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Get well soon karan bhai
Or reviews maine dena band kardiya hai bhai kyunki kuch logonko mere reviews pasand nahi ati isliye me apke saath bi aise reviews deke apke man ko thes naji pahunchana chahta haa kabhi kabhi update bahut ache hote hai or kabhi kabhi thoda dissappointing type vala bura tho nahi keh sakte na mera or apka bhai bhai ka jo dostiwala rishta bangaya hai wo waise hi barkaraar rehne do or waise bi story itni achi hai ki har update jubaan band kar deta hai kehne ko kuch hai hi nahi
Ye sub me kitne dinonse kehna chahta tha apse lakin keh nahi paya uske liye maafi
Mene job chod di thi kuch kaaranonke vajase isleye stress me tha abhi abhi last 2 update padke or apke tabiyat kharaab hone ka jaanke comment karne la man kiya tho keh diya
Anyways keep posting keep rocking
Or reviews maine dena band kardiya hai bhai kyunki kuch logonko mere reviews pasand nahi ati isliye me apke saath bi aise reviews deke apke man ko thes naji pahunchana chahta haa kabhi kabhi update bahut ache hote hai or kabhi kabhi thoda dissappointing type vala bura tho nahi keh sakte na mera or apka bhai bhai ka jo dostiwala rishta bangaya hai wo waise hi barkaraar rehne do or waise bi story itni achi hai ki har update jubaan band kar deta hai kehne ko kuch hai hi nahi
Ye sub me kitne dinonse kehna chahta tha apse lakin keh nahi paya uske liye maafi
Mene job chod di thi kuch kaaranonke vajase isleye stress me tha abhi abhi last 2 update padke or apke tabiyat kharaab hone ka jaanke comment karne la man kiya tho keh diya
Anyways keep posting keep rocking
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Naina Or uske dost us jungle kisi sima per pahunch gaye jo unki manjil thi, nainna apne dosto k sath jeep se uterte hue boli.
Naina :- lo dosto aagayi humari munjil, yahi h korga ka jungle, jaha milega hume trishstra ka agla bhag.
Veer :- to fir chaliye sali sahiba gir der kis baat ki
Naina :- veer ye majak ka time ni h, ye jungle dayano ka adda h, yaha ander pag pag per khatra ho sakta h to hume savdhan rahana hoga.
Preety josh Or gusse wale swar me :- khatre se dar jaye wo preety ni aane do un chudelo ko aaj unhe bhi pata chal jayega ki preety kya chij h.
Ye bol preety bina kisi ka jwab sune aage bad gayi.
Veer :- ye preety ko achank kya hua.
Naina chintit swar me :- vahi jiska dar tha.
Veer :- matlab.
Preety aage badhte hue boli :- ab yaha khade khade bate hi kerte rahoge ya aage bhi chaloge.
Ye bolte hue preety ne piche ghum k ek baar dekha to sab chonk gaye kyunki preety ki ankhe lal rang me ese chamk rahi thi mano ki koi light lagi ho.
Naina :- ha ha chlo
Ye bol naina or uske sathi preety k piche piche chalne lage , preety bahut ugra ho chuki thi, ye dekh ker hi pata chal raha tha.
Kuch aage chalne k baad naina dekhti h kisi Kuch aage jhadiya itni ghani h ki wo ek diwar jesi ban chuki h.
Lekin preety unki or Bhadti hi ja rahi h.
Naina :- ruk jao preety, aage rasta band h hume koi or rasta dhundna hoga.
Preety gurate hue swar me :- rasta badl du or vo bhi in mamuli jhadiyo k liye, namunkin.
Ye bol preety ne apna hath uper kiya or uske hath me talwaar aagayi, ye vrushali kisi vahi jadui talvaar thi jo usne marte waqt preety ko sompi thi.
Preety :- ab dekh choti apni bahan ki shakti.
Ye bol preety ne hava m talvar ko yu chalaya jisse ek tez roshni jaker jhadiyo se takrayi Or agle hi pal ek dhamake k sath jhadiyo ki talvar jal ker rakh ho gayi.
Preety talvaar ko gayab ker muskurate hue :- lo rasta teyar h.
Ab chale.
Naina or veer jo preety k is vyavhaar ko dekh heran the wo bas gardan hilate hue aage bade.
Wahi dusri or
Location :- patal lok
Vp jo apne aage ki yojna ki tayari m laga hua tha, tabhi ek doot vaha pahunch ker use pranam ketta h.
Vp :- kaho kya khabar laye ho doot.
Doot :- maharaj ek achi khabar h, trityao k raja samraat ka pata chal chuka h.
Vp ye khabar sun khushi se khada ho gaya.
Vp :- kya samrat ka pata chal gaya.
Doot :- ha maharaj or itna hi ni, khabar ye bhi praapt hui ki samraat ka tap bhi shighra purn hone wala h.
Vp khushi se ek sone k sikko ki potli us doot ko pakdate hue kaha.
Doot sikko ko dekh khush hote hue :- maharaj ab aage kya aadesh h mere liye.
