Incest Rati Nagri Ke Raaz

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Index Kaise Banate Hai...? Agar story ka index banana hai to Table ke liye niche wale code ko dekho aur samjho. Update 1 update 2 update 3 update 4 update 5 update 6 update 7 update 8 update 9 update 10 Ye code thread mein post karne se aisa dikhega Update 1update...

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[Mannu_ji]

Wow nice intro

 

[Mbraa]

UPDATE-01​

Rati Nagri ki ek subah chiriyon ke gunjan se shuru hui. Isi gaon ke ek sadharan ghar mein, humara hero Arjun sirf ek shorts pehenkar so raha tha. Sapne mein, woh apne ek haath se apni maa Neelam ko nanga karke unki bhari bharkam chuchiyon ko jor jor se masal raha tha, unki mulayam garmahat ko mehsoos karte hue. Dusre haath se, woh uski chodi, golmaatol gaand ko sehla raha tha—vah gaand jise dekhkar woh na jaane kitni baar muth maar chuka tha. Ab sapne mein, usne apna lund bahar nikaala aur uski gaand par ragad raha tha, uski garam, chamkati twacha ki ehsaas se kaanpte hue.



" Ahhhh maaah... aur sahan nahi hota is gaand mein ghusne ka," woh sapne mein sisak raha tha. Usne apna 9-inch lamba lund uski gaand ke ched ke saamne rakha aur dheere-dheere andar dhakelne laga, uski tight, garam garmi ko mehsoos karte hue—ki tabhi kisi ne usko jor-jor se hilana shuru kar diya.



Maa: "Arjun beta, Arjun! Uth ja, 10 baj chuke hain beta. Ahhhhh... maa, kitna jor se pakad rakha hai is bacche ne! Ahhhhhhhhh... Arjun, chor mujhe! Kya kar raha hai?"



Itne shor se meri neend tooti, aur saamne dekha to maa ki vahi mastani, ubhari hui gaand thi, jise maine pakad rakha tha. Farak sirf itna tha ki sapne mein maa bilkul nangi thi, par ab unhone saare kapde pehen rakhe the—ek patli, peeli rang ki sari aur purple color ki blouse, jo ghar ke kaam ke dauran pehna karti thi. Blouse kaafi purana aur patla ho chuka tha, aur andar bra bhi nahi thi, kyunki maa abhi nahaayi nahi thi (humare ghar mein sab angan mein hi nahate hain, khaaskar maa aur behen). Girne ki wajah se maa ki blouse aadhi se zyada niche sarak chuki thi, aur unki itni badi chuchiyan upar se is halchal mein jaise blouse ko phaadkar bahar aane ko taiyaar thi—unka mulayam, gora rang aur halki pasine ki chamak subah ki roshni mein chamak rahi thi.





Maa ghodi ban kar khadi thi, isliye maine jaldi se unko chhoda. Chhodte hi woh khadi hui aur mujhe jor se chillate hue sunaane lagi, unki saans tez-tez chal rahi thi aur chehre par gusse ki laali thi.



Maa: Kya sapna dekh raha tha, battameez? Kitna besharam ho gaya hai! Apni maa ko koi aise kheenchta hai? Agar tere papa, bhai ya behen hote to kya sochte? Main aayi thi jhaadu lagane, socha jaga doon, aur jaise hi kareeb aayi tune mujhe kheenchkar gira diya!





Main ab tak maa ko hi ghoor raha tha, bina ankhein jhapkaye. Unki saans ki garam hawa mere chehre par mehsoos ho rahi thi, aur ghar ki subah ki meethi mitti aur khushboo wali hawa mein unke sharir se uthti halki pasine ki sugandh mujhe madhosh kar rahi thi. Blouse ke andar se unki chuchiyon ke nipples ekdum khade hue dikh rahe the, jaise subah ki thandi hawa unko chhu kar aur sakht kar rahi ho. Main socha, meri maa waise hi bohot kaamuk kisam ki aurat hai—unki aankhon mein woh chamak, unki harkaton mein woh lachak—par subah-subah aisa nahi hota. Shayad woh kuch kar rahi thi? Main unki chuchiyon ko dhyaan se dekh raha tha, unki halki hilori aur mulayam ehsaas ko yaad karte hue, ki tabhi maa ne jor se ek thappad maara. Thappad ki tez awaaz aur gaal par jalti hui dard ne mera hosh wapas laaya.



Me: Sorry maa, maaf kar do. Main sapna dekh raha tha, samajh hi nahi aaya ki tum ho. Sorry maa.



Tab tak maa aur mere beech kuch nahi hua tha, to unhone kuch mind nahi kiya aur boli,thik hain
Unki awaaz ab thodi narm hote hue.



Maa: Theek hai, dobara aisa mat karna. Aur aise sapne na hi dekho to achha.



Me: Sorry maa, dobara nahi hoga. Aap bula rahi thi kya?



Maa: Re bhaissahab, aapko kyun bulaun? Aap to maharaj hain...



Me: Aisa kyun bol rahi ho?



Maa: Dekha hai kitna subah ho gaya hai? 10 baj gaye hain, abhi tak maharaj soye hue hain.



Me: Are, uth to gaya hoon ab. Batao, kuch kaam hai kya?



Maa: Kaam to tha, par tujhe aise sota dekh tere papa akele hi chale gaye gaiyon aur baisho ko khilaane. Ab uth ja.



