Thriller Mirroring Mind… (Man Darpan…)

[rusty blade]

Mirroring Mind…
(Man Darpan…)

 

[Luffy]

Bit – 2​

Sweety left; Anush, as usual, did some household chores like making bed and restoring things to their places. Gathered all the garbage including delivery meal packs into a trash bag; he is very tidy by nature..!!!

He changed into some casual clothes like cargo pants and a jumper with hoody and put on sneakers. Even simple of his clothes were quite expensive. Took his wallet from the drawer and keys of apartment and car and picked up trash bag, locked the apartment door and reached ground floor through lift. His apartment was on 27th floor. He threw trash bag in the dumpster.

He drove his car out of the parking area of the building and headed to nearby beach park. He spent couple of hours at the park, walking, stretching and touching flowers here and there. By the time it was night, he reached one of the fine restaurants of city, where he had light dinner with two glasses of wine. He used to consume wine or scotch two to three times a week; but always within limits.

He returned to his apartment by 10.00 pm and changed into knee length shorts and watched a documentary till 12.00 and slept afterwards.

He woke up in the morning lightheaded; made himself black coffee; did a few stretching exercises and later did brisk walk on tread mill for forty minutes. He has a fit body, lean and athletic but not muscular. He is almost 6 feet tall. While at London, he learned martial arts and could easily deal with two persons all alone. His body was also very flexible.

By 10.00 am, he left his apartment. The maid would be coming any minute for cleaning the apartment and do the laundry. She had the keys.

As usual every Sunday, he would go to a saloon, where his hair would be trimmed and nails would be cut besides other things. He liked to keep his hair very short. He liked to keep himself tidy and clean. Later he would go to a massage parlor where his body would be thoroughly massaged followed by Jacuzzi bath. He would allow beautiful masseuse girl touch and caress his body in whatever way she liked but never asked for a happy ending. He was not into that.

He would like to have Sunday Brunch at a five star hotel. He would return to his apartment by 5.00 pm evening and would take good warm shower and would change into comforting clothes and would take a short nap.

He never cooked at his apartment except making coffee. He always preferred ordering meals delivered to him. He made himself coffee without milk and sugar; he always liked the bitterness of coffee. He preferred taking coffee while watching the sea waves through his room window spread across the entire wall till the sky turned into crimson and then into complete darkness.

By 8.00 pm, he would take out bottle of scotch from the cabinet and would place it in the lounge and would also take out chess board and would play alone taking small sips of scotch from glass. He liked drinking scotch without ice or water.

By 9.00, he would order meal and by 10.00 he would finish the meal and would do the dishes and would clean the kitchen and would return to his bedroom by around 11.00 and would like to fall asleep watching any soft genre Hollywood movie.

Again from Monday to Friday, he would go to office. His life was pretty disciplined and as per fixed routine and he rarely deviated. He lived much like a mechanical man.

On Friday evening, he is in his office, very much exhausted. This week his nerves were tested. First he had an exchange of arguments with Mrs. Mathur who was head of creative and innovation department, on Tuesday. The lady never liked him; neither he. Later, on Wednesday, the IT head referred to him the matter of customer feedback and insisted that consumer marketing department should handle the complaints and feedbacks from the customers. Anush viewed that IT department should examine and create a daily log of complaints and feedback then should pass on the ones to consumer marketing requiring action. The General Manager favored IT head’s opinion and a small program was installed in his laptop for monitoring the progress of resolved complaints by his department. He had staff for handling the matter but he never liked much, working on laptop and he was not a tech savvy either.

Feeling already pretty stressed, thought struck to his mind that Sweety wouldn’t be coming tonight so should he call the agency for another girl. He didn’t call the agency and thought of spending the night all alone.

On his way back, he had dinner at a restaurant and reached his apartment by 9.00 pm, immediately changed into shorts. He lied on his bed and closed his eyes for taking some rest.

