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Fantasy Pyar ki had paar- family loves forever (Incest, Magic, Romance, THRILLER)

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Or vo shaks us ladki se beti sunaina tum thik to ho na
Sunaina : ha mom me thik hu or apne ashu poch leti hai.

Rinky (mom) : kya hua beti tumne firse vahi sapna dekha kya
Or vo haaa me apna sir (head) hila deti hai .
Suresh (dad) : beta tum thik ho na din pe din ye tumare sarir me garmi badti hi ja rahi hai itni garmi kha se aai tumare sarir me
Sunaina : pata nahi Dad aisa mere sath kiu ho raha hai
Fir majak me
lagta he me kuch jyada hii hot hoti jaa rahi hu. Mom se bhi jyada
Fir sunaina hasne lagti hai.

Or sath hii sab hasne lagte hai.
Hahahahah

Or sunaina ke dad dekh te hai ki jo locket sunaina ne gale (neck) pe hai
Vo chamak raha hota hai
Or sunaina ke dad bhi sunaina ki mom ko ishara karke us locket ki chamak dikate hai.
Fir uski chamak band ho jati hai

Rinky (sunaina se) : beta mujhe lagta hai ye sab is locket ke karam (bajese) ho raha hai
Tum usko utaar kiu nahi deti

Sunaina (khoi hue kisi soch me ) : achanak se bolti hai nahi mom ye locket muje koi vada yaad dilata hai vada kya hai muje nahi pata magar kabi muje bohot pyaar bhi ata hai or kabi muje usko khone ka bhi dar lagta hai isliye me apne pyaar ko kese gale se kese utar du.
Fir dad sawal ki chadi dete hai

Dad (majak me) : beta kahi tune koi ladka to nahi passed kar liya
Beti muje pehle hii bata dena kahi uski sath bhag mat jana
Or dad hasne lagte hai.
Hahahahha
Sunaina (bhi majak me): dad mane ek ko nahi do ko fasa rakha hai.
Or me unse behad pyaar karti hu.
Vo bhi mujse bohot pyaar karte hai.

Mom & dad ek sath : kyaaaaaaaa

Dad : humse to ek nahi jheli jati tune do fasa rakha hai
Thoda serious hokar
Par beta ek se hii shadi karna..

Mom (dad or sunaina ko ghoorte hue) : bata beta kon hai vo or do ko fasana ka kya matlab hai.

Sunaina (pyaar se) : matlab ye hai ki mane apni mom or dad ko fasa rakha hai apne pyaar me
Sunaina dono ko ghoorte hue ....
Kiu aap dono mujse pyaar nahi karte..

Mom (pyaar see): meri pyari beti hum dono tujse bohot pyaar karte hai...

Mom majak me
Magar koi hai to jarur batana
Or mom dad se tume to baad me dekugi
Ki kitna jhelna padta hai muje.
Or mom break fast tyaar karne chali jati hai.
Dad (sunaina): beta tu muje ek din marva degi
Or haa beta tume collage nahi jana admission k liye..
Jaldi tyaar ho jao hum break fast par tumara intzaar kar rahe hai.

Or dad niche chale jati hai.
Sunaina bhi washroom chali jati hai.
Or tyaar hokar thodi der bed par let kar us locket se baat karne lagti hai.
Sunaina (locket see) : tum jo koi bhi ho bohot pareshan karte ho tum or tum jis din miloge. Us din sari pareshan ka badla lugi.
Jaha ho jaldi aa jao naa plzzzzzZ.
Plzzzzzz
Or vo locket thoda sa chamakta hai fir chamakna band ho jata hai.
Or sunaina us locket ko kiss karke haste hue niche chali jati hai.
Mom (dad see) : hamari beti haste hue kitni achi lagti hai.
Dad (mom se) : akhir beti kiski hai
Fir asi hii bate hoti rehti hai or sunaina aakar jaaldi se khana khati hai.

Sunaina (mom& dad se) : mom late ho raha hai admission ka time nikal jaega baki ka baad me kha lugi.
Or jaldi se scooty pe baith kar collage ke liye nikal jati hai.

Jab vo college pahochti hai to college ko dekh kar hairaan ho jati hai
Or sunaina excited hokar jaldi se admissions ki line me lag jati hai. Or
Admission ka form bhar deti hai
Admission hone ka time khatam ho jata hai.
Magar usse pehle sunaina form jama kar deti hai.
Sunaina bhar ki taraf jane hii lagti hai ki use kisi k rone (carry) ki awaaz sunai padti hai.
Or vo us taraf dekti hai to ek ladki bohot ro (carry) rahi hoti hai.
Jab sunaina us ladki ki taraf jakar usse puchti hai
Sunaina (ladki se) : kya hua tum ro (carry) kiu kar rahi ho .
Ladki (sunaina see) : addmision ka time khatam khatam ho gaya hai ab mera admission is college me nahi hoga

Mane bohot mushkil se mom ko is college me addmission ke liye manaya tha magar ab me kya karu
Mera admission is college me nahi hoga.
Or bohot jor se rone lagti hai.

Sunaina kuch sochte lagti hai.
Fir apne phone me kuch karne lagti hai
Or sunaina us ladki se
Sunaina (ladki se) : apni detail muje do.

