Adultery Raj-- hero of the family

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Update ki umid jag gayi h is sunday se likhna suru kar raha hu toh umid h bahut jald he update read karne ko mil jayega....itne samay tak intezar kiya uske liye dil se dhanyawad ...

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HYPERTENSION....

 

[prasha_tam]

Update 89.....

Finding past—begins

alone feelings—Suruwaat....



After 2 days......

Sham ka samay tha aur Main ek hill ke top pe baitha huva tha....


mere samne suraj din bhar apni roshni se sabke jeevan ko roshan kar ke aram karne ke liye ja raha tha ......meri nighaye bus doobte suraj ko he dekh rahi thi jis ki dheemi halki roshni shanti de rahi thi...ek ajib sa sukun mil raha tha akele baith ke .....

Man mai vichar chal rahe the jinhe main khud nahi samaj pa raha tha....aur bus samne dekhe ja raha tha ek tak........suraj doob gaya tab mere dil se awaj ayi kya meri jindgi ke dhuk u he doobenge kabhi .....mera vaise bi koyi nahi h is duniya mai aur jo h wo bi paiso Ke liye marna chahte h ....aur sayad yahi kaaran mere maa baap ko marne ka raha hoga....par gareeb hona bi toh paap h richa bi toh isiliye dur hoti gayi thi mujse ....kabhi samajne ki kosis he nahi ki ....kaas ek baar viswas kar liya hota.... aj bi yaad h usne muje hawas ka bhukha kaha tha......richa agar main hawas ka bhukha hota toh tumhare sath toh sex nahi kiya tum jarur bahki par maine har baar roka.....tum hamesa kahti thi i trust you ...but tut gaya kuch he palo mai .. main samajta hu sab tumhari galti nahi h meri bi bahut galtiya h aur main ata tumhe manane bi kyoki aj bi main tumhe beintiha pyar karta hu....mera dil aj bi tumhe bahut yaad karta h....tum agar dubara sakal na dikhane wali baat na kahti toh jarur tumse milta aur tumhe manata par sayad mere jeevan mai tumhara sath itna he tha....main tumhe yaad kar bahut tadap liya hu ab ek nayi suruwat karunga .....ab tumhe dil ki gahrayiyo se nikalne ki puri kosis karunga tum mera adhura khawab he rah jaogi is janam mai .sabki tarah mera pyar bi adhura rah jayega...bus meri yahi duwa h tum hamesa khus raho.....miss you.... hamara pyar aj mere dil aur yado ki gahrayiyo mai dab gaya h hamesa ke liye ..........thodi dair u he baithne ke baad...main sunya ki awasta mai ho gaya janha na mera dil na dimag kuch kar par raha tha bus meri nazar samne ki taraf thi.....kuch dair baad mera phone ring hone laga....

Main--- Hello

Ye hello hello kya hota h bhai 5 hours ho gaye ....hum bhukhe baitha h ...ap 2 hours ka kahke gaye the ...

Main--- time dekh kar raat ke 9 baj gaye h ....main half hour mai aya....call cut....aur mere chahre pe muskaan agayi.



Dur .....



Ladki -richa hamesa tu yanha ati h ghumne aisa kyo....

Richa--- dil karta h mera ek sukun milta h yanha par yanha apnapan sa lagta

Ladki--- yaar achi jagah ghuma kar na pub mai chalte h aj raat dance masti karenge yanha ke pub mast h.

Richa--- dil nahi karta h mera ...Aur chalte huve road ke kinare baithe ek shaks jo gitar baza raha tha usai ek doller deti h ..aur uske pass khadi ho jati h

Ladki--- tu jab bi ati h isai 1 doller deti h aur yahi rahti h kafi dair aisa kyo...

Richa--- pata nahi bus main jab bi ati hu ye yanhi baitha milta h .....iske music mai ek ahsas h jo muje khichta h .....

Ladki--- tu aur teri soch chal ghar chalte h....

Richa tu chal main gitaar sunke ati hu....aur wo khadi hoke auro ke sath gitaar sunne lagti h..

Richa ka ye roj ka routine tha ...wo roj guitar sunti aur ek doller deti aur ghar ajatiiii.......

Aj bi wo behad dhayan se he sun rahi thi ..Richa itne dhayan se sunti thi ki usai ek sukun ek ahsas sa milta tha us dhuun mai usai aisa mahus hota tha ki wo usi ka dard bayan kar rahi h ...jab dil halka mahus hota wo wapas ghar ki taraf lout aati thi bus isi pal he dard kuch kam hota tha ab wo thoda bolti thi par ab bi wo ek kamre mai band hokar apne khayalo ki duniya mai chali jati ....jaise un khayalo mai koyi usai kisi se milne ka besabri se intezaar ho.... ...aur unhi khayalo mai samay bitati.....aj bi wo sapno ki duniya mai thi par uske chehre pe pareshani ke bhav the jissai uska chehra pasine se bhiga huva tha aur chehre pe dar aur pareshani ke bhav arahe aur ja rahe the ...aur wo dheere dheere dheere bol rahi thi nahi nahi nahi.......aur uski nind khul jati h.....uski ankho se ansuu beh nikalte h.....



Jaisalmer.......




Shivani--- fast fast

Kuch waqt baad

Sam village jo jaisalmer se 40 km ki duri par h apne dunes yani rait ke tilo aur tourism ke liye famus h wanha 2 open jeeb ka picha shivani police team ke sath kar rahi thi ....dono jeeb agai jake divied ho jati h...

Shivani--- left wali jeeb ka picha karo aur uske typer par fire karo....

Kafi dair ki masakat ke baad jeeb wale hath ajate h

Shivani---bahut ud liya ab tere pankh kutar du ya bolega

Admi--- chup raha ...

Ek gun fire sound aya aur sath he chillane ki awaj aur ek niche pada tadfadane laga ...

Shivani—tu bolega ya...iski trah tadfadta huva marega

Admi--- ha bolunga na ye saman delhi jana tha ye afganistaan se Pakistan ke raste bharat mai ata h....

Shivani--- wanha kisko dete ho

Admi--- ye muje nahi pata par yanha ye maal hum sappu supplier ko dete h jo agai bhejta h muje itna he pata maidam...Muje chod do...

Shivani--- chod dungi aur ye bata sappu pappu supplier kanha milega

Admi--- bikaner uska adda wanhi h border ke karib ..wo yanha ata rahta h ...

Shivani--- inspector ko ishara kar deti h azad kar do .....

Aur piche 2 gun fire sound ati h ...



Next day Morning...



Main--- ab tikh ho tum .....ghoom sakti ho

Manisha—yaar dr ne rest kaha tha letai rahne ko nahi kaha tha ...tum toh meri maa se bi bure ho is mamle mai....wo muje ghumne toh deti ..thoda bahut par tumne toh hilne he nahi diya upar se tumhari wo goliya......par aj pata nahi kaise maan gaye tum....

Main---Dr ne ok kaha h isliye... toh tikh h aj beauty ko bike se khuli hawa khilata hu ......ok ....aj school chalogi jao ready ho jao ..Isilye subhe jagaya h...

Manisha ke sath chal pada school manisha ko mere sath dekh ke janha sab ladkiya jal rahi thi ......toh ladko ke seene pe saanp ajgar sab lotpalate kha rahe the....class mai firse rounak agayi thi ab hum charo sath he baithe the

Aditiya—toh buddy kab ja rahe ho competition ke kiye start hone mai 5 din baki h ....

Main--- yaar maidam toh bus se bol rahi h but hum train se jayenge morning 8 baje chalti h ..aur dopahar ko chod degi din bhar rest aur agle din competition mai part leke wapas...

Aditiya rinky --- ye best rahega....... Yaar train ka safar bahut comfortable rahega .....

Aditiya—manisha tu dhayan rakhna....

Manisha--- main tikh hu aur ye rahega macho men sath mai...toh dhayan rakh lega

Rinky—kya karwayegi .....isai aisa ha ha ha ha ....

