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I have Only 90 days for competitive exam ...
Thats why story going on hold...for next 3 month from now....
But before going i m giving you a megha update related to past incidents that gives you important information about past which is really important for story....i hope you all will understand my situation ...
exam held in August first week or in second week ...so dont worry after that we will meet again with megha and ultra megha updates

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Finding past—begins

Thounderbolt flash and Thundering sound .....



SATURDAY..........

Morning main jab school pahucha tab aj strength thodi kam lagi sayad tufan etc ki wajah se ya thunderstorm ke ane ki pahle ki shanti thi aj asman mai badal gahre chaye huve the aur panchi bi kam he ud rahe the.....Jo ye samjhane ke liye kafi tha ki ye tufaan ke pahle ki shanti h.....Pura din u he bita mera 12 baj gaye the ....

Tabi kuch gadiya dehradun mai entere hoke alag rasto pe chali gayi aur school ki taraf ane ka rasta block karne lagi .....

Time 1.pm....

Ha bhai sare raste block kar diye h bhai ap ajao aur 4 bikes aur 2 black scorpio full rafter se school ki taraf ane lagi ....

Aditya – bhai wo tuje rajni maidam ne Bulaya........

Main--- ok bhai




Ab agaii

Main--- fir platkar sorry yaar main abhi ata hu rajni mam ne bulaya tha yaar bhul gaya tha wait karna ok phir chalte h sath mai tumhare papa se bi mil lunga....

Rinky – jaldi karna Thunder storm sir par h aur bjiliya bahut tez awaj gadgadahat kar rahi h kabhi bi storm hamre sir par hoga . kal Sunday h toh manisha bi mere ghar chal rahi h aj lanch mere yanha he karte h ..aur mousam jayda kharab ho toh mera yanha he ruk jana....

Main--- done ok wait main u gaya u aya....phir chalte h

Main andar chala gaya aur wo dono bahar ki aur chali gayi bahar thunderbolts ki sound bahut tez arahi thi

Rinky apni scooty ko leke manisha ke sath bhar gate ki taraf agayi aur side mai dono khadi hoke wait karne lagi

Manisha—Rinky tu is champoo ko like karti h na...

Rinky – dekh usai love etc se chid h...

Manisha – kyo

Rinky – pucha nahi aur meri kounsi ho jayegi mera papa ne ek he baat kahi jo karna h karo bus shadi hamari pasand se karna...so main enjoy karti hu life ko fully

Manisha—tab toh tune champoo sahi choose kiya h he he he

Rinky—meri chod jo tu khud usai ghurti rahti h aur jab uske ghar thi tab kyo ankhr fade dekhti rahti thi....




Abi unhe 5 minut he huve honge baat karte apas mai car aur bikes ki tez sound ane lagi kuch pal mai he 2 suv car aur 4 bikes tezi se school gate ke pass ayi aur drift karti huvi rukhi tyres ki tez ghasitne ki awaj se sab ruk gaye aur suv car ki taraf dekhne lage pahli suv mai se 6 dadi wale admi utare aur charo taraf dekhne lage aur dekhne ke baad unki najre jisai dhund rahi thi wo khadi dikhayi di aur rinky ki taraf bhadne lage security wale agai bhade unhe rokne toh unhe 4 gundo ne rok liya aur buri tarike se pitne lage baki 2 ne jake main gate ko band kar diya aur sath jo lovk laye the wo tala laga diya taki andar ki security wale bahar na ajaye phir dono rinky manisha ki taraf badhne lage ek ne photo nikali aur milayi aur bola confirm yahi h dusre ne rinky ke baal pakad liye rinky dard se chillayi chod do muje koun ho tum wo usai le jane ke liye khichte usai pahle he ek punch uske muu pe pada aur wo dard se bilbilata huva piche khisakte huve gir pada uska naak tut gaya tha..aur khun nikal ne laga . usai kuch samaj he nahi aya ki kya huva...jab usne samne dekha toh shock aur gusai se ankhe choudi ho gayi phir dusra banda agai rinky ko pakadne bhada toh uski chest pe ek kick lagi wo bi piche khisak gaya aur dusre ke pass ja ke gira... wo dono gusai se samne dekhne lage ......

Awaj--Itni jaldi nahi tumhari heemat kaise huvi mere rahte isai chune ki jao rinky police ko call karo ...madad lao...

Rinky ne pass mai dekha toh raju raman rafiq dikhe wo unke pass jake boli help karo please par un logo ki itni fati huvi thi ki wo kya he bolte wo toh bus muu fade un bhayankar gundo ko dekh rahe the kahte h na bato ke sher ye wahi the jo time ane pe gaand dikha dete h . kisi ne bi rinky ki madad nahi ki Phir dono gunde wapas khade huve aur marne gaye toh samne se 2 round kick padi dono phir gir gaye jab charo gunde jo gaurds ko pit rahe the unhone piche dekha toh unke dono sathi jameen pe pade the aur jab marne wale ki taraf dekha to ek sath bol pade are ye toh ladki h dusra bola garam h isai bi le chalenge..teesra ha aj bhai khus ho jayenge ek ke sath ek free.... Jao re usai pakad Lao hum isai leke ate h...

Manisha—dum h toh le ja ke dikha isi din ke liye Karate mai black belt liya tha ....ladki koyi khilona nahi hawas bhujane ka...aj tumahari wo halat karungi ki dubara har ladki mai maa dikhegi khud ki

Par wo bi kya kar sakti 4 ek sath tut pade aur 2 niche gire huve the wo bi khade ho gaye ek rinky ko lane gaya aur ek manisha pe tut pada par usne bi heemat nahi hari aur ladti rahi wo char marte toh 2 ye bi kaske marte par ladki thi saririk takat kam thi toh haarne lagi tabi aditiya bike khadi karke bheed ko dhakelta huva bhagta huva aya aur 2 gundo ko kamar se pakadkar piche dhakelte huve le gaya aur dhakka de diya jisai wo teeno he gir gaye aur wo bi bheed gaya..ab 2 ke mukable 6 the phir bikes wale bi utar kar agaye kyoki time kam tha inke pass 2 jano ne 6 ko ek baar ke liye toh rok he liya tha aur udhar rinky sabse help mang rahi thi aur kisi ka phone leke apne papa ko bi call mila di thi aur phir dusri car ka fatak bi khul gaya usmai se john chalta huva aya uski ankhe gusai se bhari huvi thi aur aditiya jo lad raha tha uski body pe ek minut mai khub sare punch kar diye aditya udata huva piche gira aur dubara khada nahi huva...

school ke andar Mere phone brabar vibrate ho raha tha par maidam se baat karne ke kaaran maine avoid kiya....

Rajni mam--- ok ye detail sambhal ke rakhna ismai aj tak har saal jitne questions puche gaye h wo h aur sath mai patterns h jisai tumhe samjne mai asani hogi ki kis trah ke questions ayenge

Main--- bilkul mam ap befikra rahiye hum apka naam niche nahi hone denge

Rajni—Raj is competition ko jitna he jitna h




Bahar

Manisha ke pass john jake teri ye garmi muje mere bister mai dikhana tu mere layak h ek dum kadak.... yakin kar teri puri garmi nikalunga

Manisha – jo maar se ghayal ho gayi thi buri tarah boli tu ja be hinjde meri garmi tere bus ki nahi h. apne ap ko mard samjta h tabi itne admi leke aya h ek ladki ko uthane dum hota toh akele ladta samja...

John—chodo re aja tu bi karle man ki abhi time h mere pass dekh leta hu kitna dum h

Idhar gate ke pass rinki usai kholne ki kosis kar rahi thi aur raj raj chill rahi thi usne sab try kar liya tha police call janha se bi umeed ki ja sakti thi aur akhiri umid uski ab raj se thi jisai wo awaj laga rahi thi but uski awaj ka usai koyi jawab nahi mil raha tha .

Idhar manisha fighting ki position mai khadi ho gayi jiska chahra khun se sana huva tha aur uchal kar john ke mu pe kick mari phir uske pait mai

John – bus itna he dum

Manisha ne ek sath kayi punch john ke muu pait pe mare par usai koyi fark nahi pada wo lagatar marti rahi par john tuss se mas nahi huva ....

John—meri power dekhegi ye dekh meri power aur ek mukka manisha ke seene pe mara aur mainsha udti huvi school ki deewar se takrayi uske muu se khoon bahar agaya tabi bheed ko chirta huva rajeev aya aur ek jordar punch john ko mara aur john piche kayi kadam khisak gaya....

Rinky—papa mere dost papa mere dost....inhone kya kar diya mere dosto ko kahke foot foot ke rone lagi

Rajeev ek jigar wala banda tha par beti ke ansuu ne aj uske gusai ko aur bhadka diya tha aur sidha bina kisi planing ke bina kisi hathiyaar ke bheedne agaya apni beti ke liye...

School ke andar

Main--- dont worry mam ye competition hum he jitenge its promise mam dont worry hum achi taiyari kar rahe h aur kal bi sath he honge....aur rinky ke ghar he honge toh ap tension free rahiye....

Rajni—good meri naak mat katwana ab jao Thunder storm kabhi bhi suru ho sakta h

Tabhi bahut tez bijli ki gadgadane ki awaj ayi ...mera dil ghabrane laga ..

