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Location :- brihaspur.

Rampur se karib 100 km dur ye gav kafi bada tha, jaha k log bhi kafi samridh the. Jinke pas peso ki koi kami ni thi .

Usi ghar k ek makaan me 2 majdur cement putayi ka kaam ker rahe the.

Majdur 1:- yaar ye khadus budha kitna nirdayi h, hum subah se kaam m lage hue h , usne pani tak ka ni pucha

Majdur 2 :- ha bhai , baat to tu sahi bol raha h , uper se majduri bhi itni kam de raha h , per ker bhi kya sakte h bhai , papi pet ka jo swal h.

Tabhi majdur 2 ko toilet aata h ,or wo majdur 1 ko bata , waha se chala gaya .

Majdur 1 apne kaam m laga raha , abhi wo apne kaam m laga hua thi ki samne wali divar ka plaster uter ke divar m darar aane lagi.

Majdur 1 :- ab ye kya nayi musibat aagayi , abhi to iska plaster kiya tha ,us budhe ko agar is bat ka pata chala to wo to meri jaan hi lelega.

Isse pahale wo yaha aaye mujhe kuch kerna hoga.

Ye bol wo k jese hi wo us divar k paas jane ko hua , to us divar ki darar se achanak se miti nikalke hava m udne lagi or dhire dhire wo dhul achanak se gayab ho gayi or uski jagah ek bhayanak pret khada tha, jo dikhne m bahut bhayanak tha.

Sharir per miti hi miti , dant bahar , kaan bade , or sharir p bas ek dhoti.

Majdur dar se kamptee hue :- bbbbhoooot.

Ye bol wo jese hi bhagne k liye piche muda , itne me hi us pret ne apna hath uske sharir k aar paar ker diya , or wo chila na paye isliye uska muh pahale hi band ker chuka tha vo.

Vo shetan haste hur :- hahahaha , pahali lash to mil gayi , ab bach gayi 20.

Ye bol wo us majdur ki lash ko waha se leker gayab ho gaya.

Back to the hero .

Karan or jyoti abhi thodi der sonam se baate ker hi rahe the ki , tabhi radha bhi waha aagayi.

Radha :- e moti kuch mere liye bhi bachaya h ya sab bhai or khud hi kha gayi .

Sonam :- are meri pyari radhu , tere liye to m specially teri favorite chij layi hu, ruk abhi lati hu.

Fir sonam kitchen m jaake kele lake radha ko pakda deti h , or boli .

Radha :- ye kya bananas ?

Sonu ankh marte hue. :- ha to teri biradri wali ko to yehi dish hi pasand hoti h na meri bandariya

Fir wo karan se sonam boli.

Sonam :- bhai aapne kaha tha na har Tuesday bandaro ko kele khilane chahiye , lijiye pure darjan bhar kele dediya.

Karan (maje lete hue) :- are gudiya mane ghar wale ni , bahar wale bandaro ka bola tha.

Ye bol 3no hasne lage , or yaha radha bichari ka double popat ho gaya.

Wo kuch ni boli or chupchap waha se uth ke ghar k bahar chali gayi.

Karan or sonam ko laga ki vo bura maan gai , per unhe kya pata tha ye shanti aane wale tufan se pahale ki

Karib 5 min baad radha wapas ghar me aayi , jise dekh karan or sonam ki siti pitti gul ho gayi , kyunki radha k hath m ek danda tha.

Radha danda dikhate hue :- kyu bhai abhi kya bol rahe the aap .

Karan darne ka natak kerte hue :-. M mai kya bola tha , meri barbie doll , ha m to is moti ko dant raha tha , ki meri radhu ko bandariya kese bola.

Sonam jhuta gussa dikhate hue. :- kya bole bhaiya aap m moti .

Karan :- are are mane kav bola .

Sonam :- abhi to bola .

Ab karan bichara fas gaya tha dono taraf se, fir kya tha use kuch ni sujh or vo bhagne laga , or uske piche uski dono gudiya bhi bhagi .

Karan ko to kafi der bhagne p koi fark na pada , per radha or sonam to bichari thak k hafne lagi.

Ye dekh karan jan bhujkar un dono ki pakad m aagaya , fir uski thodi bahut pitayi hui lekin pyaar se.

Fir sabhi wapas sofe p beth gaye , tabhi radha ko ek call aaya , jisko usne attend kiya , or samne wale ki aawaz sun wo bahut khush ho gayi or wo boli .

Radha :- bhaiya , di mujhe abhi jana hoga , wo achanak se ek kaam aagaya h .

Jyoti :- koi baat ni choti tu aaram se ja hum sham ko milenge , sonu ko shahar bhi ghumana bhi h na apna.

Radha :- i m so sorry di , aaj to possible ni ho payega , please kal ya parso paka chalenge.

Karan :- thik h gudiya tum aaram se jao , wese bhi hum aaj aas pas hi ghumne wale h.

Radha karan k gale lagte hue :- thank you bhai.

Bye sonu


Or ye bol wo jaldi se ghar se bahar nikalne lagi .

Karab :- are wo sonu k admision ka kya hua choti .

Radha :- bhai , wo please aap kerwa dena na kal , m apko dopahar k baad hi mil paungi.

Or wo itna bol bina aage sune waha se chali gayi , karan or jyoti ko pahale herani to hui , ki jis sonam k liye radha ne shimla m hungama khada ker diya tha or waha se ane ko teyar hi ni thi.

Ab achanak se usko yu chod k chali gayi or to or dhang se bye bhi ni bola .

Fir unhone socha ki chodo yaar ye to koi jyada badi baat thodi na h , jis khushi k sath radha gayi h , jarur koi achi khabar mili hogi , jiski excitement m ho gaya hoga esa usse .


Fir karan or jyoti thodi der yu hi sonam se baat kerte h , aaj wo bas 3no hi the waha , kyunki riya or rohan bhi kahi bahar gaye hue the

Fir 3no bhai bahan ghumne nikal jaate h , 3no bhai bahan m ek chij common thi ki 3no hi khane pine k kaafi shokin the.

3no bhai bahan kafi time ghumte h ,or karan sonam ko bangal ki sabhi dishes khilvata h , jinhe kabhi usne dekha bhi ni tha.

tabhi unki najar ek shaks p padti h , jise waha dekh unhe herani hoti h, kyunki wo shaks or koi ni radha thi.

Jo ek ladke or ladki k sath vahi p ghum rahi thi , karan use aawaz dene hi hota h ki , usse pahale hi wo 3no (radha or uske sathi) waha se ek car m beth k nikal gaye.

Karan or jyoti ko samjh ni aaraha tha ,ki ye ho kya raha h , pahale radha ka unke sath chalne ki baat ko talna.

Fir kinhi or k sath use wahi ghumte hue pana , wo is baat per jyada gour ni kerte , kyunki ye itni badi baat ni the , radha k sath koi rishtedar ho sakte h , ye soch unhonne baat ko rafa dafa ker diya or wese bhi unke samne abhi kayi problem wese bhi kadi thi.

Fir 3no bhai bahan sham tak sonam k ghar aajate h wapas , karan Bola.

Karan :- gudiya , tumhe kal koi problem to ni hui na kal raat ko .

Sonam :- ni bhai koi problem ni hui , ab naye shahar m settle hone m time to lagega na, wese ek baat bolu bhai.

Jyoti :- bolo sonu.

Sonam :- di , aapke sath 2 hafte m hi itna attachment ho gaya h mera ki , ab akele me man ni lagta.

Mana aap dono milne aate rahate ho , per fir bhi kya esa ni ho sakta ki hum ek sath hi rahe ghar m


Jyoti :- kyu ni ho sakta sonu , or ho sakta h ni , hone wala hi h . Hum dono next month yahi shift ho rahe h.

Sonam :- kya sach di , per wo kese.

Karan use sari baate batata h

Sonam ko ye sun dukh bhi hota h or ranvir or kavya pe gussa bhi aata h.

Sonam :- bhai aapne bilkul sahi decision kiya h , esi jagah rahane ka koi fayda ni , jaha apne hi gero se battar vyavahar kare.

