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Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running

Kya story m threesome hona chahiye


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kingali

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Ap nay story likh k Ak nam bnaya thaa but ap ab aysaa kar k story ki reting km Kar rhy Hain jis trhn ki story thi ab rhi nai

Agr ap say nai hoo paaa rhaa hai to ap Kisi achy writer ko story handover Kar deny

Kiu k aysaa feel hoo rha hai k ap khud e apni story say ouktaaa chukay Hain

Ya phir ap Thory say update main story complete Kar k apnaa nam bchyeee

Koi bat buri lgi to sorry
 

Shah40

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Iron Man

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Harry rocks

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Ap nay story likh k Ak nam bnaya thaa but ap ab aysaa kar k story ki reting km Kar rhy Hain jis trhn ki story thi ab rhi nai

Agr ap say nai hoo paaa rhaa hai to ap Kisi achy writer ko story handover Kar deny

Kiu k aysaa feel hoo rha hai k ap khud e apni story say ouktaaa chukay Hain

Ya phir ap Thory say update main story complete Kar k apnaa nam bchyeee

Koi bat buri lgi to sorry
Bhai baat uktane ki ni h ye story mere khud k past se kahi n kahi related h isliye ye meri feelings se judi hui h to is story ko chodne ka sawal hi ni uthata problam h to time ki jo mujhe mil ni pa raha kafi samay se
 

rakku

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Bhai baat uktane ki ni h ye story mere khud k past se kahi n kahi related h isliye ye meri feelings se judi hui h to is story ko chodne ka sawal hi ni uthata problam h to time ki jo mujhe mil ni pa raha kafi samay se
Sahi hai bhai es corona or lockdown ne pahle kuch jyada hi time de diya ab use acche se wasul raha hai...sara system or time table bigar gaya hai....
 

Iron Man

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Harry rocks

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update no :- 191
Wahi dusri or

Vp samrat or kubdi apni haveli m bethe hue hi naina or unke sathiyo p najar rakhe hue the.

Jab kubdi ne naina or uske sathiyo ki baate suni to shetani hadi haste hue boli.

Kubdi :- mukabla hahaha, ladki chahe tu kuch bhi ker le, lekin tu kubdi ki chal se bach ni payegi hii hihi hi.

Samraat:- esa hi hona chahiye kubdi, kyunki ager wo ladki is baar bach gayi to tum mera krodh bhali bhanti janti ho.

Vp :- vo sab to thik h samraat, lekin us gaddaar trittya ladki ka kya, us ladki naina se jayda doshi wo preety h, us kuldrohi k liye mot jesi asan saza ni honi chahiye, usko zinda pakad k mere pas laya jana chahiye.

Samraat :- esa hi hoga mahaprabhu prantu use pahale m ek baar usse milna chahta kubdi hu.

Kubdi herani se :- malik aap or us kuldrohi se lekin kyu.


Samraat :- ye janna tumhare liye jaruri ni h amma.

(Kubdi samrat ki dai thi, isliye wo use amma hi bulata tha.)

Kubdi :- per malik...

Samraat bich m tokte hue :- per wer m kuch ni janta amma, kuch bhi kee lekin uski or meri mulakaat kerwao.

Kubdi :- jijiiii malik.

Vp :- or ha samraat or humare us raste k kaate ka yani us rakshak ka kya...

Samraat :- uska intezam bhi mane ker diya h malik, wo rakshak kisi bhi tarah humare is prayojan m tang na aadaye isliye aaj raat hi chalava apni puri shakti k sath aaj unper aakraman karega.

Vp jor jor se haste hue :- shani m jabta hu ye ladki naina k piche bhi tera hi hath h, mere prayojan ko bigadne k liye, koi baat ni us rakshak se pahale m tere us naye pyaade ks namonishan mita dene wala hu or tu kuch ni ker payega kuch ni.

Wahi dusri or

Jungle k pashchimi bhag m ek talab k kinare ek gufa m mojud ek hevan rupi shaks betha yagya ker raha tha.

Lekin wo yagya kisi bhi tarike se vedic yagya ni lag raha tha kyunki yagya k aas pas insani hadiya or mans k tukde pade the, sath me wo shaks jo ahuti hlus yagya m dal raha tha, wo koi havan samagri ni thi, balki insani khun tha.

Wo shaks or koi ni tha balki chalava hi tha, jo shetani yagya ker apni shaktiya bhada raha tha.

Chalawa mantrochchaar kerte hue :- om ehm hi klim fat swaha....

Rakshak pichli baar tu mere hatho se sirf isliye bach gaya kyonki mane teri shaktiyo ko kam aank ker teyari na ki thi.

Lekin m apni ye bhul dobara ni dohrane wala , isliye aaj raat jese hi mera ye yagya sampoorn hoga to devi nikumbla dwara praapt meri mahashaktishali shaktiyo se tumhe koi ni bacha payega koi ni.


Haha haha or uske baad us komal ko bachane wala koi na hoga , or fir mujhe amar banne se koi ni rok payega koi ni

Ye bol chalwa fir se apne yagya m lag gaya.


Wahi dusri or

Karan or jyoti kafi der apne dadaji k gale lage rote rahe, unki ankho m khushi or dard dono k mishrit aansu the.

