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Adultery Raj-- hero of the family
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Congratulations on 300 pages
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Ap sabke sath aur pyar se 300 pages pure huve h par mere liye sabse badi baat ap sabka support h jo sabse beshkeemti h .... Aur main tahe dil se sukhra gujaar hu apka ..
hamesa sath bane rahe ....ye safar lamba aur richak h....
aur update sach bolu abi tak likhna suru nahi kiya h aj raat ko likhna suru karunga toh kosis h kal dopahar ko dene ki....
ek baar phir se ap sabi readers ke pyar aur support ke liye shukhriya...
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Love is life or curse...
Fleshback.....
Main niche aya toh bina shirt dhek ke sari ladkiya taad rahi thi muje ..6 pack abs body jo thi...
Rinky mam—body achi banayiii h raj
Aur abs ko touch karne lagiii
Shweta -sab tikh h mam aur meri taraf dhekhe chal new t shirt pahno aur khabardaar jo dubara aise nange ghume toh...
Maine nayi -T shirt pahni aur shweta ke pass he baith gaya aur nind agayii....
Jab nind khuli wo ladies ja chuki thi ...aur hum pahuch chuke the dehradun......Janha kal se hamri trip shuru honi thi..
Ab agaiiiiiii...
Hum sab hotel mai so aake so gaye kyoki agle din hum sabko ghumne jana tha kriti bechari mere pass ana chahti thi but shweta usai le gayi apne sath sone ke liye wo kuch ni kar payi aur sab so gaye dinner karke...sabko alag room mile huve the......
Subhe ke 4 am dehradun police station mai...
Inspector dhekho Raka muje nahi pata h ki tumahra bhai kanha h main puri kosis kar raha hu..
Raka-inspector dhundo mere bhai ko kyoki main dhundne nikla toh bahut log marenge ...
Inspector— raka hum dhund lenge unhe ab ek he area bacha h dehradun se shimla ka highway hum wanha dhundte h....
Raka—jo karna h karo 2 fortuner thi unke pass aur 10 12 log the wo ..aj tak kabhi aise nahi huva h ki wo mujse dur rahe....bina bataye ..kisi ka bi phone nahi lag raha h..
Inspector –main dhund lunga viswas rakho....
Raka ke jane ke baad
Inspector --- bc jina muskill kar rakha h in jaiso ne mc kuch karo toh Commissioner apni ma chudane ajata h aur na karo toh ye jeene nahi deta h thuuu h aisi noukri pe ...
Aur gusai mai nikal jata h highway ki taraf puchtaz karne aur unke number ki last location pata karne....
In morning
Kriti 5 baje he mere room ki taraf ane lagti h aur room kholti h toh dhekti h shweta mujse chipak ke so rahi thi..
Kriti---ye bahan h ya lover jo isko chodti he nahii h.
Meri ankhe bi khul jati h ...
Main---are ye kab ake so gayi...ye bi na abi bi akele nahi sotiii h....hmmm chalo thodi exercise running ki jaye....
Aur main bahar ajata hu hotel se aur jogging karne chala jata hu ..
6.30am ho gaye the sabi lagbhag uthne lage the aur sab gallery se bahar ke nazare dekh rahe the
Class ki ek ladki hey yanha aa wo raj h na ...jaldi aa dekh workout kar raha h...kya body h yaar ye itna hot ho gaya h aj pata laga...
Main niche pushups maar raha tha hotel ke garden mai.... Meri t shirt pasine se bhari huvi thi aur wo skin ke chipak gayi thi maine t shirt nikal diii.....
Thodi dair baad rinky mam ek lower t shirt mai niche ayiii sayad breakfast ki baat karne ayi hogi reception par ...muje bahar dhek kar
Rinky---man mai body toh shandar h har chij perfect curve mai h hmm hi meri ye jawani bi boy friend videsh mai jakar job karta h gadha kanhi ka khair marne de main toh isai pataungi......
Main---apni exercise complete karke wanhi late gaya ...
Rinky –hi raj
Main ---hello mam
Rinky—kitna stamina h
Main—what
Rinky—i mean daily exercise karte ho aise he
Main—isai dubble karta hu but aj kam ki h...
Rinky—man mai ab toh check karna he padega ki kitna stamina h...
Main---ok mam main taiyaar hota hu...9 baje chalna h na
Rinky –oh yes jao jao....man mai hmmm too hot...aj tak dikha kyo nahi ....
Main –room mai aya aur bathroom mai nahane laga aur naha ke bahar aya ...
Gate open huva aur rinky mam andar ayi Aur main bi jaise he muda mera towel bi khulke niche gir gaya ab mera anaconda. Maidam ke samne tha aur maidam ki nazar mere anaconda par maine towel ko fatafat uthaya
Rinky -sorry muje nock karke ana chahiye tha
Aur fatafat bahar bhag gayi ...
Bahar akar
Rinky mam—hey bhagwan itna bada jismai abi ye so raha tha...aur chahre pe muskaan agayiii
Phir bahar se he boli break fast niche aake karna hoga yahi batane ayi thi...
Main bi sharminda ho gaya muje gate lock karna chahiye tha main kaise bhul gaya aur main taiyar hoke niche agaya ...hum sabne break fast kiya...
Sunil--- ek baat bata aj ladkiya tuje he kyo dhek rahi h aur toh aur ye miss hotness bi tuje dhek rahi h kuch toh gadbad h ...
Main---abe kya pata maine toh bus niche exercise etc he ki thi...bus aur man mai kaise batau ki mam ko kya dikha diya h...
Fir hum sare nikal gaye dehradhun explore karne hum sabne
Sahastra dhara
Fir
Kampty fall gaye
Local temple visit kiye...
Musium gaye ..
Sabne bahut enjoy kiya aur jharne ke niche nahane ka maza he kuch aur tha.......
Aur wapas hotal agaye....
Javed---toh kal ka programme paka h na bro
Ravi –hmm paka h par ye sunil kuch jayda he bich mai araha h pahle Raj ko tikhane laga de phir usai bi laga denge ...
Javed---hmmm ek gaya toh dusra bi asani se chal jayega wo bande bi pass mai he ruke h bus kal campfire ka programme ban jaye wanha janha hum chahte h..
