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Awesome updateBit – 2
Sweety left; Anush, as usual, did some household chores like making bed and restoring things to their places. Gathered all the garbage including delivery meal packs into a trash bag; he is very tidy by nature..!!!
He changed into some casual clothes like cargo pants and a jumper with hoody and put on sneakers. Even simple of his clothes were quite expensive. Took his wallet from the drawer and keys of apartment and car and picked up trash bag, locked the apartment door and reached ground floor through lift. His apartment was on 27th floor. He threw trash bag in the dumpster.
He drove his car out of the parking area of the building and headed to nearby beach park. He spent couple of hours at the park, walking, stretching and touching flowers here and there. By the time it was night, he reached one of the fine restaurants of city, where he had light dinner with two glasses of wine. He used to consume wine or scotch two to three times a week; but always within limits.
He returned to his apartment by 10.00 pm and changed into knee length shorts and watched a documentary till 12.00 and slept afterwards.
He woke up in the morning lightheaded; made himself black coffee; did a few stretching exercises and later did brisk walk on tread mill for forty minutes. He has a fit body, lean and athletic but not muscular. He is almost 6 feet tall. While at London, he learned martial arts and could easily deal with two persons all alone. His body was also very flexible.
By 10.00 am, he left his apartment. The maid would be coming any minute for cleaning the apartment and do the laundry. She had the keys.
As usual every Sunday, he would go to a saloon, where his hair would be trimmed and nails would be cut besides other things. He liked to keep his hair very short. He liked to keep himself tidy and clean. Later he would go to a massage parlor where his body would be thoroughly massaged followed by Jacuzzi bath. He would allow beautiful masseuse girl touch and caress his body in whatever way she liked but never asked for a happy ending. He was not into that.
He would like to have Sunday Brunch at a five star hotel. He would return to his apartment by 5.00 pm evening and would take good warm shower and would change into comforting clothes and would take a short nap.
He never cooked at his apartment except making coffee. He always preferred ordering meals delivered to him. He made himself coffee without milk and sugar; he always liked the bitterness of coffee. He preferred taking coffee while watching the sea waves through his room window spread across the entire wall till the sky turned into crimson and then into complete darkness.
By 8.00 pm, he would take out bottle of scotch from the cabinet and would place it in the lounge and would also take out chess board and would play alone taking small sips of scotch from glass. He liked drinking scotch without ice or water.
By 9.00, he would order meal and by 10.00 he would finish the meal and would do the dishes and would clean the kitchen and would return to his bedroom by around 11.00 and would like to fall asleep watching any soft genre Hollywood movie.
Again from Monday to Friday, he would go to office. His life was pretty disciplined and as per fixed routine and he rarely deviated. He lived much like a mechanical man.
On Friday evening, he is in his office, very much exhausted. This week his nerves were tested. First he had an exchange of arguments with Mrs. Mathur who was head of creative and innovation department, on Tuesday. The lady never liked him; neither he. Later, on Wednesday, the IT head referred to him the matter of customer feedback and insisted that consumer marketing department should handle the complaints and feedbacks from the customers. Anush viewed that IT department should examine and create a daily log of complaints and feedback then should pass on the ones to consumer marketing requiring action. The General Manager favored IT head’s opinion and a small program was installed in his laptop for monitoring the progress of resolved complaints by his department. He had staff for handling the matter but he never liked much, working on laptop and he was not a tech savvy either.
Feeling already pretty stressed, thought struck to his mind that Sweety wouldn’t be coming tonight so should he call the agency for another girl. He didn’t call the agency and thought of spending the night all alone.
On his way back, he had dinner at a restaurant and reached his apartment by 9.00 pm, immediately changed into shorts. He lied on his bed and closed his eyes for taking some rest.