Ladki apni detail sunaina ko de deti hai fir 5 minute baad sunaina us ladki se

Sunaina (ladki se ) : lo tumara admission is college me ho gaya hai.
Ab rona band karo .
Ladki (sisakte hue) : mu. Muje maajaakk mat karo
Tume kyaaa acha lag raha hai. Mera majak udana..

Sunaina ( mann me) : ye ladki etni badi ho gae hai. Or ro (carry) to ase kar rahi hai jese bachi ho.
Koi to baat jarur hogi isliye ye is college me admission ke liye pagal hai.

Sunaina ( ladki se) : ye dekho admission slip isko me tumare phone me forward kar deti hu shop se print nikal waa lena..

Fir sunaina apne phone se admission slip us ladki ke phone me forward kar deti hai.
Jese hii vo ladki apne phone me admission slip dekti hai.
Uski khusi ka thikana nahi hota or khusi ke mare vo ladki sunaina ko gale laga leti hai.

Ladki (sunaina see) : yahooo mera admission is college me ho gaya
Ab me bhi is college me pad sakti hu
Sunaina (ladki see): ab to tum khus ho na vase tumne apna naam nahi bataya.

Ladki (sunaina se ) : mera naam roma hai.

Sunaina (roma se ) : vese itne sare college hai or tum is college me admission kiu lena chahati thi

Roma (soche hue ) : vo bad me bataugi pehle ye batao tumne ye sab kiya kese

Sunaina ne vo bola jisse sun kar roma shoked ho gai

Sunaina (roma see) : pure college ka sarver hack karke

Roma : kyaaaaaa

Sunaina : jyada shoked mat ho.
Roma : is college ka server hack karna bohot mushkil hai. Or tumne 5 minute me hack kardiya
Or tume dar nahi laga.

Ki kisi ko pata chal gaya to kya hoga
Or tumne ye kiu kiya me to tume janti bhi nahi.
Sunaina ( pyaar se ): kisi ki madad karne ke liye janna jaruri nahi hota muje laga ki ye jaruri hai to kar diya.
Or rahi baat darne ki to vo log muje kabi nahi pakad payege.
Tabi piche se kisi ki aawaz sunai deti hai.
Jise sunkar dono ghabra jate hai.

Ladka : muje pata chal gaya.

Sunaina (shoked hokar) : tum hamari baat sun rahe the.

Or ladka haa me sir hila deta hai.

Ladka (sunaina se) : magar tension mat lo me kisi ko kuch nahi batauga.
Vese mera naam sahil hai.

Sunaina (sahil se ) : nice to meet u sahil (azib tarha se bolti hai)

Sahil (dono see) : vese me bhi yaha par new hu kya hum dost ban sakte hai.

Sunaina (mann me) : isse dosti karni padegi nahi to kahi ye kisi ko kuch bata na de.
Bad me isse dekh lugi.
Roma (sahil se chidte hue) : nahi hame nahi karni kisi
Tabi sunaina bolti hai.

Pehle sunaina roma ke kaan me kuch bolti hai
Fir sunaina roma se
Sunaina (roma see) : aare roma hame dosti karni chahiye sahil se muje lagta hai sahil bohot acha ladka hai.
Or hamara dost bhi
Sunaina sahil ki taraf dekhte hue haina sahil.
Sahil khus hakar haa me gardan hila deta hai.
Or teeno thodi der baat karne lagte hai.

Ki tabi
Ek manchala ladka vaha se sunaina ko ghoor kar guzar raha hota hai or sunaina ki kamar touch karke nikal raha hota hai.

Sunaina usi time hath pakad kar ek bohot hii tezz thapad uske gaal par marti hai.

Thapad itna jor ka hota hai ki uske muh (mouth) se khoon niklne lagta hai.
Or jaha thapad pada tha vaha se uska gaal laal (red) ho jata hai.

Sab ladke or ladki vahi shoked ho jate hai
Or khusur pusur karne lagte hai.

Or vo ladka chup chap vaha se nikal jata hai.
Tabi
roma (sunaina see) : tuje kya jaruraat thi usse marne ki vo to bas tuje ghoor hii raha tha or side se nikal raha tha shayad galti se uska hath (hand) teri kamar me lag gaya hoga.

Sunaina (thoda gusse me roma see) : logo ki niyat me ache se janti hu.
Or rahi baat thapad ki to abhi ye muje ghoor raha tha.
Kal mera wait karega
Fir muje pareshan karega
Isliye pehle hii thapad mar dugi to kuch karne se pehle hajaar baar sochega.

Fir thoda majak
Vese bhi college me pehli baar sunaina aai hai. Kuch dhamaka to hona chahiye na


Fir ase hi baat karte hue sab apne ghr ki taraf nikal jate hai
Or jese hii college ke gate par pahochte hai
Sunaina dekhti hai ki uske scooty ka tyar panchar hai.

Sahil (sunaina se ) : lagta hai shayad kisi ne tumara tyar panchar kar diya hai.

Roma (sunaina se ) : muje lagta hai kahi ussi ladke ne to nahi kiya

Sunaina (dono see) : usko to me baad me dekh lugi magar ab me kya karu.
Sahil (sunaina se ) : tum mere sath chal sakti ho. Me tume ghar chor duga ab ye mat kehna ki me nahi jaugi akhir we are friends or tumne ne kaha tha ki logo ki madad karna acha hota hai.


Sunaina (sahil se) : mane ye kab kaha tha.

