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UPDATE:-11 ( Brutality 
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)Maine gate band kiya room ka aur abhay ko un dono ke muh ki patti kholne ko bola, abhay ne unki patti hatayi to asusual wo apne-apne khandano ka gungaan karne lage khud ki beshak gaand fati ho fir bhi dhamki de rahe they.
Main:- abey chup karo dono kitna bhokte ho.
Ye maine chilla ke bola to wo chup huye.
Dev:- dekh AK us din bas maine tujhe thoda sa mara tha, rohan ne mara tha jada.
Sonal:- aur maine to kuch kiya hi nahi, main dev ki girlfriend hu to mujhe bhi utha laaye.
Main:- hahahaha gf-bf ho to dono sath hi upper jaoge, chalo thanks bolo.
Dev:- dekh AK pitne ke liye koi jaan se nahi marta yaar.
Main:- anjali ko bhul gaye tum.
Ab laga undono ko solid jhatka, ab dono kuch na bol paa rahe they, bolenge bhi kaise bc gaand na tod dunga.
Dev:- dekh AK main plan mere bade bhai ka tha humey chod de main tujhe kuch nahi kahunga.
Main:- AK never forgive and forget.
Ye bolke maine rampuri uthayi, bc abhay gazab banda hai kya knife leke aaya galti se touch bhi ho jaaye yo wahi pe cut laga de aur isse inke sarir ko chilne mein alag hi maza aayega.
Abhay bed pe baitha aur main dev ke samne aur uske face pe us knife ko fera, wo bas nahi nahi kiye jaa raha tha to maine uske muh pe wo tape fir se laga di.
Main:- bhsdk kitna badbad karta hai be tu.
Ab mere dimag mein firse backchodi hone lagi thi main feel kar paa raha tha, dard nahi ho raha tha bas wo kuch maang raha ho aisa lag raha tha.
Main:- dev beta ready, aaj aisi maut dunga tujhe ki teri body ki pehchan Postmortem wale bhi nahi kar payenge.
Ye bolke maine wo chaku uske left kandhe mein ghusaya, knife bada smoothly utar gaya uske kandhe mein, wo to nahi chilla paya lekin sonal madam chilla ke rone lagi aur mujhe hasi aa gayi.
Main:- hahaha abhi to start hai darling, yaad kar wo pal jab anjali didi bhi aise tadapti thi.
Ye bolke maine wo knife bahar khicha aur agle second mein uske dusre kandhe mein daal diya, waha se bhi khoon tapakne laga.
Main:- abey aise to ye mar jayega, wo saman laa jaldi.
Main wo knife waha se nikala aur hatheli main ghop diya, is baar sonal nahi chillayi, maine usey dekha to madam behosh thi.
Abhay itni der mein ek bottle laya jo acid ki thi usne wo bottle kholi aur thoda uske cuts pe daal diya jisse khoon aana band ho gaya lekin dev ki sakal kutte jaisi ho gayi thi.
Abhay:- ab jada maje na le bahut milenge aise aage, unpe nikaliyo apna ye addiction. Agar ye subah tak ghar na pahuche to police ko khabar mil jayegi aur humey dhundhne mein jada der nahi lagegi.
Mujhe bhi uski baat sahi lagi aur mere aankho mein ek baar anjali didi ka chehra aaya aur us chere ko dekh ke itna gussa aaya ki wo knife uthake maine bhut speed se kayi baar uske pet mein ghopa, bhut der tak ghopta raha mein.
Abhay:- bas kar be mar gaya wo.
Maine uski taraf dekha to rote huye mar gaya tha, Maine uske pet pe hath fera jaha se maas to dikh hi nahi raha tha maine apna pura hath blood se bhigoya aur apne naak ke paas le jaake sungha, hhaaasshhhh bc "daru to yuhi badnaam hai asli nasha to khoon mein hai".
Main:- is londiya ko utha.