Ravi –dont worry kal nahi toh parso hoga but hoga jarur .. chal mere pass daru h party karte h waiter se jugad karwa liya tha khana yanhi kha lenge....
Aur idhar mere room mai
Main--- jo bi tu soch raha h bhul ja bus dekhta ja inka jo haal main karunga usai jhelne ke baad ye log india mai till till karke marenge.....
Sunil—muje toh bata de kam se kam
Main—samne he dhek liyo bus main jo soch raha hu bilkul waisa he ho .....chal
khana khane chalte h niche...
Sunil--- usko tu he bula wo tere karan muj pe barasti h...
Main--- hmm
Aur main chal diya shweta aur kriti ko bulane...
Kriti room
Main---chale khana khane
Kriti – raj muje dar lag raha h tum koyi risk nahi loge muje ravi aur javed ke aur bi irade lagte h .
Main—tu chinta mat kar hum dost h na tune tera sach bolke hamari dosti pakki kar li thi ...aur dosti mai sachayi he mayne rakhti h
Kriti –tere jaisa bhai dost sabko mile taki kisi ki bi jindgi mai andhera na ho aur raj ke gale lag gayii..
Main---santy mat ho chal main hu na hamesa tere sath... Hum ab hamesa dost rahenge ....aur unko jo karna h karne dena...main sambhal lunga bus tu kuch mat karna....
Kriti –ok
Main ---chalo us shaitan ki nani ko uthana h...
Shweta room
Shweta --- ao ao time mil gaya apko
Main---he he he are are meri chudail toh tu h muje marna h jo main kanhi jaunga... Tere alawa mera h koun tu he toh mera chand tare mere jigar ka tukda h..
Shweta –bus bus maske marwalo inse ok maaf kiya chalo ...
Aur mera hath pakad liya aur kriti muskra rahi thi aur sunil chup chap tha kyoki usai pata tha bolte he uski khair nahi hogi....
Hum sab khana kha rahe the tab
Rinky mam kal hum jayenge india ke one of the bigest forest research institute aur uske baad hum Tapovan chalenge janha hum meditate karenge.....aur karna bi sikhenge aur unse pahle hum jayenge robbers cave aur kal raat hum night stay camps mai karenge ........ kal subhe 7am hum pahle robbers cave jayenge ok..
Hum sab ne khana khaya aur sabi bahar hotel ke compound mai baith gaye aur sabi bole game khelte h suchitra ha yaar kya khele
saroj --ek kaam karte har jana apne someone special ke liye apni feelings share karega bus...chahe kaise bi song speech poetry etc..
Komal ---oh nice one....
Kriti---hmmm ye bahut acha rahega dhekte h kiski kiski life mai someone kitna special h...
Shweta—aur jiski life mai nahi h wo kya kare...
Sunil---wo shanti banaye rakhe ...
Sabi ki bari ayi kisi ne speech di kisi ne poetry meri nazar bus richa pe thi....Ki wo kya khti h...usai pahle kriti ki ayi...
Kriti --- hmm meri jindgi mai andhere ko kisi ne apne ujale se dur kiya h usai friend ya lover kuch bi kah du sab kam h ye words usi ke liye h kyoki wo mere liye bhagwaan se kam nahi h.....
No matters how many friends ...i have
No matters how much i tolk to them or time spend with them........
You..Always remember that no one...can replace you..
You were,are and will always be ... irreplaceable...
You have a very special place.. in my heartand in my soul....
Sab kriti ko he dhekh rahe the aur richa toh kabhi muje aur kabi kriti ko dhek rahi thi kyoki ye sari baate usne muje dhek ke he kahi thi...aur main bi usai he dhek raha tha kyoki ye baate uski mere dil ko chuu gayiii thii aj muje pata laga tha ki main uske liye kya mayne rakhta hu
Phir shweta ki bari ayi toh usne saaf bol diya mere bhai he sabkuch h aur main indono ke sath rah ke khus hu janha mere bhai wanha main rahungi.......phir bari ayi jiska intezaar tha muje ....
Richa –muje dhekte huve boli ....i dont know kya kahu ...ha meri jindgi mai h someone special jisne muje muje feel karaya ki main hu special ....aur wo mere liye special h...and i love him....
Main-- jo usai he dhek raha tha mere dil mai dard sa uth gaya uski feeling sunke .... Par maine koyi react nahi kiya....kyoki isne ek baar ravi ko bi dhekha tha....
Phir ravi ki bari ayi toh usne khub pyar bhari baate kahi aur pure time richa ko dhekta raha aur richa usai dhekti rahi ..mera dil tadap utha tha ki kya itna he pyar hota h...muje dikhawa karna nahi ata h toh main kya karu kya mere pyar mai kami h ek baar bolti toh duniya chod deta ...meri ankhe bi gili hone lagi par maine ansuu bahar nahi ane diye ....main bus usai he dhekte raha ki kya yahi jeene marne sath rahne ke wade hote h ..bus itna he mol hota h sabdo ka ..meri ankhe sab kah rahi thi jo richa ko chod sabko dikh raha tha...
Phir meri bari ayi...
Main chup raha...
Javed –are teri life mai koyi nahi h kya ....oh....richa thi....na matlb h yaar uske liye he bolde
Komal---ha raj bol na ...yaar tu kyo chup..
Sunil—mere kandhe pe hath rakhe bolde yaar...jo bi tere dil kahe yahi waqt h jab sabko pata lage ki pyar kisai kahte h...
Main
% kuch dair chup raha richa muje he dhek rahi thi.....main samne dhekha usai aur fir uski nazro mai dhek kar dard bhari muskaan ke sath bola....
Main--- Ha meri life mai pyar ke liye special jagah h ..kyoki ...maine...pyar kya hota h kabhi dhekha...he nahi...bachpan se he sirf nafrat dekhi h apno ki....par kuch waqt pahle pyar kya hota h ye maine jana......isiliye main bi kuch kahna chaunga .......sache pyar ke liye uske liye jo mera h.... Ya kabhi ayega......muje batane ki pyar kya hota h aur muje apnayega waisa he jaisa main hu and i promise main usai kabhi hurt nahi hone dunga....
