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Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running

Kya story m threesome hona chahiye


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Jitu kumar

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Awesome update bhai,
jyoti ka gussa aaj kal kuchh jyada hi badh gaya hai,
College me dance practice karte samay sab unke sikhane ki kshamta ko dekh kar achambhit the lekin vo kaun tha jo unhe dekh kar muskura raha tha,
college me karan ne sana ka plan fail kar diya hai, usne coffee ka vo cup hi change kar diya jisme drugs mila hua tha,
aakhir kar karan aur jyoti ne competition jeet hi liya,
Waiting for next update
 

King Aryan

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Excellent Update Bhai
 
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Viraj Raj

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Super update bhai
 

Subha

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MAST UPDATE
Ye kya pata chala tha shivani ko uske maa baap ke baare me..
Baap par iljaam laga rahi hai to thik hai but kavya par na lagaye..

Asli zahar to ranbir ghol raha hai shivani ke dimag me..
Pata nahi ranbir Karna kya chahta hai in dono ke sath..

Or Jyoti ka yu gussa hona achha nahi hai sighra hi baba se baat karni chahiye .. gusse me had se zyada hi bol gayi ye..

Ye kon hai jisko pata hai ki jyoti or Karan itni Jaldi q sab Sikh paa rahe hai.. ye avi bhi suspense me hi hai..
Sayad Radha Shivani or riya me se koi hogi..

Sohail or sana ne plan to achha banaya tha but jaante nahi hai ki panga kisse le rahe hai .. sazis to achhi rachi thi dono ne.. Ab baat jyoti pe aayi hai to sayad Karan iska badla jarur lega in dono se..

Ab itni Jaldi or achhi tarah se sikha hai dance to jitna to banta hi hai..

KEEP ROCKING BHAI
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RAAZ

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Update no :- 37
Sabhi rohan or riya k kamre m jate h. Or riya apna sawal firse repeat kerti h.

Karan :- di , baat darasal ye thi ki shivani humse bas yu hi naraj thi ki hum kabhi usse milne ni gaye hostel or na hi usse na hi baat ki .

Or dusri baat ki hamare hi papa ne hamare khilaf is bachi k dimag m jahar gholne ki koshis ki thi. Jab bhi wo ya choti maa hostel jate shivani se milne to isko hamare khilaf bhadkate , ki hum isse nafrat kerte h or isse jalte bhi h or yaha tak iske man me ye bol ker bhi jahar bharne ki koshis ki ki hum iske sotele bhai bahan h or future m iska hak bhi chin sakte h .

Lekin wo apne is maksad m puri tarah kamyab na hue , wo unke samne humse nafrat ka natak kerti or ek din moka dekh ker isne ye sab baate clear ker li, jisse shivani ko bhi unki asliyat malum ho gayi h.

Karan ne yaha tak jo baat batayi hi h wo bilkul sach h, kyunki shivani ne aaj subah hi ye sab baate karan or jyoti ko bata di thi. Wo puri sachai ko pata kerna to chahata tha per do vajaho se chup betha tha , pahali vajah ki wo chahta tha ki uske pita ya choti ma sachai khud bataye to hi sahi rahega , or dusri vajah abhi bhi uski jagrit kuch shaktiyon ko niyantran kerna baki tha , jiske liye use dhyan lagana padega jesa ki baba ne bataya ,

Riya :- mujhe to yakin hi ni hota bhai ek pita apne hi bacho k sath esa kese ker sakte h.

Jyoti (thoda guse m):- kyu ni ker sakte di , jis baap ko ye bhi parwah ni ki unke bache kesi halat m or bina maa baap k pyaar k kese ji rahe h unko bhala in baato ki kya parwah .

