Incest Rishta
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Man me aapke liye tarifoka samandar umad raha hai. Bas itna kahungi ki aap bahut hi khaas writer ho...
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we are waiting for sandhya's part. You are too focused on ruchika and Mohanlal story. Have a balance in between. BTW great work
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The rose flower is very beautiful and its smell is such that everyone becomes obsessed with it, Ruchika is also beautiful like that rose and Mohanlal's mind is lost seeing her beauty.
At the moment, the two are trying to free with each other and understand each other, I think it won't take much time. Ruchika is angry but I know that later she will accept it with love.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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मोहब्बत का कोई इरादा तो नही था,
ऐ दिलनशीं,
देखी जो तेरी अदा तो नीयत बदल गई...
At the moment, the two are trying to free with each other and understand each other, I think it won't take much time. Ruchika is angry but I know that later she will accept it with love.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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मोहब्बत का कोई इरादा तो नही था,
ऐ दिलनशीं,
देखी जो तेरी अदा तो नीयत बदल गई...
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Aap meri itni tariff na karen, mera paryas sirf itna hi hai ki aapko ek achi kahani de paun.
Aapko kahani pasand aati hai tu mujhe khushi hoti hai aur jayada accha likhne ki koshish bhar hai.
Saath banaye rakhiye.
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