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UPDATE - 01



Rajasthan ki Khubhsurat Parvatmala par bacha ek nagar...matlab ke mount aabu ka pahaadi ilaaka..or uske uper lucky talaab ke baju me hi bani hue "Hotel Hillok" me morning ke 10 baj rahe the.


Hotel ka manager Rajkunvar Sinh.. hotel ke bahar ke vatavaran ka anand le rahe the..shardi ke mausam ki Subhah thi or Sun bhi badlo ke piche chup kar thoda sa prakas nikal raha tha.


is saal varsha ritu me bahot baarish hue thi..is liye pure parvat par Green chadar chada rakhi ho aisa lag raha tha..Rajkunvar Sinh to is kudarat ke rache hue Khubhsurat or adhbhut nazare ko dekh kar usme hi kho gaya tha..par tabhi vaha par achanak hotel ka waiter Raju aa gaya or usne rajkunvar sinh ka dhyan toda.


Raju :- saab! Room number 108 me se bahot hi gandh aa rahi hai, kuch ajib hi gandh hai.


Manager :- gandh! Kaisi gandh! ?


Raju :- pata nahi saab!.. kuch ajib hi gandh aa rahi hai.


Raju ki baat sun kar manager reception counter par jata hai..


Manager :- Kiske name par register hai room number 108?


( reception par khadi Kavita Sharma ko register me dekhne ko kaha. )


Kavita Sharma :- Sir koi new married couple hai.. Pravin sinh and uski wife. Abhi do din pehle hi unhone hamari hotel me room book kiya hai..
But ek baat bahot ajib hai ..jab se ye couple aaye hai tab se ek baar bhi room se bahar nahi aaye. Nahi yahaa ki kisi bhi ghumne ki jagah par gaye hai ..or nahi is couple ne hamari hotel maise kuch khana order kiya hai..bahar se bhi kuch khana us room maise order nahi hua hai.



Raju :- new married couple hai na maddem is liye ekdusre me aise kho gaye hoge ki ..khane-pine ka bhi bhul gaye hoge


( Raju haste hue bola )


kavita raju ko chup rehne ka bol kar use ankhe dikha kar aage boli


Kavita :- Sir mujhe to pehle se hi ye couple kuch ajib lag raha tha. Dono ki age me bhi bahot different lag raha tha. Ladki ladke se age me bahot chhoti ho aisa lag raha tha.. jab room book karne ke liye maine mr.pravin ke pas advance me hajar rs mange to usne uski wife ke pas se paise leke diye. Jab mene pucha ki aap logo ka kitne din ke liye room chahiye to dono hi ek side jake kuch dheere se kuch der bate karne lage or phir aake kaha ki 3 din ke liye room chahiye. Mene jab pucha ki yaha ke ghumne ki jagah par jane ne liye kisi guide ki ya car ki jaroorat ho to hum arrange kar denge...par unhone kaha ki unhe kahi ghumne nahi jana unhe sirf yaha aaram hi karna hai .


Manager rajkunvar sinh Kavita ki baat sun kar kuch der sochne lage fir raju no room number 108 ki extra key leke apne piche aane ko kaha. Manager jyare first floor ki lobhi me pahocha jaha room no 108 tha. Lobhi me pahochte hi vaha par bhayankar gandh aane lagi. Manager or Raju ne gandh se bachne ke liye apne muh par rumal bandh diya.


Manager rajkunvar a raju ke paas se extra key li or darvaja khola. Darvaja khulte hi under ka nazara dekh kar manager or raju dono ke dil ki dhadkane badh gay..


room ke farsh par ek ardhnang halat me ek ladki ki laas padi thi. Uske sar par se bahot sara khun nikal kar farsh gira hua tha.. room ki halat bhi kharab thi sab chize idhar udhar padi hue thi..ye sab nazara dekh kar raju to ghabra ke behosh hone laga tha..manager bhi laas ko dekh kar ghabra gaya tha ..uske hath per bhi thande pad gaye the.. thodi der baad normal hoke manager rajkunvar a mount aabu ki police station thi uske under duty kar rahe inspector or uske khas friend Lucky Rajput ko call lagaya..