Janha hum hans rahe the toh koyi aisa bi tha jiske chehre se kuch aur he nazar araha tha .......jiski umid muje bi nahi thi kyoki main bi umid nahi kar sakta hu ki mera itna khatarnak roop dekhne ke baad koyi school se mujse dushmani karega par lagta h kuch toh raj h uska bi......

Main ghar par room mai leta tha aur gahri soch mai tha tab shweta ayi aur mere pass late gayi....

Shweta--- acha toh kya socha ja raha h ..

Main--- usai gale laga ke life ke bare mai

Shweta – jara muje bi batana

Main--- pata h shweta maine pichle kafi waqt mai itne logo ko mara h ki kabhi kabhi sapne mai bi khud ko khun ka pyasa dekhta hu....maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki mera jeevan aisa bi hoga ....janha mere apne muje marne wale honge....maine kabhi kisi se pyar ke alawa kuch nahi manga bachpan mai pyar ke liye tarsa bada huva toh ek ke sath jindgi jeene ke sapne sajaye aur usai thoda sa ajmaya toh wo gareeb samajke chod gayiii....meri zindgi mai he itni muskile kyo h....

Shweta--- sach bolu toh bhai apko chahne wale jayda h sabse pahle main ......jo ap par ankh band kar ke viswas karti h phir mamta kavita jinhe maine dekha nahi par muje pata h wo apko bahut chahti h.....phir sage bhai se bhadkar pyar karne wala bhai sunil.....uski barabari toh koyi nahi kar sakta h.....jo ap pe ane wale har khatre ko apne par le leta h.....aur deepika dii wo toh bus sabkuch apko manti h sayad he koyi din aisa ho jab apko yaad na kare....aur toh aur SP mam jo apko sayad like bi karti h mere mummy papa jo apko apna beta mantr h ....badepapa kaptaan aur mousi....aur one only Dada ji jinke sacrifies ke agai sabka pyar chota h aur kitne naam ginau ap batao bheema chacha... choti chachi... mana jindgi muskil h par apko chahne wale jayda h ...aur apko chahne wali bi hogi kahi toh hogi aur mere bhai ke liye bhagwan khud bhejega usai.....bilkul poonam ke chand jaisi hogi khubshurat apke jeevan mai Chand ki khubsoort roshni ki trah apke jeevan mai khusiya bhar degi....

Main--- sir ko chum kar love u so much my sweet sis..

Shweta--- bhai ayegi ....apki jindgi mai bahut bahut khusiya ....ayengi aur warna hum bhai bahan toh h he chill karenge no tension no fikar bus khusiya he khusiya...

Hum dono hamari he bate kar rahe the toh dur....Kanhi

Poonam oh poonam

Poonam—ayi chacha.....ayi....

Chacha--- tu itna kaam mat karwaya kar wo bachi h uske maa baap ko kya mu dikhaunga upar jake ...kya kahenge wo...

Chachi – main thodi he karwati hu wo khud karti h ..

Chacha--- sab pata h muje ...dekh meri beti h wo usai jara bi dukh huva kabhi toh tu samaj liyo muje jeete ji maar degi tu wo mere bhai bhabi ki akhiri nishani h unhone muje apne bete ke jaise pala tha jo ye sab h unki he mehnat ka...

Tabi poonam ajati h...

Chacha--- beti sans le le ab meri baat soon agle mahine koombh ka mela lagega haar 12 saal mai ek baar hota h toh hum bi chalenge...pavitra snan ka mouka dubara mile ya na mile.....

Poonam—ji baba maine bi bus kitabo mai padha h sirf....

Chacha ja ab aram karle itna kaam mat kar nahi toh tere papa ko kya mu dikhaunga upar jake ...bolenge meri chori se itna kaam karwata tha...

Poonam—na baba ap jaise chacha chachi ho jiske pass unhe kabhi dhuk ho he nahi sakta h aur ap mere maa baba ho toh ek beti apne maa baap ki seva nahi karegi toh kiski karegi....

Chachi—aur jo choro se ladti h...wo...

Poonam—wo toh ulaj rahe the toh dhar diye ....2 kaan ke niche

Chachi—dekha.. aise toh ye apne pati ke bi maar degi

Chacha--- ha ha ha.....akhir beti kiski h...

Poonam—aur kya main na jane wali ap dono ko chod ke main toh ap dono ke sath he rahungi....



Night 11pm...



Shivani--- ji mam yes ....ha jaisalmer ka sappu supplier h wo agai delhi maal supply karta h .....

Sonali--- hmmm good job shivani

Shivani--- one thing mam they have planning for some thing big inhone bahut badi planning ki warna itne hathiyaar aur rdx kisliye mangwaye

Sonali--- matlb

Shivani--- mam ye dusri khep h ek pahle achuki h toh ap sochiye hathiyaaar toh india mai bi mil jate phir itni mehnat kyu...aisa kya h jismai ye bhari tabahyi macha sakte h....

Sonali--- hmm point toh h ok tum find out karo koyi clue aur sappu supplier ke pappu pe tharo ache se bakega wo jarur kaam ka ...main yanha pata karti hu aur jald he tumse milti hu.....



Chief so ....

Sonali--- sari information deti h..

Chief--- aisa kya h ....jiski ye planning kar sakte h itne bhari matra mai....



Ek secret place pe

Oye habibi pathan khus huva . ye toh car bilkul police gaadi jaisa lagta h aur ye wardi bi pura police jaisa he dikhta h...oye tum toh pathan ko Khus kar diya....

Vithal—ap hamare junior victer ke khass mehmaan ho apke liye jaan hajir h....bus ap thodi meri tarif kar dena .

Pathan--- oye ek baar ye kaam ho jaye hum tumko malamaal kardega...

Vithal—jarur hoga ....



Aj ke liye itna he ....

Wonderful update ... Keep it up

 

[The king]

Update 89.....

Finding past—begins

alone feelings—Suruwaat....



After 2 days......

Sham ka samay tha aur Main ek hill ke top pe baitha huva tha....


mere samne suraj din bhar apni roshni se sabke jeevan ko roshan kar ke aram karne ke liye ja raha tha ......meri nighaye bus doobte suraj ko he dekh rahi thi jis ki dheemi halki roshni shanti de rahi thi...ek ajib sa sukun mil raha tha akele baith ke .....

Man mai vichar chal rahe the jinhe main khud nahi samaj pa raha tha....aur bus samne dekhe ja raha tha ek tak........suraj doob gaya tab mere dil se awaj ayi kya meri jindgi ke dhuk u he doobenge kabhi .....mera vaise bi koyi nahi h is duniya mai aur jo h wo bi paiso Ke liye marna chahte h ....aur sayad yahi kaaran mere maa baap ko marne ka raha hoga....par gareeb hona bi toh paap h richa bi toh isiliye dur hoti gayi thi mujse ....kabhi samajne ki kosis he nahi ki ....kaas ek baar viswas kar liya hota.... aj bi yaad h usne muje hawas ka bhukha kaha tha......richa agar main hawas ka bhukha hota toh tumhare sath toh sex nahi kiya tum jarur bahki par maine har baar roka.....tum hamesa kahti thi i trust you ...but tut gaya kuch he palo mai .. main samajta hu sab tumhari galti nahi h meri bi bahut galtiya h aur main ata tumhe manane bi kyoki aj bi main tumhe beintiha pyar karta hu....mera dil aj bi tumhe bahut yaad karta h....tum agar dubara sakal na dikhane wali baat na kahti toh jarur tumse milta aur tumhe manata par sayad mere jeevan mai tumhara sath itna he tha....main tumhe yaad kar bahut tadap liya hu ab ek nayi suruwat karunga .....ab tumhe dil ki gahrayiyo se nikalne ki puri kosis karunga tum mera adhura khawab he rah jaogi is janam mai .sabki tarah mera pyar bi adhura rah jayega...bus meri yahi duwa h tum hamesa khus raho.....miss you.... hamara pyar aj mere dil aur yado ki gahrayiyo mai dab gaya h hamesa ke liye ..........thodi dair u he baithne ke baad...main sunya ki awasta mai ho gaya janha na mera dil na dimag kuch kar par raha tha bus meri nazar samne ki taraf thi.....kuch dair baad mera phone ring hone laga....

