Thriller Murder......

[AK_01]

UPDATE - 08​

hath ke ichare se nita ko bolne se rokta hai lucky or sandhya ke call ko receive karta hai.


Lucky :- haan bol sandhya kya khabar hai? ( kuch janakri milne ki khushi me puchta hai)


Sandhya :- Sir.. humne Pravin ke ghar ka tala tod ke pure ghar ki chanbhin ki par ek pen drive ke alawa or kuch nahi mila..


Lucky :- kyaa baat kar rahi hai ? Or kuch nahi mila ...agar pravin pehle se murder karne ki planing se yaha nahi aaya ho to kuch to milna hi chahiye tha . ( thodi nirasa se bola)


Sandhya :- are sir .. aap sink to sahi .. case ke lagti dusri koi chiz nahi mili to kya Hua hume jo pend drive mili hai uske dum par hi Pravin ko jel me daal sakte hai..( thoda khush hote hue kaha )


Lucky :- kyu! Aisa kya hai us pend drive me ? ( khush hote hue pucha)


Sandhya :- Sir, Pravin ne jitni premlila ki hai sab is pend drive me hai. Sab video hai is pend drive me jisme Pravin ke ashlil video hai. But sir dekhne ki baat ye hai ki isme har video me alag-alag ladkiya hai.. but sir isme ek bhi Roshni ka video nah hai.


Lucky :- well done sandhya!..koi baat nahi us pend drive me roshni ka video na ho but hamare pas Pravin ke khilaf ek proof to hath laga. Ho sakta hai usme se hi is case ko solve karne ki kadi mil jaye. Ek kaam kar sandhya us pend drive ko leke tu yaha abu me aaja.


Sandhya :- yes sir! But uske pehle ek kam khatam karna hai.. Pravin ke dance class ka tala tod kar talashi leni hai vaha ki .. ho sakta hai dance class mese bhi kuch saboot mil jaye.


Lucky :- ohh yes sandhya! You are right! Or ho sakta hai Pravin dance class me hi chup ke betha ho.. Suresh bhi nilesh ke ghar ki talashi lene nikal gaya hai shayad vaha se bhi kuch proof mil jaye. Acha to sandhya dance class ki talashi lene ke baad mujhe call karna .


Sandhya :- yes sir !


Sandhya se pend drive wali baat sun kar lucky nita ki taraf shak se dekhta or sochne lagta hai ki..


" sandhya ke kahe anusaar pend drive me Pravin ke ashlil video mile hai. But usme se ek bhi video Roshni ke sath ka nahi hai. Or Nita ka kehna hai ki Pravin or Roshni ne sab sima par kar di thi to phir pravin ne Roshni ke sath bhi ashlil video banaya hi hoga. Shayad roshni ke murder ke piche ki vajah bhi yahi hi sakti hai. Aise kaie khyalo ne lucky ke dimang ko gher liya tha. Or achanak hi lucky ko kuch yaad aata hai or Nita ko puchta hai..


Lucky :- nita tujhe to pata hi tha ki Pravin married tha. Right !.. chalo man kiya ki Roshni uske pyaar me andhi ho gay thi but jab tumhe pata chala ki Pravin married hai it tune Roshni ko samjaya but vo nahi samji to tune ye baat roshni ke maa baap ko kehna jaroori nahi samja ? Tune kyu aise rishtey me roshni ka sath diya?


Nita :- sir mene roshni ko bahot samjaya or dhamki bhi di ki vo Pravin ko nahi chhodegi to me uske maa baap ko bata dungi ..but Roshni ke papa Heart patient the to mujhe phir chup rehna hi thik laga. Me aisa soch rahi thi ki is age me har kisiko kisi ke taraf attraction hota hai or vakt ke sath attraction or pyaar ke bich ka antar samaj aa jata hai. But Roshni ke sath aisi ghanta ho jayegi aisa to mene socha bhi nahi tha. Or me to hamesha us rishtey ke khilaf hi thi.


Lucky :- to phir Roshni tere sath tracking camp me ja rahi hai aisa juth bol kar kyu aay ye to tere support ke bina ho hi nahi sakta tha.


