andyking302
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Nice शानदार bhai
UPDATE- 1
( to start karte hai kahani ko...is me aditya ke past ke bare me aage pata chalega flashback me....abhi present se start karte hai. )
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Humara ghar Mumbai city me hai...mera bachpan to goun me hi jiya or 10th pass karke phir me Mumbai city me aaya jaya mere papa ka ghar tha..
ab thoda hamara ghar hai uske aas pas ke bare me or hamare ghar ke bare me bata du apko...
Humara ghar bhk bungalow jaisa hai 2flor ka...ghar ke bahar thodi si jhagah hai jaha par gadi park karte hai..ghar ke under pehle ek hall hai or hall ke side me kitchen hai .. niche tin room the ek me papa or unki patni sumitra rehte the..unke side me dusra room tha vo dadaji or dadi ka tha par ab vo is duniya me nahi hai to vo khali hi rehta hai..Tisra room gest room hai us me jab bhi koi mehman aata hai to uske rehne ke liye vo dete the...
phir chalte hai dusre flor pe..
waha par 4 room hai...niche se chidiyo se uper aate hi balkani jitni jagha hai phir pehla room aata hai vo mehul ka hai phir..uske najdik vala room Jaya didi ka hai par abhi unki shadi ho gay hai to vo khali hi pada rehta hai..tisra room Sita ka hai phir lasta wala room mujhe diya huva tha jo pehle store room huva karta tha..ab usme me rehta hu is liye room ko ache se rakhta hu...sab ke room ke under hi bathroom hai sivay mere room ko chod kar...me hamare flor par ek extra washroom banaya huva tha ushe use karta hu ...
Subhah 5 baje me nind se uthta hu...phir bahar jake washroom me fresh hoke teres par chala jata hu or exercise karne lagta hu...ek ghanta or 30 min tak exercise kar ke phir apne room me aa jata hu....meri body pure pasine se bhigi huvi thi to mene towel liya or kapde nikal kar towel bandh kar bahar nikal kar washroom me chala gaya or 20 min tak under ache se naha ya or phir apne room me aake dusre kapde pehne or ache se taiyar huva....phir mene dekha to time 7:20 ho gaya tha to me niche chal diya...
jab me niche hall me pahocha to dekha sumitra matlab meri badi maa ( mere papa ki pehli patni) kitchen me hai or vo kuch bana rahi thi or unke sath me kamwali bai bhi thi...
( kamvali bai ka name kamla hai vo subhah 7 baje humare ghar aati hai kam karne or 9 baje chali jati hai or sham ko 5 baje aati hai..or khana banake or bartan dho ke chali jati hai apne ghar..)
Aditya :- ( man me) ye kamini orat kitchen me kya kar rahi hai...roj to 8 baje uthati hai aaj iski gand me kisne subhah 2 me lund pel diya jo 7 baje uth gay or fresh hoke kitchen me kam kar rahi hai....saali ek number ki aalsi orat hai....phir aaj itne jaldi kyu uth gay... bhenchod ab me coffee bhi nahi manga sakta kamla moisi se...ye kamini orat ne sun liya to tane marne lage gi bc....
Me hall me hi sofe par beth kar sumitra ko kitchen se chale jane ka intzaar karne laga....me 5 min tak betha raha ki mene dekha ki sumitra kitchen se ek plat or cup le kar apne room ki taraf chali gay....acha huva usne mujhe dekha nahi bc varna kuch na kuch suna deti mujhe...
Me uth kar kitchen me jane hi wala tha ki kamla mosi cup me coffee leke aa gay ..
Kamla mosi :- lo beta tumhari coffee..
Aditya :- ( mene cup liya ) thank you mosi...
Kamla mosi :- are beta isme dhanywaad deni ki kya bat hai...ye to mera kam hai...
Aditya :- aap ko paise sirf khana banana or coffee chai banane ka or bartan dhone ka milta hai...apka kam itna hi hai sab ko coffee dena ya khana serve karna ye kam apka nahi hai...bhir bhi aap extra kam bhi karti hai...or mujhe roj subhah coffee bhi dene aati hai to apko thank you to kehna banta hai...
Kamla mosi :- acha acha thik hai phir...chalo ab coffee khatam karo or cup do mujhe phir khana bhi banana hai mujhe...
phir mene coffee khatam ki or khali cup mosi ko de diya or mosi wapis kitchen me chali gay...
me sochne laga bhenchod ab kya karu abhi to breakfast bhi nahi bana....koi nahi thoda bahar tahel leta hu..
phir me ghar se nikal gaya pedal hi raste par or thodi dur chala phir ek park me ghus gaya....
