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Adultery Naukar ke bete ke sath nikkah

Which character do u like the most

  • Aryan

    Votes: 25 78.1%
  • Sana

    Votes: 17 53.1%
  • Karn

    Votes: 5 15.6%

  • Total voters
    32
  • Poll closed .

red_devil_98

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Ho sakta hai story kuch logo ke liye boring ho jaye par sex scene tabhi dalunga jab uski need hogi story mein par filhal story dhire dhire hi aage badegi mujhe pta kahani ka tone bahut slow hai par mujhe samajh nhi aa raha ki isko fast pace kaise karu
Writer bhai story ki pacing thik hai shayad tumko slow isiliye lag rahi hogi kyuki tumne bohot se plot direction abhi adhure chhore hue hai (jaise karan aur hina ka shadi/love relationship, dilawar bhai aur dheeraj ka plot, aur sabse main jo hai wo hai aryan ka ameer banne wala hissa) jo tumne soche toh hoga hi,ki kaise complete karna hai lekin, tumko lag raha hoga hi itne saare kaise jaldi jaldi likhunga sab😅, isiliye tumko pacing slow lag rahi hai story ki....
Aur rahi sex scenes ki baat toh usko namak jaisa swad anusaar dalte raho

Baki comment mein bta dena ki story kaise chal rahi agar bekar lag rahi hai toh phir mein band kar dunga kyunki mere paas bhi time nhi hai jyada likhne ka .
Story superb hai aur jisko bekar Lage wo kripya nai padhe🙏🙏
 

red_devil_98

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bhai sex ke uper to bahut story hai par
pyar ke uper bahut hi kam hai na ke barabar pls 🙏🙏🙏🙏 bhai story ko band mat kar na
time kam ho to 2/3 din mai update de dena par story ko band mat karna
100 mai se 1/2 hi dil ❤️ ko chhujane vali story hoti hai
jinme se ek ☝️aapki yah story hai
Sahi keh raho ho bhai agar sex scenes ke liye padhna hota toh sana aur aryan ke pahle ladayi ke baad hi chhor dete padhna kyuki uske baad se hi story ka tone romance ki taraf ho gaya hai
 

krish1152

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nice update
 
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