Nita :- haan sir mene hi Roshni ko Abu me aane me sath diya tha..kyuki usne mujhe kaha tha ki vo or Pravin dono jaldi hi shadi karne wale hai or Pravin uski patni se divorce le raha hai. Roshni ne kaha ki Pravin usko bahot pyaar karta hai or ab dono hi ek dusre ke bina reh nahi sakte. But me Pravin ke aise iraade se bilkul anjan thi. Me to sirf ek love Bird's ko unki manjil paar karne me help kar rahi thi.. mene sapne me bhi nahi socha tha ki Roshni ke sath aisa ho jayega. ( itna kehte hi nita rone lagti hai)


thodi der me hi suresh bhi nilesh ke ghar ki talashi leke aa jata hai or lucky ko report deta hai .


Suresh :- sir humne nilesh ke pure ghar me chanbhin ki par kuch khas saboot nahi mila. Nilesh ghar me akela rehta tha is liye ghar me uske akele ka hi saman tha. But uske kapde or ghar me mili sharab ki khali bottle se pata chalta hai ki babot shokhin mijaj ka aadmi tha . Or haan aaju-baju ke gharo par puchne se pata chala hai ki nilesh bahot baar alag-alag ladkiyo ke sath dikhay diya hai.


Lucky :- ohhh! Sandhya ko bhi Pravin ke ghar me ek pend drive mili hai jisme Pravin ke ashlil video hai alag-alag ladkiyo ke sath.. ho sakta hai Pravin or Nilesh dono mil kar hi aisi planing karte hoge.


Suresh :- ho sakta hai sir ! Or dono ek sath gayab hai to ho sakta hai dono ne mil kar hi Roshni ka murder kiya hoga.


Lucky :- kiya hoga nahi Suresh mujhe pura andaja hai ki un dono ne hi roshni ka murder kiya hai. But itni safaay se murder karna or bhag jana ye to kisi serial killer ka hi kam ho sakta hai. But dekhne ki baat ye hai ki dono maise kisi ki bhi history me kaisa bhi crime likha nahi hai. Chota sa chori ka bhi case nahi hai dono par.


Suresh :- haan sir! Murder itni savdhani se kiya hai ki room ke aas-pas ke roomo me rehte kisi bhi tourists ko roshni ke chillane ki avaj tak nahi sunay. But sir agar dono serial killer hai to kahi pe to case hua hi hoga .. or dono yuhu lash ko hotel me na chhod ke bhag jate.. lash ko kahi thikane laga ke bhagte..
sir apke order anusaar bus or railway station par puchtach ki hai par kisi ne bhi dono maise ek ko bhi nahi dekha .. matlab ke dono ko bus ya train me safar karte hue kisi ne bhi nahi dekha..


Lucky :- kya? to kya woh dono abu me hi kahi chupe hue hai. Ya phir vo dono dharti me sama gaye? Suresh ye dono mujhe kisi bhi halat me chahiye.


Suresh :- haan sir aisa lagta hai yahi abu me hi koi unhe chupane me help kar raha hai .. ho sakta hai hotel ka koi aadmi ho jo nilesh or pravin chupane me help karta ho.


Lucky :- hmmm... aisa ho sakta hai. Ek kam kar Suresh tu dubara puri hotel ki talashi karke aa.. kuch to aisa hoga no hamari nazro se bach gaya hoga ..kuch to clue to milga hi.


Suresh :- ok sir me abhi hi do tin police constable leke hotel pe jata hu.. and sir Parvin or Nilesh ka wanted photo news pepper or news channel per de diya hai jisase in dono maise kisi ko bhi kisine kahi dekha hoga to hume jan kar shake.


Lucky :- ohk! good ..


itne me hi lucky ke mobile me ek unknown number se call aata hai . Lucky call dekh ke uthata hai..


Lucky :- " hello sub inspector lucky rajput speaking " who are you?
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To Be Continued....

lucky ko unknown number se kiska call aaya hoga? Ye dekhte hai next update me..

sare update read kiye story sahi disha me ja rahi hai..

 

[parkas]

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[Smith_15]

Waiting for next update please

 

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[Lucky..]

UPDATE - 09​

Ab tak :-

lucky ko ek unknown number se call aata hai .