Par abhi sirf uske liye jo kabhi someone special..thi ya h i dont know......
Phir maine kaha-----
मुझे इस बात का गम नही की, बदल गया जमाना
मेरी जिंदगी तो सिर्फ तुम हो, कही तुम ना बदल जाना.
इस दिल को अगर तेरा एहसास नही होता, तो दूर रहकर भी यूँ तू पास नही होता
इस दिल मे तेरी चाहत कुछ ऎसी बसा ली है, एक लम्हा भी तुझ बिन कुछ खास नही होता.
इश्क, दोस्ती, मतलब देखा…
इस जमाने मे हमने बहुत कुछ देखा…
लोग देखे लोगों का ढंग देखा…
यहां हर एक का बदला हुआ रंग देखा…
कही घाव, कही मरहम, कही दर्द देखा…
यहां अपनों के हाथ मे खंजर देखा…
कभी रात, कभी दिन देखा…
कही पत्थर का दिल, तो कही दिल पर पत्थर देखा…
Bus ye kahke main uth gaya aur apne room mai chala gaya richa bus meri back jate huve dhekti rahi yahi haal sabi ka tha...par kisi ne kuch nahi kaha ...
Mera dil aj bahut dhukhi tha kyoki muje itna toh pata aj lag gaya tha ki richa ka pyar .pyar nahi ek attraction tha. Jo kisliye tha pata nahi ...
Main--- room ki balcony mai khada hoke upar dhek kar kya yahi yahi pyar h bhagwan agar yahi pyar h toh kyo banaya pyar jo itna dil dhukhaye.....dard de ...isai achi toh nafrat h jo dikhti toh h ........main puri raat bhar balcony mai he baitha raha aur wanhi so gaya.....
Shweta kriti sunil ne darwaja khulwane ki kosis ki par maine nahi khola ....
Isliye love ko life or curse bola jata h.....pyar mil jaye toh sara jahan mil jata h aur dhokha mil jaye toh yahi jahan begana sa lagta h .........
Aj ke liye itna....
AWESOME FANTASTIC MIND BLOWING AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI
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AAG bhai ok apke behad behtrin shandar review se muje bahut kuch samaj agaya h aur ek behtrin plot bi mil gaya h aisa plot jisai love story behad shandar ban jayegi par abi ek ladki h jiska charecter unique simple caring hoga wo ayegi raj ki jindgi mai....aur Raj ab pyar ke naam se he nafrat karega ..........kyoki usai pyar mai ab dhokha nazar ayega....par wo ladki aake sab badal degi raj richa ko kabhi bhul nahi payega chahr upar se wo kina bi shakt bane is story mai love triangle h jo behad shandaar hoga ............aur ha raj richa ko ek baar ahsas dilayega ki paisa he sab kuch nahi hota h....
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Bilkul ek chance h ane ka agar richa kosis kare toh......aur richa ko dubara apna pyar jagana hoga usai.....
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Love is life or curse close to end....
Fleshblack
Mera dil aj bahut dhukhi tha kyoki muje itna toh pata aj lag gaya tha ki richa ka pyar .pyar nahi ek attraction tha. Jo kisliye tha pata nahi ...
Main--- room ki balcony mai khada hoke upar dhek kar kya yahi yahi pyar h bhagwan agar yahi pyar h toh kyo banaya pyar jo itna dil dhukhaye.....dard de ...isai achi toh nafrat h jo dikhti toh h ........main puri raat bhar balcony mai he baitha raha aur wanhi so gaya.....
Shweta kriti sunil ne darwaja khulwane ki kosis ki par maine nahi khola ....
Isliye love ko life or curse bola jata h.....pyar mil jaye toh sara jahan mil jata h aur dhokha mil jaye toh yahi jahan begana sa lagta h .........
Ab Agaiiiiiii......
Subhe 4 baje nind khul gayi meri.....main taiyar huva aur nikal gaya bahar running etc ke liye aur pura dum laga ke bhag raha tha main samne se police ki jeep siren bajati huvi arahi thi....muje ishara de kar ke rukwaya aur muje dhayan se dhek kar
Inspecter Rajiv –yanha ka nahi lagta h .......kanha bhage ja raha h...
Main---ha yanha ka nahi hu ghumne aya hu aur bhag nahi raha hu morning workout h mera... wahi kar raha hu agar ab apke sawal khatm ho gaye ho toh ja sakta hu yanha pass ke he hilton hotel mai ruka hu Raj naam h mera... Chaho toh check karlo ...student hu tour pe aya hu....
Ins rajiv—badi jaldi h ..tuje...Kisi ko maar ke aya h kya....jo badi tez bhag raha h
Main—First of all give respect and take respect 2nd u can arrest me or other wise i m going ....dont irritated me ..
Inspecter rajiv--- ghurte huve beta hawa mai mat ud warna pankh kutar dunga samja ghumne aya toh sirf ghumna..ghurte huve tikh h ab ja sakta h.. ....
Main--- ghurne ki jaraurat nahi h darne walo mai se nahi hu aur marna hoga na toh samne wale ki ankh mai ankh dalke marunga uska kaleja faad ke nikal dunga aur mujse ulajhne se pahle mere bare mai jaan lena...chalta hu ...
Ins rajiv—muje jata huva dhek ke bahut tedi chij h aur akad aur confidence koot koot ke bhara h...
Main nikal gaya main apni runing pe pata nahi kya ho gaya tha jo gussa agaya tha aur gusai mai ek hour ho gaya bhagte bhagte time ka pata he nahi laga...maine pass ke he park mai push ups aur situps marne shuru kar diye par aj ka din khujli wala he tha kuch ladke ladkiyo ke piche aa he gaye aur road pe walking kar rahi ladki ke picha karke tang karne lage...
Main--- bc itni kya chul h inhe khair chod aj ka din he kharab h jo subhe subhe inspector se bhid gaya ....main apne situps maar he raha tha ki wo ladke us ladki ka rasta rok kar pareshan kar rahe the maine dhekto aur chal diya unki taraf ..
Ladki – kyo pareshan kar rahe ho. Mere papa police mai h tumhe jail mai dalwa dungi...
