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Incest PAAP PUNYA (Pariwarik Kamuk Upnayas)

decentpoet

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Agla adhyaaye jald hi aapke samne hoga
Dhyanyawaad is payar ke liye

Is upnyas ko vastvikta aur kalpana ke mel se likha ja raha hai isliye na toh aisey incidence dale jayenge jo isse wasteikta se door kr de aur na hi itne vastvik pehlu ke romanch khatam ho jaye .

fir bhi aap apne kimiti vichaar khule man se rakhe.
dhanyawaad
 
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Agla adhyaaye jald hi aapke samne hoga
Dhyanyawaad is payar ke liye

Is upnyas ko vastvikta aur kalpana ke mel se likha ja raha hai isliye na toh aisey incidence dale jayenge jo isse wasteikta se door kr de aur na hi itne vastvik pehlu ke romanch khatam ho jaye .

fir bhi aap apne kimiti vichaar khule man se rakhe.
dhanyawaad
Kahani ki shuruwat aur aap ki writing skills dekhkar main aap ke lekhni ka kayal ho gaya tha. Lekin baad me aapne apne hi hatho se kahani ka kabra bhi khod diya.
Rape , blackmail , humiliation , violence aap ke story ka main elements ban gaya hai jise main kabhi bhi swavikaar nahi kar sakta. Aur wo bhi apne maa aur bahan ke saath. Kahani me koi bhi love nahi , koi emotional attachment nahi .
Kahani ka satyanaash kar diya aapne.
I quit your story.
 

arabadiya

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Bhai story mai maa or bete ke bich jo bhav hone chahiye wo to tune mita diye hay
Or dusri bat incest kahani mai maa or bete ke prati pyar dikhana chahiye or jor jabardasti chudai nhi karni chahiye
Chudai mai maa ki marji samil honi chahiye
Tune is kahani mai ek bete ko maa or bahan ke prati dusman dikhaya hay
Ghar mai beta hi maa or bahan khyal rakhta hay balki tune bahan ki video site pe upload karke uski badnami karna chaha or ghar mai maa or bahan par rob jata kar uske sath ek rakshas jesa vyavhar kar rahe ho
Ho sake to kahani ke patro ke bich pyar lao
 

Punnu

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Bhai story mai maa or bete ke bich jo bhav hone chahiye wo to tune mita diye hay
Or dusri bat incest kahani mai maa or bete ke prati pyar dikhana chahiye or jor jabardasti chudai nhi karni chahiye
Chudai mai maa ki marji samil honi chahiye
Tune is kahani mai ek bete ko maa or bahan ke prati dusman dikhaya hay
Ghar mai beta hi maa or bahan khyal rakhta hay balki tune bahan ki video site pe upload karke uski badnami karna chaha or ghar mai maa or bahan par rob jata kar uske sath ek rakshas jesa vyavhar kar rahe ho
Ho sake to kahani ke patro ke bich pyar lao
Bhai aapne jo kha bilkul shi hai bro....pr bro ek baat btao aisi konsi maa hogi jo apne bete se kahegi Aaj tere liye maine taang khol rkhi hai .....bhai forum pr aisi bahut story mil jayegi aapko jisme pta nhi kaisi ma hoti hai bete ne try Kiya turant pat gyi...unka pyar hawas ban jata hai unka ....or us hawas ko pyar ka naam de dete hai ...pr is story i think mere hisab se shi dikhaya hai..dekho yr agr shi glt pr aaye to fhir to ye story chalegi nhi ..ya kya koi si bhi nhi chalegi ...pr its fantasy to fantasy pr hi rehne dete hai na ....kyu itna complicated Krna ....or rhi baat story ki to usse writer pr hi chod dete hai ...i think 🤔 writer ne likha hai to kuch soch kr hi likha hoga ...ya fir usne aakash ke character ko dominant dikhane ke liye aisa kr rha hoga ...or shayad yhi se uski ma me iske liye feelings aayegi ...kuch update padh lijiye fir nikaliye nishkarsh....
 
