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Fantasy Manhoosh ( Revenge By KILLER )
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Update 3
iss tarh din nikl gai roj merko maar padti and Mai rota rehta
ab muje bi unse nfrt hone lage ti
AB mai 5 saal ka Ho gya ta dono mere Scl Mai admission ke liye MA ne dad sent baat ki to unohne mana kar diya
But Mai 7,8 saal jitne baccho jitna samj sakta ta and mera body bi kuch esa hi ta koi bi deke to yahi lagta ki 8 sal ka hu
for ma jese tese Kar Ke mera admission ek sarkari Scl Mai karva diya
Mai baki sare bhai behen ke badi private Scl mai padte Te
Mai morning Mai Scl jaata and baad mai gar aake kana khta Apne room mai and Baad mai jo sab Sab Jo kam karne ke liye bolate the vah kam Karta Tha
kam ke liye Mana bhi nahin kar sakte To Agar kam ke liye Mana Karta to maar padte isase Achcha To fir kam karna hi tha isliye main chupchap kam kar Leta tha aur Unka torcher bhi Sahan Karta Tha
Is Tarah Din nikalte Koi ab main 7 Sal ho gaya tha
mai study Mai kafi Acha ta ek ko Dek liya aur padh liya usko wapis padhne ki jarrurat nai ti
Main Apne pari Ke saath कभी-कभी Chupke Chupke se khel liya Karta Tha usko pata hi nahin tha ki main uska bhai hun
Ek Din sham ko date pata nahin ki dad Sharab pikar aaya tha Aur Main unke Samne a Gaya to FIR unhone mujhe bahut Mara main bhi Maar Khata Rah aur FIR Kuchh Kar Bhi Nahin Sakta tha bad Mein Chala Gaya to raat ko meri Nind Bahar se aati Kuchh Awaaz setup kuli to maine Chupke Se bahr ake sunne Laga to deka ki Mere Sab Parivar wale baat kar rahe the Mere Bhai Bahan ke alava
Arvind SINGH : bhai mai bol raha hu ki ab iss kutte ko yaha rkne ka koi matlab nai iss Acha to hum Isko maar dete hai
Dad : ha baat to sahi Teri iss manhoosh setup chutkara bi mil jaayga
Mom : Mai bi Yahi kehti Hu ji
NitaSingh and Naina SINGH hum bi yahi kaehte hai
Jyda nuksan Ho usse acha to yahi hai ki maar daale kutte ko
mai to Ye sab sunne Ke baad hi kuch bolne ki haalt Mai nai ta
maine Socha nai ta ki ye log itna nicche gir sakte hai Maine Soch liya ta ki mai kal Scl ke Baad bagh jaunga Kai dur
Ye log bi baat karke Sone ke liye chal jaate hai
meri nind kosho dur chali gai ti puro raat mai jaagta ta raha
next day
morning Mai
Mai : MA merko kuch rupees de do kuch kaam hai
MA : ha Ye le waise Kabi paise to tune mange nai fir aaj kyu
mai : kuch samn lena hai study relate
MA : Ohk
uss din to mera din hi karb ta
Mai room se nikl ke jaa raha ta ki Amit bhai se takra gya jisse unhone muje maara aur bole
Amit bhai : kutte dek Ke nai chl sakta kya
wo bahoot Jor se chillya jisse sab gar wale bi aati gai
jab unko baat ka pta cha unhone bi bahoot maar
meri haalt bahoot buri Ho gai ti
maar Khaane Ke baad dhere dhere Scl ki tarf chala gya
but scl nai gya
merko bahoot gussa aa raha ta maine Ye taan liya ta ki mai iss pariwar par isa grahn laganga ki inki rooh kaanp uthe
Mai Scl na jaake Railway Station chal gya waha pe Ek train chlne ki tyri mai ti so Mai bi beth gya
ek dibbe ke Kone Mein jakar chupchap baith Gaya
Meri Halat bahut Buri Thi lekin jaldi se Meri Halat theek ho gai yah To Mujhko Bhi Nahin Pata Tha ki Mere Gaon itni jaldi Kaise bar Jaate hain lekin Mere Gaon Sara jaldi bar gaite
vo train chlne lage iss tarh raat Ho gai
At home......
