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शानदार जबरदस्त लाजवाब update bhai jann superree duperrere
Mind blowing bhai
Ye khel shuru huva ab
Age to bohot maja ayega
Excellent update.. Bhai..
Thank you so much for your precious and amezing reviews...
tourture ha tourture bus ab tourture he shuru h..gharwalo ka bi number ayega one by one sabko unke kiye ka bhugatna hoga..aur harisingh ki toh kayde se lagegi .........
aj ka update 2pm tak dene ki puri kosis rahegi ...
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Sandeep singh nirwan babu last main emotional kr dia rey tuny
Nice Update
Mast update bhai matlab Shweta ke kya kehne iski chulbuli mastiyo ka intazar rehta hai... aur Panchayat mai pehle din hi Raj ne rule change kar diya lekin ye sahi kiya jo aurton ko bhi unka hak aur izzat mila gaya... Waise dada ji ke bato se lagta to hai ki unhe Hari Singh ke upar pehle shak nahi tha khair is Hari Singh se Raj ko apne kuch dushmano ka clue mil sakta hai ab bas ek bar Raj ke hate chad jaye bas baki torture ke to King hai ye
... Now waiting for Dangal aur Hari Singh ki khatir dari
Mast update bhai bole to ek dam jhakas... Shweta ne ache se in dono bhai behan ke pankh kaat diye warna kuch jyada hi udd rahe the waise shweta ke pankh sab se mast haikya to bolti hai yaar she's such a cute character man... Waise ache improvement arahe hai Raj mai is bar har wakt satark tha wo and chuha wala part new tha sala bohot babaji ka bhakt ban Raha tha fat ke hath mai agayi to sab ugal diya
Jthank you so much for very very energetic amezing and precious reviews ....
NAik bhai bilkul dangal wala update ab tak ka sabse bada mega update jismai tashan aur power ka jabardast tadka hoga... Raj ke is baar ek aur khatarnak roop dhekne ko milega ........
infernal emperor bro-- shweta shweta he h ....usi ke karan raj ka bi man lag jata h abi toh full masti shuru kari h baad mai toh dhamaka karegi......aur tuesday update megha update ka bhi megha hoga usmai maza ayega.......
hiakarji alok bhai bebu bhai janu bro jai bro shukriya .....
Update 2pm se pahle mil jayega ready ho gaya h.....
Tab to Aaj ke update ke sath sath Tuesday ka maha mega update ka bhi intazar hoga
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Bhau behtrin update
Shweta bhi bat krli mamata se achi bat hey ye
Aur raj ne achi chal chali hey hari Singh ko dabochne ke liye
Aur ye khabri kon hey hari sing ka
Behtreen updates
Thank you so much for your precious and important detailed reviews jiski muje behad jarurat hoti h kyoki unse he apka najariya samaj ata h........
AAG bro apne sahi ka ayina dikhane se he uske gaanvo ki aurto ka jeevan sudhar gaya h aur chacha chachi ki bi kayde se lagegi kyoki Raj waise he maaf nahi karta h.....aur surendra aur babita ka toh uparwala he rakhwala h....waise toh choti chachi kosis kar rahi h aur thode time baad Raj masf bi kar dega...par uski bahno ke ane ke baad pahle harisingh ke L lag jaye ...
andy king bro khabri gaanv ke bahar ka tha koyi jo rojgaar mangne ke bahne baitha rahta tha gaanv se bahar....
thankyou jivu bro bilkul ab game shuru h ab dangal hoga..
Thank you Iron man bhai
Bantoo bro,ckkhndu bro sukhriya
Update 2 pm se pahle mil jayega bada update h ........
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ZABARDAST UPDATE HAI BHAI
AWESOMEhi
Thank you bro reviews ke liye
smith bro--unka toh pichwada aisa fatne wala h jo silega he nahi tuesday ko dhekna ap
Aur motilal and dar bhai apka bi dil se shukriya
aj ka update 2pm tak ajayega
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Tik Tok time finish.......
Fleshback
Shweta--- hmmm main sath hu ap dono ko teeno milke saza denge ok...
Mamta--- thankyou so much....
Shweta--- mere number h save karlo jab dil kare tab call kar lena main utha lungi main bi bahan he hu tumhari aur unke sath he padhungi jald he baat karwaungi...
Mamta--- thank you so much shweta....thank you ...
Call cut...
Ab agaiiiiiii....
Main subhe subhe apna yoga kar raha tha tab bahar SP ayi huvi thi main yoga aur exercise se free huva toh andar aya tab 7 baj rahe the Dada ji ne muje dhekha toh apne pass bulaya .....
Dadaji--- ao beta ao...inse milo ye h hamre yanha ki SP shivani jaiswal bahut kadak aur imandar ye dangal mai hone wali police ki suraksha ki baat karne ayi h
Main—good morning mam...
Shivani--- good morning ...
Dadaji-----apko jo tikh lage ap vaisa kijiye aur hamari koyi madad chahiye toh wo bi batayiye......
Sp shivani---dhanyawad thakur saab apki jaisi taraif aj tak suni thi ap usai bi ache h sach he kahte h daya aur heemat ki pahchan koyi h toh wo Thakur jagmaal singh h..
Dadaji--- muskrakar nashta ban gaya h hum chahte h ap nashta hamare sath he kare ... Aur Nirwana jao sabko bata do aj Sp sahiba hamre sath nashta karengi.....
Main ji dadaji kahke andar agaya aur sabko suchit kiya to chotichachi ne allu ke pranthe aur. Sp sahiba ke heesab se sandwich etc taiyaar kardi ....
Shweta bi kitchen mai choti chachi ke pass khadi ho gayi...
Shweta--- chachi sabka dhayan ap he rakhti ho kya hamesa..
C chachi--- ha noukar h par khud ke hath ke banaye huve khane ki koyi tulna nahi h aur tumahare dada dadi ko bilkul pasand nahi khane mai kuch bi gadbad ho ..
