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Adultery Raj-- hero of the family
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Kavita or mamta dono hi masoom bacchiya hai jinse unke sath khelne ka khilauna dur ja rha hai dukh to hoga hi pr jinke chehre pe khushi hai vo dekhte hai kitne dino tk rahti hai, to dada ji ne bhej diya Sabki najaro se dur bade guru ji ke pass... Sandar update bhai jabarjast baccho ke imotion aapne kmaal ke dikhaye hain aage or bhi behtar ki apeksha hai aapse...
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NiceDosto main reader hu aur aj ek story apke samne prastut ya pesh kar raha hu iska ek look ap padh chuke ho . Bhai galtiyo ke liye maaf kijiyega aur reviews feedback dijiyega taki story mai koyi kami ho toh dur ki ja sake...
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Mandawa—
Ek choti city hari bhari city janha pe rahta h hero ka priwar
Pariwar—Nirwaan pariwar
Chcha -shaitan singh
Chachi-indra devi
Chote chacha- parwat singh jo ab is duniya mai ni h
Choti chachi—supriya
Bade chacha ke ek ladka aur ek ladki h
Name----- surendra singh
gamandi h hero ko bilkul pasand ni karte h wajah h dada dadi unko intro baad mai ayega
Chacha ki ladki-Babita singh
Khadus hero ki care karti thi par ma ke bhadkane par wo bi ab nafrat karti h aur karan ha dada dadi kuch had tak.
Chote chacha ----ke 3 beta betiya h
Badi beti--
mamta singh -----hero se 1 saal choti h aur hero pyar karti h bhai bahan wala chupke chupke usko khayal bi rakhti h jab usai khana ni milta h...khub pat ti h dono mai
Kavita singh------ ye hero se 2 saal choti h aur hero ki sabse pyari h inke bich bhai bahan ke pyar se jayda he h ek dusre ke sath hamesa rahte h har pal sath nibhate h aur hero apna sabkuch isai he manta h bahut he sundar h aur uske liye uska bhai Raj he sabkuch h
Hero name ---- Raj singh Nirwaan
akela h bachpan se he maa baap ka pyar na mila aur na usai pata h ki wo kanha h usai sirf itna bataya jata h ki wo mar gaye h accident mai
Hero jab 3 saal ki umar ka tha tab usai gaanv laya gaya tha aur uske dada usai leke aye the aur Raj ke dada ki wajah se he uski dadi bi usai thoda lagaav rakhti h
Ab Intro ---pariwar ke kaam ka
Raj ka pariwar Rajwado ka pariwar h
Raj ke Dada--- Thakur Jagmaal singh Nirwaan
jinke naam se Daaku tak tak kanmpte the 2 nali banduk aur chetak ghode pe sawar gaanv ki sair pe niklte h akele. Kisi ki aank na uth pati unki aur dhekne ki ijjat se jite h aur sabi ki ijjat karte h Raj ko sabse jayda pyar karte h aur Raj ko pyar se Nirwaana kahke bulate h inke pass jamin h 500 bigha dur dur tak bus inhi ke khet h aur baki secret h
Ab ate h inki haveli ka intro
Shandar 2 manjila haveli h Thakuro ki shaan dur dur tak bus haveli ki sundarta aur iske itihaas ke charche h haveli ke bahar har subhe sadhu santo ko bhojan karwaya jata h.. Haveli ke charo taraf gulab ke phool lage h jinki khusboo haveli mai hamesa rahti h..
Aur sham ko hakhade mai pahlwani ke daanv pech sikhaye jate h... Jo ki haveli ke piche bana huva h
Dadi ---sumitra devi
Puri thakurine h rob inke vyaktitwa mai busa huva h apne pati se darti h aur izzat karti h.. Aj bi tijori ki chabi inhi ke pass mai rahti h..
Toh ye tha pariwar ka small intro
Baki charecter story ke sath judte rahenge matlab mama mami nana nani bua etc
Ab shuru karte h story ko
Bade chacha -indra main kheto mai ja raha hu aur jane lagte h dining table ke pass ake are ye kya babuji ka nasta ni laga 7baj gaye h babuji ate he honge
Indra chachi – ap aur apke babuji har chij bus kahdo aur turan taiyar chahiye chachi mu bigad ke noukrani rakhlo itni he jaldih toh inke kheto mai toh kitne log kaam kare par ghar mai sara kaam bus bahuye he kare .