Me :- ( man me ) bhenchod yaha to bahot sari chut hai kisi ko pata ta hu....pat gay to mere lund ki seva karegi bc...
park me subhah subhah me bahot log exercise karne or yoga karne aaye huve the kuch jogging kar rahe the....
kuch ladke or aadmi bhi the par aunty lok jyada thi or ladkiya bhi bahot thi bc....shayad unhe apni fitness ki jyada fiker thi lagta hai...
abhi me taraf haryali dekh hi raha tha ki mujhe ek ladki dikh gay or uska shehra dekh kar mere dil me ek dard hone laga....
meri ankhe bhi thodi si nam ho gay or mujhe mera past yaad aane laga....meri ankho me mera past dikhne laga or mere dil ka dard or bad gaya....vo ladki jogging karte huve park ke under ki or chali gay or me apne dard bhare past se bahar aaya or apne aap ko sambhala or wapis ghar ki taraf nikal gaya...
Me jab ghar aaya to hall me papa bethe huve the or coffee pi rahe the...sumitra bhi hall me bethi huvi thi taiyar hoke job par jane ke liye..
Aditya :- good morning papa...
Papa :- good morning....subhah subhah kaha se aa rahe ho?
Aditya :- vo papa jogging karne gaya tha..
Papa :- chai coffee kuch piya ki nahi..?
Aditya :- pike hi bahar gaya tha papa..
Papa :- kya pike gaya tha
Aditya :- coffee ...
Sumitra :- to aise sidha sidha jawab de na yu ghuma phira ke kyu bol raha hai nalayak..
Aditya :- ( men me ) bhenchod iska din kabhi mujhe sunaye bina nikalta hi nahi hai bhenchod....pata nahi bc iski maa ne kiska lund khake ise peda kiya tha...
Papa :- jao nasta ban gaya hoga...kha lo phir college bhi jana hoga tumhe...
( ab yaha se Aditya ki jagah ME likhunga ok )
Me :- okk papa....
phir me dining table pe gaya or vaha khana rakha huva tha to mene apni plat me khana nikala or khane laga...me khatae huve dekha to Sapna apne room se niche aa rahi thi fresh hoke... mene ek bar dekha or wapis apne khane par dhyan diya or khane laga...
Me :- ( man me ) bc is sumitra ke tane sun kar do mera khun khol uthta hai...bhenchod man karta hai ki sali ke muh me hi lund dal du par bc apne baap ki wajah se chup rehna padta hai....mera baap mujhe pyaar nahi karta par kabhi kabhi mujhse achi tarah baat to kar leta hai or sath me meri padhay ka jo bhi kharcha hota hai iske paise bhi deta hai....haan dusre baap apne bete ko bahot pyaar karte hai or ek dost ki taraf apne bete se bate karte hai....vo sab to mujhe nahi milta par mera papa mujhe apna beta to mante hai....par ye chinal sumitra to mujhe bilkul bhi pasand nahi karti har vakt nujhe ulta sidha sunati rehti hai... bhenchod isi liye ise me name se hi bolta hu varna rishtey me to meri badi maa lagti hai ..
khair mene nasta finish kiya or apne room me chala gaya or college jane ke liye wapis ready hone laga....
niche hall me ab papa or sapna bethe the or Sumitra to apni job par jane ke liye nikal gay thi pata nahi bhosdi ki itni jaldi aaj kyu ja rahi thi...
Me 30 min baad college jane ke liye nikal gaya apni bike leke...ye bike mujhe mere mama ne gift di thi mere birthday par jab me first year me tha college me...
Thodi der me college pahoch gaya or bike parking me laga ke under jane laga ki tabhi mera friend tha vo bhi aa gaya or usne bhi apni bike park ki or mere pass aa gaya...
Aryan Patel :- ( mera best friend ) ye gujarat se hai par inke maa baap yaha par aa kar settel ho gay tab se yaha Mumbai me hi inka ghar hai..hum dono ki Dosti 11th me school me huvi thi tabhi se hum dono best friend hai school ke baad college me bhi sath me admission liya humne... he dikhne me acha hi hai bas sharir se thoda sa mota hai phir bhi handsome hi dikhta hai...is liye iski ek Gf bhi hai college me...
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