Sahil (udas hokar) : akhir we are friends na itna to ek friend kar hii sakta hai.

Sunaina (sahil se ) : thik hai chalo.

Roma dono se thik hai tum jao me bhi chali bus se apne ghar
Sunaina (roma se) : tum bus se kiu jaogi tum bhi hamare sath chalo.
Nahi to me bhi nahi jaugi sath me chalege bus se
Ye sunte hii sahil roma se
Sahil (roma se) : vase bhi mere pass car hai. Hum sab sath chal sakte hai. Me tume bhi ghar chor duga.
Plzzzz
Roma thik hai ab chalo muje late ho raha hai.
Sunaina (sahil se ) : magar meri scooty ka kya hoga.

Sahil (sunaina se ) : tum uski fikar mat karo me kisi se bol kar scooty ghar bhijwa duga.
Fir teeno car me baith kar college se nikal jate hai.
Raste me
Sunaina (sahil se ) : vase tumare pass car hai to tum bohot amir hoge.
Sahil (sunaina se ) : itna bhi amir nahi hu or ye car dad ki hai me leker aa gaya tha kiuki dad abhi kuch din ke liye bhar gae hai. Isliye
Roma (sahil see) : vese tamare dad kya karte hai.

Sahil (roma se) : vo ek khufiya agency (raw) ke cheif hai
Roma acha.
Fir ase hii baat karte hue
Car red light (traffic light) par pohoch jati hai.
Ki tabi.
Ek car uske bagal me ruk jati hai.
Us car me chaar (four) log hote hai .

Ladka 1 (sunaina se ) : ooe chamiya tune hamare bhai ko maar kar acha nahi kiya.
Ladka 2 : tu dekh abse tere saath kya kya hota hai.
Or charo hasne lag jate hai.
Hahahahhahah
Tabi sahil kuch bolne hiii wala hota hai ki sunaina usse rok leti hai.

Sunaina (gusse se un ladke se): mere sath jo hoga vo baad me dekha jaega
Magar ab jo tumare sath hone wala hai uske bare me socho.

Or fir sunaina or tezz hasne lagti hai
Sunaina ko dekh kar roma or sahil samaj nahi ata.
Vo ladke car me : lagta hai ye pagal ho gai hai hame dekh kar.

Fir sunaina apna mobile nikati hai.
Or usme kuch karne lagti hai.

Or tabi traffic light green ho jati hai.
Or sahil gusse me car aage bada deta hai.

Or un ladko ki car piche ho jati hai
Or vo bhi car aage badane lagte hai.
Or unki car jese hii traffic light se aage badti hai. Or traffic light ke beech me jati hai tabi. (Matlab beech chorahe me)
Achanak
Taraffic light red ho jati hai.
or dusre taraf ki light green ho jati hai or vaha ki car tezz aage badti hai.

Ki fir tesri taraf ki light bhi green ho jati hai.or vaha ki bhi light green ho jati hai.

Or vo ladke jis car me hote hai dono taraf ki car tezzi se unki car se takra jati hai.
Or unki car puri tarha se tut jati hai.

Ye sab achanak se hota hai ki vo ladke kuch samaj nahi pate.

Or un ladko ki halat bohot buri ho jati hai.
Or vo ladke jhakmi ho jate hai.

Or sahil or roma piche dekhta hai to shocked ho jate hai.

Sahil (sunaina se ) : ye Sab tumne kiya or kese kiya


Fir sunaina apna phone dika deti hai.
Or sahil & roma shamaj jate hai.

Fir sahil sunaina se kuch or bhi pochne wala hota hai. Magar puch nahi pata hai.
Roma (mann me) : ye ladki samaj me nahi ati college ke admission ke Samay itna kuch kar diya. Baad me kya kya karegi.
Pehle pura college ka sever hack kar diya. Or fir college me us ladke ko thapad maar kar pure college me dhamaka kar diya or aab traffic signal hack karke un ladke ko hospital pahocha diya....

Agar ye eesi hai to uska bhai ya koi boyfriend hoga to vo kesa hoga tabi

sunaina (ramo see): kha kho gai tera ghr aa gaya hai.
Or roma utar kar sabko byeee bol kar apne ghr chali jati hai.

Or thodi der me sunaina ka bhi ghr aa jata hai.or vo bhi apne ghr chale jati hai.
Or sahil bhi apne ghr ki taraf nikal jata hai.

Vahi dusri taraf..............

Ek jagah me ring me fighting chal rahi hoti hai.

Jaha par sung lu lee (top duniya ka sabse khatarnaak fighter )

Kisi shaks se ladai kar raha hota hai.

Or us sakhs ko buri tarha se maar raha hota. Hai.
Us shaks ki halat bad se bhi jyada badtaar ho jati hai.

Uske muh (mouth) se khoon nikal raha hota hai.
Or us shaks ke sarir par bohot jhakam hote hai pura sarir khoon se lad pat hota hai.
Vahi
Bagal me jaha log ring me fight dekh rahe hote hai.
Vaha ek aauraat ro rahi hoti hai
Or bol rahi hoti hai.

