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Bahut bahut dhanyawad dearग्रेट स्टोरी यार क्या कहना मेरी जान लव यू
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Incest RAKSHASH
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Thanku so much dearFor completed 400 pages on your story thread....
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Thanku so much dearFabulous fantastic rocking update
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Thanku ji
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Bahut bahut dhanyawad jiAmazing update riya singh
You improved a lot.... Plot aur writing style me ye ab tak ki best story hai ju ki.
Ab action aane wala hai, relation side se kafi chize clear hai ki kaun kaun Dev ke sath hogi. Halaki Riva aur Sugandha abhi bachi hui hai. Pratap aur Charan Bhawar ke piche gaye hai to woh bhi tab tak nahi aane wale jab tak tisri Shakti nahi mil jati. Ab ye dekhna hai ki woh Shakti kise milegi, abhi Dev isse anjan hai to use Shakti milne ki kam hi sambhavna hai, lekin shayad bhomik jaldi Dev ko bata de aur woh bhi uss Shakti ke liye nikle.
Sugandha, Abhendra aur Manisha ka character kuch kuch Rashi, Abhi aur Maya jaisa hai. Kya woh inke hi pichle janam hai.
Suspense aur sawal badhte hi jaa rahe hai aur abhi to vartman me bhi nahi pahuche.
Jabardast story aur update
Waiting for next update.....
Aaj ke update me shakti ke bare me pata chal jayega,
Aur dev ko phele hi shakti mil chuki h, koi dusri bar shakti nhi le sakta, na hi uske kareeb ja sakta h
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Thanku jiGorgeous and beautiful update
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Ab koi bhi kisi rishte ko nhi manta h, aur aage sab rishte badal jayenge
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