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क्योंकि डॉली की उम्र आपने इंट्रो मे 18 साल लिखी थी जबकि यहां पर आपने 20 साल लिखी है और कहानी मे टाइम भी आपने 10 बाद का लिखा है
उस हिसाब से तो डॉली की उम्र 28 साल होनी चाहिए थी.
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यहां इस एपिसोड मे कुछ तो गलत लिखा है आपने.
क्योंकि डॉली की उम्र आपने इंट्रो मे 18 साल लिखी थी जबकि यहां पर आपने 20 साल लिखी है और कहानी मे टाइम भी आपने 10 बाद का लिखा है
उस हिसाब से तो डॉली की उम्र 28 साल होनी चाहिए थी.
बाकी आप बहतर जानो।
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यार
क्योंकि उस स्टोरी मे वाणी राज से एक अलग हादसे मे मिलती है जिसमे कुछ गुंडे वाणी का रास्ता रोकते है और बतमीजी करणे लगते है.
वहाँ पे राज आ के उन गुंडों का मरता है तब वाणी पहली बार राज पर लट्टू हो जाती है.
फिर राज वाणी से मिले बगैर ही चला जाता है.
तो वाणी राज का पता ढूंढ़ने लगती है तो उसे राज सुबह मॉर्निंग वॉक पर मिलता है जहाँ वो उसका पीछा कर के घर का पता लगाती है.
बाद मे अगले दिन सुबह सुबह उसके घर चली जाती है.
आगे का याद नहीं....
ये स्टोरी मैंने कहीं पड़ी है लेकिन याद नहीं आ रही की उस स्टोरी का नाम क्या है.
क्योंकि उस स्टोरी मे वाणी राज से एक अलग हादसे मे मिलती है जिसमे कुछ गुंडे वाणी का रास्ता रोकते है और बतमीजी करणे लगते है.
वहाँ पे राज आ के उन गुंडों का मरता है तब वाणी पहली बार राज पर लट्टू हो जाती है.
फिर राज वाणी से मिले बगैर ही चला जाता है.
तो वाणी राज का पता ढूंढ़ने लगती है तो उसे राज सुबह मॉर्निंग वॉक पर मिलता है जहाँ वो उसका पीछा कर के घर का पता लगाती है.
बाद मे अगले दिन सुबह सुबह उसके घर चली जाती है.
आगे का याद नहीं....
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Episode 38 (tender special part 1)
Sabhi logo ke bich me aaj subah se hi ek bat ki charcha ho Rahi thi ki tender kisko milega
Bahut Si companiyon ne tender bhara tha jinme se mukhya char companiyon ke bare me hi bate ho rahi thi vo thi Charo Raj pariwar ki company news reporter bhi subah se hi tender office ke bahar khade huye the pal pal ki khabar janta tak pahuncha rahe the
Dekhte hi dekhte 11 baj gaye the sabhi log chaudhari parivar se viraj Chaudhary aur vimal Chaudhary (viraj ke dada ji) aaye hue the undono ke sath khushbu bhi thi sisodiya pariwar se Manish Sisodia, uski dadi savita sisodiya aur uska bada beta jitender sisodiya bhi tha
Thakur parivar se Ajay, Gajendra Singh aur sath vikram aur sanjay singh bhi the
Rana pariwar se Raja dhanjay singh Rana, Bhairav singh aur rajkumari nandini ( kyonki Raja sahab Koi naya kam ki shuruaat nandini ke hatho se hi karte hai aur unhe pura viswas tha ki tender unko hi milega )
Aur bhi kai Badi hastiyan yaha maujud thi sabne ek bar nandani ko dekha jarur par darkar dubara dekhne ki himmat nahi Hui nandini ka man bahut udas tha phir bhi vo khush hone ka dikhava kar rahi thi usne aaj purple colour ka simple suit pahana hua tha jisme bhi vo sach me bahut sundar lag rahi thi
Manish, Ajay aur viraj ki nazare bar bar nandani ki aur ja rahi thi sabhi log apne log in charo parivar se achcha sambandh rakhna chahate the isaliye sab inki chaplusi kar rahe the
Inhi logo ke bich me babita ji aur bhuvan bhi the jo ki bahut pareshan khade the
Bhuvan _ babita ji aapne Raj sir ko time to bata diya ki kitne baje tak aana hai
Babita ji _ ha mene Bata diya tha phir vo abhi tak nahi aaye bas kuch der me tender ka result bhi aa jayega kuch hi der me tender comittee ke adhyaksh result anounce karenge
Sabhi apni apni jagah par baith jate hai thodi der comittee ke sabhi log aa jate hai
Committee adhyaksh _ aap sabhi logo ko intezar karvane ke liye hum mafi chahate ab me tender ka result batane vala hu
Adhyaksh _ is bar ke tender ne mujhe sach me surprise kar diya hai kyoki maine to ummid ki Thi ki ye tender mushkil se 500 cr hi amount kar payega parantu is bar to Kamal hi ho gaya