Aauraat : plzzz chor do mere veer ko mat maro
Plzzz chor do
Or bohot rone lagti hai.
Sung lu lee : ye bhartiye log itne kamzoor kiu hote hai 2 minute bhi mere se thik se ladai nahi kar sakte
Fir kiu ate hai mujse ladne

Fir sung lu lee us veer ko jaan se maarne hiii vala hota hai ki.
Tabi.
Ek ladka gate se aa raha hota hai. Uska sarir puri tarha kapdo se dhaka hota hai baas uski aakh (eyes) dikai de rahi hoti hai
Blue colour ki..
Or uske piche se ek awaaz aa rahi hoti hai.
Bohot hiii darawani awaaz hoti hai jisse sunkar sab ki rooh kaapne lagti hai

Vaha par katle aam macha hai jaha par mahakaal khada hai jab ye shampaan hoga vahi bachega jo anant hoga........................











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Agli subha ......
Roz subha subha rahul 5 baje utha hai or bhar jogging ke liye jata hai.

Uske baad aakar 1 ghanta exercise karta hai.
Fir chal deta hai apni bhano (ruchi & nisha ) ko jagane ke liye magar usse kya pata vo pehle se hii jaag rahi hai.
Kamre me .

Ruchi ( nisha se) : aaj bhaiya hame uttane wale hai school ke liye

Nisha (ruchi se ) : to kuch dhamaka machaye kya..
Are nahi
Fir nisha ruchi se
Ruchi kuch bolti hai nisha ke kaan me
Fir dono hasne lagte hai.
Or chup chap sone (sleep) karne ki acting karne lagte hai.

Jese hii rahul room me enter hota hai
Dekhta hai ki ruchi or nisha dono ek dusre ki baho me gale laga kar so rahi hoti hai.
Dono etni pyaari lagti hai ki koi bhi mohit jae.
Or rahul un dono ke paas pohoch ta hai or apni dono bhano ko utane ke liye pehle unke mathe (forehaed ) par kiss karke .jese hi kuch bolne wala hota hai.

Vese hii dono
Achanak se

Rahul ka hath ( hand ) pakad leti hai or usko bed par gira deti hai
Or ruchi rahul ke upar baith jati hai.
Or nisha uske bagal me baith jati hai.

Or dono rahul ke gaal par tezz tezz kiss karne lagti hai or uska pura gaal (chik ) geela kar deti hai.

Or fir bolti hai.
Bhaiya kiss ese karni chahiye jisme thoda jyada pyaar ho.

Rahul ( mann me ) : lagta hai ye kuch dhamaka karne wali hai.
Kahi ye mera rape to nahi karne wali .
Nahi yaar ye to bhan hai esa nahi karegi.
Fir kya karegi

Ruchi ( bade pyaar se ) : bhaiyaa aaj hame aapkaa ek din chaihiye or hum jo bolege vo aap karo ge hamare school se ane ke baad.

Rahul ( dono se) : kiu tum dono kam par gai ho ghar me dhamaka karne ke liye jo muje bhi shamil karna chahati ho.

Nisha : nahi mere pyaare bhaiya hum to bus shopping par jana chahate hai


Kuch samaan kharidna hai.

Or ruchi jo rahul pe baithi hue thi uski gand rahul ke lund par gis rahi thi
Jisse rahul garam hone lagta hai.

Iska abhas jise hii rahul ko hota hai.

Vo jaldi se ruchi ko apne upar Se utta deta hai or baith jata hai.
Rahul ( dono se) : payal ke sath chale jana
Ye sun kar dono udas ho jati hai.
Jise rahul bhi dekh leta hai.

Nisha : bhaiyaa hame apke sath jana hai.

Ruchi bade pyaar se rahul ka muh apni taraf karte hue.
Bhai plzzz
Rahul ( dono se) : thik hai ab jyada emosinal blackmail mat karo..

Fir dono hasne lagti hai..
Or bhagte hue washroom me chali jati hai.
Or bolti hai bhaiyaa yaad rakh na bhul mat jana..
Or rahul thik hai bol kar chal deta hai .
Apni padaku bhan payal ke pass.
Rahul jese hii room me enter hota hai.

Room me dekhta hai ki payal book ko seene se lagae so (sleep) rahi hoti hai.
Rahul payal ke paas jakar uski book ko side me rakh ta hai ki
Achanak uske book se ek photo niche gir jati hai.
Jise dekh kar rahul thoda shocked ho jata hai.
Fir sochta hai shayad ase hii rakhi hogi
Or vo book ko side me rakh deta hai.

Or payal ko utane lagta hai.

Payal : bhai sone do na 5 minute baad utt jaugi..
Rahul : utti hai ki me bua ko bulau..
Payal bua ka naam sun kar utt jati hai.

Rahul : college jana hai hai ki nahi addmission ke liye jaldi tyaar ho jaa..

Me bhi tyaar hone jaa raha hu.
Or rahul vaha se nikal jata hai.
Apne room me tyaar hone.

Payal jab book ki taraf dekhti hai to thoda shocked ho jati hai
Payal ( mann me ) : kahi bhaiya ne vo photo dekh to nahi lee.

Yahi soche hue payal bhi nahane nikal jati hai.
Jab rahul tyaar hokal niche ata hai to dekhta hai sab dinner par rahul ka hii
Intzaar kar rahe hai.
Jab sab rahul ko dekhte hai to hairan ho jate hai.
Kiuki rahul bohot jyada handsome lag raha hota hai in kapdo me..
Ruchi rahul ko dekh kar bolti hai.
Ruchi : bhaiyaa aaj aap bohot hamdsome lag rahe ho.
Bhaiya college addmission ke liye hii jana kahi kisi ladki ke chakkar me mat fas Jana...
Tabi
Nisha: haa bhaiyaa nahi to hum kaware reh jaege.
Is baat par mala (bua ) kitchan se ate hue dono ( ruchi & nisha) ko aakh dikane lag jati hai.
Or payal unko gusse me dekhkar bolti hai.

