Thriller Mastermind... (Completed)

  • You need a minimum of 50 Posts to be able to send private messages to other users.
  • Register or Login to get rid of annoying pop-ads.

Adirshi

Royal कारभार 👑
Staff member
Moderator
Messages
25,324
Reaction score
31,615
Points
189
◆ Update 3 ◆
Us aadmi ne apni layi huyi chabi se room ka darwaja khola aur samne ka drishya dekh kar dono ki saanse hi ruk gayi...apan jo dekh rahe hai uspar un dono ka wiswas hi nahi ho raha tha..

samne palang par us ladki ki adhi nangi lash padi thi...uske sharir ki chir fad ki huyi thi mano jaise kisi takiye ko fada ho............
----------------------------------------------------------
inspector pawar tarwade gaon main head police inspector the..kuch chote mote gunhe chod diye jaye tp tarwade gaon waise shant hi tha isiliye inspector pawar par kaam ka kabhi utna boja nahi aaya tha..

us din bhi wo apne ghar main chicken curry jam ke data kar so gaye the tabhi unhe police station main se is gunah ki information dene wala phone aaya aur hadbadi main hi wo apni vardi pehan kar ghatna stal ki or ravana huye..

us lodge ka pura parisar polico ki gadiya...ambulance...byts lene ke liye aaye huye patrakaro ki gardi is sab se bhar chuka tha..us room main inspector pawar panchnama kar rahe the...15 saal ke unke career main unhone aisi nirghrin aur krur hatya kabhi nahi dekhi thi ye aqisa pehla vakya tha..photographers ne us gunah ki tasvere nikali..

"chavhan, nishan mile kya kuch??" pawar

"sir, lodge hai ye, kai logo ke prints mile hai, usme se us gunahgr ke foot prints konse hai bata pana mushkil hai" chavhan

"hmm thik hai, acha un counter par ke logo ki cheaking aur introgation kar liya hai kya?" pawar

"ha sir, usne room ki chabiya is ladki ke paas hi di thi aur wo neend main hone ki wajah se uske sath wale us aadmi ka discription nahi de paya" chavhan

"hmm acha thik hai, ek baat batao ye crime hone ke baad kisi ne us insan ko bahar jate huye dekha hai kya matlab lodge main ka koi?" pawar

"nahi sir, kisi ne nahi dekha humne yaha pohochte hi lodge seal kar diya tab se to koi bahar nahi gaya to shayad wo prhle hi bhag gaya ho"chavhan

"bus main ke passengers, driver , conductor, kisi ne to dekha hoga use?"

"ha sir waise uska thoda thoda discription hai kal subah us par se ek sketch bana lenge lekin use dekihte hi pachan ne wala abhi to bhi koi nahi hai"chavhan

"acha to te ye bus kaha se nikalti hai waha puch tach karo ticket nikalte huye bus main chadhte huye kisi ne to dekha hoga use " pawar

"sir wo beech raste se bus main chadhaa tha" chavhan

"beech raste matlab?" pawar ne dimag par jor dete huye pucha

"beech raste matlab sir driver bata raha tha ke tarapur exit ke paas use ek band car dikhi usi ke paas ye insan khada tha aur isne lift mangi thi"chavhan

"arre chavhan ye pehle batana tha na!! abhi ke abhi kisi ko waja bhejo agar waha wo car mili to usme se koi clue mil sakta hai aur driver se us car ke bare main puchtach karo uska rang konsa tha konse make ki gadi thi sab sari information jama karo" hyper hote huye pawar bole..

"ha sir savant gaye hai gadi lekar us exit ke paas " chavhan

"aas paas kuch ghar hai waha inquiry karo raat beraat ko kisi ko jate huye dekha hai kya aur apne gaon maain aaye huye naye logo se bhi puchtach karo ki wo kaha se aaye hai kiske sath aaye hai kaha se aaye hai sabkuch with proof sari mahiti jama karo"pawar

"ok sir" itna bol kar chavhan baki ke kaam karne waha se chala gaya

"shinde, body postmortem ke liye bhej do aur khoon ke pehle agar mari huyi mahila par balatkare hua hoga to wo bhi panchname main likh lo. panchname ki report..sare papers subah mere pohochne ke pehle mere table par hone chahiye" itna bol kar pawar bhi waha sse bahar aa gaye

bahar do hawaldar reporters ko ander aane se rok rahe the dead body bahar aate hi un reporters ne waha kafi gardi kar di lekin unhe jada information nahi mil payi

raste ke dusri or khet main chip kar khade khade 'wo' bhi ye sabkuch dekh raha tha..poloco ki gadiya, ambulance, jati huyi usne dekhi..do minute usne apne aap se vichar kiya aur fir us andhere khet main se rasta nikalte huye wo bhi chalne laga......