Ab me aap logo ko jyada der intezar nahi karvaunga is tender me 5 company ne High amount lagaya hai 5 vi company hai sisodiya private limited jinhone is tender me 650cr amount bhara , number 4 par hai chaudhari private limited jinhone 700cr amount,3 number par thakur private limited jinhone 720 cr amount bhara tha, number 2 par rana private limited jinhone 750cr amount bhara tha
Ye sunte hi sab logo ko bahut bada jhatka laga kyonki sab log soch rahe the ki sabse jyada amount Raja sahab ne hi bhara hoga par koi unse bhi jyada amount bharne vali company bhi hai is bat ki sab logo me khusur fusur hone lagati hai vahi charon Raj parivar ke mukhiya gusse me bhare hue the Sabse jyada Raja dhanjay Rana ko apni har se gusse se bhare chehre se bhairav Singh ko ghur raha tha kyoki pahli bar dhanjay Rana ko har Mili thi
Phir bhi sab log us company ke bare me janana chahate the jisne un sabhi ko mat di thi
Adhyaksh _( mahaul ko garm hota dekh kar) ab me us company ke bare me bata deta hu jisko ye tender mila us company ne 800cr ka sabse jyada High amount bhara hai vo ek nayi company hai jisne abhi kuch mahine pahle hi startup kiya hai vo company hai ROOP PRIVATE LIMITED jiske malik hai mr Rajveer Singh
Ye sunte hi sab logo ko sanp sungh jata hai kuchh logo ka gussa satven aasaman par pahunch gaya vahi nandini Raj ki company ka naam sunkar pahle to shock Hoti hai phir khush ho jati hai aur muskurane lagi
Babita ji aur bhuvan Khushi ka to thikana hi nahi raha
Tabhi adhyaksh _ me ab mr Rajveer Singh ko stage par bulana chahunga
Tabhi entrance se Raj entry karta hai well suited kapdo me vo bilkul High class business man lag raha tha
Raj ko dekhkar sabhi logo ko aur shock hote hai pahle to vo log ye soch rahe the ki Raj Koi aged person hoga par uski umar ko dekhkar sab logo ko bahut bada jhatka laga tha vahi nandini bhi Raj ko dekh Rahi thi uski is personality and gentlemen look ko dekhkar vo pagal ho chuki thi sabhi reporter Raj ke photo kheench rahe the
Phir Raj ruk jata hai aur apne piche se priya ko khinchkar apne sath chalne ko bolta hai priya bhi sky colour ke colour suit me bahut sundar lag rahi thi
Raj- pagal chal na sath me tu meri bahan hai is tarah Kyu dar Rahi hai
Priya _ Bhai ye reporters hamari photo kyu le rahe hai
Raj- are kal Tera photo news me aayega isliye chal achchi tarah photo kara varna ye tera ganda sa photo le le jisse Teri school me bahut beijjati ho jayegi
Ye sunte hi priya ko bijli ka sa jhatka laga usne jaldi se Raj ka hath pakad liya Alag hi attitude ke sath Raj ke sath chal di Raj bas muskura diya
Nandini priya ko dekhkar samjh gayi ki vo Raj ki choti bahan hai
Raj aur priya seedha stage par chale gaye jiske bad Raj ne sign kar diye jab adhyaksh Raj ko tender ki file dene laga to Raj priya ko file lene ko bola priya bhi khush hote huye file le leti hai jiske bad vo us file ko Raj ko de dete huye photo karati hain
Jiske bad Raj aur priya babita ji aur bhuvan ke pas jane lagte hai tab Raj ki najar nandani par padti hai jo use hi dekh rahi Thi Raj jab nandani ke pas se gujarta hai to nandini use badhai deti hai Raj bhi muskan ke sath use thank you bolta hai
Rana dhanjay singh gusse me raj ko ghurte huye nandini ko chalne ke liye bolta hai to nandini apne pita ke sath chali jati hai
Sabhi log gusse me apne apne ghar ke liye Laut jate Hain
Raj _( babita se) aap na kam tention liya karo varna jawani me hi jaldi budhdhi ho jayegi
Babita _( haste hue) theek hai
Raj _( bhuvan se) bhuvan bhaiya aap is file ko ek bar dekh lijiye aur ise vinod ji ke pas pahuncha dijiye
Bhuvan ( file lekar)_ theek hai
Priya _ ( babita se) aur ha babita ji aap jaiye ghar aaj hamare liye special khana banaiye
Babita ( priya se ,aankhe badi karke)_ achcha mam aap kisi Khushi me dawat chahati hai