Fir karan or jyoti kuch der baad , sonam se vida le , apne ghar ki or nikal gaye.

Chaliye chalte h naina ki or

Naina karib 4 ghante k safar k baad brihaspur pahunch gayi thi , usne apne waha rukne ka intezaam bhi ker liya tha

Jo ki uske ganv k teacher ka ghar tha , jinhone naina ko 8th class tak ganv k school m padhaya tha.lekin kuch salo pahale govt job hone k kaaran unka yaha transfer ho gaya tha.

Naina apne teacher k ghar pahunch jati h , uske teacher jinka naam shresh tha wo wahi ghar k bahar naina ka intezaar ker rahe the.

Naina jeep se uter k sidha suresh ji k pass ja ker unke charan sparsh kerti h.

Suresh :- khush raho beti , aao ander aao tumhari aunty kab se tumhara intezaar ker rahi h.

Suresh ki wife ka naam vimla tha, naina unke bhi per chuti h , or vimla use gale lagati h .

Fir suresh naina ko bitha ker chai pani kerwata h , suresh ki ek beti hi thi , jiski thode time pehle hi shadi hui thi , isliye wo dono ab akele hi the ghar m

Vimla :- dekha ji kitna badi ho gayi h hamari naina , itni si thi jab apne yaha roj aati thi jalebiya khane roj

Suresh :- ha , sahi kaha bhagwan.

Fir wo naina se bole ,

Suresh :- beti tumhe koi taklif to ni hui na raste m

Naina :- ni sir koi taklif ni hui , ya tu kahiye , ab kisi taklif se koi fark hi ni padta .

Vimla :- beti humne suna pandit ji k baare , bahut hi bura hua unke sath , kitne bhale insan the vo.

Suresh :- are tum bhi kya bachi ko wo baate yaad kerwa rahi ho.

Dekho beta jo hua uska afsos h hume , lekin kisi k jane se jindagi to ni ruka kerti na , ab jo ho gaya so ho gaya , ab tum apne future p dhyan do beta, taki tumhare pitaji ki aatma ko bhi khushi.mile.

Naina :- ji sir m aapki baat ko dhyan me rakhungi.

Fir thodi der idher udher ki baat kerne k baad naina boli.

Naina :- sir , mane suna h yaha prasiddh tantrik ghora baba kuch samay k liye yaha ruke hue h , kya aap jante h , wo kaha milenge.

Suresh chonkte hue :- ghora baba , yani wo maha aghor , tumhe unse kya kaam beti .

Wo bahut hi khatarnak h , tum unke chakkaro m mat pado.

Naina :- mera unse milna bahut jaruri h sir , please mujhe bata dijiye wo kaha milenge, please

Naina kese na kese suresh ko mana hi leti h .

Suresh :- thik h beti , tum itna hi bol rahi ho to , m kal tumhe unke pas bhej dunga kal ek student k sath .

Fir sab raat ka khana kha ker done chale jate h.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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Karan or jyoti apne ghar pahunch gaye ker bari bari se fresh ho ker bed p let jate h.

Dinner unhonne sonam k sath hi ker liya tha, jyoti hamesha ki tarah karan k sine p sir rakh k leti hui thi.

Jyoti :- bhai hume ab job dhundni chahiye , kyunki ek mahine ka waqt bahut jyada ni h .

Karan :- ha gudiya tu sahi bol rahi h , lekin tumhe job kerne ki kya jarurat h , m sambhal lunga na sab

Jyoti :- ji ni , bhai hum is baare m pahale bhi baat ker chuke h , ki hum jo karenge sath karenge , rahana hum dono ko sath h na , to dono hi milke ghar chalayenge.

Karan jyoti ko bahut samjhata h , lekin jyoti ni manti or karan ko uski baat manni hi padi.

Fir karan or jyoti kuch der k liye padhai bhi kerte h , kyunki unke exam aane wale the , or ek achi or permanent job k liye unhe ache marks ki jarurat thi.

Wese to dono ko is mamle m koi chinta ni thi , kyunki bachpan se hi wo dono bahut hoshiyar the , hamesha top hi kerte the.

Jiska kaaran ek to unka super brain tha jo ek rakshak m hona swabhavik h or dusra kaaran tha swati ( jiski shadi karan ne shivratri k din karwayi thi) ki guidance , swati ne dono bhai bahan ko bina ki fees ya swarth k apne chote bhai bahan ki tarah padhya tha 12 tak , usne sirf ek teacher ka hi role ni , ek margdarshak ka bhi role ada kiya tha karan or jyoti ki jindagi m.

Fir kuch khas ni hua dono bhai bahan sone chale gaye , jyoti to so gayi , per karan ki ankho m nind ni thi.

Karan man me :- mujhe kyu esa abhas ho raha h , ki kuch to h jo humse chupa hua h .

Mere dhyan m bar bar maa k accident ka drishya aana , or waha us drishya m aas pass mujhe nakaratmak urja ka mahasoos hona.

accident k time jab car dub rahi thi tab papa to bahar nikal gaye per maa ni nikal payi.

Per ajib or herani ki baat to ye h ki papa ne mummy ko bachane ki koshis tak ni ki .

Wo chahte to maa ko nikalne m madad ker sakte the , kyunki papa bhi nadi m hi gire the . Per unhonne esa kuch bhi ni kiya.

Kahi esa to ni papa ne hi maa ko...

Ni ni jaha tak mujhe yaad h papa or mummy ka aapas m bahut pyaar tha, unhonne to apni family ko chod diya tha ek dusre k liye.

Ye to humari choti maa ne unko bhadka diya h jarur, per kuch bhi ho mujhe sachai ka pata lagana hi hoga.

Ye soch karan bed se utha , or dhyan m beth ker apni shaktiyon ko jagrit kiya

Kafi der tak dhayan me bethe rahane k baad bhi use kuch pata ni chal raha tha , ya yu kaho koi adrishy diwad rukawat ban rahi thi karan or sachai k bich.

Bahut koshis k baad bas use kuch dhundli drishy dikhayi diye , jo bhi black and white type m thi.

Pahala drishya kisi mandir ki thi , shayad kisi kali mandir ki , jisme koi aadmi ek jiska hath m ek navjaat shishu tha , usko vo maa k charno m rakh raha tha.

Dusra drishy bhi besi hi thi , jisme koi bhayanak insan pahale drishy wale ko maar raha h, tabhi ek orat waha bhag k usko rokti h or wo admi us orat ko waha se leker gayab ho jata h.

Tisre or akhiri drishy use ek haveli ka dikha , jaha k ek bade se mayavi kaksh m ek orat jo shayad dusri tasvir wali hi thi , wo ek ped k niche ro rahi h.

Iske baad karan ki aankh apne aap hafte hue khul jati h ,

Karan :- wo sab kya tha , kon the wo log , kon thi vo navjat shishu , or sabse badi baat kon thi wo orat.

Kyu mujhe wo orat jani pahachani lagi , kyu unki dhundli tasveer dekh hi meri ankho m ansu aagye , kyu unka rona mujhse bardast ni hua


Karan ese hi khud se baate kerte hue khud ki swaso p niyantran kerne m laga hua tha.

Tabhi use baba ka khayal aaya or usne baba ko yaad kiya.

Tabhi ek halki si roshni k sath waha rishi pippalad prakat hue or unhonne karan k sir p hath rakha, jise wo normal hua .

Karan :- baba , mane jo abhi dekha wo sab kya tha, kon the wo log , or unse mera kya sambhandh.

Or kyu itne prayas k baad bhi m apni maa ki mrityu k rahasya ka pata ni laga pa raha.

Baba :- shant ho jao putra shant ho jao .

Fir wo apna hath aage kerte or unke hath m ek glass pani aajata h , jo wo karan ko pine ko dete h

Baba :- putra , tum kadapi bhul gaye ki abhi tumhari shaktiya purn roop se jagrit ni h, wo rukavat tumhari shaktiyon ka bandhan hi tha.

Or dusra kaaran ye h ki putra , tum har samay apni in shaktiyon p ashrit ni rah sakte , ye rahasya ko suljhana apni pariksha hi samjho.