Ladka – har ladki yahi dhamki deti h mera baap ye mera baap wo
Dusra ladka—hoga toh kya hum toh tume i love u he toh bol rahe h na kabool karo
3sra ladka kisi ko bi pasand karlo hame koyi dikat nahi h badi ayi mere papa police mai h...
Ladki—leave me alone ..... Dhekho muje jane do
Par wo ladke toh ab jayda he batamizii kar rahe the...
Main—chutiye sale
aur jake diya ek ko jhapad....din mai tare nazar agaye usai chakkar khakar gira aur khada hokar dusri taraf mu Karke bola koun h koun ye sab gol gol kyo ghoom raha h
Main--- jab ladki kahe no toh uska matlb no hota h try karo but pareshan nahi ..samje bhago yanha se.....aur unke jane ke baad palat ke bola ...thoda sa self defence bi sikh lo kaam ayega apke khubsoorat ho toh manchale ayenge he isliye apni safty ka bi dhayan rakho...ap tc bye
Wo bus muje he dekhti rahi .Wo kuch bolna chahti thi par main nikal gaya...aur muje bus jate huve dhekti rahi........
Ladki--- intresting aj ke time aise bi ladke hote h kya
Main hotel pahucha toh 6 baj gaye the kyoki ate waqt main aram se aya tha... Main room mai pahucha aur naha dho ke ready tha .....phir niche aya aur sunil shweta kriti ke sath baith gaya
Main – good morning ....
Sab good morning...Wo bus muje dhayan se dhek rahe the....
Main--- ghoor liya ho toh breakfast kare
Shweta--- nahii abi aur ghurna h muje...idhar mu karo apko ....hmmm ab tikh h chalo nasta karo ...ghumne chalna h apki wajah se late hota h muje jagaya nahi apne ...aur na apne apne pass sulaya iska punishment toh apko milega he ajkal bade romeo bane ghoom rahe ho di ko kahke utarwaungi apka bhoot.....
Main--- tu sudharna mat ok ok sorry.......agai se nahi hoga aur di ko kyo leke ati h meri pyari bahan h na tuje teri favourite ice cream khilaunga ok ok .. ...
Shweta—hmm ab aye na line pe....he he he
Hum sab ne break fast kiya aur nikal gaye robberscave ghumne bahut he badi open cave bani huvi thi ek alag he maza aya ..
Main agai chal raha tha tab rinky mam pass ayi aur ladhkhadne ki acting karne lagi toh maine unka hath pakad liya..
Main—mam r u ok ...
Rinky – yes.. now i m ok ...thank you raj chalo chalte h
Aur mera hath pakde he agai chalti rahi aur udhar shweta ne sunil ko suna suna ke kaan se khun nikal diye...
Aj richa ravi ke sath bi thoda kam he attach ho rahi thi...aj usne thodi duri bana rakhi thi ravi se ....
Par class ki ladkiyo ko pata lag gaya tha ki richa aur meri bonding tut gayi h toh wo apna luck try kar rahi thi.....par jhansi ki rani aur rinky mam ke karan dur he thi sab maine bi mam ke sath enjoy kiya unhone as a friend banke he behave kiya aur realy wo bahut achi lagi muje unki baate bilkul natural thi...
Fir hum FRI gaye jo sabse unique tha wanha humne aise aise tress dhekhe jo sayad he kisi ne dhekho ho...
Mera man halka ho gaya tha shweta aur sunil ki knock jhonk kriti aur rinky mam se baate karke .....
Fir hum tapovan gaye
..Jo meditation aur peace place ke liye sabse jayda jana jata h kyoki yanha vaas karte the Guru Dronacharya isliye ye jagah bahut famous h...
Yanha par sabne meditate kiya aur meditate karna maine aur sunil ne sikhaya ....peacefull place .....apke mind ko shant karta h
....ab bari thi yanha se move karne ki phir hum sab nikal gaye tigerfall Chakrata
aur evening one hour tiger waterfall enjoy kiya humne aur pahuch gaye final destination yani janha night stay ke liye pahado ke bich asman ke niche .....forest mai ..
tents lage huve the ..... sabne tent le liye shweta aur kriti ka ek tent mera aur sunil ka ek tha ........
Time raat ke 8 baj gaye the..
Main – tu jake shweta ko sambhal aur kriti ko bhej de
Sunil – ok...
Kuchdair baad kriti bi agayi ...
Main—kriti jab tak mera ishara na mile tab tak tum jo unhone kaha ya ab thodi dair baad kahenge wo karti rahna chahe jo ho ...
Kriti --- par raj..
Main—dhekho kritii memory card unke pass h us din picnic pe bi nahi mila tha par ab milega toh jab tak tere pass na ajaye memory card jab tak bus drama karna h phir main dhek lunga unhe aur tu chinta na kar richa ya jisko jo samajna h samje tum meri dost ho aur wo dost he kya jo dost ke kaam na aye.....
Kriti—naam ankho se gale lag ke thank you raj thank you....
Main—ab tum jao aur sunil ko bhej do aj jitna dard muje milega usai jayda wo bhugtenge jo muje dard denge... Main jinda narak dikha dunga
Sunil ke ane pe usai dubara samja diya ki usai kya karna h..
Sunil – ok ho jayega aur main nikal jaunga phir baad mai he milunga jab tu yaad karega aur memory kar milte he koyal ki awaj nikal dunga ya ishara kardunga....
Aur hum muskarane lage .......kyoki.. dard kya hota h majburi kya hoti h wo indono ko hum batane wale the aur inka itna bura haal karne wale the ki sayad he kisi ne itni khatarnak saza di hogi .......ye jab tak jiyenge inhe log ....yaad rakhenge........ki dost banke pith mai chura nahi ghopna chahiye h...
Sunil ke jane ke baad...
Main – Ab muje meri kasam pe he focus karna h halaki muje kuch pata nahi h par jake main pata karunga....ki koun the wo log jisne mere haste khelte pariwaar mai aag laga di sabko tadapa tadpa ke marunga par pahle apna pariwar ki talash karunga ki koun kaha h....kya unpe toh khatra toh nahi h.....koun koun jinda h Aur unhone aj tak dadaji se sampark kyo nahi kiya.... Par pahle muje 12 th karni h par pata nahi kaha se.......karunga par dadaji ne soch rakha h toh jarur karan he hoga ....