jab Mai gar nai pouncha tab sirf MA and didi ko bahoot tension Ho gya
MA : malkin vikram abi tak gar Mai aaya
mom: are wah kya kbr sunai hai wo Naa aaye to Acha Kai mar jaay to Acha hai
Agr Idr aa jaata to wese bi aaj usko marna ta haaaaa
Ye bol Ke hasne lagti hai
mom : acha hua manhoosh chala gya Hamra gar surkashit Ho gya
Ye sab baate bhar kadi Didi sun rahi ti AB unko bi gussa aa gya and Andrew aake boli
aap kya bolu rehi ho mom wo mera bhai and apka beta ta
mom: kya bol rahi hai tum bhai or Tera vo kutta ta and bhai to Tera amit ,rohan hai Samji
AB to vo nai aayga Kai mar gya hoga haaa
ab koi rasta nai ta maine or Didi chali jaati hai didi room mai jaake rone lagi
tab room mai pari aa gai
vo 4 saal ki Ho gai ti vo bi amber lagti thodi bahoot baate
pari(Tiya ): kya hua Didi aap ro Kyu rahi hai
didi : usko dekte Rona band krte hai and bolte hai nai sweeti mai Kaha ro rahi Hu
pari : didi juth mat boliye batyiy kya hua please didi Ye bol Ke vo bi rone lagti hai
didi: rote hue bolti hai betu vo chala gya vo chala gya
pari : kon chala gya didi
didi: bhai chala gya Hamra bhai
pari : Didi Amit bahi and rohan bhai to yahi hai
Didi : vo nai Hamra saga bhai Vikram
pari : kya Didi vo Hamra bhai kintu vo to nokr ta Na
didi: nahi sweetu vo nokr nai ta vo Hamra saga bhai ta
pari: kya would saga Bhai ta Ye bolte hue vo aur rone lagti hai
kunki mai hamesa uske ko chocolate deta ta and uske saath kelta ta Kisi pata nai ta iss baare Mai
pari : didi about bhai kabi wapis nai aaynge kya
Didi : nai vo aayga Kabi to usse hamri yaad wapis leke aayga
Ye sab mom dad and baki sabki wajh setup hua hai
pari : ha didi sahi kaha apne hamesa hunko marte rehte Te Mai ab Kabi baa nai karunga
did: Mai bi sweet
gar ke andr mai chala gya iski kbr sunte hi sab kush ho jaate and ek badi party rakte hai
In train....
ab kafi raat Ho chuki ti
train Mai kafi sannta ta.
mai bi chupchap so gya bhook to bahoot lagi but ab kar bi kya sakte hai
Next day....
Train ek platform par ruki ti mai bi utar gya waha pe board deka to pta chal ki mai mumbai mai aa gay ta
maine jo ma ke pass se paise liye Te usse kuch khna liya and kha liya jisse thodi bhook sant hui
Baad mai wha setup chlte gya chlte hue main bhoot dur aa gya ta road bi sumsan ta
at home......
MA ne bi muje dudne ki koshi ki lekin kuch pta nai chala
didi bi sabse bahot kam baate karti ti pari bi thoda bahoot ese karti ti
baki sab to kushiya mana rahe te
back to me......
ab raat Ho gai ti main bi sumsaan sadk pe chl raha ta tabi ek car udr piche se aati and muje uda deti hai jisse muje bahoot chot lagti hai Mai dur jaake gir ta hu
Baaki next update mai........
iss tarh din nikl gai roj merko maar padti and Mai rota rehta
ab muje bi unse nfrt hone lage ti
AB mai 5 saal ka Ho gya ta dono mere Scl Mai admission ke liye MA ne dad sent baat ki to unohne mana kar diya
But Mai 7,8 saal jitne baccho jitna samj sakta ta and mera body bi kuch esa hi ta koi bi deke to yahi lagta ki 8 sal ka hu
for ma jese tese Kar Ke mera admission ek sarkari Scl Mai karva diya
Mai baki sare bhai behen ke badi private Scl mai padte Te
Mai morning Mai Scl jaata and baad mai gar aake kana khta Apne room mai and Baad mai jo sab Sab Jo kam karne ke liye bolate the vah kam Karta Tha
kam ke liye Mana bhi nahin kar sakte To Agar kam ke liye Mana Karta to maar padte isase Achcha To fir kam karna hi tha isliye main chupchap kam kar Leta tha aur Unka torcher bhi Sahan Karta Tha
Is Tarah Din nikalte Koi ab main 7 Sal ho gaya tha
mai study Mai kafi Acha ta ek ko Dek liya aur padh liya usko wapis padhne ki jarrurat nai ti
Main Apne pari Ke saath कभी-कभी Chupke Chupke se khel liya Karta Tha usko pata hi nahin tha ki main uska bhai hun
Ek Din sham ko date pata nahin ki dad Sharab pikar aaya tha Aur Main unke Samne a Gaya to FIR unhone mujhe bahut Mara main bhi Maar Khata Rah aur FIR Kuchh Kar Bhi Nahin Sakta tha bad Mein Chala Gaya to raat ko meri Nind Bahar se aati Kuchh Awaaz setup kuli to maine Chupke Se bahr ake sunne Laga to deka ki Mere Sab Parivar wale baat kar rahe the Mere Bhai Bahan ke alava
Arvind SINGH : bhai mai bol raha hu ki ab iss kutte ko yaha rkne ka koi matlab nai iss Acha to hum Isko maar dete hai
