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Thanx bro for the wonderful commentnice update bro waiting for next
I know but kya pata aap future me mysterious tareeke se samar ki maa ko le aao, ye sab toh aapki lekhni par depend karta hai, kya pata pariwar walo ne chhupa kar rakha ho kisi dar se aur abhi toh ye bhi nahi pata chala ki samar ke paas powers kahan se aayi hain, mujhe toh yahi lagta hai ki kahin na kahin samar ki maa zinda hogi, that's my point of viewBhai Samar ki maa ki death ho chuki hai dengue se,maine pehle hi update me likha tha.
Bhai ho bhi sakta hai nahi bhi ho sakta haiI know but kya pata aap future me mysterious tareeke se samar ki maa ko le aao, ye sab toh aapki lekhni par depend karta hai, kya pata pariwar walo ne chhupa kar rakha ho kisi dar se aur abhi toh ye bhi nahi pata chala ki samar ke paas powers kahan se aayi hain, mujhe toh yahi lagta hai ki kahin na kahin samar ki maa zinda hogi, that's my point of view
Ok bro, waiting for next update, update regular dete rehna dost , hope karta hoon agla update mast hoga shayad nanihaal ke sadasyon ka introduction dekhne ko mil jaye toh aur maza aa jayega aur ek baat dost ki thoda mystery bhi add karo story me, suspense read karne me gazab ka maza aata haiBhai ho bhi sakta hai nahi bhi ho sakta hai
Aur rahi baat powers ki to sab kuch kahani me aage chal ke apne aap saaf ho jaayega
Bas thoda intezaar kijiye
Mst update...bhai?
fantastic update waiting for next
Amaz
Amazing jbardust update
Very nice update
Nice update
Nice one
Nice n fantastic update
Garima aur Nisha jab se gye hain kahani thoda boring ho gayi hai, kahani me drama bhi bhot ho raha hai ab ye Himani aa gayi bandi hai toh intelligent, shayad ye bhi same gaanv ki ho, ab dekhte hain ki gaanv me ye kya masti karta hai, thoda mystery bhi add karo bhai, yahan thoda flashback dekhne ko mila , aakhir iski maa ki death kaise hui hogi? Gaanv me zaroor maa ki death se related koi proof mile ya shayad abhi samar ki maa zinda ho
Next update me nanihaal ka introduction dekhne ko zaroor milega, ek suggestion bas yahi dunga bhai ki story Ko to the point likhiye, faltu ki baatein kam se kam aur kaam ki zyada , bura mat manna dost update me aadhi baatein kaam ki hoti hain aur aadhi baaton me drama sa lagta hai
Mama ke ghar pohanch hi gaya or anchal se jhagda bhi kar liya ab ye kya mod legi dekhte he
Nice update
Nice update
nice update bro waiting for next
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Waiting
I know but kya pata aap future me mysterious tareeke se samar ki maa ko le aao, ye sab toh aapki lekhni par depend karta hai, kya pata pariwar walo ne chhupa kar rakha ho kisi dar se aur abhi toh ye bhi nahi pata chala ki samar ke paas powers kahan se aayi hain, mujhe toh yahi lagta hai ki kahin na kahin samar ki maa zinda hogi, that's my point of view
Update Posted guysOk bro, waiting for next update, update regular dete rehna dost , hope karta hoon agla update mast hoga shayad nanihaal ke sadasyon ka introduction dekhne ko mil jaye toh aur maza aa jayega aur ek baat dost ki thoda mystery bhi add karo story me, suspense read karne me gazab ka maza aata hai
Mst updateUpdate-16
Mai apne mama ke ghar ke baahar khada tha,aaj pata nahi kitne saalon baad mai yahan aaya tha.
Chaliye mai aapko apne nanihaal waalon ka intro de dun.
Phoolwati Devi:age 68...meri nani
Param Singh:age 48.....mere bade mama
Pushpa Devi:age 43....meri badi mamiji
Raghav:age 22....mere mama ke bete
Anshika:age 20....mere mama ki beti,inki shaadi ho gayi hai 1 saal pehle
Mere 1 chhote mama bhi hain par unka intro baad me dunga.