Raat ke 12.30 am par kriti mere tent mai ayi...
Aur ye sab khubsari ankhe dhek rahi thi ..
Kriti--- raj ...
Main-shhhhh dont worry kriti sab tikh ho jayega bus tum sab ache se karna.......
Aur hum chal diye tant se dur taki kisi ko kuch na dikh sake aur pata lag sake sabne apne jaal bicha diye the bus ek chij thodi si galat ho gayi thi ki shweta soyi nahi thi usai toh apne bhai raj ke pass sona tha par raj aur kriti ko jata dhek wo bi piche ho gayiii.... Ye baat mere liye unexpexted thi bus kyoki mere plan ke heesab se usai richa aur ravi gang ke sath hona chahiye tha.........
Aj ke liye itna he
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End of curse...
Flesh back
Raat ke 12.30 am par kriti mere tent mai ayi...
Aur ye sab khubsari ankhe dhek rahi thi ..
Kriti--- raj ...
Main-shhhhh dont worry kriti sab tikh ho jayega bus tum sab ache se karna.......
Aur hum chal diye tant se dur taki kisi ko kuch na dikh sake aur pata lag sake sabne apne jaal bicha diye the bus ek chij thodi si galat ho gayi thi ki shweta soyi nahi thi usai toh apne bhai raj ke pass sona tha par raj aur kriti ko jata dhek wo bi piche ho gayiii.... Ye baat mere liye unexpected thi bus kyoki mere plan ke heesab se usai richa aur ravi gang ke sath hona chahiye tha.........
Ab Agaiiiiiii..
Kriti muje leke jungle mai chali ja rahi thi usne ek patla top jismai se uske kadak nipple bahar nikal rahe the aur niche ek chota shorts he pahne huve thi aur muje leke aur agai ja rahi thi...karib 100 meter dur ane ke baad ....
Kriti—pata h raj ab main kanha aur tum kanha hovoge toh main chahti hu ye raat tum muje dil se pyar do taki ye ahsaas meri jindgi mai rah jaye....main chahti hu ye mere jindgi ke sabse haseen pal ban jaye bolo doge kya muje ek raat tumhara beshumaar pyar....
Main--- aisa mat bol agar teri yahi wish h toh main puri kosis karunga tuje pura pyar dene ki chahe koyi kuch bi samje ..
Maine usai apni banho mai liya aur ek deep kiss karne laga mere hath Ab uske top ke andar uski nangi pith par chalne lage the....kriti bi pura sath de rahi thi...
Thodi duri se ...
Javed – ravi ke kaan mai shweta nahi ayi yaar
Ravi—shhhh wo tant mai nahi thi ....usai baad mai dhek lenge..
Komal—dhek le richa tera pyar ...tera raj kya mast maze kar raha h... Bola tha na ki uska kriti ke sath seen h ..
Suchitra—shant agai dhekho kriti ka top khol diya h ...abi toh bahut kuch khulna h..
Richa jo ye sab dhayan se dhek rahi thi...usai yakeen nahi ho raha tha....
Javed ravi ke kaan mai yahi waqt h..
Ravi—nahi ye waqt nahi h jab usai wo chod raha hoga tab hum karenge...
Toh idhar...
Shweta--- bhaii toh richa se pyar karte h na toh is chudail ke sath ye sab kyo kar rahe h.. bahut galat kar rahe ho bhai ap ye..toh dhokha h kya farak h phir baki mai aur ap mai
Idhar maine kriti ki shorts utar kar panty ke upar se he uski gaand ko masalne lag gaya
Main—waise sach bolu teri gaand badi tight h ....
Kriti--- tumhe achi lagi ....sab tumahara he h jo chahe le lo ...
Main--- aj nahi par dubara mile toh jarur lunga....
Maine kriti ko leta diya aur uski chut ko chusne laga ...
Shweta ne ye dhekha toh apna mu ghuma kar khadi ho gayi aur rone lagi kyoki usai kriti se aisi umeed na thi kriti ache se janti thi ki raj richa se pyar karta h toh kriti ko raj ko seduce nahi karna chahiye tha.... aur raj ko richa ko dhokha nahi dena chahiye tha
Richa--- man mai ye kaise ho sakta h raj toh muje pyar karta h na ...wo muje dhokha nahi de sakta h .... Maine usai kitna pyar kiya kitna chaha usai par raj ne muje dhokha kyo diya tabi uski dil ki awaj ayi
Dil--- toh tune kya kiya usai pyar diya jab tera man huva uske pass gayi aur jab dil huva dur gayi ..
Dimag--- par maine kabhi usai cheat nahi kiya...jo wo aj kar raha h us jaisi ghatiya harkat toh bilkul nahi..
Dil--- toh jab ghumne gayi thi tab nashe mai ravi ko kiss kisne ki thi...dhokha toh dhokha hota h kam ho jayda
Dimag--- wo nashe mai thi main tab ho gaya tab pata nahi kya huva tha muje... Par maine jaan bhuj ke nahi kiya
Dil—toh ye bi bata de pichle kitne he mahino se tune duri kyo bana rakhi h usai dur kyo baith ti h..wo tera pyar h na toh sath rahti uske na ke dur..usko pyar deti na ki bahane .....
Dimag—pagal jaisi bate na kar wo gareeb h main rich toh meri marji... Main kuch bi karu ...
Dil--- pyar. pyar hota h usmai gareeb amir kuch nahi hota h...aur wo intelligent h paisa toh kama he leta par tune khud khoya h usai toh wo ab kisi aur ke sath h toh jalan kyo... Ho rahi h tuje...
Richa jo ghusai mai pagal ho rahi thi... Wo fans gayi thi dil aur dimag ke bich...
Ravi aur javed komal suchitra ek dusre ki taraf dhek kar muskarane lage....
Aur yanha mera lund kriti ki chut mai ghus uski chut faad raha tha aur kritii annand ke sagar mai gotai laga kar pyar se muje dhek rahi thi...
Sab thode dur the toh unhe halki siskiya aur chandani raat ke karan halka saaf dikh raha raha tha...
