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Incest Rishta

Rahul

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wonderfull update dost
 

amita

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bahut hi badiya update hi ruchika khud mohan laal ki wife ban kar us hotel mi jaati hi wo hotel waalo se couple ke liye jo room book kiya tha wo bahut hi alishan specially copuple ke honeymoon ki yaad ko taaza room mi unke liye alag alag flavour ke condom sexy movies ki dvd ke sath unke honeymoon ko yaadgaar banane ke or bi ki tarah ke decoration wagera
Fantastic review with lots of valueable suggestions.
Hope to find a place for your suggestions in the story.
Thanks so much.
 

amita

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Update 22

Usne socha ki "agar beti ban kar jati hu tu kafi paise bhi kharch ho jayenge aur us darje ka hotel bhi nahi hoga tu maja bhi ho sakta hai ki na aaye aur har waqt kuch bhi khane ya karne se pehle paise ka puchana padega aur uske Papa ko business me bhi nuksaan hoga.

Agar vo Patni ban kar jati hai tu hotel bhi acche darje ka aur sari sukh suvidhaon ke sath bina paise ke aur business deal bhi tu nuksaan kya hai. Patni bankar logon ke samne apani identity ko bhulna padega aur jin bhi logon se mulakat hogi unse kabhi bhi jindgi me apane actual rishte ko kisi bhi keemat par ujagar nahi karna. Kya main kar paungi? Lekin usse pehle kya main inki patni lagti bhi hu?

Usse apani saheli ki baat yaad aane lagi ki main inki girlfriend hu, sochkar hi mujhe gudgudi hone lagti hai. Matlab ki agar main girlfriend ho sakti hu tu patni bhi ho sakti hu. Ye baat sochte hi mujhe ajib si feeling ho rahi hai. Papa ki Patni! Kyoun mujhe ye sochte hi accha lag raha hai!

Patni banne ke liye mujhe bahut kuch apane aap ko change karna padega, kya kar paungi? Man ke kone se awaj aayi Koshish karne me kya Harz hai. Tabhi dimagh ne chetawani di jaldibaji me apane haath jala baithoge, aisi bevkufi na karo. Man ne kaha ki kya ho jayega tu dimagh ne kaha tum nasamajh ho aur patni banna gudde gudiya ka Khel nahi hai aur ye tumhare liye ek daldal ki tarah hoga jisme tum ek baar jane ke baad agar nikalne ki koshish karogi tu aur jayada dhansati chali jaogi"


Jab tak Ruchika apani socho me gum thi un palo me uska sar Mohanlal ke seene par tha aur uski saanson ko Mohanlal apani chati par mehsoos kar raha tha aur un saanson ke utar chadhav se uska rakat parvaah bhi badhne laga aur uski bhavnayen bhadakne lagi aur uska man kar raha tha ki ye pal yanhi ruk jaye. Uska man chah raha tha ki usko apane se jakad kar lipta le lekin usse dar bhi lag raha tha ki kanhin Ruchika bura na maan jaye. Abhi kucch aur sochta usse pehle hi Ruchika ne halki si aawaz me kaha "Ham pati patni bankar chalte hain"

Mohanlal ne puccha "kya keh rahi ho"

Ruchika: apane kaha tha na ki hamare chero par tu likha nahi hai ki hamara Rishta kya hai tu fir kyoun bina baat ke paise kharch kare aur business ka bhi nuksaan jhele
Mohanlal: Ek baar fir soch lo, kyounki tum jo bhi faisla lo achi tarah se soch samajh kar lo, aisa na ho ki baad me pachtana pade.

Ruchika: (apane chehre ko uthakar) Maine soch liya hai, natak hi tu karana hai vo bhi bas teen din
Mohanlal: (Uske sar par hath ferte hue) Theek hai agar tumne decide kar liya hai tu natak kar lete hain, lekin main abhi bhi kanhunga ki ham train se uttar kar dusre hotel me chale jate hain.