Main--- mam main jata hu late ho jayega rinky aur manisha aditya mera wait kar rahe h

Rajni—go Raj

Main--- mam bi jaldi chale jana ....aur bahar akar phone dekha toh kafi missed call thi maine wapas kiya hello koun bol raha apne call kiya tha

Samne se--- jo maine suna meri ankhe lal hone lagi aur suru hogaya Thunderstorm Thunderbolts ke sath bijiliya gadgadahat karne lagii

Idhar bahar

Rajeev---tumhe aj koyi nahi bacha sakta h ye kahkar bhid gaya rajeev akele sab se jabardast ladayi ho rahi thi wo 5 marte toh rajeev bi ek solid marta par wo sare 17 jane the jinke samne uska tikna muskil tha

John – maan gaya tu jigar wala h jo mout ke mu mai bi heemat dikha raha h par aj tuje koyi nahi bacha sakta h bhagwan bi nahi kyo ki main shaitan ka bhakt hu ha ha ha ..

Rajeev--- tum maroge bahut buri maut maroge tere us shaitan pe bhagwan hamesa bhari pada h ....kuttai pahle toh tu he marega aur dheere se khada hone laga...phir main

John—ha ha ha itni jaldi nahi pahle tu raka ke maal ke bare mai batayega ....phir hum teri beti ko tere samne chodenge phir tuje marenge ..

Rajeev--- main maal jala chuka hu.. ek he baat kitni baar batau tumhe ...

John—tu aise nahi manega dekh teri wajah us ladki ki jaan jayegi...kya tu ye dekh payega s....maar do us ladki ko...taki isai pata lag jaye ki humse jhut bolne pe kya hota h .. abhi bhi wat h bak de sab...

Ek...chaku leke manisha ki taraf chal diya manisha jo rinky ke sahre baithi thi uski halat hilne jaisi bi nahi thi ....wo sirf apni maut ko ata dekh rahi thi...jo uski taraf pal pal chalti arahi thi jaise he gunde ne waar kiya manisha ne apni ankhe band karli

Ek bahut tez bijli niche giri aur kadkad kad kad ki awaj ke badh bhadam ki awaj huvi is tez awaj se manisha ne ankhe kholi toh apne samne ek ek shaks khada jiski pith he usai dikh rahi thi usai laga jaise wo usai janti h.asaman mai bijliyo ne tandav machana suru kar diya jaise ab wo bi taiyar thi jalane ko manisha ne agai dekha toh wo admi car ke andar dhansa huva tha mar gaya tha wo...

Rinky— rote huve Raj dekho na inhone manisha ko kya kar diya...h

Main--- palatkar manisa ko dekha toh mere andar ka Nirwana gusai se tandav karne laga bahar ane ko kyoki wo sab dekh sakta h par kisi ladki ko khun mai nahi aur wo toh uski dost h..meri laal ankho se ek bund ansu bahar gir gaya ...aur Raj so gaya aur jisai nahi ana tha wo bahar agaya aur usai bahut gusa araha tha....

Main--- manisha ki taraf dhek ke bola kuch bi ho jaye ankhe khuli rakhna tabi samne ek se bhagta huva aya main dekhti rahna ..tere ek ek khun ki boond ka...aur mud kar piche se arahe ko chest mai punch mara wo jaminpe ghasit ta huva piche car se takraya aur khun fenkta huva mar gaya main phir bola tere har jhakhm ka heesab denge dekhti rahna rinky isai jagaya rakhna .... Dekh manisha dekh phir dusra bhagta huva maine bina ruke uski puri body mai khubsare mukke mare aur side hata toh sidha late gaya niche phir ek aur aya maine usai ek hath se gala pakad ke upar utha liya aur uthaye huve he bhagke school ki deewar pe de mara uska sir he fat gaya.. main manisha 3 gaye bus dekhti ja manisha ankhe khole muje he dekh rahi thi aur yahi haal sabka tha raman raju rafiq ka bi aur baki sabka bi unke muu ankhe badi ho rakhi thi..

Main--- manisha ek ke badle hajar ye dubara kisi ladki ko chunne layak nahi rahenge dekh inhi hath se chuva tha na aur ek gunda jo chaku marna chahta tha uske hath ko pakad liya aur chakuu chinkar uske pure hath mai jagah jagah ghop diya aur phir dusre hath mai bi aur phir uski jhang mai ghop diya.....phir uske hath tod phir dusra hath toda aur utha ke niche patak diya..

Rajeev jo niche gira huva tha wo dheere dheere uthkar rinky ke pass gaya

Rajeev--- beti tum tikh ho na

Rinky – ha papa main tikh hu par meri dost

Rajeev--- rinky ne rinky ko check kiya phir ye tikh ho jayegi beti tum isai kaise janti ho ..

Rinky—he is my friend ....par matlb ap bi isai jante ho

Rajeev--- yes he is dengerous ye aur iska dost bahut powerfull background se

Rinky—dost

Rajeev--- yes inke ek call se minister Sp sab bhagne lagte h muje nahi pata koun h ye but ab hum safe h par ye akela kyo h...aur ye yanha padhne kyo aya h...

Rinky manisha shock se muje dekhne lagi main idhar dus ki cheerfadh kar chuka tha aur samne ek ko kick pe kick mare ja raha tha aur har kick ke sath wo muu se khun fenk raha tha...phir ek ke back kick di aur usko dusre ko utha ke road pe patka aur niche gire huve ke muu pe laat di upar bijiliya kadak rahi thi tandav kar rahi thi aur idhar niche main..

Main--- aj tum afsouse karoge ki kyo paida huve aur huve toh huve mere samne kyo aye aye aur marne arahe admi ke dono pair pe kick mari aur phir jabde pe ek mukka udta huva piche gira

John—bus bahut huva tera

Rinky chilla kar isine mara raj manisha ko.....

Main--- bahut shock h na mardangi dikhane ka wo ladki hoke tum jaise hinjado se bhid gayi madarchod lakadbhage tut pade uspe aj tume batata hu sher kya karta h ...Aur di bhag ke john ki chest pe. Ghutne ki main uske upar ghutno ke bal baithke ghasit ta huva leke gaya aur ghasit te huve he uske muu pe kayi punch diye .....aur hat gaya...

Wo bil bilata huva khada huva wo marne aya toh jhuk kar uske hath ke war ko dodge kiya aur ghum ghum ke usko har heesai pe angeenant punch mare ki sala sidhe niche gir pada.....

Main usai ghasit ke manisha ke pass le gaya udhar aditiya bi hosh mai agaya tha aur wo bi ye sab dhek raha tha...

Main--- pata h manisha mere yanha kya karta hu main injaiso ka ....manisha muje dekhne lagi main inke har ang ko kaat deta hu phir jinda chod deta hu tadapne ko taki cheel gidh inko jinda noch noch ke khaye.. phir john ke hath tod diye wo chikta raha ...main chikh teri chikh muje sukun deni chahiye h....aur chikh....phir uski kalayi tod di wo gaand faad chilata raha main manisha ye hu main isiliye mai voilence avoid karta hu par mere dosto pe koyi hath lagaye toh main phir john ki dono hatho ki ungliya tod di aur ek pair bi tod diya....john behose ho gaya phir uske dimag par marne laga ab tu kabhi kisi ko hath nahi laga payega...

Main--- isiliye manisha rinky nahi bolti thi kuch becouse he know me aur rinky ke father ki taraf dekhkar yes us din wo maine kiya tha mr Rajeev kumar main he tha wo ......
main main sirf main he tha..


jo bi kisi ladki aurat ki ijjat pe hath dalega uska yahi hoga .....



Tabi kafi gadiyo ki awaj sunayi dene lagi muje maine dhanyan se dekha toh ek gadiyo ka kafila ata huva nazar aya dur



Main uth kar ek car ki roof pe jake khada ho gaya ...aur upar dekhkar bola lagta h aj apko bi gussa arah h ...ap apna gusa shant karo main apna



Aj ke liye itna he ......
Awesome jabardast fadu superb shandar update bhai tarif ke liye shabd kam jayenge is update ke liye par bhai sultan log bhi aane wale the na yaha ha yaad aaya sultan ko to shayad jhon ne raste me uljha diya hoga ab uski hi bari hogi aage manisha bhi achchhi fight kar rahi thi waiting for next update
 

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Finding past---- begins

Peace before ---Thunderbolts




Main apni udhed bhun mai he itna kho gaya tha ki shweta wapas bi agayi thi ....par usne muje kuch bola nahi....bus meri taraf dekhti rahi aur main bus soch raha tha ki last time xabhi sir sunil Aag sir sonali thi toh main lad paya tha par main har baar toh sabko apne pass nahi rakh sakta hu na ......isliye is baar muje akele he bhidna hoga.......par main sabke samne agaya toh phir khatra jayda ho jayega hmm yahi sahi rahega ki shweta aur mera reletion open nahi ho..school mai... Wo anjaan he bane rahe .....par abhi kuch clear bi toh nahi ho raha h ki kab karenge wo harkat..par agar aye toh marenge jald he sultan ki khabar mil jaye sabse pahle usai he kaatna h....

Phir ek awaj ne muje meri soch se bahar nikala ....

Rinky—hum ja rahe h ok bye

Manisha—bye school milte h...