Bade chacha – are bus bi karo bhagyawan kitna sunaogi aur jate jate tana marte h pata ni babuji ne kya dhek liya tha ismai aur itna kah kar ghar se bhag jate
Badi chachi -bade chacha ki baat sunkegusa ho jati h aur kahne wali he hoti h ki dhekti h. chacha chale gaye toh man mai kahti ana to sham ko ghar pe he h aur kahti h wo kalank ka tikka harmkhore Raj kanha h aya ni abi tak ane do phir batati hu
Raj – chachi main agaya
Badi C -ek thapad Raj ko marti h kanha mar gaya tha ja jaldi surendra aur babita ko jagade aur phir man mai kahti pata ni ye kyo ni mar gaya accident mai manhoos kanhi ka..
Raj- ye sunkar main rone lagta hu aur rote rote dono ko jagane jata hu uparwale room mai bhaiya utho chachi bula rahi
Surendra -letai letai he ek kick karta harmkhor subhe subhe nind kharab kar di maa bi is harmkhor ko bhej deti h roj subhe subhe uthane. aur uthkar bathroom chal jata h
Raj- main piche girta hu aur kohni mai chot lag jati h aur main dard se karah uth ta hu ahhh.... Maaa... Par koyi ho toh sune mera dard.. Dard jo is 6 saal ki umar mai dhek raha hu main sahan kar rah hu main par koyi ni h phir main uthkar babita ke kamre mai jata hu wanha bi yahi hota h
Babita – harmkhore ajata h subhe nind kharab karne meri pata ni kab ye manusiyat yanha se jayegi
Raj rota huva niche ata h aur khud ko chup karata h taki aur koyi usai kuch na kahe aur dada dadi usai rota na dhek le aur wo niche ata h aur choti chachi ke kamre mai chachi ke ladke ajay ko palne mai jhula jhulane lagta h jo abi 1 saal ka h aur ajay hath pair heelane lagta h.. Raj man mai kya maine bi paalne mai kabhi jhula jhula h meri maa ne muje .godh mai uthaya .....papa ne ....muje kabhi ghumaya tha kya apne kandhe pe ...aur mere ansu neer ki tarah jharne lagta h mujse dhuk ho raha tha apni kismat pe ki Dada ji ke alawa muje koyi kyu ni chahta kya mere maa baap se sab nafrat karte h kya wo bure the jo unki photo tak ni h muje toh sakal bi yaad ni h mumy papa ki na mere pass koyi photo h main upar chala jata hu haveli ke . Aur koune mai baith ke kafi dair tak rota rahta hu ye mera roj ka tha kyo pichle ek saal se yahi ho raha tha Dadi khane ka puch leti thi aur thoda pyar deti thi par main unka chaheta na tha sayad dada ji ke dar pyar karna padta tha unhe mujse...
Ha majburi sabd sahi rahega
Bade chacha aur chachi ko matlb na tha choti chachi na nafrat na pyar karti thi bus yahi duniya thi meri roj ki.
Par Raj ko ni pata tha ki itne dhuk mai uske kuch pal khusi ke bi ane the jaldi he.......
Aj ke liye itna he dhekte h kya hota h agle update mai. ...Bane rahiye sath mai
Words mistake ho toh maaf kijiyega
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UPDATE—10
RECAP---
Pichle update mai apne padha ki kool guru Raj ko bade guru ke pass lejane ke liye kahte h agai ki sikhsa ke liye.wahi uski bahne dhukhi h usai dur jane aur sath he Raj bi majbur h Dada ji ki baat manne ke liye....
Ab agai.....
Haveli mai pichle 3 din mai
Choti chachi --- mamta kavita chalo ajao khana khate h
Mamta kavita- ni hame ni khana h khana ap logo ke sath
Choti chachi --- jid ni karte chalo niche ajao thoda gusai se
Kavita mamta – ek sath ap sab bahut bure ho pahle bhaiya ko marte ho aur ghar se bi bhej diya aur unhe ap sabne bahut rulaya h aur apna roomband karleti h
Yahi sab ye roj kar rahi h Raj ke jane se dono bahne Tut gayi h kyoki wahi toh tha jo unke sath khelta aur masti karta tha ab bus uski yade rah gayi h aur wo dono he uski yaade samete uske he kamre mai soti thi aur saaf kah diya jab tak raj ni ayega wo wanhi soyengii...
Choti chachi B chachi aur B chacha surendra aur babita sab dangg rah the dono ne aisa pahli baar kiya tha Par inhe ni pata tha nafrat ka beej inke dilo mai ugg gaya h in sabke prati..ab dhekte h ye kaise bhadega waqt ke sath sath...