Ravi--- bola tha na maine ab khud dhek lo ..ki dono ke bich kya h....
Javed—gareeb toh gareeb ghatiya he rahega...janha khubsurat ladki mili mu marne laga ..
Richa jo dimag aur dil ke bich lad rahi thi akhir uska dimag jeet he gaya.... Aur wo gusai mai pagal ho rahi thi .....aur ravi komal suchitra javed ke bhadkane pe aur aag babuli ho gayi ....
Idhar
Hum dono sex kar rahe the
Tabi kuch ahat huvi toh hum dono satark ho gaye aur jidhar se awaj arahi thi udhar dhekne lage Aur ek awaj ayiiii...
How romantic ....pata h dhuk tab hota h jab apka he dost apke lover ke sath rangraliya mana rahi ho....
Kriti—tatatata...tum ...richa aisa kuch nahi h...
Richa --- baat kaat kar oh toh kaisa h....kahde tange khol tum sex nahi kar rahe the ....bloody bich tujse ye umid na thi muje....tuje pata tha ye mera lover h phir bi tune aisa kiya kyo kriti kyo ...
Kriti--- aisa kuch nahi richa....please..meri..
Richa--- chup bilkul chup khair tujse kya kahu main.....par isai toh sab pata tha na ...ki hum shadi karne wale the par acha huva is hawas ke bhukhe ne apna asli roop dikha diya ki gareeb bikhari hamesa matlbi hote h bina fayde kuch nahi karte h ....tu bi unhi ....kido mai se h........aur rone lagi aur rote rote he boli kyu kyu kyu.....main tumhe kitna acha samajti thi par tune ye....karke muje galat sabit kar diya....main galat thi aur ye log sahi ki ....raj kriti ke sath sex karta h......aur aj ye sabit bi hogaya....ki tum dhokhebaaz ho
Richa raj ke pass chalke gayi aur uske gaal pe thapad maar kar boli..
Richa---- tune sabit kar diya jo ravi aur in logo ne jo kaha ye mujse kafi waqt se kahte the ki tu ghatiya h ......aur muje cheat kar raha h... tu sirf mere piche paiso ke liye h aur tumhari har harkat ne sahi kar diya...phir ... .....rone lagi....
Main--- richa aisa kuch nahi h...
Richa--- bus maine kaha na muje kuch nahi sunna h tum ek mahaghatiya hawas ke bhukhe insaan ho.....
Main--- muj par yakeen karo ...aisa kuch nahi h.....
Richa--- toh batao muje...
Main--- wajah nahi bata sakta...
Ravi --- hogi toh batayega.....na ..wajah
Javed--- sachayi samne agayii h toh bolti band h iski khali bahane bana raha h...
Komal--- isne toh pahle bi sex kiya h puchlo ...bol kriti kiya h na...
Kriti bechari kya bolti wo chup rahi ...
Ravi sach bol warna janti h..
Kriti ko akhir ha bolna he pada...
Richa--- bus ho gaya tumhara sach ...ab main bolti hu muje tumahari kisi baat par yakin nahi h tum dhokhebaaz ho main tumse break up karti hu ......aur dubara tumhari sakal nahi dhekhungi kabi....
Tabi shweta bi aagayiii ....aur shweta ko aya dhek kar ...richa boli..
Richa--- ao tumhari he kami h ye raha tumhara bhai jisko leke tum mujse ladti thi dheklo raj range hath sex karte pakda h maine abb bi boldo tumahara bhai sahi aur main galat..maine kaha bi tha tumhe ki mat chipak bhai bhai kahke .....ye bikhari kisi ke pyar ke layak nahi hote h kal toh badi shayri kar raha tha.....ek pal toh laga main he galat hu...par muje yakeen tha....ki ye he galat hoga...kyo ki iske khun mai he aisa h 2 takai ki aukat wala ........
Shweta – raj ko dhekti rahi phir richa ki taraf dhek kar boli ha tum sahi ho.....phir raj se tum ek nihahit he ghatiya insan ho aur tum kisi ke pyar ke layak nahi ho tum sirf hawas ke bhukhe ho tumahari harkate sabke sath aisi he rahtii h ...muje tum se koyi rishta nahi rakhna h .....richa sahi h. Muje tumse koyi rishta nahi rakhna h ......phir kuch dair chup rahi aur apni gardan nichi kar li....
Baki sab mand mand muskrarahe the aur richa shweta ko dhek rahi thi ...phir achanak apni gardan unchi kar shweta boli..
Shweta --- tum sab aur khaskar tu richa yahi sab sunna chahti thi na toh sun muje mere bhai pe yakeen h wo bina wajah kuch nahi karta h aur main jitna janti hu agar usai kuch karna hoga toh bhagwan ke alawa usai koyi nahi pakad sakta h ....wo mera bhai yani shweta sungh ka bhai h ..aur muje uspe pura yakeen h jab tak wo khud na kahe ki ha ye sach h tab tak toh main kisi ki bi baat nahi manugii...... Kyoki main raj ko ache se jantii hu....ki wo kisi ladki ke sath bura nahi kar sakta h chahe pyar ho ya aur kuch...ya koyi ajnabi he kyo na ho..
Tabi ek koyal ki awaj sunayi di muje aur maine kriti ki taraf dhekha ..aur mere chahre pe ansuo ke sath muskaan agayii....Phir richa ki taraf dhek ke ...
Main--- i m sorry main tumhare layak nahi hu tum sahi thi aur trust me main kabhi tumhare samne nahi aunga aur aya toh ajnabi he hounga muj gareeb se dur rahne mai he tumhari bhalayi h.......i m sorry par itna jarur kahunga maine tumhe beintiha pyar kiya tha...aur mere pyar mai sab sach tha utna he jitna sach asmaan h utna gahra jitna samundra h...
Richa--- pyar ka naam he mat lo tum ...aur mudkar ravi ke hotho pe kiss karli aur boli muje tumhara pyar manjur h ravii...
Main—bus usai aisa karta dhekta raha aur meri ankho se ansu girne lag....kuch dair usai dhek kar bola pata h richa
चाहत हमारी वो समझ नहीं पायें,
आँखों में छिपी बातें वो पढ़ नहीं पायें,
मालूम है उन्हें वो जान है हमारी
पर हम पर वो भरोसा कर नहीं पायें.