Abhay:- ab tu ladki ko bhi aise maarega.
Main:- iski maut to aur bhayanak hogi, kyuki isey main nahi marunga ye khud maregi.
Abhay ne kuch nahi bola bas usey hosh mein le aaya, wo hosh mein aayi to do cheez huyi, ek wo dev ki body dekh ke dar gayi itni jada dar gayi ki usne peshab kar diya jeans mein, doosri uske gale se awaz nahi nikal rahi thi.
Main:- to madam ready ho tum.
Sonal:- dekho please mujhe chod do, tumhe ek ladki ko marte huye saram nahi aayegi.
Main:- ajji kahe ki saram, anjali ladki thi aur tum bhi fir bhi tumne usey marwa diya.
Sonal:- to please mujhe asan maut de do, aise mat maarna ek baar mein maar do.
Main:- acha ye le knife aur maar le khud ko main hath bhi na lagunga.
Usne jhat se knife uthake apne gale pe lagaya lekin wo kuch kar na paayi, bas rone lagi fir se aur fir wo knife niche rakh diya.
Main:- dekha sucide karna kitna mushkil kaam hota hai, meri didi ne kaise kiya hoga soch ke dekh jara.
Abhay:- ab kya karna hai bhai.
Main:- abey maut to befaltu me badnaam hai asli dard to jindagi deti hai, ab iska rape karenge pehle hum, fir iski nudes internet pe daalenge aur fir dev se bhi buri tarah se iske hath pair kaat denge, bas marne nahi denge, aur fir isey jinda rakhenge, ohhh sorry sirf iski body ko jinda rakhenge, atma to mar hi jayegi iski.
Sonal jo hamari baate gaur se sun rahi thi, usne ye sab sunke wo knife jhat se uthaya aur apna gala kaat liya, us time uske chehre pe koi expression nahi tha. Lekin wo abhi puri nahi Mari thi.
Sonal:- tummm bahhhuuttt burrrrii mmaauutt marrroggee Akk.
Main:- marne se kon darta hai, main to waise bhi jaldi se marna chahta hu bas saare intention complete ho jaaye. Now good bye milte hai narak mein, main bhi wahi aaunga.
Aur sonal ne bhi apni saanse tod di. Main bhi wahi baith gaya aur abhay bhi.
Abhay:- tere liye ek cheez laya hu.
Maine uski taraf dekha to usne ek potli type rakh diya hath mein. Aur maine khol ke dekha to drugs they usme.
Main:- abey konsa hai isme.
Abhay:- pata nahi konsa hai, waise bhi sab ek jaise hote hai.
Maine time dekha to raat ke 3 baj rahe they,
Main:-sun deepak ko bula le aur in dono ki dead body waha le jaa jaha humne uski body gayab ki thi
aur koi dhund nahi paya tha.Abhay ne haan mein mundi hillayi aur lag gaya kaam pe aur maine hath muh dhoye body le jaane ke baad kamre ki thodi si safayi ki kyuki ek matt bicha di thi humne jisey abhay le gaya, then maine us potli mein se thoda sa drugs phone ke back pr rakha ( pata nahi jada tha ya kam kyuki mujhe nahi pata tha kitna lete hai mere liye to normal hi tha wo) aur naak laga ke ek dum se khich gaya, ek dum se aur pehli baar drugs lene se bhut tez khaasi aayi lekin 20 second baad wo drug mujhe mere brain mein failta hua dikha aur fir kuch hi second baad sab blank ho gaya aur mein wahi bed pe pad gaya, aur kab aankh lagi pata hi nahi chala.
Subah koi mereko jhinjhod ke utha raha tha.
"Utho bhenchod, kya piya tha raat ko"
"Abey AK lawde utha na tera phone baj raha kitni der se"
Main kasmasate huye utha to dekha ki vivek naha dho ke taiyar baitha tha, fir maine apna phone jeb se nikala to pehli nazar time pe padi to 12 baje they, doosri nazar missed call pe padi to kiran ki 72 missed call thi.