Dad : ha baat to sahi Teri iss manhoosh setup chutkara bi mil jaayga
Mom : Mai bi Yahi kehti Hu ji
NitaSingh and Naina SINGH hum bi yahi kaehte hai
Jyda nuksan Ho usse acha to yahi hai ki maar daale kutte ko
mai to Ye sab sunne Ke baad hi kuch bolne ki haalt Mai nai ta
maine Socha nai ta ki ye log itna nicche gir sakte hai Maine Soch liya ta ki mai kal Scl ke Baad bagh jaunga Kai dur
Ye log bi baat karke Sone ke liye chal jaate hai
meri nind kosho dur chali gai ti puro raat mai jaagta ta raha
next day
morning Mai
Mai : MA merko kuch rupees de do kuch kaam hai
MA : ha Ye le waise Kabi paise to tune mange nai fir aaj kyu
mai : kuch samn lena hai study relate
MA : Ohk
uss din to mera din hi karb ta
Mai room se nikl ke jaa raha ta ki Amit bhai se takra gya jisse unhone muje maara aur bole
Amit bhai : kutte dek Ke nai chl sakta kya
wo bahoot Jor se chillya jisse sab gar wale bi aati gai
jab unko baat ka pta cha unhone bi bahoot maar
meri haalt bahoot buri Ho gai ti
maar Khaane Ke baad dhere dhere Scl ki tarf chala gya
but scl nai gya
merko bahoot gussa aa raha ta maine Ye taan liya ta ki mai iss pariwar par isa grahn laganga ki inki rooh kaanp uthe
Mai Scl na jaake Railway Station chal gya waha pe Ek train chlne ki tyri mai ti so Mai bi beth gya
ek dibbe ke Kone Mein jakar chupchap baith Gaya
Meri Halat bahut Buri Thi lekin jaldi se Meri Halat theek ho gai yah To Mujhko Bhi Nahin Pata Tha ki Mere Gaon itni jaldi Kaise bar Jaate hain lekin Mere Gaon Sara jaldi bar gaite
vo train chlne lage iss tarh raat Ho gai
At home......
jab Mai gar nai pouncha tab sirf MA and didi ko bahoot tension Ho gya
MA : malkin vikram abi tak gar Mai aaya
mom: are wah kya kbr sunai hai wo Naa aaye to Acha Kai mar jaay to Acha hai
Agr Idr aa jaata to wese bi aaj usko marna ta haaaaa
Ye bol Ke hasne lagti hai
mom : acha hua manhoosh chala gya Hamra gar surkashit Ho gya
Ye sab baate bhar kadi Didi sun rahi ti AB unko bi gussa aa gya and Andrew aake boli
aap kya bolu rehi ho mom wo mera bhai and apka beta ta
mom: kya bol rahi hai tum bhai or Tera vo kutta ta and bhai to Tera amit ,rohan hai Samji
AB to vo nai aayga Kai mar gya hoga haaa
ab koi rasta nai ta maine or Didi chali jaati hai didi room mai jaake rone lagi
tab room mai pari aa gai
vo 4 saal ki Ho gai ti vo bi amber lagti thodi bahoot baate
pari(Tiya ): kya hua Didi aap ro Kyu rahi hai
didi : usko dekte Rona band krte hai and bolte hai nai sweeti mai Kaha ro rahi Hu
pari : didi juth mat boliye batyiy kya hua please didi Ye bol Ke vo bi rone lagti hai
didi: rote hue bolti hai betu vo chala gya vo chala gya
pari : kon chala gya didi
didi: bhai chala gya Hamra bhai
pari : Didi Amit bahi and rohan bhai to yahi hai
Didi : vo nai Hamra saga bhai Vikram
pari : kya Didi vo Hamra bhai kintu vo to nokr ta Na
didi: nahi sweetu vo nokr nai ta vo Hamra saga bhai ta
pari: kya would saga Bhai ta Ye bolte hue vo aur rone lagti hai
kunki mai hamesa uske ko chocolate deta ta and uske saath kelta ta Kisi pata nai ta iss baare Mai
pari : didi about bhai kabi wapis nai aaynge kya
Didi : nai vo aayga Kabi to usse hamri yaad wapis leke aayga
Ye sab mom dad and baki sabki wajh setup hua hai
pari : ha didi sahi kaha apne hamesa hunko marte rehte Te Mai ab Kabi baa nai karunga
did: Mai bi sweet
gar ke andr mai chala gya iski kbr sunte hi sab kush ho jaate and ek badi party rakte hai
In train....
ab kafi raat Ho chuki ti
train Mai kafi sannta ta.
mai bi chupchap so gya bhook to bahoot lagi but ab kar bi kya sakte hai
Next day....
Train ek platform par ruki ti mai bi utar gya waha pe board deka to pta chal ki mai mumbai mai aa gay ta
maine jo ma ke pass se paise liye Te usse kuch khna liya and kha liya jisse thodi bhook sant hui
Baad mai wha setup chlte gya chlte hue main bhoot dur aa gya ta road bi sumsan ta
at home......
MA ne bi muje dudne ki koshi ki lekin kuch pta nai chala
didi bi sabse bahot kam baate karti ti pari bi thoda bahoot ese karti ti
baki sab to kushiya mana rahe te
back to me......
ab raat Ho gai ti main bi sumsaan sadk pe chl raha ta tabi ek car udr piche se aati and muje uda deti hai jisse muje bahoot chot lagti hai Mai dur jaake gir ta hu
Baaki next update mai........