Ye update really chota laga .....Update 06
NEXT DAY
Wohi sab roz ka subah uth kr Naashta phir Tv etc, phir lunch, phir TV,baataen phir dinner sab waisa hi tha.
Pr aaj dinner k baad kuch to alag hone waala tha shaayad mujhe to aisaa hi lagta hai.
Dinner k baaad Sonia aati hai Viki k paas .
Sonia: Bhaiya apko na Khala n bulaya hai unke room m abhi.
Viki: (Sonia ko god m bethate huwe) q kya huwa koi baat hai kya gudiyaa ?
Sonia: pta nhi Bhaiya mujhe yo bss apko bulaane ko kaha tha.
Viki: acha gudiya to ap yahan betho me aata hun baat sun krr.
Or Viki Sonia ko neeche utaarta hai or chal padta hai apne Ami Abu k room ki taraf.
Wahan jaa kr wo door knock krta hai.
Knockkk knockkkk...
Andar se Abu ki awaaz aati hai
"Andar aajao gate khula hi hai "
Viki gate khol kr andar jaata hai or Ami
Abu ko Salaam krta hai or wahin gate k paas hi khada ho jaata hai.
Salaam ka jawaab de kr Abu bolte hain.
Abu: beta gate lock kr do or yahan hamare paas aa kr Betho.
Abu or Ami bed pr baithe huwe the, jahan abu tekk laga kr baithe the to Ami bhi bed pr peron ki side bethi thin.
Viki waisa hi krta hai jaisa Abu ne bola tha or bed k paas hi chair le kr baith jaata hai.
Viki: g Abu aapne bulaaya tha!
Abu: haan beta wo jab se yahan aane ka decide huwa tha tab se hi tum jaldi kaam khatam krne k chakkar m bussy ho gye the or yahan bhi tum sab bacche apasss m hi itna bussy ho k time hi nhi mila tumse baat krne kaa.
Viki: acha aisi kyaa baat krni thi aapko mujhse ? Sab thk yo hai na (usne fikar k saath pucha ).
Ami: haan beta sab thk hi hai tum batao sab thk hai or yahan aa kr kaisa lag rha hai.
Viki: g ALLAH PAK ka shukr hai Sab thk hai or yahaan bhi acha lag rha hai sab se mil kr, apne behen bhaiyon se mil kr or specially apni Gudiyaa se mil kr .
Abu: ye to achi baat hai .
Viki: waise Abu kya baat hai jo apne mujhe akele m bulaaya baat krne k liye q k ye sab baaten to baher bhi ho sakti thin sabke saamne to kuch yo khaas baat hai jo ap mujhse akele m krna chahte ho.
Abu: haan beta tumne sahi kaha tumse akele m kuch khaas baat hi krni thi isi bulayaa hai .
Viki: to batayen Abu kya baat hai koi kaam hai yo hukum karen me foran hi lag jaata hun .
Abu: are nhi beta hukum krne jaisa kuch nhi hai.
Phir Ami ki taraf dekh kr "tum hi batao apne bete ko"
Ami: apka bhi to beta hai or aap hi bataiye.
Abu: bilkul hum donon k beta hai or mujhe fakhr hai is pr, lekin agr ye baat tum batao to behter hoga k ye baat wo apni maa k munh se sune to.
Viki thoda confused or tensed ho gaya tha inki baaten sun kr k aisa kya hai jo ye aise bol rhe hain.
Viki: Abu sab thk yo hai na? aap hi bata den kya baat hai mujhe ghabraahat ho rhi hai .
Abu: beta ghabrao mat, (phir thoda ruk kr) acha ek baat batao.
Viki: g poochen Abu.
Abu: beta tumhaara shaadi k baare m kya khayaal hai koi ladki dekhi hai kya tumne ?..
Ye sunn kr to Viki thoda chonk hi gaya k aaj achaanak uske Abu ko ye khayaal kaise aagaya
Pr khud ko normal krte huwe bola
Viki: nhi abu mene kuch khaas socha nhi hai or ladki dekhne ka to koi sawaal hi nhi hai. Woh to apki pasand ki hi hogi naa.