Vp :- kuch bhi ni, ab tum jao or apne inam ka lupt uthao, ab jo kerna h wo m khud hi karunga.
Doot :-maharaj ki jai ho
Bol ker nikal gaya.
Vp shetani hasi haste hue :- tera ant samay aachuka h rakshak, samraat m aaraha hu..
Ye bol vp gayab ho gaya waha se
Aaiye ek najar apne hero pe bhi dal lete h
Subah karib 9 baje ka waqt tha or karan or uski family safar per jane ko ready ho gayi thi.
Karan ne to tay kiya tha ki sab flight se jayenge, lekin sabhi bahano ki by road jane ka man tha or karan bhala apni bahano ko mana kese ker sakta tha.
Isliye usne ridhima ko kahker ek private bus book kerne ko kaha.
Yaha jesa pyaar karan ne apni bahano k liye dikhaya wesa hi pyar or care ridhima ne bhi dikhayi.
Karan ne to use ek normal bus kerne ko kaha tha per ridhima ne karan or uski family k liye ek luxury vip bus book ker di, jisme ghar jesi sabhi suvidhayen thi.
Karan teyar hoker bahar aata h or ye dekhker bola.
Karan :- are meri pyari didu itna kharcha kerne ki kya jarurat thi, hum sab normal bus se hi chale jate.
Ridhima karan k gal k sahalate hue :- are mere pyare betu, esa isliye kyunki m ni chahti ki mera pyara chota bhai ko raste me kisi chij ki problem na ho.
(Shikayati dhang se) vese bhai thats not fare m kal hi to aayi thi or humne to abhi sath me time bhi spend ni kiya or tum ja rahe ho.
Ye bolte hue ridhima ki ankhe thodi nam ho gayi.
Karan ghabra ker :- are didi ap rone kyu lagi, please rona band kijiye werna m bhi ro dunga , aap to jante ho na ki apka betu sab bardaasht ker sakta h per apni bahano ki ankho m asu ni.
(Karan ridhima ko gale lagate hue) apne sahi kaha didu galti to mane ki h, or yakin maniye di mera bhi aapko chod k jane ka dil ni ker raha , per yaha koi to hona hi chahiye na jo swati di ka khayal rakh sake or ab to sona bhi ni ja rahi, isliye meri najar me unka khayal apse jyada or koi acha ni rakh sakta tha.
Yadi aap fir bhi kahoge to m bhi yahi ruk jata hu.
Ridhima karan k gal khichte hue :- are ni ni mere paglu, Tu to majak bhi ni samjhta , mujhe apne betu se koi sikayat ni h , tum jao or khub enjoy kero, swati di or sonam ki bilkul tension mat lena.
Per ha aane k baad m tumhe kahi ni jane dungi, tumhe apne pas hi rakhungi.
Karan :- aane k bAd to m bhi apni didu ko chod k kahi ni jaunga, bas unke sath hi rahunga.
Ridhima karan k gal khichte hue :- aww so sweet.
Karan jhuta gussa dikhate hue :- didu.
Ridhima muskurate hue :- kyaa
Karan :- mane aapse kitni baar kaha h na mere gal mat khicha kero, mujhe ye pasand ni.
Ridhima :- ni m to ye karungi or jyada bola na to ye tumhare rasgulle jese galo ko kha bhi jaungi.
Ye bol ridhima Karan k gal pe kaat bhi leti h.
Karan bacho jese apne gal sahalate hue :- ouch gandi didu.
Ye bol karan or ridhima dono has pade , kuch der hasi majak k baad sabhi teyar ho ker aa gaye.
Karan or jyoti k sath gaon jane wale the, radha, riya , rohan, kavya, garima, geeta or priya .
Sabhi bahane gadi dekh ker bahut khush hui or ridhima ko thanks kaha.
Fir kavya ne ek maa ka farz nibhate hue sonam ko kayi instructions diye or kafi dular bhi, sonam bhi khud ko normal dikhane ki kosis ker rahi thi, lekin karan saf saf apni sona ki udasi or dukh ko mahasus ker pa raha tha jise sonam chupane ki lakh kosis ker rahi thi.
Karan man hi man me :- janta hu meri sona tum Bahut kasht or pida m ho, per m chah ker bhi kuch ni ker sakta bahana, ye tumhaari pariksha h jise tumhe hi par kerna hoga.
Kuch der yu hi emotional seen chalne k baad karan or uski family nikal padi apni manjil apne ganv ki or.
Lekin karan ka dil man ni raha tha yu Sonam ko ese duvidha m chod k jane ka, wo chahta tha ki baat ki ghambhirta ko Sonam dhang se samjhe or use samjhane ka kaam is bar Karan ni kr sakta tha.
Abhi karan kuch soch hi raha tha ki uske chahre P ek muskan aayi or usne turant apni ankhe band ker kuch kerna start ker diya.
Wahi dusri or
Naina or uski team yuhi aage badh rahi thi, preety aage aage or baki uske piche piche.
Veer dhire se :- naina ye preety ko achank kya ho gaya, ye esa kyu vyavhaar ker rahi h.