Payal ( nisha se ) : tumara kuwara rehne se kya matlab hai.

Nisha b( mann me ) : ye didi bhi na kuch nahi samajti bohot sarif banne ki kosis karti hai.
Ek din inka bhandaa jarur phoru gi..
Ruchi baat ko shamalte hue ..
Ruchi ( payal se) : didi nisha ka matlab hai ki vo ladki kuwari mar jaegi.
Kiuki bhaiya to hum logo se pyaar karte hai na..
Nisha ( usdas hokar) : or payal didi se kuch jyada hiii.

Jisse sukar payal didi thoda muskura deti hai. Or mann me bolti hai.
Payal (mann me ) : or nahi to kya rahul ko to me sirf me hii sirf me pyaar karti hu .
Or vo mujse bhi jald hii pyaar karega..

Or thoda hasne lagti hai.

Nisha ( ghoorte hue) : didi hame bhi bata do aap kiu hass rahi ho.
Payal harbarate hue. Bolti hai kuch nahi bas ase hii.

Tabi
Rahul sab ki baat sunkar sochta hai mann me..
Rahul ( mann me ) : ye BC kya drama chal raha hai kuch shamaj me nahi aa raha..
Kahi ye...... Me kuch bhi soch leta hu.

Or tabi.
Mala (bua) sabko breake fast karati hai.
Mala ( bua) : mera beta to hai hii handsome kahi kisi ki nazar na lag jae..

Or mala (bua) rahul ko kajal ka tika laga deti hai.

Fir teen ( payal, ruchi , nisha)
Kya hum nahi hai. Lag rahe kubsuraat maaa
Is par rahul bolta hai.
Jise sunkar teeno socked ho jati hai....................







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Jise sunkar teeno socked ho jati hai....................
Ab aage.....
Mere teeno bhan to khubsurat nahi hai.
Or teeno socked ho kar gusse me dekhne lagti hai.
Teeno aakhe nam karke bolti hai hum aapko achi nahi lagti....
Fir rahul dubara bolta hai.
Rahul ( teeno se) : meri saari bhan to pari hai or pari khubsuraat nahi hoti bohot khusbsurat hoti hai.
Or teeno aakar rahul ke gale lag jati hai.
Tabi.
Mala bua bolti hai..
Mala bua : or nahi to kya
Mera beta handsome hai to meri beti pari hue na..
Or fir
Mala bua un teeno ko bhi kala tika laga deti hai.
Tabi bhar school ki bus aa jati hai.
Or ruchi & nisha ko late ho raha hota hai.
To jaldi se break fast karti hai.
Nisha ( rahul se ) : bhaiya yaad rakhna bhul mat jana.
Or rahul bhi haa me mundi hila deta hai.
Or ruchi & nisha school ki bus me baith kar nikal jati hai.
Tabi payal bolti hai rahul se
Payal ( rahul se ) : ye kya yaad rakne ke liye bol rahi thi.

Mala ( bua) : ha beta kuch dhamaka to nahi karne wale ho.
Muje lag raha hai kiuki bohot din se kuch nahi hua hai.

Rahul ( dono se) : nahi bua vo sham ko nisha & ruchi ko kuch saman kharidna hai isliye shopping par jane ke liye bol rahi thi..

Tabi
Tv par ek news aa rahi hoti hai.
Ek ring fighting me sung lee lu ki death ho gai.
Ye duniya ka sabse khatarnak fighter tha.
Aaj tak isse koi hara nahi saka.
Uske upar bohot rape case or nirdosho ki hatya ke bhi aroop the.
Sutro se pata chala hai ki.
Hairaani ki to baat ye hai ki
Koi ladka achanak se ring me ata hai.
Or uske piche se ek bohot hii darawani awaaz ati hai.

VAHA PAR KARLE AAM MACHA HAI JAHA. PAR MAHAKAAL KHADA HAI. JAB YE SHAMPAAN HOGA VAHI BACHEGA JO ANANT HOGA.

Kya raaj hai is awaaz ka kuch bhi pata nahi chala hai

jise sunkar pehle to sab ghabra jate hai
Or kuch pata nahi chala hai.
Or
Fir
Jab vo ladka ek hii thapad me sung lee lu ko thatam kar deta hai.
Or fir vaha
Bharat mata ki jai or mahakaal ki jai ke naare lagne lagte hai.
Kon hai ye mahakaal
Kya ye koi hero hai.
Kaha se aya hai ye.
Kya ye bharat mata ka beta hai.
Ya koi or
Iski pehchan abhi bhi gupt hai.
Ye khabar pure india hii nahi bhar desh me bhi pahoch jai hai.

Fir
Mala ( bua) : kon hai ye mahakaal jisne itne khatarnaak fighter ko ek thapaad me khatam kar diya.
Agar ye ladai karta to kya hota.

Payal : jo bhi hua acha hua
Maa apne suna nahi kitne rape or nirdosho ki hatya ki hai is nai.