Ami: beta humen pata hai tere karnaamon ka .
Viki (Heraan hote huwe) kkk kya mtlb, me Kuch samjha nhi.
Ami: yehi k kis kis ladki ne tujhe propose kiya hai or tune manaa kr diya ya phir behen banaa liya.
Viki: To isme ghalat kya hai mujhe achi nhi lagi ya pasand nhi thin to mana kr diya, me bila wajah kisi ko aasre m nhi rakhna chahta tha isi liye direct hi mana kr diya .
Ami: pr beta aise direct hi manaa kr diya, tareeke se bhi to samjhaya jaa sakta tha naa.
Viki: Ami yehi behter tareeka tha, k waqt rehte hi naa keh dun wrna baad m problems ho sakti thin, mujhe nhi unko isi liye aisa liya.
Or wiase bhi mene to aap logon ki mrzi se hi krni hai jo ap dhoondo ge ussii se waqt aane pr kr lun gaa.
Abu: beta hum se zeyaad tumhari razaamandi zaroori hai kyun k zindagi tumne guzaarni hai to decision bhi tumhe hi lena Chahiye naa.
Viki: g pr me chahta hun k ap log ye decision len .
Abu: acha thk hai lekin woh ladki tumhe bhi pasand hogi yo hii hum haan Karen ge wrna hamari marzi ki itni value nhi jitni tumhaari khushi ki hai.
Viki(smile krte huwe) g jaisa ap behter samjhen.
Ab me chalun ?
Ami: nahi abhi betho main baat to abhi baaki hai .
Viki: sab baaten to ho gyiii ab kya baaki hai, kahin ye to nhi k aapne koi ladki bhi dekh liii hai hahaha.
Viki ne to ye baat mazak m bol di pr jab apne Ami Abu k expressions dekhe jo serious hi the bss thode smiley faces the unke us time, laughter jaisa kuch nhi tha to woh bhi thoda serious ho gaya.
Viki: kahin sach m to aisa nhi hai na ??
Ami: Haan beta aisaa hi hai humne ek ladki dekhi hai tumhaare liye.
Boooommmmmm
Or ye phataa bomb viki pr usse kahan khayaal tha k aisa kuch hogaa ab usko kal wali baat yaad aati hai to last nightFiza Baji ne usse boli thi all the best or unki woh
smile.
Usse sab samajh aagaya k Fiza baaji ko sab maloom tha iska matlab hai k baaki log bbi jaante honge or isssii liye achaanak yahaan aane ka plan bana.
Abhi k liye itna hi
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Jaanta hun update chota hai pr abhi k liye itna hi.
jaise 2 story aaage badhe gii update ka size badh jaye ga.
Toh finally viki ko pata lag he gaya ki ladki dundh ki h uske liye aur sabse achi baat ye rahi ki photo detai etc bhi usai mil gayi ...waise bhi kisi bhi ladke ko shadi ke liye kahenge toh ek baar wo disturb ho he jayega par yanha viki ke parents ne uska full support kiya h .......viki ne saba ki pic dekhi jo i think bahut he sundar thi yanha apko ek image daal he deni thi jo agai usi charecter ki alag use kar lete .... ..ab dekhna ye h ki saba ke sath viki kaise baato ko start karta h ...par dil mai halcha toh uth chuki h viki keUpdate 07
SAME NIGHT (VIKI'S ROOM)
Sabhi bacche log abhi bhi wahin baithe the or baaton m lage huwe the k Nimra boli.
Nimra: ye Viki bhai kahan reh gye khala k room m gye the baat krne itni der lag gyii aaye nhi abhi tk.
Ye sun kr Sadiya,Fiza, Mehwish, Ayan,Farah or Hina ek 2sre ki taraf dekh kr halkaa sa muskurate hain jo Nimra bhi dekh leti hai or
Nimra: ab aap sab ko kya huwaa aise muskuraa kyun rhe ho ??