Main--- Hello

Ye hello hello kya hota h bhai 5 hours ho gaye ....hum bhukhe baitha h ...ap 2 hours ka kahke gaye the ...

Main--- time dekh kar raat ke 9 baj gaye h ....main half hour mai aya....call cut....aur mere chahre pe muskaan agayi.



Dur .....



Ladki -richa hamesa tu yanha ati h ghumne aisa kyo....

Richa--- dil karta h mera ek sukun milta h yanha par yanha apnapan sa lagta

Ladki--- yaar achi jagah ghuma kar na pub mai chalte h aj raat dance masti karenge yanha ke pub mast h.

Richa--- dil nahi karta h mera ...Aur chalte huve road ke kinare baithe ek shaks jo gitar baza raha tha usai ek doller deti h ..aur uske pass khadi ho jati h

Ladki--- tu jab bi ati h isai 1 doller deti h aur yahi rahti h kafi dair aisa kyo...

Richa--- pata nahi bus main jab bi ati hu ye yanhi baitha milta h .....iske music mai ek ahsas h jo muje khichta h .....

Ladki--- tu aur teri soch chal ghar chalte h....

Richa tu chal main gitaar sunke ati hu....aur wo khadi hoke auro ke sath gitaar sunne lagti h..

Richa ka ye roj ka routine tha ...wo roj guitar sunti aur ek doller deti aur ghar ajatiiii.......

Aj bi wo behad dhayan se he sun rahi thi ..Richa itne dhayan se sunti thi ki usai ek sukun ek ahsas sa milta tha us dhuun mai usai aisa mahus hota tha ki wo usi ka dard bayan kar rahi h ...jab dil halka mahus hota wo wapas ghar ki taraf lout aati thi bus isi pal he dard kuch kam hota tha ab wo thoda bolti thi par ab bi wo ek kamre mai band hokar apne khayalo ki duniya mai chali jati ....jaise un khayalo mai koyi usai kisi se milne ka besabri se intezaar ho.... ...aur unhi khayalo mai samay bitati.....aj bi wo sapno ki duniya mai thi par uske chehre pe pareshani ke bhav the jissai uska chehra pasine se bhiga huva tha aur chehre pe dar aur pareshani ke bhav arahe aur ja rahe the ...aur wo dheere dheere dheere bol rahi thi nahi nahi nahi.......aur uski nind khul jati h.....uski ankho se ansuu beh nikalte h.....



Jaisalmer.......




Shivani--- fast fast

Kuch waqt baad

Sam village jo jaisalmer se 40 km ki duri par h apne dunes yani rait ke tilo aur tourism ke liye famus h wanha 2 open jeeb ka picha shivani police team ke sath kar rahi thi ....dono jeeb agai jake divied ho jati h...

Shivani--- left wali jeeb ka picha karo aur uske typer par fire karo....

Kafi dair ki masakat ke baad jeeb wale hath ajate h

Shivani---bahut ud liya ab tere pankh kutar du ya bolega

Admi--- chup raha ...

Ek gun fire sound aya aur sath he chillane ki awaj aur ek niche pada tadfadane laga ...

Shivani—tu bolega ya...iski trah tadfadta huva marega

Admi--- ha bolunga na ye saman delhi jana tha ye afganistaan se Pakistan ke raste bharat mai ata h....

Shivani--- wanha kisko dete ho

Admi--- ye muje nahi pata par yanha ye maal hum sappu supplier ko dete h jo agai bhejta h muje itna he pata maidam...Muje chod do...

Shivani--- chod dungi aur ye bata sappu pappu supplier kanha milega

Admi--- bikaner uska adda wanhi h border ke karib ..wo yanha ata rahta h ...

Shivani--- inspector ko ishara kar deti h azad kar do .....

Aur piche 2 gun fire sound ati h ...



Next day Morning...



Main--- ab tikh ho tum .....ghoom sakti ho

Manisha—yaar dr ne rest kaha tha letai rahne ko nahi kaha tha ...tum toh meri maa se bi bure ho is mamle mai....wo muje ghumne toh deti ..thoda bahut par tumne toh hilne he nahi diya upar se tumhari wo goliya......par aj pata nahi kaise maan gaye tum....

Main---Dr ne ok kaha h isliye... toh tikh h aj beauty ko bike se khuli hawa khilata hu ......ok ....aj school chalogi jao ready ho jao ..Isilye subhe jagaya h...

Manisha ke sath chal pada school manisha ko mere sath dekh ke janha sab ladkiya jal rahi thi ......toh ladko ke seene pe saanp ajgar sab lotpalate kha rahe the....class mai firse rounak agayi thi ab hum charo sath he baithe the

Aditiya—toh buddy kab ja rahe ho competition ke kiye start hone mai 5 din baki h ....

Main--- yaar maidam toh bus se bol rahi h but hum train se jayenge morning 8 baje chalti h ..aur dopahar ko chod degi din bhar rest aur agle din competition mai part leke wapas...

Aditiya rinky --- ye best rahega....... Yaar train ka safar bahut comfortable rahega .....

Aditiya—manisha tu dhayan rakhna....

Manisha--- main tikh hu aur ye rahega macho men sath mai...toh dhayan rakh lega

Rinky—kya karwayegi .....isai aisa ha ha ha ha ....

Janha hum hans rahe the toh koyi aisa bi tha jiske chehre se kuch aur he nazar araha tha .......jiski umid muje bi nahi thi kyoki main bi umid nahi kar sakta hu ki mera itna khatarnak roop dekhne ke baad koyi school se mujse dushmani karega par lagta h kuch toh raj h uska bi......

Main ghar par room mai leta tha aur gahri soch mai tha tab shweta ayi aur mere pass late gayi....

Shweta--- acha toh kya socha ja raha h ..

Main--- usai gale laga ke life ke bare mai

Shweta – jara muje bi batana

Main--- pata h shweta maine pichle kafi waqt mai itne logo ko mara h ki kabhi kabhi sapne mai bi khud ko khun ka pyasa dekhta hu....maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki mera jeevan aisa bi hoga ....janha mere apne muje marne wale honge....maine kabhi kisi se pyar ke alawa kuch nahi manga bachpan mai pyar ke liye tarsa bada huva toh ek ke sath jindgi jeene ke sapne sajaye aur usai thoda sa ajmaya toh wo gareeb samajke chod gayiii....meri zindgi mai he itni muskile kyo h....

Shweta--- sach bolu toh bhai apko chahne wale jayda h sabse pahle main ......jo ap par ankh band kar ke viswas karti h phir mamta kavita jinhe maine dekha nahi par muje pata h wo apko bahut chahti h.....phir sage bhai se bhadkar pyar karne wala bhai sunil.....uski barabari toh koyi nahi kar sakta h.....jo ap pe ane wale har khatre ko apne par le leta h.....aur deepika dii wo toh bus sabkuch apko manti h sayad he koyi din aisa ho jab apko yaad na kare....aur toh aur SP mam jo apko sayad like bi karti h mere mummy papa jo apko apna beta mantr h ....badepapa kaptaan aur mousi....aur one only Dada ji jinke sacrifies ke agai sabka pyar chota h aur kitne naam ginau ap batao bheema chacha... choti chachi... mana jindgi muskil h par apko chahne wale jayda h ...aur apko chahne wali bi hogi kahi toh hogi aur mere bhai ke liye bhagwan khud bhejega usai.....bilkul poonam ke chand jaisi hogi khubshurat apke jeevan mai Chand ki khubsoort roshni ki trah apke jeevan mai khusiya bhar degi....

Main--- sir ko chum kar love u so much my sweet sis..

Shweta--- bhai ayegi ....apki jindgi mai bahut bahut khusiya ....ayengi aur warna hum bhai bahan toh h he chill karenge no tension no fikar bus khusiya he khusiya...

Hum dono hamari he bate kar rahe the toh dur....Kanhi

Poonam oh poonam

Poonam—ayi chacha.....ayi....

Chacha--- tu itna kaam mat karwaya kar wo bachi h uske maa baap ko kya mu dikhaunga upar jake ...kya kahenge wo...