Maa fir se jhaadu lagane lagi, apni chodi gaand ke darshan karati hui—uski har halchal se sari ki halki gand ke bich gush gayi thi, aur zameen par jhaadu ki khar-khar awaaz ghar ko bhar rahi thi. Main dekhta raha, unki gaand ki golai aur us par sari ki tight girift ko mehsoos karte hue, ki tabhi maa ne jor se chillaya.



Maa: Are haramkhor, jaake fresh ho kar apne papa ki madad karne jaa jaldi!



Me: Re maa, to baba ko jaane do. Main tumhari help kar dunga ghar pe rehke. Tum jo kahogi, wahi karunga.



Maa: Bada aaya meri madad karne wala. Chup-chaap uth aur khet mein ja ke fresh hoke aa.



Haan doston, baaki sab suvidha hone ke bawajood is gaon mein sabhi kheton mein jaake hi soch karte hain—yeh yahan ki ek parampara hai, jismein subah ki taazi hawa aur mitti ki sugandh insaan ko aur zyada zinda mehsoos karati hai.



Main ghar se nikla. Angan mein kisi ko nahi dikha, to sidha bahar jaake mitti ke raste se hota hua chala. Abhi bohot saare log already fresh hoke kheton mein kaam kar rahe the—unke bolne ki awaazen, gaiyon ki ghantiyon ki ting-ting, aur door se aati nadi ki kal-kal—sab mil kar subah ko zinda kar rahe the. Meri roz ki jagah pe nahi kar paaya, to sidha chala gaya jungle ki taraf.





Oh sorry, main aapko apne gaon ke baare mein to batana bhool gaya. Humare gaon ka naam Rati Nagri isliye pada kyunki bahut saal pehle yahan ke zamindar ko baccha nahi ho raha tha. To usne Kaamdev ki patni, yaani Rati ki sadhana ki thi. Uske baad usko judwa bacche hue—ek beta, ek beti. Uske baad usne is gaon ka naam Rati Nagri rakh diya. Yeh gaon Lucknow se lagbhag 50 km door hai—saamne pahad, nadi, upar se kheti-baari, kul milakar bohot hariyali. Upar se yahan ki mitti bohot upjaoo hai, ho sakta hai isliye jo is gaon mein rehta hai, woh har bhakt apna beej bona chahta hai—jaise yahan ki hawa mein hi kuch afsana hai, jo logon ko zyada kaamuk bana deti hai.



To main kahan tha? Haan, to main jungle mein ghus ke ek jagah talaash kar raha tha. Mil bhi gayi—ek ghanne jhaadiyon ke peeche, jahan subah ki dhoop halki-halki chhan kar aati thi aur paudhon ki taazi sugandh havon mein ghul rahi thi. Maine halka hone ke liye baith gaya, abhi 2 minute hue nahi ki tabhi mujhe kisi ki siski sunai di—udhar aur ghanne jhaadiyan thi, jahan se halki-halki awaazen aa rahi thi, jaise koi saans le raha ho ya... kuch aur.


Main nanga hi (already ek shorts pehen ke aaya tha, woh bhi khula hua tha) us taraf jaane laga. Thoda kareeb jaake maine jo dekha, usne meri poori zindagi ki kahani badal kar rakh di...



To kya dekha maine, woh aapko 2nd update mein pata chalega.



Jaari rahegi.

 

[Mbraa]

After 3 hours of continuous writing and editing, I have written this update.

I hope you guys will like it.

 

[Mbraa]

Sorry after many tries I couldnt link the index properly. I need some help with that.
Thank you

 

[Alpha vijay]

Sorry after many tries I couldnt link the index properly. I need some help with that.
Thank you

Aap kisi mod se baat kariye woh aapke liye index bana dega

 

[nigga]

Katha chodampur ka concept copy lag raha hai but it's still okay
Lekin characters bhi kahin na kahin milte–julte lag rahe hain jo ki theek nahi hai
kahani ki shuruaat bhi bilkul katha chodampur ki hi tarah hui hai, chalo jo ho gaya so ho gaya aage se dhyan rakhna bhai
I think characters me badlav karo, ho sake toh apni real life se inspire characters ko add karo toh likhne me bhi maza aayega
Apni asal zindagi se characters uthao aur unke naam badal kar unhein kahani me add karo yakin maano writing me bahut help milegi

 

[nigga]

Ek aur baat please don't mind this
Pata nahi kyu mujhe lag raha hai tumne grok AI ko prompt diya hai
sach–sach batana bhai AI se likhwa rahe ho na ?

 

[Mbraa]

Definitely, I started writing this story after reading 'Katha Chodampur Ki' and got inspired by it.
More or less, the characters are different, and even the family structures are different. The progression would also be different, so don't worry.
But yes, you might find a few similarities here and there because it is written within the same genre, but those are nuanced, not intentional.

 

[Mbraa]

Ek aur baat please don't mind this
Pata nahi kyu mujhe lag raha hai tumne grok AI ko prompt diya hai
sach–sach batana bhai AI se likhwa rahe ho na ?

Don't get me wrong but after this Ai thing people think if someone uses comma and fullstops properly they think Ai nelikha hain.
Kya prompt likhke ayega itna personalized update wo jarur batana bhai main abhi tak tho koi course tho nahi liya par bolna.
Or 2nd update ka suggestion grok Ai ko puch lena agar usse mil Jaye tho story band kardunga.
Thank u