Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running (restart)

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ROCK sir main 1 silent reader thapar ab ap ki story padh kar zaroor comment karny ka man hota hy or ab har update par review dun ga

 

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story bohat hi achi hy or next update ka wait rahy ga

 

[Naina]

hmm... ye achha hua ki karan aur jyoti bapach ghar laut aaye nahi to sabhi padesaan rahte. Inke jinda bapach laut aane ki khabar sun Anita phir rohan bhi bhage chale aaye inke paas. family get together...
Oh to ek samay aisa bhi tha jab saas sasur ne bhi khub julm dhaye hai apni bahu aasha ki upor..
bhagya .. aaj karan jyoti ke Dada dadi ek pote ke liye tarash rahe he..unko sochna chahiye tha ki saas bhi kabhi bahu thi.
Umm ..garima ko apne mata pita ke taraf se maafi mangta dekh karan ne haan kar diya.. par dekhne wali baat ye hai ki inlogo ke bich woh pyar hoga joh dada pote ke bich hote hai ya phir dadi pote ke bich hote hai .. ye to waqt hi batayega..
I think, radha aur riya ko thodi bahot prayash aur Karni chahiye karan aur jyoti ko manane ke liye taki maafi mil jaye.. Agar karan aur jyoti phir bhi na mane to..... to woh apne raste........ aur riya aur radha apne raste... simple.
let's see, naina, my favorite ladaku preety aur veer kaha tak pahunche...
Brilliant update Harry ji.. Great going..

 

[Damha]

Jo kahani ranvir ne
aapni aur asha ki
batati thi...aur Jo
garima ne batati
usme bhot fark he...
Matlb kus aur Hi
baat he...


yrr kuch samaj nhi
aaya ki agar ranveer
ke paas pehle itni
doulat thi to phir
baad me asha ki
doulat par kabje ke
liye maar diya....


Aaj ye flashback sun
k lagta hi nhi
ranveer itna zyada
laalchi thi
Ulta vo bilkul sahi
lgta h
Karan jyoti wapas
jaruru jaaenge
Lekin karan ab phle
se kaafi samajhdaar
hogya h
Dada dadi k paas bhi
to jana h
Lekin vo wjh
saamne nhi aayi jis
wjh se do dosto k
beech daraar aagyi h
Baaki saare update
ki tone happy thi
Rohan se bhi milan
ho hi gya karan jyoti
ka
Brilliant update
Keep rocking bhai

 

[Naina]

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[Stone cold]

Update no :- 121
Agli subah karan or jyoti naha dhokar nikal pade apne purane ghar ki or jaha per unka sara parivar intezaar ker raha tha.

Ghar pahunch karan ne jese hi doorbell bajayi , uske agle ek min me kavya ne jhat se darwaja khol karan or jyoti ko apne sine se laga liya , bina dekhe hi.

Kavya :- aagaye mere bache , kaha the beta tum raat bhar

Karan herani.se:-. Choti maa aapko kese pata chala ki bell humne hi bajayi hogi.

Kavya kuch ni boli or muskurate hue karan or jyoti ko ander leker aayi , jaha uski sari bahane bhi uska intezaar ker rahi thi.

Karan or jyoti ko dekh ker to sabhi unpe hi tut padi , pahale to kafi der gale mil roti rahi or shikayat kerti rahi ki karan or jyoti ek baar fir unhe chod ker, jisme riya or radha bhi shamil thi .

Wo janti thi kaho ya ummid ki unka bhai unse nafrat ni ker sakta , vo bas abhi unse naraj h, or isliye unhonne than liya tha ki vo apne bhai ki narajgi dur ker , firse uske dil me apne liye prem jaga ker rahegi.

Karan ne apni bahano (radha or riya ko ignore kerte hue) ko bade hi pyar se samjhaya or unse vada kiya ki ab vo unhe chod ker kahi ni jayega .

Shivani sisakte hue:- pakka na bhaiyu , ab aap hume chod k kabhi ni jaoge na.

Karan shivani k galo ko chumte hue :- ha meri princess ab to yu rona band ker apne bhaiyu ko maaf ker do

Priya nakhre dikhate hue :- bhaiya aspdo , lu hi mafi mahi milegi

Jyoti priya ki naak halke se khichte hue :- ale bap le itu si naak or uspe itna gussa , acha fil aap hi batao , kya chaiye hamale bache ko

Sonam :- bhaiya aapko jab hi maafi milegi , jab aap hum sabko ghumane leker jaoge or dher sari shopping bhi karani hogi , kyu h na bahano.

Sari bahane sonam ki ha me ha milati h ,

Karan majak me :- dekh rahi h jyoti , sari mandli ne pahale hi planning ker k rakhi h , apni jeb ki waat lagane ki

Shivani :- aapko jo samjhna h samjhiye , but aapko ye baat manni hogi bhai, ni to hum sab aapse kati ker lenge.

Karan :- are ni ni iski jarurat ni h , meri pyari bahane kuch bole or m na manu esa kabhi hua h , acha batao kaha chalna h

Sonam :- wo to humne decide kiya hi ni .

Karan :- chalo koi ni tum sab milke decide ker lo ,hum next week hi jayenge ghumne.

Karan ki ha sun sabhi bahane jhum uthi khushi se, radha or riya bhi kyunki unko ye moka lag raha tha , wapas karan k karib aane ka.

(Ab aap soch rahe honge ki kal itne bade hungame k baad bhi yaha sab itna normal kese , to m aap sab ko bata du.

Jab sabne karan ki wo halat dekhi thi , tab karan ki sab bahane , kavya geeta or garima ne mil ker decide kiya ki , ab vo kuch esa ni karegi , jisse karan ko dukh pahunche ya tension ho or isliye sabne decide ker liya tha ki wo karan or jyoti k samne bilkul normal hi rahenge.)

Tabhi kavya ki aawaj aayi.

Kavya :- breakfast ready h bacho sab aake khana kha lo pahale.

Kavya ki aawaj sun sabhi bache waha pahunch gaye or table pe beth gaye.

Tabhi kavya garima or geeta khana banaker lati h , tab karan bola.

Karan :- bhua , mosi , choti maa aap bhi aaiye na sath me khana khate h.

Kavya :- beta pahale aap bache log kha lo fir hum kha lenge baad me .

Lekin karan or uski bahane na mani or un 3no ko bhi apne sath bitha liya ,or sab khana khane lage , karan or jyoti to humesha ki tarah ek dusre k hatho se kha rahe the , karan ne jese hi pahala nivala khaya , to uski ankho me pani aagaya.

Kyunki karan ne jo sabji khayi thi vo garima ne hi banayi thi jise khate hi use firse ek baar apni maa ki yaad aagayi , kyunki garima k hatho ka bana khane ka taste kafi had tak asha jesa tha.

Garima karan ki ankh me pani dekh chintit ho boli :- kya hua beta , tumhari ankho me pani kese , khana pasand ni aaya kya.

Karan :- ni ni bhua esi koi baat ni h ,ye aansu to bas isliye Kyunki aapke hatho ka bana khane ka swad bilkul mummy jesa h , jise khate hi mummy ki yaad aagayi mujhe.

Asha ka nam sun to garima bhi emotional ho gayi , per usne khud ko karan k liye sambhalte hue bola.

Garima :-. Oh to ye baat h , esa to hoga hi na beta , tumhe pata h tumhari is bhua ko khana banana tumhari mummy yani meri bhabhi ne hi to sikhaya tha.

Geeta :- or beta tum yu roya mat kera kero, kyunki tumhare pas to abhi bhi ek ni 3 3 maa to h na.

Tabhi ek aawaz sabke kaano me padi .

3 ni char

Sab ne main gate ki or dekha to anita khadi thi , jiski ankho me khushi k ansu the karan or jyoti ko sahi salamat dekh .

Anita itna hi bolte hi karan or jyoti k pass dod ke aayi or unhe sine se laga liya.