Sadiya(baat sambhalte huwe) are Kuch nhi wo is liye hum smile kr rhe the k tumhe apne bhai ki kitni fiqr hai naa or waise bhi woh koi baccha thodi hai jo gum ho jaigaa Phupho log zaroor koi important baat kr rhe hon ge isii liye der ho rhi hai tum chordo uski Fikren.
* Phir ye log aise hi baaten krte rehte hain
Wahin 2sri taraf
Parents Room
Ami: kya huwa beta kya soch rhe ho koi masla hai kya tumhe ?
Viki: nhi aisii baat nhi hai bss yehi soch rha tha k ye plan aapne kab banaya or mujhe nhi pta baki sabko pta hai.
Abu: beta ye plan asal m 2 weeks pehle hi bana tha or humne socha jab nikalne ka time hoga to 2 ya 3 din pehle tumhe batayen ge or tumhare ilaawa sabko pta hai mtlb kise or kya pata hai ?
Viki: yehi k aapne mere liye koi ladki dkehi hai or sbko hi to pta hoga jab Fiza Baji ko pata hai to sirf choton ko hi nhi pta hoga wrna unhon n to ab tak dhamaaka kr diya hota .
Ami: haan unhe hi nhi pta bss, waise tum batao tum kya chahte ho ab.
Viki: kis baare m?
Abu: yehi beta jo ladki dekhi hai humne uske baare m!
Viki: acha mujhe thoda sa time Chahiye pr me abhi shaadi nhi krna chahta.
Ami: thk hai le lo jitna time Chahiye pr koshish krna k jaldi bata do hame.
Viki: waise hai ko wo ladki ?
Abu: beta wo tumhari Samina khala hain na unki Nand ki badi beti Saba uski baat kr rhe hain hum.
Viki (Smile krte huwe) mene Samina khala ki nand ko bhi shayad hi dekha ho to uski beti ka kya pta,(phir thode serious tone m) acha m Saba se baat krna chahta hun is baare m tab hi me koi final decision le sakun ga .
Ami: thk hai Fiza ko bolna woh tumhe Saba ki photo or details bhej de gii.
Viki (hhhhuhhh, lambi sans chodte huwe) acha to ab ijaazat hai mujhe ??
Abu: haan beta jao ab araam kro or Fiza ko bola dena thk hai.
Viki: g behtar, Shab-Bakher.
Ami & Abu : Shab-Bakher.
Phir Viki wapss apne room m aajata hai jahan ab bhi sabhi baithe the or ludo khel rhe the usse aata dekh kr Sonia uchal kr uski god m chad jaati hai
Sonia: aap aagaye bhaiyaa.
Viki: (smile k saath) kya lagta hai aagaya hun ya abhi raaste m hi hun.
Sonia bhi muskurate huwe : lag to rha hai k aa gye ho
Inki baaton pr sab muskuraa rhe the.
Viki baher se bhale hi smile kr rha tha or andar se aisa nhi tha, aisa bhi nhi tha k woh dukhi tha bss woh thoda disturbed tha bass or usse araam Chahiye tha isii liye woh bolta hai .
Viki: acha yrr mujhe neend aaa rahi hai ap logon ko or khelna hai ya baaten krni hain to me baraabar wale room m soo jaata hun !
Sadiya: are nhi yrrr hum bhi jaa hi rhe hain bss tumhare aane ka wait kr rhe the ab hum.bhi chalte hainn
Phir ek ek kr ke sabhi baher jaane lagte hain Viki k room se or jab Fiza jaane lagti hai to viki usse awaaz de kr
Viki: Fiza Baji mujhe wo photos waghaira bhej dena phir aap .
Fiza: (Smile krte huwe) jo hukum janaab.
Or hanste huwe room se nikal jaati hai or Viki bhi apna room lock kr ke fresh hone chala jaata hai or jab woh change kr k aata hai or jab apne mobile ko on kr k dekhta hai to uske WhatsApp pr notification aaya hota hai to apne bed or laitte huwe usse open krta hai to ye Fiza k hi messages the jisme usne Saba ki pics or details etc bheji thin.
