Adultery Raj-- hero of the family

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Update 218...on sunday late night ......

Dead end ....
The end of phase two..... Bloodbath continues...

 

[Tiger 786]

Sandeep bhai.... update

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Sandeep bhai.... update

Sandeep bhai.... update

Is baar 125 meri expectations h tiger bro...warna week mai ek toh aahe raha h....main bhi kya karu 2 dene ki kosis karu toh like dene mai hath kaanpne lagte h isliye jo jaisa chal raha h chalne dete h...fir bhi apne update ka pucha h toh saturday ya sunday night ko confirm ayega....

 

[Nadan Dill]

Intazar ha bhaii new update Ka

 

[Dragon master]

wale room mai do jasoos laptop mai lage huve the…

Ajay “dadaji gusa ho gaye the jarur ye admi gadbad lag raha h”

Jaanvi “yes captain maine cctv se sab check kiya wo admi mobile
Sb log mandawa ki security ko ly kr preshan hn but in jasosn ko bhol rhy ho

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Brilliant update

4 alag sences thy
Raj or Mirtyudoot k bich Jo bhi baat hoyi usse yeh laga Raj ab sab kuch akele karna chahta hai

Ho sakta h kyoki wo he death halo h toh ye toh saaf h ladayi behad power full hone wali h...

Wahi Poonam ne Raj se apne pyar ka izhaar kar Diya or Raj ko samjha bhi Diya k uska hosh mein rehna kitna zaruri hai

Bilkul kyoki apno ko khone ka dhukh aur akele rahne ka dhuk usai ache se pata h...

Sonali ki khoj agar dikhayi ja rahi hai update mein tho mujhe lagta usko bhi kuch Naya pata chalega jisse story mein twist aayega

Ab ranjan ka sach sonali ya shiwani yahi do laa sakti h samne

Death Halo or Apoorv ki Jo bhi nayi baat samne aayi woh iss update ka sabse shocking or sabse zada thrilling thi
Waiting for next twist & turn

Ab ye toh clear h ki death hala sab kuch janta h aur ache se janta h matlb agai amna samna tay h

Happy Holi to you Sandeep bro
& All guys jo iss form or iss story pe hai

Happy holi to you thank you for your precious words SMHR bro ...

Apoorva hi deth Halo hai,bohot hi paichida bana Diya apne Raj ke liye.
Sandeep bhai jab exbii tha tab maine I'd banane ki koshish ki nahi bani phir xossip pe bi nahi bani or jab xf pe Naya Naya bana to dekha to kahani achi nahi lagi.jab dobara ek bar dekha to,shok ho Gaya mere pasandida writer yaha the,fauji bhai(Manish bhai)or dr chutiya(dr.saheb) in dono ka bohot bada pankha hu
Or jab xf pe shuru hua Safar to aap jaise bohot badiya writers ko padne ka moka mila,aap ki kahani se bohot kuch sikhne ko milega youngster ko pariwar ka payar apni ki fikar.jo Aaj kal ke zamane se gayeb ho gai hai.par apna experience Thora alag hai Sandeep bhai parivar mai sab se chota hu sabki zaruraton ka khayal rakha par jab apni bari to sab ghade ke sir se singh gayeb hote hai sab gayeb.par apki lekhni ko salaam hai bhai umeed hai aap se ki apki or bi kahaniya padhne ko milegi

Tiger bro ...main ab gov ki talash mai hu aur pura focus h agar job mil gayi toh yakinun ye story se alag ek aur likhunga ya isi ko agai lejaunga par ...job etc pahle h ...ap jin writer ki baat kar rahe ho un sabke sath bhi sayad aisa he huva h hoga kyoki jimaidari badi cheej h jo ache ache ke ghutne tod deti h....aur ye baat ap bakhubhi samjhte ho ...parmeri kosis se badhkar kosis h ki apko ye story complete mile bhale he ant chahe kaisa bhi ho ....

Bhai Kya Jhatka Diya Hai Last me apoorv singh hi death halo hai
Gajab bhai
Aur Happy Holi sabhi members ko

Ab ap samaj jao ki agai kya hone wala h Thank you

Bahut hi sundar apdet

Thank you

sandarapdet

Thank you

Nirwana ki pechan khul chuki hai,ab Raj kis,kis ko bacha payega.kitno ki bhali chadegi.kitne apne marte ya bhacha payega Raj?
Bohot hi intresting hoti ja rahi hai kahani,lagta hai apne antim padhav ki or hi kahani ja rahi hai
Lazwaab shandaar update Sandeep bhai

Bsli toh chadegi kyoki hamla perfect planing ke sath ho raha h aur agarfir bhi nuksaan na ho toh ..phir maza kanha bachta h ..
Thank you so much for your precious words

Very nice update bro

Thank you bro

Bahut badhiya update hai Bhai......
Mujhe to pehle hi shak hua tha jab apurav ne kaha ki tumara kuch nhi lagta to aise hi talwaar ke samne nhi aati....or raj ko bhi uske aankhe jana pehchana laga tha.....
Waiting for next update

Ha ha ha yahi hint aur spams hote h ab toh clear h ki death halo knows everything thing about nirwana and he plans perfectly for next move....wait for next thriller ...
Thank you so much

 

[dododo]

'Everybody Engaged' .... mere khayal se do jagah attack hone wlala hai, Ek to Mandawa aur dusra Raj par. Mandawa me Dadaji. Bheema aur Sherdil ki madad karne Rajeev Dehradun se pahunch gaya hoga, aur Finland ke Mech aur Mark bhi apne fighter friends ke saath honge. Iske alava Ajay bhi apni 'Drone' ke saath tayyar hoga. Interesting. Inka mukabla underworld ke 500 logon ke saath hai.