Wada h ...mera...wada h ye raj aj abi se kisi richa naam ki ladki ko nahi janta h....
Main gardan nichi karke jungle ke aur andar chala gaya...
Shweta kuch kahna chahti thi par kriti ne usai chup kara diya aur usai apne sath jabardasti le gayiii.....wapas
Ravi javed suchitra komal apni jeet pe khus the .... Aur richa ko pata he nahi tha ki aj kya kho diya usne sab tant mai wapas agaye.... Richa ravi ke sath chali gayii ...
Half hour baad .....
Main jungle ke andar baitha huva tha aur soch raha tha nayi suruwat ki ...ab sirf mera maksad mera intekaam tha.. ab pyar ke liye koyi jagah nahi thi ..meri ankhe puri lal ho rahi thi gusai se par filhal muje kisi aur chij ka intezar tha .......Aur huva bi wahi...jhadiyo ke andar se sarsarahat shuru ho gayi aur 10 bande bahar aye main unhe dhek ke muskara kar ..
Main—ao ao tumhara he wait kar raha tha ...
Admi--- acha tab toh pata hoga ki tere sath kya karne wale h hum..
Main--- tumhare hath mai hathiyar dhek ke toh saaf lag raha maarkar kanhi fenkane ya gaadne wale ho..
Wo sare hanskar --- samajdar ho..
Main--- kitne mile ...waise ek offer h manjur ho toh...
Admi--- bol be teri akhiri khawish samaj ke sun lenge waise.....hame 5 lakh mile h marne ke
Main—kam he mile h ek kaam karte h main tumhe dus deta hu 5 abhi aur 5 baad mai manjur h...agar manjur h toh smart phone wala agai ajao...
Sab ek dusre sebaat karke
Ek admi – ha hame manjur h bol..
Main—jisne tumhe kaam diya unhe yanha bula do aur phir thoda sa maza hoga aur 10 tumhare ..
Wo sare apas mai apne ko kya h 10 isai aur 5 usai mil jayenge pahle undono ko niptake phir isko nipta denge.......phir palat kar ok hum bulate h...
Main—yaad rakhna kaam main jo chahu palatna mat warna mai palat jaunga apni baat se ...
Phir maine 5 lakh online transfer kar diya apni log in id or password laga kar .. aur baith gaya side mai aur intezaar karne laga unke ane ka intezar jayda nahi karna pada dono muskarate huve arahe the aur main jameen pe leta huva tha...
Ravi—ha ha ha chutiya bada shayana banta tha ..kaha tha na javed pyar mai dhokha khaye huve ko marna asan hoga ...ab richa ki chut aur gaand main faadunga ye bhosdika bich mai jabardast ghus raha tha..2 saal se taiyari kar raha tha main tuje niptane ki aur aj sahi mouka mil he gaya..
Javed--- ha ravi kya plan banaya tune yaar maza agaya...aj is chutiye ko maar bi diya aur aur kisi ko pata bi nahi lagega ha ha ha ha ab shweta meri hogi uski jawani main chakhunga..
Ravi – main bi yaar iski saza wo bhugtegi ha ha ha ha ha..
Sab sahi tha bus hamari bahan ko bich mai nahi lana chahiye tha....
Ravi javed --- koun h koun h samne aa....
Awaj--- samne agaya toh tumhari gaand na fat jaye kanhi....
Ravi--- ha ha ha itne log h muje dara raha h ......
Phir ek awaj ayi kabhi kabhi murda bi jinda ho jate h
main khada huva
Main--- tuje kya laga tu muje maar lega ...
Ravi--- tuuu..tuu.jinda tumlogo ne mara kyo nahi isai......
Admi—isne dus lakh diye....hume tujse dubble...
Ravi aur javed ki fate lagi aur ghabrakar bole hum tumhe 20 lakh denge marde isai aur iske sathi ko jo chupa huva h
Sare gunde khus ho gaye paise jo baras rahe the. ok deal done ....
Phir mudkar lounde ab tuje marna hoga..
Main-- tumhari maut tumahri ird khird ghoom rahi h aur tu muje marne ki baat karta h kosis karle par tera ek kadum aur ek ki maut ....try karle..
Leader – ja re kalu....
kalu ke ek kadam uthate he
Ek khachhhh phir dhadh....girne ki awaj ayi sabne piche mudke dheka toh unki gaand fat gayi ek kati huvi gardan giri huvi thi ...
Main--- ek baar phir kosis karle....
Leader--ghabrakar ja re kalu maar madarchod ko
Aur jaise he usne ek kadam aur uthaya wapas khachhhh.....phir dhadam ...ki awaj ayiii...aur phir sabne ek taraf dhekha ek sir kati lash dikhi ....Ab sabki heemat jawab de gayii khoff unki ankho mai tha....
Main--- ab agar ek kadam bi hilaya toh main kuch nahi kar paunga kosis karlo... Kyoki phir wo kisi ki nahi sunega...
Sab hilne se bi dar rahe the unki ankho mai maut ks dar dikh raha tha....wo ek jagah he khade rahe...
Main—good apni deal on h ....... jara indono ko pakad ke mere pass lao jara inki sakal toh dhekhu zara thodi dair pahle bada bhasan de rahe the........
Wo sab bina deri kiye mere samne un dono ko ghutne pe le aye aur ....undono ke pair kamnp rahe the ...dar se
Main--- hmmm dar dar dar ...woh toh lagna he chahiye...par tum daro mat tumhari ankho mai dar nahi dard dhekhna chahta hu main.....kya saja duuu tumhe jisai mere dil ka dard dur ho ..phir dono ka coller pakad kar unkhi mai ankhe daal kar bahut badi galti kardi mera dil dhukhake ....wo mera dil ka tukda thii....ab main tumhe wo dard dunga ki tum jinda rah kar apni barbadi khud dhekhoge par kisi ko bol nahi paoge par puri duniya dhekhegi.... Sab sochenge ki tumhare sath kya huva par tum bata nahi paoge....