Anita rote hue:- kaha chale gaye the mere bacho tum , jante ho yaha hum sab ki kya halat ho gayi thi.

Anita ko kal sham ko hi riya ne phone kerke karan or jyoti k bare me bata diya tha, jise sun anita ka khushi ka thikana na raha , wo to kal hi aajana chati thi , lekin wo dusre state gayi hui thi , or us city me airport ni tha , isliye use majburan train se aaana pada, or wo station se sidha ghar ki yahi aayi thi.

Karan emotional hote hue :- geeta masi aapne sahi hi bola , m bevkoof befaltu hi ro raha tha , jabki mahadev ne to mujhe ek ni balki char char maye jesa amulya ashirvad k roop me di h , jo mujhse kitna pyaar kerti h.

Ye bol wo bari bari se sabhi k gale lagta h.

Abhi karan ke anita ko shant kerwaye hue ek ghante hi hue the ki tabhi waha rohan or uske papa bhi aapahunche.

Riya ne rohan ko bhi kafi baar phone kiya tha ye khushkhabri dene k liye, per shayad riya or uske bich matbhed k chalte usne uski ek call bhi receive na ki.

Tab riya ko apne papa ka khayal aaya , kyunki rohan unhike sath hi to tha kam k silsile me

Riya k papa ne jese hi ye khabar suni wo bhi bahut kush hue or rohan ki to ye khushkhabri sun khushi ka thikana na raha.

Unhone bhi apna sara kaam nipta aaj subah ki hi flight se hi sidha ghar aaphunche the.

Karan ko dekh ker rohan uski or doda , karan ne socha tha ki wo uske gale lagega , per yaha to ulta rohan aate hi pahale karan ko hi dhone laga.

Seriously ni bas ese hi dosto ki hasi majak wali fighting hi , or karan bhi rohan ki feeling samjh chup chap rohan ki pyar bhari mar khata raha.

Karan majak me chilate hue :- are bhai koi to bachao is jalim se.

Sonam :- ji ni aaj aPko koi ni bachayega , rohan bhai or pitayi kero inki , taki aage se ye hume chod k jane ka soche bhi ni

Sonam ki baat sun sab bahane hasne lagi , jab rohan thak gaya , to wo rote hue karan k gale lag gaya or bola.

Rohan :- kaha chala gaya tha bhai tu hume chod ke , janta h kya halat ho gayi thi hum sabki.

Are hum sabki chod ,(sonam ki taraf ishara kerte hue) is pagli ne to tere jane k baad jine ki aas hi chod di thi , na dhang se khati piti na apna khayal rakhti , sara din bas ladoo gopal k aage beth tere liye roti rahati , hum sab to ye man chuke the ki humne tujhe or jyoti ko kho diya , per is pagli ne apna ladoo gopal pe se vishwas na khoya , ise pura yakin tha ki tu aayega or iski bhakti or vishwas pe mujhe vishwas tha , dekh sonu tera vishwas jit gaya meri bahan tera vishwas jit gaya

Rohan yu hi sonam ki pyar se shikayat kerte hue karan se kafi der gale lag rota raha , sonam or rohan ka prem dekh karan or jyoti bhi bhavuk ho gaye

Khasker ki sonam ka pyaar dekh , unhe khud pe hi gussa aane laga ki unhone wapas lotne me itni der ki hi kyu , jis kaaran unki bahan or bhai jese dost ne kya kya na saha.

Karan rohan se :- are ab bas bhi ker mere yaar meri jan or kitna royega , m wapas aato gaya na , ab sab kuch sahi ho jayega.

(Majak kerte hue ) or sale tujhe kitni baar bola h ki yu mujhse mat chipka ker , m tere jesa ni hu.

Ye bol karan muh bigadte hue rohan ko halke se dhaka deta h , jise sun sabhi hasne lage.

Rohan :- kamine tu ni sudhrega.

Jyoti :- ye kya rohan bhai , apne dost se mil liye to bahan ko bhul gaye.

Rohan :-. Are tujhe kese bhul sakta hu meri moti.

Jyoti ankhe dikhate hue :- kya bole bhi , m moti.

Rohan darne ka natak ker jyoti ko gale lagate hue :- are ni ni , tu to meri darling bahana h , tujhe moti bolne wala to koi pagal hi hoga.

Priya masumiyat se :- matlab kya aap pagal ho kya rohan bhai.

Priya ki bholi baat sun sabhi has pade or fir sab milker breakfast kerte h , sab karan or jyoti ko apne hatho se khilate h.

Radha or riya bhi ye moka ni chodti , karan or jyoti bhi bina kuch bole chupchap unke hatho se kha lete h , kyunki vo is khushi k moke pe koi hungama ni chahte the

Karan k liye aaj ka din kisi tyohar se kam na tha , kyunki kitne salo baad uska pura parivar khushi se ek sath beth ker khana kha raha tha

Fir yu hi din bit gaya , ek raat ko dinner k baad karan rohan k sath sari bahane chat pe bethe thi gaddo per , kyunki aaj bhi vo sab chat pe hi sone wale the ki sara kaam nipta ker uper aagayi , baki ladies k sath.

Tabhi jyoti boli.

Jyoti :- bhua

Garima :- ha mera bacha

Jyoti :- bhua hume aapse kuch janna h.

Garima :- ha bolo na beta kya puchna h.

Karan :- bhua hume aapse humare dada dadi k baare me puchna h ,

Garima karan k muh se apne maa baap yani k karan or jyoti k dada dadi k baare me sun parshan ho gayi , use ye ummid ni thi ki uske bathije bhatiji itni jaldi hi is baare m puch lenge.

Jyoti :- ha bhua bataiye na , hume humare dada dadi k bare me , kaha h vo or itne salo se humse milne kyu ni aaye vo or na hi mummy ne hume aap sabke bare me bataya or na hi kabhi (gusse se) papa ne

Karan :- bataiye na bhua, esa kya hua tha , mummy se to hume itna hi pata chala tha ki unhone bhag ker shadi ki thi , per ager unhone bhag k shadi ki thi to aap mummy ko itni achi tarah kese janti ho .

Karan or jyoti k lagatar prashnok kaaran garima ko jhukna pada or vo batane lagi.

Short flashback.(garima ki jubani )

Garima karan ko apne parivar k baare me batate hue boli

Beta ye aaj se 30 sal purani baat h , jab m 12 or tumhare papa or tumhare chachu , jo mere judwa bhai h , 3no ek hi school me padte the.

Tab bhaiya ki dil kafi achi friend thi jo unki classmate ko thi , jo or koi ni tumhari mummy yani asha bhabhi thi, bhai or bhabhi dono hi apne class k topper the or ache dost bhi,dono hi ek dusre ko chahte the the ,per unko is baat ka ahasas ni tha

Tumhari mummy meri senior hone k sath sath meri kafi achi dost bhi thi , jo mujhse ek badi bahan jese hi pyaar kerti , ya yu kaho kayi baar to bhai ka pyaar bhi unke pyaar ke aage mujhe kam lagta.

Bhai or bhabhi 5th class se classmate the , lekin dono ko apne pyar ka ahasas tab hua jab dono ki 12th class pass ker li ,or ab unke bichadne ka time aagaya , kyunki ganv me koi college ni tha .

Tab bhai ne turant hi ek din asha bhabhi ko purpose ker diya or bhabhi to khud bhaiya ko pyaar kerti thi , unhone turant ha ker.di.

Jab ye khushkhabri mujhe bhai ne batayi to mere or tumhare chachu bhi bahut khush hue , kyunki hume bhi bhabhi bahut pasan thi shuru se hi.

Bhabhi pados k ganv ki hi rahane wali thi , jo humare kasbe ke school me padhne aati thi , kyunki humare as pas k sabhi ganvon m vo hi sabse acha school tha keval.