Samar :- esa isliye ho raha h , kyunki ye jungle sirf dayano ka gad hi ni balki yaha se trityao k samrajya ki sima bhi start ho jati h.
Or jab do tritya ek dusre k sampark m aate h to wo bahut hi ugra ho jate h, jesa preety k sath ho raha h
Naina chonkte hue :- aapne bilkul sahi jwav diya bhai, lekin is baare m aPko kese pata.
Samar dukhi hote hue :- ni janta nainu, ye sab mujhe kese pata h or is bare m yaad kerne ki kosis krta hu to tum janti hi ho kya hota h.
Naina Samar k khande P hath rakh use dilasa deti h, tabhi veer bola
Veer :- iska matlab to ye hua naina ki jese jese hum apni manjil ki or bhadhenge....
Naina veer ki baat puri kerte hue :- wese wese preety P khatra bhadega.
Veer tension m :- fir to hume kuch kerna hoga naina,
(Preety ko pukarte hue) preety ruk jao aage khatra ho sakta h.
Preety :- preety khatro se ni darti veer....
Preety ne abhi apni baat bhi puri bhi ni ki thi ki achanak se uska per ek jagah pada or ye kya wo jaker ek khade me gir gayi.
Sab ek sath chillate hue :- preety
Sabhi preety ki or dode per ye kya naina jab us or bhagi to usne mahasus kiya ki uske pero k niche koi button jesa kuch press hua ho or agle hi pal samne se do mayavi rasiya bahut tezi se se aayi or naina or samar ko apni giraft me le liya.
Veer bhi ek jaal me fas gaya or ped per latak gaya.
Abhi sab kuch samjh pate ki ye sab kya hua tha ki usse pahale hi unke kano me bhayanak hasi gunjane lagi.
Naina samar or veer us
Or usike sath 15 20 dayane waha aaphunchi.
Dayan :- are wah dekho saheliyon aaj to shetan ne humari sun li, itne dino baD koi insan hath lage h.
Dayan 2 :- sahi kaha bahan, m to itne dino se janwar kha kha k ub gayi thi, ab in logo ka taza or naram mas to m bade swad k sath khaungi.
Dayan 3 :- hmm wo sab chodo or tum log sun lo kan khol kr ye ladka(veer ki or ishara kerte hue), ye sirf mera h.
Naina bich me :- wese disturb kerne k liye sorry, per aap logo ki jaankari k liye bata du madam hum aapki rani ka kam tamam kerne aaye h na ki aap logo ka dinner banne.
Isliye tum logo ki bhalayi isime h ki chupchap hum sb ko khole or yaha se jane de, verna aage jo tum logo k sath hoga, uski jimedar tum khud hogi.
Dayan 5 :- hihi, lagta h apni ankho k samne mot dekh ker dimagi santulan kho bethi ho ladki jab hi bahaki bahaki bate ker rahi ho.
Naina muskurate hue :- dimagi santulan m to ni khoi, per itna m kah sakti hu ki ager tum yaha se ni bhagi to tumhe apne pran jarur khone honge.
Dayan 2 :- ye ladki kuch jyada hi bol rahi h, ab sabse pahale yahi maregi.
Ye bol apna chaku liye hue wo Dayan age badhi naina ki taraf or jese hi us Dayan ne naina pe war kerna chaha
Tabhi achanak se ek udta hua chaku aaya or us Dayan ki gardan chirte hue wo chaku us Dayan k muh se nikal gaya or wo Dayan wahi dher ho gayi, us Dayan ko chikhne tak ka moka ni mila.
Apni sathi ki ye dardnak mot dekh baki haki baki rah gayi.
Or ek jordar dhamake k sath preety us khade se udti hui bahar aayi.
Preety jiski ankhe or bhi bhayanak ho chuki thi wo gusse se chillayi.
Preety :- tum 2 kodi ki dayano ki ye majal ki tumne mujhe giraya.
(Preety ne ek nile rang ka shakti punj banaya or unme se ek Dayan k uper fek mara)
Or uske agle hi pal pure vatavaran me us Dayan ki chink gujne lagi, use bijli k jhatke lagne lage or wo agle hi pal swaha ho gayi.
Dayan 1 k gusse ki simma bhi na rahi usne preety ko lalkara :- tu jo bhi h ab ni bachegi.
Ye bol us Dayan ne preety ki or aag k gole fekne lagi, preety bhi teyar thi or us Dayan ki or bhagi, Dayan k feke hue har gole ko wo apne talvar k var se katte hue aage bhadne lagi.
Baki dayano ne jab preety ko apni leader ki or aate dekha to wo bhi preety ko marne bhagi
Per preety ko koi fark na pada, sabse pahale jo ek Dayan aayi use preety ne badi hi bedardi se uske mathe m talvar ghop ker yamlok pahunchaya.
Do dayane ek sath preety pe hamla kerne aayi to preety ne ek k pet m talvar ghopte hue, dusri k pet me itna jabardat mukka mara ki uska hath Dayan k aar par ho gaya.