Main--- request h mere aur shweta ke reletion ke bare mai bhulkar bi mat bataana kisi ko bi...

Dono—confuse hoke dekhne lagi phir ok nahi batayenge.....

Dono ke jane ke baad main khada hota hu toh shweta muje dekh rahi thi aur main usai dekh muskara deta hu ...

Main--- naha le main bi naha leta hu phir nashta taiyar karwata hu...

Shweta--- andar jake ek call karti h aur kafi dair baat karti h...aur call rakh kar khudse he bolti h bhai ap sabki fikar karte ho aur muje apki bahut fikar h main apko kisi bi haal mai tension mai nahi dekh sakti hu love u bhai.......




In school....



Main--- aditiya ek baat bata bhai

Aditiya-- puch na tuje kabse permission ki jarurat aa padi bhai .....

Main--- tuje car drive karni ati h kya ache se...

Aditiya – ha bhai ati h aur ache se ati h hariyana se hu tracter bi chala leta hu toh car kya h aur musibat aye toh ek 2 se bhid bi sakta hu kisaan ka beta hu.....

Main--- good aur tuje hacking bi ati hogi phir jab tu itna bada computer jenious h toh....

Aditiya—dekh Raj tu kya chahta h muje pata nahi h but main itna samaj sakta hu tu ek acha insan h bol kya karwana chahta h...Saaf saaf bola kar....

Main--- school ke bahar ke sare camero ka live video pe nazar chahta hu .....

Aditiya—simple h bhai bus half hour de main kar deta hu par kyo chahta h khair chod main kar dunga

Main--- tikh h is phone mai install kar dena software taki main live dekh saku... Aur thanks bro.....




Toh udhar sultan Nanital se dehradun ke liye nikal gaya tha 300 km ana tha usai toh raat ho jani thi pahunchte pahunchte....

Sultan—sittu ek kaam kar apne bando ko sabko raat ko milne ko bol de...taki raat ko puri baat sabko clear ho jaye

Sittu --- ji bhai bol diya tha par dubara bol deta hu...

Sultan—aur apne bande rajeev pe nazar rakhe h na ....taki koyi chuk na ho pata laga beti ko bheje he nahi betichod ne....

Sittu—bhai usai bi maar kyo nahi dete ho ...usne bahut pareshan kiya h Raka bhai ko ...samne se toh dosti ka hath aur piche se hamesa nuksaan karta aya h ...

Sultan—uski beti ko uthake jab Raka bhai ke pass bhejenge aur jab uski beti uske samne chudegi tab ..pata chalega usai jab wo tadpega jaise hum tadap rahe h....aur sab bhokne ke baad maar denge... bus kal kal din aur h .. tu ek baar aur Sp aur area ke inspecter se baat kar liyo....mc bakchodi na kare...

Sittu—ji bhai main abhi sab se baat kar leta hu....

Sultan – bus phir raka bhai ke liye loundiya uthani baki rah jayengi.. la pudiya de bc tension se nasha utar gaya pura




Dehradun ke ek hotel ki roof se jo school se thodi duri pe thi wanha se ...ek admi durbin se kisi ko dekh raha hota h

Hmmm toh ye h wo jisai marna h Sali duniya bi badi kamini h paiso ke lalach mai apno ko he marwa deti h bechara abi toh jawani ayi h iske ....aur jawani puri ane se pahle he mar jayega isai school mai padhne wale ke liye ek cr ki supari ha ha ha aur ye iske sath toh mast jawaniya ghum rahi h inhi mai se ek utha lu kya .... aur phone laga kar kahta h target mil gaya h jald he kaam nipta ke phone karta hu....aur call cut karke dehradun mai toh beauti he bahut h kyo na chakh li jaye pahle kaam se 2 din enjoy karta hu phir maarunga isai....aur nikal jata h pub ki taraf....




Raju--- or champuuu bada ghum raha h dono ke sath phir coller pakadke sale lagta h dena he padega tuje laat ghusai aise toh na manne wala h tu....

Raman--- chod wo dekh dono arahi h dekh liya toh bc sakal tak na dekhengi apni isai kal dekhenge chutti ke baad beta tu pitega kal teri gaand todunga ache se....

Phir rinky aur manisha pass ake ye tumhe phir tang kar rahe the..

Main--- ab school ki 2 top beauty unhe chod mere sath baat karengi toh jalegi na upar se science wali ladkiya shweta ki vajah se piche lagi rahti h wo alag he toh tum dono batao ye hoga nahi toh kya hoga...

Manisha—ha ha ha very funny tum toh prince charm thare na ladkiyo ke jo tumhre piche padi h jayada sapne mat lo chalo....

Rinky—lol ....waise thoda style mai rahe toh prince he lagega...




“Akhir tum phone kyo nahi uthate ho problem kya h tumahari .... nahi dekha mera call kyo nahi dekha kya kaha busy the ok honge busy tum maan liya phir wapas kyo nahi kiya bahut pankh nikal aye h tumhare wanha jake kabse pyar jatati arahi hu wo tumse dekha nahi jata h aur wanha tume nayi chudailo ke sath udna h sare pankh kaat dungii main.jo dubara muje call nahi kiya ya mera phone nahi uthaya toh”

Havaldar—maidam sathiya gayi h kya jo akele he baat kar rahi h....

Dusra havaldaar --- maidam kal se he utpatang harkat kar rahi par aj charam par h tea mangati h aur pina bhul jati h phir dant ti h ki thandi kyo laye goli maar dungi...aj puri paagla ho gayi h aj toh bhagwan he bachaye....

Havaldar—aj subhe se sabki le rakhi h khaskar wi bechare jo torture room mai h ek ke toh pichwade mai danda he ghusaid diya h agar aisa raha toh ye sherni aj kisi ko nahi bakhsegi.......dekh dekh wo abi bi apne ap se he baat kar rahi h kisak le uske khisakne se pahle...dekh liya toh pata nahi kanha ki baat kanha le jayegi....




“ tum wanha padhne gaye the apne past ke raj janne gaye the na ki raas lila karne 2 chudailo ke sath padhayi raat bhar aisi kya emergency agayi thi un chudailo ke sath akele padhne ki tum dekhte jao jaan se maar dungi unko toh main koyi saboot nahi milega...”



Sonali subhe se he akele yahi sab badbada rahi thi ki Raj ko aise dantegi waise dantegi.sach he kahte h sab pyar hota he aisa h . kal shweta se baat karne ke baad se he wo aisa behave kar rahi thi...aur uske isi behaviour se kayiyo ki lag gayi thi.....wo Raj ko dantne ki taiyari karti par phone hath mai leke call nahi kar pati ........

Chief --- room mai aake every thing is fine sonali

Sonali—hadbadakar khadi hoke ya ya absolutely fine sir absolutely fine koyi bi toh dikat nahi h.sab tikh..koyi dikat nahi h.kuch kaam tha..

Chief---sonali ko dhayan se dekh kar nahi koyi kaam nahi tha wo iskiye pucha tum kal se yanhi ho...sayad tumhe ek achi nind leni chahiye

Sonali--- acha main toh bhul he gayi thi ..ok main ghar jati hu aur nind leti hu phir man mai woh sone de na tab na ab ye nayi kutiya pata nahi koun aagayi h aur kadam bhada deti h jane ke liye

Chief--- tumne jis heesab se raj ke bare mai bataya tha ab tak toh aisa nahi huva h...

Sonali--- ke expression turant change ho jate h bina piche mude tufaan jab ata h na sir tab kuch pal ke liye sab kuch shant ho jata h wo bi aisa he chote mote kaam usai raas nahi ate h jab wo karega toh usai jagda nahi kaand kahenge jisai ache acho ki gaan.....sorry sir ....fat jayegiii usai tab koyi nahi sambhal sakta sivaye uske jo uska khass ho warna wo sab cheerfaad kar deta h uske andar jo daba h bus wo bahar nahi ana chahiye h apne nahi maine dekha h ye shanti jo dikh rahi h maut ki shanti h... ....




Idhar School se jab main ghar pahucha toh samne madhu mam aur shweta khana set kar rahe the

Madhu—are late ho gaye ho ajao hum wait karte h....

Main fresh hoke aya toh news chal rahi....

Ancher—mousam vibhag ne chetawani jari kari h ki bangal ki khadi se jo tufaan utha tha wo shaniwar ko Up ko paar karte huve ab uttarakhand mai takrayega isiliye sabi surakhsit rahe kisi dur jagah pe na jaye ....aj mousam ki jaankari mai itna he.... Surakhsit rahe.

Madhu—kal school se jaldi ghar ajayenge babuji akele honge aur tufaan bi asakta h...

Main--- ha sahi rahega shweta tu bi mam ke sath unke ghar he rook jana jab tak main na au ok...

Shweta--- he he he main bachi nahi hu 18 ki ho gayi hu ye toh papa ke transfer ke chakkaro ne muje late kar rakha h warna college mai hoti mai abhi aye bade muje samjhane huuuuunnhhh.....

Madhu muskara kar rah gayi...aur lunch khatm karne ke baad chali gayi ...aur main bi sofe pe baitha school ki outside ki videos dekhne laga muje kuch nahi mila aur main nikal gaya library old news nikalne ke liye.....main abhi news padh he raha tha ki ek ladki mere samne books leke baith gayi maine usai notice nahi kiya but usne kiya aur uske chahre ka rang badalne laga wo dono hath hilane lagi par bol nahi pa rahi thi excitement ke karan

Main--- muje kuch ajeeb sa mahsus huva aur samne dekha toh wo he ladki thi jisai maine bachaya

Wo--- hihihi hi hi hi

Main--- dheere se baat karo library h ....