After lying there for quite some time, he made coffee and sat in the lounge; just casually opened his laptop and examined new installed application and then checked few websites recommended by IT that contained customer feedback on consumer products. He instinctively opened an interactive chat section and out of curiosity registered his name and other details. He had entered his genuine details. He then scrolled few other things on the net and shut down the laptop and started watching a MMA fight program on the TV.

The fights were interesting; he had watched them all. He didn’t know that he had watched for almost two hours. He thought of retiring to the room and picked up laptop along.

Lying on the bed, resting on two pillows opened the laptop. To his surprise there were two messages blinking on the screen. He immediately opened the dialogue box. The messages were from some Charming_ girl_haunts id. He had not chatted with anyone online before.

He opened the messages:

charming_girl_haunts: hi​

charming_girl_haunts: can v talk…??​

First message was delivered to him one hour ago followed by next message 20 minutes ago.

Anush thought for almost 10 minutes before hitting the reply button:

Anush: hi

And stuck his eyes for the response. He was about to close the laptop when the reply message blinked in about 15 minutes.

charming_girl_haunts: I thought u will not reply…​

Anush: why you thought so…???

charming_girl_haunts: hmmm… I don’t know…​

charming_girl_haunts: so… how was the day…???​

Anush: ok… as usual… tiring I guess…

charming_girl_haunts: mine was boring too…​

Anush: I don’t know you… who are you…???

charming_girl_haunts: …..​

Anush’s mind started racing. Who is she??? He never thought that any such websites had the provision of interactive chatting in the informal setting. He remained unmoved, just kept on staring on the screen.

charming_girl_haunts: hey hold on for a minute… I’ll b back soon…​

Anush couldn’t believe that some random girl from the net instructed him in authoritative way for waiting. He immediately looked for girl’s information on the site. Except ‘a girl of its own mood’, he didn’t find any other information.

He thought; how old is she? He thought; should he ask her? But reminded himself, it will be rude to ask a girl her age. He again thought; is the girl there for giving any customer feedback? But at this hour of the night! It is almost midnight! What is she up to?

He immediately checked his profile; he had correctly entered his age and other data. For a second, he thought of changing it but rejected the idea as he had nothing bad on his mind and he also thought that the girl might have already seen his entire information. However, he had confirmed one thing that less than 18 years could not register, so he was sure that the girl was an adult of 18 or older. He was so much consumed with his thoughts that he didn’t notice that she was back and two messages were blinking on the screen.

charming_girl_haunts: I’m back…..​

charming_girl_haunts: hey… u thr….???​

Anush: yeah…

charming_girl_haunts: u were waiting for me...​

Anush: ah… no… yes

charming_girl_haunts: lol!! No or yes…???​

Anush was feeling very much embarrassed. He had no idea what to right further.

charming_girl_haunts: neways… my ipods are damaged… me bored… don’t know what to do… I like listening to the songs…​

charming_girl_haunts: what kinda songs u listen to…??​

He didn’t know why he lied. He listened to no songs.

Anush: metallica…mostly

charming_girl_haunts: hmmm… macho man type…​

Anush couldn’t believe at himself. Why he was lying and why he is chatting with that girl, in the first place.

Awesome update

 

[rusty blade]

Awesome update

Thank you my brother... your appreciation means a lot for my worthless, ineffectual and modest effort....

I would like to quote few lines from a marvelous poem "Still I rise" written by a brave American lady poet "Maya Angelou".... for those who ponder....

You may write me down in history
With your bitter, twisted lies,
You may trod me in the very dirt
But still, like dust, I'll rise.​

 

[LaMujer]

LaMujer​

update posted.... Bit – 2

Hmm interesting

Honestly in the start it was feeling kinda boring as you described his sunday routine. But I believe you have done so on purpose.

And a mystery girl online, well that add an extra bit of excitement. Quite a lot of editing you hvae to go through to make it look like actual chat, really appreciate that.

Well I feel I want to read longer updates but this was good. Enough to make me waiting for a new one

 

[rusty blade]

Hmm interesting

Honestly in the start it was feeling kinda boring as you described his sunday routine. But I believe you have done so on purpose.