Preety ne apni fire power use kerte hue us Dayan k sharir m aag lagayi or apna ek per uske sharir P rakh apne hath ko bahar nikalte hue dusre hath se utha ker us lash ko samne se aarahi do dayano ki or feka wo lash jaker sidha un dono k uper giri or agle hi pal ek dhamaka hua jiske sath un dono k chitde chithde ho gaye
Veer jo preety ki is darindagi ko ankhe fade dekh raha tha, use itna bhi bhan na raha ki abhi wo jal m fasa hua h.
Tabhi naina ne use pukara.
Naina :- veer hume bhi preety ki madad kerni chahiye .
Veer naina ka ishara samjh gaya or usne turant apni power ka use kerte hue khud ko or sabko aajad kiya.
Naina ne turant apna trishul nikala or veer ne bhi apna dhanush nikala or wo bhi tut pade dayano pr.
Preety ne badi bedardi se sabko katte hue Dayan 1 k pas pahunch gayi, preety ki bhayanak laal ankhe dekh to ek baar Dayan tak kamp gayi.
Lekin agle hi pal usne ek shaktishali shakti ka gola preety ki or fenka, per preety apni jagah se hili tak ni wo bas bina kuch kahe muskra rahi thi.
Ek dhamke k satg sath gola preety se takraya per ye kya preety to apni jagah se hili tak ni, wo vese hi muskura rahi thi.
Dayan 1 :- asambhav koi bhi mere is war se ni bach sakta tha, kon ho tum.
Preety tezi se jaker Dayan ki gardan pakad use hava me latkate hue boli :- tuj jesi tuch Dayan ki okaat ni h murkh jo mujh preety, yani ek tritiya ko hara sake.
Isike preety ne apne dusre hath pe mojud apne nishan ko dikhaya jo chamak raha tha.
Us nishan ko dekhte hi Dayan ki fat k hath m aagayi.
Dayan tadafte hue :- kya tum ek tritiya ho.
Preety shetani muskan k sath :- sirf tritiya hi ni (tez aawaz me) teri mot hu m.
Ye bol preety ne badi hi berahami se apne hath ko us Dayan k sine m ghop diya or uske dil ko khech ker bahar nikal dala or isi k sath us Dayan ka kam bhi tamam hua.
Preety shetani hasi haste hue :- haha kaha tha n mane koi ni bach sakta mere hatho, koi bhi ni.
Wahi naina or veer ne bhi bakiyo ka kam pura ker diya tha or wo turant preety ki or dode or use sambhalte hue shant kerne lage.
Veer :- preety tum thik to ho na.
Preety :- m to thik hu meri jan (haste hue lasho ki or ishara kerte hue) in dayano se pucho kahi inhe chot to ni lagi.
Ye bol preety jor jor se hasne lagi, preety or naina kese n kese kerr preety ko kuch normal kerte h tabhi naina ko samar ki yaad aayi kr usne paya ki samar to yaha aas pas h hi ni.
Naina tension m :- veer samar bhai kaha h, wo kahi najar ni aarahe.
Veer bhi naina ki baat sun chonkte :- kya abhi to wo yahi the.
Abhi naina or veer kuch kerte usse pahale hi unke kano m ek chikh padi jo samar ki thi.
Samar :- bachao.
Naina :- ye to bhai ki chikh h.
Veer :- aawaz to us or se aarahi h.
Naina veer or preety turant us or bhage, kuch dur jane per unhone paya ki kuch dayano ne use ggher rakha h or wo use marne hi wali h.
Veer ne turant apne dhanush se ek mantra bol tir chalaya or agle hi pal wo ek tir kayi tir ban un dayano ko lage or unka kam tamam ho gaya.
Naina turant samar k pas pahunch use sanbhalti hui boli.
Naina :- bhai aP thik to h na, apko chot to ni lagi.
Samar :- fikar mat karo bahan m thik hu, wo kuch ker pati ise pahale hi Tum yaha aapahunchi.
Veer :- per samar tum yaha pahunche kese.
Samar :- jab aap sab un dayano se lad rahe the to in dayano ne piche se mere ko dhar dabocha or mera muh band ker yaha le aayi veer, wo to sahi time pe tum log aapahunche ni to uper wale se meeting fix thi.
Naina samar ko marte hue :- kitti baar kaha h aapko ki esi manhoos bat ni kkerte.
(Udaas hote hue) maaf ker do bhai galti meri hi h jo mane aapko akela chod diya, ab aap mera hath pakad ker hi rahoge or mere sath hi rahoge.
Ye bol naina uthi or apne sathiyo ko sath liye or samar ka hath thame aage badi.
Kuch dur aage jane k baad rasta 2 bhago m bat gaya or ab naina or uske dosto ko samjh ni aaraha tha ki wo kya kare.
Veer :- naina ye kya ab hume kese pata chalega ki hume konse raste pe jana h.
Abhi sab yahi soch rahe the ki tabhi un sab k kano me ek aawaz padi.
Rasta bhatak gaye ho to m kuch madad keru.
Naina or uske dosto me us or dekha to paya kuch dur ek lamba choda admi jiski bheshbhusha kisi rajkumar ki tarah thi or uski ankhe bhi lal rang m chamak rahi thi.