Lucky :- ( call utha ke) hello!..haa bol kunvar aaj subhah-subhah mujhe kyu yaad kiya? Or tu itna ghabraya hua kyu lag raha hai?


Manager :- lucky tu jaldi hi hotel aaja ..yaha hotel ke room no 108 me ek ladki ki lash mili hai.


Lucky :- kyaa...lash? ( ekdum sock ho ke).


Lucky :- sun kunvar me jab tak na aau tab tak kisi ko bhi us dead body ko ya room ki kisi bhi chiz ko hath mat lagane dena..me apni team leke yaha se nikalta hu okk..


call rakhte hi manager ne side me pade raju jo lash ko dekh kar behosh ho gaya tha uske chehre par pani dal kar uthaya... or use room ke bahar le jake kaha ..


Manager :- dekh raju mene abhi hi mere khas dost hai jo yaha ki police station me job karta hai..use call karke is lash ke bare me bata diya hai..vo thodi der me hi apni team leke yaha aa jayega..usne is room ki kisi bhi chiz ya lash ko touch karne se mana kiya hai..and is lash vali baat kahi se bhi hotel ke bahar nahi jani chahiye..or yaha dusre room me jo geust reh rahe hai unhe bhi khabar nahi padne deni hai.


( manager bahot hi tension me ye sab raju ko keh raha tha).


thodi der me police ki jeep ka siren ka avaj aane laga.. Lucky apne sath duty kar rahe police constable Suresh Chouhan or ledy police constable Sandhya Maheshvari ke sath puri team ko leke aa gaya .


receptionist Kavita to abhi bhi is baat anjan thi..or vo police ko puri team ke sath dekh kar ek dum soch ho gay thi..


Kavita :- good morning sir..


Lucky :- good morning medam..kaha hai apke manager saheb?


Kavita :- sir manager saheb to first floor par ke room no108 me gaye hue hai.. but aap yaha! Yu achanak..kuch kam tha kya sir ??..


lucky kavita ki baat is javab diye bina hi first floor ki taraf room no 108 ki taraf apni team ko order dete hue aage chal diye..kavita to ye dekh kar or jyada sock ho gay..kavita ko dout hone laga ki room no 108 me kuch ajib ghatna ghati hai.


kavita bhi police ki team ke piche jane ke liye nikalti hai ki tabhi lucky ko pata nahi kuch yaad aata hai or vo piche mud ke reception par aake kavita ko kehta hai ki tum abhi yahi par raho or kisi ko bhi hotel ke under enter na hone de..


or ek constable ko bhi hotel ke main dor par khada rehne ko kehta hai or order deta hai ki.. " koi bhi anjan vyakti hotel ke under aani nahi chahiye or hotel ke under se koi bahar bhi nahi jana chahiye. "


Itna keh kar lucky room no 108 ki taraf nikal jata hai..

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To Be Continued
 
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Lucky..

“ɪ ᴋɴᴏᴡ ᴡʜᴏ ɪ ᴀᴍ, ᴀɴᴅ ɪ ᴀᴍ ᴅᴀᴍɴ ᴘʀᴏᴜᴅ ᴏꜰ ɪᴛ.”
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Hope this story will touch our hearts
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:congrats: For starting new story thread.....
Congratulations for your 1st story Lucky bhai.
I think this is your first story in thriller prefix.
THANK YOU...AND UPDATE POSTED.

Ye Meri thriller prefix par first story hai to review deke batana jaroor ki sahi se likh pa raha hu ya nahi..
 

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UPDATE - 01



Rajasthan ki Khubhsurat Parvatmala par bacha ek nagar...matlab ke mount aabu ka pahaadi ilaaka..or uske uper lucky talaab ke baju me hi bani hue "Hotel Hillok" me morning ke 10 baj rahe the.


Hotel ka manager Rajkunvar Sinh.. hotel ke bahar ke vatavaran ka anand le rahe the..shardi ke mausam ki Subhah thi or Sun bhi badlo ke piche chup kar thoda sa prakas nikal raha tha.


is saal varsha ritu me bahot baarish hue thi..is liye pure parvat par Green chadar chada rakhi ho aisa lag raha tha..Rajkunvar Sinh to is kudarat ke rache hue Khubhsurat or adhbhut nazare ko dekh kar usme hi kho gaya tha..par tabhi vaha par achanak hotel ka waiter Raju aa gaya or usne rajkunvar sinh ka dhyan toda.