Karan :- ji baba, or wo sab drishya , wo log kin the , kya sambandh h mera unse baba , kon thi wo mahila jo abhi kasht m h.

Aap aagya or margdarshan dijiye baba , m unki sahayata k liye sajj hu.

Baba muskurate hue :- putra ! Tum kab se itne adhir ho gaye , putra wo sab kon h or kya sambhandh h unka tumse , wo samay k sath apne aap gyaat ho jayega.

Karan :- parantu baba , wo mahila

Baba :- unki chinta mat kero mere bache , filhaal k liye wo surakshit h , tumhari aane wale samay m unse bhet avashya hogi.

Filhal k liye tum putra , apne us karya m dhyan do , jiska nirnay humne liya ,

Evam putra ek baat ka vishesh dhyan rakhna ki , aane wala samay saral ni hoga , parantu tu or jyoti jab tak ek sath ho , sansar ki koi bhi sankat tum dono ka ahit ni ker sakta

Karan :- ji baba ,

Fir baba waha se antardhyan ho gaye .Or karan bhi sone chala gaya

Agle din karan or jyoti subah jaldi uth apna daily routine pura ker nikal pade.

Karan or jyoti jeSe hi shivani ko leke school pahunche to , aaj fir wo heran ho gaye kyunki priya ko school chodne bhi aaj radha ni aayi thi.

Garima ki gadi m driver k sath gita aayi thi , priya ko school chodne .


Karan or jyoti jaker gita k per chute h .

Gita :- khush raho bacho , kese ho aap dono.

Karan :- bss masi aapke ashirwad se sab sahi h.

Gita :- lagta h tum dono apni is masi ko bhul hi gaye , us din k baad ek baar bhi milne jo ni aaye .

Jyoti :- ni ni masi , esi baat ni h , aapko to pata hi hoga hum shimla gaye hue the , parso hi lote h .

Hum jald hi aapse milne aayenge.

Karan :- ha masi ma milne bhi aayenge or apke hatho ka khana bhi khayenge.

Gita :- ha ha kyu ni beta , tum dono ko to m apne hatho se khana khilaungi.

Jyoti (majak me karan ko chedte hue) :- bhai , kabhi khane k alawa kuch or bhi soch liya kero.

Kahi esa na ho ki , ye 6 packs ki jagah family pack aajaye aapke.

Ye bol wo hasne lagi or sath me shivani or priya bhi.

Priya haste hue :- ha di , fir hum karan bhaiya ko , motu bhaiya bola karenge.

Gita priya k kaan khic thoda datte hue :- kyu re nigodi , kya boli mere bache , chal maafi mang bhaiya se.

Gita ne to halke se hi data tha , lekin priya bichari itni masum k itne m hi uski ankhe nam ho gayi.

Priya(ruasi awaaz me ) :- sorry bhaiya.

Karan priya ko yu rota dekh ni pata or jhat se use god m uthake use shant karata h or gita se bola

Karan :- are are mosi ap meri gudiya ko kyu dant rahi ho , bachi hi to h , kya ho gaya ager bache se majak ker liya to.

Fir majak me jyoti ki or ishara kerte hue bola .

Karan :- yaha to ye 20 saal ki chipkali hi ni sudhri , hamari priyu to fir bhi abhi choti h.

Jyoti :- kya bole aap , m chipkali , rukiye m abhi batati hu aapko.

Gita :- are bas bas ab ladna shuru mat ker dena

Priya abhi bhi daat se udas thi to karan bola
Karan :- Ye dekho gudiya , bhaiya aapke liye kya laye .

Or karan priya ko car k pas le jake , gate khol ek gift deta h , priya jab use khol k dekhti h , to usme ek badi si colouring kit thi kuch esi.

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Priya use dekh khush ho jati h , kyunki priya ko drawing ka bahut shok tha.

Priya karan k gal chumte hue :- thank you so much bhaiya , mujhe ye kabse chahiye thi.

Or so soly bhaiya , mane aapko motu bola.

Priya ne last baat apne dono kaan pakad itne pyaar se boli .Ki karan ko uspe bahut pyaar ayya .

Karan uske dono gal chumke bola

Karan :- koi baat ni mela bacha , ab tum apne bhaiya se majak ni karogi to kisse karogi.

Karan :- wese mosi , aaj aap yaha kese , radha ni aayi.

Gita :- ha beta , wo didi(garima) to kahi bahar gayi hui h , or radha bitiya sham ko ghar aayi thi , or mujhse boli ki wo aaj raat ko apne friends k ghar hi rukegi to aaj m hi priya ko school chod du, uske sath ek ladka or ek ladki bhi the , mujhe laga wo tumhare hi dost honge.

Mane unke bare m radha se puchna bhi chaha , lekin wo jaldi jaldi m bina baat kiye nikal gayi.

Ye bola gita , thodi der m waha se chali gayi , or karan or jyoti bhi nikal gaye sonam k ghar ki or .

Wahi dusri or.

Location :- brihaspur police station

Time :- subah 5 baje.

Pichli raat brihaspur k aaspaas k ilako se bhi 10 log gayab ho gaye the .

Police ko bhi kuch samjh ni aaraha tha ki yaha ho kya raha h.


Inspector gusse se :- aakhir ye log gayab kaha ho rahe h, jamin nigal gayi ya aasman kha gaya.

Hawaldar :- sahab , mane to suna h ki koi bhut pret ka chakkar h ye .

Inspector :- shet up , ramlal (hawaldar) , bhut pret kuch ni hota , ye sirf logo ki felayi gayi afwah h bas.

Jarur kisi giroh ka kaam hoga ya human trafficking wale kisi group ka.

Ramlal abhi kuch bol pata , ki tabhi ek kaidi ki waha jor jor se chilane ki aawaz aati h.

Sahab mujhe yaha se bahar nikalo , bahar nikalo mujhe.

Inspector or ramlal waha dod k jate h to pate h ki wo kaidi dara hua ek kone me betha hua tha.

Ramlal :- kya hua be , kyu chila raha h ,

Kaidi :- sahab , mujhe yaha se bahar nikal do please, chahe kahi p bhi dal do per yaha se nikal do.

Werna mujhe wo mar dalega.

Inspector :- kon mar dalega be tuje

Kaidi darte hue ek divar ki or ishara kerta h , jisme darar aayi hui thi.

Ramlal :- satyanash, kal hi to ispe plaster lagwaya tha , or tune aaj hi is divar ka ye haal ker diya .

Pada rah chupchap yaha,(inspector se) chaliye sahab m ise achi tarah janta hu , ye bas bahane h iske hame tang kerne k .

Ye bol wo dono waha se nikal gaye , wo kaidi chilata rah gaya.

Sahab mujhe yaha mat chodo , wo mar dalega mujhe

Per uski aawaz koi ni sunta , or bas ab us jagah wo kaidi hi rah jata h , kyunki raat ki shift uper se ganv ka area tha to night shift me 2 3 police wale hi hote the station m

Tabhi divar ki darar or bhadne lagi or usse wahi pret nikla , jisne kal us majdur ko mara tha.




Kaidi chilane ki koshis kerta h , per uske gale se koi aawaz ni nikalti.

Pret apni bhayanak aawaz me bola

Pret :- koi ni bachane aayega tujhe , tu bhi marega ab, ek baar to tu kuch minto k liye bach gaya tha tu , us police ko bula per ab ni.

Ye bol pret ne apne hath m liye hua chaku uske sine m ghop diya or wo kaidi wahi dam tod diya.

Pret :- hahahaha 11vi lash bhi mil gayi , bachi 10.

Ye bol pret us kaidi ki lash k sath waha se gayab ho gaya.

Location :- suresh ka ghar.

Naina naha dho ke ghora baba k pass jane ko teyar ho gayi thi.

Suresh :- beti ek baar or soch lo , ghora baba , jyada kisi se milna pasand ni kerte , ese to wo dil k saaf h , per unka krodh bahut khatarnak h.

Naina :- jab m kisi buri niyat se ek saaf dil wLe k pass jahi ni rahi to dar kesa sir , mera jana bahut jaruri h sir ,per please sorry m filhal aapko wo kaaran ni bata paungi.