Chachi – main thodi he karwati hu wo khud karti h ..

Chacha--- sab pata h muje ...dekh meri beti h wo usai jara bi dukh huva kabhi toh tu samaj liyo muje jeete ji maar degi tu wo mere bhai bhabi ki akhiri nishani h unhone muje apne bete ke jaise pala tha jo ye sab h unki he mehnat ka...

Tabi poonam ajati h...

Chacha--- beti sans le le ab meri baat soon agle mahine koombh ka mela lagega haar 12 saal mai ek baar hota h toh hum bi chalenge...pavitra snan ka mouka dubara mile ya na mile.....

Poonam—ji baba maine bi bus kitabo mai padha h sirf....

Chacha ja ab aram karle itna kaam mat kar nahi toh tere papa ko kya mu dikhaunga upar jake ...bolenge meri chori se itna kaam karwata tha...

Poonam—na baba ap jaise chacha chachi ho jiske pass unhe kabhi dhuk ho he nahi sakta h aur ap mere maa baba ho toh ek beti apne maa baap ki seva nahi karegi toh kiski karegi....

Chachi—aur jo choro se ladti h...wo...

Poonam—wo toh ulaj rahe the toh dhar diye ....2 kaan ke niche

Chachi—dekha.. aise toh ye apne pati ke bi maar degi

Chacha--- ha ha ha.....akhir beti kiski h...

Poonam—aur kya main na jane wali ap dono ko chod ke main toh ap dono ke sath he rahungi....



Night 11pm...



Shivani--- ji mam yes ....ha jaisalmer ka sappu supplier h wo agai delhi maal supply karta h .....

Sonali--- hmmm good job shivani

Shivani--- one thing mam they have planning for some thing big inhone bahut badi planning ki warna itne hathiyaar aur rdx kisliye mangwaye

Sonali--- matlb

Shivani--- mam ye dusri khep h ek pahle achuki h toh ap sochiye hathiyaaar toh india mai bi mil jate phir itni mehnat kyu...aisa kya h jismai ye bhari tabahyi macha sakte h....

Sonali--- hmm point toh h ok tum find out karo koyi clue aur sappu supplier ke pappu pe tharo ache se bakega wo jarur kaam ka ...main yanha pata karti hu aur jald he tumse milti hu.....



Chief so ....

Sonali--- sari information deti h..

Chief--- aisa kya h ....jiski ye planning kar sakte h itne bhari matra mai....



Ek secret place pe

Oye habibi pathan khus huva . ye toh car bilkul police gaadi jaisa lagta h aur ye wardi bi pura police jaisa he dikhta h...oye tum toh pathan ko Khus kar diya....

Vithal—ap hamare junior victer ke khass mehmaan ho apke liye jaan hajir h....bus ap thodi meri tarif kar dena .

Pathan--- oye ek baar ye kaam ho jaye hum tumko malamaal kardega...

Vithal—jarur hoga ....



Aj ke liye itna he ....

Nice update bhai waiting for next update

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Kuchh bhi kaho bhaya update bda Dhasu tha jaha ek taraf Raj Sonali ko apni sabse khas dost bta rha hai Vahi dusri taraf Sonali jo raj ko hi apna sabkuchh mane baithi hai...
Sultan ko mar kr Bich Chaurahe pr tang aaya hai nirvana apne vade ke mutabik...

Ha ab iske side effects dikhne suru honge

Raj ne chief ko apni taraf se saaf or sidhi baat bta di hai or use Kis pr bharosha hai or kispr nhi hai ye bhi bta diya hai ki kyo hai bharosha, chief ko Raj ne convince kr liya hai...

Bilkul sahi kaha apne kyoki past se sikh raha h ajmao aur yakin karo phir

Ye anjan Katil phone karke Raj ko bta rha hai ki Mai aa gya hu or ab tuhare Jane ka time aa gya hai lekin Sayad Ise pta nhi chla ki isne Kisse panga liya hai...
Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab

Ye apko agle update mai pata lagega par maza ayega...

 

[Luffy]

Update 89.....

Finding past—begins

alone feelings—Suruwaat....



After 2 days......

Sham ka samay tha aur Main ek hill ke top pe baitha huva tha....


mere samne suraj din bhar apni roshni se sabke jeevan ko roshan kar ke aram karne ke liye ja raha tha ......meri nighaye bus doobte suraj ko he dekh rahi thi jis ki dheemi halki roshni shanti de rahi thi...ek ajib sa sukun mil raha tha akele baith ke .....

Man mai vichar chal rahe the jinhe main khud nahi samaj pa raha tha....aur bus samne dekhe ja raha tha ek tak........suraj doob gaya tab mere dil se awaj ayi kya meri jindgi ke dhuk u he doobenge kabhi .....mera vaise bi koyi nahi h is duniya mai aur jo h wo bi paiso Ke liye marna chahte h ....aur sayad yahi kaaran mere maa baap ko marne ka raha hoga....par gareeb hona bi toh paap h richa bi toh isiliye dur hoti gayi thi mujse ....kabhi samajne ki kosis he nahi ki ....kaas ek baar viswas kar liya hota.... aj bi yaad h usne muje hawas ka bhukha kaha tha......richa agar main hawas ka bhukha hota toh tumhare sath toh sex nahi kiya tum jarur bahki par maine har baar roka.....tum hamesa kahti thi i trust you ...but tut gaya kuch he palo mai .. main samajta hu sab tumhari galti nahi h meri bi bahut galtiya h aur main ata tumhe manane bi kyoki aj bi main tumhe beintiha pyar karta hu....mera dil aj bi tumhe bahut yaad karta h....tum agar dubara sakal na dikhane wali baat na kahti toh jarur tumse milta aur tumhe manata par sayad mere jeevan mai tumhara sath itna he tha....main tumhe yaad kar bahut tadap liya hu ab ek nayi suruwat karunga .....ab tumhe dil ki gahrayiyo se nikalne ki puri kosis karunga tum mera adhura khawab he rah jaogi is janam mai .sabki tarah mera pyar bi adhura rah jayega...bus meri yahi duwa h tum hamesa khus raho.....miss you.... hamara pyar aj mere dil aur yado ki gahrayiyo mai dab gaya h hamesa ke liye ..........thodi dair u he baithne ke baad...main sunya ki awasta mai ho gaya janha na mera dil na dimag kuch kar par raha tha bus meri nazar samne ki taraf thi.....kuch dair baad mera phone ring hone laga....

Main--- Hello

Ye hello hello kya hota h bhai 5 hours ho gaye ....hum bhukhe baitha h ...ap 2 hours ka kahke gaye the ...

Main--- time dekh kar raat ke 9 baj gaye h ....main half hour mai aya....call cut....aur mere chahre pe muskaan agayi.



Dur .....



Ladki -richa hamesa tu yanha ati h ghumne aisa kyo....

Richa--- dil karta h mera ek sukun milta h yanha par yanha apnapan sa lagta

Ladki--- yaar achi jagah ghuma kar na pub mai chalte h aj raat dance masti karenge yanha ke pub mast h.

Richa--- dil nahi karta h mera ...Aur chalte huve road ke kinare baithe ek shaks jo gitar baza raha tha usai ek doller deti h ..aur uske pass khadi ho jati h

Ladki--- tu jab bi ati h isai 1 doller deti h aur yahi rahti h kafi dair aisa kyo...

Richa--- pata nahi bus main jab bi ati hu ye yanhi baitha milta h .....iske music mai ek ahsas h jo muje khichta h .....

Ladki--- tu aur teri soch chal ghar chalte h....

Richa tu chal main gitaar sunke ati hu....aur wo khadi hoke auro ke sath gitaar sunne lagti h..

Richa ka ye roj ka routine tha ...wo roj guitar sunti aur ek doller deti aur ghar ajatiiii.......