And a mystery girl online, well that add an extra bit of excitement. Quite a lot of editing you hvae to go through to make it look like actual chat, really appreciate that.

Well I feel I want to read longer updates but this was good. Enough to make me waiting for a new one

nice review and encouraging comments....

the story is building up for now....

more thrilling updates to follow!!!

 

[rusty blade]

Bit – 3​

Anush couldn’t believe at himself. Why he was lying and why he is chatting with that girl, in the first place. But, then a thought struck to his mind; why does he have to play dumb and allow the girl to take the lead. He recalled that while at university in the UK, he had once attended a course that was about how to talk to girls and impress them. He, literally like rolled up sleeves, quickly scrolled up chat, so far made, checked her profile, and started typing; he suddenly felt confident.

Anush: so what mood you’re in now…???

charming_girl_haunts: …​

Anush: …

charming_girl_haunts: playful… …​

Anush: are you even eligible to be playful…??

charming_girl_haunts: …​

Anush: I mean you appear to be so young and fresh…and…

charming_girl_haunts: and what…?? ​

Anush: leave it… so you were telling about your songs collection…

charming_girl_haunts: I didn’t … ​

Anush: relax girl…

Anush: so you pass on your boring time by talking to strangers…?

charming_girl_haunts: you are no stranger… I know you…​

The reply of the girl made him still for few seconds; then he assured himself that she has seen his profile, that’s what she is referring to. He again gathered himself and started typing.

Anush: ok you know me but I don’t know you…??

charming_girl_haunts: does it bother u…??? dat u don’t know me…​

Anush sounding himself confident, typed;

Anush: no!!! why it would bother me…??

Anush: but I would certainly like to know more about “a girl of its own mood”…

charming_girl_haunts: …

charming_girl_haunts: why…?? ​

Anush: does it bother you…??

charming_girl_haunts: …

charming_girl_haunts: yes it bothers me… ​

Anush: so “a girl of its own mood” is shy too!!!

charming_girl_haunts: I ain’t shy… ​

Anush: hmmm… ok. You are not shy!!!

charming_girl_haunts: u r expert at chattin… u do lot of chattin with da girlz..?? …​

Anush: what makes you say that…??

charming_girl_haunts: u certainly know to make a girl spill da info… ​

Anush: you won’t believe, you are the first… and yes I want to know about you…

charming_girl_haunts: why r u interested in me…?? ​

Anush, unknowingly, felt subliminal effect of the word “attraction” to his groin, and suddenly his mood changed and he thought of teasing the girl by using intimate words and see how she responds. But, unlike to his routine, he pulled out scotch from the cabinet and poured himself a large peg and gulped it on the rocks and made another large peg.

Anush: who would not be interested in a hot girl…??

charming_girl_haunts:

charming_girl_haunts: wats hot in me…?? ​

Anush: your aura… and…

charming_girl_haunts: and…?????? ​

Anush: I can only feel your aura… and … you can tell me about your curves…

charming_girl_haunts: aren’t u too fast!!! why in so much hurry…?? ​

Anush: you like to be in the shadows… why…??? But I don’t agree with you…and I think otherwise…!!!

charming_girl_haunts: wat u don’t agree….??? ​

Anush: I think you are pretty and don’t need to hide…

charming_girl_haunts: Yes…!!! I am pretty… u shouldn’t have doubts bout dat… and I am not hiding… tis dat Iain’t revealing anything to u… ​

Anush: Isn’t it the same….!!!

charming_girl_haunts: wats same…??? ​

Anush: hiding and not revealing… both are same…

charming_girl_haunts:

charming_girl_haunts:

charming_girl_haunts: okay!!! wat u wanna know… ​

Anush: tell me about your eyes…???

charming_girl_haunts: dream a lot!!!! ​

Anush: hmmmm… your lips…???

charming_girl_haunts: full of nectar….?? ​

Anush: … your cheeks…??

charming_girl_haunts: Blushing… ​

Anush: your neck…??

charming_girl_haunts: inviting… ​

Anush: … your love mounds…??

charming_girl_haunts: ​

Anush: …

charming_girl_haunts: proud…!!!​

The smiley is not there, indicating that she is getting into the act now.