Rahul : or nahi to kya aso ke sath aisa hii hona chahiye.
Fir rahul payal se bolta hai
Rahul (payal se ) : late ho raha hai admission ke liye chalo.
Fir hum dono college ke liye nikane lagte hai.
Piche se mala bua bolti hai
Mala ( bua) : beta dono ache se jana or koi taklif ho to phone kar dena.
Or
Me payal ko apne sath bike me baitha kar nikal jata hu.
Magar payal mere se kuch jyada hii chipak kar baithi hai vo aisa kiu karti hai.
Shaala bhi tak shamaj me nahi aya.

Jab me college me pohocta hue to un ladko ko dekte hii bohot hairaan ho jata hu........................

Chalo chalte hai patal log ki taraf.............

Murkh ( bewakoof ) ho tum
Tabi piche se aasur guru aate hue dikai dete hai. Or ye dekhte hii vo dono aasur ladkiyo ko le jane ke liye seni ko ( shipahi ) se bolte hai. Or vo sabhi ladkiyo ko yaha se le jate hai.

Phir se aasur guru
Pass ate hue..
Murkh to yaha maze kar raha hai.
Or yaha tumne socha. Ki 17 saal se danvasur yaha nahi aya uska kya karan ( bajaye)hai.


Aasur raaj : humne bohot kosis ki par ........................
Jab tak hamari sakti punna ( dubara ) vapas nahi aa jati
Hum kese pata laga sakte hai ki danvasur dharti lok se kiu vapas nahi aya

Kamasur : magar bhai dharti lok me asi koi sakti nahi hai. Jo danvasur ko rok sake
Fir kya karan ( bajaye) ho sakti hai.
Aasur guru : sirf us shakti ko chor kar or vo.........
Aasur guru : konsi shakti guru ji or vo kya .....
Aasur guru : vo ladka or vo locket ko chor kar . Jisme usne ..........................

Kamasur : magar vo ladka to us time bacha ( child) hoga naa
To vo kya kar sakta tha....
Or vo locket to uske paas tha to vo dharti lok kese jaa sakta hai.
Kya usne bhi fir se janam liya tha..

Aasur guru : muje sirf lagta hai. Vishwas se nahi bol sakta...

Aasur raj : ab hum kya kare guru ji aap hii bataiye koi rasta dikaiye jisse hum
Us kawaj ( shield) ko tor sake or dharti lok jaa sake...

Aasur guru : ek raasta hai ..
Vo hai mahadev ( mahakaal)

Kamasur : vo hamari madad nahi karege apko pata hai aasur guru kiuki .................

Aasur guru : muje pata hai.
Magar prerna ki to madad karege naa.....
Kiuki.................
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Patal lok

Aasur guru : ek raasta hai ..
Vo hai mahadev ( mahakaal)

Kamasur : vo hamari madad nahi karege apko pata hai aasur guru kiuki .................

Aasur guru : muje pata hai.
Magar prerna ki to madad karege naa.....
Kiuki.................
Ab aagee.....

Aasurraj : magar prerna ( charo assuro ki ek louti bhan ) firse hamare raste me aa gai to

Aasur guru : aisa nahi hoga.

Fir aasur guru unke kaan ( ear) me kuch bolte hai
Jise sunkar dono aasur ke chehre ke bhav badalne lagte hai
Or unke chehre par karilana muskurahat aa jati hai.
Or dono aasur ( kamasur or aasurraaj ) chal dete hai prerna ke kaksh ( kamre) ki or
Vahi dusri or

Ek ladki apne kaksh (kamre) me kisi yaad me ro (carry) rahi hoti hai.
Or vo ladki bade masumiyaat ke sath bol rahi hoti hai.
Ladki : kitna intzaar karna padega tumara tum kab aaoge
Ab to mere ashu ( tear) bhi sukh gaye hai ro ro kar.
Mujhe to ye bhi nahi pata ki tum kha ho.
Tumara punar janam kha hua hai.
Dev lok me hua hai
Ya jinn lok me hua hai.
Ya pari lok me hua hai
Ya dharti lok me hua hai.
Me is kaksh ( kamare) se bhar bhi nahi jaa sakti bhaiya ne mujhe itne saalo se kaksh ( kamre ) me band jo kar rakh ha hai..

Ab tum nahi aye to me mirityu ( dead ya merna) ki god me sona (sleep) pasand karugi. Kiuki ab mere se or intzaar nahi hoga.
Kitne saal bit gaye tumara intzaar karte hue

Din bhar bhatakte rante hain armaan tujhe milne ko,
Na yeh dil thehrta hai na tere intezaar rukhta hai,
Kin lafzo main likhu main apne intezaar ko tumein,
Din raat din raat ki bechaini hai, yeh aath pehar ka rona hai,
Asar bure hai furkat main, maloom nahi kya kar baithu.

Fir
Vo ladki apne pyaar ko yaad karte hue...

Mahadev ki murti ki or jaane lagti hai
Tabi
Piche se dono aasur jate hai
Or aasuraaj bolta hai.