Idhar Raj train mai Safar kar Raha tha 2 din baad train se kool guru aur Raj utre janha. Unke liye car khadi thi aur chal diye wo agai ke safar par....apan inhe chalne dete h 12 hour lagenge pahuchne mai....
Thodi dair kanhi aur ghoom ke ate h
Wanhi dusri taraf phone par madarchod hariya lagta h teri biwi chodni padegi tuje jinda rahne ki icha ni h pata ni kiya ki us school mai koyi thakur jagmaal ke yanha se h ya ni aur uske baap ka naam sahdev sing h kya....
Hariya maalik maine teacher bi bheja kisi ko banake par usko bi ni pata laga aur abi wo kudh bi gayab h baki uske gaanv mai bi laalach dilwaya par uske saare ganvo mai se koyi bi na toh paise lekar ya kaise bi kuch bi batane ko taiyar ni h ....ap he bataye kya karu
Samne se tu pata karta rah samja aur saamdand bhed jo lagana h wo kar aur admi laga pure rajasthan mai faila de main baki jagah uske pariwar par nigrani rakhta hu...
Ab ye log pata ni koun h jo badi siddat se Raj ko dhund rahe h in future pata lagega..
Khair idhar Raj aur kool guru ek jungle ke samne ruke aur paidal chaal diye manjil ki aur
Raj--- guruji hum kanha h
Kool guru --- beta ab ap akele ho toh suno hum hemachal pardesh mai h aur hamara ashram yaha se 5 km andar pahodo ke bich mai h
Raj --- itni dur ...par guruji muje yanha kya karna h
Kool guru – beta ap yanhi he rahoge aur agai ki sikhsa loge aur ha yanha se ap kisi se bi koyi sampark ni karoge dadaji ne bi apko ye bataya tha na .....
Raj --- par maine toh apni bahno se wada kiya tha ki main unse roj baat karunga
Kool guru --- beta pahle ap layak ban jao phir apko unke sath he toh rahna h na abi ke liye ap sab bhul jao aur sirf padhayi aur guruji ki sikhsa par ache se man laga ke dayan dena Aur ye lo hum pahuch gaye
Raj—maine samne dhekha toh mere mu se nikla sirf wao.....Samne ashram tha baans ki lakdiyo se khub bada bana huva charo taraf chote bade room the samne ek pake pathro se bani huvi imarat bi thi....charo taraf ped. Aur pahado ke karan kisi ko bi ni dikhta tha par mera man behad khus ho gaya tha ..ashram dhek ke.....
Kool guru--- andar leke gaye aur bade guru ke room ke bahar khade ho gaye ..kool guru ne wanha khade sisya ko kaha ki bade guruji se kahe ki rajasthan se umed aya h ...
Thodi dair baad sisya bila guruji ne andar bulaya h ...
Kool guru aur main andar gaye toh kool guru ne unke pair chuve toh maine bi chuve
Bade guru—ayushmaan bhava sada sukhi raho putra kaise ana huva umed aur ye balak koun h ..
Kool guru – guruji ye Raj h jaagmaal singh ka pota aur sahdev ka beta..
Bade guru – raj ki aur muskarahat ke sath dhekte huve bole mukh ka tez apne pita par h ....beta Raj apko pata h apke pita bi yanha padh chuke h aur wo mere sisya the aur unhe apke koolguru umedne he sikhsadi h h ...
Booom Ye foota bomb mere upar main kabhi kool guru ko dhekhu toh kabhi bade guru ji ko aur hazaro km ke heesab se mera man mai andhi tufaan chal rahe the ....jisai kool guru aur bade guru ne padh liya tha muje dhek ke muskra rahe the
Bade guruji ko ab main sirf guruji he likhu ga
Guruji – Beta Raj vyakul na hovo samay ane pe apko hum apke pita ke bare mai batayenge .ab p thake huve h toh aram kijiye aur kal subhe pratah . 4 baje naha dhoke muje yanhi milyega ..
Phir unhono kisi bache ko bulaya aur usko bola ki ye Raj h aur apke sath he rahenge wo bola ji guruji aur main chal diya uske sath wo bola mera naam sunil h maine bola mera naam raj h phir usne kaha main akela he rahta hu chota hu na baki sabi bache bade h ashram mai sab 18 saal se upar h isiliye mera koyi dost ni h tum banoge mere dost maine kaha mera bi koyi dost ni h lagta h apan dono ki kismat ek jaisi h so hum dost huve aj se aur sunil bola bhai mera guruji ke alawa koyi ni main unhe sahar mai road ke kinare mila tha vo yanha le aye aur main tab se yahi hu..aur aise he hum baat karte karte kamre tak pahuch gaye...