LUCKY :- hello.! Sub inspector lucky rajput speaking .. " who are you?."

UNKNOWN: - saab!. mera name samsher hai, ye jo aapne news channel me photo dikhay haina saab usme se ek banda kal ko mere truck me chada tha saab..

LUCKY :- kyaa truck me?.. kon sa banda chada tha tumhare truck me ?.

SAMSHER: - ji saab vo nilesh name ka jo banda news channel me dikhaya hai na ussi ne kal subhah ko mare se lipt li thi ..

LUCKY :- achha!!..to kaha chhoda us bande ko?.

SAMSHER :- ji saab usko to mene Jaipur me chhoda tha saab.

LUCKY :- ohhhh achha..!! Or vo dusra banda nahi tha kya uske sath?.

SAMSHER :- ji nahi saab!!.. uss dusre bande ko to mene nahi dekha.

LUCKY :- thik hai.. ek kam karo tum idhar police station aa jao, Tumhara bayan lena padega.

SAMSHER :- kya saab udhar police station aana padega! Nahi..nahi Saab me raha garib aadmi..truck chala ke apna or apne parivar ka pet bhar raha hu. Mereko kyu bich me fasate ho saab?.

LUCKY :- dekho agar tum Police station nahi aaye to jaroor me tumhe fasa dunga..is liye jaldi se police station aa jao. Or ghabrane ki jaroorat nahi hai tumne kanoon ki help ki hai. Tumhari hifazat karna ab hamara kam hai.

SAMSHER :- ji saab! Abhi to me Jaipur me hi hu. Ab Abu aane ke liye nikalta hu.

LUCKY :- dekho koi chalaki mat karna. Abu aake tum sidha police station par hi aaoge..ok

SAMSHER :- ji saab!!.. me abhi nikalta hu.

samsher ka call rakhte hi lucky kisi gehri soch me pad gaya or ye dekh kar Suresh bola " kya hua sir? Kiska call tha?."

LUCKY :- ek min suresh!.. hmm mis.nita aap abhi ja sakti ho. But tum log ko abu chhod kar nahi jana hai abhi..jaroorat padi to me tumhe dubara bulaunga .

NITA :- ji sir..!!

( uske baad nita or roshni ke maa-baap abu ke ek guest house me chale jate hai)

LUCKY :- haan to Suresh koi samsher name ke aadmi ka call tha. Usne kaha ki vo ek truck drive hai or usne kal subhah nilesh ko Jaipur tak lift di thi.

SURESH :- ohhh!!!..matlab nilesh jaipur me chup kar betha hai.

LUCKY :- No..Suresh ho sakta hai nilesh jaipur me utar ke vaha se apne gaon bhojpur me jake vahi kahi chup gaya ho..

SURESH :- ho sakta hai sir..! But bhojpur bahot chota gaon hai. Yadi nilesh vaha chupa hua hota to ab tak waha ki police usse pakad leti.

LUCKY :- Hmmm...! You are right..! But Jaipur bahot badi city hai. Itni badi city me vo kaha chup kar betha hoga harami.!

SURESH :- sir uska mobile location bhi tries nahi ho raha. Yadi vo ek bar bhi apna mobile on kar de to uska perfect location mil jaye.

LUCKY :- hmm!.. chalo koi baat nahi hume ek baat to pata chali ki vo Jaipur me chupa hua ho sakta hai. But is Pravin ke bare me kuch bhi jankari nahi mili abhi tak usse kaise bhi khojna padega. Pata nahi use aasman nigal gaya ya dharti me sama gaya .

SURESH :- Right Sir!..but ek baar nilesh hamare hath lag jay to uske thru hum pravin tak pahoch sakte hai. Or sir jaipur ki police bhi in dono ko dhund rahi hai. Or aise kab tak chup kar bethe rahenge vo dono.

LUCKY :- haan suresh! Kabhi na kabhi to unhe bahar aana hi padega. Ek kam kar suresh Jaipur ki sab hotel or guest house me nilesh ki photo bhej do shayad kisi hotel ya guest house me chupa ho sakta hai. Or yadi kisike ghar me chupa hoga to bhi insaan ko bhukh to lagti hai na to khana mangata hoga ya kisi restaurant me jake khata hoga to kisi insaan ne to use dekha hi hoga .

