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Raat ko garba dekhne gaya hua tha to subhah let utha hu bhai abhi thodi der me post karta hu. Bas ek baar check kar lu.
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Update - 03
Virat mirror ke samne khada hokar apne aap ko dekh raha tha.
Long, purple baigeni hair uske shoulder se niche tak lehra rahe the. Uski silver jaisi sharp and piercing aankhe, duniya ko glass ki tarah mirrored kar rahi thi. Woh muskuraya.
At least me ab handsome to hu.
Virat Weaverheart ek lady-killer tha, is me koi doubt nahi- ek aisa aadmi jo ek nazar se hi sabka dhyan apni or khich leta tha. Agar uske predecessor ne iss face ka sahi estemal kiya hota, to chije alag hoti.
Tch. What a wast!. Agar old Virat ke paas half brain bhi hota, uska face aisa tha, to wo protagonist bhi uske samne struggle karta.
Lekin vo to tab ki baat hai.
Iss baar, apni looks, apne mind, or-- most important--- apne system ka estemal karke woh sab hasil karega jo woh chahta tha. Yaha tak ki uss princess ko bhi, jo protagonist ke liye use chhodne wali hai.
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Fresh hone ke baad, Virat window ke paas khade hokar vishal Weaverheart Estate ko dekh raha tha.
Morning ka Sun land ko gold se nahala raha tha. Countless training feilds, hare-bhare gardens or uchi marble ki towering jaha tak nazar jati thi,waha tak pheli hue thi. Four great families main se kisi ek liye perfect ek home.
And yet...
This world is insane.
Virat ne marne se pehle novel ke sirf first 30 chapters hi read kiye the. Lekin woh kya jannta tha? Woh baat use immediately bha gai.
Mana dwara governed ek world, Monsters, dungeons, or war dwara Shaped .
Sadiyo pehle, duniya bhar me gates appears hue, jinse nightmares creatures bahar nikle the - goblins, orcs, dire wolves, dragons, undead. Every horror imaginable.
Lekin gates kuch or bhi lekar aaye.
Mana.
Ek mysterious energy jisne human potential ko awaken kiya, unhe supernatural abilities di gai.
Is power ke sath, humanity ne jawabi hamla kiya. But ye akele nahi the jo change hue. Mana ne other races-- elves, dwarves, beastmen, and demons ke rise ka bhi rasta khol diya.
Uniting hone ke bajay, in races ne world ko divided kar diya or apne-apne continents par claims karne lage. Iske baad uneasy shanti chha gai.
Expect with the demons.
Vo real enemy the. Unhe war pasand thi. Unhe chaos pasand thi.
Or iss tarah , other races ne mil kar apne most promising talent ko train karne ke liye academy banai. Ek aisa place jaha sabhi races ek sath rehti thi.
Wahi academy jaha Rock -- the protagonist --- Pokémon ki tarah women ko collect karta tha.
Virat ne halke se sans li.
" Damm you. Rock."
Iss world me power ka progression straightforward tha.
14 year ki age me , every child innate talent awakened ho jata hai, jise E-rank se SSS- rank tak graded kiya jata hai.
E-rank ? Bilkul useless.
SSS-rank? Humans ke bich ek god
Awakening ke baad, unhe Akashic Record ki taraf se officially tor par manyta di jati hai -- Strength or recognition ko governing karne wali mysterious system. Every action, every achievement ko record karta tha, or agar aapne koi remarkable kam kiya -- chahe heroic ho ya villainous-- to woh tumhe ek title se rewarded karta hai.
Or titles sirf show ke liye nahi tha.
They granted real power.
Apka titles jitna rarer or powerful hoga, aap utna hi strong banoge. Because iss world me power sirf talent se nahi hoti.
Yeh existence ke bare me tha. Or only achievement and titles gain karke hi apka existence elevate ho sakta hai.
Jab apka existence ek nischit seema tak pahoch jayega, to Akashic Record apko ek choice grant karega.
The best example? Aura.
A- rank tak reach ke liye, vyakti ko apna Aura ko awaken karna padta tha.-- jo vyakti ki presence or energy ka manifestation hai. Ye saalo ki kathor training ya enough titles se achieve kiya ja sakta hai. Kyuki ek baar apka existence ek nischit seema tak pahoch jata. To Akashic Record apko aapki achievement or apke dwara chune hue path ke adhar par Aura selection present karta hai. Kehne ki jaroorat nahi ki apka path jitna powerful and unique hoga, Option utne hi absurd hote hai.
Yah principle S-rank par bhi apply hote hai, But instead Of Aura, vyakti apne Intent ko awaken karta hai-- ek specific concept ki gehray, personal understanding jo itni deep hoti hai ki woh reality ko bhi influence kar sakti hai.
Jaha tak SS-rank or uske aage ki baat hai...
Virat ko kuch pata nahi hai.
Usne kabhi itna aage tak read nahi kiya
Lekin ek baat clear thi-- power earn ki ja sakti thi.
Aap puri tarah se smart, bold or insane hai to aap Akashic Record ko aapko accept karne ke liye force kar sakte hai.
Or yahi woh loophole tha jiska woh advantage uthana chahta tha.
Because.. baki sab se alag..
Uske paas ek system thi. Or woh bhi unique.
Jaise hi woh apne next move ka plan wala tha ki---
Knock. Knock.
" Young master, kya me under aa sakti hu?."
Ek familiar aavaj.
Virat door ki or turn hua or bola " Yes."
Pehli wali middle- aged ki maid under aai, dar or ghabhrai hue, uski aankhe niche jhuki hue thi.