Jo baap ek choti si baat pe apne bete ko itni buri tarah mare ki uski chamdi udhed jaye , or baad m bilkul esa behave kere jese usko koi parwah ni to unke liye isme kya badi baat h.
Or fir jyoti sabko sari baat batati h usdin kavya k birthday wali

Riya :- omg bhai aap log kese jhel lete ho ye sab, tumhare papa insaan h ya hevan

Jyoti :- wo hevan hi ban chuke h di bahut ho chuka h di , mane or bhai ne to apna fesla le chuke h ki final year k hote hi hum ye ghar chod denge.

Jyoti ese hi gusse m boli jaa rahi thi bahut kuch jiske chalte karan ko use shant kerna padha wapas .


Karan :- (man me) ye jyoti ko akhir hogaya h , meri gudiya to ek dam shant swabhav ki thi , achanak se itna krodh kyu or kaha se .Mujhe baba se shighra hi is vishay m vartalap kerni hogi.

Fir karan sabka mind divert kerne kerne k liye bolta h .

Karan (radha se) :- are gudiya do din se humari dance practice bhi ni hui h bhul gayi kal competition ka din h.

Radha:- are ha bhai m to bhul hi gayi thi. Per hum practice kere kaha.

Riya :- usme konsi badi baat h choti tu shayad bhul rahi h ki sham ko 6 baje tak college k practice hall ko use kerne ki permission di hui h principal ne.

Shivani :- konsa dance competition bhai ,

Karan :- are ha sorry tumhe to m batana hi bhul gaya tha, wo mane
Or teri di ne vakantie day k competition m part liya h
Or karan use sari baat bata deta h.

Shivani :- wao bhai 100 % aap hi competition jitoge or m bhi aap dono ka dance dekhne jarur aayungi.

Radha:- jitne k liye practice to kerni padegi na per. Chalo chalo bhai jaldi se college chalte h .


Fir sabhi college pahunch ker practice m lag jate h , karan or jyoti ki sikhne ki speed pahale se jyada fast ho chuki thi, ye dekh ker sab heran the siwaye ek shaks ko chod ker jo usdin ki tarah hi muskura raha tha.

Lekin inke alawa char ankhe or bhi thi jo unhe dekh rahi thi. gussa or jalan unki ankho m saf saf dikh rahi thi .

Unknown :- hame kuch kerna hoga sohail werna ese to hum competition har jayenge. or m is baar bilkul bhi ni harna chahati

Sohail:- Tu sahi bol rahi h sana hame kuch kerna hoga, is karan or jyoti k chakkar m hamari har baar bejati hoti h.

Sohail or sana ye dono isi college ka ek bigda hua couple h or sohail ka bhai is shahar ka don h. Or ye bhi apne bhai k nakshe kadam pe chal raha h, isne college k kayi students ko drug addict bana diya h

Or kayi ladkiyo ko drugs ki lat lagake apni havas ka shikar ka shikar bhi banaya h, or in kamo me sana hi iski help kerti h. Ye bhi ek bigdi hui ladki h or sohail se iska rishta sirf peso k liye hi h.

Sach hi kahate h insaan jis marg pe chalta h usko sathi bhi vese hi milte h sana bhi sirf havas or pese k liye inke sath thi.

Sohail :- sun mere pass ek idea h

Or wo sana ko batane lagta h.

Karib 4 ghante ki practice k bad wo sab apne apne ghar k liye nikal jate h.

Unko ghar aate ate late sham ho gayi thi. Jese hi karan or jyoti ghar k bahar pahunchte h to dekhte h ki kabya gate pe hi khadi h ,usko dekh ker lag raha tha ki wo kisi ka chinta ker rahi h.

Or wo jese hi 3no bhai bahano ko dekhti h to rahat ki sans leti h.

Kavya(shivani se) :- kaha thi tu subah se , janti h m kitna pareshan ho gayi thi , ager late hone wali thi to kam se kam.ek phone to ker sakti thi na.

Kavya baat to shivani se ker rahi thi but , chupke chupke karan or jyoti ko bhi dekh rahi thi , jese ye sawal unke liye bhi h.