Ruchika: Nahi Papa, ab ham pati patni bankar hi ussi hotel me jayenge
Mohanlal: Apane Pati ko Papa bulakar

Ruchika: (Hanste hue) Abhi tu ham akele hain tu Papa keh sakti hu na
Mohanlal: Mujhe tu koi aapati nahi, lekin agar natak karna hai tu apane character ko bhula kar natak ke character ko apanana padega kyounki agar kanhin galti se bhi kuch aur munh se nikal gaya tu bahut mushkil ho jayegi. Isliye agar natak karna hai tu vo kisiko bhi aisa lagna chahiye jaise ki vo sabkuch original ho aur shaq ki koi gunjaish na ho

Ruchika: Papa, main aapki baat acche se samajh gayi hu
Mohanlal: baat samajh gayi hoti tu Papa nahi bulati

Ruchika: Ok okay Papa, ab nahi kanhugi (aur bolkar khud hi hansne lagi aur fir sochate hue serious hokar) Papa, fir aapko kya kehkar bulaun
Mohanlal: beta ye tu tum socho ki kya bulana chahiye

Ruchika: (Hanste hue) Papa aap bhi mujhe beta bula rahe ho

Ruchika ki baat sunkar donon hi hansne lage aur Mohanlal ne Ruchika ko apane aagosh me lekar thodha bhinchte hue usse kaha "Ham donon hi galti kar rahe hain aur ek dusre ko Papa aur beti keh raje hain, agar galti se bhi dusro ke samne hamare munh se nikal gaya tu bahut badnami hogi. Ab hamare samne do raste hain, ya tu ham baap beti bankar dusre hotel me chale jate hain nahi tu hame apane iss Rishte ko bhulakar Pati patni wale Rishte ke natak me apane aap ko samarpit kar de"

Ruchika jiske ubharon ka Mohanlal ki chaudi chati me dabne ke ehsaas ne uske man me thodhi halchal macha di thi usse ajib tu lag raha tha lekin nai nai jawan hui Ruchika ke man ke taron me jawan hone ki dastak de di aur uske dil ki dhadkan thodhi si badh gayi. Usne apane man me socha ki ye kya ho raha hai, ek baar tu usse laga ki aage badna theek nahi hai, lekin uske man ne kaha choti moti takleefon se darogi tu fir tumhare nirnay ka kya hoga. Ye soch aate hi usne socha ki jo hoga dekha jayega, ek baar uske dimagh ne fir chetaya ki daldal se bacho lekin dimagh ki chetawani ko najar andaj karte hue apane chere par dridh nishchay karte hue usne Mohanlal se kaha "Papa ab se main sirf aur sirf aap ki patni na ki beti"

Mohanlal ne uski baat suni tu uske chehre par muskharat aa gayi aur kaha "Papa ki patni"

Ruchika: (Baat samajh aate hi muskarai aur ussi andaj me) Nahi aap beti ke pati

Mohanlal uski baat sunkar usko aur kas lete hain aur uske sar par hath ferte hue kehne lage "Main beti ka pati aur tum Papa ki patni"

Ruchika ko apane ubharon ke aur jayada dabne se iss baar jhataka bhi laga aur sharam bhi aane lagi aur apani sharam ko chupate hue "Papa aap sahi keh rahe ho lekin aap hi batao ki kya karen taki kisi ko hamare actual Rishte ka pata na chale"

Mohanlal uske chehre ko apane hathon me lekar uski aankhon me jhankar kehne laga "Sabse pehle tu hame ek dusre ko Papa aur beti kehna chhodna padega aur aisa behave karna padega jaise ek pati patni karte hain"

Ruchika: Papa aap jaise kahoge main vaise hi karungi
Mohanlal: Sabse pehle tu Papa kehna band karna padega.

Ruchika: akele me bhi
Mohanlal: ab se lekar jab tak hamara tour khatam nahi hota tum mujhe Papa nahi kahogi aur main tumhe beti nahi kanhunga

Ruchika: Matalab ab aap mujhe vaisa pyaar nahi karoge jaise pehle karte the
Mohanlal: (Uske mathe ko chumte hue) Tum meri jaan ho, apane aap ko beti kaho ya patni mere liye tum vahi Ruchika ho aur tumhare liye main kucch bhi kar sakta hu aur kabhi mat samajhna ki patni banne ke baad tum laad nahi kar paogi. Mere liye tum hamesha vahi gudiya rahogi Meri Baby doll