Mai turant gate se andar ghus gaya to maine dekha ki nani aangan me khaat par baithi hui thi. Mama aur Raghav bhaiya to is time dukaan par hote the aur shayad mami kitchen me hongi. Nani ki meri taraf peeth thi,mai dabe paaon unke paas gaya aur unki aankhon par hath rakh diye. Nani hadbada gayi aur puchne lagi.
Nani--kon hai?
Mai(aawaz badalte huye)--mai chor hun,chupchap apne saare paise mujhe de do.
Meri baat sun ke nani dar gayi aur zor-2 se "chor chor" chillane lagi. Maine turant unki aankhon se hath hata liye aur unhe chup karane laga.
Mai--arre nani,mai hoon,main hoon Samar.
Nani ne meri aawaz suni aur palat ke mujhe dekha to unki aankhon me aansoo aa gaye. Vo turant khadi hui aur mere seene se lag ke rone lagi.
Nani--mera bacha,tu aa gaya.
Mai--arre nani chup ho jao. Ro kyon rahi ho,mai to aa gaya hoon na. Arre ab to maine aap ke mann ki kardi to ab kyon ro rahi hoon.
Nani ka rona sunke mami daudi-2 bahar aangan me aa gayi aur jaise hi unhone mujhe dekha to vo bhi khush hone lagi. Mai to abhi bhi nani ko chup kara raha tha.
Mai--nani yahan to sookha bilkul bhi na padta hoga,aap hi ro-2 ke saare kheton me paani daal deti hogi. Arre bas karo,ab kya ganga-jamuna 1 sath bahaogi.
Nani mujhse alag huyi aur mujhe dular karne lagi. Nani sach me bahot boodhi ho gayi thi,unke chehre par jhooriyan aa gayi thi aur unki aankhen bhi budhape ke chalte kam hi khul rahi thi. Kamar bhi unki thoda jhuki hui thi.
Nani--tu toh kitna bada ho gaya hai.
Mai--haan nani aur aap kitni boodhi ho gayi ho.
Nani--chal tu jaldi se naha le,kuch khaya bhi nahi hoga tune. Pushpa,iske liye nashta bana dena.
Mai bhi pehle mami ke paas gaya aur unhe namaste kaha.
Mami--namaste. Aa gayi yaad hum sabki. Hume to laga tha bhool hi gaye hoge.
Mai--arre mami,mai kahan aapko bhoola hoon,vo to bas papa aane nahi dete varna mai to saal me 3 baar yahan aaun.
Mami--chal tu apna saaman Raghav ke kamre me rakh de aur fatafat naha le jaake.
Maine apna bag Raghav bhaiya ke kamre me rakha ayur fatafat bathroom me ghus gaya nahaane ke liye. Nahane ke baad maine nashta kiya,raat me theek se na so paane ki wajah se mujhe neend aa rahi thi to mai Raghav bhaiya ke room me jaake so gaya. Din me kareeb 3 baje meri neend Raghav bhaiya ke jagane se khuli. Jaise hi maine Raghav bhaiya ko dekha to turant unke gale lag gaya.
Raghav--aur chhote kaisa hai?
Mai--theek hoon bhaiya.
Raghav--chal baahar chalte hain,maa khana khane bula rahi hain.
Mai--aap chalo mai aata hun.
Maine 1 angdayi li,ab neend poori ho chuki thi to kaafi fresh feel kar raha tha. Mai bhi bahar hall me aa gaya khana khane ke liye. Baahar hall me sirf nani,mami aur Raghav bhaiya the. Mere mama ka market me restaurant tha to vo wahin kha lete the. Mai sabke sath khana khane baith gaya.
Raghav--chhote tune to kaha tha ki tu nahi aa payega,fir achanak kaise?
Mai--vo maine jhoot kaha tha aapse. Maine socha aap sabko surprise dunga isliye maine aap logon ko mana kar diya ki mai nahi aaunga.
Nani--vaise 1 baat bata,tera baap maan kaise gaya tere yahan aane ke liye.
Mami--ab maaji,use khana khane bhi doge yaa baaton me hi laga ke rakhoge aap log.
