Kya Raj in namunoo ko sabak seekhayega yaa aise hi inki bakwaas sunta rahega? Ye roof top se girl hostal par koun nazar rakh Raha tha aur wo ladki Manisha to nahi jiski supari iss aadmi ne li hai iska matlab Manisha ka bhi kuch past hai jo aage open hone waala hai? Dono gangs ne fielding to poori laga li hai magar dekhna hoga ki plan kiska poora hota hai yaa do gangs ki mulakat Nirwana se hoti hai? Usha Raj ke chacha ne bhi killer bheja hai to pata nahi wo is kaam ko kitna complecat karta hai? Nice update.
Ab aate hai
Sandeep singh nirwan bhai ki shikayat bhari gujaraish par, to bhai peechle kuch updates ek common format par aa rahe the ki ek bada sa sex scene thodi school ki nokjhonk aur update khatam. Mujhe nahi pata wo sex scene aage story mein koi contribution denge yaa nahi magar un updates mein un sex scene ka mujhe koi logic nahi laga jaise Jin ladkiyon ko Raj ne bachaya unke saath sex haalaki suruaat un ladkiyon ne hi ki thi magar Raj ka participation se aisa laga ki Raj ne un par jo ahsaan kiya uski kimat bhi le li. Ab kahani, lekhak ki brain child hai to main us par koi negative comments karna pasand nahi karta sirf updates padhta hoon aur agar same pattern chalta rahta hai to kahani padhana chod deta hoon, afterall who am I guide aur dictat writer when I cannot write story. Isiliye maine peechale kuch updates par comments nahi diye the magar mujhe ye jaankar bhi kushi hui ki mere jaise ek anjaan se paathak ke comments bhi
Sandeep singh nirwan bhai ke liye mahatv rakhte hai to comments de diye waise bhi aaj ka update fir se poorani speed aur logical pattern par tha to comments to dene hi waala tha. Magar ye jaankar bhi Khushi Hui ki lekhak apne har paathak ko lekar jaagruk hai to uske liye dhanywaad.
Aapki kuch bate Bikul sahi thi aur kuch bate Bikul hi Galt thi
Lib am bhai. Ab bhale hi sayad aap likhna wo na cahte ho but wo padhne me to wrong hi sence ho raha hai. Ab wo alag baat hai ki aap kud apni un galtiyon ko accept kro ya nahi.
Aap complain kar skte ho kisi writer ko story ke kisi part ko le ke lakin writer ke bare me aapne jo kaha hai wo bikul bhi galt baat hai. Ye sub kahne ka aapko koi right nahi hai.
Baki smjha me aaya ho to bahut bahut acha aur na aaya ho to
sorry maaf kr dena mujhe.
Ok ap rahne he do apne comments apka review dhek ke toh aisa laga jaise bahut bada ahsan kiya ho apne muj par aur kya kaha brain child h mera so mind your words before say about me look at your own self ok ...you are the first person to say find logic in sex ....na bhai na mujse toh nahi hoga sex logic dundhna mera toh Brain child h na ap ko he mubharakh ho child brain logic in sex...
Aur dusri baat bilkul har reader mere liye jaruri h ....but kisi ko ye huk nahi h ki wo muje ulta sidha kahe .............
Sayad meri he galti thi jo maine apse pucha ki kyo apke reviews ni arahe h muje mera har reader yaad rahta h bhai becouse we are all are part of story.. par muje nahi pata tha ki mere puchne se ap muje he bura kahoge ..... sach kahu to i m sorry to u muje really apke reviews apki wording sunke katayi nahi chahiye ab jayda nahi kahunga socha tha reviews padhke reply karunga but aj pahli baar kisi ka review padhke itna bura feel aur gussa aya h........
Aapka gussa hona bilkul jayaj hai
Sandeep singh nirwan bhai. Mai aapke baat se 100percent sehmat hu. Aur mere hisab se to aapka ye reply bikul hi banta tha.
Unhone aapke brain ko child nahi bola bhai. Poori line padho unki, “Ab kahani lekhak ka brain child hai”.. Is line ka matlab hua ki Kahani/story ka janm lekhak ke brain se hota hai, so story is a child of the writer.
Ab aapne bhi
Abhimanyu Roy bhai yaha sahi samjhane ki kosis ki hai. Lakin sath me aapko as a writer ke Point of view se bhi dekhna chahiye ki un bhai ke comments me kya kya galt baat thi. Wo batana sayad kuch aur cah rahe the. Lakin uska sence negative hi dikh raha hai. To ya to aapko aisa kuch likna hi nahi cahiye tha. Ya to clear likhte.
Agar aisa kaha h toh main maafi mangta hu apne words ke liye meri galti ke liye mafi mangne pe muje bilkul sharam nahi ati h but ek baat muje realise huvi h ki main sayad kuch jayda he parwah karta hu.............
Aur
Lib am bhai aap dekh sakte hai hmare
Xabhi bhai ke samjhane par
Sandeep singh nirwan bhai ne aapse mafi bhi mangi hai.
Hmare bhai bahut ache hai agr unko apni glti ka pata chalta hai to wo turant hi mafi bhi maang lete hai. Yahi inke ache character ko show karta hai.
Dekh ju ne jo bhi likha wo bhale sahi ho yaa galat lekin ek baat bol du tere 2nd paragraph padh kr mughe had se jyada gussa aaya lekin still abhi mera dhyaan gaya tere comment pr nhi to mughe pata bhi nhi tha lekin ek hi baat bolunga ki tumne jo bhi likha bhale wo sahi ho galat ho usse mughe ghanta fark padta hai lekin mughe gussa aaya tumhare likhne aur tumhare likhe 2nd para ke TONE ko jo mughe katayi n pasand aaya aur jiisme tumne likha "mai padhna chodd deta hoon"bhale ye line se kisi ko ghanta fark nhi padta ki ye galat hai sab tumhare uss story lekhak ka brain child hai usse dekh kr luricate kr rahe hai lekin mai bol du ki tu agli baar se ye apni tone badal ke likhio aur sorry but still meri satki hui hai isliye aise bol diya aur kre baat teri other lines ki to wo to sahi thi kyaa pata ju ne wo indirectly n likha 2nd para me but but man aage se dhyaan rakho Khair mai n bolta kuch but still angry bahenchod choro Khair enjoy story bro
Take care and aage se dhyaan rakhne ka man,
aur aglli baar se koi bhi ho yaha forum pr kabhi bhi xforum pr
Sandeep singh nirwan ,
Xabhi ,
Itachi_Uchiha bhailog.....in teen ko bura bhala kabhi n kahna chahe tum indirect way me sahi ho yaa galat but not be pass this..... kyunki ye yaha mere dost jaise hai bhale wo mughe maane yaa n maane lekin mai unhe apne dost mannta hu wo mughe support bhi isitrah krte hai jo mughe unme dost dikhte hai, I literally believe on them........
Sanki Rajput bhai aap phle puri tarah se ok ho jao. Hmare liye hum sb ki story se bahut jyada aap important ho. Aur ye dekh ke bhi acha laga ki aapne achi khasi class bhi laga di un bhai ki.
Ab bs phle jldi se puri tarah se ok ho jao.