Aj bi wo behad dhayan se he sun rahi thi ..Richa itne dhayan se sunti thi ki usai ek sukun ek ahsas sa milta tha us dhuun mai usai aisa mahus hota tha ki wo usi ka dard bayan kar rahi h ...jab dil halka mahus hota wo wapas ghar ki taraf lout aati thi bus isi pal he dard kuch kam hota tha ab wo thoda bolti thi par ab bi wo ek kamre mai band hokar apne khayalo ki duniya mai chali jati ....jaise un khayalo mai koyi usai kisi se milne ka besabri se intezaar ho.... ...aur unhi khayalo mai samay bitati.....aj bi wo sapno ki duniya mai thi par uske chehre pe pareshani ke bhav the jissai uska chehra pasine se bhiga huva tha aur chehre pe dar aur pareshani ke bhav arahe aur ja rahe the ...aur wo dheere dheere dheere bol rahi thi nahi nahi nahi.......aur uski nind khul jati h.....uski ankho se ansuu beh nikalte h.....



Jaisalmer.......




Shivani--- fast fast

Kuch waqt baad

Sam village jo jaisalmer se 40 km ki duri par h apne dunes yani rait ke tilo aur tourism ke liye famus h wanha 2 open jeeb ka picha shivani police team ke sath kar rahi thi ....dono jeeb agai jake divied ho jati h...

Shivani--- left wali jeeb ka picha karo aur uske typer par fire karo....

Kafi dair ki masakat ke baad jeeb wale hath ajate h

Shivani---bahut ud liya ab tere pankh kutar du ya bolega

Admi--- chup raha ...

Ek gun fire sound aya aur sath he chillane ki awaj aur ek niche pada tadfadane laga ...

Shivani—tu bolega ya...iski trah tadfadta huva marega

Admi--- ha bolunga na ye saman delhi jana tha ye afganistaan se Pakistan ke raste bharat mai ata h....

Shivani--- wanha kisko dete ho

Admi--- ye muje nahi pata par yanha ye maal hum sappu supplier ko dete h jo agai bhejta h muje itna he pata maidam...Muje chod do...

Shivani--- chod dungi aur ye bata sappu pappu supplier kanha milega

Admi--- bikaner uska adda wanhi h border ke karib ..wo yanha ata rahta h ...

Shivani--- inspector ko ishara kar deti h azad kar do .....

Aur piche 2 gun fire sound ati h ...



Next day Morning...



Main--- ab tikh ho tum .....ghoom sakti ho

Manisha—yaar dr ne rest kaha tha letai rahne ko nahi kaha tha ...tum toh meri maa se bi bure ho is mamle mai....wo muje ghumne toh deti ..thoda bahut par tumne toh hilne he nahi diya upar se tumhari wo goliya......par aj pata nahi kaise maan gaye tum....

Main---Dr ne ok kaha h isliye... toh tikh h aj beauty ko bike se khuli hawa khilata hu ......ok ....aj school chalogi jao ready ho jao ..Isilye subhe jagaya h...

Manisha ke sath chal pada school manisha ko mere sath dekh ke janha sab ladkiya jal rahi thi ......toh ladko ke seene pe saanp ajgar sab lotpalate kha rahe the....class mai firse rounak agayi thi ab hum charo sath he baithe the

Aditiya—toh buddy kab ja rahe ho competition ke kiye start hone mai 5 din baki h ....

Main--- yaar maidam toh bus se bol rahi h but hum train se jayenge morning 8 baje chalti h ..aur dopahar ko chod degi din bhar rest aur agle din competition mai part leke wapas...

Aditiya rinky --- ye best rahega....... Yaar train ka safar bahut comfortable rahega .....

Aditiya—manisha tu dhayan rakhna....

Manisha--- main tikh hu aur ye rahega macho men sath mai...toh dhayan rakh lega

Rinky—kya karwayegi .....isai aisa ha ha ha ha ....

Janha hum hans rahe the toh koyi aisa bi tha jiske chehre se kuch aur he nazar araha tha .......jiski umid muje bi nahi thi kyoki main bi umid nahi kar sakta hu ki mera itna khatarnak roop dekhne ke baad koyi school se mujse dushmani karega par lagta h kuch toh raj h uska bi......

Main ghar par room mai leta tha aur gahri soch mai tha tab shweta ayi aur mere pass late gayi....

Shweta--- acha toh kya socha ja raha h ..

Main--- usai gale laga ke life ke bare mai

Shweta – jara muje bi batana

Main--- pata h shweta maine pichle kafi waqt mai itne logo ko mara h ki kabhi kabhi sapne mai bi khud ko khun ka pyasa dekhta hu....maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki mera jeevan aisa bi hoga ....janha mere apne muje marne wale honge....maine kabhi kisi se pyar ke alawa kuch nahi manga bachpan mai pyar ke liye tarsa bada huva toh ek ke sath jindgi jeene ke sapne sajaye aur usai thoda sa ajmaya toh wo gareeb samajke chod gayiii....meri zindgi mai he itni muskile kyo h....

Shweta--- sach bolu toh bhai apko chahne wale jayda h sabse pahle main ......jo ap par ankh band kar ke viswas karti h phir mamta kavita jinhe maine dekha nahi par muje pata h wo apko bahut chahti h.....phir sage bhai se bhadkar pyar karne wala bhai sunil.....uski barabari toh koyi nahi kar sakta h.....jo ap pe ane wale har khatre ko apne par le leta h.....aur deepika dii wo toh bus sabkuch apko manti h sayad he koyi din aisa ho jab apko yaad na kare....aur toh aur SP mam jo apko sayad like bi karti h mere mummy papa jo apko apna beta mantr h ....badepapa kaptaan aur mousi....aur one only Dada ji jinke sacrifies ke agai sabka pyar chota h aur kitne naam ginau ap batao bheema chacha... choti chachi... mana jindgi muskil h par apko chahne wale jayda h ...aur apko chahne wali bi hogi kahi toh hogi aur mere bhai ke liye bhagwan khud bhejega usai.....bilkul poonam ke chand jaisi hogi khubshurat apke jeevan mai Chand ki khubsoort roshni ki trah apke jeevan mai khusiya bhar degi....

Main--- sir ko chum kar love u so much my sweet sis..

Shweta--- bhai ayegi ....apki jindgi mai bahut bahut khusiya ....ayengi aur warna hum bhai bahan toh h he chill karenge no tension no fikar bus khusiya he khusiya...

Hum dono hamari he bate kar rahe the toh dur....Kanhi

Poonam oh poonam

Poonam—ayi chacha.....ayi....

Chacha--- tu itna kaam mat karwaya kar wo bachi h uske maa baap ko kya mu dikhaunga upar jake ...kya kahenge wo...

Chachi – main thodi he karwati hu wo khud karti h ..

Chacha--- sab pata h muje ...dekh meri beti h wo usai jara bi dukh huva kabhi toh tu samaj liyo muje jeete ji maar degi tu wo mere bhai bhabi ki akhiri nishani h unhone muje apne bete ke jaise pala tha jo ye sab h unki he mehnat ka...

Tabi poonam ajati h...

Chacha--- beti sans le le ab meri baat soon agle mahine koombh ka mela lagega haar 12 saal mai ek baar hota h toh hum bi chalenge...pavitra snan ka mouka dubara mile ya na mile.....

Poonam—ji baba maine bi bus kitabo mai padha h sirf....

Chacha ja ab aram karle itna kaam mat kar nahi toh tere papa ko kya mu dikhaunga upar jake ...bolenge meri chori se itna kaam karwata tha...

Poonam—na baba ap jaise chacha chachi ho jiske pass unhe kabhi dhuk ho he nahi sakta h aur ap mere maa baba ho toh ek beti apne maa baap ki seva nahi karegi toh kiski karegi....

Chachi—aur jo choro se ladti h...wo...

Poonam—wo toh ulaj rahe the toh dhar diye ....2 kaan ke niche

Chachi—dekha.. aise toh ye apne pati ke bi maar degi

Chacha--- ha ha ha.....akhir beti kiski h...

Poonam—aur kya main na jane wali ap dono ko chod ke main toh ap dono ke sath he rahungi....



Night 11pm...



Shivani--- ji mam yes ....ha jaisalmer ka sappu supplier h wo agai delhi maal supply karta h .....

