Fantasy ? Raavan ? ( Ek Naam Ya Ek Razz )

[Naina]

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Badhiya suruwat huyi hai kahani ki...
ek request hai hai ju se... hero heroine ko zyada khana khane mat dena... kyunki villain ki maar khana abhi baaki hai, baat abhi baaki hai... Khair just kidding yaar...
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[Black water]

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[DAIVIK-RAJ]

update 1


To chaliye suru karte hai jese ki lagbhag har fantasy story mae hota hai universe ka nirman kese hua to yaha bhi wese hi hoga

To hum rahte hai earth par aur hamre earth ke alawa 8 aur grh hai aur hamara sun ( Suraj)

To aj se na jane kitno Samy pehle ( kya pata hamre universe ka nirman kis time hua hoga) jab kuch nahi bhi nahi tha us wakt sirf ek bahut hi chamkili urja thi ( isme har rang mile hue the)
Aur urja mae ek wisfot ( blast) hua aur wo urja na jane kitne hi bhago mae bat gaya par iske par ek pramuk urja pind ( jo ek ande jesa tha) iske 3 tukdo hye jinme jivan hua matlab jinhone apna rup liya
Magar usme bahut samya tha aur is samya sirf us paramuk urja aur unke hi jese urja ne rup liya jisko hum parampita ke nan se janege wo bilkul hi ek safed aur golden colour ki unki skin thi jo chamak rahi thi aur chamkile ball bhi aur unke saath unhi ke jese ek stri bhi bani jinko rani maa bolenge un dono ki ankhe band thi kuch samya bad unki chetna ka vikas hua aur unhone apni ankhe koli aur sabhi aur dekhne lage aur sochne loge ki - hame kisne banaya hai aur kis liye tabhi us urja se awaj aai

Urja- tumko mene janam diya hai baccho ek tarha se tum meri hi santan ho

Dono ne urja ko dekha aur juk gae

Urja- utho baccho aur jo bhi sawal hai tum dono ke man man mae bolo Aur haa tum dono pati patni ho

Parmpita- main jan gaya ki app ne hame banaya hai par kyu aur humko kya karna hoga

Urja- ab is universe ki jimedari tumko utani hogi aur ha ek baat dhyan rahe tum dono ke andar meri saktiya hai

Parmpita- tik hai magar muje uske liye kya karna hoga

Urja- tumko sirf intjar karna hoga in do urja ko dekh rahe ho

Paempita ke samne 2 urja ke gole the ek jo safed tha par puri tarha se nahi usme kuch kali roshni bhi thi jabhi dusre mae kali aur lal roshni jada thi

Urja- in dono se 2 jivan ka nirman hoga ek jisko tumhe lord king nam dena hoga aur dusre ko demon king ye dono hi is Universe mae achi aur buri sakti ke malik honge

Parampita - ji tik par duniya ke liye kya- kya lagega

Tab us urja ke anginat tukde the usnese bahut si galaxy ka nirmn hua aur sath hi unke andar taro, grh aur bhi bahut kuch par us pramuk urja se ek 7 rango ( 7 Rambo) ki roshni nikli aur us roshni ne rup lena suru kiya aur ek bahut hi sundar stri mae badal gai

Parampita- ye kon hai

Urja- ye hai prkriti ( nature) hai ye tumhari madad karegi is duniya ko chalne mae ye is puri duniya mae rahegi kisi na kisi rup mae

Aur fir wo nature kai alag alag urja se har ek grh mae chali gai

Parampita- tik hai par ab jivan ka nirman

Fir us urja ne apne andar se anginat chote chote roshni ( atma) jo ki alag alag jiv bane

Urja - ab jo main bol raha dhyan se suno ab in dono urja se jinka nirman hoga unki mili juli adat se ( achi- buri) se insano ki rachna karna aur mujhe ek vachan ( promise) do ki tum inko kabhi pata lagne nahi doge ki tumhare upar bhi koi hai inke liye sirf tum hi inke janamdata ho jawoo aur devo ka nirman karo jo in 5 tatwo ( element) par apna control kare