SURESH :- haan sir me abhi jaipur ki police ko nilesh ki photo sabhi hotel,guest houses or restaurant me bhejne ko Kehta hu.

LUCKY :- ok to ab me hamari team ke sath hotel hillok chalta hu or dubara puri hotel me investigation karta hu. Or pehle mujhe hotel ke manager rajkunvar se hotel ka naksha taiyar karvana hai. Ho sakta hai hotel me koi khufya room ya rasta mil jaye.

SURESH :- haan or ho sakta hai pravin abhi hotel me hi chupa ho. But sir agar aisa hua to pakka hotel ki koi aisi vyakti shamil hogi jisko hotel ke sab khufya rasta ya room ka pata ho.

LUCKY :- you are right suresh!..or yadi aise khufya room ya rasta hai to phir nilesh se jyada koi aise insaan ko pata hona chahiye jisko aise khufya room ya rasta ki jaroorat padti ho.

SURESH :- haan sir .! Uske liye hotel ke malik mukesh harjani ko hi milna padega.

LUCKY :- right!.. but suresh ye mukesh harjani pravin ki help kyu karega ? Usme uska kya fayda? Ulta iss murder case se to mukesh harjani ko nuksan ho raha hai.. uski hotel ki badnami ho rahi hai is murder case se. Pakka koi hotel ke staff maise hi gaddar hoga. Ok to Suresh tum Jaipur ki police ko nilesh ki photo bhejva do me rajkunvar ki maddat se hotel ki janch karta hu agar koi khufya room ya rasta ho to to use khojne ki koshish karta hu.

SURESH :- okk sir!..done !.

suresh lucky ko salute karke jaipur police ko nilesh ke bare ms inform karne ke liye cabin mese nikal jata hai. Suresh ke jane ke baad lucky hotel ke manager rajkunvar ko call lagata hai.

Hotel ka manager rajkunvar lucky ka call uthate hi bolta hai " haan lucky tumhare kahe anusaar mene puri hotel khali karva di hai. Hotel me rehne aaye hue sabhi musafir ki jankari bhi le li hai.. Ab hotel stuff ke siva koi nahi hai.

LUCKY :- ohk good!..ab sun kunvar mujhe tumse ye puchna tha ki hotel me koi khufya room ya rasta hai kya?

MANAGER :- ji haan sir!. Hotel me kitchen ke niche ek gufa hai. Kitchen ka sara saman or anaj vaha rakhte hai or ussi gufa me ek side ek darvaja hai jiske under se khufya room tak jane ka rasta hai. Jiska use sirf hotel ke malik mukesh harjani hi kar sakte hai. Or uss room ki chabi bhi hotel ke malik mukesh harjani ke paas hi rehti hai.

LUCKY :- ohhh!..to kya iss room ke bare me sare staff ko maloom hai?

MANAGER :- ji nahi sir !.. is room ke bare me mailk ke siva mujhe or malik ke kuch khas logo ko hi pata hai .

LUCKY :- ohh! Achaa to kunvar me abhi apni team ke sath hotel aa raha hu. Or mujhe uss room ko check karna hai to mukesh harjani no call kar ke chabi ke sath hotel bula le or hotel staff ke sabhi log mujhe vaha hajir chahiye.

MANAGER: - ji sir!.. but kavita abhi achanak uski maa ki tabiyat kharab ho gay is liye woh ghar jane ke liye nikal gay hai.

LUCKY :- kyaa?.. meri permission ke bina usse jane kaise diya?

MANAGER :- sorry sir!.. but uski maa ki tabiyat gambhir thi is liye usse jane ki izajat deni padi.

LUCKY :- achha okk me aa raha hu waha phir baat karte hai .

MANAGER :- okk sir!..

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To Be Continued.........

 

[Lucky..]

Agar ye dono serial killer hai to inhone aur bhi identities bana rakhi hongi jisse inke uper koi ilzaam naa aaye. Phone shayaad parvin ka hoga yaa fir kisi aise ka jisse inke baare mein pata hoga. Nice update.

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