Maine agai kaha tumhe bada shok h na izzat ke sath khelne ka black mail karke chut marne ka ab tum sahoge asli dard....tum sablog agar jinda rahna chahte ho to iski cheeke muje mare kaan mai ani chahiye tum indono ki gaand maroge aur agar jisne lund dala muje inki awaj nahi ayi wo marega toh sochlo.......muje inki cheek sunni h chahe lund ghusao ya hath...
Ravi javed--- hame maaf kardo raj maaf kardo hum richa ko sach bata denge....sab sach......bata denge pls maaf kardo...
Main--- ha ha ha ha ha....ye sab richa ke liye nahi kriti ke liye h aur mere dhukte dil ke liye h.. tumhe kya lagta h muje pata nahi h muje pahle din se he pata h sab jab tumne plan kiya us ladki ka fayda uthaya wo middle ghar ki ladki h uski family ki izzat h aur tumne uska fayda uthaya.....
Ravi javed--- maaf karde bhai hame jo tu bolega hum wo karenge.......hum dubara aisa nahi karenge hume jinda chod do
Main---chup.... ab main karunga chalo re tum decied karlo yaad rakhna ek kadam idhar udhar huva toh maut tumhare asspass he h kaho toh dikhau
Sab nahi bhai hum karenge..aur sab nange ho gaye aur mu pe kapda band liya aur lund ke size ke heesab se khade ho gaye kisi ne ravi ke hath toh kisi ne javed ke hath pair pakad liye .....ravi javed tilmila rahe the chutne ke liye unke ansuu bahar agaye the
Main --- maro inki gaand... bhosdiko wo bechari bi aise he gidgadayi hogi ...aur mera pyar mujse chinne ki saza toh baki h jeete ji nark dikha dunga tum dono ko .ye nirwana ka wada h..
Phir sab nange hoke ravi ke piche agaye aur kuch javed ke piche .....
Ravi please raj please maaf karde muje maaf karde please...
Par ek na suni un saand jaise admiyo ne aur apna musal jaisa lund ghusaya sidha ravi ki gaand mai aur wo bi gaand faad he chillaya ..Par uski koun sunta us saand ne phir diya jhatka ravi ki gaand se khun nikalne laga wo chilla raha tha... Aur wo ghusaye ja raha tha..
Aahhhhhhh cbahar....nikal...mc...bahar....nikal.....maaaaaa .....
Par us saand ne apna lund uski gaand mai jad tak ghusa diya wo dard se behosh ho gaya
main – jagao re isai
Toh ek ne uske muu par mootna shuru kar diya toh woh hosh mai ane laga...
Main--- ha ha ha wait ready.... light .....camera..... action.... Roling....
Aur phir se suru ho gaye karib dus minut tak ek ne ache se pela ravi ko phir dusra aya jiska lund pahle wale se bada tha....usne bi gaand mai ghusaya toh who tadfadne laga cheekne laga uska moot nikal gaya par kya majal wo rook jaye eo toh gaand faadne mai mast the javed ki toh agadi pichadi dono gili ho gayi thi.......uski gaand ke haal aise the
Maine uski ankho mai dhekha...aur kaha..
Msin—tere sath bi yahi hoga chinta mat kar ...bus dhekta ja tuuu .........
Wo sare ravi ke charo taraf khade the aur bari bari uski gaand maar rahe the aur kuch uske muu mai lund daalke baithe huve the
....uski halat ye thi ki muu mai virya aur gaand se ab virya he tapak raha tha ...par har baar mota lund ghusne se wo chillata karib 2 hour ke douran chudayi se wo besudh ho gaya tha ... Wo behose hota uske muu par mootkar phir hosh mai laya jata .
Phir javed ke sath bi yahi kiya wo bi chillata raha...uski gaand bi khun se san gayi thi ...
Yahi nahi phir unlogo ne jab lund dal ke dono ki gaand chodi kar di aur meri sakal pe ghusa dhekha toh apna hath tak dono ki gaand mai ghusa diya dono dard se kitni baar behosh huve unhe khud nahi pata laga....jab unki gaand ka kuva kar diya unki gaand se khun ke sath sab bahar agaya tha kitni baar moot nikala pata he nahi tha
Gundai bhai inhe gaad de phir hum jaye bhai ab bus pair ghusana baki h...
Main-- itni jaldi kaha....sunil
Aur sunil ne unhe kaatna shuru kar diya aur sabko gardan se kaat kar pass ki khayi mai fenk diya taki niche ke jungli janwar maans kha jayenge......
Sunil wah bhai kya saza di h maza agaya.... Ye lo inhe bada shok tha na video ka ye le inki gang bang ka full hd video bc high quality h virgin gaand ka h .....
Main—kutil muskaan ke sath abi kanha abi toh time h second message dene ka ki ladki ki izzat se kheloge toh tumhara kya hoga.....
Phir main chal kar ravi aur javed ke agai gaya unhe utha aur rid ki haddi tod di aur unhe kaha..
Main-- ab paralysis se tum jindgi bhar wheel chair pe rahoge oh oh tumhari jib bahut chalti h jab bi bolte ho bas gandgi he bahar ati h aur unki jeeb bi kaat di... Dono bil bilate rahe phir hum unhe utha ke camp se thodi dur fenk aye aur tant mai aake so gaye.... Ab subhe bawal hone wala tha .......aur humne koyi saboot nahi choda tha....shweta aur kritii gawayi de he dengi ha ha ha aur javed ravi kuch bol nahi payenge..........
Aj ke liye itna he
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yahi mai bhi kehna chahta tha bhai..kyunki richa bhi kahani ka important character hai kyunki woh starting se hai raj ke sath..usse kahani se nikalna achha nahi lag raha hai..ha richa khud me badlav laye aur ek nayi richa bankar dikhaye toh woh wapas raj ki life me aane ka chance rakhti hai..richa kahani me pehle se ek heroine ki tarah rahi hai..toh woh khud me badlav laaye aur fir raj ki zindagi me aaye aur raj ko apne pyaar ka ehsas karaye, rak se maafi mange, usse manaye lekin iss chiz ke liye ab time lagega..bas itna kehna chahunga ki richa ko kahani se hatana mat..kyunki woh bhi ek heroine character hi hai..!!
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