Wo sabse pehle details hi padhta hai;
(Name: Saba
Age : 20, bss Viki se kuch months hi choti hai
Viki ki hi trhaan yeh bhi IT Student hai bss isne DAE nhi kya isne INTER kiya tha COMPUTER SCIENCE me or aage UNI m bhi IT ka hi krna chahti hai. Abhi free hi hai
Sister: Irum: age 16.
Mom: Salma, age 44, house wife,
Dad: Shahid, age 46, state agencies ka kaam hai.)
Phir Viki Saba ki photo open krta hai or jab dekhta hai to bsssphir kya tha apna londa waise to sakht hai pr yahan woh bhi pighal gaya
Asal m Saba thi hi itni pyaari or khoobruuu thi or phir un pic's m bhi uski saadgi saaf jhalak rhi thi bcz wo pics kisi function ki thin shaayad uske college function ki or chunke wo girls college me padhti thi to uske saath uski baaki class mates bhi dikh rhi thin un pics m pr jahan baaki sab ne makeup kiya huwatha wahin Saba apni saadgi m hi sabse alag or achi lag rhi thi.
Or yehi wajah thi k pehli baar sirf pics dekh kr hi Viki k dil m uske liye ek alag hi jagah ban gyiii thi ab isse pyaar kehna to jaldbaazi hi hogi pr wo normal se to oooper hi thi.
Viki photo dekhte huwe apne bed pr leta tha or uske face pr ek dilkash smile thi or ho bhi kyun na aakhir First time Viki kisi ladki ki taraf attract huwa tha or woh just photo dekh kr lekin Viki itna bhi paagal nhi tha k just photo m kisi ladki ki khoobsoorati dekh kr woh haan kr deta ya us pr complete flat ho jaata isii liye woh ab bhi Saba se khud milna chahta tha or kuch baaten krna chahta tha.
Viki apna phonerkh kr soo jaata hai.
Ab woh Saba se kya baat krna chahta hai or kal kya hoga ye to ab aage chl kr hi pta chale gaa.
Abhi k liye itna hi
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Thanks Bhainice update ..to chalaki se bag le aaya ghar me viki jisse koi sawal na kar sake uske baare me .
1 bag se dadaji ka letter mila jisme bahut kuch bataya hai viki ko .
behan jinda hai aur dushmano ke changul me hai ,nanaji aur dadaji apni property de dete par gundo ko kuch aisa chahiye jo dene se sabke upar shayad musibat aa jaaye .
par dadaji ne bhi dimaag se kaam liya tha aur kuch aisa kiya ki viki aur uski behan ko koi maar na sake jabtak unko wo cheej nahi mil jaati .
saba ne sambhal liya emotional huye viki ko jo ek pyar karnewali patni ki nishani hai.
sidra aur nida apne planning me lage hai aur munna bhi dekhte hai kaun kispe bhari padta hai .
Thanks Bhai
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Thanks Bhai
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bss kaya Karen ab bnda hai hi aisa to phir aisi harkaten to krni hi thin.
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Haan asal m us time mene socha k is topic ko ek update m clear kr dun baaki ka next m dekhte hain wrna woh phir combined ho jataa .
Sabki hansi thitholi chal rahi h story ban rahi h ye toh paka h ki saba pasand ayegi viki ko par muje jo feeling arahi h story ko agai leke wo ye h ki saba ko kuch hoga ......but abhi andaza lagana galat h mera ....khair saba aur uski choti bahan arahi h really yaar kya scene hoga jab 2 nazre ek dusre se takrayengi wao really good and intresting update hoga ....aur puri family chahti h ye shadi ho isliye yakeen h ki ye shadi jarur hogi .....aur ye last mai office se call aya h toh jarur kuch acha huva h .....shandaar update Ahsan bro ap bilkul sahi ja rahe h ....abhi tak sab yahi soch rahe h ki thrill kaisa hoga kaise ayega ........very niceUpdate 08
NEXT DAY
Viki subah apne time se hi uthta hai apna Daily ka routine follow krta hai phir Naashta krne chal deta hai. Dinning table pr sabko slaaam krta hai, phir apni chair pr baith jataa hai Sonia k baraabar m, or aaj uske face pr ek alag hi Khushi thi jisse woh sab se chupaa kr Naashta krne lag jaata hai.