Tumhare nanaji or dadaji bhi kafi ache dost the us time , jisse hume is baat ki koi chinta na thi ki aage hum bado ko manayenge kese

Bhaiya or bhabhi ek hi shahr gaye college ki padhai kerne , lekin unhone shadi hone tak ye baat chupa ker rakhne ka hi decide kiya tha ki vo couple h , isliye dono ne alag alag college me admission liye, lekin wo aksar milte rahate the .

Shayad isliye hi Anita didi ko bhai k bare me malum ni h , or jab wo dono ki padhai puri ker wapas lote , na jane kiski najar undono k pyaar ko lag gayi.

Tumhare dada ji or nana ji jo kabhi bahut ache dost the , kisi matter k chalte dono me jhagda ho gaya.

Jhagda itna bad gaya ki dono ne ek dusre se sare rishte naate tod liye , jiske kaaran bhai or mera bhabhi se milna bahut mushkil ho gaya

Or ek din rote hue bhabhi bhai se mili or batane lagi ki unke papa ne unki shadi kisi se tay ker di h , lekin vo bhai k alawa kisi k se shadi ni karegi .

Bhai bhi bahut chahte the bhabhi ko isliye unhone usi din mummy papa se baat ki , lekin papa ne dushmani or nafrat ki aag me apne bete ki khushi ko najarandaj ker diya or saf saf mana ker diya.

Esa hi kuch tumhare nanaji ne kiya bhabhi k sath , tab mane , tumhare chachu , bhaiya or bhabhi ne bhag ker shadi kerne ka plan kiya.

Or plan k mutabik hi humari ek common friend jiski madad se hum milte , koi bahana ker bhabhi ko ghar se bahar le aayi.

Jaha se hum sab shahar gaye or gir bhaiya or bhabhi ne court marriage ker , mandir me shadi ker li.

Jab bhabhi k ghar valo ko ye khabar mili to unhone to bhabhi se sare rishte nate hi tod liye , jiske kaaran bhabhi khub royi , khub bhik mangi apne mummy papa se ki vo esa na kare , per wo na mane , tumhare mama jo humari hi hum umer the , wo apni didi ko ese rote ni dekh sakte the , unhonne bhi bahut koshis ki lekin ant me vo bhi apne mummy papa k aage majbur ho gaye .

Last me bhabhi rote hue apne ghar se hamare ghar pahunchi , jaha tumhare dada dadi bhi bahut gussa hue , unhonne bhaiya ko khub pita bhi ,lekin bhaiya apni jid pe ade rahe, jiske kaaran mummy papa ne bhabhi ko jhute man se apna liya.

Tumhare dada dadi ne bhabhi ko ghar me rakh to liya , lekin unke sath esa behave kerte jese vo unki bahu ni lekin unki nokrani ho ,vo didin raat unhe khari khoti sunate.

Lekin bhabhi ne itna sab sahate hue bhi apne saas sasur ki khub seva kerti , unhe apne mata pita jitna hi aadar deti

Mujhse or rajiv bhai se to vo nanad or devar ni balki apne bhai bahan hi manti thi , or bhabhi maa samman hoti h is baat ko sarthak unhonne hi kiya , hum dono se unhone ek maa ki tarah sneh diya , mujhe khana banana bhi unhone hi sikhaya

Unka itna kuch kerne k baad bhi mummy papa ki nafrat kuch kam hone to lagi , per kismat ko ye bhi kaha manjur tha , jo usne apna ek or kahar dhaya bhabhi pe

Bhaiya or bhabhi ki shadi ko 5 saal hone k bavjood bhi koi santan ni hui unke , jiske chalte maa ko. Ek or moka mil gaya unhe sunane ka.

Mummy din raat bhabhi ko banjh banjh ker mentally tourcher kerti rahati , jiske chale bhabhi depression me rahane lagi.

M or rajiv bhai to apni studies k liye shahar gaye hue the , hume aane k baad is sab k baare me pata chala.

Leki. Had to tab ho gayi jab maa ne bhai ki dusri shadi kerne ka decision ker liya , jise sun bhabhi tut gayi or rone lagi.

Bhai jab ghar aaye to bhabhi ne unhe rote rote sari bat batayi to bhaiya bhi pahale chintit hue , fir unhone mummy se jaker saf saf bol diya.

Ranvir :- ma m ye kya sun raha hu , asha k hote hue bhi aap meri dusri shadi karwane ki soch rahe ho.

Rama :- ha sahi suna h tune ,is karmjali banjh k bharose rahe to bina pote ka muh dekhe hi bhagwan ko pyare ho jayenge.

Is baat ko leker bhai or mummy papa me kafi jhagda hua or tab gusse me aaker papa ne bhai se ye bol dala ki ager tum isko chod dusri shadi ni karoge to chale jao mere ghar se leker is mahoos ko.

Bhai bhabhi se itna pyaar kerte the ki agle din hi unhone bhabhi k sath ghar chod diya , lekin usse pahale unhone ek chithi hume bheji jisme ye sari baate likhi hui thi or sath me bhai ne ye bhi bola tha ki vo humse milne aaya karenge.

Hume jese hi ye letter mila hum rote hue ghar pahunche ye soch k bhai abhi vahi honge or wo abhi gaye na honge , lekin hum bahut laye ho chuke the

Flashback end

Garima rote hue :- or us din k baad na hume bhai milne aaye na bhabhi

Or itne salo baad hum mile bhi to dekho kya sunne mila ,humari ma , humari bhabhi ab na rahi or unka hatyara bhi or koi ni mere hi vo bhaiya nikle , jo kabhi sabse jyada pyaar kerte the unse , isliye hi to m yakin ni ker pa rahi abhi tak ki bhai hi bhabhi k hatyare h

Ye bol garima rone lagi jise sab mil ker shant karwaya , karan or jyoti ki to ankhe nam or bohe tan gayi thi , jab unhe pata chala ki unki ma k sath unke hi family walo ne kitne atyachar kiye.

Garima khud ko sambhalte hue :- beta m janti hu ki tumhe hum sab per bahut gussa aaraha hoga , specially mummy papa per.

Manti hu beta mummy papa ne bahut badi galti ki h , lekin wo aaj bhi us galti ki saja bhugat rahe h beta , or vahi ni unke sath sath tumhare chachu or m bhi.

M itni kam umer me vidhva ho gayi or tumhare chachu ko bhi mushkil se ek ladki hui , jo viklang h , ye shayad humare unhi galti ki saja h , jo humne past me ki bhabhi k liye aawaz na tha ker.

Mummy papa ki tabiyat bhi ab sahi ni rahati or esa ni h vo apni dusri poti or apni dohiti(radha ) se pyar ni kerte , per wo aaj bhi ek pote k liye tadaf rahe h

Beta m tumhare aage hath jod ke apne parivar k liye mafi mangti hu , please hume maaf ker do or ek baar ganv chal lo , taki sare bigde rishte thik ho sake

Karan radha ki or dekhte hue :- bhua rishte banana or nibhana koi khel ni , jinko jab chahe bigad do or jab chahe sudhar lo

Har ek ache or majbut rishte ki niv hoti h prem . Or prem wo dhaga hota h jo tutne k baad jud ni sakta or ager jud bhi jaye to usme ghanth pad jati h

Lekin aap please ese hath mat jodiye , jesa aapne kaha h ki vo apni galti ki saja bhugat rahe h , to m unhe ek moka dene ki soch sakta hu .

Lekin uske liye mujhe or jyoti ko kuch time chahiye sochne ka.

Garima :- beta tumhe jitna time chaiye lelo .

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

Stay tuned .