Suresh :- jesa tumhe sahi lage beti .

Fir suresh ganv ke ek ladke ko naina k sath jane ko bol deta h.

Ghora baba ka dera ganv se 5 km dur tha, junglo m , naina or wo ladka waha pahunch jate h, or jeep ko side m laga, jungle k kuch ander pedal chalne p unhe ek aghori dikhayi deta h.

Ladka :- wo rahe ghora baba , lekin wo sbhi sadhna me bethe h lag raha h , kahi hume bhasm na ker de gussa hoker.




Naina :- yaha tak lane k liye shukriya dost, ab tum jaker jeep m beth jao, m kuch der m aati hu.

Naina ghora baba k pass ja ke boli.

Naina hath jod k:- pranam maharaj.

Ghora baba ankhe band kiye hue hi:- kya chahiye.




Naina apne bag se kuch nikalte hue :- jivan gandha booti.

Ye sun baba apni ankhe khol dete h.

Naina apna hath aage kerte hue :- ye aspki sadhna ki antim kriya k liye meri or se bhet.

Ghora baba :- hmm rakh do use .

Naina waha pass m padi shila per vo booti rakh deti h.

Ghora baba :- tumhare samaj m to bina kisi swarth k , kisi ko kuch ni diya jata, mango kya chahati ho.

Apna jivan sukh or suvidha se paripurn banana chahati ho.

Naina :- ni maharaj , m use dhund rahi hu , jinhone mujhe ye jivan diya h.

Ghora baba :- oh to tum apni maa ko dhund rahi ho.

Naina :- ji baba , or mujhe apni maa tak pahuchne k liye , is nishan k bare m pata lagana hoga.

Naina ek kagaj nikal ke ghora baba ko dikhati h , jis per wahi nishan bana hua tha , jo pandit ji ne use sapne m dikhaya tha.




Ghora baba us nishan ko dekh thoda tez aawaz me bole.

Ghora baba :- tu apni maa ko dhund rahi h , ya apni mot ko. Ager marna chahati h to bilkul sahi jagah aayi h tu.

Naina :- mot ko abhi intezaar kerna hoga maharaj , jab tak mujhe apni maa or unse jude sabhi sawalo k jwab ni.mil jate .

Kya aap jante h is bare m .

Ghora baba :- hmmm , janta to hu , per kuch yaad ni aaraha , ek kaam kero , is nishan k ware m tumhe , seth hiralal bata payenge.

Jo brihaspur se 3 kos dur pas k kasbe me rahate h.

Fir baba naina ko wo address bata dete h or naina ghora baba se aagya le waha se nikal jati h, hiralal k bangle ki or.

Ghora baba man me :- apka koti koti dhanyawad maa , ki aapne is mahan karya or naina jesi mahan shakti k margdarshak banne k yogya samjha.

Ma m apna kartavya purn nishta se purn kerne ki koshis karunga .

Jai ma kali.

Itna bol baba wapas apni sadhna m lag gaye.

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Naina baba se mil ke wapas apni jeep ki or aagayi , jaha p wo ladka abhi bhi uska intezaar ker raha tha .Uske chahare pe naina k liye tension dikh rahi thi.

Naina ko sahi salamat dekh usko shanti padti h.

Ladke ka naam veer tha.

Veer :- kya hua naina ji baba ne kuch bataya kya , aapko itna time lagne p to mujhe tension hone lagi thi , kahi baba ne kuch to ni ker diya

Naina :- hmm baba ne jyada kuch to ni per , kuch hints to diye h filhal k liye.

Fir wo muskurate hue boli.

Naina :- wese veer ji , aapko meri itni tension kyu ho rahi thi , hum to ek dusre ko ache se jante bhi ni h , or to or m to kuch dino k liye hi yaha to.

Veer atakte hue :- vo to , vo to .

Veer :- ha , tension kyu na ho bhala , kuch din k liye hi sahi , aap hoto hamare ganv ki mahaman hi na , to apne mahaman ka khayal hum ni rakhenge to kon rakhega.

Or rahi baat anjaan hone ki to koi baat ni , hum ek dusre k naam to jan hi chuke h , to kyu na hum friends bhi ban jaye , fir to hum anjaan bhi ni rahenge.

Apka is bare m kya khayal h mohtarma ji.

Naina veer k is andaaz ko sun pahale to hasi fir boli.

Naina :- ha kyu ni ,veer ji

Veer hath aage badhate hue :- so friends.

Naina hath milate hue :- friends.

Jese hi naina veer se hath milati h , veer naina ki nili ankho m kho jata h.

Naina jab ye dekhti h to sharati muskan k sath boli.

Naina :- ab chale veer ji.

Veer hosh me aate hue :- ha ha chaliye na.

Naina :- chale kese , mujhe ek hath se driving kerna jamega ni

Veer :- ek hath se ?

Naina veer ko apne hath ki taraf ishara kerti h , jo abhi bhi uske hath me tha.

Veer apni bhul samjh jata h or jhat se naina ka hath chod bola.

Veer :- oops sorry.

Or ye bol samne dekhne laga , jese uski koi chori pakdi gayi ho.

Naina fir se hasi or wo nikal pade ganv ki or , fir naina verr ko drop ker nikal jati h , seth hiralal k ghar ki or.

Karib 45 min k safar k baad vo seth k ghar k saamne hoti h, or jese hi vo ghar m enter kerti h , use ek ajib si manhusiyat mahasus hoti h waha

Lekin jana bhi jaruri tha waha isliye wo ghar m enter kerti h, to pati h ki hall m sofe per ek 20 21 sal ki ladki or side wale sofe pe ek 55 60 sal ka bujurg betha hua tha , jiski bheshbusha se wo munim lag raha tha, kyunki uske hatho m hisab khato ki kitab thi. Dono k chahre p pareshani or dukh ki lakire saaf saaf dikhayi de rahi thi.

Ladki jese hi naina ko dekhti h to boli.

Ladki :- ji kahiye , kisse milna tha aapko.

Naina :- ji namaste , ji wo mujhe seth hiralal ji se milna tha, unse ek jaruri kaam tha.

Ladki apni pareshani ko chupate hue :- ji pitaji to kahi bahar gaye hue h, aap chahe to mujhe vo jaruri kaam bata sakti h.

Naina ko samjh ni aata ki wo us ladki se kya bole , kyunki wo apne maksad k baare m har kisi ko ni bata sakti thi.

Usne aas pas najar dodayi to , divaron p dekha ki , hiralal ji ko smaj seva k liye bahut se inam mile hue the, jise dekh use idea aaya or wo boli.

Naina :- wo m rampur se aayi thi , yaha , mane hiralal ji k bare m bahut suna h ,ki vo bahut daan punya kerte h , to usi silsile m milne aayi .

Actually humare ganv k school ki building ki condition bahut kharab h , ager hiralal ji kuch madad ker dete to, bahut bada upkaar hota unper.

ladki rampur ka naam sun khush ho jati h , or uske chahare p pareshani ki jagah ummid ki ek kiran milne ki asha najar aati h.

Ladki :- ji aap rampur se aayi ho , to to aap vaha k prasiddh kali mandir k pandit ji ko bhi janti hogi.

Naina udas man se :- ji , wo mere baba hi the , jinka hal hi me swargwas ho gaya .

Ladki ye sun fir udaas ho jati h ek baar k liye , per fir use kuch yaad aata h .

Ladki :- kahi aap naina to ni , jinhone thakur sahab ki beti ko us shetan se mukti dilvayi thi.

Naina pahale to apna naam sun thodi chonki , fir boli.

Naina :- ji ha , m hi naina hu.

Naina jese hi ye boli , wo ladki naina k pero ko pakadne ko hoti h.

Naina use rokte hue :- are are didi kya ker rahi h aap , kyu mujhe paap ka bhagidar bana rahi h.

Ladki :- naina ji , please aap hamari sahayata kijiye , mere pitaji khatre m h shayad , ab aap hi unki madad ker sakti h.

Naina :- pahali baat to aap mujhse badi h didi , to aap ji mat lagaiye , or bataiye to sahi hua kya , m kis prakar aapki sahayata ker sakti hu.