Shweta--- hmmm tabi mai sochu bhai bahar ka kuch kyo pasand nahi h khane mai...waise good news h
C chachi--- mere liya kya good news ho sakti beti mere liye toh ek beta ajay h bus wo he baat karta h baki Raj naraj h sur betiya bi aur babita surendra ko kisi se koyi matlab nahi h .
Shweta--- ap h na sad. Mat huva karo jo bit gaya usai bhul jao... Aur ap suno maine mamta se baat ki thi wo bilkul tikh h aur Raj ka sunke bi khus h ....aur 12th class pass karke jab Raj wapas ayega tab wo dono bi ajayengi khus ap ab toh...Bus ek saal ki baat h
C chachi--- sach bol rahi h shweta ...thank you beti bus ab wo muje maaf bi karde ...maine kitna bulaya par wo jid pe he adh gyi ki raj bhai ayenge tab he hum ayenge....
Shweta—oh ho Meri chachi ap bhavuk ho jati ho apne mere drama nahi dhekhe h main sab sambhal lungi ...aur dhekho main toh bhul gayi sab nashte ka wait kar rahe h...
Sab nashte ki table pe baithe tab dadaji ne kaha ye shweta singh inke papa delhi msi police commissioner h ...
Sp shivani---oh kanhi ap singh sir ki beti toh nahi h
Shivani--- ji mam main unhi singh sir ki beti....hu
Sp shivani--- bahut acha laga milke apse singh sir se toh sabko sikh milti h unse acha aur imandaar aur diler commissioner maine nahi dhekha h unse toh neta tak darte h...wo akele h jo kisi se nahi darte h....
Aisa he sabki baate huvi phir Sp mam chali gayi...
Shweta aur Dadaji mele ki taiyariya dhekne chale gaye main haveli se bike nikaal ke bahar ghumne nikal gaya..main ghumte ghumte ek gaanv mai pahucha wanha kafi bheed lagi thi aur gaanv ka lala khada tha ...maine majara samjne ki kosis ki toh samaj mai aya ki ek pariwar ne kheti ke liye lala se paise udhar liye the aur lala samay se pahle he bayaj jabardasti vasul raha tha...
Lala--- bayaj toh dena he padega ramu varna ha ha ha tuje pata he h....
Ramu--- lala ji abi toh bhedj bi nahi boye h toh amdani toh fasal bechne ke baad he hogi na tab apko pura paise louta denge bitiya ki shadi ki thi toh sara paisa wanha lag gaya......
Lala--- are muje kya karna h .....phir ramu ki choti beti ki taraf dhek kar dheere se ha agar isai ek raat mere pass bhej de toh mai tera sara karja maaf kardunga..
Ramu – ne gusai mai lala ki gardan pakdi li
Tab lala ke lathait jo khade the ramu ko marne lage ...
Main—lala maine ye sirf filmo mai he dhekha tha aj hakikat mai bhi dhek liya tum jaise log wakayi mai samaj pe kalank ho...
Lala – chokre sahri lagta h nikal ja warna haddi pasli tudwa ke fenkwa dunga samja..
Main—sayad tune pahchana nahi koyi baat nahi jo tu karne ki soch raha h wahi main karne ki soch. Raha hu ..
Phir unke pass jakar shuru kare
Lala--- maro re is hoshiyar chand ko .
Phir jaise he laithait ne marne ki kosis ki maine uska lath pakda aur apni taraf khinch ke jabde pe diya jabda phura khul gaya aur wo niche late ke bilbilane laga...phir Dusre ne lath ghumaya toh main jhuk gaya phir dubara mere sir par marne ki kosis ki toh maine pakad liya aur uske ando par ek laat mari bechare ki dono goliya foot gayii..
Main--- lala ye sab bache h mere agaiii phir lala ke gaal pe ek diya khinch kar thappad lala ko chand tare sare nazar agaye
phir lala ko apni bike se bandha aur ghasit kar gaanv ke bich mai le gaya janha sara gaanv khada the...
Main--- mera naam raj singh aur main Thakur jagmaal singh ji ka pota hu...
Sabi log khusur pusur karne lage kyoki sabne saja dhaja dhekha tha aj normal kapdo mai dekha toh confuse hone ke karan pahchan nahi paye..phir sabne apne hath jod liye .
Main---is lala ko yanha tanga kar ja raha hu aj se iska hukka pani band h....isai koyi bi kholne aye usai pahle haveli aake milna hoga....aur ap sab agar iski jor jabardasti ke sikar huve h toh apna heesab banake haveli kal subhe ajaye ......aur dhayan rakhna maine jo kaha wo pura ho warna phir ap sab achi trah jante h ye aise he latka rahna chahiye...
Main haveli 4 hour ke baad pahucha alag alag gaanv ghumkar ..Phir dadaji ke pass baithkar
Main—dadaji apke raj mai apse bahut kuch chupa h kanhi koyi ladki ghar mai atyachar sah rahi h toh kanhi koyi lala gaanv walo ka khun chus raha h .....
Dadaji--- gambhir hote huve agar aisi baat h toh koyi upaye batao ...
Main--- har gaanv mai ek box lagwao aur uski chabi bheema chacha ke pass rahegi sab usmai apna naam aur sikayt rakhenge ap unhe suljha dena aur yanha ka jo MLA h usai sath lijiye ya jis party ko ap support karte h usai sath lijiye aur ek area inspecter ko sath rakhiye faisla hatho hath kijiye apka rutba aur bhadega ...sabkuch jayaj tarike se hoga..jo agai hamari pakad aur majboot banayega....
Dadaji--- wah beta ek mahine aye ho usmai bi sirf bhalayi he baant rahe ho
Main—Dadaji apna he sahar apne he gaanv h toh sabka dhuk apna dhuk h...