 

Adirshi

Royal कारभार 👑
Staff member
Moderator
Messages
25,324
Reaction score
31,615
Points
189
Teesra update posted bhailog :cool:
 

Rahul

Goodbye
Messages
60,562
Reaction score
70,635
Points
174
wonderful update dost par abhi ek update aur do taki mere bheje me kuch ghuse ki us ladke ka kya hua:flowers:
 

Rahul

Goodbye
Messages
60,562
Reaction score
70,635
Points
174
waiting next update
 

Adirshi

Royal कारभार 👑
Staff member
Moderator
Messages
25,324
Reaction score
31,615
Points
189

Adirshi

Royal कारभार 👑
Staff member
Moderator
Messages
25,324
Reaction score
31,615
Points
189
*Update 4*

raste ke dusri or khet main chip kar khade khade 'wo' bhi ye sabkuch dekh raha tha..poloco ki gadiya, ambulance, jati huyi usne dekhi..do minute usne apne aap se vichar kiya aur fir us andhere khet main se rasta nikalte huye wo bhi chalne laga......
--------------------------------------------------------
apne room cum office main ek maili khurchi par detective jhon kuch sochte huye baitha tha..uski dadhi badhi huyi thi aur kapde bhi maile aur silwate bhare huye the..uski or deklh kar detective bol kar kaam lana wala client bhi chalaa jata tha..office puri tahar se uthal puthal hua pada tha..table par aur baki pure room main bhi bijhu huyi used cigaretts padi thi..ek kone main kaam ki information ke liye fade huye newspapers aur magzines ka gattha pada tha kai dino se saaf safayi na hone ki wajah se har tarah dhul aur mitti ka hi samrajya tha...

jhon ki detective company chalu karne ki idea puri tarah se fail ho gayi thi...surwaat main aaye huye kuch cases chod diye jaye to use us hisab ki success nahi mili thi..kuch choti moti cases ab bhi pending thi..lekin dicorce ke liye saboot jama karna, kisi raees baap ki beti par dhayan rakhna..skahi pati ki patni par najar rakhna...is tarah ke boriyat bhare kaam kar kar ke ab jhon thak chuka tha....uski buddhi ko chalna dene wali....uski capacity test karne wali aur sath ki samay ke hisaab se paisa dene wali ek case ki use jarurat thi aur wo use mil nahi rahi thi..

table par pending bills pade the..jhon ne ekbaar nirasha se unsab par najar daudayi..apna bhi ekhada posh office ho..apna detection lene ke liye....appointments dne ke liye ekhadi secratary ko...hath ke niche kaam karne wale kuch log ho,..car driver aise uske kai sapne abhi pure nahi huye the...

jhon ne apne pant ki jeb m,ain hath dala apne paas bache huye paise mojne ke liye to usme ek dus rupaye ki note aur kuch chiller bas itna hi tha to "chai ya cigarette..?" jhon ne apne aap se pucha..aur fir ek cigarette lekar baki paise kal ke liye bachaye jaye aisa soch kar wo lakdi ki seedhiyo se niche utra aur nukkad par bane paan ki dukan par cigarette lene chala gaya..

us paan wale ko bhi jhon ke bare main bhari jigyasa thi aur jhon bhi use prabhavit karne ke liye kuch bhi kahaniya bana kar apan kis higfh level ke ditective hai ye batane ki koshish karta rehta tha..

"kya jhon bhai..kaisa chal raha hai aapka kaam?" cigarette dete huye paan wale ne pucha

"thik chal raha hai waise aajkal ek bohot inportant case par kaam kar raha hu...thoda busy hu.."jhon ne aise hi keh diya.