Ladki jiska naam lakshmi tha wo boli.

Lakshmi :- ji wo puri baat to aapko munim ji hi bata payenge.

Munim ji jo itni der chupchap khade the wo batana shuru kerte h ,

Short flashback.

Third person ki jubani.

Subah subah ki baat thi , hiralal ji apni kursi p bethe hue the , or side m munim ji bhi .

Hiralal ji kuch files check ker rahe the ,

Hiralal ji :- munim ji , is saal to pichle saal se kafi jyda munafa hua h.

Munim ji :- ha seth ji , ye to aapki mahanat or satkarmo ka fal h jo bhagwan aapko de raha h.

Hiralal ji :- munim ji , wo factory k karcho ki file kaha h.

Munim ji :- maaf kerna seth ji , lagta h m car m bhul gaya , rukiye m abhi leker aaya.

Munim ji jese hi ghar se bahar jate h,to hiralal dekhte h ki unki divaron m darar aane lagti h. Or ek baar fir us darar me se wahi pret nikalta h.

Hiralal ji isse pahale kuch ker pate , wo pret unke sine m ghop diya , pret ki shakti se unki aawaz to ni nikal rahi thi , per wo abhi jinda the.

Pret abhi aage kuch kerta , ki uske kaano m kisi k aane ki aahat padi or wo gayab ho gaya.

Wo munim ji hi the , jo wapas aagaye the,jese hi wo seth ji ki ye haalat dekhte h to buri tarah dar jate h or wo unke pass bhage aaye .

Munim ji :- seth ji ,seth ji ye kisne kiya aapko , rukiye m abhi ambulance ko bulake lata hu, aap himmat rakhiye.

Munim ji ko kuch samjh ni aaya to wo ghar k bahar jake ambulance ko phone lagane lage , tabhi lakshmi bhi vaha aa pahuchi jo kisi kaam se bahar gayi hui thi.

Munim ji ko yu ghabraya dekh lakshmi ne pucha.

Lakshmi :- kya baat h munim ji , aap itne ghabraye hue kyu ho.

Munim ji sari baat lakshmi ko batate h , jise sun lakshmi rote hue seth ji k kamre ki or bhagi .

Wahi us pret ne isi bich seth ji ko bhi maar diya tha,

Preet :- hahaha 12 bachi 9.

Ye bol wo pret dhul ban lash k sath usi divar m samane laga , or us dhul ko divar m samate hue lakshmi ne dekh liya .


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Lakshmi rote hue :- please mere pitaji ko bacha lijiye, mujhe ye kisi bhut pret ka kaam hi lag raha h , ab aap hi hamari aakhiri ummid ho, m aapke aage hath jodti hu.

Naina :- ji ye to bahut gambhir samasya h aap chinta mat kijiye m apni puri koshish karungi.

Naina lakshmi k sath us kamre m jaker , us kamre ka nirikshan kerti h , fir usne apne bag se ek chota sa equipment nikala , jo ek EDi meter tha , jo har paranormal expert use kerte h , ye pata lagane ko ki , kisi particular jagah negative energy h ya ni .





Naina ne shahar m rahate hue hi apne liye ye kharida tha.

Fir wo pure kamre me leker use ghumne lagi .Lakshmi boli.

Lakshmi :- naina ji , ye kya h aapke hatho m

Naina :- didi , ye ek edi meter h , jo hume ye batata h ki hamare aaspas koi shetani ya nakaratmak urja h ki ni , abhi jese isme ye nili light jag rahi h , iska matlab sab normal h .

Tabhi naina us darar wali divar k pass jati h to meter ki nili light band ho jati h or laal light jor jor se jhapakne lagi.

Fir kuch der bad band ho gayi

Naina :- aapka andaza sahi tha lakshmi di , yaha ek shetani saya tha to jarur ,lekin ab vo yaha se filhal k liye ja chuka h.

Lakshmi ghabrake :- mere pitaji

Naina :- di aap chinta mat kijiye , m aapke pitaji ka jald se jald pata laga lungi.

Abhi vo kuch der yu hi baate ker rahe the,ki aas pas se rone wagerah ki aawaz aane lagi.

Jab dod k sab bahar gaye to ek orat buri tarah roye ja rahi thi, sabne jab usko kese na kese sambhal k pucha kya hua to vo boli.

Orat :- wo wo shetan ne mere bache ko maar diya or apne sath usko le gaya or ye bol wo fir se rone lagi.

Us orat k bete k sath bhi vesa hi hua tha jesa seth ji or bakiyon k sath hua tha, wo orat 2 min k liye rasoi m kya gayi pani lane , apne khana khate hue bete k liye , ki itne m vo shetan ne us ladke ko mar diya or apne sath le gaya or usko le jate hue vo orat bichari dekhte rah gayi.

Or wo fir se buri tarah rone lagi.

Naina ko us ghar ki divaron p bhi vesi hi darare or miti farsh pe dikhti h.

Naina man me :- ye ho kya raha h, kon h wo shetan , kahi uska samraat se koi connection to ni,jo bhi ho mujhe us shetan ko rokna hoga isse pahale or masumo ki jaan jaye.

Shayad ghora baba ne isiliye mujhe yaha bheja ho.

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Karan or jyoti shivani ko school chod nikal gaye sonam k ghar ki or, lekin unke dimag m radha k badle behavior ko leke hi baate ghum rahi thi.

Sonam k ghar pahuch pahale to 3no bhai bahan vaha nashta kerte h ,kyunki karan ne sonam ko promise kiya tha , ki din m ek baar har roj wo dono khana sonam k yaha hi uske sath khayenge.

Karan :- chal sonu , aaj tera admision bhi karwana h na , college m .

Sonam udas man se :- bhaiya radha ni aayi .

Karan ek jhuta bahana bana deta h

Karan :- wo gudiya , radha ko ek jaruri kaam yaad aagaya tha, isliye hume wo wahi college m milegi.

Fir karan or jyoti sonam k sath college pahunch gayi. Karan college m jese hi pahuchte h to heran ho jate h .

Kyunki karan or jyoti k tasvir k sath , bade bade banner lage hue the, jisme unka national level champion banne ki badhayi thi.

Karan or jyoti ko dekh waha kayi ladke or ladkiya unhe gher lete h , jo unke fans ban chuke the.

Ladki 1 :- congretulations for winning sir .hum to aapki first fight se fan ho gayi thi , kya shandar fight kerte h ap.

Ladka :- ha sir many many congratulations, or mam aapko bhi , aapne bhi bahut shandar fight ki thi .

Ladka 2 :- sir mam kya hum aapke sath ek selfie le sakte h.

Ese hi kayi ladki ladke karan or jyoti k piche pad gaye , undono ne kese na kese apna picha chudaya sabse or ek se in banner k bare m pucha to pata chala ki ye sab principal ne kiya h.

Fir karan sabko waha se bhej jyoti or sonam k sath principal k office pahuch jata h.

Karan gate k pas ja ker

Karan :- may I come in sir

Princi :- oh karan or jyoti beta , aao na beta betho.

Karan or jyoti ander aate h or sath m sonam bhi.

Principal :- bacho aapne ye compitition jit , apne mata pita ka hi ni , apne pure college ka naam roshan kiya h.i proud of u bacho.

Karan :- thank you so much sir , per in banners ki kya jarurat thi.

Principal :- ese kese ni thi beta , mane esa isliye kiya ki baaki bache bhi tum se motivate ho or apni life m esa kuch kare.

Jyoti :- aapka bahut bahut shukriya sir aapne hume is layak samjha , per please ab inhe hatva dijiye.

Kyunki esa raha to students hame hamesha ghere hi rahenge , ese to wo khud study p dhayan denge na hum de payenge.

Or wese bhi hume koi bhi vip treatment ni chahiye sir.

Principal :- thik h beta ,m aaj hi jata dunga .

Fir karan principal ko sonam se milvata h or use apni choti bahan hi introduce karwata h .

Karan :- sir ye meri choti bahan h , ye isi hafte shimla se yaha shift hui h , ab m iska yahi admision karwana chahata hu sir , please kuch ho sake to.