Priya _ ( Raj se) are bhai inhe batao ab famous ho gayi hu kal Mera news paper me photo aayega phir me facebook aur instagram par log mujhe follow karenge isi khushi me mujhe party to karni chahiye na par me bahar party nahi kar sakti kyoki mujhe bhabhi( dolly ) ne Bahar ka khana khane ke liye mana kiya hai isliye aap mere ghar par khana banaungi
Babita ji _ thik hai chal ghar chalte hai
Raj _ nahi Didi aap iske liye kuch mat banana ise me aaj apne sath le ja raha hu ghar jakar rest kijiye ( priya se) tu chal mere sath tujhe duniya ka sabse achcha khana khilake lata hu
Priya _( khush hote huye) to chalo mujhe na bahut tej bhukh lagi hai
Phir Raj aur priya apni car se nikal jate hai babita bhi pahle office jati hai phir Ghar Chali jati hai
Sabhi logo ke bich me aaj subah se hi ek bat ki charcha ho Rahi thi ki tender kisko milega
Bahut Si companiyon ne tender bhara tha jinme se mukhya char companiyon ke bare me hi bate ho rahi thi vo thi Charo Raj pariwar ki company news reporter bhi subah se hi tender office ke bahar khade huye the pal pal ki khabar janta tak pahuncha rahe the
Dekhte hi dekhte 11 baj gaye the sabhi log chaudhari parivar se viraj Chaudhary aur vimal Chaudhary (viraj ke dada ji) aaye hue the undono ke sath khushbu bhi thi sisodiya pariwar se Manish Sisodia, uski dadi savita sisodiya aur uska bada beta jitender sisodiya bhi tha
Thakur parivar se Ajay, Gajendra Singh aur sath vikram aur sanjay singh bhi the
Rana pariwar se Raja dhanjay singh Rana, Bhairav singh aur rajkumari nandini ( kyonki Raja sahab Koi naya kam ki shuruaat nandini ke hatho se hi karte hai aur unhe pura viswas tha ki tender unko hi milega )
Aur bhi kai Badi hastiyan yaha maujud thi sabne ek bar nandani ko dekha jarur par darkar dubara dekhne ki himmat nahi Hui nandini ka man bahut udas tha phir bhi vo khush hone ka dikhava kar rahi thi usne aaj purple colour ka simple suit pahana hua tha jisme bhi vo sach me bahut sundar lag rahi thi
Manish, Ajay aur viraj ki nazare bar bar nandani ki aur ja rahi thi sabhi log apne log in charo parivar se achcha sambandh rakhna chahate the isaliye sab inki chaplusi kar rahe the
Inhi logo ke bich me babita ji aur bhuvan bhi the jo ki bahut pareshan khade the
Bhuvan _ babita ji aapne Raj sir ko time to bata diya ki kitne baje tak aana hai
Babita ji _ ha mene Bata diya tha phir vo abhi tak nahi aaye bas kuch der me tender ka result bhi aa jayega kuch hi der me tender comittee ke adhyaksh result anounce karenge
Sabhi apni apni jagah par baith jate hai thodi der comittee ke sabhi log aa jate hai
Committee adhyaksh _ aap sabhi logo ko intezar karvane ke liye hum mafi chahate ab me tender ka result batane vala hu
Adhyaksh _ is bar ke tender ne mujhe sach me surprise kar diya hai kyoki maine to ummid ki Thi ki ye tender mushkil se 500 cr hi amount kar payega parantu is bar to Kamal hi ho gaya
Ab me aap logo ko jyada der intezar nahi karvaunga is tender me 5 company ne High amount lagaya hai 5 vi company hai sisodiya private limited jinhone is tender me 650cr amount bhara , number 4 par hai chaudhari private limited jinhone 700cr amount,3 number par thakur private limited jinhone 720 cr amount bhara tha, number 2 par rana private limited jinhone 750cr amount bhara tha
Ye sunte hi sab logo ko bahut bada jhatka laga kyonki sab log soch rahe the ki sabse jyada amount Raja sahab ne hi bhara hoga par koi unse bhi jyada amount bharne vali company bhi hai is bat ki sab logo me khusur fusur hone lagati hai vahi charon Raj parivar ke mukhiya gusse me bhare hue the Sabse jyada Raja dhanjay Rana ko apni har se gusse se bhare chehre se bhairav Singh ko ghur raha tha kyoki pahli bar dhanjay Rana ko har Mili thi
