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Yahi hota h gareem ke saath kyoki woh apni aukat se ziada sochne lagta h
Aryan ne apni aukat se ziada soch lia
Waise baat to sahi hai, Chadar dekhe pair failana chahiye. But Aryan aukat te jiyada nahi socha, Aryan ko bas myra pe crush hai just, ab to tha. Usne usko premika Banane ka nahi soch tha just crush.
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Lekin yeh bhi galat h ek hero ko itna bhi kamjor na dikhao writer sahab
Hero kamzor dikhega tabhi to uski. development process ko Ham dekhh payenge, aise hi woh powerful nahin hoga, but soon use powerful Hona padega thoda bahut.
Ab yeh Viraj ko sanjay ki zameen kyon chahiye aisa kia h waha jo usko itni pasand aa gayi
Isse hum next update pe cover karenge.

Baharhal dekhte h aage kia hota h
Thanks.. keeping supporting
 
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Nice update Bhai 💯
Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai
Keep It Up ✍️👍
good writing. story sahi disha main jaa raha hain. more suspense and thriller. Bahut bariya. I will rank you top 10 writer on xforum
Nice update and beautiful story
जबरदस्त अपडेट भाई मजा आ गया
coollog Bhai please update post kardo
Wow! Ab future Mein hamen dragons bhi dekhne ko milenge? Nice... Shayad yah forum ki first story aisi hogi jismein dragon Jaisi topic ko dikhaya ja raha hai nice.

Dragons x cult x scary theme 🔥
Bhai Zabardast update hai kya Aryan ke paas dragon power hai ye dekhne me maza aayega
Mast bhai kya shuruwat hai 👍🤩
Bahut badiya update
Story ke opening me speed se update Dena hota h, 15-20 update ke baad hi logo ka interest badta h , 10 update tak to carector ke bare me hi hota h, 15 - 20 update ke baad hi log isko jyada se jyada like karte h, is liye story ke shuruaati update speed me Dene chahiye,baad me late kar sakte ho
Waiting for next update sir 😁 😃 😃 😔
Story toh ache hai par kya faida chalne wale hi nhi hai...🥲 Lambe plot wale complete hi nhi hote dekhe meine koi. Jaldi se 30-40 update mein xxx Kara ke khtm kar dena likes mil jayenge....apne experience se bhi bol rhe hoon lol😂

Aur agar aage nhi likhne ho toh plot ke summary bata dena kam se kam...andhere mein toh nhi rhe 🙃
Story is very good
Naya update jaldi karo wait nahi ho rha

Updates 6 has been posted guys.
 
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Bro i love this concept
Manhoos isse pehle bhi yahan bahut si kahaniya is topic per likhi gayi ha lekin complete ek do ko chhodkar kuchh hi huyi ha shayd bahut si is topic per badhiya kahaniyan thi lekin na jane writer ne wo kyun tok di

Lekin ab tumne bhi shuru ki ha to please ho sake to ise complete jarur karna kyonki mujhe ye wala concept bahut pasand ha ye mera favourite topic ha is forum ka

Or update ke bare me
Update is good shayd maa ko dukh ha uske bete ke liye lekin wo dikha nahi rahi ha
Ria ki shayd uski dadi bhadka degi and mishika shayd uske bhai ko pyar de paye lekin kab tak wo bachhi ha abhi dekhte han kab tak apne bhai ko bacha pati ha

And dadi lagta ha wo uske pote ko raste se hatane ki planing kar rahi ha

Ab ye dekhna ha ki ye bachha manhoos kaise bana kon kar gaya iski bhavishyawani

all the best wishing update fast for this story
Bilkul bhai story puri jaarur karna aduri mat chodna
 
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Shayad Aryan ke double carecter lagte h,jese aprichit ki tarah ya hulk ki tarah, ho sakta h ki dusri shakhsiyat me ho to use ye shakhsiyat yaad nahi rahti hogi
 
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