Dungarpur city---
Thakur hari singh—toh abki baar taane us bheema na dhul chatanij h...mahro naam nicho nahi hono chahiye....
Hari singh ka beta –
Harendra singh--- na bapu meri body ke agai bheema na tik pavago....biki sari haddiya tod dungo...
Hari singh --- saabas saabas aur ha 100 admi leke chalna h jo bhawani mandir ke kann chupke rahenge wanha thakur jagmal singh ka pota ayega usai uthana h agar wo sahdev ki aulaad h toh hum carodo mai khelenge...
Harendra—itna paisa koun dega....
Harisingh – pata nahi koun h par bahut salo se picha pada h kahta sahdev ke varish tak ko khatm kar dunga sirf itna he bolta h aur sahi suchna dene ke 50 cr bole h jab bi pukhta ho jaye ki ye sahdev ka beta h phone karne ko bola h khud toh phone kiye huve kayi saal ho gaye h usai...
Harendra—dangal parso he toh h tikh h main taiyari karta hu par 100 logo ki kya jarurat h us akele ko uthane ki...waise apne dekha h kya usai ..
Hari singh—dekha toh nahi par mandir ke raste akela he hoga aur apna admi us raste pe hoga jisne usai dekha hoga wo hume phone se ishara de dega bus phir utha lenge....aur dushman ko kamjor nahi samjna chahiye asspass ke aur apne gaanv ke mila ke sabse shandaar lathaitho ko taiyaar karo jab bi mouka milega...hum usai utha lenge ....
Aur phir dono jor se hasane lage
Idhar haveli mai ---
Main--- bheema chacha ek kaam karna gaanv ke apne bharose walo ko boldo mandir ke asspass rahne ko bolna aur mere ishara pe gherne ko bol dena.. bus muje hari singh jinda chahiye h ....... Takat kya hoti h wo dikhate h usai.....is baar main aur harisingh honge aur hoga maa bhawani ka mandir janha uski bali dunga....sabke samne.....
Bheema chacha—ye lo gun made in germany agar unke pass gun huvi toh kaam ayegiji
Main--- khus hokar thank you par abhi ...
B chacha--- oh hero abhi ap itne bi bade nahi huve h jab ap uttrakhand jayenge wanha mil jayegi agar chahiye toh he warna nahi milegi abhi apke masti ke din h thodi masti aur baki jimaidari ..abhi hathiyaro ke sath nahi khelna h jo sukun tadpa ke marne mai h wo maza jhatke mai marne mai kanha aur waise bi ye gun meri h..
Main—tikh tikh h.... ....
In delhi.......after 2 days...
Anjana aur deepika dono sonali ke ghar ja rahi thi.......aj Sunday tha toh unka bi off tha aur sonali free thi aj... kuch dair mai dono pahuch gayi sonali ke ghar...
Deepika --- hello
Anjana --- hello diiii
Sonali—dono ko gale laga ke no formality....meri cute cute cuti payiyo...
Wo dono muskarane lagi
Sonali – Raj kaisa h ...
Deepika--- oh ho .....matlb din ba din pyar ki tadap bhadti he ja rahi h....kya baat h.....
Anjana---
Deepika--- are pagli ab inhe mam bolu ya bhabhi samaj se bahar h ye ab itni pagal h inke bedroom mai sirf usi ki he photo ..h
Sonali—shut up bahut bolne lagi h pata nahi kaisa hoga wo ..
Anjana sur deepika muskarane lagiii
Sonali--- whattttt ......???
Sonali sur deepika—hum toh ab dil chahe tab kar lete h usai .....
Sonali---- ho nahi sakta h wanha par cell phone allowed he nahi h aur wo h ki kabhi yaad he nahi karta h tum bi toh 3 mahine baad mili ho ..
Deepika---wo actual wo actualy..
Sonali--- tense hoke baat kya h bataogiii...
Deepika--- sad hoke raj baat abhi isliye nahi karta h kyoki uska dil tuta huva h bus wo dikhane ke liye he khus h......
Sonali—darte huve saaf batao muje ghumao mat..
Phir deepika sonali ko puri baat batati h toh sonali ki ankho se ansuu nikalne lagte h....
Kuch dair baad...
Sonali--- tumhe pata h jab main uske sath hoti thi toh wo khud ko rokta tha muje pyar karne se kyoki wo richa se bahut pyar karta h ..wo uske sath apni jindgi ke har sapne pura karna chahta tha .....aur muje bi pata tha ki richa muje apnayegi toh he main raj ho paungi but richa ne ab raj ka pyar ke upar se viswas he utha diya h.......muje usai baat karni hogi pata nahii wo andar se kitna dhukhi aur frustrated hoga....aur agar usko nahi sambhala toh wo pata nahi kya karta firega ...
Deepika--- uske sath shweta h ...wo tikh h.. sp bewakah tension le rahi ho....
Sonali--- yahi toh nahi pata h tuje ....yaad nahi jab tumhe hath lagaya toh usne kya kiya tha uska gussa uske andar h .....tu nahi samjhegi muje usai baat karni hogi..... Uska dhuk yahi h ki sab usai dur ho gaye h bachpan mai uske mummy papa phir usai uske pariwaar se nafrat mili...phir uski jaan se pyari bahno aur dadaji se dur hona pada phir tum aur main aur ab richa jisai wo bahut pyar karta tha usne dhokha diya....muje usai baat karni h abhi ..isai pahle ki usai uska gusa frustration bahar nikalne ki wajah mile.....
Deepika –Mere pass uske number h main call karti hu .Ap chinta mat karo...
Sonali--- kya uske pass phone h...
Deepika—ha wo mandawa agaya h ab.....aur phone bi rakhta h ..
Sonali--- dekha phir bi usne baat nahi kari mujse. ab tum samjhi .....ki uske dimag mai kya chal raha h ..
Deepika kayi baar call karti h jo ring karti h par raj caal pic nahi karta h aur phir wo shweta ko bi ring karti h par wo bi pic nahi karti h ..