Anush: how much proud…???

charming_girl_haunts: pretty proud…!!!​

Anush: impressive…

The girl is silent now.

Anush: hmmm… your navel…

charming_girl_haunts: don’t go that far…​

Anush is thinking what to type next and suddenly screen blinked. He anticipated something interesting focused on the chat. He has almost finished second large peg.

charming_girl_haunts: u always like to intrude… don’t u…?? ​

Anush felt confused again!!!!

 

[rusty blade]

LaMujer

BIT - 3 is there.... eagerly awaiting ur comments and views....

PS: I know this bit is quite small. but the editing part is really frustrating... next bit will be up there very soon and it will be quite big.... The thrill is there!!!! some big thrill!!!!

 

[Luffy]

Bit – 3​

Anush couldn’t believe at himself. Why he was lying and why he is chatting with that girl, in the first place. But, then a thought struck to his mind; why does he have to play dumb and allow the girl to take the lead. He recalled that while at university in the UK, he had once attended a course that was about how to talk to girls and impress them. He, literally like rolled up sleeves, quickly scrolled up chat, so far made, checked her profile, and started typing; he suddenly felt confident.

Anush: so what mood you’re in now…???

charming_girl_haunts: …​

Anush: …

charming_girl_haunts: playful… …​

Anush: are you even eligible to be playful…??

charming_girl_haunts: …​

Anush: I mean you appear to be so young and fresh…and…

charming_girl_haunts: and what…?? ​

Anush: leave it… so you were telling about your songs collection…

charming_girl_haunts: I didn’t … ​

Anush: relax girl…

Anush: so you pass on your boring time by talking to strangers…?

charming_girl_haunts: you are no stranger… I know you…​

The reply of the girl made him still for few seconds; then he assured himself that she has seen his profile, that’s what she is referring to. He again gathered himself and started typing.

Anush: ok you know me but I don’t know you…??

charming_girl_haunts: does it bother u…??? dat u don’t know me…​

Anush sounding himself confident, typed;

Anush: no!!! why it would bother me…??

Anush: but I would certainly like to know more about “a girl of its own mood”…

charming_girl_haunts: …

charming_girl_haunts: why…?? ​

Anush: does it bother you…??

charming_girl_haunts: …

charming_girl_haunts: yes it bothers me… ​

Anush: so “a girl of its own mood” is shy too!!!

charming_girl_haunts: I ain’t shy… ​

Anush: hmmm… ok. You are not shy!!!

charming_girl_haunts: u r expert at chattin… u do lot of chattin with da girlz..?? …​

Anush: what makes you say that…??

charming_girl_haunts: u certainly know to make a girl spill da info… ​

Anush: you won’t believe, you are the first… and yes I want to know about you…

charming_girl_haunts: why r u interested in me…?? ​

Anush, unknowingly, felt subliminal effect of the word “attraction” to his groin, and suddenly his mood changed and he thought of teasing the girl by using intimate words and see how she responds. But, unlike to his routine, he pulled out scotch from the cabinet and poured himself a large peg and gulped it on the rocks and made another large peg.

Anush: who would not be interested in a hot girl…??

charming_girl_haunts:

charming_girl_haunts: wats hot in me…?? ​

Anush: your aura… and…

charming_girl_haunts: and…?????? ​

Anush: I can only feel your aura… and … you can tell me about your curves…

charming_girl_haunts: aren’t u too fast!!! why in so much hurry…?? ​

Anush: you like to be in the shadows… why…??? But I don’t agree with you…and I think otherwise…!!!

charming_girl_haunts: wat u don’t agree….??? ​

Anush: I think you are pretty and don’t need to hide…

charming_girl_haunts: Yes…!!! I am pretty… u shouldn’t have doubts bout dat… and I am not hiding… tis dat Iain’t revealing anything to u… ​

Anush: Isn’t it the same….!!!