Ye bol karan principal ko sonam k sare document deta h , sonam bhi ek brilliant student thi , usne 12 m pure himachal m top kiya tha.

Principal sonam se :- very good beta , aapke to bahut ache marks h or aap state topper bhi ho.or upper se scholarship bhi , excellent beta.keep it up.

Principal karan se :- beta tum tension mat lo , sonM ka admission m ker dunga , kal.se sonam college join ker sakti h


Fir karan or jyoti sonam k sath canteen m jate h or karan sonam se bola

Karan :- sonu , tum yahi wait kero ,aaj humare 2 hi lecture h to hum jaldi hi aaj ayenge.

Sonam ;- ok bhai.

Fir karan or jyoti apni class m chale jate h,or lecture attend kerne lagte h , waha bhi unhe sabhi teacher or student gher lete h.

Fir kese n kese karan or jyoti apne lecture nipta k canteen m pahunche to waha jo usne dekh , uska khun khol gaya , uski ankhe gusse se laal ho gayi.

Location ;- kfd lok.

Narad ji :- prabhu karan or jyoti k jivan p bahut bada sankat aane wala h , hume shighra hi kuch kerna hoga.

Kfd :- ni devrishi, ye karan or jyoti ki pariksha ki ghadi h , humara hastakshep kerna uchit na hoga isme.

Narad ji :- parantu prabhu , jo hone wala h, uske liye karan or jyoti ko kisi ki sahayata ki aavashyakata to avashya padegi .

Kfd :- aapka ye kathan bhi uchit h narad ji , ab samay aagaya h uska is sansaar k saamne aane ka , jo rakshak ki is pariksha ki ghadi m sahayak bhi hoga.
Parantu kese vo bhavishya m gyaat hoga

Ye bol kfd muskurane lage or narad ji bhi unka ishara samjh gaye.

Narad ji kfd k aage hath jod :- narayan narayan ! Aapki lila to keval aap hi samjh sakte h prabhu.


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Karan or jyoti jese hi canteen pahunche,to waha ka najara dekh gusse se laal ho jata h, uski muthi bhich jati h.

Kyunki samne ek ladka sonam ka hath pakde hue usse badtamiji ker raha tha, lekin ek kaaran or tha jiski vajah se karan ka gussaa or bhi jyada bhad gaya tha.

Ladke or sonam ka dhayan abhi tak karan or jyoti ki or ni gaya tha.

Ladka :- dekho m itni nh der se pyaar se bol raha hu ki m tumhe pahali najar m hi pyaar ker betha hu to is najayaj fayda mat uthao.

Werna mujhe dusre tarike bhi aate h .

Sonam vese to itni kamjor ni thi , lekin naya shahar or nayi jagah hone ki vajah se ghabra gayi thi.

Sonam sahami hui si boli :- mane kaha na mujhe tumme koi interest ni h , mujhe akela chod do, jao yaha se.

Ladka :- lagta h tu ese ni manegi , ab m tujhe yaha sabke samne se jabardasti utha k leke jaunga.

Ye bol usne tezi se sonam ka hath pakad liya , uski pakad tight thi , jiski vajah se sonam ki chikh k sath aansu nikal aaye.

Sonam:- aahhh bhaiiiiii.


Abhi vo ladka kuch or kerta isse pahale , ek jordaar mukka uske muh p pada , jisse wo piche ki or jaker gira.

Ye mukka karan ne mara tha, or wo yahi ni ruka , karan ne us ladke ko pakad k buri tarah dhona start ker diya.

Wahi sonam karan or jyoti ko dekhti h , wo bhag k jyoti k gale lag rone lagi.

Or idher karan ne uske 5 6 jordar muke or late jad di thi.lekin karan ne abhi tak ek shabd ni nikala tha muh se, uska gusaa kuch jyda hi tha.

Ab karan ne use gardan se pakad k hava m utha liya tha , karan ki speed or takat dekh canteen m mojud sabhi students heran the.

Unhe ye to pata tha ki national level champion h , per itni takat or furti to unhe hi expect ni ki thi.

Abhi karan aage kuch kerta ya bolta itne me uske sonam or jyoti k kaano m ek aavaj padi .

"Bhai please unhe chod do , unki koi galti ni "

Ye aawaz radha ki thi , jo unki taraf bhagi bhagi aarahi thi, or sath me vo kal wali ladki bhi thi.

Karan :- ni radha ,e isne hamari sonu k sath badtamiji ki , isko to m aaj apne pero p khade hone layak ni chodunga.

Radha :- bhaiya ap inhe chodiye to sahi m sab bataati hu , aapko meri kasam.

Karan ye sun , na chahate hue us ladke ko chod deta h, or wo ladka hafte hue saas lene laga, or radha k sath wali ladki uske pass ja use sambhalne lagi.

Karan :- ab bata radha kyu ho rahi thi tujhe iski itni fikar jisne teri best friend se badtamiji ki , or to or ese ladke k sath tu kal ghum bhi rahi thi.

Ji ha dosto ye wahi ladka tha, jiske or us ladki k sath radha kal se thi or jise karan ne market m dekha tha.

Isi kaaran hi karan ka gussa itna bad gaya tha , kyunki karan ko laga ki ye uski dono bahano k sath kuch galat kerne ki firaaq me h


Radha :- bhai m aapko sab batati hu , pahale aap shant ho jaiye, di aap boliye na bhai ko.

Jyoti karan k kandhe p hath rakh ke shant hone ka ishara kerti h , jisse karan kuch had tak shant ho jata h.

Jyoti :- ab bata choti , kya h ye sab , kon h ye log.

Radha :- di , ye dono mere cousins h, (ladke ki or ishara ker) ye h viraj bhai or ye h inki choti bahan maya di.

Karan :- tumhare cousin h to kya kisi se bhi badtamiji kerega kya ye.

Jyoti pyaar se :- bhai aap please shant ho jaiye , m baat ker rahi hu na.

Radha :- ni bhai , ye sab to ek majak tha.

Short flashback.

Kal jab radha , karan jyoti or sonam k sath thi , tab radha ko garima ka phone hi aaya tha.

Garima :- hello radha beta , kaha h tu.

Radha :- hello ,ha mumma , m to apni friends k sath thi.

Garima :- beta , aap baki sab kaam chodo , or jaldi se airport pahuncho

Radha :- kyu mumma.

Garima :- beta , aapke viraj bhai or maya di aarahe h ek ghante m , m to ek office ki meeting m fasi hui hu to aapko hi jana hoga.

Radha (khushi se ) :- kya sachi , m abhi nikalti hu mumma.

Garima :- ok beta .

Isiliye radha karan or baki sab se bahana banake nikal gayi , kyunki vo kuch jyada hi jaldi m thi.

Kyunki uska bada prem tha apne cousins se bachpan se hi , ye uske chacha k bache the.

Radha k papa or chacha chachi ki mot ek accident m ho gayi thi, isliye hi ye delhi shift ho gaye the, apni aage ki studies k liye , or aaj 6 saal baad vapas aaye the yaha.


Radha jaldi se airport pahunchi , or kuch der baad viraj or maya dono aagaye, jinhe dekh radha dod k unke gale lagi .


Viraj :- kesi h meri radhu ,

Radha :- m thik hu bhai , itne salo me aapko meri yaad ni aayi , yaha tak ki ek baar aap milne bhi na aaye
Ab m aapko kahin ni jane dungi.

Maya :- hum bhi ab apni radhu ko chod k kahi ni jane wake , tumhe pata h choti mane or bhai ne , ab yahi rahane ka decide ker liya h.

Radha :- kya sach me di.

Maya :- ha radhu, hum wapas se apne purane ghar m shift hone wale h.

Radha ye sun khushi se jhum uthi or fir ye 3no airport se sidha , viraj k ghar jate h, jaha ki safai unhonne pahale hi kerwa li thi.

Fir kuch det aaram ker 3no nikal jate h , ghumne firne jaha karan unhe dekh leta h.