Sonali--- hmmm good job shivani

Shivani--- one thing mam they have planning for some thing big inhone bahut badi planning ki warna itne hathiyaar aur rdx kisliye mangwaye

Sonali--- matlb

Shivani--- mam ye dusri khep h ek pahle achuki h toh ap sochiye hathiyaaar toh india mai bi mil jate phir itni mehnat kyu...aisa kya h jismai ye bhari tabahyi macha sakte h....

Sonali--- hmm point toh h ok tum find out karo koyi clue aur sappu supplier ke pappu pe tharo ache se bakega wo jarur kaam ka ...main yanha pata karti hu aur jald he tumse milti hu.....



Chief so ....

Sonali--- sari information deti h..

Chief--- aisa kya h ....jiski ye planning kar sakte h itne bhari matra mai....



Ek secret place pe

Oye habibi pathan khus huva . ye toh car bilkul police gaadi jaisa lagta h aur ye wardi bi pura police jaisa he dikhta h...oye tum toh pathan ko Khus kar diya....

Vithal—ap hamare junior victer ke khass mehmaan ho apke liye jaan hajir h....bus ap thodi meri tarif kar dena .

Pathan--- oye ek baar ye kaam ho jaye hum tumko malamaal kardega...

Vithal—jarur hoga ....



Aj ke liye itna he ....

Zabardast update

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Lagta hai bade guru ji ki baat bhul gya tha raj, Unhone kaha tha ke dil ka prayog vha karna jaha sab apne ho or dimag ka prayog Har us jagah pr karna jaha apne visvash patra ke alava or bhi log ho...

Santy ho jata h lounda .....

Sunil ko shadow bnakr raj ne jo riper ke plan ka rape kiya hai vo padh kr anand aa gya bhai jabarjas

Dheere dhere sikh raha h par is baar acha kiya

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superb amazing update sandar lajvab
Rajeev ne Bilkul sahi point pakda hai ki jab raj ke pass pahuch gya saitan singh to Uski bahno tk bhi pahuch hi jayega... Jaha tk mujhe thoda sa dhyan hai aapne btaya tha ki saitan singh ka bhi boss hai koi Jise sirf Raj ki maut chahiye uske badle me vo saitan singh ko Raj ki property dilva dega...

Bilkul h ek boss jisai khass intrest h raj ke dada ji aur raj mai par wo main villian se oops kya likhne ja raha tha ap h na sab ugalwalete ho...

 

[Sadlover]

Update 89.....

Finding past—begins

alone feelings—Suruwaat....



After 2 days......

Sham ka samay tha aur Main ek hill ke top pe baitha huva tha....


mere samne suraj din bhar apni roshni se sabke jeevan ko roshan kar ke aram karne ke liye ja raha tha ......meri nighaye bus doobte suraj ko he dekh rahi thi jis ki dheemi halki roshni shanti de rahi thi...ek ajib sa sukun mil raha tha akele baith ke .....

Man mai vichar chal rahe the jinhe main khud nahi samaj pa raha tha....aur bus samne dekhe ja raha tha ek tak........suraj doob gaya tab mere dil se awaj ayi kya meri jindgi ke dhuk u he doobenge kabhi .....mera vaise bi koyi nahi h is duniya mai aur jo h wo bi paiso Ke liye marna chahte h ....aur sayad yahi kaaran mere maa baap ko marne ka raha hoga....par gareeb hona bi toh paap h richa bi toh isiliye dur hoti gayi thi mujse ....kabhi samajne ki kosis he nahi ki ....kaas ek baar viswas kar liya hota.... aj bi yaad h usne muje hawas ka bhukha kaha tha......richa agar main hawas ka bhukha hota toh tumhare sath toh sex nahi kiya tum jarur bahki par maine har baar roka.....tum hamesa kahti thi i trust you ...but tut gaya kuch he palo mai .. main samajta hu sab tumhari galti nahi h meri bi bahut galtiya h aur main ata tumhe manane bi kyoki aj bi main tumhe beintiha pyar karta hu....mera dil aj bi tumhe bahut yaad karta h....tum agar dubara sakal na dikhane wali baat na kahti toh jarur tumse milta aur tumhe manata par sayad mere jeevan mai tumhara sath itna he tha....main tumhe yaad kar bahut tadap liya hu ab ek nayi suruwat karunga .....ab tumhe dil ki gahrayiyo se nikalne ki puri kosis karunga tum mera adhura khawab he rah jaogi is janam mai .sabki tarah mera pyar bi adhura rah jayega...bus meri yahi duwa h tum hamesa khus raho.....miss you.... hamara pyar aj mere dil aur yado ki gahrayiyo mai dab gaya h hamesa ke liye ..........thodi dair u he baithne ke baad...main sunya ki awasta mai ho gaya janha na mera dil na dimag kuch kar par raha tha bus meri nazar samne ki taraf thi.....kuch dair baad mera phone ring hone laga....

Main--- Hello

Ye hello hello kya hota h bhai 5 hours ho gaye ....hum bhukhe baitha h ...ap 2 hours ka kahke gaye the ...

Main--- time dekh kar raat ke 9 baj gaye h ....main half hour mai aya....call cut....aur mere chahre pe muskaan agayi.



Dur .....



Ladki -richa hamesa tu yanha ati h ghumne aisa kyo....

Richa--- dil karta h mera ek sukun milta h yanha par yanha apnapan sa lagta

Ladki--- yaar achi jagah ghuma kar na pub mai chalte h aj raat dance masti karenge yanha ke pub mast h.

Richa--- dil nahi karta h mera ...Aur chalte huve road ke kinare baithe ek shaks jo gitar baza raha tha usai ek doller deti h ..aur uske pass khadi ho jati h

Ladki--- tu jab bi ati h isai 1 doller deti h aur yahi rahti h kafi dair aisa kyo...

Richa--- pata nahi bus main jab bi ati hu ye yanhi baitha milta h .....iske music mai ek ahsas h jo muje khichta h .....

Ladki--- tu aur teri soch chal ghar chalte h....

Richa tu chal main gitaar sunke ati hu....aur wo khadi hoke auro ke sath gitaar sunne lagti h..

Richa ka ye roj ka routine tha ...wo roj guitar sunti aur ek doller deti aur ghar ajatiiii.......

Aj bi wo behad dhayan se he sun rahi thi ..Richa itne dhayan se sunti thi ki usai ek sukun ek ahsas sa milta tha us dhuun mai usai aisa mahus hota tha ki wo usi ka dard bayan kar rahi h ...jab dil halka mahus hota wo wapas ghar ki taraf lout aati thi bus isi pal he dard kuch kam hota tha ab wo thoda bolti thi par ab bi wo ek kamre mai band hokar apne khayalo ki duniya mai chali jati ....jaise un khayalo mai koyi usai kisi se milne ka besabri se intezaar ho.... ...aur unhi khayalo mai samay bitati.....aj bi wo sapno ki duniya mai thi par uske chehre pe pareshani ke bhav the jissai uska chehra pasine se bhiga huva tha aur chehre pe dar aur pareshani ke bhav arahe aur ja rahe the ...aur wo dheere dheere dheere bol rahi thi nahi nahi nahi.......aur uski nind khul jati h.....uski ankho se ansuu beh nikalte h.....



Jaisalmer.......




Shivani--- fast fast

Kuch waqt baad

Sam village jo jaisalmer se 40 km ki duri par h apne dunes yani rait ke tilo aur tourism ke liye famus h wanha 2 open jeeb ka picha shivani police team ke sath kar rahi thi ....dono jeeb agai jake divied ho jati h...

Shivani--- left wali jeeb ka picha karo aur uske typer par fire karo....

Kafi dair ki masakat ke baad jeeb wale hath ajate h

Shivani---bahut ud liya ab tere pankh kutar du ya bolega

Admi--- chup raha ...

Ek gun fire sound aya aur sath he chillane ki awaj aur ek niche pada tadfadane laga ...

Shivani—tu bolega ya...iski trah tadfadta huva marega

Admi--- ha bolunga na ye saman delhi jana tha ye afganistaan se Pakistan ke raste bharat mai ata h....