charming_girl_haunts: wats same…??? ​

Anush: hiding and not revealing… both are same…

charming_girl_haunts:

charming_girl_haunts:

charming_girl_haunts: okay!!! wat u wanna know… ​

Anush: tell me about your eyes…???

charming_girl_haunts: dream a lot!!!! ​

Anush: hmmmm… your lips…???

charming_girl_haunts: full of nectar….?? ​

Anush: … your cheeks…??

charming_girl_haunts: Blushing… ​

Anush: your neck…??

charming_girl_haunts: inviting… ​

Anush: … your love mounds…??

charming_girl_haunts: ​

Anush: …

charming_girl_haunts: proud…!!!​

The smiley is not there, indicating that she is getting into the act now.

Anush: how much proud…???

charming_girl_haunts: pretty proud…!!!​

Anush: impressive…

The girl is silent now.

Anush: hmmm… your navel…

charming_girl_haunts: don’t go that far…​

Anush is thinking what to type next and suddenly screen blinked. He anticipated something interesting focused on the chat. He has almost finished second large peg.

charming_girl_haunts: u always like to intrude… don’t u…?? ​

Anush felt confused again!!!!

Awesome update

 

[rusty blade]

Bit – 4​

Anush felt confused again!!!!

He had thought that he had lured the girl into her terms and suddenly she behaved weirdly. She was indeed “a girl of its own mood”. He didn’t expect such reaction from the girl and the fast consumed liquor also led to thrashing of his calmness and confidence.

Anush: I didn’t intrude into your privacy…??? It was you who had started messaging me... and what do you mean by "always"…??

charming_girl_haunts: I had sent you message coz I had thought that you would have mended your ways… but your father was right that you would never learn!!​

Anush: What!!! What!!! I cannot believe, what you said!!! How do you know my father…??? What do you know about him…??

charming_girl_haunts: I know each and everything… I told you, I knew you…​

Anush was now extremely angry; his eyebrows were lowered and pulled closer together, his eyelids became bulged, his lips were tightened, corners of his mouth were pointing downwards, and the nostrils flared outwards.

Anush: you know nothing!!! Nobody knows anything!!!

charming_girl_haunts: I know it!!! I know that your father never accepted you as his son!!

charming_girl_haunts: He threw you out of home!!! Your mother was an adulterous woman!! Your father was incapable to impregnate a woman!!! You were born as an illegitimate child!!!​

Anush: shut up you bitch!!! You fucking whore!!!

charming_girl_haunts: Whore!!! huh... Your mother was a whore!!!

charming_girl_haunts: you are child of a whore!!!​

Anush: shut up!!!

Anush’s heart was racing like a jet, sweating like he had just got himself soaked in heavy rain. He couldn’t stand it anymore and slammed the screen of laptop onto its keyboard; and threw it away. The laptop landed on the couch. He clinched his head in his shivering hands. He thought that his head would explode. Several minutes passed by, he didn’t feel any better. In fact his condition was deteriorating.

He stood up and poured himself another large peg of scotch and drank it in no time.

He was so much intoxicated by large intake of alcohol that he almost fell on the bed and went unconscious immediately.

Its 4.00 am; Anush is still sleeping; his body starts shivering.

^ __________ ^​

There is noise in the adjacent room. The boy wakes up from sleep. It’s still dark outside. The noise is growing. Now the 8-years old boy, can clearly listen to the enraged voice of a man; “you are a mean slut!!!”

Then there is sound of a slap!!!

Probably the angered man has hit someone on the face. “Who is he hitting?”, the boy is afraid, yet curious.

He hears sound of a woman sobbing. He feels his heart beating fast and an unknown fear surrounds him. He crawls out of the bed. He moves closer to the door of the room, the noise is coming from. He is still on his fours, crawling slowly to the door.

The man shouts again, “I know he is not my son. You know it very well that I cannot impregnate a woman.”

“Why can’t you just tell me, who the father is?”

The woman’s cries grew. “He is your son. Please trust me. I am not disloyal. I never slept with anyone else except you.”

The man’s voice suddenly got maddened. “Shut up!!! You bitch. You are a liar.”

