Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running (restart)

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update 3
good one bro
taking care of Karan expresses her love
let's what's gonna happen

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update 4
nice update bro
some conspiracy happened
looks like it is far more big than my thoughts
let's see what happened in the past with them will they able to relize it or not
if they then what step will they take to make things right
Nice creation bro

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update 5
lovely update bro
so karan-jyoti are coming closer to each other
although they didn't know it
hope they realize it soon
let's see when it will be revealed

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update 6
traumatic+lovely update bro
some brotherly love shown for Jyoti
and expressing how much love they have for each other
and it's pure love
so the flash back is revealing after all
it's a flashback of karan-jyoti's angle
and I think the truth is hidden by their father
let's see what that was
and what they saw now

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update 7
congrats on your first update
nice writing skills
looks it will be turning off the story
action was good
so new sis's name is Radha
and she's got a mother
hope she's mother of Karan-jyoti
let's see what happens next
keep it up

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update 8
good one bro
great going
you showed brilliantly their depth of love by
showing some glimpse of their child hood
so they feel it to for Radha
I think the same
hope they all are siblings
let's see what will happen
keep it up

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update 9
very nice update bro
you cleverly change the direction of the story
it was going to be an incest with romance
but you turned it in super natural
nice turning
so Karan is blessed with Mahadev & have a past too
hope he will have a goal in his life
let's what's going on

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update 10
nice action bro so
it was Radha again
Karan-jyoti beat the crap out of Kunal & his goons
but Jyoti done it too much
commissioner is very angry with these two but he kept quite in front of HM
I think he will take revange on karan-jyoti
keep it up

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update 11
awesome update bro
as I told before Jyoti over done it
now she's feeling the pain
now it's turn for Karan to returning the favor
keep it up&great going

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update 12
Brilliant update bro
very nicely describe everything
and presented it perfectly
great going

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