Thriller POWER

[LionHeart007]

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*Asʟᴀᴍ ᴏ ᴀʟaɪᴋᴜᴍ.*

Oɴ ᴛʜɪs ʙʟᴇssᴇᴅ ᴏᴄᴄᴀsɪᴏɴ ᴏғ Eɪᴅ, ᴡɪsʜɪɴɢ ʏᴏᴜ ᴀɴᴅ ʏᴏᴜʀ ғᴀᴍɪʟʏ ᴊᴏʏ, ʜᴀᴘᴘɪɴᴇss, ᴘᴇᴀᴄᴇ ᴀɴᴅ ᴘʀᴏsᴘᴇʀɪᴛʏ! Eɪᴅ Mᴜʙᴀʀᴀᴋ! Tʜᴇ ᴍᴀɢɪᴄ ᴏғ ᴛʜɪs ᴅᴀʏ ʙʀɪɴɢ ᴀ ʟᴏᴛ ᴏғ ʜᴀᴘᴘɪɴᴇss ᴀɴᴅ ʙʟᴇssɪɴɢs ɪɴ ʏᴏᴜʀ ʟɪғᴇ ᴛʜᴀᴛ ᴡɪʟʟ ғɪʟʟ ʏᴏᴜʀ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛ ᴡɪᴛʜ ᴊᴏʏ. Wɪsʜɪɴɢ ʏᴏᴜ ᴀɴᴅ ʏᴏᴜʀ ғᴀᴍɪʟʏ ᴀ Hᴀᴘᴘʏ Eɪᴅ.❤

*𝒲𝒶𝓇𝓂 𝓡𝓮𝓰𝓪𝓻𝓭,*
AHSAN

 

[Zoro x]

Bilkul dost is story m aisa much bhi nhi hai na insect or naa hi Adultery.

or story abhi start huii hai to abhi pata nhi chal rha ke kya hoga aage .
lekin jald hi story m suspense or thrill wala part aye gaa.

Waiting bro...

 

[Golu]

Ek aur new story suru kiya aapne
Congratulations

 

[LionHeart007]

Ek aur new story suru kiya aapne
Congratulations

Thanks dear ye meri first story hai .
bss ap apna saath or support banaye rakhiye gaa baaki kuch na kuch yo kar hi denge.

 

[LionHeart007]

Waiting bro...

Jaldi hi dear bss thoda sabr rakhen abhi to jo chl rha hai uska maza li jiye.

 

[Golu]

Thanks dear ye meri first story hai .
bss ap apna saath or support banaye rakhiye gaa baaki kuch na kuch yo kar hi denge.

Ekdm bhai support rahega bs likhte rahiye

 

[LionHeart007]

Ekdm bhai support rahega bs likhte rahiye

Bss abhi filhaal to daily hi update aaa rahe hain . Aage bhi koshish rhe gi k jitna ho sake ga utna behter kiya jaye .

 

[Lover_boy143]

for your first story bhai
dill se khushi hoi apko likhta dekh ker actually mujhe pta nahi ta k ap b story post ker rhe ho pichle kuch time se main regular active nahi ta to is wajah se malom nahi ta is bare me rat jab apka msg aya to us time b 1 novel ki character k kheyalu me ghoom ta chez hi aisi thi k kia batau
Khair apne story ki shuruwat bohat hi ache se kari hai or plot 1 dum baria se set ker diya hai na kuch ziada laga na kuch kum hansi mazak etc sb 1 dum perfect ta laga hi nahi k ye apka first time hai jo k bohat hi rare chez hai akser first time me to writers confused ho jate or jiske chalte story ka kuch b smjh nahi ata k bhai sahab akhir scene kia hai lakin is k baraks apne bohat hi ache se sambhala hai simple way me jo mujhe bohat pasand aya bat keru apne point of view ki to main b just 1 reader hi lakin salu ho ge ye sb karte howe to thora bohat chezu ki samjh aa hi jati hai
Or abhi mere pas itna ziada kuch hai nahi jis k bare me bat karu but 1 chez jo main dil se keh rha hu k story bohat hi achi ja rahi hai or sabhi characters 1 dum zabardast hain jis hisab se ap ne sabhi ko introduce kia or utne hi characters dikhaye jitne zarori te to ye chez b baria se set ho gayi in shot fielding wagaira ache se set ho chuki hai ab to bs intezar hai k aney wale waqt me kia dekhne ko mile ga
mujhe mention karne k liye dill se shukria 1 bat k main ziada ter of hi rehta hu register howe to kafi time ho gaya per main kabhi utna time nahi de pata lakin 1 bat sure hai k jab b au ga apki story ko read and review kerta rhu ga best wishes for you and for ur story we'll all updates are marvelous.