"arre chodiye wo case, aap wo case kyu nahi lete hath main..apna bajuwala gaon hai na tarwade waha ek ladki ka khoon hua hai"

"konsa case" chehre par koi bhi haav bhav na late huye jhon ne pucha

"arre wahi tarwade gaon ka case....ek ladki ka kisi ne lodge main katal kar diya..lagta hai koi sirfira killer hai ye dikhiye.." itna bol kar usne apne paas ke news paper main aayi huyi news jhon ko dikhai

jhon ne apni tikshna najro se fatafat sari news padh dali aur wo news paper us paanwale ko wapas karte huye bola

"arre chodo yaar, kya aise chote mote cases leneka,.main to kuch bade chiz pe kaam karne wala hi" fir se ek baar us paan wale ko hul dete huye jhon wala se nikal gaya

apne office main aane ke baad usne apni cigarette jalayi aur do lambe kash maarne ke baad wo sochne laga..

"kya karna chahiye.? waie to kuch bhi kaam nahi hai aur aise khali baithe baithe buddhi ko jung lag raha hai bas usse acha agar kuch hath lag gaya to thodi fame hum bhi bator lenge" itna baat dimag main aate hi jhon ne apne hath main ki cigarette khatam ki aur offoce ko tala laga kar nikal gaya.

sabse pehle to wo free library main gaya waha usne pichle do dino ke sare akhbaar nikale aur un news papers ke gatthe main se 'tarwade' gaon ke khoon ke bare main mahiti dene wale sare akhbaar ek side kiye aur fir ek kone main shanti se baith kar usne ek ek karke sari news padh dali...uska dimag har chiz ko barkai se padh raha tha..aur hath kuch chuninda bato ko uski note bopok main likh rahe the..

raat ko der tak usne use jo chahiye thi wo sari information jama ki aur wo ghar aaya..ghar pahochte hi usne almari main se apne kuch ache kapde nikal ke ek suitcase main bhare..use kar kar ke ghise huye razor usne apni shave ki aur fir mast naha kar wo aaine ke samne khada raha..

utsah aur atmaviswas se bhara hua ek naya hi jhon us aaine main dikhai de raha tha..' bas yahi ek aakhri mauka hai' usne apne aap se kaha..is baar agar kaam nahi jama to itne utsah se suru ki huyi ye detective company band karne ke alawa uske paas dusra koi rasta nahi bacha tha..

 

Adirshi

Royal कारभार 👑
Staff member
Moderator
Messages
25,324
Reaction score
31,615
Points
189
chautha update bhi posted
 

Adirshi

Royal कारभार 👑
Staff member
Moderator
Messages
25,324
Reaction score
31,615
Points
189
* Update 5 *
usne apne ghar main ek najar daudayi..showcase par uska bill na bhare jane ki wajah se band pada hua mobile pada tha...'mobile handset bech kar kuch din chalenge itne paiso ka intajam jo jayega' aisa vichar karke usne wo phone jeb main dala aur apni kapdo ki bag lekar ghar ke bahar nikal pada.......
--------------------------------------------------
"are o pashya abe jara idhar to aaiyo" bhausaheb paper main ki news apdhte huye bole....bhausaheb tarwade gaon ke patil the yani mukhiya the aur ek raees aadmi..boli main gaon ki jhalak thi fir bhi is gaon main yahi sabse hussar samajhdar aadmi tha...uske chalne main bolne main behavior main ek rubab tha gaon ke log usse thoda sambhal ke hi rehte the...gaon main ke jhagde maramari sirf bhausaheb ke jane se hi mit jaya karti thi....uska gaon ke beecho beech kisi mahal ke jaisa bada vada(bangla) th...gaon ke bahar angoor..jawari...bajre ke khet the..aur usme kaam karne wale asankhaya majdoor...gaon main 2 petrol pump....gaon ke dusre side jaha tak najar jayegi waha tak jameen...ghar main mehngi cars..hatho main sone ki anguthiya..chehre par ek karara bhavaur usi ko suit karengi aisi rubabdar badi badi muche....kapdo main jyadatar istari kiya hua cream color ka shirt aur ekdum safed dhoti aur pairo main chrr..chrr...awaz karne wali kolhapuri chapple

paper main chapi ek news i or ishara karte huye ye bhausaheb pashya se bol rahe the...