Preety rob me :- tum jo bhi ho kya hume bata sakte ho ki dayano ki rani ka khandhar kaha h.
Admi :- khandhar k raste pe to ni, per tumhe bas ek hi raste pe pahuchane m yaha aaya hu.
(Ek aag ka gola un sab ki or fekte hue) tumhari mot ka.
Naina sabse ::- jhuko sab
Sab ek sath jhuk ker us gole ko dodge ker dete h or wo gola unke uper se nikal ker piche pedo se ja takraya or waha aag lag gayi.
Naina apna trishul nikalte hue :- kon ho tum.
Admi :- wese to m tumhari mot hu, per nam janne ka itna hi shok h to suno m hu tritiyo ka rajkumaar....
Markesh
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Note :- friends jese ki mane aapko bataya ki mere ko bhukar h isliye m itne din update ni de paya, or abhi bhi tabiyat kuch khas sahi ni h, fir bhi ye ek update likh liya, update thoda chota h so please adjust krr lijiyega or u hi sath bane rahiyega
Naina Or uske dost us jungle kisi sima per pahunch gaye jo unki manjil thi, nainna apne dosto k sath jeep se uterte hue boli.
Naina :- lo dosto aagayi humari munjil, yahi h korga ka jungle, jaha milega hume trishstra ka agla bhag.
Veer :- to fir chaliye sali sahiba gir der kis baat ki
Naina :- veer ye majak ka time ni h, ye jungle dayano ka adda h, yaha ander pag pag per khatra ho sakta h to hume savdhan rahana hoga.
Preety josh Or gusse wale swar me :- khatre se dar jaye wo preety ni aane do un chudelo ko aaj unhe bhi pata chal jayega ki preety kya chij h.
Ye bol preety bina kisi ka jwab sune aage bad gayi.
Veer :- ye preety ko achank kya hua.
Naina chintit swar me :- vahi jiska dar tha.
Veer :- matlab.
Preety aage badhte hue boli :- ab yaha khade khade bate hi kerte rahoge ya aage bhi chaloge.
Ye bolte hue preety ne piche ghum k ek baar dekha to sab chonk gaye kyunki preety ki ankhe lal rang me ese chamk rahi thi mano ki koi light lagi ho.
Naina :- ha ha chlo
Ye bol naina or uske sathi preety k piche piche chalne lage , preety bahut ugra ho chuki thi, ye dekh ker hi pata chal raha tha.
Kuch aage chalne k baad naina dekhti h kisi Kuch aage jhadiya itni ghani h ki wo ek diwar jesi ban chuki h.
Lekin preety unki or Bhadti hi ja rahi h.
Naina :- ruk jao preety, aage rasta band h hume koi or rasta dhundna hoga.
Preety gurate hue swar me :- rasta badl du or vo bhi in mamuli jhadiyo k liye, namunkin.
Ye bol preety ne apna hath uper kiya or uske hath me talwaar aagayi, ye vrushali kisi vahi jadui talvaar thi jo usne marte waqt preety ko sompi thi.
Preety :- ab dekh choti apni bahan ki shakti.
Ye bol preety ne hava m talvar ko yu chalaya jisse ek tez roshni jaker jhadiyo se takrayi Or agle hi pal ek dhamake k sath jhadiyo ki talvar jal ker rakh ho gayi.
Preety talvaar ko gayab ker muskurate hue :- lo rasta teyar h.
Ab chale.
Naina or veer jo preety k is vyavhaar ko dekh heran the wo bas gardan hilate hue aage bade.
Wahi dusri or
Location :- patal lok
Vp jo apne aage ki yojna ki tayari m laga hua tha, tabhi ek doot vaha pahunch ker use pranam ketta h.
Vp :- kaho kya khabar laye ho doot.
Doot :- maharaj ek achi khabar h, trityao k raja samraat ka pata chal chuka h.
Vp ye khabar sun khushi se khada ho gaya.
Vp :- kya samrat ka pata chal gaya.
Doot :- ha maharaj or itna hi ni, khabar ye bhi praapt hui ki samraat ka tap bhi shighra purn hone wala h.
Vp khushi se ek sone k sikko ki potli us doot ko pakdate hue kaha.
Doot sikko ko dekh khush hote hue :- maharaj ab aage kya aadesh h mere liye.
Vp :- kuch bhi ni, ab tum jao or apne inam ka lupt uthao, ab jo kerna h wo m khud hi karunga.
Doot :-maharaj ki jai ho
Bol ker nikal gaya.
Vp shetani hasi haste hue :- tera ant samay aachuka h rakshak, samraat m aaraha hu..
Ye bol vp gayab ho gaya waha se
Aaiye ek najar apne hero pe bhi dal lete h
Subah karib 9 baje ka waqt tha or karan or uski family safar per jane ko ready ho gayi thi.
Karan ne to tay kiya tha ki sab flight se jayenge, lekin sabhi bahano ki by road jane ka man tha or karan bhala apni bahano ko mana kese ker sakta tha.
Isliye usne ridhima ko kahker ek private bus book kerne ko kaha.