Shivani--- wanha kisko dete ho

Admi--- ye muje nahi pata par yanha ye maal hum sappu supplier ko dete h jo agai bhejta h muje itna he pata maidam...Muje chod do...

Shivani--- chod dungi aur ye bata sappu pappu supplier kanha milega

Admi--- bikaner uska adda wanhi h border ke karib ..wo yanha ata rahta h ...

Shivani--- inspector ko ishara kar deti h azad kar do .....

Aur piche 2 gun fire sound ati h ...



Next day Morning...



Main--- ab tikh ho tum .....ghoom sakti ho

Manisha—yaar dr ne rest kaha tha letai rahne ko nahi kaha tha ...tum toh meri maa se bi bure ho is mamle mai....wo muje ghumne toh deti ..thoda bahut par tumne toh hilne he nahi diya upar se tumhari wo goliya......par aj pata nahi kaise maan gaye tum....

Main---Dr ne ok kaha h isliye... toh tikh h aj beauty ko bike se khuli hawa khilata hu ......ok ....aj school chalogi jao ready ho jao ..Isilye subhe jagaya h...

Manisha ke sath chal pada school manisha ko mere sath dekh ke janha sab ladkiya jal rahi thi ......toh ladko ke seene pe saanp ajgar sab lotpalate kha rahe the....class mai firse rounak agayi thi ab hum charo sath he baithe the

Aditiya—toh buddy kab ja rahe ho competition ke kiye start hone mai 5 din baki h ....

Main--- yaar maidam toh bus se bol rahi h but hum train se jayenge morning 8 baje chalti h ..aur dopahar ko chod degi din bhar rest aur agle din competition mai part leke wapas...

Aditiya rinky --- ye best rahega....... Yaar train ka safar bahut comfortable rahega .....

Aditiya—manisha tu dhayan rakhna....

Manisha--- main tikh hu aur ye rahega macho men sath mai...toh dhayan rakh lega

Rinky—kya karwayegi .....isai aisa ha ha ha ha ....

Janha hum hans rahe the toh koyi aisa bi tha jiske chehre se kuch aur he nazar araha tha .......jiski umid muje bi nahi thi kyoki main bi umid nahi kar sakta hu ki mera itna khatarnak roop dekhne ke baad koyi school se mujse dushmani karega par lagta h kuch toh raj h uska bi......

Main ghar par room mai leta tha aur gahri soch mai tha tab shweta ayi aur mere pass late gayi....

Shweta--- acha toh kya socha ja raha h ..

Main--- usai gale laga ke life ke bare mai

Shweta – jara muje bi batana

Main--- pata h shweta maine pichle kafi waqt mai itne logo ko mara h ki kabhi kabhi sapne mai bi khud ko khun ka pyasa dekhta hu....maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki mera jeevan aisa bi hoga ....janha mere apne muje marne wale honge....maine kabhi kisi se pyar ke alawa kuch nahi manga bachpan mai pyar ke liye tarsa bada huva toh ek ke sath jindgi jeene ke sapne sajaye aur usai thoda sa ajmaya toh wo gareeb samajke chod gayiii....meri zindgi mai he itni muskile kyo h....

Shweta--- sach bolu toh bhai apko chahne wale jayda h sabse pahle main ......jo ap par ankh band kar ke viswas karti h phir mamta kavita jinhe maine dekha nahi par muje pata h wo apko bahut chahti h.....phir sage bhai se bhadkar pyar karne wala bhai sunil.....uski barabari toh koyi nahi kar sakta h.....jo ap pe ane wale har khatre ko apne par le leta h.....aur deepika dii wo toh bus sabkuch apko manti h sayad he koyi din aisa ho jab apko yaad na kare....aur toh aur SP mam jo apko sayad like bi karti h mere mummy papa jo apko apna beta mantr h ....badepapa kaptaan aur mousi....aur one only Dada ji jinke sacrifies ke agai sabka pyar chota h aur kitne naam ginau ap batao bheema chacha... choti chachi... mana jindgi muskil h par apko chahne wale jayda h ...aur apko chahne wali bi hogi kahi toh hogi aur mere bhai ke liye bhagwan khud bhejega usai.....bilkul poonam ke chand jaisi hogi khubshurat apke jeevan mai Chand ki khubsoort roshni ki trah apke jeevan mai khusiya bhar degi....

Main--- sir ko chum kar love u so much my sweet sis..

Shweta--- bhai ayegi ....apki jindgi mai bahut bahut khusiya ....ayengi aur warna hum bhai bahan toh h he chill karenge no tension no fikar bus khusiya he khusiya...

Hum dono hamari he bate kar rahe the toh dur....Kanhi

Poonam oh poonam

Poonam—ayi chacha.....ayi....

Chacha--- tu itna kaam mat karwaya kar wo bachi h uske maa baap ko kya mu dikhaunga upar jake ...kya kahenge wo...

Chachi – main thodi he karwati hu wo khud karti h ..

Chacha--- sab pata h muje ...dekh meri beti h wo usai jara bi dukh huva kabhi toh tu samaj liyo muje jeete ji maar degi tu wo mere bhai bhabi ki akhiri nishani h unhone muje apne bete ke jaise pala tha jo ye sab h unki he mehnat ka...

Tabi poonam ajati h...

Chacha--- beti sans le le ab meri baat soon agle mahine koombh ka mela lagega haar 12 saal mai ek baar hota h toh hum bi chalenge...pavitra snan ka mouka dubara mile ya na mile.....

Poonam—ji baba maine bi bus kitabo mai padha h sirf....

Chacha ja ab aram karle itna kaam mat kar nahi toh tere papa ko kya mu dikhaunga upar jake ...bolenge meri chori se itna kaam karwata tha...

Poonam—na baba ap jaise chacha chachi ho jiske pass unhe kabhi dhuk ho he nahi sakta h aur ap mere maa baba ho toh ek beti apne maa baap ki seva nahi karegi toh kiski karegi....

Chachi—aur jo choro se ladti h...wo...

Poonam—wo toh ulaj rahe the toh dhar diye ....2 kaan ke niche

Chachi—dekha.. aise toh ye apne pati ke bi maar degi

Chacha--- ha ha ha.....akhir beti kiski h...

Poonam—aur kya main na jane wali ap dono ko chod ke main toh ap dono ke sath he rahungi....



Night 11pm...



Shivani--- ji mam yes ....ha jaisalmer ka sappu supplier h wo agai delhi maal supply karta h .....

Sonali--- hmmm good job shivani

Shivani--- one thing mam they have planning for some thing big inhone bahut badi planning ki warna itne hathiyaar aur rdx kisliye mangwaye

Sonali--- matlb

Shivani--- mam ye dusri khep h ek pahle achuki h toh ap sochiye hathiyaaar toh india mai bi mil jate phir itni mehnat kyu...aisa kya h jismai ye bhari tabahyi macha sakte h....

Sonali--- hmm point toh h ok tum find out karo koyi clue aur sappu supplier ke pappu pe tharo ache se bakega wo jarur kaam ka ...main yanha pata karti hu aur jald he tumse milti hu.....



Chief so ....

Sonali--- sari information deti h..

Chief--- aisa kya h ....jiski ye planning kar sakte h itne bhari matra mai....



Ek secret place pe

Oye habibi pathan khus huva . ye toh car bilkul police gaadi jaisa lagta h aur ye wardi bi pura police jaisa he dikhta h...oye tum toh pathan ko Khus kar diya....

Vithal—ap hamare junior victer ke khass mehmaan ho apke liye jaan hajir h....bus ap thodi meri tarif kar dena .

Pathan--- oye ek baar ye kaam ho jaye hum tumko malamaal kardega...

Vithal—jarur hoga ....



Aj ke liye itna he ....

The Great Sandeep Singh Nirwan....
Great update bhai keep it up you are too good man

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Rajni madam ko Uski bahan(sayad Suman) ne bta hi diya ki Raj ne hi bchaya tha use us raat, Jabki nirvana ne uske bare me baat karne se Mna kiya tha Pahle hi, Lagta hai yhi weak kadiya banegi raka or Antony ke samne...