Deepika—busy honge wapa call back karenge
Sonali--- hmmm i hope jaldi kare call..
Mandawa----
Main Dangal dhekne agaya tha toh shor sarbe mai muje kuch sunayi nahi diya....waise bi meri nazar sirf ek insan pe thi jisai dekh mere andar ka NIRWANA jaag gaya aur NIRWANA sirf saza dena chahta h ....
Aj ke liye itna he
Tik Tok time finish.......
Fleshback
Shweta--- hmmm main sath hu ap dono ko teeno milke saza denge ok...
Mamta--- thankyou so much....
Shweta--- mere number h save karlo jab dil kare tab call kar lena main utha lungi main bi bahan he hu tumhari aur unke sath he padhungi jald he baat karwaungi...
Mamta--- thank you so much shweta....thank you ...
Call cut...
Ab agaiiiiiii....
Main subhe subhe apna yoga kar raha tha tab bahar SP ayi huvi thi main yoga aur exercise se free huva toh andar aya tab 7 baj rahe the Dada ji ne muje dhekha toh apne pass bulaya .....
Dadaji--- ao beta ao...inse milo ye h hamre yanha ki SP shivani jaiswal bahut kadak aur imandar ye dangal mai hone wali police ki suraksha ki baat karne ayi h
Main—good morning mam...
Shivani--- good morning ...
Dadaji-----apko jo tikh lage ap vaisa kijiye aur hamari koyi madad chahiye toh wo bi batayiye......
Sp shivani---dhanyawad thakur saab apki jaisi taraif aj tak suni thi ap usai bi ache h sach he kahte h daya aur heemat ki pahchan koyi h toh wo Thakur jagmaal singh h..
Dadaji--- muskrakar nashta ban gaya h hum chahte h ap nashta hamare sath he kare ... Aur Nirwana jao sabko bata do aj Sp sahiba hamre sath nashta karengi.....
Main ji dadaji kahke andar agaya aur sabko suchit kiya to chotichachi ne allu ke pranthe aur. Sp sahiba ke heesab se sandwich etc taiyaar kardi ....
Shweta bi kitchen mai choti chachi ke pass khadi ho gayi...
Shweta--- chachi sabka dhayan ap he rakhti ho kya hamesa..
C chachi--- ha noukar h par khud ke hath ke banaye huve khane ki koyi tulna nahi h aur tumahare dada dadi ko bilkul pasand nahi khane mai kuch bi gadbad ho ..
Shweta--- hmmm tabi mai sochu bhai bahar ka kuch kyo pasand nahi h khane mai...waise good news h
C chachi--- mere liya kya good news ho sakti beti mere liye toh ek beta ajay h bus wo he baat karta h baki Raj naraj h sur betiya bi aur babita surendra ko kisi se koyi matlab nahi h .
Shweta--- ap h na sad. Mat huva karo jo bit gaya usai bhul jao... Aur ap suno maine mamta se baat ki thi wo bilkul tikh h aur Raj ka sunke bi khus h ....aur 12th class pass karke jab Raj wapas ayega tab wo dono bi ajayengi khus ap ab toh...Bus ek saal ki baat h
C chachi--- sach bol rahi h shweta ...thank you beti bus ab wo muje maaf bi karde ...maine kitna bulaya par wo jid pe he adh gyi ki raj bhai ayenge tab he hum ayenge....
Shweta—oh ho Meri chachi ap bhavuk ho jati ho apne mere drama nahi dhekhe h main sab sambhal lungi ...aur dhekho main toh bhul gayi sab nashte ka wait kar rahe h...
Sab nashte ki table pe baithe tab dadaji ne kaha ye shweta singh inke papa delhi msi police commissioner h ...
Sp shivani---oh kanhi ap singh sir ki beti toh nahi h
Shivani--- ji mam main unhi singh sir ki beti....hu
Sp shivani--- bahut acha laga milke apse singh sir se toh sabko sikh milti h unse acha aur imandaar aur diler commissioner maine nahi dhekha h unse toh neta tak darte h...wo akele h jo kisi se nahi darte h....
Aisa he sabki baate huvi phir Sp mam chali gayi...
Shweta aur Dadaji mele ki taiyariya dhekne chale gaye main haveli se bike nikaal ke bahar ghumne nikal gaya..main ghumte ghumte ek gaanv mai pahucha wanha kafi bheed lagi thi aur gaanv ka lala khada tha ...maine majara samjne ki kosis ki toh samaj mai aya ki ek pariwar ne kheti ke liye lala se paise udhar liye the aur lala samay se pahle he bayaj jabardasti vasul raha tha...
Lala--- bayaj toh dena he padega ramu varna ha ha ha tuje pata he h....
Ramu--- lala ji abi toh bhedj bi nahi boye h toh amdani toh fasal bechne ke baad he hogi na tab apko pura paise louta denge bitiya ki shadi ki thi toh sara paisa wanha lag gaya......
Lala--- are muje kya karna h .....phir ramu ki choti beti ki taraf dhek kar dheere se ha agar isai ek raat mere pass bhej de toh mai tera sara karja maaf kardunga..
Ramu – ne gusai mai lala ki gardan pakdi li
Tab lala ke lathait jo khade the ramu ko marne lage ...
Main—lala maine ye sirf filmo mai he dhekha tha aj hakikat mai bhi dhek liya tum jaise log wakayi mai samaj pe kalank ho...
Lala – chokre sahri lagta h nikal ja warna haddi pasli tudwa ke fenkwa dunga samja..
Main—sayad tune pahchana nahi koyi baat nahi jo tu karne ki soch raha h wahi main karne ki soch. Raha hu ..
Phir unke pass jakar shuru kare
Lala--- maro re is hoshiyar chand ko .