Raju :- saab! Room number 108 me se bahot hi gandh aa rahi hai, kuch ajib hi gandh hai.


Manager :- gandh! Kaisi gandh! ?


Raju :- pata nahi saab!.. kuch ajib hi gandh aa rahi hai.


Raju ki baat sun kar manager reception counter par jata hai..


Manager :- Kiske name par register hai room number 108?


( reception par khadi Kavita Sharma ko register me dekhne ko kaha. )


Kavita Sharma :- Sir koi new married couple hai.. Pravin sinh and uski wife. Abhi do din pehle hi unhone hamari hotel me room book kiya hai..
But ek baat bahot ajib hai ..jab se ye couple aaye hai tab se ek baar bhi room se bahar nahi aaye. Nahi yahaa ki kisi bhi ghumne ki jagah par gaye hai ..or nahi is couple ne hamari hotel maise kuch khana order kiya hai..bahar se bhi kuch khana us room maise order nahi hua hai.



Raju :- new married couple hai na maddem is liye ekdusre me aise kho gaye hoge ki ..khane-pine ka bhi bhul gaye hoge


( Raju haste hue bola )


kavita raju ko chup rehne ka bol kar use ankhe dikha kar aage boli


Kavita :- Sir mujhe to pehle se hi ye couple kuch ajib lag raha tha. Dono ki age me bhi bahot different lag raha tha. Ladki ladke se age me bahot chhoti ho aisa lag raha tha.. jab room book karne ke liye maine mr.pravin ke pas advance me hajar rs mange to usne uski wife ke pas se paise leke diye. Jab mene pucha ki aap logo ka kitne din ke liye room chahiye to dono hi ek side jake kuch dheere se kuch der bate karne lage or phir aake kaha ki 3 din ke liye room chahiye. Mene jab pucha ki yaha ke ghumne ki jagah par jane ne liye kisi guide ki ya car ki jaroorat ho to hum arrange kar denge...par unhone kaha ki unhe kahi ghumne nahi jana unhe sirf yaha aaram hi karna hai .


Manager rajkunvar sinh Kavita ki baat sun kar kuch der sochne lage fir raju no room number 108 ki extra key leke apne piche aane ko kaha. Manager jyare first floor ki lobhi me pahocha jaha room no 108 tha. Lobhi me pahochte hi vaha par bhayankar gandh aane lagi. Manager or Raju ne gandh se bachne ke liye apne muh par rumal bandh diya.


Manager rajkunvar a raju ke paas se extra key li or darvaja khola. Darvaja khulte hi under ka nazara dekh kar manager or raju dono ke dil ki dhadkane badh gay..


room ke farsh par ek ardhnang halat me ek ladki ki laas padi thi. Uske sar par se bahot sara khun nikal kar farsh gira hua tha.. room ki halat bhi kharab thi sab chize idhar udhar padi hue thi..ye sab nazara dekh kar raju to ghabra ke behosh hone laga tha..manager bhi laas ko dekh kar ghabra gaya tha ..uske hath per bhi thande pad gaye the.. thodi der baad normal hoke manager rajkunvar a mount aabu ki police station thi uske under duty kar rahe inspector or uske khas friend Lucky Rajput ko call lagaya..


Lucky :- ( call utha ke) hello!..haa bol kunvar aaj subhah-subhah mujhe kyu yaad kiya? Or tu itna ghabraya hua kyu lag raha hai?


Manager :- lucky tu jaldi hi hotel aaja ..yaha hotel ke room no 108 me ek ladki ki lash mili hai.


Lucky :- kyaa...lash? ( ekdum sock ho ke).


Lucky :- sun kunvar me jab tak na aau tab tak kisi ko bhi us dead body ko ya room ki kisi bhi chiz ko hath mat lagane dena..me apni team leke yaha se nikalta hu okk..


call rakhte hi manager ne side me pade raju jo lash ko dekh kar behosh ho gaya tha uske chehre par pani dal kar uthaya... or use room ke bahar le jake kaha ..