Mai--arre koi baat nahi mami,mujhe aadat hai khate waqt baat karne ki. Vo hua yun nani,jis din aapki call aayi thi,us din maine papa se baat ki thi par vo nahi maane. Baad me dadi ne samjhaya to vo maan gaye.
Nani--acha hua tu aa gaya,tera baap to tujhe humse milne bhi nahi deta. Teri maa ke marne ke baad to humaare saare rishte khatam ho gaye the us ghar se.
Mai--ye kaise ho sakta hai nani,abhi mai hoon,aapko aur unhe jode rakhne waali kadi. Jab tak mai hoon,aap logon ka rishta nahi toot sakta.
Fir humne saath me khana khaaya aur uske baad mai Raghav bhaiya ke sath market ke liye nikal pada. Jab hum market pahoche to dekha chaaron taraf bahot chehal-pehal thi, har dukaan par grahakon ki bheed lagi hui thi. Asal me ye market 4-5 gaon ke paas padti thi to un sabhi gaaon ke log yahin aate the khariddaari karne. Raghav bhaiya mujhe seedha mama ke restaurant me le gaye. Thodi hi der me hum restaurant ke saamne khade the,maine baahar lage board par naam pada-"Nirmala Bhojanalaya". Mujhe bahot khushi hui ye jaankar ki is restaurant ka naam meri maa ke naam par rakha gaya hai. Mai andar gaya to andar ki haalat dekh ke meri aankhe khuli ki khuli reh gayi. Andar se restaurant ki maa chudi padi thi. Behanchod kursiyan aur table tootne ko ho rahi thi,diwar ka plaster jhad raha tha. Behanchod paint karwaye hue to aisa lag raha tha jaise sadiyan beet gayi ho aur deewaron par seelan bhi aa chuki thi. Jagah-2 par chuhe ghoom rahe the,saala restaurant kam aur store room zyada lag raha tha.
Mai(mann me)--behanchod ye kya haalat bana rakhi hai restaurant ki,saala yahan log khana khane aate hain ya chuhe. Saala pata nahi kab se marammat bhi nahi karwayi hai,halka sa bhi bhookamp aaya na to ye dukaan to pakka gir jaayegi.
Mai apni soch me dooba hua tha ki tabhi mujhe mama ki aawaz sunayi di. Vo mujhe dekh ke bade khush the,vo turant mere paas aaye aur mujhe gale se laga liya.
Mai--namaste mama. Kaise ho aap?
Mama--theek hoon beta. Tu kaisa hai?
Mai--mai bhi theek hoon mama.
Mama--kitna bada ho gaya hai tu. 1 waqt tha jab mai tujhe god me leke ghoomta tha aur aaj dekho apne mama se bhi lamba ho gaya hai tu.
Mama ne mujhe fir baithne ko kaha aur mai wahin 1 kursi par baith gaya. Mere baithte hi kursi ne halki si charr ki aawaz kar di. Behanchod,meri to gaand fatt rahi thi ki kahin kursi na toot jaaye,agar tooti to meri gaand bhi girne ki wajah se zaroor toot jaayegi. Mama ne Raghav bhaiya se mere liye 1 pepsi ki botal mangwa li aur thodi hi der me Raghav bhaiya mere liye botal leke aa gaye. Maine Raghav bhaiya se botal le li aur fir hum sabhi baithkar baatein karne lage.
Mama--beta,Raghav ne to bola tha ki tu nahi aayega fir kaise.
Mai--vo mama...(fir maine surprise waali baat mama ko bhi bata di)
Mama--acha kiya beta, tujhe dekhe huye kitne saal ho gaye the. Pehle to tu apni maa ke sath har saal aata tha par uske jaane ke baad tujhse milna bhi kam ho gaya humara. Aaj poore 13 saal baad tu yahan gaaon aaya hai aur tujhe pata hai ki kitne ache mauke par aaya hai tu. Abhi 11 din baad teri Rekha mausi hai na,uski beti Nandini ki shaadi hai.
Mai--sach me,ye to badi khushi ki baat hai. Matlab ab sahi time katega yahan.