Note :- Friends kal ek or update aayega , jisme naina ki story continue hogi ,

Jabardast update bhai

Jis taraha se aapne flashback mai bataya Asha aur Ranvir ki short love story usse to lag raha hai ki shayad Ranvir pe bhi Radha aur Riya ki taraha kala jadu kiya gaya hai baki u are the writer

Ab dekhte hai Asha ki dukh bhari dastan sun kar KJ kya decision lete hai kya wo apne Nana nani aur dada dadi ko maaf kar unse milne gaon jate hai ya nahi ye to age pata chale ga to ab age ka intazar

Eagerly waiting 4 next update

 

[Zas23]

Update no :- 120
Kuch der baad police aagayi or ranvir ko utha ker le gayi , police ki van k aankho se ojhal hone tak sabhi van ki or dekhte rahe

Or jese hi van waha se chali gayi , garima ghutno k bal girker buri tarah rone lagi ,aakhir roye bhi kyu na bechari , jis bhai ko wo apne maa baap se bhi jyada pyaar kerti thi , use manti thi , usi bhai ka esa nich karm dekh wo kaha bardasht ker sakti thi .

Geeta radha or sonam use sambhalne me lage hue the , wahi kavya to karan k liye pareshan ho rahi thi , kyunki karan ko dekh saaf saf pata chal raha tha ki wo abhi shant na hua h.

Or ye baat sach bhi thi , karan abhi vichlit or ashant tha , kyunki aaj uske hatho me uski maa or hone wale bhai ya bahan ka hatyara tha fir bhi na chahte hue bhi use us hatyare ko chodna pada .

Or us hatyare ki raksha bhi unhone ki jise wo mahadev k baad sabse jyada manta tha , jinka wo ansh tha , yani ki shani dev ne .

Kavya karan k pass jane ko hui ki pahale hi karan bina kuch bole ghar se bahar chala gaya.

Sonam karan ko yu jate Dekh ghabra gayi or sath me uski baki sari bahane bhi sivay jyoti k , kyunki wo karan ki manosthiti ko bhali bhanti samjh sakti thi , kyunki uska haal bhi kuch vesa hi tha.

Sabhi bahane jab karan ko rokne gayi to kavya ne unhe roka or jyoti se boli

Kavya :- ja beti , ab tu hi apne bhai ko sambhal sakti h , mujhe is baat ka pura yakin h.

Jyoti kuch ni bolti bas apni gardan ha me hila ker nikal gayi karan k Piche , bahar ja ker dekha to paya karan to waha h hi ni , jyoti samjh gayi ki karan kaha gaya hoga.

Usne pahale dekha ki koi aas pas to ni h na , fir usne apni ankh band ki or teleport ho pahunch gayi us jagah jaha se jyada shanti or aanand to unhe swarg lok me bhi na mila

Yani apni ma dwara banwaye gaye usi pyare se ghar me , jaha pahunchte hi wo apne bhai ko dhundne lagi.

Wahi dusri or

Naina vidhi ko ghar leker aayi , jaha sumitra vidhi ko sahi salamat dekh fule na sama rahi thi or na hi wo naina ka dhanyawad kerte kerte thak rahi thi.

Naina ne pahale vidhi ki shuddhi ki or fir use aaram kerne ko bhej diya or wo khud bhi apne dosto k sath aram kerne chali gayi.

Lekin naina k man me uth rahe sawal usko sone kese dete , usko samjh ni aaraha tha , akhir uske sath hi esa kyu ho raha tha.

Pahale wo ek sadharan si ladki thi , jiski duniya sirf uski padhai or pita tak simit thi ,lekin us hadse ne to uski duniya or uske jine ka maksad hi badal diya tha.

Uper se jese jese vo aage bhad rahi thi , usko sawalo k jwab kam or kayi naye sawal mil rahe the , jinke utter ka use koi andaza ni tha.

Tabhi uski najar pass me so rahi preety p jati h , or jo aaj ki ladayi se thak ker chur ho gayi thi or lette hi so gayi thi.

Sawal to preety k bare m bhi bahut the naina k dimag me , jese uski shaktiyon or uske tritiya hone ka etc

Lekin uske dil me ab is baat ku fikar bhi hone lagi thi , ki jese aage age vo badh rahe h , sankat or bhi khatarnak roop me samne aarahe h , jiske kaaran uske sath sath uske dosto ki jaan bhi khatre me padti ja rahi h

Isliye usne than liya , ki ab vo jald hi is baare me kuch karegi.

Yu hi naina vaha kuch din or ruki vidhi ko sambhalne k liye , jo lagna bhi tha , bechari k sath niyati ne esa khel jo khela tha.

Ab vidhi kafi had tak normal ho chuki thi , isiliye ab naina or uske dosto ka vidai ka samay aacuka tha , sumitra or vidhi ne unhe kuch din or rukne ko kaha , per ab unke liye or rukna mushkil hi tha , isliye unhonne vapas aane ka wada ker nikal pade haryana border ki or.

Raat hone tak wo haryana border k pass bane dhabe p khana kha rahe the .

Veer :-. Border pe to hum aachuke naina , ab hume kaha chalna h uska kese pata kare.

Naina :- bhul gaye veer kabristan me preton k leader ne hume upaay bataya tha , or ab usi upaay ka time aagaya h.

Preety :- to chalo sister, fir der kis baat ki.

Naina :- are moti , pahale khana to kha le , har time ghode pe savar rahati h.

is tarah hasi majak me khana khate h ,fir naina or uske dost bahar gadi k pas jate h jo dhabe k piche khadi thi , or jaha jungle tha.

Naina ne waha ek bada sa chapta pathar dekha or uske uper map bicha diya , jo haryana border se jude states ka tha, or map k charo kono p padhar rakh diye , taki map hile ni.

Fir naina ne apne bag se ek locket nikala , jo komolika ka tha , jo naina ne uske antim sanskar se pahale nikal liya tha .

Naina :- friends , ab hume samrat tak yahi locket pahuchayega .

Preety :- per kese sister.

Naina :- samraat tak pahuchne k liye hume pahale uske bhai markesh tak pahuchna hoga.

Or komolika ka ye locket jo use markesh ne diya tha , ab yahi uska pata batayega.

(Preety se ) preety lo pahale apni trittya shakti ko jagrit kero or fir isko muthi me bich ker ese todo ki , iska chura ban jaye.

Preety bilkul wesa hi kerti h , or fir naina us chure ko map pe fela ker apna yantra uske charo or ghumate hue kuch mantra bolti h or fir boli.

Naina :- bata he kali shakti kaha milega tujhe banane wala markesh

Naina k esa bolne k pach minute bad hi map per fela sara locket ka chura apne aap khisata hua ek point pe aaker fel gaya or fir gayab ho gaya , or wo jagah chamakne lagi.

Naina :- lo veer mil gayi humari manjil ka rasta , yahi h wo location ab jaha jana h.

Veer :- hmm , iske according ab hume rajasthan jana hoga.

Preety :- hmm rajasthan k kisi kulbhata ganv me ki location h ye to.

Naina :-. To chalo der kis baat ki.

Fir 3no dost nikal pade rajasthan ki or ek or nayi musibat ka samna kerne , per is baat se anjan ki , ab jo khatra unke samne aane wala h , uske aage piche wale sare khatre kuch bhi na the

Location :- kulbhata

Rajasthan jo mashoor h apne amulya dharohar , mahan itihas , veero ki bhumi or santo k karmbhumi hone k kaaran .

Ye wahi bhumi h jaha , rana pratap, rana sanga , bappa rawal jese veero ne janm liya , ye vahi bhumi h jaha panna dhay or hadi rani jesi verangnao ne apna balidan diya , yahi h vo bhumi jaha meera bai , sudas jese mahan santo ne janm liya.

Is bhumi ki mahima ka vanan kerne k liye shabd ni h mere pas , lekin jaha rajasthan apne mahan itihas or sanskriti k liye mashoor h .

Utna hi mashoor h apne rahasmayi sthano or dantkathao k liye.

Esi hi ek katha judi hui h kulbhata se bhi.

Chaliye jara najar marte h kulbhata pe bhi.

Kulbhata jo kabhi ek hasta khelta khushal ganv tha , ab vo bilkul veeran hone ki kagar pe tha

Esa kyu vo aage hi pata chalega , lekin yaha ki sthithi sahi na thi , aaye din yaha logo ki mot ho rahi thi , jiska kaaran medical science k according to atyadhik pyaas thi , matlab yaha k log kafi dino se pani ni pi rahe the .