Main jhatke se khada hua aur kiran ko call karta usse pehle uska call khud hi aa gaya,
Main:- hello ma'am.
Kiran:- ma'am ke bache phone kyu nahi utha raha tha?
Main:- abhi soke utha hu isliye.
Kiran:- haa kyuki dev aur sonal murder karke late soya hoga na tu.
Main:- wait kiska murder, main to raat ko nashe karke so raha tha beshak check karwa lo, aur nashe mein koi khoon thodi kar sakta hai.
Kiran:- acha us din to bol rahe they ki tum unhe maar doge, wagarah-2.
Main:- main to bolunga ki main pm hu india ka to maan logi, wo to dialouge maar diya tha maine.
Kiran:- dekh tune kuch kiya hai to bata de main tujhe in sab se door rakhungi.
Main:- nahi maine kuch nahi kiya.
Kiran:- okk.
Usne call kat ki to mujhe hasi aa gayi, bc bacha samjhti hai kya jo chikni chupdi baato mein aa jaunga.
Main ander gaya aur bola
Main:-suno be aaj ka din to chud gaya school bhi na jaa Paye. Main, abhay aur deepak to thak gaye, ab vivek rakhega us bade wale ladke pe nazar, sirf nazar.
Vivek:- thik hai tum aram karo.
Fir hum teeno ho liye apne apne ghar aur vivek lag gaya apne kaam pe, ghar pahucha to mujhe yaad aaya ki bc isne puri information nahi di isko to sunana tha lekin socha chodo bacha hai abhi.
Fir kuch jada nahi hua wo hi daily routine khana pina sona, bas aaj raat ko wo drugs liya to bc fir se brain khul gaya pura aisa lag raha tha ko dimag bhut tez hai mera kisi bhi cheez pe concentrate kar sakta hu main, lekin jada der na soch paya aur so gaya.
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update kab aayega ...waiting .. 
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Posted sirupdate kab aayega ...waiting ..
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maine comment post kiya usike saath update aa gaya ???Posted sir
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ekdum zabardast update ..???..bahut buri maut di dev ko ...par sonal ko thoda aasan maut di ...rape karenge ?haath pair kaat denge ?.....mast daraya sonal ko .......par marte marte ghamand nahi gaya ladki ka ?..dhamki deke chali gayi narak me ...par AK ne bhi mast jawaab diya ki narak me intejaar karna ....
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daru to yuhi badnaam hai asli nasha to khoon mein hai".
nice line ...khoon karne ka nasha ki kuch aur hai ???..
par kiran apni chalakhi aajma rahi thi kya ?..jo bol rahi thi khoon tumne kiya hai to bata do me tumhe bacha lungi ...par hero to usse bhi jyada chalakh hai ...
ab hero ko drugs mil gaye hai to paise ki jarurat nahi drugs ke liye ,ek problem solve ....
ab bacha hai bada bhai dev ka ??...dekhte hai uske liye kya plan karta hai AK...
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nice line ...khoon karne ka nasha ki kuch aur hai ???..
par kiran apni chalakhi aajma rahi thi kya ?..jo bol rahi thi khoon tumne kiya hai to bata do me tumhe bacha lungi ...par hero to usse bhi jyada chalakh hai ...
ab hero ko drugs mil gaye hai to paise ki jarurat nahi drugs ke liye ,ek problem solve ....
ab bacha hai bada bhai dev ka ??...dekhte hai uske liye kya plan karta hai AK...
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Awesome update bhai ji, maja aa gaya inki aisi maut dekhke, gazab update tha ye wala, ab aage dekhte hai ki AK bade wale bhai ko kaise marta hai
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wow bhai matalab yahi toh chahiye tha jab bhai marne par aaye toh gender na dekhe sab equality ki baat karte hain toh aise time mai sab yeh kyu kahte hain sale ladki ko kyu marna bhai jab barabari karni hain sahi tarike se karni chahiye naUPDATE:-10 ( Kidnapers Biatch)
Subah meri aankh sabse pehle khuli to dekha vivek niche pada tha abhay bed ke kone mein pada tha, main utha aur ek ciggrete jalayi aur dono ki gaand pe laat maarke uthaya.