Yaha jesa pyaar karan ne apni bahano k liye dikhaya wesa hi pyar or care ridhima ne bhi dikhayi.
Karan ne to use ek normal bus kerne ko kaha tha per ridhima ne karan or uski family k liye ek luxury vip bus book ker di, jisme ghar jesi sabhi suvidhayen thi.
Karan teyar hoker bahar aata h or ye dekhker bola.
Karan :- are meri pyari didu itna kharcha kerne ki kya jarurat thi, hum sab normal bus se hi chale jate.
Ridhima karan k gal k sahalate hue :- are mere pyare betu, esa isliye kyunki m ni chahti ki mera pyara chota bhai ko raste me kisi chij ki problem na ho.
(Shikayati dhang se) vese bhai thats not fare m kal hi to aayi thi or humne to abhi sath me time bhi spend ni kiya or tum ja rahe ho.
Ye bolte hue ridhima ki ankhe thodi nam ho gayi.
Karan ghabra ker :- are didi ap rone kyu lagi, please rona band kijiye werna m bhi ro dunga , aap to jante ho na ki apka betu sab bardaasht ker sakta h per apni bahano ki ankho m asu ni.
(Karan ridhima ko gale lagate hue) apne sahi kaha didu galti to mane ki h, or yakin maniye di mera bhi aapko chod k jane ka dil ni ker raha , per yaha koi to hona hi chahiye na jo swati di ka khayal rakh sake or ab to sona bhi ni ja rahi, isliye meri najar me unka khayal apse jyada or koi acha ni rakh sakta tha.
Yadi aap fir bhi kahoge to m bhi yahi ruk jata hu.
Ridhima karan k gal khichte hue :- are ni ni mere paglu, Tu to majak bhi ni samjhta , mujhe apne betu se koi sikayat ni h , tum jao or khub enjoy kero, swati di or sonam ki bilkul tension mat lena.
Per ha aane k baad m tumhe kahi ni jane dungi, tumhe apne pas hi rakhungi.
Karan :- aane k bAd to m bhi apni didu ko chod k kahi ni jaunga, bas unke sath hi rahunga.
Ridhima karan k gal khichte hue :- aww so sweet.
Karan jhuta gussa dikhate hue :- didu.
Ridhima muskurate hue :- kyaa
Karan :- mane aapse kitni baar kaha h na mere gal mat khicha kero, mujhe ye pasand ni.
Ridhima :- ni m to ye karungi or jyada bola na to ye tumhare rasgulle jese galo ko kha bhi jaungi.
Ye bol ridhima Karan k gal pe kaat bhi leti h.
Karan bacho jese apne gal sahalate hue :- ouch gandi didu.
Ye bol karan or ridhima dono has pade , kuch der hasi majak k baad sabhi teyar ho ker aa gaye.
Karan or jyoti k sath gaon jane wale the, radha, riya , rohan, kavya, garima, geeta or priya .
Sabhi bahane gadi dekh ker bahut khush hui or ridhima ko thanks kaha.
Fir kavya ne ek maa ka farz nibhate hue sonam ko kayi instructions diye or kafi dular bhi, sonam bhi khud ko normal dikhane ki kosis ker rahi thi, lekin karan saf saf apni sona ki udasi or dukh ko mahasus ker pa raha tha jise sonam chupane ki lakh kosis ker rahi thi.
Karan man hi man me :- janta hu meri sona tum Bahut kasht or pida m ho, per m chah ker bhi kuch ni ker sakta bahana, ye tumhaari pariksha h jise tumhe hi par kerna hoga.
Kuch der yu hi emotional seen chalne k baad karan or uski family nikal padi apni manjil apne ganv ki or.
Lekin karan ka dil man ni raha tha yu Sonam ko ese duvidha m chod k jane ka, wo chahta tha ki baat ki ghambhirta ko Sonam dhang se samjhe or use samjhane ka kaam is bar Karan ni kr sakta tha.
Abhi karan kuch soch hi raha tha ki uske chahre P ek muskan aayi or usne turant apni ankhe band ker kuch kerna start ker diya.
Wahi dusri or
Naina or uski team yuhi aage badh rahi thi, preety aage aage or baki uske piche piche.
Veer dhire se :- naina ye preety ko achank kya ho gaya, ye esa kyu vyavhaar ker rahi h.
Samar :- esa isliye ho raha h , kyunki ye jungle sirf dayano ka gad hi ni balki yaha se trityao k samrajya ki sima bhi start ho jati h.
Or jab do tritya ek dusre k sampark m aate h to wo bahut hi ugra ho jate h, jesa preety k sath ho raha h
Naina chonkte hue :- aapne bilkul sahi jwav diya bhai, lekin is baare m aPko kese pata.
Samar dukhi hote hue :- ni janta nainu, ye sab mujhe kese pata h or is bare m yaad kerne ki kosis krta hu to tum janti hi ho kya hota h.
Naina Samar k khande P hath rakh use dilasa deti h, tabhi veer bola
Veer :- iska matlab to ye hua naina ki jese jese hum apni manjil ki or bhadhenge....