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Bhai aapne jo kha bilkul shi hai bro....pr bro ek baat btao aisi konsi maa hogi jo apne bete se kahegi Aaj tere liye maine taang khol rkhi hai .....bhai forum pr aisi bahut story mil jayegi aapko jisme pta nhi kaisi ma hoti hai bete ne try Kiya turant pat gyi...unka pyar hawas ban jata hai unka ....or us hawas ko pyar ka naam de dete hai ...pr is story i think mere hisab se shi dikhaya hai..dekho yr agr shi glt pr aaye to fhir to ye story chalegi nhi ..ya kya koi si bhi nhi chalegi ...pr its fantasy to fantasy pr hi rehne dete hai na ....kyu itna complicated Krna ....or rhi baat story ki to usse writer pr hi chod dete hai ...i think 🤔 writer ne likha hai to kuch soch kr hi likha hoga ...ya fir usne aakash ke character ko dominant dikhane ke liye aisa kr rha hoga ...or shayad yhi se uski ma me iske liye feelings aayegi ...kuch update padh lijiye fir nikaliye nishkarsh....
Incest kahani me Reality khojne jaoge to aap ko har incest stories bakwas lagegi.
Lekin ye 100% satya hai ki incest manushya ke ashtitva me aane ke baad hi start ho gaya tha aur present me bhi hai aur future me bhi rahega.
Yaha baat ho rahi hai hero dwara kiye hue kaam par. Rape, domestic violence , blackmail aur wo bhi apne hi maa aur bahan ke saath.
Kya aap ye sab allow karte hai ?
Aap kahenge ki main to incest ko bhi allow nahi karta ! Phir incest stories padhne ka matlab kya hua ?
Ye sab aisi fantasy hai jisse log both ladke aur ladkiaa artificial dhang se apni utejna shant karte hai.
Decent poet ki writing skills aur Sanskrit , English , Hindi ki knowledge adbhut hai. Summary karne me maharath hashil hai.
Lekin baad me jo elements dal diya wo main abhi bhi samagh nahi pa raha hu ki aisa kyun kiye !
Thriller kahani hota to main aisa kabhi nahi kahta. Kyonki Thriller kahani me revenge bhi ho sakta hai. Thriller story ki wo demand ho sakti hai lekin ye story Thriller nahi incest hai.
 
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GRahul

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Aap story ko apne hisab se likhiye logo ka ka kaam hai dusro ke lekhani me taang Adana sabka likhane ka alag alag apna tarika hota hai kuch logo ki aadat hai aa jate muft ka gyan pelne aur kahani ka maja khrab karne waise dekha jaye to gyanio ko is site par aana hi nhi chahiye unko bahut se aastha channel hai wha jana chahiye apna muft ka gyan pelne aur tark vitark karne.
 
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Aap story ko apne hisab se likhiye logo ka ka kaam hai dusro ke lekhani me taang Adana sabka likhane ka alag alag apna tarika hota hai kuch logo ki aadat hai aa jate muft ka gyan pelne aur kahani ka maja khrab karne waise dekha jaye to gyanio ko is site par aana hi nhi chahiye unko bahut se aastha channel hai wha jana chahiye apna muft ka gyan pelne aur tark vitark karne.
राइटर साहब के लिए आप कहां खड़े थे जब संस्कृत के लिए कुछ लोगों ने सवाल उठा दिया था।
सिर्फ मै ही था जिसने राइटर को लिखने के लिए मोटिवेट किया।
कभी भी राइटर के लिए गलत शब्द का इस्तेमाल नही किया। जो भी कहना था , वो स्टोरी और अपडेट के बारे मे कहा।
आप को मैने कभी अन्य कैटिगरी के कहानी मे देखा ही नही। आप इस फोरम की अन्य कैटेगरी देखेंगे तो शायद आप मेरे बारे मे कुछ जान भी जाएं !

decentpoet की लेखनी का लोहा माना है मैने। और अभी भी मानता हूं। आउटस्टैंडिंग राइटर है वो। उनके लिए मुझे कोई दुविधा नही है। पढ़े लिखे हैं वो लेकिन अफसोस उन रीडर्स का है जो पढ़ लिखकर भी गंवार है।

decentpoet sahab , aap update dijiye. Story padhunga par review shayad har update par de na paun !
 
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