Phir bhi sab log us company ke bare me janana chahate the jisne un sabhi ko mat di thi
Adhyaksh _( mahaul ko garm hota dekh kar) ab me us company ke bare me bata deta hu jisko ye tender mila us company ne 800cr ka sabse jyada High amount bhara hai vo ek nayi company hai jisne abhi kuch mahine pahle hi startup kiya hai vo company hai ROOP PRIVATE LIMITED jiske malik hai mr Rajveer Singh
Ye sunte hi sab logo ko sanp sungh jata hai kuchh logo ka gussa satven aasaman par pahunch gaya vahi nandini Raj ki company ka naam sunkar pahle to shock Hoti hai phir khush ho jati hai aur muskurane lagi
Babita ji aur bhuvan Khushi ka to thikana hi nahi raha
Tabhi adhyaksh _ me ab mr Rajveer Singh ko stage par bulana chahunga
Tabhi entrance se Raj entry karta hai well suited kapdo me vo bilkul High class business man lag raha tha
Raj ko dekhkar sabhi logo ko aur shock hote hai pahle to vo log ye soch rahe the ki Raj Koi aged person hoga par uski umar ko dekhkar sab logo ko bahut bada jhatka laga tha vahi nandini bhi Raj ko dekh Rahi thi uski is personality and gentlemen look ko dekhkar vo pagal ho chuki thi sabhi reporter Raj ke photo kheench rahe the
Phir Raj ruk jata hai aur apne piche se priya ko khinchkar apne sath chalne ko bolta hai priya bhi sky colour ke colour suit me bahut sundar lag rahi thi
Raj- pagal chal na sath me tu meri bahan hai is tarah Kyu dar Rahi hai
Priya _ Bhai ye reporters hamari photo kyu le rahe hai
Raj- are kal Tera photo news me aayega isliye chal achchi tarah photo kara varna ye tera ganda sa photo le le jisse Teri school me bahut beijjati ho jayegi
Ye sunte hi priya ko bijli ka sa jhatka laga usne jaldi se Raj ka hath pakad liya Alag hi attitude ke sath Raj ke sath chal di Raj bas muskura diya
Nandini priya ko dekhkar samjh gayi ki vo Raj ki choti bahan hai
Raj aur priya seedha stage par chale gaye jiske bad Raj ne sign kar diye jab adhyaksh Raj ko tender ki file dene laga to Raj priya ko file lene ko bola priya bhi khush hote huye file le leti hai jiske bad vo us file ko Raj ko de dete huye photo karati hain
Jiske bad Raj aur priya babita ji aur bhuvan ke pas jane lagte hai tab Raj ki najar nandani par padti hai jo use hi dekh rahi Thi Raj jab nandani ke pas se gujarta hai to nandini use badhai deti hai Raj bhi muskan ke sath use thank you bolta hai
Rana dhanjay singh gusse me raj ko ghurte huye nandini ko chalne ke liye bolta hai to nandini apne pita ke sath chali jati hai
Sabhi log gusse me apne apne ghar ke liye Laut jate Hain
Raj _( babita se) aap na kam tention liya karo varna jawani me hi jaldi budhdhi ho jayegi
Babita _( haste hue) theek hai
Raj _( bhuvan se) bhuvan bhaiya aap is file ko ek bar dekh lijiye aur ise vinod ji ke pas pahuncha dijiye
Bhuvan ( file lekar)_ theek hai
Priya _ ( babita se) aur ha babita ji aap jaiye ghar aaj hamare liye special khana banaiye
Babita ( priya se ,aankhe badi karke)_ achcha mam aap kisi Khushi me dawat chahati hai
Priya _ ( Raj se) are bhai inhe batao ab famous ho gayi hu kal Mera news paper me photo aayega phir me facebook aur instagram par log mujhe follow karenge isi khushi me mujhe party to karni chahiye na par me bahar party nahi kar sakti kyoki mujhe bhabhi( dolly ) ne Bahar ka khana khane ke liye mana kiya hai isliye aap mere ghar par khana banaungi
Babita ji _ thik hai chal ghar chalte hai
Raj _ nahi Didi aap iske liye kuch mat banana ise me aaj apne sath le ja raha hu ghar jakar rest kijiye ( priya se) tu chal mere sath tujhe duniya ka sabse achcha khana khilake lata hu
Priya _( khush hote huye) to chalo mujhe na bahut tej bhukh lagi hai
Phir Raj aur priya apni car se nikal jate hai babita bhi pahle office jati hai phir Ghar Chali jati hai
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