Ajke liye itna hi....!

Good luck for upcoming updates....!❤

 

[LionHeart007]

for your first story bhai
dill se khushi hoi apko likhta dekh ker actually mujhe pta nahi ta k ap b story post ker rhe ho pichle kuch time se main regular active nahi ta to is wajah se malom nahi ta is bare me rat jab apka msg aya to us time b 1 novel ki character k kheyalu me ghoom ta chez hi aisi thi k kia batau
Khair apne story ki shuruwat bohat hi ache se kari hai or plot 1 dum baria se set ker diya hai na kuch ziada laga na kuch kum hansi mazak etc sb 1 dum perfect ta laga hi nahi k ye apka first time hai jo k bohat hi rare chez hai akser first time me to writers confused ho jate or jiske chalte story ka kuch b smjh nahi ata k bhai sahab akhir scene kia hai lakin is k baraks apne bohat hi ache se sambhala hai simple way me jo mujhe bohat pasand aya bat keru apne point of view ki to main b just 1 reader hi lakin salu ho ge ye sb karte howe to thora bohat chezu ki samjh aa hi jati hai
Or abhi mere pas itna ziada kuch hai nahi jis k bare me bat karu but 1 chez jo main dil se keh rha hu k story bohat hi achi ja rahi hai or sabhi characters 1 dum zabardast hain jis hisab se ap ne sabhi ko introduce kia or utne hi characters dikhaye jitne zarori te to ye chez b baria se set ho gayi in shot fielding wagaira ache se set ho chuki hai ab to bs intezar hai k aney wale waqt me kia dekhne ko mile ga
mujhe mention karne k liye dill se shukria 1 bat k main ziada ter of hi rehta hu register howe to kafi time ho gaya per main kabhi utna time nahi de pata lakin 1 bat sure hai k jab b au ga apki story ko read and review kerta rhu ga best wishes for you and for ur story we'll all updates are marvelous.


Ajke liye itna hi....!

Good luck for upcoming updates....!❤

Thank you so much Bhai for your precious comment .

or bilkul meri poori koshish rahe gi k story aise hi apne flow m aage badhti rahe .
abhi starting hai to kuch bhi action ya serious scene nhi rakha taa k thori sii fielding set ho sake . Baaki aage k updates m Action or suspense bhi dekhne ko mile g or umeed hai ap sabhi readers ko pasand ayegaa.

Once again Shukriya Bhai .

 

[Zoro x]

Bilkul dost is story m aisa much bhi nhi hai na insect or naa hi Adultery.

or story abhi start huii hai to abhi pata nhi chal rha ke kya hoga aage .
lekin jald hi story m suspense or thrill wala part aye gaa.

Intjar rhega bhai suspens aur thrill ka
Vaise khani Nam power hai to khi bhut pret pr to nhi likh rhe bhai

 

[LionHeart007]

Intjar rhega bhai suspens aur thrill ka
Vaise khani Nam power hai to khi bhut pret pr to nhi likh rhe bhai

Are nhi bhai zaroori nhi k Power magic ya kis bhi trha supernatural type ki hi ho Power ka matlab to taaqat hota hai ab woh kisi bhi cheez ki ho sakti hai.

Power
Pyar ki
Nafrat ki
Dosti ki
Dushmani ki
Kisi post ki ya Keh lo Kursi ki power.

kisi bhi chiz ki ho sakti hai .