Wo—oh my god oh my god main kya karu i m so excited... Oh my god my saviour my god.....yes yes

Main--- cool down take a deep breath 5 times pahle toh nahi dekha tumhe kabhi ...

Wo—lambi sanse lekar main afternun mai college se direct yanha ati hu padhne job ki try kar rahi hu taki agai bhadh saku...

Main--- kya kar rahi ho education mai i mean subject course etc




Wo—Bba kar rahi hu muje di ne he pala h sara kharcha unhone he uthaya h abhi bi wo he bharti h unke 2 bache h unki fees toh main bi unki help karna chahti hu wo batati nahi h but main sab samajti hu...

Main---ok ok good tum bahut achi ladki ho main tumhari help karunga job dundhne mai tumhe ek kaam karna h mera ...

Wo – bolo na main jarur karungi apke liye kuch bi

Maine phir usai sari detail batayi aur in years ke news pepars mai se chantane ko bol diya....by the way your name

Wo—suman....




Main--- thank you miss suman isai judi koyi bi news pepar tum muje isi waqt dhund ke de dena main 100 percent tumhari job ka arrangement kar dunga ok main yanha isi time ata rahta hu jald mulakat hogi

Suman- dheere se thank you nirwana sir

Main--- sss sabko batana jaruri h .....ap news pepar se info.nikalo aur apni study mat chodna ok tc bye...main sab arrange kar dunga dont worry....




Sultan—sittu sab agaye na

Sittu—ji bhai

Sultan—kuch dair baad kaan kholke chahe gaand kholke jisai sune wo sab ched khol lo uthana sirf is loundiya ko h ye uski photo h dhayan se dekh lo .... aur wanha security wale honge unhe tum 10 jane sambhal lena aur baki bache huve nighrani rakhna ek nirwaana naam ka mere piche pada h wo bi asakta h...toh usai tum log nipta lena ....koyi gun leke nahi jayega warna bawal ho jayega koyi firing wiring nahi aasan kaam h sirf uthana h samje. bus jao uthao car mai dalk aur ajao ....koyi faltu back chodi nahi 2 baje chuutti hogi hum 2.05 baje pahuch jayenge samje .

Jiii bhaiii

Sultan—jao bhosdiko kam pina taki kal hosh mai raho warna tumahri ma chodunga...

Sittu—bhai kal ke baad apka naam pure uttrakhan ke chokre log mai famous ho jayega....aur raka bhai bi khus ho jayenge

Sultan ke chehre pe lambi muskarahat agayi.....jaise usne koyi sapna sach hote dekh liya ho ....




Hutiye tu tikh h na sale kuttai mu mai kya le rakha jo phone nahi hota tujse

Main--- are main tikh hu tu phirlugayi banne ki kosis karne laga h

Sunil--- koyi dikat toh nahi h na aur ladke bheju kya safety ke liye

Main--- ud mat chutiya business kya sambhalne laga bada ban gaya h ....par teri yaad ati h yaar bahut.

Sunil--- abhi ajau tu toh ane se raha....

Main--- nahi tu business sikh dadaji ne aur uncle ne soch ke he kuch kiya hoga main yanha sambhal lunga

Sunil--- tikh h dhayan rakhna khud ka bi aur us chudail ka bi.....

Main--- ha bhai tu bi dhayan rakhna jald milte h

Sunil--- ha. Bahut jald...






SATURDAY..........

Morning main jab school pahucha tab aj strength thidi kam lagi sayad tufan etc ki wajah se ya thunderstorm ke ane ki pahle ki shanti thi aj asman mai badal gahre chaye huve the aur panchi bi kam he ud rahe the.....Jo ye samjhane ke liye kafi tha ki ye tufaan ke pahle ki shanti h.....Pura din u he bita mera 12 baj gaye the ....

Tabi kuch gadiya dehradun mai entere hoke alag rasto pe chali gayi aur school ki taraf ane ka rasta block karne lagi .....

Time 1.pm....

Ha bhai sare raste block kar diye h bhai ap ajao aur 4 bikes aur 2 black scorpio full rafter se school ki taraf ane lagi ....aur asman mai bijliyo ki flashes dikhne lagi...

Aditya – bhai wo tuje rajni maidam ne Bulaya........

Main--- ok bhai




Aj ke liye itna he..
Bohott hi ache tarike se saare scenes ko imagine kkrwaya apne jo padhte hi dimag me ubhar aarahi thi aur baat kre suman ki to mughe laga hi tha ki koi n koi milega jarur jo raj ki iss purane information nikalne me help krega jo ki raj ke maata pita se related hogi ki uss samay kya hua tha kuch to newspaper me aaya hi hoga jo sab ghatna ko saaamne ubhar kr laayegi aur ab aate hai thunderbolt or to wo to agle Update 81 me dekhne ko milega hi ki asal me hota hai kya and ab aate hai Sunil pr to usse sayad se pata hi nhi ye sab ke baare me aur Shweta ne jisse phone krke bataya hai wo saayad raj ke dadaji hai may be ab dekhte hai aage kya hota hai and Update bohot jyada umdaa tha kyunki isme agle update ke liye suspence jo create kiya hua tha..........
 

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Update 81

Finding past—begins

Thounderbolt flash and Thundering sound .....



SATURDAY..........

Morning main jab school pahucha tab aj strength thodi kam lagi sayad tufan etc ki wajah se ya thunderstorm ke ane ki pahle ki shanti thi aj asman mai badal gahre chaye huve the aur panchi bi kam he ud rahe the.....Jo ye samjhane ke liye kafi tha ki ye tufaan ke pahle ki shanti h.....Pura din u he bita mera 12 baj gaye the ....

Tabi kuch gadiya dehradun mai entere hoke alag rasto pe chali gayi aur school ki taraf ane ka rasta block karne lagi .....

Time 1.pm....

Ha bhai sare raste block kar diye h bhai ap ajao aur 4 bikes aur 2 black scorpio full rafter se school ki taraf ane lagi ....

Aditya – bhai wo tuje rajni maidam ne Bulaya........

Main--- ok bhai




Ab agaii

Main--- fir platkar sorry yaar main abhi ata hu rajni mam ne bulaya tha yaar bhul gaya tha wait karna ok phir chalte h sath mai tumhare papa se bi mil lunga....

Rinky – jaldi karna Thunder storm sir par h aur bjiliya bahut tez awaj gadgadahat kar rahi h kabhi bi storm hamre sir par hoga . kal Sunday h toh manisha bi mere ghar chal rahi h aj lanch mere yanha he karte h ..aur mousam jayda kharab ho toh mera yanha he ruk jana....

Main--- done ok wait main u gaya u aya....phir chalte h

Main andar chala gaya aur wo dono bahar ki aur chali gayi bahar thunderbolts ki sound bahut tez arahi thi

Rinky apni scooty ko leke manisha ke sath bhar gate ki taraf agayi aur side mai dono khadi hoke wait karne lagi

Manisha—Rinky tu is champoo ko like karti h na...

Rinky – dekh usai love etc se chid h...

Manisha – kyo

Rinky – pucha nahi aur meri kounsi ho jayegi mera papa ne ek he baat kahi jo karna h karo bus shadi hamari pasand se karna...so main enjoy karti hu life ko fully

Manisha—tab toh tune champoo sahi choose kiya h he he he

Rinky—meri chod jo tu khud usai ghurti rahti h aur jab uske ghar thi tab kyo ankhr fade dekhti rahti thi....




Abi unhe 5 minut he huve honge baat karte apas mai car aur bikes ki tez sound ane lagi kuch pal mai he 2 suv car aur 4 bikes tezi se school gate ke pass ayi aur drift karti huvi rukhi tyres ki tez ghasitne ki awaj se sab ruk gaye aur suv car ki taraf dekhne lage pahli suv mai se 6 dadi wale admi utare aur charo taraf dekhne lage aur dekhne ke baad unki najre jisai dhund rahi thi wo khadi dikhayi di aur rinky ki taraf bhadne lage security wale agai bhade unhe rokne toh unhe 4 gundo ne rok liya aur buri tarike se pitne lage baki 2 ne jake main gate ko band kar diya aur sath jo lovk laye the wo tala laga diya taki andar ki security wale bahar na ajaye phir dono rinky manisha ki taraf badhne lage ek ne photo nikali aur milayi aur bola confirm yahi h dusre ne rinky ke baal pakad liye rinky dard se chillayi chod do muje koun ho tum wo usai le jane ke liye khichte usai pahle he ek punch uske muu pe pada aur wo dard se bilbilata huva piche khisakte huve gir pada uska naak tut gaya tha..aur khun nikal ne laga . usai kuch samaj he nahi aya ki kya huva...jab usne samne dekha toh shock aur gusai se ankhe choudi ho gayi phir dusra banda agai rinky ko pakadne bhada toh uski chest pe ek kick lagi wo bi piche khisak gaya aur dusre ke pass ja ke gira... wo dono gusai se samne dekhne lage ......