Wanhi dusri taraf bade guruji se kool guru baat kar rahe the ki guru ji is bache ke dusman bahut h jagmaal ke kahe anusar wo chahte h ye sahdev se bi agai jaye. Usai jayda takat aur dimag se tej ho ye wo hathiyaar bane jo burayi ko jad se kaat sake jisai na takat se mara ja sake aur khaskar dhoke se toh katayi niii .....
Bade guru --- putra isai hum khud taiyar karenge pahle dimaag se phir jism se isai hum wo banayenge jiske naam se he logo ki rooh kanp jayegi par uske liye samay h...pahle isai taiyar karna hoga ab tum jao umed aur isai hum par chod do aj ye 5 vars hamre pass rahega hum isai adhunik aur prachin dono trah ka gyan denge ..
Kool guru – jo agya gurudev main jagmaal ko bi bata dunga
Guruji – khus raho aur unhe bata dena ki 5 saal koyi ni ayega isai milne hum isai bhijwa denge rajasthan
Kool guru--- jo agaya gurudev
Aur gurudev chale jate h ab sala 3 se 5 saal ho gaye lag gayi meri toh aur muje pata he ni h ye sab aur main sunil ke sath dosti mai khoya ashram ghoom raha hu khusi khushi jisko ye pata he ni ki 5 saal uske sath kya hone wala h.....
Aj ke liye itna he kal se Raj ki ashram life aur mordern life suru hogi
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Pichle update mai apne padha ki kool guru Raj ko bade guru ke pass lejane ke liye kahte h agai ki sikhsa ke liye.wahi uski bahne dhukhi h usai dur jane aur sath he Raj bi majbur h Dada ji ki baat manne ke liye....
Ab agai.....
Haveli mai pichle 3 din mai
Choti chachi --- mamta kavita chalo ajao khana khate h
Mamta kavita- ni hame ni khana h khana ap logo ke sath
Choti chachi --- jid ni karte chalo niche ajao thoda gusai se
Kavita mamta – ek sath ap sab bahut bure ho pahle bhaiya ko marte ho aur ghar se bi bhej diya aur unhe ap sabne bahut rulaya h aur apna roomband karleti h
Yahi sab ye roj kar rahi h Raj ke jane se dono bahne Tut gayi h kyoki wahi toh tha jo unke sath khelta aur masti karta tha ab bus uski yade rah gayi h aur wo dono he uski yaade samete uske he kamre mai soti thi aur saaf kah diya jab tak raj ni ayega wo wanhi soyengii...
Choti chachi B chachi aur B chacha surendra aur babita sab dangg rah the dono ne aisa pahli baar kiya tha Par inhe ni pata tha nafrat ka beej inke dilo mai ugg gaya h in sabke prati..ab dhekte h ye kaise bhadega waqt ke sath sath...
Idhar Raj train mai Safar kar Raha tha 2 din baad train se kool guru aur Raj utre janha. Unke liye car khadi thi aur chal diye wo agai ke safar par....apan inhe chalne dete h 12 hour lagenge pahuchne mai....
Thodi dair kanhi aur ghoom ke ate h
Wanhi dusri taraf phone par madarchod hariya lagta h teri biwi chodni padegi tuje jinda rahne ki icha ni h pata ni kiya ki us school mai koyi thakur jagmaal ke yanha se h ya ni aur uske baap ka naam sahdev sing h kya....
Hariya maalik maine teacher bi bheja kisi ko banake par usko bi ni pata laga aur abi wo kudh bi gayab h baki uske gaanv mai bi laalach dilwaya par uske saare ganvo mai se koyi bi na toh paise lekar ya kaise bi kuch bi batane ko taiyar ni h ....ap he bataye kya karu
Samne se tu pata karta rah samja aur saamdand bhed jo lagana h wo kar aur admi laga pure rajasthan mai faila de main baki jagah uske pariwar par nigrani rakhta hu...
Ab ye log pata ni koun h jo badi siddat se Raj ko dhund rahe h in future pata lagega..
Khair idhar Raj aur kool guru ek jungle ke samne ruke aur paidal chaal diye manjil ki aur
Raj--- guruji hum kanha h
Kool guru --- beta ab ap akele ho toh suno hum hemachal pardesh mai h aur hamara ashram yaha se 5 km andar pahodo ke bich mai h
Raj --- itni dur ...par guruji muje yanha kya karna h
Kool guru – beta ap yanhi he rahoge aur agai ki sikhsa loge aur ha yanha se ap kisi se bi koyi sampark ni karoge dadaji ne bi apko ye bataya tha na .....