Phir jaise he laithait ne marne ki kosis ki maine uska lath pakda aur apni taraf khinch ke jabde pe diya jabda phura khul gaya aur wo niche late ke bilbilane laga...phir Dusre ne lath ghumaya toh main jhuk gaya phir dubara mere sir par marne ki kosis ki toh maine pakad liya aur uske ando par ek laat mari bechare ki dono goliya foot gayii..
Main--- lala ye sab bache h mere agaiii phir lala ke gaal pe ek diya khinch kar thappad lala ko chand tare sare nazar agaye
phir lala ko apni bike se bandha aur ghasit kar gaanv ke bich mai le gaya janha sara gaanv khada the...
Main--- mera naam raj singh aur main Thakur jagmaal singh ji ka pota hu...
Sabi log khusur pusur karne lage kyoki sabne saja dhaja dhekha tha aj normal kapdo mai dekha toh confuse hone ke karan pahchan nahi paye..phir sabne apne hath jod liye .
Main---is lala ko yanha tanga kar ja raha hu aj se iska hukka pani band h....isai koyi bi kholne aye usai pahle haveli aake milna hoga....aur ap sab agar iski jor jabardasti ke sikar huve h toh apna heesab banake haveli kal subhe ajaye ......aur dhayan rakhna maine jo kaha wo pura ho warna phir ap sab achi trah jante h ye aise he latka rahna chahiye...
Main haveli 4 hour ke baad pahucha alag alag gaanv ghumkar ..Phir dadaji ke pass baithkar
Main—dadaji apke raj mai apse bahut kuch chupa h kanhi koyi ladki ghar mai atyachar sah rahi h toh kanhi koyi lala gaanv walo ka khun chus raha h .....
Dadaji--- gambhir hote huve agar aisi baat h toh koyi upaye batao ...
Main--- har gaanv mai ek box lagwao aur uski chabi bheema chacha ke pass rahegi sab usmai apna naam aur sikayt rakhenge ap unhe suljha dena aur yanha ka jo MLA h usai sath lijiye ya jis party ko ap support karte h usai sath lijiye aur ek area inspecter ko sath rakhiye faisla hatho hath kijiye apka rutba aur bhadega ...sabkuch jayaj tarike se hoga..jo agai hamari pakad aur majboot banayega....
Dadaji--- wah beta ek mahine aye ho usmai bi sirf bhalayi he baant rahe ho
Main—Dadaji apna he sahar apne he gaanv h toh sabka dhuk apna dhuk h...
Dungarpur city---
Thakur hari singh—toh abki baar taane us bheema na dhul chatanij h...mahro naam nicho nahi hono chahiye....
Hari singh ka beta –
Harendra singh--- na bapu meri body ke agai bheema na tik pavago....biki sari haddiya tod dungo...
Hari singh --- saabas saabas aur ha 100 admi leke chalna h jo bhawani mandir ke kann chupke rahenge wanha thakur jagmal singh ka pota ayega usai uthana h agar wo sahdev ki aulaad h toh hum carodo mai khelenge...
Harendra—itna paisa koun dega....
Harisingh – pata nahi koun h par bahut salo se picha pada h kahta sahdev ke varish tak ko khatm kar dunga sirf itna he bolta h aur sahi suchna dene ke 50 cr bole h jab bi pukhta ho jaye ki ye sahdev ka beta h phone karne ko bola h khud toh phone kiye huve kayi saal ho gaye h usai...
Harendra—dangal parso he toh h tikh h main taiyari karta hu par 100 logo ki kya jarurat h us akele ko uthane ki...waise apne dekha h kya usai ..
Hari singh—dekha toh nahi par mandir ke raste akela he hoga aur apna admi us raste pe hoga jisne usai dekha hoga wo hume phone se ishara de dega bus phir utha lenge....aur dushman ko kamjor nahi samjna chahiye asspass ke aur apne gaanv ke mila ke sabse shandaar lathaitho ko taiyaar karo jab bi mouka milega...hum usai utha lenge ....
Aur phir dono jor se hasane lage
Idhar haveli mai ---
Main--- bheema chacha ek kaam karna gaanv ke apne bharose walo ko boldo mandir ke asspass rahne ko bolna aur mere ishara pe gherne ko bol dena.. bus muje hari singh jinda chahiye h ....... Takat kya hoti h wo dikhate h usai.....is baar main aur harisingh honge aur hoga maa bhawani ka mandir janha uski bali dunga....sabke samne.....
Bheema chacha—ye lo gun made in germany agar unke pass gun huvi toh kaam ayegiji
Main--- khus hokar thank you par abhi ...
B chacha--- oh hero abhi ap itne bi bade nahi huve h jab ap uttrakhand jayenge wanha mil jayegi agar chahiye toh he warna nahi milegi abhi apke masti ke din h thodi masti aur baki jimaidari ..abhi hathiyaro ke sath nahi khelna h jo sukun tadpa ke marne mai h wo maza jhatke mai marne mai kanha aur waise bi ye gun meri h..
Main—tikh tikh h.... ....
In delhi.......after 2 days...
Anjana aur deepika dono sonali ke ghar ja rahi thi.......aj Sunday tha toh unka bi off tha aur sonali free thi aj... kuch dair mai dono pahuch gayi sonali ke ghar...
Deepika --- hello
Anjana --- hello diiii
Sonali—dono ko gale laga ke no formality....meri cute cute cuti payiyo...
Wo dono muskarane lagi
Sonali – Raj kaisa h ...
Deepika--- oh ho .....matlb din ba din pyar ki tadap bhadti he ja rahi h....kya baat h.....
Anjana---
Deepika--- are pagli ab inhe mam bolu ya bhabhi samaj se bahar h ye ab itni pagal h inke bedroom mai sirf usi ki he photo ..h
Sonali—shut up bahut bolne lagi h pata nahi kaisa hoga wo ..
Anjana sur deepika muskarane lagiii
Sonali--- whattttt ......???