Awaj--Itni jaldi nahi tumhari heemat kaise huvi mere rahte isai chune ki jao rinky police ko call karo ...madad lao...

Rinky ne pass mai dekha toh raju raman rafiq dikhe wo unke pass jake boli help karo please par un logo ki itni fati huvi thi ki wo kya he bolte wo toh bus muu fade un bhayankar gundo ko dekh rahe the kahte h na bato ke sher ye wahi the jo time ane pe gaand dikha dete h . kisi ne bi rinky ki madad nahi ki Phir dono gunde wapas khade huve aur marne gaye toh samne se 2 round kick padi dono phir gir gaye jab charo gunde jo gaurds ko pit rahe the unhone piche dekha toh unke dono sathi jameen pe pade the aur jab marne wale ki taraf dekha to ek sath bol pade are ye toh ladki h dusra bola garam h isai bi le chalenge..teesra ha aj bhai khus ho jayenge ek ke sath ek free.... Jao re usai pakad Lao hum isai leke ate h...

Manisha—dum h toh le ja ke dikha isi din ke liye Karate mai black belt liya tha ....ladki koyi khilona nahi hawas bhujane ka...aj tumahari wo halat karungi ki dubara har ladki mai maa dikhegi khud ki

Par wo bi kya kar sakti 4 ek sath tut pade aur 2 niche gire huve the wo bi khade ho gaye ek rinky ko lane gaya aur ek manisha pe tut pada par usne bi heemat nahi hari aur ladti rahi wo char marte toh 2 ye bi kaske marte par ladki thi saririk takat kam thi toh haarne lagi tabi aditiya bike khadi karke bheed ko dhakelta huva bhagta huva aya aur 2 gundo ko kamar se pakadkar piche dhakelte huve le gaya aur dhakka de diya jisai wo teeno he gir gaye aur wo bi bheed gaya..ab 2 ke mukable 6 the phir bikes wale bi utar kar agaye kyoki time kam tha inke pass 2 jano ne 6 ko ek baar ke liye toh rok he liya tha aur udhar rinky sabse help mang rahi thi aur kisi ka phone leke apne papa ko bi call mila di thi aur phir dusri car ka fatak bi khul gaya usmai se john chalta huva aya uski ankhe gusai se bhari huvi thi aur aditiya jo lad raha tha uski body pe ek minut mai khub sare punch kar diye aditya udata huva piche gira aur dubara khada nahi huva...

school ke andar Mere phone brabar vibrate ho raha tha par maidam se baat karne ke kaaran maine avoid kiya....

Rajni mam--- ok ye detail sambhal ke rakhna ismai aj tak har saal jitne questions puche gaye h wo h aur sath mai patterns h jisai tumhe samjne mai asani hogi ki kis trah ke questions ayenge

Main--- bilkul mam ap befikra rahiye hum apka naam niche nahi hone denge

Rajni—Raj is competition ko jitna he jitna h




Bahar

Manisha ke pass john jake teri ye garmi muje mere bister mai dikhana tu mere layak h ek dum kadak.... yakin kar teri puri garmi nikalunga

Manisha – jo maar se ghayal ho gayi thi buri tarah boli tu ja be hinjde meri garmi tere bus ki nahi h. apne ap ko mard samjta h tabi itne admi leke aya h ek ladki ko uthane dum hota toh akele ladta samja...

John—chodo re aja tu bi karle man ki abhi time h mere pass dekh leta hu kitna dum h

Idhar gate ke pass rinki usai kholne ki kosis kar rahi thi aur raj raj chill rahi thi usne sab try kar liya tha police call janha se bi umeed ki ja sakti thi aur akhiri umid uski ab raj se thi jisai wo awaj laga rahi thi but uski awaj ka usai koyi jawab nahi mil raha tha .

Idhar manisha fighting ki position mai khadi ho gayi jiska chahra khun se sana huva tha aur uchal kar john ke mu pe kick mari phir uske pait mai

John – bus itna he dum

Manisha ne ek sath kayi punch john ke muu pait pe mare par usai koyi fark nahi pada wo lagatar marti rahi par john tuss se mas nahi huva ....

John—meri power dekhegi ye dekh meri power aur ek mukka manisha ke seene pe mara aur mainsha udti huvi school ki deewar se takrayi uske muu se khoon bahar agaya tabi bheed ko chirta huva rajeev aya aur ek jordar punch john ko mara aur john piche kayi kadam khisak gaya....

Rinky—papa mere dost papa mere dost....inhone kya kar diya mere dosto ko kahke foot foot ke rone lagi

Rajeev ek jigar wala banda tha par beti ke ansuu ne aj uske gusai ko aur bhadka diya tha aur sidha bina kisi planing ke bina kisi hathiyaar ke bheedne agaya apni beti ke liye...

School ke andar

Main--- dont worry mam ye competition hum he jitenge its promise mam dont worry hum achi taiyari kar rahe h aur kal bi sath he honge....aur rinky ke ghar he honge toh ap tension free rahiye....

Rajni—good meri naak mat katwana ab jao Thunder storm kabhi bhi suru ho sakta h

Tabhi bahut tez bijli ki gadgadane ki awaj ayi ...mera dil ghabrane laga ..

Main--- mam main jata hu late ho jayega rinky aur manisha aditya mera wait kar rahe h

Rajni—go Raj

Main--- mam bi jaldi chale jana ....aur bahar akar phone dekha toh kafi missed call thi maine wapas kiya hello koun bol raha apne call kiya tha

Samne se--- jo maine suna meri ankhe lal hone lagi aur suru hogaya Thunderstorm Thunderbolts ke sath bijiliya gadgadahat karne lagii

Idhar bahar

Rajeev---tumhe aj koyi nahi bacha sakta h ye kahkar bhid gaya rajeev akele sab se jabardast ladayi ho rahi thi wo 5 marte toh rajeev bi ek solid marta par wo sare 17 jane the jinke samne uska tikna muskil tha

John – maan gaya tu jigar wala h jo mout ke mu mai bi heemat dikha raha h par aj tuje koyi nahi bacha sakta h bhagwan bi nahi kyo ki main shaitan ka bhakt hu ha ha ha ..

Rajeev--- tum maroge bahut buri maut maroge tere us shaitan pe bhagwan hamesa bhari pada h ....kuttai pahle toh tu he marega aur dheere se khada hone laga...phir main

John—ha ha ha itni jaldi nahi pahle tu raka ke maal ke bare mai batayega ....phir hum teri beti ko tere samne chodenge phir tuje marenge ..

Rajeev--- main maal jala chuka hu.. ek he baat kitni baar batau tumhe ...

John—tu aise nahi manega dekh teri wajah us ladki ki jaan jayegi...kya tu ye dekh payega s....maar do us ladki ko...taki isai pata lag jaye ki humse jhut bolne pe kya hota h .. abhi bhi wat h bak de sab...

Ek...chaku leke manisha ki taraf chal diya manisha jo rinky ke sahre baithi thi uski halat hilne jaisi bi nahi thi ....wo sirf apni maut ko ata dekh rahi thi...jo uski taraf pal pal chalti arahi thi jaise he gunde ne waar kiya manisha ne apni ankhe band karli

Ek bahut tez bijli niche giri aur kadkad kad kad ki awaj ke badh bhadam ki awaj huvi is tez awaj se manisha ne ankhe kholi toh apne samne ek ek shaks khada jiski pith he usai dikh rahi thi usai laga jaise wo usai janti h.asaman mai bijliyo ne tandav machana suru kar diya jaise ab wo bi taiyar thi jalane ko manisha ne agai dekha toh wo admi car ke andar dhansa huva tha mar gaya tha wo...

Rinky— rote huve Raj dekho na inhone manisha ko kya kar diya...h

Main--- palatkar manisa ko dekha toh mere andar ka Nirwana gusai se tandav karne laga bahar ane ko kyoki wo sab dekh sakta h par kisi ladki ko khun mai nahi aur wo toh uski dost h..meri laal ankho se ek bund ansu bahar gir gaya ...aur Raj so gaya aur jisai nahi ana tha wo bahar agaya aur usai bahut gusa araha tha....

Main--- manisha ki taraf dhek ke bola kuch bi ho jaye ankhe khuli rakhna tabi samne ek se bhagta huva aya main dekhti rahna ..tere ek ek khun ki boond ka...aur mud kar piche se arahe ko chest mai punch mara wo jaminpe ghasit ta huva piche car se takraya aur khun fenkta huva mar gaya main phir bola tere har jhakhm ka heesab denge dekhti rahna rinky isai jagaya rakhna .... Dekh manisha dekh phir dusra bhagta huva maine bina ruke uski puri body mai khubsare mukke mare aur side hata toh sidha late gaya niche phir ek aur aya maine usai ek hath se gala pakad ke upar utha liya aur uthaye huve he bhagke school ki deewar pe de mara uska sir he fat gaya.. main manisha 3 gaye bus dekhti ja manisha ankhe khole muje he dekh rahi thi aur yahi haal sabka tha raman raju rafiq ka bi aur baki sabka bi unke muu ankhe badi ho rakhi thi..

Main--- manisha ek ke badle hajar ye dubara kisi ladki ko chunne layak nahi rahenge dekh inhi hath se chuva tha na aur ek gunda jo chaku marna chahta tha uske hath ko pakad liya aur chakuu chinkar uske pure hath mai jagah jagah ghop diya aur phir dusre hath mai bi aur phir uski jhang mai ghop diya.....phir uske hath tod phir dusra hath toda aur utha ke niche patak diya..