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In sab ke bad wo urja gaayab ho gya aur parampita aur unki patni ke liye us urja ne mahal ka nirman kiya

Samya apni raftar se chalta gaya aur earth par anyek ( deferent) prakar ke jivan bane aur khatam hua

Aur is bich demon king aur lord king ne parampita aur apni soch mila kar insano ki rachna ki aur un sabhi mae jivn us pramuk urja ( atma) se aai

Aur sun ko chod sabhi 8 grh mae jivan ki rachna hui

Par samya ne apna khel khela aur demon, lord ke bich dusmani badi ( ye dusmani kese hua isliye apko intjar karna hoga iska razz bahut bad open hoga)

To ab Chalate hain sirf 4 grh ke introduction par

1 Tha lighting grh - iska yesa nam is liye pada Kyuki yaha par Phoenix's ka Raz tha
( phoenix - ek yesa jiv jiska asli rup ek chil ki tarah hota hai aur iske pankho ki jagah agg hoti hai phoenix ek tarah se immortal hote hai Kyuki ye fir se apni rakh se wapas jinda ho jate hai inki kai powers hoti hai joki apko story mae pata chalge)

2 Tha lord grh- yaha par lord unki family aur unki Vishal sena ka razz tha Kyuki lord bhi us urja se baane the unke pass bahut si powers thi inki powers aur inki family ke bare mae dhire dhire apko pata chalega


3- Tha dark grh- ya Razz tha demon king unki family aur sena ka inke bare mae bhi baad mae pata chalega


4- earth - yani hamara ghar jaha par kisi ka raj nahi tha balki yaha sabhi jiv jantu aur insaan apne hisab se ji rahe the

Par samya fir badla aur insaan ke andar buraiyo ko apnane lage aur khun, lut- pat rep, jese crime hone lage demon king ki soch se kuch insaan ne kali takto ki puja karna suru kiya
Wahi lord king ki soch se achi takto ki bhi puja hui ( note yaha gods ki puja ka jikr nahi kiya ja raha hai)

Demon king aur lord dono hi duniya par raj karna chahte the par parampita unko rok diya

Samya badta gaya aur lord demon king ki powers bhi badti gai aur insano ka Lalach bhi aur aa gaya 21 century matlab science ka yug ab sab kuch badal chuka tha insaan ne ek dusre se age hone ki hod mae yese yese vinashak weapon ka nirman kar liya jinke upyog se sab kuch barbad ho sakta tha

Nice start brother but ek request hai ki story complete Karna
Na ki bich majhadar me band Kar dena
Jaisa aapne The king of death me Kiya tha

Story agar 100-110 update Ka ho to hi accha hai kyonki long Story aap complete Nahi karte hai

Aur readers ko aadhi-adhuri story padh Kar Maja Nahi aayega

Otherwise
Jaisi aapki Marji
Agar ise long story banani hai to pahle The king of death story ko complete kariye

Sorry for writer problem

Comment by RAJ

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[Iron Man]

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[Iron Man]

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update

 

[king of darkness0411]

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[king of darkness0411]

welcome bhai ji

Congrets for tha new story ?​

Thanks bhai par story purani hai iske 60 update yahi post kiya hai

 

[king of darkness0411]

for new story kod...
Badhiya suruwat huyi hai kahani ki...
ek request hai hai ju se... hero heroine ko zyada khana khane mat dena... kyunki villain ki maar khana abhi baaki hai, baat abhi baaki hai... Khair just kidding yaar...
Waiting for next update....

Thanks Naina par ye wahi king of death wali story hai

 

[Red Skull]

congratulations for new story

 

[king of darkness0411]

for new story

I hope ye kahani aap complete karenge

Thanks bhai par story purani hai iske 60 update yahi post kiya hu