The woman screamed. Another sound of slap echoed.

The boy stood up and got closer to the door, it was opened ajar; only half of the room was visible, but that angle was providing enough scope to view the whole situation.

The man was holding the woman by her hair so tight that she was pulled to his side. Tears were all over her face. Her eyes were red with agony. The room was filled with terror and fury.

Suddenly, the man again jerked her head; she screamed more. She was in great pain.

He pushed her head down; down to his fly of the pants and opened up the zip with his free hand. He kept pushing her head to his opened fly. Nothing was visible to the boy but he sensed something terrible happening to her. She was trying to keep her mouth opened up as wider as she could.

His hand was tightening on her head. Some of the cries escaped her mouth, while it was fixed on the opened fly of the man’s pants and suddenly she gagged. He would not release her head until she was strenuously wavered her hands in the air for breaking free. It was almost unbearable for her that she finally pushed his thighs and belly. He just left her hair and she fell on the floor with a bump. She was shaking and helplessly trying to regain her breath. She was choked almost to the death. The brutal pain she sustained was reflected from her entire face that was pale blue. After going through stern struggle, she after going through stern struggle, she started coughing. She coughed and coughed. Her mouth was all wet, full of saliva, dripping down her chin and cheeks. Bursts of tears were flowing from her flooded eyes. Regaining her breath, she rolled herself. She pushed her head to her knees, buried it there and covered it with her arms, as if she was hiding herself from him.

He was standing there smiling and knelt to her and again fastened his hand around her hair and dragged her to nearby sofa and pushed her face against the velvet lined arm of the sofa, bending her belly and raising her butt. He, in a jerk, tore opened her nighty exposing her blue colored panty covering her round ass. He repeated his action that he did for the nighty and the panty was also torn to shreds exposing her milky flesh. He buried his mouth into her ass cheeks for some time and licked her hole. She was in viscous pain but her tongue felt somewhat soothing against her hole. But she was not privy to what was ahead. He stood up, grinning, rammed his hard cock into her hole. In a thrust, his half cock was inside her and she screamed loudly by raising her head high in the air with the feelings that her body has been torn apart. She kept on screaming relentlessly and he kept her pounding effortlessly.

^ __________ ^
​

Anush was shuddering wildly on the bed and suddenly her eyes opened up with tears flooded eyes.

He had a nightmare; an awful dream!!!

He thought for a while; his entire life had been a nightmare.

He was still dizzy; the effects of heavy alcohol drinking were still there. His head was spinning. He felt like vomiting and rushed to the bathroom.

He puked in the commode and remained there for a while. The feeling of whirling was still there. He felt sick and weak.

Anush slowly gathered himself and crawled onto the bed. His stomach was also aching.

It’s still around 5.00 am. He closed his eyes and tried to sleep. As soon his eyes were closed, the awful scene from the dream reappeared. He twitched his head as if wanted to throw away dreadful memories but could not succeed.

He suddenly recalled unknown girl that he had chatted with. He gnashed his teeth with raged anger.

“If I only get to know who that bitch is?”

Then the thoughts raced in his mind.

“Who could possibly know this hidden secret?”

“Nobody else was witness to it, except I.”

“I didn’t tell anybody; did I?”

“There are only few women close to me who are aware of my personal information. Could it be someone from the office?”

“No. I have never been that close to my female colleagues.”

“If the information slipped out of my mouth, then it certainly would have happened while I was not in my senses or intoxicated and I only consumed alcohol along with the escorts from the escort agency.”

 

[rusty blade]

Addicted LaMujer kingkhankar Sauravb Luffy Thakur​

I don't know if I am rightly knocking the doors of legendary writers... but only to remind that new writers also need words of encouragement and guidance to learn!!!

Hope everyone is given support...

 

[rusty blade]

Addicted LaMujer kingkhankar Sauravb Luffy Thakur​

I don't know if I am rightly knocking the doors of legendary writers... but only to remind that new writers also need words of encouragement and guidance to learn!!!

Hope everyone is given support...

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