Main:- utho lawdo school nahi jaana kya?
Main:- abey utho na bhenchod tumhare baap ka ghar hai kya?
Wo dono apni gaand sehlate huye khade huye aur thoda hath muh dhoke hume teeno apne apne ghar ho liye.
Main ghar pahucha to monu aur uski mummy baithe they hall mein unhone mujhe dekha lekin kuch pucha nahi aur na main kuch bola, sidha room mein gaya aur naha dho ke ready hua.
Aur school ke liye nikal gaya vivek ke sath. Waise ek cheez huyi daaru pine se ki ab sir bhut halka ho gaya tha. Aaj main aur vivek to school jaa rahe they aur abhay dev aur sonal pe nazar rakhe huye tha kyuki parso game bajana tha unka.
Aaj school mein jada kuch hua nahi riya aur rohan school chod ke chale gaye they, jaisa unke papa ne kaha tha priya aayi thi school lekin wo dari huyi thi bichari, mere ko to sab normal lagte huye bhi ek do pe shak tha ki rohan aur riya ke jaane ke baad bhi drugs to supply honge school mein aur mujhe pakadna hai, ye mat sochna main acha banna chahta hu isliye in drugs walo ko pakad raha hu, nana bhul ke bhi nahi mere leke gaand maraye ye aur gaand maraye drugs lene wale beshak mar jaaye mujhe ghanta fark nahi padta kisi se bas mujhe to inke jariye inse upperwalo tak pahuchna hai. Mere leke school mein daru becho, drugs becho ya kotha khol lo, I don't give a flying fuck to anyone.
Khair aaj ka aur kal din hamara bhut normal aur shanti se guzre ye toofaan se pehle ki saanti thi, in do dino mein kuch nahi hua maine planning pe dhyan diya vivek ne padhayi aur ghar pe aur abhay ne un bando pe nazar rakhi.
Gharwale to mujhse ab baat hi nahi karte they bas khana mil jata tha teen time ka main bhi bas khaane ke time hi unki sakal dekhta tha nahi to pure din kamre mein baithke ciggrete pita rehta aur aage ke baare mein sochta rehta.
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Aaj subah aankh khuli to ek nayi energy thi sarir mein kyuki aaj kaand hone wala tha, main bed se utha nahaya dhoya, ready hua aur abhay ko call kiya.
Main:- hello bitch.
Abhay:- abey sone de lawde
Main:- sun be us sonal pe nazar rakh aur deepak ko dev ke piche laga aur shaam ke time adde pe mil apne.
Abhay:- haa haa maloom hai, chal sone de.
Aur phone cut kar diya bc. Main niche gaya khana kha hi raha tha ki dadaji aa gaye aur bole
Dada:- itne dino se konsi duniya mein reh raha hai.
Main:- koi si nahi.
Dada:- ghar pe raha kar aur sab se baat kiya kar.
Main:- mera mann nahi karta kisi se baat karne ka aur suno main aaj raat ghar nahi aaunga.
Dadaji dimag mein ghuste isse pehle nikal liya main waha se bahar aaya to vivek bike leke khada tha.
Main:- jaldi nahi aa sakta tha lawde.
Vivek:- jaldi hi aaya hu time 15 min baad ka hai aane ka.
Main:- haa chal ciggrete le raste mein bhaari talab mach rahi.
Vivek ne bike dauda di raste pe aur aage chal ke ek dukan se ek packet ciggrete liya air usme se do jala ke chal diye firse.
Main:- waise duniya badi madarchod hai!
Vivek:- sabko pata hai.