Manager :- dekh raju mene abhi hi mere khas dost hai jo yaha ki police station me job karta hai..use call karke is lash ke bare me bata diya hai..vo thodi der me hi apni team leke yaha aa jayega..usne is room ki kisi bhi chiz ya lash ko touch karne se mana kiya hai..and is lash vali baat kahi se bhi hotel ke bahar nahi jani chahiye..or yaha dusre room me jo geust reh rahe hai unhe bhi khabar nahi padne deni hai.


( manager bahot hi tension me ye sab raju ko keh raha tha).


thodi der me police ki jeep ka siren ka avaj aane laga.. Lucky apne sath duty kar rahe police constable Suresh Chouhan or ledy police constable Sandhya Maheshvari ke sath puri team ko leke aa gaya .


receptionist Kavita to abhi bhi is baat anjan thi..or vo police ko puri team ke sath dekh kar ek dum soch ho gay thi..


Kavita :- good morning sir..


Lucky :- good morning medam..kaha hai apke manager saheb?


Kavita :- sir manager saheb to first floor par ke room no108 me gaye hue hai.. but aap yaha! Yu achanak..kuch kam tha kya sir ??..


lucky kavita ki baat is javab diye bina hi first floor ki taraf room no 108 ki taraf apni team ko order dete hue aage chal diye..kavita to ye dekh kar or jyada sock ho gay..kavita ko dout hone laga ki room no 108 me kuch ajib ghatna ghati hai.


kavita bhi police ki team ke piche jane ke liye nikalti hai ki tabhi lucky ko pata nahi kuch yaad aata hai or vo piche mud ke reception par aake kavita ko kehta hai ki tum abhi yahi par raho or kisi ko bhi hotel ke under enter na hone de..


or ek constable ko bhi hotel ke main dor par khada rehne ko kehta hai or order deta hai ki.. " koi bhi anjan vyakti hotel ke under aani nahi chahiye or hotel ke under se koi bahar bhi nahi jana chahiye. "


Itna keh kar lucky room no 108 ki taraf nikal jata hai..

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To Be Continued
nice update bhai

to ek naya juda hotal main rahne ke liye aaya our kvita ke puchhne par dono kuch dur jakar baat kiya tab akar bole 3 din rukenge jo kuch ajib hai jo un dono ko pahle se pata nahi tha uneh kitne din hotal main rahna hai our jab se room main gaye hai bahar bhi nahi nikale nahi khana ka koi odar kiya jo he bahut hi ajib hai

our mainejar ke room dekhne par ladki ko lass padi hui hai andar to kya uske pati ne hi use maar diya magar q our agar wah uski patni nahi hai to phir kisi lass hai our room main pati patni bhi nahi hai

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UPDATE - 01



Rajasthan ki Khubhsurat Parvatmala par bacha ek nagar...matlab ke mount aabu ka pahaadi ilaaka..or uske uper lucky talaab ke baju me hi bani hue "Hotel Hillok" me morning ke 10 baj rahe the.


Hotel ka manager Rajkunvar Sinh.. hotel ke bahar ke vatavaran ka anand le rahe the..shardi ke mausam ki Subhah thi or Sun bhi badlo ke piche chup kar thoda sa prakas nikal raha tha.


is saal varsha ritu me bahot baarish hue thi..is liye pure parvat par Green chadar chada rakhi ho aisa lag raha tha..Rajkunvar Sinh to is kudarat ke rache hue Khubhsurat or adhbhut nazare ko dekh kar usme hi kho gaya tha..par tabhi vaha par achanak hotel ka waiter Raju aa gaya or usne rajkunvar sinh ka dhyan toda.


Raju :- saab! Room number 108 me se bahot hi gandh aa rahi hai, kuch ajib hi gandh hai.


Manager :- gandh! Kaisi gandh! ?


Raju :- pata nahi saab!.. kuch ajib hi gandh aa rahi hai.


Raju ki baat sun kar manager reception counter par jata hai..


Manager :- Kiske name par register hai room number 108?