After lying there for quite some time, he made coffee and sat in the lounge; just casually opened his laptop and examined new installed application and then checked few websites recommended by IT that contained customer feedback on consumer products. He instinctively opened an interactive chat section and out of curiosity registered his name and other details. He had entered his genuine details. He then scrolled few other things on the net and shut down the laptop and started watching a MMA fight program on the TV.
The fights were interesting; he had watched them all. He didn’t know that he had watched for almost two hours. He thought of retiring to the room and picked up laptop along.
Lying on the bed, resting on two pillows opened the laptop. To his surprise there were two messages blinking on the screen. He immediately opened the dialogue box. The messages were from some Charming_ girl_haunts id. He had not chatted with anyone online before.
He opened the messages:
charming_girl_haunts: hi
charming_girl_haunts: can v talk…??
First message was delivered to him one hour ago followed by next message 20 minutes ago.
Anush thought for almost 10 minutes before hitting the reply button:
Anush: hi
And stuck his eyes for the response. He was about to close the laptop when the reply message blinked in about 15 minutes.
charming_girl_haunts: I thought u will not reply…
Anush: why you thought so…???
charming_girl_haunts: hmmm… I don’t know…
charming_girl_haunts: so… how was the day…???
Anush: ok… as usual… tiring I guess…
charming_girl_haunts:mine was boring too…
Anush: I don’t know you… who are you…???
charming_girl_haunts:…..
Anush’s mind started racing. Who is she??? He never thought that any such websites had the provision of interactive chatting in the informal setting. He remained unmoved, just kept on staring on the screen.
charming_girl_haunts: hey hold on for a minute… I’ll b back soon…
Anush couldn’t believe that some random girl from the net instructed him in authoritative way for waiting. He immediately looked for girl’s information on the site. Except ‘a girl of its own mood’, he didn’t find any other information.
He thought; how old is she? He thought; should he ask her? But reminded himself, it will be rude to ask a girl her age. He again thought; is the girl there for giving any customer feedback? But at this hour of the night! It is almost midnight! What is she up to?
He immediately checked his profile; he had correctly entered his age and other data. For a second, he thought of changing it but rejected the idea as he had nothing bad on his mind and he also thought that the girl might have already seen his entire information. However, he had confirmed one thing that less than 18 years could not register, so he was sure that the girl was an adult of 18 or older. He was so much consumed with his thoughts that he didn’t notice that she was back and two messages were blinking on the screen.
charming_girl_haunts: I’m back…..
charming_girl_haunts: hey… u thr….???
Anush: yeah…
charming_girl_haunts:u were waiting for me...
Anush: ah… no… yes
charming_girl_haunts: lol!! No or yes…???
Anush was feeling very much embarrassed. He had no idea what to right further.
charming_girl_haunts: neways… my ipods are damaged… me bored… don’t know what to do… I like listening to the songs…
charming_girl_haunts: what kinda songs u listen to…??
He didn’t know why he lied. He listened to no songs.
Anush: metallica…mostly
charming_girl_haunts: hmmm… macho man type…
Anush couldn’t believe at himself. Why he was lying and why he is chatting with that girl, in the first place.
Thank you my brother... your appreciation means a lot for my worthless, ineffectual and modest effort....Awesome update
You may write me down in history
With your bitter, twisted lies,
You may trod me in the very dirt
But still, like dust, I'll rise.
Hmm interesting
nice review and encouraging comments....Hmm interesting
Honestly in the start it was feeling kinda boring as you described his sunday routine. But I believe you have done so on purpose.
And a mystery girl online, well that add an extra bit of excitement. Quite a lot of editing you hvae to go through to make it look like actual chat, really appreciate that.
Well I feel I want to read longer updatesbut this was good. Enough to make me waiting for a new one
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Awesome updateBit – 3
Anush couldn’t believe at himself. Why he was lying and why he is chatting with that girl, in the first place. But, then a thought struck to his mind; why does he have to play dumb and allow the girl to take the lead. He recalled that while at university in the UK, he had once attended a course that was about how to talk to girls and impress them. He, literally like rolled up sleeves, quickly scrolled up chat, so far made, checked her profile, and started typing; he suddenly felt confident.