Fir waha se lot radha apne ghar pahunchi or jaldbaji m apne kuch kapde leker or gita ko jaldbaji m is bare gita ko bol viraj or maya k sath unhike ghar chali gayi sone.


Or aaj jab radha Maya or viraj k admision karwane yaha aayi or canteen m jab usne sonam ko dekha to, usne ye baat maya ko batayi.

Maya :- chal na choti , kyu na thodi masti ki jaye teri friend k sath

Radha excited hote hue :- ha ha di

Viraj :- per kare kya.

Tabhi maya k dimag m ek idea aata h or vo radha or viraj batati h ki , sonam ko purpose kerne ka kyu na drama kiya jaye dekhte h uska kya reaction hota h.

Radha bhi bina kuch soche samjhe unke ese majak m sath dene ko teyar ho gayi.

Fir viraj sonam k pass chala jata h or radha or maya ek jagah chup k dekhne lage.

Viraj :- excuse me mis..

Usne ye baat is andaz me boli, jese use uska naam puch raha ho.

Sonam uncomfortable feel kerte hue :- sonam ji sonam nam h mera

Viraj :- nice name mis sonam , ji mujhe aapse kuch kahana tha.

Sonam :- boliye.?

Viraj :- actually m aapko kese bolu , ye samjh ni aaraha , but bole bina rah bhi ni paunga.

I like u sonam ji.

Sonam :- kyaaaa.

Viraj :- ha sonam ji , mujhe aapse pahali najar m hi pyaar ho gaya , mujhe jyada baate ghumani firani aati to ni , isliye direct hi aake bol diya.

Sonam :- sorry ,mr pahali baat to m aapko janti tak ni and dusri baat I m not interested in you .

Sonam ne ye baat saaf saf bol di per , viraj plan k hisab se piche hi pad gaya sonam k .

Itne m karan bhi vaha aa pahucha or aage kya hua , aap sabko pata hi h.

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Karan ye sun thoda gusse se bola.

Karan :- ye kesa majak tha choti , bhala esa bhi bhada majak koi kerta h, dekh ni rahi kitna dar gayi h sonu.

Dekho iska hath jara kese nishan pad gaya h.

Sonam ki najuk kalayi ko majak majak me viraj ne itni jor se pakad liya tha ki, uske hatho p nishan pad gaye the


Viraj :- e mr , ab tum kuch jyada hi react ker rahe ho , meri sister se ese baat kerne wale hote kon ho tum, kaha na ek majak hi tha vo bas .

Jyoti :- jaban ko lagam do apni viraj , tumhari himmat kese hui mere bhai se ese baat kerne ki , ager tum radha k cousin na hote to

Radha bich me interfare kerte hue :-viraj bhai or di please aap dono shant ho jaiye , galti meri thi m uske liye maafi mangti hu.

Please ab is jhagde ko khatam kijiye.

Maya :- ye kya radha , tum in praye logo k liye humse ese baat ker rahi h.

Radha gusse se :- bas di , bahut bol liye aap, jinhe aap paraya bol rahi h unki vajah se hi aapki ye radha , aaj sahi salamat yaha khadi h , verna
.

Ye bol wo rone lagi , karan aage bad k radha ko gale laga leta h , or use shant kerwata h.

Radha karan k gale lag kuch shant hoti h or fir wo sonam k pass jake boli.

Radha :- mujhe maaf ker de sonu , ki mane tujhse esa bhada majak kiya , tera dil dukhaya.

Ye bol wo fir rone lagi , sonam use gale laga ke boli.

Sonam :- koi baat ni radhu , m tujhse naraj ni hu, m janti hu tera irada mujhe thes pahuchane ka ni tha,

Fir usko hasne k liye boli.

Sonam :- are are, ab tu rona band ker yaar , rote hue tu or bhi gandi lagti h.

Ye sun radha k chahre p halki si hasi aagayi , or usne ek muka pyar se sonam ki pith me mara

Dhire dhire sab normal ho gaye , lekin viraj or maya jo bahar se to normal hone ka dikhawa ker rahe the , lekin ander hi ander krodh ki agni m jal rahe the.

Viraj man me :- abhi jitna khush hona h hole karan , tujhe to m esa barbad kerne wala hu ,ki tu pachtayega ki tune mujhse panga kyu liya.

Or karan or jyoti bhi shant ni the,unko bar bar ye ahasas ho raha tha ki ,jo Aaj hua h ye sahi ni hua.

Or to or esi baato ko vo dono jald hi bhul ker jyada tar samne wale ko mAaf ker dete h , per is baar baat kuch alag thi , undono ko hi viraj or maya , sahi insan ni lag rahe the.

Wahi dusri or

Location :- brihaspur .

Naina police station jati h , gayab hue logo ki khabar mili ya ni ye pata lagane , lekin waha bhi wahi haal tha.

Inspector khud pareshan tha ,band lockup se kedi gayab hone pe.

Naina jab waha jake apna introduction deti h to ramlal naina ko pahachan jata h.

Ramlal (inspector se) :- sir , ye wahi naina h , jisne thakur sahab ki beti ko bachaya tha , ab yahi hamri madad ker sakti h.

Inspector bhi itna sab kuch hone k baad bhut pret wali baat ko maan chuka tha, to wo use us lockup m le jata h , jaha se kaidi gayab hua tha

Naina waha bhi sab check kerti h to waha bhi vesi hi divaron m darare or miti thi.

Naina fir police ki madad se har jagah, jaha se log gayab hue the waha waha jake check kerti h to sab jagah vo darare or miti pati h.

Inspector naina se puchta h ki

Inspector :- kya hua mis naina, aapko kuch samjh aaya.

Naina :- hmm , kuch kuch samjh aarah h inspector sahab , per ab mujhe kuch time k liye ekant chahiye , is case ko study kerne k liye.

Inspector :- ok mis naina ,kisi bhi tarah ki apko jarurat ho to aap mujhe bejhijak yaad ker lijiyega.

Fir naina suresh k ghar lot jati h, or apne kamre m jakar in case k bare m sochne lagti h

Naina :- akhir h kon ye shetan , or marne k baad ye lash ko apne sath kyu le jata h,akhir kyu.

Tabhi vaha suresh bhi aajata h or vo chinta se bolta h.

Suresh :- naina beti m ye kya sun raha hu , tum police walo k sath mil ker , gayab hue logo ki khoj ker rahi ho.

Beta ganv walo ka manna h ki ye kisi bhut pret ka kaam h , or kayiyo ne to use dekha bhi h , beta ye bahut khatarnak kaam h , tum isme kyu pad rahi ho.

Naina :- sir mujhe ye kerna hi hoga , kyonki yahi kaam h mera , I m a paranormal expert. Mere baba ne mujhe ye vidya hi isliye sikhayi h ki m shetani shaktiyon ka nash ker masumo ki raksha ker saku.

Kuch der samjhane k baad suresh bhi samjh jata h baat ko.

Suresh :- hmm , thik h beta jesi tumhari icha , vese kuch pata chala tumhe.

Naina :- ha sir, m har us jagah p gayi jaha se log gayab hue , to mane paya ki har jagah ek chij common h.

Suresh :- wo kya beti.

Naina :- yahi sir ki har jagah ki divaron m darare aayi hui thi or aaspas ek ret k sath mix kuch alag type ki mitti bhi mojud h .Pata kerne p pata chala jaha se log gayab hue h , waha sabhi k hal hi m plaster ya divaar

M ye mitti ka sample layi hu, bas ise check hi kerne wali thi.

Fir naina jara si miti ko apni ungli p laga ker, apne yantra ko chuti h to use current sa laga.

Naina :- mera shak sahi tha , is mitti m kuch to gadbad h.

Fir wo veer ko sath leker us cement vale k pas pahunchi ,lekin wo admi bada hi ghatiya or badtameez kisam ka admi tha.

Jab naina ne usse ye pucha ki vo mitti kaha se lata h to vo apni okat dikhane laga.

Admi :- e ladki , tujhe isse kya matlab ki m apni mitti kaha se lata hu or kyu lata hu , mujhe apna kaam kerne de.