( reception par khadi Kavita Sharma ko register me dekhne ko kaha. )


Kavita Sharma :- Sir koi new married couple hai.. Pravin sinh and uski wife. Abhi do din pehle hi unhone hamari hotel me room book kiya hai..
But ek baat bahot ajib hai ..jab se ye couple aaye hai tab se ek baar bhi room se bahar nahi aaye. Nahi yahaa ki kisi bhi ghumne ki jagah par gaye hai ..or nahi is couple ne hamari hotel maise kuch khana order kiya hai..bahar se bhi kuch khana us room maise order nahi hua hai.



Raju :- new married couple hai na maddem is liye ekdusre me aise kho gaye hoge ki ..khane-pine ka bhi bhul gaye hoge


( Raju haste hue bola )


kavita raju ko chup rehne ka bol kar use ankhe dikha kar aage boli


Kavita :- Sir mujhe to pehle se hi ye couple kuch ajib lag raha tha. Dono ki age me bhi bahot different lag raha tha. Ladki ladke se age me bahot chhoti ho aisa lag raha tha.. jab room book karne ke liye maine mr.pravin ke pas advance me hajar rs mange to usne uski wife ke pas se paise leke diye. Jab mene pucha ki aap logo ka kitne din ke liye room chahiye to dono hi ek side jake kuch dheere se kuch der bate karne lage or phir aake kaha ki 3 din ke liye room chahiye. Mene jab pucha ki yaha ke ghumne ki jagah par jane ne liye kisi guide ki ya car ki jaroorat ho to hum arrange kar denge...par unhone kaha ki unhe kahi ghumne nahi jana unhe sirf yaha aaram hi karna hai .


Manager rajkunvar sinh Kavita ki baat sun kar kuch der sochne lage fir raju no room number 108 ki extra key leke apne piche aane ko kaha. Manager jyare first floor ki lobhi me pahocha jaha room no 108 tha. Lobhi me pahochte hi vaha par bhayankar gandh aane lagi. Manager or Raju ne gandh se bachne ke liye apne muh par rumal bandh diya.


Manager rajkunvar a raju ke paas se extra key li or darvaja khola. Darvaja khulte hi under ka nazara dekh kar manager or raju dono ke dil ki dhadkane badh gay..


room ke farsh par ek ardhnang halat me ek ladki ki laas padi thi. Uske sar par se bahot sara khun nikal kar farsh gira hua tha.. room ki halat bhi kharab thi sab chize idhar udhar padi hue thi..ye sab nazara dekh kar raju to ghabra ke behosh hone laga tha..manager bhi laas ko dekh kar ghabra gaya tha ..uske hath per bhi thande pad gaye the.. thodi der baad normal hoke manager rajkunvar a mount aabu ki police station thi uske under duty kar rahe inspector or uske khas friend Lucky Rajput ko call lagaya..


Lucky :- ( call utha ke) hello!..haa bol kunvar aaj subhah-subhah mujhe kyu yaad kiya? Or tu itna ghabraya hua kyu lag raha hai?


Manager :- lucky tu jaldi hi hotel aaja ..yaha hotel ke room no 108 me ek ladki ki lash mili hai.


Lucky :- kyaa...lash? ( ekdum sock ho ke).


Lucky :- sun kunvar me jab tak na aau tab tak kisi ko bhi us dead body ko ya room ki kisi bhi chiz ko hath mat lagane dena..me apni team leke yaha se nikalta hu okk..


call rakhte hi manager ne side me pade raju jo lash ko dekh kar behosh ho gaya tha uske chehre par pani dal kar uthaya... or use room ke bahar le jake kaha ..


Manager :- dekh raju mene abhi hi mere khas dost hai jo yaha ki police station me job karta hai..use call karke is lash ke bare me bata diya hai..vo thodi der me hi apni team leke yaha aa jayega..usne is room ki kisi bhi chiz ya lash ko touch karne se mana kiya hai..and is lash vali baat kahi se bhi hotel ke bahar nahi jani chahiye..or yaha dusre room me jo geust reh rahe hai unhe bhi khabar nahi padne deni hai.


( manager bahot hi tension me ye sab raju ko keh raha tha).


thodi der me police ki jeep ka siren ka avaj aane laga.. Lucky apne sath duty kar rahe police constable Suresh Chouhan or ledy police constable Sandhya Maheshvari ke sath puri team ko leke aa gaya .


receptionist Kavita to abhi bhi is baat anjan thi..or vo police ko puri team ke sath dekh kar ek dum soch ho gay thi..