Naina veer ki baat puri kerte hue :- wese wese preety P khatra bhadega.
Veer tension m :- fir to hume kuch kerna hoga naina,
(Preety ko pukarte hue) preety ruk jao aage khatra ho sakta h.
Preety :- preety khatro se ni darti veer....
Preety ne abhi apni baat bhi puri bhi ni ki thi ki achanak se uska per ek jagah pada or ye kya wo jaker ek khade me gir gayi.
Sab ek sath chillate hue :- preety
Sabhi preety ki or dode per ye kya naina jab us or bhagi to usne mahasus kiya ki uske pero k niche koi button jesa kuch press hua ho or agle hi pal samne se do mayavi rasiya bahut tezi se se aayi or naina or samar ko apni giraft me le liya.
Veer bhi ek jaal me fas gaya or ped per latak gaya.
Abhi sab kuch samjh pate ki ye sab kya hua tha ki usse pahale hi unke kano me bhayanak hasi gunjane lagi.
Naina samar or veer us
Or usike sath 15 20 dayane waha aaphunchi.
Dayan :- are wah dekho saheliyon aaj to shetan ne humari sun li, itne dino baD koi insan hath lage h.
Dayan 2 :- sahi kaha bahan, m to itne dino se janwar kha kha k ub gayi thi, ab in logo ka taza or naram mas to m bade swad k sath khaungi.
Dayan 3 :- hmm wo sab chodo or tum log sun lo kan khol kr ye ladka(veer ki or ishara kerte hue), ye sirf mera h.
Naina bich me :- wese disturb kerne k liye sorry, per aap logo ki jaankari k liye bata du madam hum aapki rani ka kam tamam kerne aaye h na ki aap logo ka dinner banne.
Isliye tum logo ki bhalayi isime h ki chupchap hum sb ko khole or yaha se jane de, verna aage jo tum logo k sath hoga, uski jimedar tum khud hogi.
Dayan 5 :- hihi, lagta h apni ankho k samne mot dekh ker dimagi santulan kho bethi ho ladki jab hi bahaki bahaki bate ker rahi ho.
Naina muskurate hue :- dimagi santulan m to ni khoi, per itna m kah sakti hu ki ager tum yaha se ni bhagi to tumhe apne pran jarur khone honge.
Dayan 2 :- ye ladki kuch jyada hi bol rahi h, ab sabse pahale yahi maregi.
Ye bol apna chaku liye hue wo Dayan age badhi naina ki taraf or jese hi us Dayan ne naina pe war kerna chaha
Tabhi achanak se ek udta hua chaku aaya or us Dayan ki gardan chirte hue wo chaku us Dayan k muh se nikal gaya or wo Dayan wahi dher ho gayi, us Dayan ko chikhne tak ka moka ni mila.
Apni sathi ki ye dardnak mot dekh baki haki baki rah gayi.
Or ek jordar dhamake k sath preety us khade se udti hui bahar aayi.
Preety jiski ankhe or bhi bhayanak ho chuki thi wo gusse se chillayi.
Preety :- tum 2 kodi ki dayano ki ye majal ki tumne mujhe giraya.
(Preety ne ek nile rang ka shakti punj banaya or unme se ek Dayan k uper fek mara)
Or uske agle hi pal pure vatavaran me us Dayan ki chink gujne lagi, use bijli k jhatke lagne lage or wo agle hi pal swaha ho gayi.
Dayan 1 k gusse ki simma bhi na rahi usne preety ko lalkara :- tu jo bhi h ab ni bachegi.
Ye bol us Dayan ne preety ki or aag k gole fekne lagi, preety bhi teyar thi or us Dayan ki or bhagi, Dayan k feke hue har gole ko wo apne talvar k var se katte hue aage bhadne lagi.
Baki dayano ne jab preety ko apni leader ki or aate dekha to wo bhi preety ko marne bhagi
Per preety ko koi fark na pada, sabse pahale jo ek Dayan aayi use preety ne badi hi bedardi se uske mathe m talvar ghop ker yamlok pahunchaya.
Do dayane ek sath preety pe hamla kerne aayi to preety ne ek k pet m talvar ghopte hue, dusri k pet me itna jabardat mukka mara ki uska hath Dayan k aar par ho gaya.
Preety ne apni fire power use kerte hue us Dayan k sharir m aag lagayi or apna ek per uske sharir P rakh apne hath ko bahar nikalte hue dusre hath se utha ker us lash ko samne se aarahi do dayano ki or feka wo lash jaker sidha un dono k uper giri or agle hi pal ek dhamaka hua jiske sath un dono k chitde chithde ho gaye
Veer jo preety ki is darindagi ko ankhe fade dekh raha tha, use itna bhi bhan na raha ki abhi wo jal m fasa hua h.
Tabhi naina ne use pukara.
Naina :- veer hume bhi preety ki madad kerni chahiye .
Veer naina ka ishara samjh gaya or usne turant apni power ka use kerte hue khud ko or sabko aajad kiya.
Naina ne turant apna trishul nikala or veer ne bhi apna dhanush nikala or wo bhi tut pade dayano pr.