Rajeev jo niche gira huva tha wo dheere dheere uthkar rinky ke pass gaya

Rajeev--- beti tum tikh ho na

Rinky – ha papa main tikh hu par meri dost

Rajeev--- rinky ne rinky ko check kiya phir ye tikh ho jayegi beti tum isai kaise janti ho ..

Rinky—he is my friend ....par matlb ap bi isai jante ho

Rajeev--- yes he is dengerous ye aur iska dost bahut powerfull background se

Rinky—dost

Rajeev--- yes inke ek call se minister Sp sab bhagne lagte h muje nahi pata koun h ye but ab hum safe h par ye akela kyo h...aur ye yanha padhne kyo aya h...

Rinky manisha shock se muje dekhne lagi main idhar dus ki cheerfadh kar chuka tha aur samne ek ko kick pe kick mare ja raha tha aur har kick ke sath wo muu se khun fenk raha tha...phir ek ke back kick di aur usko dusre ko utha ke road pe patka aur niche gire huve ke muu pe laat di upar bijiliya kadak rahi thi tandav kar rahi thi aur idhar niche main..

Main--- aj tum afsouse karoge ki kyo paida huve aur huve toh huve mere samne kyo aye aye aur marne arahe admi ke dono pair pe kick mari aur phir jabde pe ek mukka udta huva piche gira

John—bus bahut huva tera

Rinky chilla kar isine mara raj manisha ko.....

Main--- bahut shock h na mardangi dikhane ka wo ladki hoke tum jaise hinjado se bhid gayi madarchod lakadbhage tut pade uspe aj tume batata hu sher kya karta h ...Aur di bhag ke john ki chest pe. Ghutne ki main uske upar ghutno ke bal baithke ghasit ta huva leke gaya aur ghasit te huve he uske muu pe kayi punch diye .....aur hat gaya...

Wo bil bilata huva khada huva wo marne aya toh jhuk kar uske hath ke war ko dodge kiya aur ghum ghum ke usko har heesai pe angeenant punch mare ki sala sidhe niche gir pada.....

Main usai ghasit ke manisha ke pass le gaya udhar aditiya bi hosh mai agaya tha aur wo bi ye sab dhek raha tha...

Main--- pata h manisha mere yanha kya karta hu main injaiso ka ....manisha muje dekhne lagi main inke har ang ko kaat deta hu phir jinda chod deta hu tadapne ko taki cheel gidh inko jinda noch noch ke khaye.. phir john ke hath tod diye wo chikta raha ...main chikh teri chikh muje sukun deni chahiye h....aur chikh....phir uski kalayi tod di wo gaand faad chilata raha main manisha ye hu main isiliye mai voilence avoid karta hu par mere dosto pe koyi hath lagaye toh main phir john ki dono hatho ki ungliya tod di aur ek pair bi tod diya....john behose ho gaya phir uske dimag par marne laga ab tu kabhi kisi ko hath nahi laga payega...

Main--- isiliye manisha rinky nahi bolti thi kuch becouse he know me aur rinky ke father ki taraf dekhkar yes us din wo maine kiya tha mr Rajeev kumar main he tha wo ......
main main sirf main he tha..


jo bi kisi ladki aurat ki ijjat pe hath dalega uska yahi hoga .....



Tabi kafi gadiyo ki awaj sunayi dene lagi muje maine dhanyan se dekha toh ek gadiyo ka kafila ata huva nazar aya dur



Main uth kar ek car ki roof pe jake khada ho gaya ...aur upar dekhkar bola lagta h aj apko bi gussa arah h ...ap apna gusa shant karo main apna



Aj ke liye itna he ......
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Update 81

Finding past—begins

Thounderbolt flash and Thundering sound .....



SATURDAY..........

Morning main jab school pahucha tab aj strength thodi kam lagi sayad tufan etc ki wajah se ya thunderstorm ke ane ki pahle ki shanti thi aj asman mai badal gahre chaye huve the aur panchi bi kam he ud rahe the.....Jo ye samjhane ke liye kafi tha ki ye tufaan ke pahle ki shanti h.....Pura din u he bita mera 12 baj gaye the ....

Tabi kuch gadiya dehradun mai entere hoke alag rasto pe chali gayi aur school ki taraf ane ka rasta block karne lagi .....

Time 1.pm....

Ha bhai sare raste block kar diye h bhai ap ajao aur 4 bikes aur 2 black scorpio full rafter se school ki taraf ane lagi ....

Aditya – bhai wo tuje rajni maidam ne Bulaya........

Main--- ok bhai




Ab agaii

Main--- fir platkar sorry yaar main abhi ata hu rajni mam ne bulaya tha yaar bhul gaya tha wait karna ok phir chalte h sath mai tumhare papa se bi mil lunga....

Rinky – jaldi karna Thunder storm sir par h aur bjiliya bahut tez awaj gadgadahat kar rahi h kabhi bi storm hamre sir par hoga . kal Sunday h toh manisha bi mere ghar chal rahi h aj lanch mere yanha he karte h ..aur mousam jayda kharab ho toh mera yanha he ruk jana....

Main--- done ok wait main u gaya u aya....phir chalte h

Main andar chala gaya aur wo dono bahar ki aur chali gayi bahar thunderbolts ki sound bahut tez arahi thi

Rinky apni scooty ko leke manisha ke sath bhar gate ki taraf agayi aur side mai dono khadi hoke wait karne lagi

Manisha—Rinky tu is champoo ko like karti h na...

Rinky – dekh usai love etc se chid h...

Manisha – kyo

Rinky – pucha nahi aur meri kounsi ho jayegi mera papa ne ek he baat kahi jo karna h karo bus shadi hamari pasand se karna...so main enjoy karti hu life ko fully

Manisha—tab toh tune champoo sahi choose kiya h he he he

Rinky—meri chod jo tu khud usai ghurti rahti h aur jab uske ghar thi tab kyo ankhr fade dekhti rahti thi....




Abi unhe 5 minut he huve honge baat karte apas mai car aur bikes ki tez sound ane lagi kuch pal mai he 2 suv car aur 4 bikes tezi se school gate ke pass ayi aur drift karti huvi rukhi tyres ki tez ghasitne ki awaj se sab ruk gaye aur suv car ki taraf dekhne lage pahli suv mai se 6 dadi wale admi utare aur charo taraf dekhne lage aur dekhne ke baad unki najre jisai dhund rahi thi wo khadi dikhayi di aur rinky ki taraf bhadne lage security wale agai bhade unhe rokne toh unhe 4 gundo ne rok liya aur buri tarike se pitne lage baki 2 ne jake main gate ko band kar diya aur sath jo lovk laye the wo tala laga diya taki andar ki security wale bahar na ajaye phir dono rinky manisha ki taraf badhne lage ek ne photo nikali aur milayi aur bola confirm yahi h dusre ne rinky ke baal pakad liye rinky dard se chillayi chod do muje koun ho tum wo usai le jane ke liye khichte usai pahle he ek punch uske muu pe pada aur wo dard se bilbilata huva piche khisakte huve gir pada uska naak tut gaya tha..aur khun nikal ne laga . usai kuch samaj he nahi aya ki kya huva...jab usne samne dekha toh shock aur gusai se ankhe choudi ho gayi phir dusra banda agai rinky ko pakadne bhada toh uski chest pe ek kick lagi wo bi piche khisak gaya aur dusre ke pass ja ke gira... wo dono gusai se samne dekhne lage ......

Awaj--Itni jaldi nahi tumhari heemat kaise huvi mere rahte isai chune ki jao rinky police ko call karo ...madad lao...

Rinky ne pass mai dekha toh raju raman rafiq dikhe wo unke pass jake boli help karo please par un logo ki itni fati huvi thi ki wo kya he bolte wo toh bus muu fade un bhayankar gundo ko dekh rahe the kahte h na bato ke sher ye wahi the jo time ane pe gaand dikha dete h . kisi ne bi rinky ki madad nahi ki Phir dono gunde wapas khade huve aur marne gaye toh samne se 2 round kick padi dono phir gir gaye jab charo gunde jo gaurds ko pit rahe the unhone piche dekha toh unke dono sathi jameen pe pade the aur jab marne wale ki taraf dekha to ek sath bol pade are ye toh ladki h dusra bola garam h isai bi le chalenge..teesra ha aj bhai khus ho jayenge ek ke sath ek free.... Jao re usai pakad Lao hum isai leke ate h...