Ha bataya tha par sayad rajni ab nahi batayegi ha agar aisi he galti dubara karta h toh future mai jarur pakda jayega

Raj ko Aaj ek surag mila hai jiske chalte Use pta chla ki uske parivar ko kaise mara gya tha isme yah btaya hai ki mare sirf 8-9 hi log the to Jo bache huye hai Unhi me se koi ek ya kuchh mile honge sadyantra me...

Ha ye wala part wakayi shandar hoga ....soch raha hu ismai ek suspence dal du par reader ko action aur thrill pasand h isliye daal nahi pa raha hu par wo wala update blender hoga.....

Raj ko manshik rup se majboot hone ki Bahut hi jyada jarurat hai bhai, use hmesha ye lekr chalna chahiye ki uska koi na koi ajij kisi bhi situation me mar sakta hai or uske Marne ke baad bhi vo apna santulan na khoye kyoki dushman ki sabse badi jeet Vahi hoti hai jb vo apne virodhi ka mental breakdown kr deta hai Jisse uske sochne samajhne ki shakti khatam ho jati hai or vo koi na koi gali kr deta hai, are Bhai ek ajij to mar gya Lekin dushman ne or bhi kai ajij logo ko pakadkr rakha hai unke liye bhi to sangharsh Karna hai na,

Yes ye weak h aur main ye xabhi bhai apke ilawa bi kafi reviews mai padhta hu jisai muje santusti milti h ki main sahi ja raha hu ...ye part bahut important h ki raj ko mentaly prepared rahna hoga...par uske sath itne quick problems arahi h ki wo aur aggressive hota ja raha h ki jo uske liye agai dikat dega....yakinan dikat dega...

isliye raj ko Har Tarah ki situation ke liye prepare rahna chahiye kyoki Vo adrisya dushman ke sath sath samajh ke dushman se bhi bhid rha hai same time me, to kya hi pta Kis tarah ka hamla hoga or Kis tarah ke log Kon marega or kab, Har situation har Samay or Har kisi se...

Pahla dushman ka idea killer se mil gaya h chacha ke roop mai isai ek baar toh mentally unstable hoga he ...par wo abhi ek khatre se anjaan h jo chot deke he jayega usai ...kahte h na gyn bato se nahi lato se ata h....

Are Ye kya likh diya bhai, Lagta hai ab nind aa rahi hai... Kuchh galat ho to khub jor se bolne ka Sayad nind khul jaye or Mai sudhar saku... wanna adde pr milne ka...
Raj ko aise bear ki botal lekr nhi baithna chahiye tha 1st time Usne apni bahno ke sath milkr pi thi Jisme kand hua tha fir to Delhi me pi thi or ab party me pi thi yha pr or Aaj fir lekr baith gya, kaha Pahle Yahi mna karta tha apni bahno ko or ab Dekho khud hi Ghar lakr pi rha hai, yah galat hai ek taraf vo anjan dushman jo supari liye baitha hai dusri taraf raka Antony or tisri taraf vo sayo ka picha kr rha hai Jo uske bachpan ke Katil hai,

Right lagta h is baar jayda he hurt ho gaya h raj apni maa par huve hamle se ki wo kyo kuch nahi kar paya par wo toh khud chota tha sayad ab uski umid tut gayi h ki uski maa zinda bi hogi isliye bahut tut gaya wo ..

unka koi bharosha nhi ki kab kaha se war karenge or yha Raj bhaiya hai Jo news sunkr hi vha se bhage chale gye bear lene or pite chale aaye, vo dushman thodi na ye dekhega ki Raj bhaiya abhi gam me hai to na hamla Karo Pahle unhe hosh me aa jane do, vo to hamla karega or maar ke chla jayega...
Sayad mera point samajh me aa gya ho...

Right but maa par huve hamle ki detail sunke wo bahut tut gaya kyoki ab usai pata h ki uski maa ki zinda rahne ki 5 percent he umid h pahle usai lagta tha sayad jinda ho ....par galti toh galti he usai har pal alert rahna hoga

Are yaar Lagta hai mai fir se nind me kuchh likh gya, dekh lena jo tumhare kaam ka ho padh lena or Jo na ho mere upar chilla kr fek kr marna Sayad nind khul jaye meri...

Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab

Ha ha ha hamesa sach he likhna chahiye xabhi bhai ap suruwat se sath ho isliye pata h jo likhoge writer ki bhalayi aur story behtrin banwane ke liye he likhoge

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Wahhh Riper ki to puri tarah se faad ke rakh di apne hero ne maja aa gaya. Wo soch raha tha ki khel uska hai lakin raj ke rahte aisa kabhi ho skta hai kya kabhi nahi. Raj ne use bata hi diya ki baap kon hai. Aur sweta ki himmat ki bhi daad deni hogi jo bina dare itni santi se baithi hui thi.

Hmm usai pata tha ki uske 2 bhai h bacha he lenge isliye jayda bi nahi boli taki dikat na ho....but riper ko solid dhoya

Quki wo bahut ache se janti hai ki Use kabhi kuch ho bhi nahi skta hai. Agr agar kuch hua use to Raj aur sunil jinhone ye kiya hoga unka maut se bhi bura haal karenge. Taki koi kabhi dubara Sweta ke upar hath dalne ki bhi nahi soch sake. Aur yaha Raj ki ek kamjori bhi show hui hai mere hisab se wo apne risto par shak nahi karta hai jb tak ki koi use puri tarah se prove na de.

Ha iska ek example jald ane wala h next update mai....is baar....apka yahi point dikhega weakness wala

Jo ki aage chal kar ek bahut badi Weakness ban sakti hai raj ki. Lakin ye baat acha hai ki abhi uske sath kuch log hai jo bilkul sahi sochte hai. Aur ab jab shaitaan chacha ke bare me pata chl gaya hai to ab unka no. Bhi lagta hai bahut jldi hi aane wala hai. Dekhe hai tab Raj kaise saja dega Quki ye 1st time hoga jab raj apne hi khoon ke riste ko marega.
At the end ek baar fir se kahunga bahut acha Update.

Ha jald he shaitan chacha ka number ayega ...par thoda nirale tarike se kyoki jo kiya h wo agar khud he ke sath ho toh maza he alag ata h ....abhi surendra h babita h .....
Thank you so much for your precious review

 

[Prince 143]

Nice update bhai

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

To riper babu ko 1 cr ki supari mili hai Raj ke sar ko kaat kr photo bhejne ke liye... Sayad raj ko us supari dene vale ka pta Chal jaye Yadi dimag lga kr kaam kre to or Yadi gusse me hi rha to kya hai ripar ko kaat pit kr fek dega or to kuchh pta Chal nhi payega...

He he he rip ripersilid lagegi

Nyi security add ki gyi thi purani bhi thi fir bhi rinky itne bade khatre ke baad bina kisi guard ke college ja rhi hai, are rajeev tumse to aisi ummid na thi bhai kam se kam Ghar se nikalne se pahle Apne baccho se yah to kah diya kr ki Pahle Samajhdaari dikhao fir kahi aage badho, btao madad karne gyi thi us scuty vale ko check karne, kya Pahle phone nhi kr sakti thi ambulance ke liye ye police ke liye, pr nhi Inhe to bs apni ajadi chahiye dimag nhi lgana kisi chij me, ye hi dekh le ki vo akeli ladki yha sunsan sadak me Yadi us gire huye bande ne kuchh kr diya to Kisse madad legi pr nhi pahuch gyi akele hi or bdha di raj ki mishkile... Sweta itna dar gyi ki itne sare hamle ke Bich bhai ko phone bhi na kr pai Vaise to bada Apne Aap ko jhasi ki Rani samajhti hai...
Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast

Ha ha ha rinky se thodi galti toh huvi actual female h ghabra gayi kyoki andaza bi nahi tha ki kidnap ki ya khatre ki aisi situation bi ho sakti h jabki usai samjaya huva tha par raj jab rajeev ke ghar gaya tabi sari planing kar di thi police ke admi har pal piche he the......matlb sab planing but kidnap huve ye galat huva...