Virat ko turant samaj aa gaya ki vo aise kyu hai.
Uska predecessor ek bigda hua child tha, jo servants ko pareshan karta tha, because use pata tha ki uski maa use kabhi punish nahi karegi.
Now?
Woh usase darre the.
Annoying.
Virat ne aah bhari " kya tumhe kuch chahiye? "
Maid uski aavaj ko sunn kar sock ho gai or haklate hu a boli, " T..The-Lady dining room me aapka wait kar rahi hai."
Virat ne sar hilaya, " Guide me."
Maid shocking reh gai" kya?"
Virat - " kya mujhe apne baat repeat karni hogi?."
" Ah! N-No, Young master! Abhi! " wo kapti hue hallway me bhag gai.
Virat bhi under hi under aah bharte hue piche-piche aaya.. mujhe uske liye bhura lag raha hai par... lekin mujhe samaj nahi aa raha ki aakhir dining room kaha hai.
kas, mujhe apne predecessors ki memories virasat me mili hoti.
System, at least next time apna kam thik se karna.
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Dinning hall vishal tha, phir bhi bhayanak roop se khali tha.
Room main ek long mahogany table pheli hue thi, lekin dono chhor par sirf two chairs rakhi hue thi.
It made sense.
Weaverheart Family main only do log the.
Virat or uski Maa.
Or uska Father?
Unknown.
Aisa nahi hai ki isase koi fark padta ho.
" Hello, Maa."
Table ke head par ek striking women bethi thi, jiske silver hair lehra rahe the and uski piercing violet aankhe thi.
Shreya Weaverheart.
Castria Empire ki sabse strongest women's main se ek, human domain ki ruler.
Ek terrifying existence.
Usne muskurate huwe apni baahe phela di, " idher aao, mere bacche. Maa ke gale lag ja."
Virat hesitated.
uske predecessor ne always apni maa ke affection ko rejecte kar diya tha.
Lekin is virat ke liye koi one person tha jiske sath use quickly ghulne-milne ki jaroorat thi, wo uske maa shreya thi.
Woh aage badha or gale lag gaya.
Shreya sakht ho gai.
Uski arms shock se freeze ho gaye, mano woh samaj hi na pa rahi ho ki abhi kya hua.
Virat thoda pichhe jhuka or apna sar jhukaya, " Maa? Is something wrong?"
Shreya ki fingers uske charo or kas gai.
Virat ne shreya ko dhruj te huwe mehsus kiya.
Virat(Apne aap se)- Are yaar! Kya mene jyada kar diya?
Shreya pichhe hat gai, uski purple ankhe virat ki aankho se takra gai.
" tujhe kya ho gaya?" Shreya ne fusfusate huwe puchha. " tumne mujhe kabhi gale nahi lagne diya."
Virat ne ek sharmili smile ke sath kaha. " mujhe realize hua.... me idiot tha."
usne nazre niche ki. " log hamesha kehte hai ki main aapke bina kuch bhi nahi hu. Me weak hu , talentless hu. Ki me apni training kabhi puri nahi kar paunga.
" Me hamesha aapke bharose nahi rahna chahta tha , is liye khud ko aap se durr rehne ki koshish ki."
Shreya ki naazar soft pad gai
Virat ko jhuth bolne ki jaroorat hi nahi thi.
Jo usne kaha wahi uske predecessor ne kiya tha.
Shreya ne aage badh kar virat ka chehra sahlaya, " tujhe pata hai, tujhe unki care karne ki jaroorat nahi hai ki log kya kehte hai."
Then
Temperature dropped.
Room main ek murderous aura bhar gaya.
Shreya ki aavaj ice ki tarah cold ho gai.
" ...bas thoda wait karo, my love. Main un sabhi ko dhundh nikalugi jinhone tumhare bare main aisa kaha tha or unhe paida hone par regret karvaungi."
Virat shivered. Yeh yandere switch bahot fast tha.
Usne lightly cough ki. " Ah, thik hai. To... aapne mujhe yaha kyon bulaya ? "
Shreya muskurate huwe pichhe jhuk gai.
" tujhe pata hai kal tumhara fourteen birthday hai."
" tera awakening hona ka din."
" kya tum ready hai?."
Virat ka heart teji se dhadak ne laga. Uski finger halki si twitch hone lagi.
Already?!
Yeh plot kal se start ho raha hai.
Virat :- system, meri maa ke affection level ko dikha.
[ Affection Level : Shreya Weaverheart - 90% ]
To kya main unke talent ko share kar sakta hu.
[ No. Aapki mother ka rank SS hai. Ek unawakene person ke roop me, aap only C-rank tak ke parson ke sath hi share kar sakte hai. ]
Virat ne gali dete hue kaha, " Shit. That's a problem ."
" Of course , Maa. Me ready hu."
Usne forced smile di.
-- ya me kal se pehle waha pahoch jaunga.
Mera matlab hai ki meri appearance ki vajahse , yeh impossible nahi hai ki koi mujhe secret roop se like na kare, right?
Virat ki aankhe hard ho gai.
Agar koi person nahi bhi hai, to main yeh make sure karunga ki kal morning se pehle ek ho. Kisi ka to talent share karna hi padega awakening se pehle.
...But wait. Agar meri maa mujhse itni obsessed hai, to ye 100% kyon nahi hai?
[ 90% is the highest a mother's love can naturally reach. Anything beyond that... is something else entirely. ]
Virat ne uljhan se palke jhapkai.
Tabhi- ek cold ehsaas uske mind me aaya.
No, iska matlab yeh to nahi ho sakta... hai na?
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