Main:- haa lekin koi kuch karta nahi.
Vivek:- dekh tu faltu ki baate karke mujhe hasa dega to rehne de.
Actually baat ye thi ki vivek jo hai wo naraz tha mujhse aur abhay se kyuki hum dono isey raat ki party mein shamil nahi kar rahe they.
Main:- dekh lawde baat maan liya kar, hum koi holi nahi khel rahe jo tujhe bhi sath lele.
Vivek:- bhai tum dono gaand marwaoge to main bhi marwaunga.
Main:-akhand chutiya hai tu, tujhe meri kasam agar tune ab jidd ki to.
Vivek ne bura sa muh banaya aur mujhe gali bakte huye bike chalane laga. Hum dono time pe school pahuche aur wo hi daily routine follow kiya aaj bhi.
Lekin mujhe jis ladke pe shaq tha maine usi ladke ko drugs dete huye dekha, i mean surely to nahi keh sakta lekin drugs hi they. Lekin maine koi action nahi liya bhenchod lo jitne lene ho lo mujhe kya mujhe jaroorat hogi tab dhar lunga inhe.
Hum dono ne school mein padhayi ki aur chutti hote hi nikal gaye adde pe.
Adde pe pahuche to hamare sath hi abhay aur deepak bhi aa gaye, hume 4on ne khana khaya jo wo pack kara ke laaye they,
Khana kha ke sutta maara aur wait karne lage raat hone ka, shaam ko Maine vivek ko ghar bhej diya tha kasam wagarh de ke ( vivek bada innocent sa hai bichara kasam wasam mein aa jata hai)
Khair wo time aa gaya jab hume action mein aana tha,
Main:- suno be tum dono jao us club mein, dev ko itna nasha karwao ki wo thik se chal bhi na paaye aur usey uthake yaha le aao, main jaata hu us londiya ko laane.
Abhay:- kyu be londiya ko hum laayenge.
Main:- abey pagal hai kya, us dev ne mera thobda dekha hua hai aur wo ladki mujhe nahi janti.
Abhay:- okk boss.
Main:- aur suno koi dikkat ho to kat lena waha se baad mein dekh lenge.
Abhay:- okk boss
Main:- ab boss ki gaand maroge kya, niklo.
Wo dono car pe nikle, bhenchod hum rent ki car pe kidnap karne wale they ( mujhe soch ke hi hasi aa rahi thi lekin ye time hasne ka nahi dard dene ka tha apne ander ke shaitaan ko jagane ka tha, ye time tha badle ka, jisme anjali didi ka naam sabse upper aata hai lekin fir bhi main ye apne swarth ke liye kar raha tha)
Is motivational speech se meri body charge ho gayi main bhi car mein baitha aur nikla us sonal ke ghar ki taraf aadhe ghante mein, main uske ghar ke paas tha aur ab main car mein baith ke wait kar raha tha uske nikalne ka.
Mera intezaar jaldi hi pura hua, wo ek black audi mein ghar se bahar nikli aur ek aur chal di, maine bhi distance banate huye uske piche laga di apni car, thodi dur chalne pe ek sunsaan road aa gaya bas yahi kaand karna tha mujhe, lekin sayad usey ehsaas ho gaya tha ki koi usey follow kar raha hai isliye usne speed increase kar di thi ek dum se, main bhi daal diya top gear aur pel di full speed mein, beshak uske pass audi ho lekin mere paas thi desi bolero modified karwayi huyi aur road itna acha nahi tha to uski Audi nahi bhaag paa rahi thi kyuki uske tyre bade nahi they aur meri bolero ke tyre truck jaise they bc isliye kudti huyi bhaag rahi thi kuch der mein maine usse apni car aage nikali aur ghumake skid maari, uski bhi gaand fati aur usne bhi brake maare lekin maine pehle bataya road acha nahi tha to uski mehengi car ke brake to lage lekin dheere se isliye uske car takra gayi meri wali se, main itne main bahar nikal chuka tha car se, main apne wali car ke bonut pe se slip karke uski side jump kiya, wo wapis lene wali thi apni car ko lekin maine mara punch uske mirror pe jo ek punch mein bhikar gaya, ( arey lohe ka punch pehen rakha tha main, khali hath marta to hath hi tut jata mera lekin still vibration ho rahi thi hath mein, ye hamara plan tha mirror todne ka kyuki gun wagarh thi nahi jo gun point pe le le knife dikhata to usey lund fark nahi padta balki mujhpe hi gadi chada deti.)