Naina:- dekhiye mera ye jana bahut jaruri h please samjhiye ,aapke yaha se jis jis k bhi ghar mitti gayi h wahi se log gayab hue h

Aadmi :- tera dimag kharab ho gaya h ladki , ya tujhe jarur mere compititer ne bheja h mera naam kharab kerne , chupchap yaha se nikal ja , isse pahale ki m tujhe dhakke maar k nikalu

Veer ye sab sun k gusse m agaya

Veer :- are o chacha , hum itni der se apse aram se baat ker rahe h to iska ye matlab ni h ki hamre sir p chadoge , ladki se baat kerne ki tamij ni h kya tumko.

Admi :- ab tu kal ka londa mujhe tamij sikhayega

Ye bol vo ladne ko teyar ho jata h or veer bhi bhidne ko teyaar tha, ki naina rokti h veer ko or boli.

Naina gusse se :- rahane do veer , ese logo k muh lagne ka koi fayda ni h , actually galti meri hi h ki m ese logo ki madad k liye yaha apna time waste ker rahi hu , jinhe na baat kerne ki sabhayata h na hi apne alawa kisi or se matlab .

Marne do in logo ko mujhe kya , m kal hi vapas lot jaungi yaha se , ye bol naina veer k sath vaha se nikal gayi.

Raste m veer bola.

Veer :- ye kya naina ji , ager aap hi hame yu chod k chale jaoge to kon bachayega hume us shetan k kahar se .

Naina muskurate hue drive kerte hue boli :- dekho veer pahali baat to mujhe sirf naina bolo , ye ji sunne se bujurgo wali feel aati h yaar , we are friends.

Or dusri baat m kahi ni ja rahi hu,mane bas uske samne natak kiya taki vo hamare kaam m rukavat na dale,m kuch or chanbin k baad kal police k sath vaha jaungi taki vo dobara natak na ker paye.


Ye sun veer khush ho gaya , or khushi khushi m usne naina ko gale laga liya,lekin jab use galti ka ahasas hua apni wo jhat se usse dur ho gaya.

Naina veer ka ye reaction dekh pahale to choli , fir hasne lagi.


Yaha m ye baat clear ker du radha sirf veer ko apna dost manti h or kuch ni or veer ko bhi bas naina se attraction h bas , lekin ye baat abhi uske samjh m ni aayi h. Lekin naina ya baat samjhti h to usse bas ese hi hasi majak ker leti h.

Vese bhi veer ek saaf dil ka acha ladka h ,jiska is duniya m koi ni h, suresh ne hi use apna beta maan ker uska kharcha uthata h or veer bhi ek bete ki tarah suresh ki har baat manta h or uski sahayata kerta h har jagah


Aadhi Raat ko naina bina kisi ko bataye ghar se nikali , or ek under construction building m ja pahunchi jaha kismat se koi ni dikha use.

Usne pata kiya tha , ki us jagah se yaha bhi cement or mitti pahunchi h.

Fir naina ander jake us mitti k dher k pass pahunchi or mantra pad k gangajal us miti p dal boli.

Naina :- yaha jo bhi buri shakti mojud h mere samne aaye.

Tabhi waha us miti se kala dhua nikla or wo pret samne aagaya.

Naina :- oh to tu h wo shetan , jo masum logo ko maar raha h , bata kon h tu or kyu maar raha h logo ko.

Pret gusse se :- tu bas itna janle ladki m teri maut hu, ye bol wo naina p jhapta

Lekin naina teyar thi , wo jese hi naina k karib aaya , naina ne apna yantra nikal ker uski or ker diya , jiski kirano se wo tadafne laga.

Pret :- aahh chod do mujhe , mujhe chod do , m yaha se chala jaunga wada h ye mera.

Naina :- tujh jese shaitan p bharosa ni kiya ja sakta dusht , ab apne karmo ka dand bhogne ko teyar ho ja.

Pret chillate hue :- ni mujhe chod do, m tumhari madad ket sakta hu iske badle m.

Naina :- tujh jesa shaitan meri keSe madad karega.

Pret bahut hi mayavi or chalak tha.

Pret :- m tumhe bata sakta hu ki kaha milega tume samraat , mane use last time kundera ganv m dekha tha , m tumhe ya bhi bata sakta hu , ki vo kaha milega ab tumhe , per uske liye tumhe mujhe aajad kerna hoga.

Naina ye sun pahale to choki fir boli.:- m tumhari baato p kese yakin ker lu tum ek pret or chal tum preton ka swabhav h.

Pret - m shetan ki kasm khake bolta hu naina , ki m jo bol raha hu vo sab sach h , or ek tantrik ki beti hone k nate tum ye janti ho ki hum pret ager shaitan ki jhuti kasam khale to, shetan hume hi bhasm ker deta h.

Ager tum apni ma tak pahuchna chahati ho to jaldi mujhe ajaad kero.

Apni maa ka naam sun naina thoda emotional ho gayi or yahi usne galti ker yantra ko hatha diya or isika fayda utha wo pret adrishy ho gaya.

Or jor jor se haste hue bola.

Pret :- murkh ladki ,mane sirf itna bola tha kasam kha k ki mane samraat ko kundera m dekha tha na ki ye kasam khai ki teri m madad karunga ,ab marne k liye teyar ho ja.

Naina ko samjh ni aaraha tha ki wo kya kare, tabhi wo pret ek waha pada box apni shakti se utha k naina k hath p marta h ,jisse uska yantr hath se chut jata h.

Fir wo pret naina ko hava me utha utha k apni shaktiyon se idher udher fekne laga , naina ne bahut koshis ki apne yantra tak pahuchne ki lekin wo na kamyab ho rahi thi or pret rukne ka naam ni le raha tha.

Tabhi vaha kuch esa hua ki naina or vo pret dono chonk gaye buri tarah se..

Wahi dusri or.

Location:- college cantin

Ab sav shant ho chuke the , ek taraf karan or jyoti or sonam bethe the or dusri or maya viraj or radha bethi thi.

Maya or radha viraj k first aid m lagi hui thi , lekin ab radha ka behavior pahale se kafi change ho chuka tha .

Radha thodi tez aawaz me karan se :- bhai , kya jarurat thi aapko viraj bhai ko itni jor se marne ki , aakhir koi itni badi baat bhi to ni thi na.
Karan ko radha k is tarah baat kerne p thes pahunchti h, jyoti ye baat samjh jati h

Jyoti :- behave yourself radha , ye kya tarika h tumhara bhai se baat kerne ka.

Karan :- ni jyoti , ise kyu dant rahi h , baat to sahi bol rahi h hamari gudiya, mane kuch jyada hi jor se mara h , kuch jyada react bhi kiya shayad

Fir viraj se usne uper man se mafi mangi , taki vo mamle ko rafa dafa ker sake or vo radha se apne relation ko bhi kharab ni kerna chahata tha , isliye karan ne aoni samjhdari dikhayi or viraj ne bhi esa hi kiya apne aap ko acha dikhane k liye

Lekin dono k hi man m apne kiye ka bilkul pachhatava na tha , karan ka to chalo samjh aata h , per is viraj k man m aakhir kya chal raha tha , yahi jane .

Fir kuch der baad sab apne apne ghar ko nikal pade .


Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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Bhot hi mast update diye ho bhai
Kmal kar diya bhot locha hai story me
Viraj ki pitai dekh ke dil ko sakoon mila dil bahir wala bc panga kre ga to jhapad to pade ga na
Radha to bilkul chamge ho chuki hai mean thek hai cuz hai but karan bhi to bhaiyo se badh kr hai
But sahi kehte hain apne apne hote hain or paraye paraye
Yar ye viraj log koi pret vret to ni haina to control kr rhe ho
Agr asia na ho to bhai radha ko bhi saza milni chahiye
Or viraj KAMINA hai dekhte hain kitna bada KAMINA sabit hota hai
Sale ko l phenk ke marne ka dil kar rha
Or radha pe to shaheed tap charh rhi hai
Jyoti se to pyar ho jta hai
Itna confident hn me chahe kuch bhi hojye jyoti Karan ka sath ni chode gi

Pret chuna lga gya Naina ko
But age kia hua
Or veer or naina wala system ksa hoga
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