Khala Samina: Ghazala baji meri Salma logon se baat huiii thi woh bol rahi thi k Woh log 4pm tak ajaain ge .
Ami: chalo acha hai ye to.
Nimra: Ami Salma phupho aa rahi hain, to kya Saba Baji or Irum bhi ayen gii ?
SaminaK: haan beta woh 2non bhi aa rahi hain saath.
Nimra: wiase aaj achaanak kaise koi khabar na koi baat kisi n bataaya hi nhi k aa rahe hain koi khaas wajah hai kya.
SaminaK: haan beta wajah to hai (ye bol kr Ghazala ki taraf dekhti hai jaise k aaage ki baat batane ki permission maang rhi ho jo k usse mil bhi jaati hai, Ghazala apna sarrr hila kr haan bol deti hai).
Nimra: waise kya wajah hai Ami?
SaminaK: Beta tumhare Viki bhai or Saba Baji k rishte ki baat k liye aa rahe hain woh log.
Kyyaaaaaaaa
Ye awaz thi Sami, Umar, Nimra,Faizi, Laiba or Sonia ki jo ye baat sun kr hi chonk gye the k unke Viki bhai k Rishte ki baat ho rhi hai
Sami: Viki bhai kya ye sach hai or aapne bataaya q nhi mujhe ya kisi or ko ?
Viki: mujhe to aise bol rha hai jaise mujhe to pehle se sab pata tha!
Umar: matlb kya hai iska ?
Viki: matlab ye hai k mujhe khud kal raat ko pata chala hai jab Abu or Ami se baat krne gaya tha tabhi.
Faizi: waise jo bhi ho baat to Khushi ki hai naa to bhai party to banti hai.
Phupho: oooo party tu idher aaa tujhe me krwaati hun party abhi baat ho rhi hai pehle Rishta to pakka hone de phir kr lena apni party.
Faizi: chlo usme konsa time lage gaa.
Laiba: tu to aise bol rha hai jaise sab tune fix kr rakha hai or wohi hoga pehle ladka ladki pasand to kr len ek 2sre ko.
Faizi: to usme kya hai pasand to yun kr len ge ek 2sre ko, Bhai apna Handsome hai or Behen ya yun kahun kone wali Bhabhi konsa kisi se kam hain.
Phupho: ab yee baaten bnd karo or Naashta karo khamoshi se, bilaa wajah bss faaltuu ki baaten le kr baith jaate ho.
Iske baad sab araam se Naashta krte hain or jo log job wale the wo sab apni apni jobs pr chale jaate hain shaam tk aane ka bol kr.
Naashte k baad jab sare bade log apne apne kaamon m lag gye to yahan baccha party means youngsters ne Viki ki class laga li or lag gye usse chedne.
Is waqt Viki apne room m tha or baaki sab bhi.
Nimra: waise bhai mujhe Fiza Baji n bataya k kal raat ko apko Saba baji ki photo bheji thi yo kaisi lagin apko.
Laiba: han bhai batao naa.
Sabhi aise hi kuch na kuch bol rhe the wahin apna Viki to aise baitha tha jaise usne kuch suna hi naa ho.
Aakhir me Sadiya hi usse hilate huwe
Sadiya: kin Khayaalon m ho kab se pooch rhe hain or tum ho kuch bol hi nhi rhe, kahin Saba k hi khayaalon m to nhi khoye huwe naa.
Hahahaha
Viki apne kaanon se earbuds nikaal kr: g kya kaha aapne ??
Uski ye baat sun kr sab chonk jaate hain k hum kab se bolte jaa rhe hain or ye earbuds laga kr gaane sun rha hai.