Lekin main kaaran kuch or hi tha , darasal yaha pine k pani ka keval ek hi sadhan hi tha , wo tha yaha ganv k bicho bich mojud ek kua.

Esa ni tha ki ye kua sukh chunka tha , balki kua to upper tak pani se laba lab bhara hua tha.

Lekin fir bhi log katrate the is kue se pani bharne k kiye , yaha tak ki vo log milo dur dusre ganv se bhi pani lane ko teyar the, is kue k aas pas bhi ni fatakte

Ab log bhi pani k liye itni dur jate jate thak chuke the , isliye wo ab ganv chod ker jane lage the, lagbhag 70% ganv ab khali ho chuka tha or kue k as pas k sare ghar to bilkul khali the.

Tabhi ek musafir jo rajasthan ki garmi m kahi ja raha tha , lekin raste pyaas ki vajah se vo Yaha aapahucha tha , to usne jese hi kue ki or dekha , wo turant bhaga bhaga waha aaya or bina der kiye kue se pani nikal pine laga.

Jab usne pet bhar k pani pi liya to achanak uske gale me ek second dard hua , or fir usne apne hosh gava diye .

Matlab ki ab uska sharir uske vas me na tha, vo kisi ke vashikaran me aachuka tha.

Tabhi kue se ek bhayanak aawaz aayi.

Awaaz :- bahar kya kar rahe ho , ander aajao , mane tumhari pyas bhujayi , ab tum meri pyas bhujao.

Wo admi itna sunte hi kue me kud gaya or fir uska kuch pata na chala.

Us aadmi ko kudte hue 2 ganv valo ne dekha , in logo ne us admi ko jab pani pite dekha to use rokne ki koshis ki thi, lekin unke pahuchne tak kafi der ho chuki thi or ye hadsa ho chuka tha.

Admi 2 :- hey bhagwan kab tak chalega esa , kab tak yu hi masumo ko apne pran gavane padenge.

Admi 3 :- ha bhai , pata ni kab ishvar ko hum per daya aayegi or hume in dusht brahmrakshaso se mukti milegi

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Jyoti jungle wale ghar me pahunch karan ko yaha waha dhundne lagi , use karan ki bahut chinta ho rahi thi , kyunki karan ki manosthiti abhi thik ni thi .

Use is baat ki chinta ho rahi thi ki uska bhai , abhi dukhi hoga or kahi ro raha hoga , jise shant karwane k liye jyoti tadaf rahi thi.

Usne apne jhule ,mandir or garden charo or dhunda karan ko , per wo use kahi na mila .

Tabhi uske kano me karan ki aawaz aayi .

Karan :-. Gudiya m yaha hu , ander aajao.

Ye aawaz ghar k ander se aayi thi , jo almost normal hi thi , jise sun jyoti ko kuch shanti padi or wo turant ghar me bhagi .

Jaha karan unke or asha k room me betha tha , or uske hath me uski maa ki tasvir thi.

Jyoti jaker karan k gale lag gayi or rone lagi , karan tasvir ko side me rakhte hue jyoti ko shant karwate hue bola.

Karan :-. Ro kyu rahi ho meri pyari gudiya , tumhe to balki khush hona chahiye , aaj humne apne maa k hatyare ko uske anjam tak pahuncha hi diya h.

Jyoti karan ko itna shant dekh khush bhi thi or heran bhi.

Karan :- kya hua meri jaan , ese kyu ghur rahi ho mujhe.

Jyoti masumiyat se sisakte hue :- bhai jab aap achanak se ghar chod yaha aagaye to m dar gayi , mujhe laga...

Karan :- tumhe laga ki m abhi yaha dukhi ho ker rone aya hounga h na.

Jyoti gardan ha me hila deti h .

Karan :- ni gudiya , esa bilkul bhi ni h , m ashant jarur tha per udas ya dukhi ni , kyunki mane jo bhi kiya , wo bilkul sahi or uchit tha .

Or ager me sahi hu to kyu bina vajah dukhi ho aansu bahau.

Karan serious hote hue :- or vese bhi dandnayak karan ne vyarth me ansu bahana or vyarth k logo k liye ansu bahana usi din chod diya tha , jis din is matlabi sansar ki vastvikta se hum parichit hue.

Jyoti samjh gayi thi ki karan ka ishara us raat k hua hadse se h.

Karan :- m to bas yaha bas isliye aaya taki maa ki basayi hui humari is pyari duniya me aaker tumhare sath kuch samay bita ker apne ashant man ko shant ker saku.

Kyunki m janta tha ki meri pranpriya mere piche poche yaha jarur aayegi.

Ye bol karan ne jyoti k hotho ko halka sa chum liya .

Jyoti apne bhai ka naya roop dekh bahut khush thi , use khushi thi ki karan purani bato ko bhula ker , aage bhad raha h .

Fir kuch karan or jyoti yu hi ek dusro ki baho me pyar bhari baate kerte h , jyoti ne kavya ko phone kerke bol diya tha ki vo or karan ab normal h or kal subah tak wo ghar lot aayenge.

Raat ko karan apne hatho se khana banake jyoti ko us jhule pe bitha ker khilata h , jese kabhi asha un dono ko khilati thi.

Jyoti us pal ko yaad ker thodi bhavuk hui or uski ankh me ek bund aasu aagaya , jise dekh karan muskurate hue uske ansu pochta h or usko muskurane ka ishara kerta h.

Karan k is pyar bhare andaz se jyoti k chahre pe muskan aagayi , jise dekh karan jyoti ka mastak chum leta h or fir dono bhai bahan ek dusre ko khana khilate h.

Phir karan jyoti ko jhulane lagta h or kuch dee baad jyoti k sath beth jata h.

Jyoti :- bhai , ma k hatyare ko to humne uske mukam tak pahuncha diya h , ab humara aage kya kerna h.

Karan :- vahi gudiya , jiske liye humara janm hua h , ab bahut hua ye lukka chupi ka khel , ab vakt aagay h , dusht shaktiyo ko is baat ka gayan hone ka ki unka kaal aachuka h.

Bahut hua nakaratmak shaktiyon ka atyachar,ab samay achuka h ki is sansar k samaksh dand nayak k aane ka.

Ye sun jyoti k chahre pe muskan aagayi or karan k bhi.

Karan apni jagah se utha or apni ankh band ki or uske sharir se ek ati prakashaman tej nikalne laga or usike sath karan apne dand nayak roop me aagaya.

Karan :- m dand nayak karan mahadev k diye hue usk kavach ko ab khud se vilag kerta hu , jisne meri jivan urja ko chupaya hua tha .

Hey devadhidev mahadev apne is bhakt ki pprathna ko swikar kare.

Tabhi aasman se ek roshni karan or jyoti k tan pe padi or unke uper se vo kavach hat gaya.

Karan :-. Hey shani dev , aaj aapne bhale hi apne is bhakt ko nirash kiya, jiske liye m aapse rusht abhi bhi hu, parantu is kaaran m aapke diye hu kartavy se khud ko vimukh kadapi ni
Karunga , ye asha putra or jyoti k bhai karan ka vachan h aapko.

Wahi dusri or.

Mata chaya bhojan ki thali le kabse shani dev ko dhund rahi thi , lekin pura shani lok dhundne k baad bhi wo unhe na mile.

Tabhi mata chaya ko kuch dhyan aaya.

Mata :- jarur mera putra wahi hoga.

Mata chaya gayab ho sidha pahunch gayi , surya lok me mojud usi van me , jaha unka dusra nivas sthan tha.

Mata chaya ka andaza sahi tha , shani dev vahi nadi k kinare bethe the or udas bethe , nadi me kankad phek rahe the.


Mata chaya unke pas gayi or boli :- putra.