Kavita :- good morning sir..


Lucky :- good morning medam..kaha hai apke manager saheb?


Kavita :- sir manager saheb to first floor par ke room no108 me gaye hue hai.. but aap yaha! Yu achanak..kuch kam tha kya sir ??..


lucky kavita ki baat is javab diye bina hi first floor ki taraf room no 108 ki taraf apni team ko order dete hue aage chal diye..kavita to ye dekh kar or jyada sock ho gay..kavita ko dout hone laga ki room no 108 me kuch ajib ghatna ghati hai.


kavita bhi police ki team ke piche jane ke liye nikalti hai ki tabhi lucky ko pata nahi kuch yaad aata hai or vo piche mud ke reception par aake kavita ko kehta hai ki tum abhi yahi par raho or kisi ko bhi hotel ke under enter na hone de..


or ek constable ko bhi hotel ke main dor par khada rehne ko kehta hai or order deta hai ki.. " koi bhi anjan vyakti hotel ke under aani nahi chahiye or hotel ke under se koi bahar bhi nahi jana chahiye. "


Itna keh kar lucky room no 108 ki taraf nikal jata hai..

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To Be Continued
Nice and beautiful update....
 

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Ye Meri thriller prefix par first story hai to review deke batana jaroor ki sahi se likh pa raha hu ya nahi..
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UPDATE - 01



Rajasthan ki Khubhsurat Parvatmala par bacha ek nagar...matlab ke mount aabu ka pahaadi ilaaka..or uske uper lucky talaab ke baju me hi bani hue "Hotel Hillok" me morning ke 10 baj rahe the.


Hotel ka manager Rajkunvar Sinh.. hotel ke bahar ke vatavaran ka anand le rahe the..shardi ke mausam ki Subhah thi or Sun bhi badlo ke piche chup kar thoda sa prakas nikal raha tha.


is saal varsha ritu me bahot baarish hue thi..is liye pure parvat par Green chadar chada rakhi ho aisa lag raha tha..Rajkunvar Sinh to is kudarat ke rache hue Khubhsurat or adhbhut nazare ko dekh kar usme hi kho gaya tha..par tabhi vaha par achanak hotel ka waiter Raju aa gaya or usne rajkunvar sinh ka dhyan toda.


Raju :- saab! Room number 108 me se bahot hi gandh aa rahi hai, kuch ajib hi gandh hai.


Manager :- gandh! Kaisi gandh! ?


Raju :- pata nahi saab!.. kuch ajib hi gandh aa rahi hai.


Raju ki baat sun kar manager reception counter par jata hai..


Manager :- Kiske name par register hai room number 108?


( reception par khadi Kavita Sharma ko register me dekhne ko kaha. )


Kavita Sharma :- Sir koi new married couple hai.. Pravin sinh and uski wife. Abhi do din pehle hi unhone hamari hotel me room book kiya hai..
But ek baat bahot ajib hai ..jab se ye couple aaye hai tab se ek baar bhi room se bahar nahi aaye. Nahi yahaa ki kisi bhi ghumne ki jagah par gaye hai ..or nahi is couple ne hamari hotel maise kuch khana order kiya hai..bahar se bhi kuch khana us room maise order nahi hua hai.



Raju :- new married couple hai na maddem is liye ekdusre me aise kho gaye hoge ki ..khane-pine ka bhi bhul gaye hoge


( Raju haste hue bola )


kavita raju ko chup rehne ka bol kar use ankhe dikha kar aage boli


Kavita :- Sir mujhe to pehle se hi ye couple kuch ajib lag raha tha. Dono ki age me bhi bahot different lag raha tha. Ladki ladke se age me bahot chhoti ho aisa lag raha tha.. jab room book karne ke liye maine mr.pravin ke pas advance me hajar rs mange to usne uski wife ke pas se paise leke diye. Jab mene pucha ki aap logo ka kitne din ke liye room chahiye to dono hi ek side jake kuch dheere se kuch der bate karne lage or phir aake kaha ki 3 din ke liye room chahiye. Mene jab pucha ki yaha ke ghumne ki jagah par jane ne liye kisi guide ki ya car ki jaroorat ho to hum arrange kar denge...par unhone kaha ki unhe kahi ghumne nahi jana unhe sirf yaha aaram hi karna hai .