Anush: so what mood you’re in now…???
charming_girl_haunts:…
Anush:…
charming_girl_haunts: playful……
Anush: are you even eligible to be playful…??
charming_girl_haunts:…
Anush: I mean you appear to be so young and fresh…and…
charming_girl_haunts: and what…??
Anush: leave it… so you were telling about your songs collection…
charming_girl_haunts: I didn’t …
Anush: relax girl…
Anush: so you pass on your boring time by talking to strangers…?
charming_girl_haunts: you are no stranger… I know you…
The reply of the girl made him still for few seconds; then he assured himself that she has seen his profile, that’s what she is referring to. He again gathered himself and started typing.
Anush: ok you know me but I don’t know you…??
charming_girl_haunts: does it bother u…??? dat u don’t know me…
Anush sounding himself confident, typed;
Anush: no!!! why it would bother me…??
Anush: but I would certainly like to know more about “a girl of its own mood”…
charming_girl_haunts:…
charming_girl_haunts: why…??
Anush: does it bother you…??
charming_girl_haunts:…
charming_girl_haunts: yes it bothers me…
Anush: so “a girl of its own mood” is shy too!!!
charming_girl_haunts: I ain’t shy…
Anush: hmmm… ok. You are not shy!!!
charming_girl_haunts: u r expert at chattin… u do lot of chattin with da girlz..??…
Anush: what makes you say that…??
charming_girl_haunts: u certainly know to make a girl spill da info…
Anush: you won’t believe, you are the first… and yes I want to know about you…
charming_girl_haunts: why r u interested in me…??
Anush, unknowingly, felt subliminal effect of the word “attraction” to his groin, and suddenly his mood changed and he thought of teasing the girl by using intimate words and see how she responds. But, unlike to his routine, he pulled out scotch from the cabinet and poured himself a large peg and gulped it on the rocks and made another large peg.
Anush: who would not be interested in a hot girl…??
charming_girl_haunts:
charming_girl_haunts: wats hot in me…??
Anush: your aura… and…
charming_girl_haunts: and…??????
Anush: I can only feel your aura… and … you can tell me about your curves…
charming_girl_haunts: aren’t u too fast!!! why in so much hurry…??
Anush: you like to be in the shadows… why…??? But I don’t agree with you…and I think otherwise…!!!
charming_girl_haunts: wat u don’t agree….???
Anush: I think you are pretty and don’t need to hide…
charming_girl_haunts: Yes…!!! I am pretty… u shouldn’t have doubts bout dat… and I am not hiding… tis dat Iain’t revealing anything to u…
Anush: Isn’t it the same….!!!
charming_girl_haunts: wats same…???
Anush: hiding and not revealing… both are same…![]()
charming_girl_haunts:
charming_girl_haunts:
charming_girl_haunts: okay!!! wat u wanna know…
Anush: tell me about your eyes…???
charming_girl_haunts: dream a lot!!!!
Anush: hmmmm… your lips…???
charming_girl_haunts: full of nectar….??
Anush:… your cheeks…??
charming_girl_haunts: Blushing…
Anush: your neck…??
charming_girl_haunts: inviting…
Anush:… your love mounds…??
charming_girl_haunts:
Anush:![]()
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charming_girl_haunts: proud…!!!
The smiley is not there, indicating that she is getting into the act now.
Anush: how much proud…???
charming_girl_haunts: pretty proud…!!!
Anush: impressive…
The girl is silent now.
Anush: hmmm… your navel…
charming_girl_haunts: don’t go that far…
Anush is thinking what to type next and suddenly screen blinked. He anticipated something interesting focused on the chat. He has almost finished second large peg.
charming_girl_haunts: u always like to intrude… don’t u…??
Anush felt confused again!!!!