Shivani :- sorry mumma wo m aapko batana bhul gayi , m bhaiya or di k sath unke friends k ghar gayi thi . Aage se esa ni hoga.

Or ye baat bolke wo apne kan pakad leti h.

Kavya:- koi baat ni mera bacha , Age se dhyan rakhna.

Or usko gale lagati h or ek baar karan or jyoti ki taraf ek bar dekh waha se shivani ko leker ander chali jati h.


Karan ko ye dekh ker wo din yaad aajate h jab Wo bhi sham ko dono bhai bahaMn sham ko khel k aate the , tab unki choti maa yani ki kavya unka bhi yuhi intezaar kerti thi .Or ese hi pyar kerti ghar lotne per or apne hatho se khana khilati.

Jyoti to abhi bhi gussa thi kavya se per jyada ni. Dono ghar m aaker apne kamre m jaker let jate h , karan jyoti ko apne uper leta leta h or pyar se uske balo ko sahalate hue bolta h.

Karan :- kya baat h gudiya aaj achanak se tere ko kya ho gaya tha, aaj se pahale to tujhe yu gusse m ni dekha itna .

Jyoti ka man ab bilkul shant ho gayi tha apne bhai ki baho aaker, ab uske dil m krodh or dvesh jesi koi bhavna ni thi . Jyoti ka dil to vese bhi bahut hi shant komal or kisi bhi burai gussa ya dvesh se rahit tha .Per aaj pata ni use kya ho gaya tha.

Jyoti :- pata ni bhai mujhe aaj kya ho gaya tha, lekin mere dil ko ab laga ki ab bahut ho gaya h aakhir kab tak hum bina vajah papa or choti maa k atyachar sahenge . Isliye mera krodh mujh per havi ho gaya.sorry bhai aapko mere is tarah k behavior se bura laga to.


Karan :- are kesi bat ker rahi h gudiya tu to meri jaan h , teri kisi baat ka m bhala bura man sakta hu kya . M to bas bol raha hu gudiya tu hamesha ese hi khush raha ker.

Jyoti baat ko badalte hue side m beth jati h or boli

Jyoti :- vese partner ji kal k competition k liye teyar ho na.

Karan bhi uth k beth jata h.

Karan :- ha ji madam ji hum to bahut excited h kal k liye.

Jyoti :- or wo kyu bhala ji.

Jyoti k hoto ko halka sa chumte hue .

Karan :- are bhai ab jiski itni sunder gf ho wo bhala excited kyu na hoga couple dance k liye . Kal sabhi ladko ko jalane m maja aayega.

Jyoti (sharmate hue) :- kya bhai aap bhi or
Jyoti blush kerne lagti h

Karan dil p dono hath rak ke piche ki taraf girte hue majakiya andaj m awara romeo ki tarah bolta h.

Karan :- uff ye adaye .

Jyoti karan ki is harkat pe khil khila ker hasne lagti h , or karan bhi man hi man khush ho raha tha ki uski jaan ab bilkul shant or khush thi.

Ese hi vo thodi der baate kerte rahate h fir dono hamesha ki tarah mil ker khana banate or ek sath khane lagte h ,or jese hi sone ki teyari kerte h ,

Shivani room m aati h , jise dekh ker karan bolta h .

Karan :- are princess aap yaha is wakt soye ni abhi tak.

Shivani :- ha bhaiya wo actually mujhe nind ni aarahi thi , kya m aapke pass so sakti hu.


Karan :- kya ni betu ,
or bed pe lete lete hue hi bahe felaker bolta h .

Karan :- aajao mera bacha .

Shivani bhi kud ker karan k uper aajati h or karan use apne uper hi sula leta h.

Or jyoti bhi ek side se karan se chipak k so jati h.

Agle din karan or jyoti subah 5 baje uth ker dhayan m beth jaate h , aaj karan apne ander ki jagrit aadhi shaktiyo per kabu pa chuka tha.