Manager rajkunvar sinh Kavita ki baat sun kar kuch der sochne lage fir raju no room number 108 ki extra key leke apne piche aane ko kaha. Manager jyare first floor ki lobhi me pahocha jaha room no 108 tha. Lobhi me pahochte hi vaha par bhayankar gandh aane lagi. Manager or Raju ne gandh se bachne ke liye apne muh par rumal bandh diya.


Manager rajkunvar a raju ke paas se extra key li or darvaja khola. Darvaja khulte hi under ka nazara dekh kar manager or raju dono ke dil ki dhadkane badh gay..


room ke farsh par ek ardhnang halat me ek ladki ki laas padi thi. Uske sar par se bahot sara khun nikal kar farsh gira hua tha.. room ki halat bhi kharab thi sab chize idhar udhar padi hue thi..ye sab nazara dekh kar raju to ghabra ke behosh hone laga tha..manager bhi laas ko dekh kar ghabra gaya tha ..uske hath per bhi thande pad gaye the.. thodi der baad normal hoke manager rajkunvar a mount aabu ki police station thi uske under duty kar rahe inspector or uske khas friend Lucky Rajput ko call lagaya..


Lucky :- ( call utha ke) hello!..haa bol kunvar aaj subhah-subhah mujhe kyu yaad kiya? Or tu itna ghabraya hua kyu lag raha hai?


Manager :- lucky tu jaldi hi hotel aaja ..yaha hotel ke room no 108 me ek ladki ki lash mili hai.


Lucky :- kyaa...lash? ( ekdum sock ho ke).


Lucky :- sun kunvar me jab tak na aau tab tak kisi ko bhi us dead body ko ya room ki kisi bhi chiz ko hath mat lagane dena..me apni team leke yaha se nikalta hu okk..


call rakhte hi manager ne side me pade raju jo lash ko dekh kar behosh ho gaya tha uske chehre par pani dal kar uthaya... or use room ke bahar le jake kaha ..


Manager :- dekh raju mene abhi hi mere khas dost hai jo yaha ki police station me job karta hai..use call karke is lash ke bare me bata diya hai..vo thodi der me hi apni team leke yaha aa jayega..usne is room ki kisi bhi chiz ya lash ko touch karne se mana kiya hai..and is lash vali baat kahi se bhi hotel ke bahar nahi jani chahiye..or yaha dusre room me jo geust reh rahe hai unhe bhi khabar nahi padne deni hai.


( manager bahot hi tension me ye sab raju ko keh raha tha).


thodi der me police ki jeep ka siren ka avaj aane laga.. Lucky apne sath duty kar rahe police constable Suresh Chouhan or ledy police constable Sandhya Maheshvari ke sath puri team ko leke aa gaya .


receptionist Kavita to abhi bhi is baat anjan thi..or vo police ko puri team ke sath dekh kar ek dum soch ho gay thi..


Kavita :- good morning sir..


Lucky :- good morning medam..kaha hai apke manager saheb?


Kavita :- sir manager saheb to first floor par ke room no108 me gaye hue hai.. but aap yaha! Yu achanak..kuch kam tha kya sir ??..


lucky kavita ki baat is javab diye bina hi first floor ki taraf room no 108 ki taraf apni team ko order dete hue aage chal diye..kavita to ye dekh kar or jyada sock ho gay..kavita ko dout hone laga ki room no 108 me kuch ajib ghatna ghati hai.


kavita bhi police ki team ke piche jane ke liye nikalti hai ki tabhi lucky ko pata nahi kuch yaad aata hai or vo piche mud ke reception par aake kavita ko kehta hai ki tum abhi yahi par raho or kisi ko bhi hotel ke under enter na hone de..


or ek constable ko bhi hotel ke main dor par khada rehne ko kehta hai or order deta hai ki.. " koi bhi anjan vyakti hotel ke under aani nahi chahiye or hotel ke under se koi bahar bhi nahi jana chahiye. "


Itna keh kar lucky room no 108 ki taraf nikal jata hai..

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To Be Continued
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