Writer bhai story ki pacing thik hai shayad tumko slow isiliye lag rahi hogi kyuki tumne bohot se plot direction abhi adhure chhore hue hai (jaise karan aur hina ka shadi/love relationship, dilawar bhai aur dheeraj ka plot, aur sabse main jo hai wo hai aryan ka ameer banne wala hissa) jo tumne soche toh hoga hi,ki kaise complete karna hai lekin, tumko lag raha hoga hi itne saare kaise jaldi jaldi likhunga sabHo sakta hai story kuch logo ke liye boring ho jaye par sex scene tabhi dalunga jab uski need hogi story mein par filhal story dhire dhire hi aage badegi mujhe pta kahani ka tone bahut slow hai par mujhe samajh nhi aa raha ki isko fast pace kaise karu
Story superb hai aur jisko bekar Lage wo kripya nai padheBaki comment mein bta dena ki story kaise chal rahi agar bekar lag rahi hai toh phir mein band kar dunga kyunki mere paas bhi time nhi hai jyada likhne ka .
Sahi keh raho ho bhai agar sex scenes ke liye padhna hota toh sana aur aryan ke pahle ladayi ke baad hi chhor dete padhna kyuki uske baad se hi story ka tone romance ki taraf ho gaya haibhai sex ke uper to bahut story hai par
pyar ke uper bahut hi kam hai na ke barabar plsbhai story ko band mat kar na
time kam ho to 2/3 din mai update de dena par story ko band mat karna
100 mai se 1/2 hi dilko chhujane vali story hoti hai
jinme se ekaapki yah story hai
Koi boring nahi haiBaki comment mein bta dena ki story kaise chal rahi agar bekar lag rahi hai toh phir mein band kar dunga kyunki mere paas bhi time nhi hai jyada likhne ka .