"are ye shweta hai na?? are khoon ho gaya hai iska gaon ke bahar lodge main" bhausaheb

"hao bhausaheb...wahi hai..raand sali..apne karmo ki wajah se mari hogi..pakda hoga kisi sirfire ko aur ye ho gaya" pashya

"are ye kya hai..kabhi kisi mare huye ke bare main aisa nahi bolte" bhausaheb

"maaf kardo bhausaheb lekin wo thi hi aisi main hi nahi sara gaon aisa bol raha hai" pashya apni gardan jhuka ke bola

"are hoga bhi aisa lekin ab to wo mar chuki hai hau na? acha thik hai thode samay se gadi nikal na hum is ladki ke ghar jayenge aur ate samay police inspector se bhi milte aayenge samjhe.."bhausaheb

"hao saheb abhi subah hi mast chakachak do ke rakhi hai gadi" pashya waha se jaye huye bola

bhausaheb ne puri news padhi aur samne rakha hui adrak wali chai pine lage....

*****************

bhausaheb police station main pahuche tab inspector postmortem ki reports padhne main vyast the bhausaheb ko ander aata dekh wo uth kar khade ho gaye

"are baitho baitho aap kyu khade ho rahe ho" olice station ke darwaje se ander aate huye bhausaheb bole

"abe police inspector hai aap aapke samne humne khada rehna chahiye aap ne hamare nahi.." bhausaheb

"are bhasaheb aap bhi ab is garib ki maja lene lag gaye..are ye pura gaon aapke samne natmastak hai fir hum kaise baithe reh sakte hai..aaiye baithiye" samne ki kurchi ki or ishara karte huye pawar bole

"pawar saheb...news paper main padha kal ki bat ke bare main..aap kal raat se yahi ho kya?? bhausaheb

"nahi, kal panchnama kar ke ghar chala gaya tha subah jaldi aaya hu" pawar ne jawab diya

"to jara batayenge ki asal main kya hua hai??" bhausaheb main apni badi mucho ko taav dete huye pucha

"kaisa hai bhausaheb mamla thoda confidential hai puri chan bin ke bagair kuch kaha nahi ja sakta lekin aapko bata raha hu..wo gaon ki hi ek ladki hai jiska'sujit lodge main khoon hua hai shweta naam hai uska aap jante hai kya use??" pawar

"are kon nahi pehchanta uska..? gaon ek lagbhag har ghar ka bistar garam kiya hai usne aur.."pashya aage bhi kuch bolne wala tha ke bhausaheb ne uski baat kaat di

"pashya jab tak bolne ko na kaha jaye beech main mat bolo!!" aur fir pawar se bole

"pawar saheb mera waise to usse koi lena dena nahi hai lekin gaon ki bacchi hai...matlab thi..bas isiliye thodi ki mahiti (information) chahiye thi"

bhausaheb ki baate inspector pawar dhayan se sun rahe theaur unki baat khatam hone par bole

"hmm!! to kal uska chaku maar kar khoon hua hai..ek baar ya do baar nahi balki aath baar uspar chaku se vaar huye hai...ispar se khuno ko ya to usne liye man main kafi chidh thi aur dusri baat ki use marne ke liye hi uspar hamla hua hai lekin is khoon ke piche ka karan samah main nahi aaya kyuki uspar balatkar nahi hua tha purse main ke paise aur jewar sabhi sahi salamat the!!" pawar

"acha acha!! to fir koi surag hath laga" bhausaheb ne pucha

"main mafi chahunga bhausaheb lekin abhi kuch bataya nahi ja sakta samay aane par aapko puri baat pata chal hi jayegi" pawar

"thik hai thik hai aapka bhi sahi hai aap tehre sarkari aadmi hamara kya hai isi gaon main paida huye yahi jee rahe hai..chalne do aapke kaam" itna bol kar bhausaheb waha se uthe aur jane lage....

unke waha se jane tak pawar unhe dekhte rahe aur jaise hi wo najro se door huye pawar ne fir se waha rakhi file uthayi aur padhne main kho gaye............

 

Adirshi

Royal कारभार 👑
Staff member
Moderator
Messages
25,324
Reaction score
31,615
Points
189
Update 5 posted
 

Rahul

Goodbye
Messages
60,562
Reaction score
70,635
Points
174
wonderful updates yara:flowers:
 
Top

Dear User!

We found that you are blocking the display of ads on our site.

Please add it to the exception list or disable AdBlock.

Our materials are provided for FREE and the only revenue is advertising.

Thank you for understanding!