Mehwish to kuch zeyaada hi chid gyii thi woh or Fiza to Viki ko maarne bhage lekin Viki thehra athlete woh foran jump kr k door hat jaata hai .
Mehwish: seedha seedha yahan aajao wrna mujhse or Fiza se maar khaa lo ge tum.
Fiza: han araam se yahan ajaao wrna Mehwish tumhe bohot maare giii.
Fiza ki baat pr sab phir se hansne lagte hain or Viki bhi hanste huwe sabke paas aajata hai or bolta hai,
Viki: are yrr gussa mt karo me mazaak kr rha tha mene sab suna hai.
Laiba: ab mazaak ho gaya ho to seedhe 2 batao jo poocha hai.
Viki: yrr wo baat to hai k "FIRST IMPRESSION IS THE LAST IMPRESSION" but...
Mehwish uski baat ko beech m hi kaatte huwe..
Mehwish: to mtlb tumhe Saba pasand hai, mtlb tumhaari haan hai, or Ami bata rhi thin k Saba to pehle hi haan kr chuki hai to iska matlab to ye huwa k jodi set hai phir.. haaan
Hahah sab is baat pr thoda sa hans dete hain k tabhi...
Viki: guys guys guys listen to me .
Umar: haan bolo na, tareef hi krni hai na Bhabhi ki to karo khul k karo roka kisne hai.
hahahaha
Viki: Arree oh bhabhi k bhai ruko zara sabar karo, mene abhi haan nhi kiya hai okkk!
Sadiya: woh kyun, or kab kro ge phir ?
Viki: maana k "FIRST IMPRESSION IS THE LAST IMPRESSION" ye baat ek had tk thk hai but life k itne bade decisions aise hi just first impression ki base pr nhi liye jaa sakte .
Nimra: bhai explain it please.
hahahaha
Viki: haan kyun nhi. Dekho baat ye hai k ye meri or uski yaani k Saba ki life ka bohot hi important decision hai to humen isse soch samjh kr lena chahiye ta k aage chl kr koi problem naa ho hum 2non ko.
Fiza: pr tumne to bola tha na k parents ki mrzi se karo ge agr tumhe koi pasand ki ladki nhi mili to ab kya huwa ye Tumhare parents ki pasand ki hi to hai phir kya problem hai .
Viki: are yrr mene haan nhi bola iska mtlb ye bhi nhi k mene naa kr diya ho.
Fiza: matlab ??
Viki: yrr me chahta hun k pehle Saba se mil kr baat krun Phir hi koi bhi decision len hum.
Sadiya: ye bhi shi hai aaj aaa hi rhe hain woh log to tab kr lena us se baat akele m.
Viki: hmmm.
Trinnnnn trinnmnnn....
Koi kuch or bolta k Viki ka phone baj utha Viki call receive kr k side m chala jaata hai or kuch baat kr ki phone rakh deta hai kisi ko samajh nhi ataa k woh kis se or kya baat kr rha tha bss uske face pr ek halki si smile thi or sabko end k e bss yehi words sunayiii dete hain "ye to acha ho gaya hai, thk hai bye" . Bss itna hi or kuch nhi .
Sub ko thodi curiosity thi k aakhir kis se aise akele m baat kr tha hai Viki ?
Aakhir kaar Umar ne pooch hi liya k
Umar: bhai kis ka call tha or sab thk hai na ?
Viki: haan yrr sab thk hai bss office se call tha nothing else.
Phir aise hi lunch ka time ho jaata hai or lunch kr ke yeh sab thora araam krne apne 2 rooms m chale jaate hain.
Aaj k liye itna hi.
padhiye or apni qeemti raye se aagah krna naa bhulen
Bilkul ye to obvious hi hai agr achaanak aap subah utho ya shaam ko ghr aaoo or apke parents bolen k beta tumhare liye ladki dekhi hai humne bss baat pakki hi samjho to bnda disturbed to hoga hii.
shi kaha bhai is bande ka kuch bharosaa nhi kab kya kar de koi keh nhi sakta.
itne pyare reviews k liye.