Ruchika: Thanks Papa, lekin main aapki patni nahi balki uska naatak karne ja rahi hu. Iss naatak ko karne me aapko tu problem nahi hai kyonki aap tu mujhe pehle bhi aur ab bhi Ruchika keh kar bula sakte ho, lekin samasya tu meri hai, isliye ab aap hi batao main aapko kya kehkar bulaun
Mohanlal: Mere naam se bula sakti ho

Ruchika: (Ekdam se sharma jati hai) nahi nahi main aapka naam nahi le sakti
Mohanlal: Kyoun nahi le sakti

Ruchika: Patni koi apane Pati ka naam leti hai
Mohanlal: kyoun nahi leti

Ruchika: (Sharmakar apane chehre ko fir se Mohanlal ki chhati me chhupa leti hai aur apane sar ko idhar udhar karte hue) nahi kuch aur batao.

Ruchika ke sar ko idhar udhar karne se uski naak Mohanlal ki chathi par ragadne se uski bhavnaon ko ekdam se bhadka gayi tu Uske hathon ne uski peeth par panhuchkar usko sehlate hue apani taraf kheench rahe the jisse Ruchika Mohanlal ke aur nikat aa gayi aur uske upari sharir ke kai hisse apane Papa ke sharir se ragad khane lage tu usko bhi ek alag hi anubhuti hone lagi. Ye anubhuti uske liye bilkul hi alag thi lekin usse sukhad lag rahi thi. Tabhi Mohanlal ne uski anubhuti ke palo me khalal dalte hue kaha "Dekho aajkal zamana badal gaya hai, Patni apane Pati ka naam leti hai aur agar tum bhi logi tu mujhe koi dikkat nahi hai"

Ruchika ke gaal ab Mohanlal ki chhati se lage hue the aur usne dhire se kaha "Main aapka naam nahi le sakti, aap mere Papa bhi tu hai"

Mohanlal nahi chahta tha ki abhi kuch aur aage bada jaye Kyounki usse ab uski bhavnaon par niyantran chuthta ja raha tha isliye usne apane man ko samjhaya aur vo Ruchika ke kandhon ko pakadkar khada ho gaya aur usne Ruchika ko bhi khada kar diya aur kandhon ko pakde pakde usse puccha "Beta main aakhiri baar pucch raha hu ki Kya tum waqai me meri patni banne ka naatak karna chahti ho" Ruchika ne iske jawab me bas itna hi kaha "haan"

Tab Mohanlal ne usse kaha ki "Ruchika ab se lekar tour khatam hone tak tum meri patni ho, beti nahi aur main ab se tumhe sirf aur sirf patni ki tarah treat karunga aur tum mujhe mere naam se bula sakti ho"

Ruchika ne palke jhukaye hue kaha "Main bhi aap ko pati hi manungi lekin naam nahi le sakti"

Mohanlal ne kaha ki "Tum naam lene se itna parehaj kar rahi ho tu fir tumhare liye patni banna mushkil ho jayega, isliye Patni banna hai tu kam se kam ek baar tu mujhe naam se bulao"

Ruchika soch me pad gayi aur apane aap se iss baat par behas karne lagi aur fir usne dhire se kaha "nahi naam nahi"

Mohanlal ne kaha "Theek hai fir ham couple bankar nahi chalenge aur train se uttar kar kisi naye hotel me jayenge aur baap beti bankar jayenge"

Mohanlal ki baat sunkar pata nahi Ruchika kya sochane lagi aur uski soch ki vajah se uske saans ki gati badne lagi, jisse uske uroj upar neeche hone lage aur bada hi manmohak drishya uttapan kar rahe the. Kuch der aur sochane ke baad usko pata nahi kya hua aur badi himmat karke nazar neeche karke dhire se "M..ooo..h.h.aa....n"

Mohanlal ne maza lete hue usse kaha "thodha tez bolo na, sunai nahi diya" Ruchika ek dam se sharma gayi aur ekdam se Mohanlal ke gale lag gayi aur ek baar fir se "M..o..o..h..aa..nn" aur ye kehkar apane chere ko Mohanlal ki chhati me chupa liya aur apane hathon ko uski peeth par lejakar kas liya aur uske ubharon ne Mohanlal ki chathi me dhans kar Mohanlal ke hridye me uthal puthal mach di aur uske haath bhi Ruchika ki peeth par panhuchkar usse apane se kas liya aur uske mathe ko chumkar kaha "Meri Jàan, meri biwi Ruchika"
 
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