Khushi is baat ki thi k unke dadaji ko apni galti ka ahasas ho gaya tha, jis kaaran unka hriday ab saaf ho chuka tha or prem shaswat ho chuka tha.

Or dukh is baat ka tha ki esa hone m bahut der ho chuki thi, ager dadaji me sahi galat ka farak samjh ker dadi ka sath kabhi diya hi na hota to shayad halat kuch or hote, shayad unki maa bhi aaj jinda hoti, unhe parivaar hote hue bhi yu anatho ki jindagi na jini ni padti.

Kher jo ho gaya tha use badla to ja ni sakta tha, ye baat karan or jyoti ache se samjhte the, isliye kuch der m hi unhone khud ko sambhal liya tha.

Dadaji karan or jyoti ko shant kerate hue :- mat royo mere bacho mat royo jo ho sakta use badla ni ja sakta, lekin mere bacho ye tumhare is dada ka wada h ki aaj k baad is ghar m tumhe koi kuch ni kahega or na hi koi tumhe rulayegaa.

(Pyaar ss dono k sir p hath pherte hue) mere bacho jitne dukh or kasht tumne jhele h usse duguni khushi tumhare kadmo m lake rakh dega ye tumhara dada.

Jyoti dada k gale lagte hue :- dadaji aapne hume apna liya yahi humara sabse bada sukh hume or kuch ni chahiye.

Karan :- jyoti bilkul sahi bol rahi h dadaji, hume hmesha se ek hi chah thi ki hume bhi apne dada dadi or parivaar ka pyaar mile, aapne hume apna liya, hum bata ni sakte ki hum kitne khush h, (udas hote hue) per dadi....

Dada :- udass mat ho beta bhagwan pe bharosa rakho, ek din tumhari dadi ko bhi apni galti ka ahasas jarur hoga or fir vo bhi tumpe apna sneh lutayegi.

Jyoti :- dada ji ek baat puchu,

Dadaji :- ha bolo beta.

Jyoti :- dadaji, bhua ne hume bataya tha ki aapki or humare nana ji kafi time pahale bahut ache dost the, yaha tak ki maa jo papa or bhua k sath hi padhti thi, unka bhi yaha aana jana tha , to fir esa kya hua ki aapki itni purani dosti m darar pad gayi.

Dadaji kuch der shant rahe fir bole :- beta is dushmani ka kaaran bhi tumhare nana ji hi the, unhone hi is jhagde ki shuruaat ki.


Karan :- wo kese dada ji.

Dada ji :- beta tumhaari bhua ne bikul sach kaha tha, tumhare nana mere kafi ache dost the, humari dosti itni gahari thi ki har hafte ravivaar ko raat ka khana hum ek sath hi khate the, har chote bade function sath manate, tumhari dadi or nani bhi achi saheliya thi.

Hum dono ne mil ker gaanv k bahar mojud humari jamin p kheti bhi start ki jiski dekh rekh tumhari dadi ka bhai or tumhare nana ka chota bhai sambhalte the, jo kafi acha bhi chal raha tha.

Lekin na jane kiski buri najar humari dosti ko lag gayi, sunne m aaya ek din tumhare nana k bhai or tumhari dadi k bhai k bich m jhagda ho gaya or jhagda hathapai m badal gaya or wo hathapai itni ugra ho gayi ki usme naval (karan k nana ) k bhai ne tumhare bhai k sir per bhari vase de mara.

Hum sab waha jab tak waha pahunche tab tak bahut der ho chuki thi, naval ka bhai dur se hume waha aata dekh waha se bhag gaya , or hum jab tak tumhari dadi k bhai pas jab tak pahunche tab tak bahut der ho chuki thi ,brain hamrage se uski death ho gayi.

Jis kaaran tumhari dadi tut gayi ir fut fut k rone lagi, wahi tumhare nana ye sab dekh ker bhi manne ko teyar ni the, or had to tab ho gayi, jab kuch dino baad unke bhai ka accident ho gaya car ka pahadi se girne k kaaran or uski lash mili, tab tumhare nana ne humper hi ye ilzaam lagama shuru ker diya ki humne unke bhai ko mara h.

Bas fir kya tha police janch m unka ye ilzam bhi jhuta sabit hua, lekin is sabke sath hi humare dosti k sache rishte ka ant ho gaya or dono parivaar k bado ne ek dusre se sare rishte tod liye, lekin bache esa na ker paya or jo uska natiza hua wo to tum bhali bhanti jante hi ho

Or yahi kaaran h beta tumhari dadi ki nafrat ka, wo aaj bhi apne eklote bhai ki mot ko bhula na payi h, or us parivar se nafrat ki aag m hi wo ye sab ker bethi.

Karan or jyoti ne jab ye kahani suni to unhe dukh or ashcharya dono hua, lekin sath me kuch gadbad ka bhi ahasas hua, kuch to tha is kahani m jo un bhai bahan ko khatak raha tha, jiski wo tah tak jane bhi wale the,

lekin abhi unhka maksad kuch or tha or wo tha chalava or samraat ka ant ker dharti se papio ka nash

Aaj k liye bas itna hi


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