Raj --- par maine toh apni bahno se wada kiya tha ki main unse roj baat karunga
Kool guru --- beta pahle ap layak ban jao phir apko unke sath he toh rahna h na abi ke liye ap sab bhul jao aur sirf padhayi aur guruji ki sikhsa par ache se man laga ke dayan dena Aur ye lo hum pahuch gaye
Raj—maine samne dhekha toh mere mu se nikla sirf wao.....Samne ashram tha baans ki lakdiyo se khub bada bana huva charo taraf chote bade room the samne ek pake pathro se bani huvi imarat bi thi....charo taraf ped. Aur pahado ke karan kisi ko bi ni dikhta tha par mera man behad khus ho gaya tha ..ashram dhek ke.....
Kool guru--- andar leke gaye aur bade guru ke room ke bahar khade ho gaye ..kool guru ne wanha khade sisya ko kaha ki bade guruji se kahe ki rajasthan se umed aya h ...
Thodi dair baad sisya bila guruji ne andar bulaya h ...
Kool guru aur main andar gaye toh kool guru ne unke pair chuve toh maine bi chuve
Bade guru—ayushmaan bhava sada sukhi raho putra kaise ana huva umed aur ye balak koun h ..
Kool guru – guruji ye Raj h jaagmaal singh ka pota aur sahdev ka beta..
Bade guru – raj ki aur muskarahat ke sath dhekte huve bole mukh ka tez apne pita par h ....beta Raj apko pata h apke pita bi yanha padh chuke h aur wo mere sisya the aur unhe apke koolguru umedne he sikhsadi h h ...
Booom Ye foota bomb mere upar main kabhi kool guru ko dhekhu toh kabhi bade guru ji ko aur hazaro km ke heesab se mera man mai andhi tufaan chal rahe the ....jisai kool guru aur bade guru ne padh liya tha muje dhek ke muskra rahe the
Bade guruji ko ab main sirf guruji he likhu ga
Guruji – Beta Raj vyakul na hovo samay ane pe apko hum apke pita ke bare mai batayenge .ab p thake huve h toh aram kijiye aur kal subhe pratah . 4 baje naha dhoke muje yanhi milyega ..
Phir unhono kisi bache ko bulaya aur usko bola ki ye Raj h aur apke sath he rahenge wo bola ji guruji aur main chal diya uske sath wo bola mera naam sunil h maine bola mera naam raj h phir usne kaha main akela he rahta hu chota hu na baki sabi bache bade h ashram mai sab 18 saal se upar h isiliye mera koyi dost ni h tum banoge mere dost maine kaha mera bi koyi dost ni h lagta h apan dono ki kismat ek jaisi h so hum dost huve aj se aur sunil bola bhai mera guruji ke alawa koyi ni main unhe sahar mai road ke kinare mila tha vo yanha le aye aur main tab se yahi hu..aur aise he hum baat karte karte kamre tak pahuch gaye...
Wanhi dusri taraf bade guruji se kool guru baat kar rahe the ki guru ji is bache ke dusman bahut h jagmaal ke kahe anusar wo chahte h ye sahdev se bi agai jaye. Usai jayda takat aur dimag se tej ho ye wo hathiyaar bane jo burayi ko jad se kaat sake jisai na takat se mara ja sake aur khaskar dhoke se toh katayi niii .....
Bade guru --- putra isai hum khud taiyar karenge pahle dimaag se phir jism se isai hum wo banayenge jiske naam se he logo ki rooh kanp jayegi par uske liye samay h...pahle isai taiyar karna hoga ab tum jao umed aur isai hum par chod do aj ye 5 vars hamre pass rahega hum isai adhunik aur prachin dono trah ka gyan denge ..
Kool guru – jo agya gurudev main jagmaal ko bi bata dunga
Guruji – khus raho aur unhe bata dena ki 5 saal koyi ni ayega isai milne hum isai bhijwa denge rajasthan
Kool guru--- jo agaya gurudev
Aur gurudev chale jate h ab sala 3 se 5 saal ho gaye lag gayi meri toh aur muje pata he ni h ye sab aur main sunil ke sath dosti mai khoya ashram ghoom raha hu khusi khushi jisko ye pata he ni ki 5 saal uske sath kya hone wala h.....
Aj ke liye itna he kal se Raj ki ashram life aur mordern life suru hogi
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