Sonali sur deepika—hum toh ab dil chahe tab kar lete h usai .....
Sonali---- ho nahi sakta h wanha par cell phone allowed he nahi h aur wo h ki kabhi yaad he nahi karta h tum bi toh 3 mahine baad mili ho ..
Deepika---wo actual wo actualy..
Sonali--- tense hoke baat kya h bataogiii...
Deepika--- sad hoke raj baat abhi isliye nahi karta h kyoki uska dil tuta huva h bus wo dikhane ke liye he khus h......
Sonali—darte huve saaf batao muje ghumao mat..
Phir deepika sonali ko puri baat batati h toh sonali ki ankho se ansuu nikalne lagte h....
Kuch dair baad...
Sonali--- tumhe pata h jab main uske sath hoti thi toh wo khud ko rokta tha muje pyar karne se kyoki wo richa se bahut pyar karta h ..wo uske sath apni jindgi ke har sapne pura karna chahta tha .....aur muje bi pata tha ki richa muje apnayegi toh he main raj ho paungi but richa ne ab raj ka pyar ke upar se viswas he utha diya h.......muje usai baat karni hogi pata nahii wo andar se kitna dhukhi aur frustrated hoga....aur agar usko nahi sambhala toh wo pata nahi kya karta firega ...
Deepika--- uske sath shweta h ...wo tikh h.. sp bewakah tension le rahi ho....
Sonali--- yahi toh nahi pata h tuje ....yaad nahi jab tumhe hath lagaya toh usne kya kiya tha uska gussa uske andar h .....tu nahi samjhegi muje usai baat karni hogi..... Uska dhuk yahi h ki sab usai dur ho gaye h bachpan mai uske mummy papa phir usai uske pariwaar se nafrat mili...phir uski jaan se pyari bahno aur dadaji se dur hona pada phir tum aur main aur ab richa jisai wo bahut pyar karta tha usne dhokha diya....muje usai baat karni h abhi ..isai pahle ki usai uska gusa frustration bahar nikalne ki wajah mile.....
Deepika –Mere pass uske number h main call karti hu .Ap chinta mat karo...
Sonali--- kya uske pass phone h...
Deepika—ha wo mandawa agaya h ab.....aur phone bi rakhta h ..
Sonali--- dekha phir bi usne baat nahi kari mujse. ab tum samjhi .....ki uske dimag mai kya chal raha h ..
Deepika kayi baar call karti h jo ring karti h par raj caal pic nahi karta h aur phir wo shweta ko bi ring karti h par wo bi pic nahi karti h ..
Deepika—busy honge wapa call back karenge
Sonali--- hmmm i hope jaldi kare call..
Mandawa----
Main Dangal dhekne agaya tha toh shor sarbe mai muje kuch sunayi nahi diya....waise bi meri nazar sirf ek insan pe thi jisai dekh mere andar ka NIRWANA jaag gaya aur NIRWANA sirf saza dena chahta h ....
Aj ke liye itna he
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5000 plus words ka update diya h....i think sab happy h saturday aur sunday update ke liye
Raj ab mature hota jaa raha apni social responsibilities ko le kar. Aur shayaad apna kad bhi bada raha hai taaki apne dushmano ko achche se nestonaabood kar sake. Sonali sach mein dilojaan se Raj se pyar karti hai ab dekhna hai ki Raj uska pyar kab accept karta hai. Socha tha aaj dangal ka bhi kuch scene milega magar nahi mila, so sad.Update - 65
Tik Tok time finish.......
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Shweta--- hmmm main sath hu ap dono ko teeno milke saza denge ok...
Mamta--- thankyou so much....
Shweta--- mere number h save karlo jab dil kare tab call kar lena main utha lungi main bi bahan he hu tumhari aur unke sath he padhungi jald he baat karwaungi...
Mamta--- thank you so much shweta....thank you ...
Call cut...
Ab agaiiiiiii....
Main subhe subhe apna yoga kar raha tha tab bahar SP ayi huvi thi main yoga aur exercise se free huva toh andar aya tab 7 baj rahe the Dada ji ne muje dhekha toh apne pass bulaya .....
Dadaji--- ao beta ao...inse milo ye h hamre yanha ki SP shivani jaiswal bahut kadak aur imandar ye dangal mai hone wali police ki suraksha ki baat karne ayi h
Main—good morning mam...
Shivani--- good morning ...
Dadaji-----apko jo tikh lage ap vaisa kijiye aur hamari koyi madad chahiye toh wo bi batayiye......
Sp shivani---dhanyawad thakur saab apki jaisi taraif aj tak suni thi ap usai bi ache h sach he kahte h daya aur heemat ki pahchan koyi h toh wo Thakur jagmaal singh h..
Dadaji--- muskrakar nashta ban gaya h hum chahte h ap nashta hamare sath he kare ... Aur Nirwana jao sabko bata do aj Sp sahiba hamre sath nashta karengi.....
Main ji dadaji kahke andar agaya aur sabko suchit kiya to chotichachi ne allu ke pranthe aur. Sp sahiba ke heesab se sandwich etc taiyaar kardi ....
Shweta bi kitchen mai choti chachi ke pass khadi ho gayi...
Shweta--- chachi sabka dhayan ap he rakhti ho kya hamesa..
C chachi--- ha noukar h par khud ke hath ke banaye huve khane ki koyi tulna nahi h aur tumahare dada dadi ko bilkul pasand nahi khane mai kuch bi gadbad ho ..
Shweta--- hmmm tabi mai sochu bhai bahar ka kuch kyo pasand nahi h khane mai...waise good news h
C chachi--- mere liya kya good news ho sakti beti mere liye toh ek beta ajay h bus wo he baat karta h baki Raj naraj h sur betiya bi aur babita surendra ko kisi se koyi matlab nahi h .