Karib do ghante baad vo dhyan se uthte h . Fir shivani ko bhi utha ker ready hone ko bolte h.


Karan ek three piece suit m bahut handsome lag raha tha.

Or fir jyoti bhi teyar ho ker aati h rad colour ki dress m vo bahut beautiful lag rahi thi.
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Fir 3no bhai bahan college pahunchte h jaha baki sab bhi mil jate h .

Sabhi karan or jyoti ki khub tarif kerte h. Fir karan or jyoti back stage pe chale jate h .

Tabhi vaha sanna aati h

Sana:- hi jyoti looking so beautiful yaar.

Jyoti:- hi sana and u tooo.

Sana :- thanks wese tera partner bhi bahut handsome h lagta h compitition tum hi jitoge.

Jyoti kuch ni bolti or muskurati h bas ,

Sana:- chal na jyoti abhi teri bari m time h to kyu na canteen m ek ek coffee ho jaye .

Jyoti :- ok ruko m karan ko bata du jara.

Jyoti sana ya college m.kisi ko bhi karan se khud ka rishta ni bataya tha aaj tak.

Karan:- kaha jane ki baat ho rahi h sana ji.

Jyoti sari baat bata deti h.

Karan :- are ye kya baat hui jyoti ko coffee or hume pucha bhi ni.

Sana:- are are esi baat ni h tum bhi chalo na karan .

Fir 3no canteen pahunchte h or sana coffee leker aati h , lekin usme kuch mila deti h or jese hi wo karan or jyoti k pass leker aati h , karan ek chutki bajaker jyoti or sana k cup ki coffee apni shakti se change ker deta h ,

Or jese hi sana coffee piti h usko bahut ajib lagne lagta h or wo waha se baad m milne ka bahaana kerke nikal jati h .

Actually usne jyoti ki coffee m drug milaya tha jo turant asar kerta h , lekin karan ki vajah se usne khud hi vo drug le liya tha.

Sb uski halat kharab ho gayi thi or vo jaldi se college se bhag gayi kyunki use is drugs k symptom k bare m pata tha.

Hua yu tha ki kal jab ye dono hall m hi planning ker rahe the tab inki baate karan ne bhi sun li thi , kyunki powers jagrit hone k baad uske sunnne ki shamta 100 guna bad chuki thi.

Or is tarah inka plan fail ho gaya tha.

Fir karan or jyoti ka no bhi aahi jata h .

Karan or jyoti bahut sunder dance kerte h is song per
O karam khudhaya h
Tujhe mujhse milaya hai
Tujhpe marke hi toh
Mujhe jeena aaya hai

O tere sang yaara
Khushrang bahara
Tu raat deewani
Main zard sitara

O tere sang yaara
Khushrang bahara
Main tera ho jaun
Jo tu karde ishara

Kahi kisi bhi gali mein jaaun main
Teri khushbu se takraun main
Har raat jo aata hai mujhe
Woh khwab tu..

Tera mera milna dastoor hai
Tere hone se mujhme noor hai
Main hoon soona sa ek aasmaan
Mehtaab tu..

O karam khudaya hai
Tujhe maine jo paaya hai
Tujhpe marke hi toh
Mujhe jeena aaya hai

O tere sang yaara
Khush rang bahara
Tu raat deewani
Main zard sitara

O tere sang yara
Khush rang bahara
Tere bin ab toh
Na jeena ganvara

Karan or jyoti ki performance itni shandar thi ki audience k sath judge bhi khade ho ker taliya bajate h.

Or kuch der baad result announce hota h, jiske winner karan or jyoti hi hote h.





Sorry friends aaj meri tabiyat thik ni h to ye wala seen short m niptaya h kyunki is seen m kuch esa khas tha bhi ni

Ab dekhte h kon h wo shaks jisko karan or jyoti ki adbhut kabiliyat se herani ni hoti, kyu jyoti ka krodh baar bar bhadak raha h, or sohail ab kya karega , janne k liye sath bane rahiye
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