur Gusse ke milap Kya kahte hai malum nahi par uska kuch aisa hi Hal tha...
Tabhi us Ladke ne Apni jeb se Gun nikali.. Gun dekhkar Sab students halla karne lage...
Matlab jor jor se chillate huye idhar udhar bhag rahe the..Par Ritika Normal thi ye Mai janta tha...
Lekin ab bus bahut huva ye khel ab in sabko dikhana hi padega Ki RD is Back...
Matlab Waise nahi jaise aap Sab soch rahe ho.. just Hero ki tarah Without Use power...
Mai-(Jor se chillate hu) Ruuukkkkk..... Jjjaaooo.... Saabbbb.....
Ye sunte hi Sab jaha the vahi ruk Gaye Kyu ki Mai Chillaya hi bahut Jor se tha..
Ritu mere Piche Un Sab ladko ko Marne ke baad vahi khadi thi...
Aur mere sare friends bhi Sab Apni Jagah khade ho Gaye the.. lekin Mai akela hi Apni Jagah baitha huva tha...
Mai Apni Jagah se khada huva aur jaise hi Baki sare students ne mujhe Dekha un sab logo me kuch hulchul hone lagi..
Matlab wo Sab Apas me kuch bate karne lage.. aur Jaise hi Mai us Ladke ki taraf Palta Mujhe dekhkar us Dusre Ladke ki jaan hath me aa gayi thi...
Kyu ki usne expect hi nahi Kiya tha ki Mai vaha par hounga.. Aur nahi us DSP ke ladke ne..
Waise wo bhi mujhe janta tha.. Aur dar ke mare uske bhi hath pair thar thar kanp rahe the..
Lekin usko laga ki uske pass Ek plus point hai Jo uske hath me Gun hai..
par shayad usko ye pata nahi tha ki Hum Kon hai...
Usne Bina soche samje gun chalani chahi.. to Waise hi speed me Maine Ritu ko side kiya Aur uske pass pahuchkar Uski gun upar Kar di...
Aur Gun ki goli Chat ki taraf chal gayi.. Mai itne Jaldi yaha par kaise aaya...
ye sochne ke liye Maine use waqt hi nahi Diya aur jhat se uske muh par ek halka sa Punch maar Diya..
Jiski bajah se wo Behosh hokar niche gir Gaya tha.tabhi Bahar se ambulance ki aabaj ane lagi.. to Maine us Ladka2 se kaha...
Mai- Dekho Mai Tumhe is liye chod raha hu Kyu ki tum ek ache ladke ho aur ab inhe yaha se Hospital le Jao isiliye...
Phir kuch doctor Aur nurse vaha par aa Gaye Aur Un sabko yaha se le Gaye..
Waise ye Sab jab ho raha tha tab principal ke sath Sab teachers bhi vaha aa Gaye the.. unke sath subah wali mam bhi thi...
Tabhi principal sir mere pass aa jate hai aur kahte hai...
Principal- Mr. Purohit ab tum apne Ghar jao Aur Chalo bacho tum Sab bhi apne Ghar jao..
Phir principal sir ke kahne par Sab students vaha se Nikal jate hai aur sath me hum Sab bhi..
phir mere Dost bhi unke Ghar Nikal padte hai.. Aur yaha rah Gaye hum Tino to Mai Ritika ko sath lekar Divya ko Bye kahkar apne Ghar ki taraf Nikal padta hu..
Aur Divya Ritu ki scooty lekar uske Ghar ki taraf Chali jati hai...................................