Dusra hamla tour ke kis leg me hoga, pata nahi. Yahan par bhi Raj ke saath Mrityudoot hai. Shayad Sonali bhi pahunch jaaye. Inka mukabla Apoorva alias Death Halo aur Killer Organisation ke 10 level 4 ke fighters ke saath hoga.

Abhi tak to element of surprise Death Halo aur Ranjan ke pass hai.

Mere andaaz se isme Raj ki taraf se shaheed hone wale Rajeev aur Sherdil ho sakte hain. Ho sakta hai ki original story me dadaji ko bhi kuch hone wala plan ho, lekin readers ke halla machane par shayad Sandeep ji kuch meharban ho jayein aur dadaji ko kuch nahi hone de.

Hahaha... Just guessing...

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

'Everybody Engaged' .... mere khayal se do jagah attack hone wlala hai, Ek to Mandawa aur dusra Raj par. Mandawa me Dadaji. Bheema aur Sherdil ki madad karne Rajeev Dehradun se pahunch gaya hoga, aur Finland ke Mech aur Mark bhi apne fighter friends ke saath honge. Iske alava Rajesh bhi apni 'Drone' ke saath tayyar hoga. Interesting. Inka mukabla underworld ke 500 logon ke saath hai.

Bilkul kuch had tak ap sahi bhi soch rahe ho aur bahut kuch hoga agle update mai raat ko likhunga approx 2.5 k words single shot mai......waise bhasad toh machegi aur wo bhi bhayankar wali...kyoki game he itna bawal hoga...aur fight bhi khatarnaak dekhne ko milegi....

Dusra hamla tour ke kis leg me hoga, pata nahi. Yahan par bhi Raj ke saath Mrityudoot hai. Shayad Sonali bhi pahunch jaaye. Inka mukabla Apoorva alias Death Halo aur Killer Organisation ke 10 level 4 ke fighters ke saath hoga.

Ye toh tay h ki fight toh dekhne ko milegi ab kitni fair kitni unfair ye toh waqt batayega..

Abhi tak to element of surprise Death Halo aur Ranjan ke pass hai.

Yahi ek loos point ya weak point h raj ke ki dhushman ghar mai khel gaya aram se..

Mere andaaz se isme Raj ki taraf se shaheed hone wale Rajeev aur Sherdil ho sakte hain. Ho sakta hai ki original story me dadaji ko bhi kuch hone wala plan ho, lekin readers ke halla machane par shayad Sandeep ji kuch meharban ho jayein aur dadaji ko kuch nahi hone de.

Ye point apka padhkar mujhe literally jor se hansi agayi ...waakayi halla toh machega aisa na sahi toh waise he par machega jarur....aur pahle bhi kaha tha ...jo socha h waisa is writer ne kab kiya h...

Hahaha... Just guessing...

Guessing apki wao...factor h bahut kuch had tak apne sahi socha h ...aur kaha h...ab saturday ya sunday noon dhamaka mil jayega...

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Awesome nd thrilled update

Thank you

Mazedar twist diya Bhai

Thank you

Aporva aur death halo ek hi hai aur Vikram death halo ka master hai toh kya Vikram ne raj aag ya xabhi ko death halo ke identity ki tarah mein main bataya hai

Nahi vikram ne nahi bataya ...unhe baaki kuch bhi...bus yahi mano vivek bhai...

Superb update

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Zabardast fantastic update

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Buhat he zabardast update

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Shandaar update

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Fantastic update

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Zabardast update

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Awesome update

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Nice update

Thank you

Awesome update bhai

New twist
Apoorav he death hola hai
Sonali ko mojo milay ga kya
Aur mama urf ranjan ka next update ma game bajay ga kya

Ab toh moju he akhiri umid h
Thank you

Thank you

Pratiksha agle rasprad update ki

Jald urc4me bro

Amazing update bro

Thank you

Zabardast update

Thank you

Bhai bhot zabrdast update hai bhai ap bhot such such ke likthe hai bahi or bhot hi zabrdast likthe hai

Thank you bro

Mind blowing update......har update me ek nayi twist....wow.. nice.. superb update.....

Bus ab thrill baaki hjo milega..
Thank you

Pa g next wala kb aye ga

Bro ...ab likhne baithunga 2.5 k words tak...saturday ya sunday done h..

mast mazedaar lajawab update sir .

Thank you raghuveer bhai

मतलब साफ है अब बहुत बड़ा कांड होगा

Hatya kaand

ओर हो भी क्यो ना

विशेष ही रहेगा अब सब कुछ

Kosis rahegi sab ache se ho aur ap sabko pasand aye

वैसे डेथ हेलो ने बहुत उम्दा चाल चली है।

अब देखना ये होगा वो वीर के जैसे लड़ेगा

या कायरो के जैसे लड़कियों को मोहरा बनाएगा।

Waise fair fight mai belive karta h maine mentioned kiya tha but sab situation par h

एक अच्छा फाइटर है। और जो लड़ाका होता है। वो कायर नही होता

Bilkul sahi kaha aur ye unhi msi se ek h...
Thank you so much for your precious words

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Intazar ha bhaii new update Ka

Ab likhunga nadan bhai...

wale room mai do jasoos laptop mai lage huve the…

Ha ha ha wo kamal ke h

Ajay “dadaji gusa ho gaye the jarur ye admi gadbad lag raha h”

Dimag toh laga liya akhir dono ne

Jaanvi “yes captain maine cctv se sab check kiya wo admi mobile
Sb log mandawa ki security ko ly kr preshan hn but in jasosn ko bhol rhy ho

Ha ha ha janvi aur uska captain ajay ...par kuch toh kiya h dono ne par kya...

 

[Neerav]

Waiting for next one bhai