Mata chaya ko dekh shani dev jaldi se apni udasi ko chupane ki nakam koshis kerte hue apne chahre pr jhuti muskan late h.

Mata chaya shani k side me beth :- itne yug bit gaye , parantu mera putra bilkul na badla , putra mata hu m tumhari , tum bhale hi karmfal data ho , parantu fir bhi mujhse kuch ji chupa sakte.

Putra karan tumhara hi ansh h , tum ek prakar se uske pita hi ho , jese hanuman pavan dev k putra h , or isliye putra k kahe katu shabdo ka kya bura manna , ye baat tum bhi samjh sakte ho ki jo bhi hua , usme keval dosh paristhitiyon ka tha.

Shani dev mata chaya k gale lag bole.

Shani :- mata kisne kaha karan ne jo mujhe katu vachan kahe uske kaaran m udaas hu , in sab vachno ko sunne ka to abhyas sa ho gaya h , vese bhi m chahe kuch bhi ker lu , parantu manushy mujhe dand adhikari hi samjhta h , jiska mujhe koi dukh ni , kyunki mere bhay k kaaran vyakti kuch bhi bure karm kerne se pahale hajar baar sochta h or ager wo chetna se kaam le to wo kabhi mere dandvidhan ka patra ni banta, or jesa ki aapne kaha , karan to mera putra h or usne jo bhi mujhe kaha , mujh per usne apna wahi adhikar samjh ker kaha jo ek putra apna pita pe samjhta h.



M to udaas or chintit bas is kaaran hu mata kyunki jisdin karan ko vastvikta ka gyaan hoga , to wo is shan ko smaran ker tut na jaye mata , m aaj karan k kahe gaye katu shabd ko sahan ket gaya mata parantu apne putra ko yu tutta hua na dekh paunga.

Mata chaya :- jab itna kuch samjhte hi ho putra , to itni si baat ko kyu ni samjhte putra jese tum apne putra ko yu hatash or dukhi ni dekh sakti vese hi tumhari mata bhi to apne putra ko yu udaas ni dekh sakti na.

Isliye putra jo abhi hua hi ni uski kyu vyarth chinta kerna , dekho putra mahadev ki kripa se karan apne marg se bhatka ni h , apitu ab vo purntah saj h , apne karmpath pe agrasar hone k liye.

Isliye mere pyare putra , chinta ko tyag do or apne guru dev pe vishwas rakho , mahadev jo bhi karenge , uchit hi karenge.

Mata chaya k samjhane se shani bhi shant ho gaye or apni mata k hatho bhojan ker , aage ki yojna pe kaam kerne lage.

Location :- patal lok

Vp yu hi apni aage ki dusht yojna banane me laga hua tha , ki tabhi pura patal lok dagmagane laga , mano jese bhukamp aagaya ho .

Asuro me bhadgad mach gayi or sab idher udher bhane lage.

Vp gusse se chilaya :- shant ho jao sab.

Vp ki aawaz sun sab shant ho gaye or bhukamp bhi ruk gaya.

Vp :- patal lok me esa bhukamp , ye koi sadharan baat ni ho sakti , avashya hi kuch to gadbad h.

Vp ne apni aankh band kr jese hi dhyan lagaya , to uski herani or gusse ki koi sima n rahi.

Kyunki mahadev k kavach k hatne se ab karan vapas sare sansar ki drishti me aachuke the.

Vp gusse :- niiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

1 asur :- kya hua maharaj

Vp :- vo rakshak karan jivit h or sath me uski sangini bhi.

Asur :-. Asambhav , mrityu k mukh se koi bhi ni bach sakta , humne khud apni aankho se unke shav dekhe the na maharaj.

Vp :- tumhara kahana anuchit bhi ji h senik, parantu itne yugo me ek baat se m bhali bhanti parichit ho chuka hu , jaha wo kapti shani or vishnu mojud ho vaha kuch bhi asambhav ni.

Bhut kal ki tarah ek baar fir us shani ne hum sabko chala h .


(Gusse se chilaya) shaniiiii, bahut hua tera ye parpanch , ab dekh m kya kerta hu

Ye bol vp hasne laga or apni yojna banane m lag gaya.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi
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Kuch der baad police aagayi or ranvir ko utha ker le gayi , police ki van k aankho se ojhal hone tak sabhi van ki or dekhte rahe

Or jese hi van waha se chali gayi , garima ghutno k bal girker buri tarah rone lagi ,aakhir roye bhi kyu na bechari , jis bhai ko wo apne maa baap se bhi jyada pyaar kerti thi , use manti thi , usi bhai ka esa nich karm dekh wo kaha bardasht ker sakti thi .

Geeta radha or sonam use sambhalne me lage hue the , wahi kavya to karan k liye pareshan ho rahi thi , kyunki karan ko dekh saaf saf pata chal raha tha ki wo abhi shant na hua h.

Or ye baat sach bhi thi , karan abhi vichlit or ashant tha , kyunki aaj uske hatho me uski maa or hone wale bhai ya bahan ka hatyara tha fir bhi na chahte hue bhi use us hatyare ko chodna pada .

Or us hatyare ki raksha bhi unhone ki jise wo mahadev k baad sabse jyada manta tha , jinka wo ansh tha , yani ki shani dev ne .

Kavya karan k pass jane ko hui ki pahale hi karan bina kuch bole ghar se bahar chala gaya.

Sonam karan ko yu jate Dekh ghabra gayi or sath me uski baki sari bahane bhi sivay jyoti k , kyunki wo karan ki manosthiti ko bhali bhanti samjh sakti thi , kyunki uska haal bhi kuch vesa hi tha.

Sabhi bahane jab karan ko rokne gayi to kavya ne unhe roka or jyoti se boli

Kavya :- ja beti , ab tu hi apne bhai ko sambhal sakti h , mujhe is baat ka pura yakin h.

Jyoti kuch ni bolti bas apni gardan ha me hila ker nikal gayi karan k Piche , bahar ja ker dekha to paya karan to waha h hi ni , jyoti samjh gayi ki karan kaha gaya hoga.

Usne pahale dekha ki koi aas pas to ni h na , fir usne apni ankh band ki or teleport ho pahunch gayi us jagah jaha se jyada shanti or aanand to unhe swarg lok me bhi na mila

Yani apni ma dwara banwaye gaye usi pyare se ghar me , jaha pahunchte hi wo apne bhai ko dhundne lagi.

Wahi dusri or

Naina vidhi ko ghar leker aayi , jaha sumitra vidhi ko sahi salamat dekh fule na sama rahi thi or na hi wo naina ka dhanyawad kerte kerte thak rahi thi.

Naina ne pahale vidhi ki shuddhi ki or fir use aaram kerne ko bhej diya or wo khud bhi apne dosto k sath aram kerne chali gayi.

Lekin naina k man me uth rahe sawal usko sone kese dete , usko samjh ni aaraha tha , akhir uske sath hi esa kyu ho raha tha.

Pahale wo ek sadharan si ladki thi , jiski duniya sirf uski padhai or pita tak simit thi ,lekin us hadse ne to uski duniya or uske jine ka maksad hi badal diya tha.

Uper se jese jese vo aage bhad rahi thi , usko sawalo k jwab kam or kayi naye sawal mil rahe the , jinke utter ka use koi andaza ni tha.

Tabhi uski najar pass me so rahi preety p jati h , or jo aaj ki ladayi se thak ker chur ho gayi thi or lette hi so gayi thi.

Sawal to preety k bare m bhi bahut the naina k dimag me , jese uski shaktiyon or uske tritiya hone ka etc

Lekin uske dil me ab is baat ku fikar bhi hone lagi thi , ki jese aage age vo badh rahe h , sankat or bhi khatarnak roop me samne aarahe h , jiske kaaran uske sath sath uske dosto ki jaan bhi khatre me padti ja rahi h

Isliye usne than liya , ki ab vo jald hi is baare me kuch karegi.

Yu hi naina vaha kuch din or ruki vidhi ko sambhalne k liye , jo lagna bhi tha , bechari k sath niyati ne esa khel jo khela tha.