Manisha—dum h toh le ja ke dikha isi din ke liye Karate mai black belt liya tha ....ladki koyi khilona nahi hawas bhujane ka...aj tumahari wo halat karungi ki dubara har ladki mai maa dikhegi khud ki

Par wo bi kya kar sakti 4 ek sath tut pade aur 2 niche gire huve the wo bi khade ho gaye ek rinky ko lane gaya aur ek manisha pe tut pada par usne bi heemat nahi hari aur ladti rahi wo char marte toh 2 ye bi kaske marte par ladki thi saririk takat kam thi toh haarne lagi tabi aditiya bike khadi karke bheed ko dhakelta huva bhagta huva aya aur 2 gundo ko kamar se pakadkar piche dhakelte huve le gaya aur dhakka de diya jisai wo teeno he gir gaye aur wo bi bheed gaya..ab 2 ke mukable 6 the phir bikes wale bi utar kar agaye kyoki time kam tha inke pass 2 jano ne 6 ko ek baar ke liye toh rok he liya tha aur udhar rinky sabse help mang rahi thi aur kisi ka phone leke apne papa ko bi call mila di thi aur phir dusri car ka fatak bi khul gaya usmai se john chalta huva aya uski ankhe gusai se bhari huvi thi aur aditiya jo lad raha tha uski body pe ek minut mai khub sare punch kar diye aditya udata huva piche gira aur dubara khada nahi huva...

school ke andar Mere phone brabar vibrate ho raha tha par maidam se baat karne ke kaaran maine avoid kiya....

Rajni mam--- ok ye detail sambhal ke rakhna ismai aj tak har saal jitne questions puche gaye h wo h aur sath mai patterns h jisai tumhe samjne mai asani hogi ki kis trah ke questions ayenge

Main--- bilkul mam ap befikra rahiye hum apka naam niche nahi hone denge

Rajni—Raj is competition ko jitna he jitna h




Bahar

Manisha ke pass john jake teri ye garmi muje mere bister mai dikhana tu mere layak h ek dum kadak.... yakin kar teri puri garmi nikalunga

Manisha – jo maar se ghayal ho gayi thi buri tarah boli tu ja be hinjde meri garmi tere bus ki nahi h. apne ap ko mard samjta h tabi itne admi leke aya h ek ladki ko uthane dum hota toh akele ladta samja...

John—chodo re aja tu bi karle man ki abhi time h mere pass dekh leta hu kitna dum h

Idhar gate ke pass rinki usai kholne ki kosis kar rahi thi aur raj raj chill rahi thi usne sab try kar liya tha police call janha se bi umeed ki ja sakti thi aur akhiri umid uski ab raj se thi jisai wo awaj laga rahi thi but uski awaj ka usai koyi jawab nahi mil raha tha .

Idhar manisha fighting ki position mai khadi ho gayi jiska chahra khun se sana huva tha aur uchal kar john ke mu pe kick mari phir uske pait mai

John – bus itna he dum

Manisha ne ek sath kayi punch john ke muu pait pe mare par usai koyi fark nahi pada wo lagatar marti rahi par john tuss se mas nahi huva ....

John—meri power dekhegi ye dekh meri power aur ek mukka manisha ke seene pe mara aur mainsha udti huvi school ki deewar se takrayi uske muu se khoon bahar agaya tabi bheed ko chirta huva rajeev aya aur ek jordar punch john ko mara aur john piche kayi kadam khisak gaya....

Rinky—papa mere dost papa mere dost....inhone kya kar diya mere dosto ko kahke foot foot ke rone lagi

Rajeev ek jigar wala banda tha par beti ke ansuu ne aj uske gusai ko aur bhadka diya tha aur sidha bina kisi planing ke bina kisi hathiyaar ke bheedne agaya apni beti ke liye...

School ke andar

Main--- dont worry mam ye competition hum he jitenge its promise mam dont worry hum achi taiyari kar rahe h aur kal bi sath he honge....aur rinky ke ghar he honge toh ap tension free rahiye....

Rajni—good meri naak mat katwana ab jao Thunder storm kabhi bhi suru ho sakta h

Tabhi bahut tez bijli ki gadgadane ki awaj ayi ...mera dil ghabrane laga ..

Main--- mam main jata hu late ho jayega rinky aur manisha aditya mera wait kar rahe h

Rajni—go Raj

Main--- mam bi jaldi chale jana ....aur bahar akar phone dekha toh kafi missed call thi maine wapas kiya hello koun bol raha apne call kiya tha

Samne se--- jo maine suna meri ankhe lal hone lagi aur suru hogaya Thunderstorm Thunderbolts ke sath bijiliya gadgadahat karne lagii

Idhar bahar

Rajeev---tumhe aj koyi nahi bacha sakta h ye kahkar bhid gaya rajeev akele sab se jabardast ladayi ho rahi thi wo 5 marte toh rajeev bi ek solid marta par wo sare 17 jane the jinke samne uska tikna muskil tha

John – maan gaya tu jigar wala h jo mout ke mu mai bi heemat dikha raha h par aj tuje koyi nahi bacha sakta h bhagwan bi nahi kyo ki main shaitan ka bhakt hu ha ha ha ..

Rajeev--- tum maroge bahut buri maut maroge tere us shaitan pe bhagwan hamesa bhari pada h ....kuttai pahle toh tu he marega aur dheere se khada hone laga...phir main

John—ha ha ha itni jaldi nahi pahle tu raka ke maal ke bare mai batayega ....phir hum teri beti ko tere samne chodenge phir tuje marenge ..

Rajeev--- main maal jala chuka hu.. ek he baat kitni baar batau tumhe ...

John—tu aise nahi manega dekh teri wajah us ladki ki jaan jayegi...kya tu ye dekh payega s....maar do us ladki ko...taki isai pata lag jaye ki humse jhut bolne pe kya hota h .. abhi bhi wat h bak de sab...

Ek...chaku leke manisha ki taraf chal diya manisha jo rinky ke sahre baithi thi uski halat hilne jaisi bi nahi thi ....wo sirf apni maut ko ata dekh rahi thi...jo uski taraf pal pal chalti arahi thi jaise he gunde ne waar kiya manisha ne apni ankhe band karli

Ek bahut tez bijli niche giri aur kadkad kad kad ki awaj ke badh bhadam ki awaj huvi is tez awaj se manisha ne ankhe kholi toh apne samne ek ek shaks khada jiski pith he usai dikh rahi thi usai laga jaise wo usai janti h.asaman mai bijliyo ne tandav machana suru kar diya jaise ab wo bi taiyar thi jalane ko manisha ne agai dekha toh wo admi car ke andar dhansa huva tha mar gaya tha wo...

Rinky— rote huve Raj dekho na inhone manisha ko kya kar diya...h

Main--- palatkar manisa ko dekha toh mere andar ka Nirwana gusai se tandav karne laga bahar ane ko kyoki wo sab dekh sakta h par kisi ladki ko khun mai nahi aur wo toh uski dost h..meri laal ankho se ek bund ansu bahar gir gaya ...aur Raj so gaya aur jisai nahi ana tha wo bahar agaya aur usai bahut gusa araha tha....

Main--- manisha ki taraf dhek ke bola kuch bi ho jaye ankhe khuli rakhna tabi samne ek se bhagta huva aya main dekhti rahna ..tere ek ek khun ki boond ka...aur mud kar piche se arahe ko chest mai punch mara wo jaminpe ghasit ta huva piche car se takraya aur khun fenkta huva mar gaya main phir bola tere har jhakhm ka heesab denge dekhti rahna rinky isai jagaya rakhna .... Dekh manisha dekh phir dusra bhagta huva maine bina ruke uski puri body mai khubsare mukke mare aur side hata toh sidha late gaya niche phir ek aur aya maine usai ek hath se gala pakad ke upar utha liya aur uthaye huve he bhagke school ki deewar pe de mara uska sir he fat gaya.. main manisha 3 gaye bus dekhti ja manisha ankhe khole muje he dekh rahi thi aur yahi haal sabka tha raman raju rafiq ka bi aur baki sabka bi unke muu ankhe badi ho rakhi thi..

Main--- manisha ek ke badle hajar ye dubara kisi ladki ko chunne layak nahi rahenge dekh inhi hath se chuva tha na aur ek gunda jo chaku marna chahta tha uske hath ko pakad liya aur chakuu chinkar uske pure hath mai jagah jagah ghop diya aur phir dusre hath mai bi aur phir uski jhang mai ghop diya.....phir uske hath tod phir dusra hath toda aur utha ke niche patak diya..

Rajeev jo niche gira huva tha wo dheere dheere uthkar rinky ke pass gaya

Rajeev--- beti tum tikh ho na

Rinky – ha papa main tikh hu par meri dost

Rajeev--- rinky ne rinky ko check kiya phir ye tikh ho jayegi beti tum isai kaise janti ho ..

Rinky—he is my friend ....par matlb ap bi isai jante ho

Rajeev--- yes he is dengerous ye aur iska dost bahut powerfull background se

Rinky—dost

Rajeev--- yes inke ek call se minister Sp sab bhagne lagte h muje nahi pata koun h ye but ab hum safe h par ye akela kyo h...aur ye yanha padhne kyo aya h...

Rinky manisha shock se muje dekhne lagi main idhar dus ki cheerfadh kar chuka tha aur samne ek ko kick pe kick mare ja raha tha aur har kick ke sath wo muu se khun fenk raha tha...phir ek ke back kick di aur usko dusre ko utha ke road pe patka aur niche gire huve ke muu pe laat di upar bijiliya kadak rahi thi tandav kar rahi thi aur idhar niche main..

Main--- aj tum afsouse karoge ki kyo paida huve aur huve toh huve mere samne kyo aye aye aur marne arahe admi ke dono pair pe kick mari aur phir jabde pe ek mukka udta huva piche gira

John—bus bahut huva tera

Rinky chilla kar isine mara raj manisha ko.....