Aasuraaj : bhan prerna tere liye khus khabri hai ..
Prerna ( dono aasur se ) : itna kast ( pareshan ) pahucha kar tumara jii nahi bhara
Itna jurm to devki mata par b bhi nahi kiya hoga us kansh ne jitna atyaachar tumne mere upar kiya hai.
Or ab bhi jee nahi bhara ,
Jo dubara mujh par atyaachar karne aa gaye
Tumne to mere pyaar tak mujse chiin liya hai.,
Abhi bhi koi kasar reh gai hai to vo bhi pura kar lo
Magar tum mujse kabi bhi us talvaar or us locket ka raaj nahi jaan sakte..
Or vo kha hai vo bhi nahi..
Vo sirf mere pyaar ki hai.
Chahe tum meri ab jaan bhi le lo..
Kiuki ab jeene se kya fyda kiuki mera mera pyaar to mere pass hai nahi...

Aasuraaj katilana muskurahat ke sath bolta hai.

Aasuraaj : mere ladli bhan tere jeene ka fyda hai ,
Or me tere se us talvaar or locket ke baare me janne nahi aya hu.
Or jo mane tum par jo aatyachaar kiye bhai.
Uske liye hume maaf kar do.
Or me to tumare liye khuskhabri lekar aya hu.
Us ladke ka janam aaj se 17 saal pehle dharti lok me kabka ho chuka hai.

Abhi hame aasur guru ne bataya hai.

Prerna ( khusi se) : sach bhaiya ( or prerna khusi se jhumne lagti hai)
Fir
Dubara achanak se rone lagti hai.
Prerna apne dono bhaiyo se bolti hai.
Prerna : muje kiu bta rahe ho isme tumara koi sharyantr ( shajish ) to nahi kiuki tumne .............?.....................
Or usne apna sarir tyaag diya.

Kamasur : bhan hame maaf kar do magar hame tumara dukh nahi dekha gaya isliye humne aasurguru se pata lagane ke liye kaha ( jhoot ).

Prerna : fir me abhi darti lok jati hu.

Aasuraaj (mann me) : bol to ase rahi hai jaise us kawaj ( shield ) ko torkar dharti lok pahuch jaegi.
Us shield ko torna itna asaan hota to mujhe itne samay ke liye apni shaktiya nahi gavani parti.

Or isko manane ke ke liye itne papad bhi na belne padte.

Fir aasuraaj prerna se bolta hai.

Aasuraaj : nahi ja sakti kiuki vo kawaj ( shield) jo uske ..................... Se bani hai
Vo hame dharti lok nahi jane degi.

Prerna ( udas hokar ) : vo shield to koi bhi nahi tor sakta.

Kamasur : haa ye to hai.
Magar ek shaks hai jo tume vo shield torne ke bare me bta sakta hai..

Prerna ( khus hokar) : kon hai vo bhaiya.

Aasuraaj : mahadev

Prerna : vo hame nahi batayege..

Kamasur : fir hum ab kar bhi kya sakta hai.
Chalo bhai.
Or dono aasur bhar aa jate hai.

Kamasur ( aasuraaj se) : humne aasurguru ke kehne par prerna ke mann me us kawaj ( shield) torne ka beej to daal diya.
Magar kya vo usme kaamyaab hogi..


Aasuraaj : dekhte hai kya hota hai.

Vahi prerna
Apne dono bhai ( aasuraaj or kamasur ) ke jane ke baad.


apne kaksh ( kamre) ka darvaja sahi se band kar leti hai.
Or mahadev bhagwaan ki murti ke paas jakar unke charno me baith jati hai.

Or prerna mahadev bhagwaan se bolti hai
..............



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Vahi prerna
Apne dono bhai ( aasuraaj or kamasur ) ke jane ke baad.

apne kaksh ( kamre) ka darvaja sahi se band kar leti hai.
Or mahadev bhagwaan ki murti ke paas jakar unke charno me baith jati hai.

Or prerna mahadev bhagwaan se bolti hai

Ab aagee..........

Prerna ( mahadev se ) : baba prakat hoiye aaj aapko prakat hona hi hoga.
Mujhe Apne pyaar se milane ke liye aapko ana hii hoga
AAP apni putri Ko Aisa rota hua kese dekh sakte hai.
Baba ( mahadev) prakat hoi ye

Thodi der intazaar karne ke Baad bhi kuch nahi hota to fir prerna bolti hai..

Prerna ( Mahadev se) : itne kator mat baniye baba mere apne bhaiya ne to mujse mere pyaar Ko chin liye tha.

Abhi muje pata chala hai ke mere pyaar ka janam dharti lok me bahot samay pehle ho chuka hai.
Kamse kaam aap to apni is putri par reham kariye..
Meri puri zindagi to bas rohan ( Rahul ka punar janam ka Naam) par suru hoti hai or rohan par khatam.
Ek asha ki kiran muje dikhai di hai..
Meri madad karo baba..

Mane saari zindagi bas aapki bhakti ki hai. Or apne pyaar Rohan ko yaad kiya hai.

Jabse vo gaya hai bas intzaar kar rahi hu ab mujh se intzaar nahi hota ..

Ise ke sath prerna bohot dard ke sath rone lagti hai..

Acha aap meri baat nahi sunoge thik hai
Fir aap
Apni putri ko marta hua dekho kiuki me rohan ke bina jii nahi sakti..

Or fir
Prerna apni shaktiyo se tirishul ka dyaan karti hai.
Or trishul uske haath ( hand) me aa jata hai.
Or
Jese hii vo trishul ko apne pet ( stomach)
Me marne wali hoti hai.

Tabi
Usse kuch yaad aa jata hai.


Or achanak prerna trishul ko phek dati hai.