Shweta--- ap h na sad. Mat huva karo jo bit gaya usai bhul jao... Aur ap suno maine mamta se baat ki thi wo bilkul tikh h aur Raj ka sunke bi khus h ....aur 12th class pass karke jab Raj wapas ayega tab wo dono bi ajayengi khus ap ab toh...Bus ek saal ki baat h
C chachi--- sach bol rahi h shweta ...thank you beti bus ab wo muje maaf bi karde ...maine kitna bulaya par wo jid pe he adh gyi ki raj bhai ayenge tab he hum ayenge....
Shweta—oh ho Meri chachi ap bhavuk ho jati ho apne mere drama nahi dhekhe h main sab sambhal lungi ...aur dhekho main toh bhul gayi sab nashte ka wait kar rahe h...
Sab nashte ki table pe baithe tab dadaji ne kaha ye shweta singh inke papa delhi msi police commissioner h ...
Sp shivani---oh kanhi ap singh sir ki beti toh nahi h
Shivani--- ji mam main unhi singh sir ki beti....hu
Sp shivani--- bahut acha laga milke apse singh sir se toh sabko sikh milti h unse acha aur imandaar aur diler commissioner maine nahi dhekha h unse toh neta tak darte h...wo akele h jo kisi se nahi darte h....
Aisa he sabki baate huvi phir Sp mam chali gayi...
Shweta aur Dadaji mele ki taiyariya dhekne chale gaye main haveli se bike nikaal ke bahar ghumne nikal gaya..main ghumte ghumte ek gaanv mai pahucha wanha kafi bheed lagi thi aur gaanv ka lala khada tha ...maine majara samjne ki kosis ki toh samaj mai aya ki ek pariwar ne kheti ke liye lala se paise udhar liye the aur lala samay se pahle he bayaj jabardasti vasul raha tha...
Lala--- bayaj toh dena he padega ramu varna ha ha ha tuje pata he h....
Ramu--- lala ji abi toh bhedj bi nahi boye h toh amdani toh fasal bechne ke baad he hogi na tab apko pura paise louta denge bitiya ki shadi ki thi toh sara paisa wanha lag gaya......
Lala--- are muje kya karna h .....phir ramu ki choti beti ki taraf dhek kar dheere se ha agar isai ek raat mere pass bhej de toh mai tera sara karja maaf kardunga..
Ramu – ne gusai mai lala ki gardan pakdi li
Tab lala ke lathait jo khade the ramu ko marne lage ...
Main—lala maine ye sirf filmo mai he dhekha tha aj hakikat mai bhi dhek liya tum jaise log wakayi mai samaj pe kalank ho...
Lala – chokre sahri lagta h nikal ja warna haddi pasli tudwa ke fenkwa dunga samja..
Main—sayad tune pahchana nahi koyi baat nahi jo tu karne ki soch raha h wahi main karne ki soch. Raha hu ..
Phir unke pass jakar shuru kare
Lala--- maro re is hoshiyar chand ko .
Phir jaise he laithait ne marne ki kosis ki maine uska lath pakda aur apni taraf khinch ke jabde pe diya jabda phura khul gaya aur wo niche late ke bilbilane laga...phir Dusre ne lath ghumaya toh main jhuk gaya phir dubara mere sir par marne ki kosis ki toh maine pakad liya aur uske ando par ek laat mari bechare ki dono goliya foot gayii..
Main--- lala ye sab bache h mere agaiii phir lala ke gaal pe ek diya khinch kar thappad lala ko chand tare sare nazar agaye
phir lala ko apni bike se bandha aur ghasit kar gaanv ke bich mai le gaya janha sara gaanv khada the...
Main--- mera naam raj singh aur main Thakur jagmaal singh ji ka pota hu...
Sabi log khusur pusur karne lage kyoki sabne saja dhaja dhekha tha aj normal kapdo mai dekha toh confuse hone ke karan pahchan nahi paye..phir sabne apne hath jod liye .
Main---is lala ko yanha tanga kar ja raha hu aj se iska hukka pani band h....isai koyi bi kholne aye usai pahle haveli aake milna hoga....aur ap sab agar iski jor jabardasti ke sikar huve h toh apna heesab banake haveli kal subhe ajaye ......aur dhayan rakhna maine jo kaha wo pura ho warna phir ap sab achi trah jante h ye aise he latka rahna chahiye...
Main haveli 4 hour ke baad pahucha alag alag gaanv ghumkar ..Phir dadaji ke pass baithkar
Main—dadaji apke raj mai apse bahut kuch chupa h kanhi koyi ladki ghar mai atyachar sah rahi h toh kanhi koyi lala gaanv walo ka khun chus raha h .....
Dadaji--- gambhir hote huve agar aisi baat h toh koyi upaye batao ...
Main--- har gaanv mai ek box lagwao aur uski chabi bheema chacha ke pass rahegi sab usmai apna naam aur sikayt rakhenge ap unhe suljha dena aur yanha ka jo MLA h usai sath lijiye ya jis party ko ap support karte h usai sath lijiye aur ek area inspecter ko sath rakhiye faisla hatho hath kijiye apka rutba aur bhadega ...sabkuch jayaj tarike se hoga..jo agai hamari pakad aur majboot banayega....
Dadaji--- wah beta ek mahine aye ho usmai bi sirf bhalayi he baant rahe ho
Main—Dadaji apna he sahar apne he gaanv h toh sabka dhuk apna dhuk h...
Dungarpur city---
Thakur hari singh—toh abki baar taane us bheema na dhul chatanij h...mahro naam nicho nahi hono chahiye....
Hari singh ka beta –
Harendra singh--- na bapu meri body ke agai bheema na tik pavago....biki sari haddiya tod dungo...
Hari singh --- saabas saabas aur ha 100 admi leke chalna h jo bhawani mandir ke kann chupke rahenge wanha thakur jagmal singh ka pota ayega usai uthana h agar wo sahdev ki aulaad h toh hum carodo mai khelenge...