Ab vidhi kafi had tak normal ho chuki thi , isiliye ab naina or uske dosto ka vidai ka samay aacuka tha , sumitra or vidhi ne unhe kuch din or rukne ko kaha , per ab unke liye or rukna mushkil hi tha , isliye unhonne vapas aane ka wada ker nikal pade haryana border ki or.

Raat hone tak wo haryana border k pass bane dhabe p khana kha rahe the .

Veer :-. Border pe to hum aachuke naina , ab hume kaha chalna h uska kese pata kare.

Naina :- bhul gaye veer kabristan me preton k leader ne hume upaay bataya tha , or ab usi upaay ka time aagaya h.

Preety :- to chalo sister, fir der kis baat ki.

Naina :- are moti , pahale khana to kha le , har time ghode pe savar rahati h.

is tarah hasi majak me khana khate h ,fir naina or uske dost bahar gadi k pas jate h jo dhabe k piche khadi thi , or jaha jungle tha.

Naina ne waha ek bada sa chapta pathar dekha or uske uper map bicha diya , jo haryana border se jude states ka tha, or map k charo kono p padhar rakh diye , taki map hile ni.

Fir naina ne apne bag se ek locket nikala , jo komolika ka tha , jo naina ne uske antim sanskar se pahale nikal liya tha .

Naina :- friends , ab hume samrat tak yahi locket pahuchayega .

Preety :- per kese sister.

Naina :- samraat tak pahuchne k liye hume pahale uske bhai markesh tak pahuchna hoga.

Or komolika ka ye locket jo use markesh ne diya tha , ab yahi uska pata batayega.

(Preety se ) preety lo pahale apni trittya shakti ko jagrit kero or fir isko muthi me bich ker ese todo ki , iska chura ban jaye.

Preety bilkul wesa hi kerti h , or fir naina us chure ko map pe fela ker apna yantra uske charo or ghumate hue kuch mantra bolti h or fir boli.

Naina :- bata he kali shakti kaha milega tujhe banane wala markesh

Naina k esa bolne k pach minute bad hi map per fela sara locket ka chura apne aap khisata hua ek point pe aaker fel gaya or fir gayab ho gaya , or wo jagah chamakne lagi.

Naina :- lo veer mil gayi humari manjil ka rasta , yahi h wo location ab jaha jana h.

Veer :- hmm , iske according ab hume rajasthan jana hoga.

Preety :- hmm rajasthan k kisi kulbhata ganv me ki location h ye to.

Naina :-. To chalo der kis baat ki.

Fir 3no dost nikal pade rajasthan ki or ek or nayi musibat ka samna kerne , per is baat se anjan ki , ab jo khatra unke samne aane wala h , uske aage piche wale sare khatre kuch bhi na the

Location :- kulbhata

Rajasthan jo mashoor h apne amulya dharohar , mahan itihas , veero ki bhumi or santo k karmbhumi hone k kaaran .

Ye wahi bhumi h jaha , rana pratap, rana sanga , bappa rawal jese veero ne janm liya , ye vahi bhumi h jaha panna dhay or hadi rani jesi verangnao ne apna balidan diya , yahi h vo bhumi jaha meera bai , sudas jese mahan santo ne janm liya.

Is bhumi ki mahima ka vanan kerne k liye shabd ni h mere pas , lekin jaha rajasthan apne mahan itihas or sanskriti k liye mashoor h .

Utna hi mashoor h apne rahasmayi sthano or dantkathao k liye.

Esi hi ek katha judi hui h kulbhata se bhi.

Chaliye jara najar marte h kulbhata pe bhi.

Kulbhata jo kabhi ek hasta khelta khushal ganv tha , ab vo bilkul veeran hone ki kagar pe tha

Esa kyu vo aage hi pata chalega , lekin yaha ki sthithi sahi na thi , aaye din yaha logo ki mot ho rahi thi , jiska kaaran medical science k according to atyadhik pyaas thi , matlab yaha k log kafi dino se pani ni pi rahe the .

Lekin main kaaran kuch or hi tha , darasal yaha pine k pani ka keval ek hi sadhan hi tha , wo tha yaha ganv k bicho bich mojud ek kua.

Esa ni tha ki ye kua sukh chunka tha , balki kua to upper tak pani se laba lab bhara hua tha.

Lekin fir bhi log katrate the is kue se pani bharne k kiye , yaha tak ki vo log milo dur dusre ganv se bhi pani lane ko teyar the, is kue k aas pas bhi ni fatakte

Ab log bhi pani k liye itni dur jate jate thak chuke the , isliye wo ab ganv chod ker jane lage the, lagbhag 70% ganv ab khali ho chuka tha or kue k as pas k sare ghar to bilkul khali the.

Tabhi ek musafir jo rajasthan ki garmi m kahi ja raha tha , lekin raste pyaas ki vajah se vo Yaha aapahucha tha , to usne jese hi kue ki or dekha , wo turant bhaga bhaga waha aaya or bina der kiye kue se pani nikal pine laga.

Jab usne pet bhar k pani pi liya to achanak uske gale me ek second dard hua , or fir usne apne hosh gava diye .

Matlab ki ab uska sharir uske vas me na tha, vo kisi ke vashikaran me aachuka tha.

Tabhi kue se ek bhayanak aawaz aayi.

Awaaz :- bahar kya kar rahe ho , ander aajao , mane tumhari pyas bhujayi , ab tum meri pyas bhujao.

Wo admi itna sunte hi kue me kud gaya or fir uska kuch pata na chala.

Us aadmi ko kudte hue 2 ganv valo ne dekha , in logo ne us admi ko jab pani pite dekha to use rokne ki koshis ki thi, lekin unke pahuchne tak kafi der ho chuki thi or ye hadsa ho chuka tha.

Admi 2 :- hey bhagwan kab tak chalega esa , kab tak yu hi masumo ko apne pran gavane padenge.

Admi 3 :- ha bhai , pata ni kab ishvar ko hum per daya aayegi or hume in dusht brahmrakshaso se mukti milegi

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Jyoti jungle wale ghar me pahunch karan ko yaha waha dhundne lagi , use karan ki bahut chinta ho rahi thi , kyunki karan ki manosthiti abhi thik ni thi .

Use is baat ki chinta ho rahi thi ki uska bhai , abhi dukhi hoga or kahi ro raha hoga , jise shant karwane k liye jyoti tadaf rahi thi.

Usne apne jhule ,mandir or garden charo or dhunda karan ko , per wo use kahi na mila .

Tabhi uske kano me karan ki aawaz aayi .

Karan :-. Gudiya m yaha hu , ander aajao.

Ye aawaz ghar k ander se aayi thi , jo almost normal hi thi , jise sun jyoti ko kuch shanti padi or wo turant ghar me bhagi .

Jaha karan unke or asha k room me betha tha , or uske hath me uski maa ki tasvir thi.

Jyoti jaker karan k gale lag gayi or rone lagi , karan tasvir ko side me rakhte hue jyoti ko shant karwate hue bola.

Karan :-. Ro kyu rahi ho meri pyari gudiya , tumhe to balki khush hona chahiye , aaj humne apne maa k hatyare ko uske anjam tak pahuncha hi diya h.

Jyoti karan ko itna shant dekh khush bhi thi or heran bhi.

Karan :- kya hua meri jaan , ese kyu ghur rahi ho mujhe.

Jyoti masumiyat se sisakte hue :- bhai jab aap achanak se ghar chod yaha aagaye to m dar gayi , mujhe laga...

Karan :- tumhe laga ki m abhi yaha dukhi ho ker rone aya hounga h na.

Jyoti gardan ha me hila deti h .

Karan :- ni gudiya , esa bilkul bhi ni h , m ashant jarur tha per udas ya dukhi ni , kyunki mane jo bhi kiya , wo bilkul sahi or uchit tha .