Maine hath ander daal ke lock khola aur uska hath pakad ke bahar khicha, wo jhatke se bahar aa gayi kyuki patli si hot mirchi type ki thi wo, bc ek baar ko to fida ho gaya uspe lekin jaldi hi apne jazbaato pe kabu paa liya maine, uski taraf dekha to mujhe kuch negative feeling aayi aur maine ye sense karte hi piche palat ke dekhna chaha to usne di mere aand pe kick, main apne ande pakad ke jhuka to usne de muh pe ek kick aur kuch kung fu type stance leke khadi ho gayi. (to bc ye baat hai hasne ki still jo bhi ho main ek 18.5 saal ka ladka hu to iske samne to bacha hi tha main isliye ye chaudi ho rahi thi)
Maine apne face se khoon saaf kiya aur uski taraf badha lekin wo thoda piche hati aur jump karke sidha chest pe ek kick di. ( Bhenchod vivek ne information mein ye to bataya hi nahi is lawdi ko martial arts aate hai, lawde ko maarunga bc milne do ek baar)
Main aur kuch soch tha usse pehle mere smart se face ek punch laga uska, lekin mujhe iska jada asar nahi hua, beshak usko ye loda-lahson aata ho lekin takat to nahi thi, aur ye sochke hi maine mara uski naak pe full speed punch, usne iski umeed nahi ki thi wo koi chindi-chor samajh rahi thi mujhe.
Ek punch mein uske aankho se aansoo aa gaye, lekin uska dard dekhke mere ander ek alag si energy aa gayi aur maine non-stop 3-4 punch aur diye uske thobde pe aur wo ab dheeli ho gayi usey chillane tak ka moka nahi diya, uske face se blood bhi nikalne laga tha jo mere hath pe lag chuka tha, mann kiya ki abhi maar du isey lekin control kiya maine.
Maine uske dono hath bandhe aur uske muh pe tape lagayi taaki wo chillaye na aur uska phone wahi feka. Usko uthake khud ki car mein dala aur nikal liya usko leke. Raste bhar main yahi soch raha tha ki inko kaisi maut du, ye meri pehla murder hoga sayad nahi, sayad nahi be offcourse ye mera pehla murder nahi hai, isse pehle bhi maine ek jaan li hai inhi hatho se. ( Waise abhay aur deepak aate to wo isey nahi kidnap kar paate kyuki wo dara dhamka ke laane ki soch rahe they ki ladki hai dar jayegi lekin ye bc chandal nikali, aur wo dono sidh purush ladki pe hath nahi uthate aur ye un dono ko pel deti, aur mujhe ghanta fark nahi padta beshak ladka ho ya ladki).
Main apne adde pe pahucha yaani usi room pe, maine usey car se bahar nikala aur usey room ke ander leke aaya jaha abhay baitha tha aur wo dev kursi pe bandha tha deepak ghar jaa chuka tha apne kyuki family wala tha wo usey jada involve nahi kar sakte they, sonal ander aayi aur ander dev ko dekhke chauk gayi aur dev usey dekh ke.
Main:- kaisa laga surprise.
Dev ne mujhe dekha aur dekhte hi gaand fat gayi uski.
Ab dekhte hai aage kya hota hai sath bane rahe aur apna-2 feedback niche dete rahe.
TO BE CONTINUED ??