Harendra—itna paisa koun dega....
Harisingh – pata nahi koun h par bahut salo se picha pada h kahta sahdev ke varish tak ko khatm kar dunga sirf itna he bolta h aur sahi suchna dene ke 50 cr bole h jab bi pukhta ho jaye ki ye sahdev ka beta h phone karne ko bola h khud toh phone kiye huve kayi saal ho gaye h usai...
Harendra—dangal parso he toh h tikh h main taiyari karta hu par 100 logo ki kya jarurat h us akele ko uthane ki...waise apne dekha h kya usai ..
Hari singh—dekha toh nahi par mandir ke raste akela he hoga aur apna admi us raste pe hoga jisne usai dekha hoga wo hume phone se ishara de dega bus phir utha lenge....aur dushman ko kamjor nahi samjna chahiye asspass ke aur apne gaanv ke mila ke sabse shandaar lathaitho ko taiyaar karo jab bi mouka milega...hum usai utha lenge ....
Aur phir dono jor se hasane lage
Idhar haveli mai ---
Main--- bheema chacha ek kaam karna gaanv ke apne bharose walo ko boldo mandir ke asspass rahne ko bolna aur mere ishara pe gherne ko bol dena.. bus muje hari singh jinda chahiye h ....... Takat kya hoti h wo dikhate h usai.....is baar main aur harisingh honge aur hoga maa bhawani ka mandir janha uski bali dunga....sabke samne.....
Bheema chacha—ye lo gun made in germany agar unke pass gun huvi toh kaam ayegiji
Main--- khus hokar thank you par abhi ...
B chacha--- oh hero abhi ap itne bi bade nahi huve h jab ap uttrakhand jayenge wanha mil jayegi agar chahiye toh he warna nahi milegi abhi apke masti ke din h thodi masti aur baki jimaidari ..abhi hathiyaro ke sath nahi khelna h jo sukun tadpa ke marne mai h wo maza jhatke mai marne mai kanha aur waise bi ye gun meri h..
Main—tikh tikh h.... ....
In delhi.......after 2 days...
Anjana aur deepika dono sonali ke ghar ja rahi thi.......aj Sunday tha toh unka bi off tha aur sonali free thi aj... kuch dair mai dono pahuch gayi sonali ke ghar...
Deepika --- hello
Anjana --- hello diiii
Sonali—dono ko gale laga ke no formality....meri cute cute cuti payiyo...
Wo dono muskarane lagi
Sonali – Raj kaisa h ...
Deepika--- oh ho .....matlb din ba din pyar ki tadap bhadti he ja rahi h....kya baat h.....
Anjana---
Deepika--- are pagli ab inhe mam bolu ya bhabhi samaj se bahar h ye ab itni pagal h inke bedroom mai sirf usi ki he photo ..h
Sonali—shut up bahut bolne lagi h pata nahi kaisa hoga wo ..
Anjana sur deepika muskarane lagiii
Sonali--- whattttt ......???
Sonali sur deepika—hum toh ab dil chahe tab kar lete h usai .....
Sonali---- ho nahi sakta h wanha par cell phone allowed he nahi h aur wo h ki kabhi yaad he nahi karta h tum bi toh 3 mahine baad mili ho ..
Deepika---wo actual wo actualy..
Sonali--- tense hoke baat kya h bataogiii...
Deepika--- sad hoke raj baat abhi isliye nahi karta h kyoki uska dil tuta huva h bus wo dikhane ke liye he khus h......
Sonali—darte huve saaf batao muje ghumao mat..
Phir deepika sonali ko puri baat batati h toh sonali ki ankho se ansuu nikalne lagte h....
Kuch dair baad...
Sonali--- tumhe pata h jab main uske sath hoti thi toh wo khud ko rokta tha muje pyar karne se kyoki wo richa se bahut pyar karta h ..wo uske sath apni jindgi ke har sapne pura karna chahta tha .....aur muje bi pata tha ki richa muje apnayegi toh he main raj ho paungi but richa ne ab raj ka pyar ke upar se viswas he utha diya h.......muje usai baat karni hogi pata nahii wo andar se kitna dhukhi aur frustrated hoga....aur agar usko nahi sambhala toh wo pata nahi kya karta firega ...
Deepika--- uske sath shweta h ...wo tikh h.. sp bewakah tension le rahi ho....
Sonali--- yahi toh nahi pata h tuje ....yaad nahi jab tumhe hath lagaya toh usne kya kiya tha uska gussa uske andar h .....tu nahi samjhegi muje usai baat karni hogi..... Uska dhuk yahi h ki sab usai dur ho gaye h bachpan mai uske mummy papa phir usai uske pariwaar se nafrat mili...phir uski jaan se pyari bahno aur dadaji se dur hona pada phir tum aur main aur ab richa jisai wo bahut pyar karta tha usne dhokha diya....muje usai baat karni h abhi ..isai pahle ki usai uska gusa frustration bahar nikalne ki wajah mile.....
Deepika –Mere pass uske number h main call karti hu .Ap chinta mat karo...
Sonali--- kya uske pass phone h...
Deepika—ha wo mandawa agaya h ab.....aur phone bi rakhta h ..
Sonali--- dekha phir bi usne baat nahi kari mujse. ab tum samjhi .....ki uske dimag mai kya chal raha h ..
Deepika kayi baar call karti h jo ring karti h par raj caal pic nahi karta h aur phir wo shweta ko bi ring karti h par wo bi pic nahi karti h ..
Deepika—busy honge wapa call back karenge
Sonali--- hmmm i hope jaldi kare call..
Mandawa----
Main Dangal dhekne agaya tha toh shor sarbe mai muje kuch sunayi nahi diya....waise bi meri nazar sirf ek insan pe thi jisai dekh mere andar ka NIRWANA jaag gaya aur NIRWANA sirf saza dena chahta h ....
Aj ke liye itna he
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