Preety ne badi bedardi se sabko katte hue Dayan 1 k pas pahunch gayi, preety ki bhayanak laal ankhe dekh to ek baar Dayan tak kamp gayi.
Lekin agle hi pal usne ek shaktishali shakti ka gola preety ki or fenka, per preety apni jagah se hili tak ni wo bas bina kuch kahe muskra rahi thi.
Ek dhamke k satg sath gola preety se takraya per ye kya preety to apni jagah se hili tak ni, wo vese hi muskura rahi thi.
Dayan 1 :- asambhav koi bhi mere is war se ni bach sakta tha, kon ho tum.
Preety tezi se jaker Dayan ki gardan pakad use hava me latkate hue boli :- tuj jesi tuch Dayan ki okaat ni h murkh jo mujh preety, yani ek tritiya ko hara sake.
Isike preety ne apne dusre hath pe mojud apne nishan ko dikhaya jo chamak raha tha.
Us nishan ko dekhte hi Dayan ki fat k hath m aagayi.
Dayan tadafte hue :- kya tum ek tritiya ho.
Preety shetani muskan k sath :- sirf tritiya hi ni (tez aawaz me) teri mot hu m.
Ye bol preety ne badi hi berahami se apne hath ko us Dayan k sine m ghop diya or uske dil ko khech ker bahar nikal dala or isi k sath us Dayan ka kam bhi tamam hua.
Preety shetani hasi haste hue :- haha kaha tha n mane koi ni bach sakta mere hatho, koi bhi ni.
Wahi naina or veer ne bhi bakiyo ka kam pura ker diya tha or wo turant preety ki or dode or use sambhalte hue shant kerne lage.
Veer :- preety tum thik to ho na.
Preety :- m to thik hu meri jan (haste hue lasho ki or ishara kerte hue) in dayano se pucho kahi inhe chot to ni lagi.
Ye bol preety jor jor se hasne lagi, preety or naina kese n kese kerr preety ko kuch normal kerte h tabhi naina ko samar ki yaad aayi kr usne paya ki samar to yaha aas pas h hi ni.
Naina tension m :- veer samar bhai kaha h, wo kahi najar ni aarahe.
Veer bhi naina ki baat sun chonkte :- kya abhi to wo yahi the.
Abhi naina or veer kuch kerte usse pahale hi unke kano m ek chikh padi jo samar ki thi.
Samar :- bachao.
Naina :- ye to bhai ki chikh h.
Veer :- aawaz to us or se aarahi h.
Naina veer or preety turant us or bhage, kuch dur jane per unhone paya ki kuch dayano ne use ggher rakha h or wo use marne hi wali h.
Veer ne turant apne dhanush se ek mantra bol tir chalaya or agle hi pal wo ek tir kayi tir ban un dayano ko lage or unka kam tamam ho gaya.
Naina turant samar k pas pahunch use sanbhalti hui boli.
Naina :- bhai aP thik to h na, apko chot to ni lagi.
Samar :- fikar mat karo bahan m thik hu, wo kuch ker pati ise pahale hi Tum yaha aapahunchi.
Veer :- per samar tum yaha pahunche kese.
Samar :- jab aap sab un dayano se lad rahe the to in dayano ne piche se mere ko dhar dabocha or mera muh band ker yaha le aayi veer, wo to sahi time pe tum log aapahunche ni to uper wale se meeting fix thi.
Naina samar ko marte hue :- kitti baar kaha h aapko ki esi manhoos bat ni kkerte.
(Udaas hote hue) maaf ker do bhai galti meri hi h jo mane aapko akela chod diya, ab aap mera hath pakad ker hi rahoge or mere sath hi rahoge.
Ye bol naina uthi or apne sathiyo ko sath liye or samar ka hath thame aage badi.
Kuch dur aage jane k baad rasta 2 bhago m bat gaya or ab naina or uske dosto ko samjh ni aaraha tha ki wo kya kare.
Veer :- naina ye kya ab hume kese pata chalega ki hume konse raste pe jana h.
Abhi sab yahi soch rahe the ki tabhi un sab k kano me ek aawaz padi.
Rasta bhatak gaye ho to m kuch madad keru.
Naina or uske dosto me us or dekha to paya kuch dur ek lamba choda admi jiski bheshbhusha kisi rajkumar ki tarah thi or uski ankhe bhi lal rang m chamak rahi thi.
Preety rob me :- tum jo bhi ho kya hume bata sakte ho ki dayano ki rani ka khandhar kaha h.
Admi :- khandhar k raste pe to ni, per tumhe bas ek hi raste pe pahuchane m yaha aaya hu.
(Ek aag ka gola un sab ki or fekte hue) tumhari mot ka.
Naina sabse ::- jhuko sab
Sab ek sath jhuk ker us gole ko dodge ker dete h or wo gola unke uper se nikal ker piche pedo se ja takraya or waha aag lag gayi.
Naina apna trishul nikalte hue :- kon ho tum.
Admi :- wese to m tumhari mot hu, per nam janne ka itna hi shok h to suno m hu tritiyo ka rajkumaar....
Markesh
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