Mai kuch der mama se baat karta raha,uske baad Raghav bhaiya mujhe apne sath le gaye. Hum chalte-2 market area se baahar aa gaye the. Raghav bhaiya ne apni jeb se beedi nikal li aur beedi fukane lage. Maine bhi unse 1 beedi le li,pehle kabhi pi nahi thi to socha aaj try karun. Jab maine 1 kash liya to kasam se dil khush ho gaya,aisa nahi tha ki uska taste cigarette se better tha par har cheez ki apni 1 alag value hoti hai. Hum dono yun hi beedi fukte rahe aur fir mai Raghav bhaiya se baat karne laga.
Mai--bhaiya,agar aap bura naa maano to 1 baat puchun.
Raghav--haan puch na chhote
Mai--bhaiya ye restaurant ki kya haalat bana rakhi hai,aisa lag raha tha ki kisi khandahar me aa gaya hoon. Bhaiya,kya mama restaurant par dhyaan nahi der rahe?
Raghav--arre nahi re chhote,aisa kuch nahi hai. Papa to de rahe hain dhyaan,bas dikkat ye hai ki kam log aate hain ab.
Mai--kyon?
Raghav--ab kya bataun chhote,tujhe to pata hai ye restaurant dadaji ne shuru kiya tha. Us time zyada dukaane nahi thi aaspaas to chalti thi humaari bhi dukaan. Ab market badh gaya hai,aur bhi dukaandaar aa gaye hain. Vo log nayi-2 cheezein khilaate hain jaise samose,pastries vagera-2. Aur humaare yahan sirf khana milta hai,ab khana to log ghar pe hi kha lete hain. Ye shahar to hai nahi jo bade-2 log khana khane baahar aaye aur restaurant chalta rahe. Jo puraane grahak the ab wahin aate hain aur vo bhi kam hote jaa rahe hain din par din. Thoda bahot kamayi hoti hai usme bas ghar chal jaata hai aur baaki thode bahot kharche ho jaate hain. Dukaan par paisa kahan se hi lagega ab.
Mai--hmmm,vo kehte hain na time ke saath upgrade hona padta hai. Bas mama bhi ab jaldi upgrade ho jaayein to humaari dukaan bhi chal pade.
Hum dono ne 1-1 beedi fook li thi aur fir dusri jala li. Hum dono wahin khade-2 aati jaati gaadiyon ko dekh rahe the. Tabhi mere dimaag me 1 khayaal aaya.
Mai--acha bhaiya,yahan koi jugaad hai kya?
Raghav--kis cheez ka?
Mai-- uska...
Pehle to Raghav bhaiya meri baat nahi samjhe par jab unke samajh me aayi to vo muskura diye.
Raghav--lagta hai chhote,tu bada ho gaya hai.
Mai--arre bhaiya bahot kuch bada ho gaya hai,aap bas yeh batao ki kuch ho paayega ya nahi.
Raghav--mera 1 jugaad hai chhote,dusre gaaon ki bandi hai. Usse bolke tera bhi kuch karwa deta hoon.
Mai--bahot badiya bhaiya. Ab pahadon me aaye hai aur pahadi aam na choose fir kya fayeda pahadon pe aane ka.
Raghav--tu bahot utawala ho raha hai,lagta hai tune Delhi me ek aadh ki le li hai. Hain na?
Mai--haan bhaiya,bahot aish ki hai tumhare bhai ne.
Raghav--acha to bata kis-2 ko choda tune?
Mai--ab kya bataun bhaiya,acha aapko humaari padosi vo Garima aunty yaad hai,humare bagal waale ghar me rehti thi.
Raghav--haa yaad hai(Raghav bhaiya 1 baar humaare yahan aaye the jab maa zinda thi,tab unhone dekha tha Garima ko)
Mai--bas bhaiya unhi ka game baja diya maine(fir maine Raghav bhaiya ko sab bata diya mere,Garima aur Nisha ki chudai ke baare me)
Raghav--tu to bahot fast hai chhote. Chal bahot jaldi tera kuch jugaad karwata hoon mai.