Main--- bahut shock h na mardangi dikhane ka wo ladki hoke tum jaise hinjado se bhid gayi madarchod lakadbhage tut pade uspe aj tume batata hu sher kya karta h ...Aur di bhag ke john ki chest pe. Ghutne ki main uske upar ghutno ke bal baithke ghasit ta huva leke gaya aur ghasit te huve he uske muu pe kayi punch diye .....aur hat gaya...

Wo bil bilata huva khada huva wo marne aya toh jhuk kar uske hath ke war ko dodge kiya aur ghum ghum ke usko har heesai pe angeenant punch mare ki sala sidhe niche gir pada.....

Main usai ghasit ke manisha ke pass le gaya udhar aditiya bi hosh mai agaya tha aur wo bi ye sab dhek raha tha...

Main--- pata h manisha mere yanha kya karta hu main injaiso ka ....manisha muje dekhne lagi main inke har ang ko kaat deta hu phir jinda chod deta hu tadapne ko taki cheel gidh inko jinda noch noch ke khaye.. phir john ke hath tod diye wo chikta raha ...main chikh teri chikh muje sukun deni chahiye h....aur chikh....phir uski kalayi tod di wo gaand faad chilata raha main manisha ye hu main isiliye mai voilence avoid karta hu par mere dosto pe koyi hath lagaye toh main phir john ki dono hatho ki ungliya tod di aur ek pair bi tod diya....john behose ho gaya phir uske dimag par marne laga ab tu kabhi kisi ko hath nahi laga payega...

Main--- isiliye manisha rinky nahi bolti thi kuch becouse he know me aur rinky ke father ki taraf dekhkar yes us din wo maine kiya tha mr Rajeev kumar main he tha wo ......
main main sirf main he tha..


jo bi kisi ladki aurat ki ijjat pe hath dalega uska yahi hoga .....



Tabi kafi gadiyo ki awaj sunayi dene lagi muje maine dhanyan se dekha toh ek gadiyo ka kafila ata huva nazar aya dur



Main uth kar ek car ki roof pe jake khada ho gaya ...aur upar dekhkar bola lagta h aj apko bi gussa arah h ...ap apna gusa shant karo main apna



Aj ke liye itna he ......
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Kya Raj in namunoo ko sabak seekhayega yaa aise hi inki bakwaas sunta rahega? Ye roof top se girl hostal par koun nazar rakh Raha tha aur wo ladki Manisha to nahi jiski supari iss aadmi ne li hai iska matlab Manisha ka bhi kuch past hai jo aage open hone waala hai? Dono gangs ne fielding to poori laga li hai magar dekhna hoga ki plan kiska poora hota hai yaa do gangs ki mulakat Nirwana se hoti hai? Usha Raj ke chacha ne bhi killer bheja hai to pata nahi wo is kaam ko kitna complecat karta hai? Nice update.

Ab aate hai Sandeep singh nirwan bhai ki shikayat bhari gujaraish par, to bhai peechle kuch updates ek common format par aa rahe the ki ek bada sa sex scene thodi school ki nokjhonk aur update khatam. Mujhe nahi pata wo sex scene aage story mein koi contribution denge yaa nahi magar un updates mein un sex scene ka mujhe koi logic nahi laga jaise Jin ladkiyon ko Raj ne bachaya unke saath sex haalaki suruaat un ladkiyon ne hi ki thi magar Raj ka participation se aisa laga ki Raj ne un par jo ahsaan kiya uski kimat bhi le li. Ab kahani, lekhak ki brain child hai to main us par koi negative comments karna pasand nahi karta sirf updates padhta hoon aur agar same pattern chalta rahta hai to kahani padhana chod deta hoon, afterall who am I guide aur dictat writer when I cannot write story. Isiliye maine peechale kuch updates par comments nahi diye the magar mujhe ye jaankar bhi kushi hui ki mere jaise ek anjaan se paathak ke comments bhi Sandeep singh nirwan bhai ke liye mahatv rakhte hai to comments de diye waise bhi aaj ka update fir se poorani speed aur logical pattern par tha to comments to dene hi waala tha. Magar ye jaankar bhi Khushi Hui ki lekhak apne har paathak ko lekar jaagruk hai to uske liye dhanywaad.
Aapki kuch bate Bikul sahi thi aur kuch bate Bikul hi Galt thi Lib am bhai. Ab bhale hi sayad aap likhna wo na cahte ho but wo padhne me to wrong hi sence ho raha hai. Ab wo alag baat hai ki aap kud apni un galtiyon ko accept kro ya nahi.
Aap complain kar skte ho kisi writer ko story ke kisi part ko le ke lakin writer ke bare me aapne jo kaha hai wo bikul bhi galt baat hai. Ye sub kahne ka aapko koi right nahi hai.
Baki smjha me aaya ho to bahut bahut acha aur na aaya ho to 🙏 sorry maaf kr dena mujhe.
Ok ap rahne he do apne comments apka review dhek ke toh aisa laga jaise bahut bada ahsan kiya ho apne muj par aur kya kaha brain child h mera so mind your words before say about me look at your own self ok ...you are the first person to say find logic in sex ....na bhai na mujse toh nahi hoga sex logic dundhna mera toh Brain child h na ap ko he mubharakh ho child brain logic in sex...
Aur dusri baat bilkul har reader mere liye jaruri h ....but kisi ko ye huk nahi h ki wo muje ulta sidha kahe .............
Sayad meri he galti thi jo maine apse pucha ki kyo apke reviews ni arahe h muje mera har reader yaad rahta h bhai becouse we are all are part of story.. par muje nahi pata tha ki mere puchne se ap muje he bura kahoge ..... sach kahu to i m sorry to u muje really apke reviews apki wording sunke katayi nahi chahiye ab jayda nahi kahunga socha tha reviews padhke reply karunga but aj pahli baar kisi ka review padhke itna bura feel aur gussa aya h........
Aapka gussa hona bilkul jayaj hai Sandeep singh nirwan bhai. Mai aapke baat se 100percent sehmat hu. Aur mere hisab se to aapka ye reply bikul hi banta tha. :bigboss1:
Unhone aapke brain ko child nahi bola bhai. Poori line padho unki, “Ab kahani lekhak ka brain child hai”.. Is line ka matlab hua ki Kahani/story ka janm lekhak ke brain se hota hai, so story is a child of the writer.
Ab aapne bhi Abhimanyu Roy bhai yaha sahi samjhane ki kosis ki hai. Lakin sath me aapko as a writer ke Point of view se bhi dekhna chahiye ki un bhai ke comments me kya kya galt baat thi. Wo batana sayad kuch aur cah rahe the. Lakin uska sence negative hi dikh raha hai. To ya to aapko aisa kuch likna hi nahi cahiye tha. Ya to clear likhte.
Agar aisa kaha h toh main maafi mangta hu apne words ke liye meri galti ke liye mafi mangne pe muje bilkul sharam nahi ati h but ek baat muje realise huvi h ki main sayad kuch jayda he parwah karta hu.............
Aur Lib am bhai aap dekh sakte hai hmare Xabhi bhai ke samjhane par Sandeep singh nirwan bhai ne aapse mafi bhi mangi hai.
Hmare bhai bahut ache hai agr unko apni glti ka pata chalta hai to wo turant hi mafi bhi maang lete hai. Yahi inke ache character ko show karta hai.
Dekh ju ne jo bhi likha wo bhale sahi ho yaa galat lekin ek baat bol du tere 2nd paragraph padh kr mughe had se jyada gussa aaya lekin still abhi mera dhyaan gaya tere comment pr nhi to mughe pata bhi nhi tha lekin ek hi baat bolunga ki tumne jo bhi likha bhale wo sahi ho galat ho usse mughe ghanta fark padta hai lekin mughe gussa aaya tumhare likhne aur tumhare likhe 2nd para ke TONE ko jo mughe katayi n pasand aaya aur jiisme tumne likha "mai padhna chodd deta hoon"bhale ye line se kisi ko ghanta fark nhi padta ki ye galat hai sab tumhare uss story lekhak ka brain child hai usse dekh kr luricate kr rahe hai lekin mai bol du ki tu agli baar se ye apni tone badal ke likhio aur sorry but still meri satki hui hai isliye aise bol diya aur kre baat teri other lines ki to wo to sahi thi kyaa pata ju ne wo indirectly n likha 2nd para me but but man aage se dhyaan rakho Khair mai n bolta kuch but still angry bahenchod choro Khair enjoy story bro

Take care and aage se dhyaan rakhne ka man,

aur aglli baar se koi bhi ho yaha forum pr kabhi bhi xforum pr Sandeep singh nirwan , Xabhi , Itachi_Uchiha bhailog.....in teen ko bura bhala kabhi n kahna chahe tum indirect way me sahi ho yaa galat but not be pass this..... kyunki ye yaha mere dost jaise hai bhale wo mughe maane yaa n maane lekin mai unhe apne dost mannta hu wo mughe support bhi isitrah krte hai jo mughe unme dost dikhte hai, I literally believe on them........
Sanki Rajput bhai aap phle puri tarah se ok ho jao. Hmare liye hum sb ki story se bahut jyada aap important ho. Aur ye dekh ke bhi acha laga ki aapne achi khasi class bhi laga di un bhai ki.
Ab bs phle jldi se puri tarah se ok ho jao. :party:
 
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