Or ager me sahi hu to kyu bina vajah dukhi ho aansu bahau.

Karan serious hote hue :- or vese bhi dandnayak karan ne vyarth me ansu bahana or vyarth k logo k liye ansu bahana usi din chod diya tha , jis din is matlabi sansar ki vastvikta se hum parichit hue.

Jyoti samjh gayi thi ki karan ka ishara us raat k hua hadse se h.

Karan :- m to bas yaha bas isliye aaya taki maa ki basayi hui humari is pyari duniya me aaker tumhare sath kuch samay bita ker apne ashant man ko shant ker saku.

Kyunki m janta tha ki meri pranpriya mere piche poche yaha jarur aayegi.

Ye bol karan ne jyoti k hotho ko halka sa chum liya .

Jyoti apne bhai ka naya roop dekh bahut khush thi , use khushi thi ki karan purani bato ko bhula ker , aage bhad raha h .

Fir kuch karan or jyoti yu hi ek dusro ki baho me pyar bhari baate kerte h , jyoti ne kavya ko phone kerke bol diya tha ki vo or karan ab normal h or kal subah tak wo ghar lot aayenge.

Raat ko karan apne hatho se khana banake jyoti ko us jhule pe bitha ker khilata h , jese kabhi asha un dono ko khilati thi.

Jyoti us pal ko yaad ker thodi bhavuk hui or uski ankh me ek bund aasu aagaya , jise dekh karan muskurate hue uske ansu pochta h or usko muskurane ka ishara kerta h.

Karan k is pyar bhare andaz se jyoti k chahre pe muskan aagayi , jise dekh karan jyoti ka mastak chum leta h or fir dono bhai bahan ek dusre ko khana khilate h.

Phir karan jyoti ko jhulane lagta h or kuch dee baad jyoti k sath beth jata h.

Jyoti :- bhai , ma k hatyare ko to humne uske mukam tak pahuncha diya h , ab humara aage kya kerna h.

Karan :- vahi gudiya , jiske liye humara janm hua h , ab bahut hua ye lukka chupi ka khel , ab vakt aagay h , dusht shaktiyo ko is baat ka gayan hone ka ki unka kaal aachuka h.

Bahut hua nakaratmak shaktiyon ka atyachar,ab samay achuka h ki is sansar k samaksh dand nayak k aane ka.

Ye sun jyoti k chahre pe muskan aagayi or karan k bhi.

Karan apni jagah se utha or apni ankh band ki or uske sharir se ek ati prakashaman tej nikalne laga or usike sath karan apne dand nayak roop me aagaya.

Karan :- m dand nayak karan mahadev k diye hue usk kavach ko ab khud se vilag kerta hu , jisne meri jivan urja ko chupaya hua tha .

Hey devadhidev mahadev apne is bhakt ki pprathna ko swikar kare.

Tabhi aasman se ek roshni karan or jyoti k tan pe padi or unke uper se vo kavach hat gaya.

Karan :-. Hey shani dev , aaj aapne bhale hi apne is bhakt ko nirash kiya, jiske liye m aapse rusht abhi bhi hu, parantu is kaaran m aapke diye hu kartavy se khud ko vimukh kadapi ni
Karunga , ye asha putra or jyoti k bhai karan ka vachan h aapko.

Wahi dusri or.

Mata chaya bhojan ki thali le kabse shani dev ko dhund rahi thi , lekin pura shani lok dhundne k baad bhi wo unhe na mile.

Tabhi mata chaya ko kuch dhyan aaya.

Mata :- jarur mera putra wahi hoga.

Mata chaya gayab ho sidha pahunch gayi , surya lok me mojud usi van me , jaha unka dusra nivas sthan tha.

Mata chaya ka andaza sahi tha , shani dev vahi nadi k kinare bethe the or udas bethe , nadi me kankad phek rahe the.


Mata chaya unke pas gayi or boli :- putra.

Mata chaya ko dekh shani dev jaldi se apni udasi ko chupane ki nakam koshis kerte hue apne chahre pr jhuti muskan late h.

Mata chaya shani k side me beth :- itne yug bit gaye , parantu mera putra bilkul na badla , putra mata hu m tumhari , tum bhale hi karmfal data ho , parantu fir bhi mujhse kuch ji chupa sakte.

Putra karan tumhara hi ansh h , tum ek prakar se uske pita hi ho , jese hanuman pavan dev k putra h , or isliye putra k kahe katu shabdo ka kya bura manna , ye baat tum bhi samjh sakte ho ki jo bhi hua , usme keval dosh paristhitiyon ka tha.

Shani dev mata chaya k gale lag bole.

Shani :- mata kisne kaha karan ne jo mujhe katu vachan kahe uske kaaran m udaas hu , in sab vachno ko sunne ka to abhyas sa ho gaya h , vese bhi m chahe kuch bhi ker lu , parantu manushy mujhe dand adhikari hi samjhta h , jiska mujhe koi dukh ni , kyunki mere bhay k kaaran vyakti kuch bhi bure karm kerne se pahale hajar baar sochta h or ager wo chetna se kaam le to wo kabhi mere dandvidhan ka patra ni banta, or jesa ki aapne kaha , karan to mera putra h or usne jo bhi mujhe kaha , mujh per usne apna wahi adhikar samjh ker kaha jo ek putra apna pita pe samjhta h.



M to udaas or chintit bas is kaaran hu mata kyunki jisdin karan ko vastvikta ka gyaan hoga , to wo is shan ko smaran ker tut na jaye mata , m aaj karan k kahe gaye katu shabd ko sahan ket gaya mata parantu apne putra ko yu tutta hua na dekh paunga.

Mata chaya :- jab itna kuch samjhte hi ho putra , to itni si baat ko kyu ni samjhte putra jese tum apne putra ko yu hatash or dukhi ni dekh sakti vese hi tumhari mata bhi to apne putra ko yu udaas ni dekh sakti na.

Isliye putra jo abhi hua hi ni uski kyu vyarth chinta kerna , dekho putra mahadev ki kripa se karan apne marg se bhatka ni h , apitu ab vo purntah saj h , apne karmpath pe agrasar hone k liye.

Isliye mere pyare putra , chinta ko tyag do or apne guru dev pe vishwas rakho , mahadev jo bhi karenge , uchit hi karenge.

Mata chaya k samjhane se shani bhi shant ho gaye or apni mata k hatho bhojan ker , aage ki yojna pe kaam kerne lage.

Location :- patal lok

Vp yu hi apni aage ki dusht yojna banane me laga hua tha , ki tabhi pura patal lok dagmagane laga , mano jese bhukamp aagaya ho .

Asuro me bhadgad mach gayi or sab idher udher bhane lage.

Vp gusse se chilaya :- shant ho jao sab.

Vp ki aawaz sun sab shant ho gaye or bhukamp bhi ruk gaya.

Vp :- patal lok me esa bhukamp , ye koi sadharan baat ni ho sakti , avashya hi kuch to gadbad h.

Vp ne apni aankh band kr jese hi dhyan lagaya , to uski herani or gusse ki koi sima n rahi.

Kyunki mahadev k kavach k hatne se ab karan vapas sare sansar ki drishti me aachuke the.

Vp gusse :- niiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

1 asur :- kya hua maharaj

Vp :- vo rakshak karan jivit h or sath me uski sangini bhi.

Asur :-. Asambhav , mrityu k mukh se koi bhi ni bach sakta , humne khud apni aankho se unke shav dekhe the na maharaj.

Vp :- tumhara kahana anuchit bhi ji h senik, parantu itne yugo me ek baat se m bhali bhanti parichit ho chuka hu , jaha wo kapti shani or vishnu mojud ho vaha kuch bhi asambhav ni.

Bhut kal ki tarah ek baar fir us shani ne hum sabko chala h .


(Gusse se chilaya) shaniiiii, bahut hua tera ye parpanch , ab dekh m kya kerta hu

Ye bol vp hasne laga or apni yojna banane m lag gaya.

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