Uske baad hum dono thodi der yahan wahan bhatakte rahe aur fir ghar waapis aa gaye. Shaam ke 7 baj rahe the,tabhi mujhe meri aur Aanchal ki ladai yaad aa gayi to maine socha chalo usse hi thodi der baat kar leta hoon. Mai chhat par aa gaya aur fir maine use call lagaya to pehle usne phone nahi uthaya,maine use fir se call kiya to usne is baar phone utha liya.
Mai--hello Aanchal kaisi hai tu?
Aanchal--tujhse matlab. Phone kyon kiya hai?
Mai--ohhhh to lagta hai ab bhi naaraaz hai tu mujhse.
Aanchal--kuch zaroori baat karni hai to bol varna mai call kaat rahi hoon.
Mai--arre-2 ruk jaa thodi der. Itna bhi kya naaraaz hona,acha sun mujhe maaf kar de yaar please.
Aanchal--arre itne kam volume me kyon bol raha hai,chilla thoda,thoda aawaz ko upar le jaa apni
Mai--ha ha ha...very funny,dekh Aanchal maine call kiya hai tujhse baat karne ke liye to sun ab. Mai maanta hoon maine kal zyada bol diya tha tujhe par tune bhi overreact kiya tha. Mai sach me tujhe batana chahta tha theatre me par tu chali gayi aur mai bhool gaya tujhe batana. Dekh I understand ki tune bahot saare plans banaye the humaare liye aur mai bhi genuinely tere sath time spent karna chahta tha. I love you Aanchal,badi mushkil se to tu mujhe mili hai,tu kya sochti hai ki mai tere sath time spend nahi karna chahta. Meri bhi ichha hoti hai ki mai tere sath ghoomu,tujhse baatein karun,hum sath me time spend kare. Meri maa ke jaane ke baad you are the best thing happened in my life. Tujhe apne gusse ki wajah se nahi khona chahta mai isliye please maaf kar de mujhe.
Maine apni baat khatam ki aur uske jawaab ka wait karne laga par vo kuch bol hi nahi rahi thi. Maine socha kahin isne call to nahi kaat diya aur fir maine check bhi kiya par call chal raha tha.
Mai--hello,so gayi kya. Arre poore dil se kahi thi ye baat,itna boring tha kya.
Aanchal--haa,kitna bore karta hai tu.
Ye bolte huye Aanchal rone lagi,uske subakne ki aawaz aa rahi thi mujhe.
Mai--arre tu ro kyon rahi hai?
Aanchal--I'm sorry Samar,maine kal overreact kar diya tha. Mujhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha,mai bhool gayi thi ki is relationship me sirf mai hi nahi,tu bhi utna hi dedicated hai. I'm sorry.
Mai--arre ro mat. Koi baat nahi,maaf kar diya maine tujhe. Bahot bada dil hai mera. Acha chal rona band kar,tujhe pata hai na ki mai teri aankhon me aansoo bardasht nahi kar sakta. Please mat ro,dekh agar tune rona band nahi kiya to mai tujhse baat nahi karunga.
Aanchal--acha-2 nahi roti mai. Khush ab. Acha ye bata,tu kab aayega waapis?
Mai--1 mahina lag jaayega yahan pe.
Aanchal--1 mahina,kuch problem hai kya wahan pe?
Mai--nahi yaar,actually mai 13 saal baad yahan aaya hun to socha thoda time spend kar lun yahan pe. Fir pata nahi kab mauka mile. Par mai koshish karunga jald se jald waapis aane ki.
Aanchal--mai intezaar karungi tera,acha chal abhi phone rakhti hoon mai. Baad me baat karungi tujhse.
Mai--acha chal bye. Love you.
Aanchal--love you too.
Uske baad maine call kaat di,ab kaafi acha lag raha tha usse baat karke. Dil ko kaafi sukoon mil raha tha,Himani ne sahi kaha tha baat kar leni chahiye. Baat karne se bahot saare problems solve ho jaate hain. Maine mann hi mann Himani ko "thanx" bola aur fir chhat se waapis Raghav bhaiya ke kamre me aa gaya.