Me mar bhi nahi sakti baba
mane rohan se vada kiya tha ki me us talvar ki raksha karugi...

Ab me kya karu babaaaa....

Tabi uski mann me uski didi ( sunaina ) ka gana yaad aa jata hai...

Or vo us gane ( song) ko mahadev ke charno me jakar gane lagti hai.

Bohot dard ke sath...

Baba tere charno ki ,
Agar dhool jo mil jaye , sach kehti hu bas meri taqdir badal jae,
Sunte hai tere rehmat din raat barasti hai,
Is daya ke sagar se, ek boond jo mil jae,
Mere pyaar rohan se mila do na,
Meri zindagi sawar jae, ab intzaar na hota hai,
Meri madad karo baba,
Yeh mann baba Chanchal hai, isse kese mai samjav,
Jitna isse sham jau utna machal jae,
Pyaar to logo ko jeena shikata hai,
Mere rohan se mila do na, ab mujhse sawar na ho paye,
Baba tere charno ki dhool jo mil jaye,
Ye nis chal prem hai, yeh baba lalach nahi is me, rohan hai meri zindagi ek baar mila do na, to meri zindagi sawar jae,
Didi ( sunaina) ko to milaya tha mujhe bhi mila do naa, apni putri par reham karo baba, aapki putri khus ho jae.

Isse ke sath prerna behosh ho jati hai.
Tabi ek tezz Roshni samne chamkne lagti hai.
Or vo dheere - dheere ek akar lene lagti hai.
Or samne mahadev or Parvati mata prakat ho jati hai,

Mahadev ( prerna se) : utto putri

Tabi prerna siskte hue mahadev or mata parvati ko dekhne lagti hai
or mata parvati ke gale lag jati hai,

Mata parvati ( prerna se) : sunaina ki tarha tere maan me bhi rohan ke liye bina lalach ka prem hai.
Putri bol tuje kya chahiye.
Mere se tera ye dard dekha nahi gaya..
Isliye mahadev ke sath me bhi aa gai..
Bol putri tujhe kya chahiye

Mahadev ( prerna se) : haa putri bol sunaina meri sabse pyaari putri hai vese hii tu bhi to hai,
Aaj tujhe jo bhi chahiye bol putri..

Prerna mata Parvati ke gale se hatkar
Rote hue mahadev or mata parvati ke charno me gir jati hai
Or tezz tezz rone lagti hai..

Mata parvati : putri ab rona band karo nahi to rohan ke dil par kya guzregi pata hai tuje
Rohan to bas tumara or sunaina ka hai or kisi ka nahi ho sakta

Prerna rote hue mata Parvati se bolti hai
Bohot masumiyaat ke sath.

Prerna : me kya karu maa ye ashu rukhte hii nahi mujhe mere pyaar rohan se milna hai maaaa .

Mahadev ( prerna se) : magar beti agar tu dharti lok rohan se milne gai to tujhe kuch dard bhi jhelne padege.
Jo me nahi chahata ki meri putri vo dard jhele...
Isliye me tere se milne nahi aa raha tha..

Prerna : baba me har dard jhelne ke liye tyaar hu bas mujhe rohan se mila dijiye..

Mahadev : soch lo kiuki me nahi chahata ki tum us dard se guzro.

Prerna : mane soch liya hai baba rohan se door rehne ka dard jhelne se acha hai uske pass rehkar dard jhelu
Kamse kaam mujhe ye khusi to hogi ki mera pyaar mere sath hai.
Fir
mujhe duniya ka har dard bhi kaam lagega.
Mahadev kuch or bhi bolne wale hote hai
Tabi
mata parvati mahadev se bolti hai.
Mata parvati ( Mahadev se ) : prabhu baat maan jaege na mujh se meri putri ka dard ab or nahi dekha jata or ab aap kuch nahi bolege..

Mahadev ( prerna se) : putri agar tumne faisla kar hii liya hai to thik hai.
Magar
tum usko jab tak dikai nahi de sakti jab tak jab tak vo................
Usse nahi mil jati..

Or
Jab tak tum apni shaktiyo ka istemaal bhi nahi kar sakti jab tak.......................................,.hai.

Fir Prerna khusi se jhumne lagti hai.

Fir
Prerna mata parvati se badi masumiyaat se puchti hai

Prerna ( mata parvati se sarmate me): maa itne varsh (saal) guzar gaye hai kahi me unke samne me buriya (old) to nahi lagugi na..

Mata Parvati ( haste hue) : nahi putri aisa nahi hoga tum sab usse umar ki ho jaogi
Jis umar ka rohan ( Rahul) hai.

Mahadev ( prerna se) : tume mera ek kaam bhi karna hoga dharti lok Jakar

Prerna : kya mahadev

Fir Mahadev Prerna ke kaan me kuch bolte hai.
Mata parvati ( prerna se) : putri tumne itna acha gana ( song) gakar mujhe or Mahadev ko bohot khus kiya hai or tumne hum dono se kuch maga hii nahi or me kuch bhi nahi sunugi
bol na putri
Tujhe kya chahiye Mahadev or mujhse
Agar tumne nahi maga to mujhe or mahadev ko acha nahi lagega..

Prerna : maa or baba aap se me samay ane par mang Lugo.... Plzzzz

Mahadev ( prerna se ) : thik hai putri.
Or hamesha khus raho...

Or fir mahadev or mata Parvati vaha se chale jate hai..

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