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Devrani k baat sun kar kamla has deti hai or man me

kamla man me: Apne aashiq se milne aaj nadi par jayegi jo kal tak sanskari ka pallu odhe ghar se bahar nahi nikalti thi

kamla:aap aise he khush rahe maharani or yaad rakhe k aap dono ki prem leela kisi ko dikhe nahi

devrani kamla k paas aakar uska dono hath pakad leti hai
"kamla tumhara bhut dhanywad behan aaj tumhare wajah se mai apna pyar pane ja rahi hu or itni khush hu jaise koi gham he. nahi tha,tumne mera har mauqe pe sath dya"

"kamla bolo iske badle me kya chahiye?"
kamla:mujhe jab chahiye hoga to bata dungi abhi to ap log khul k jeeyo

devrani:Han ab kisi ko pta bhi chal jaye to me uska parwah nahi karungi or na darungi kabhi
"Ghut Ghut k 100 din jeene se acha hai ek din khushi k jee lo"

Kamla:wah ab to badi bahadur ho gai h aap

Raat me devrani khub jam k pakwan banati hai or sath he khaskar k kheer banati hai apne hatho se baldev k lye

Raat ka bhojan karne sab baithe the ek taraf baldev or uske pita rajpal or dusri traf devrani or shurushti

kamla or radha khane ki tayyari kar rahi thi

rajpal:Kamla ,zara maa ka bhi bhojan unke kaksha me pahucha dena

Kamla:aap log kha le me unke lye hu na
Dheere dheere bhojan kamla or radha laga deti hai or sab khana shuru karte hai

Rajpal:wah aaj ka khana zyada swadisht lag raha hai

Shurushti:Han wo to hai

Kamla:aaj mahrani devrani ne banaya hai

shurushti kamla k muh se mahrani sunte aagbabula ho jati hai

Rajpal:Kya baat hai raani devrani aaj aap bhut saji sawri khush nazar aarahi ho or upar se itna acha khana bhi

Kamla:man me)Ab tumhe kya bataye rajpal ki ye devrani ki chut ne apne barabar laude k intezam hone jane k bad khushi se devrani ko majbur kar dya khana banane

Devrani:man me)Maharaj aapko kya batau k aap k nikamme hone k wajah se aaj me apne he putra se ek premi k roop me tum. sab se chhup k milne ja rahi hu

Shurushti:maharaj itna bhi acha khana nahi hai wo to devrani thek thak bana leti hai

Kamla:man me)ab iski q jali padi hai isko to budhe land se he kam chalate rehna padega devrani ki barabri karti hai karam jalli

shurushti devrani ka tareef sun kar tunak kar uth jati hai

rajpal:beta tumhe kaisa laga

baldev jo chupchap chor nazro se devrani pr nazre gadaye tha wo devrani k aakho me aakhe dekh

Baldev:"bhut achhi hai"
rajpal:Kaun achi hai ? tumhari ma!

Rajpal:mai khane ki bat kar raha hu ye to mujhe pata hai tumhari maa achi hai tumhara bhut dhyan rakhti hai

Devrani k traf dekhta hai or uske pallu k jalidar kapdo se uske bade uche dooh ko dekh

Baldev:inke ye bhi achhe hai

Rajpal:kya bak bak kar rahe ho

Baldev:matlab maa bhi achi or inke hatho ka ye sab khana bhut ache hai

rajpal:aw: han tumne sahi kaha

ye baat samajh halka sa sharma kar devrani apna sar niche kar khane lagti hai

Baldev;or liijiye na pita ji

rajpal:nahi nahi ab nahi

Baldev:ab lijiye ye kya baat hui
"Maa itni achi hai maa k ye sab cheez khane layak hai"
"par aap khate he nahi "

Rajpal: ab budhapa hua pehle jaisi bat nahi

Baldev:par me to thaku nahi kabhi itne achhe khane mile to

Rajpal:Han tum jawan ho tum khao pio kuch mat chhorna sab chat chut k kha jao

Baldev:bas ap ki aagya or aashirwad mil jaye to me itna khau k din rat kha kar mota ho jau
Rajpal:meri aagya or aashirwad hai mere hissa bhi kha liya karo
Baldev:ab me chat chut kar khaunga,maa ab mujhe mana mat karna

Devrani ye sun kar muskurati hai
Devrani:"han nahi karungi mana"
jitna jee chahe kha lena "

devrani apne hoth apne dant se peesti hui kehti hai

Baldev khana kha kar bahar chala jata hai or kamla or devrani bartan sametne lagti hai

kamla:ab to tumhara aashiq bhi chala gaya
nadi par
tum kab jaaogi

Devrani:kamla dekho na ,sainik bal charo ore ghire hai or ye maharaj or shurushti bhi piche pade rehte hai nazar rakhte hai

kamla:peeche k raaste se jao

devrani:han inlogo ko jhapki lene do fir jaungi baldev se milne

kamla:or han jaldi aajana puri rat nadi par mat ruk jana

Devrani:nahi re kamla

kamla:han nahi to zyada samay ruki nadi par to baldev tumhare nadi me gote laga lega

is baaat kamla apna sar jhukaye sharmati hai
devrani:kuch bhi kehti ho bhagwan tumhe sadbudhi de

Baldev khana kha kar tehalne k bahane nadi ki ore chal deta hai
sochte hue

baldev man me) Aaj kaisa din hai mai apni maa jo ab meri premika ban gai hai us se prem leela k lye nadi par bulaya hu or wo bhi ghar walo or sainiko se chhup kar aayegi apne yaar se milne,ye prem ye milne ki tadap ye jism ki aag hum se kya kya karwati hai


Raat dheere badh rahi thi or sab apne apne kaksha me aaram kar the or sainik bal bhi ab ek ek kona pakar kar jhapki lene lage the isi ka fayda utha kar devrani halka sa apna shringar karti hai or apne aashique se milne k lye piche k darwaze se nadi k bahar jane lagti hai

devrani:man me)bhagwan kuch gadbad naho kahi kisi ne hume dhar lya to kya hoga ,ary nahi mai q daru mera baldev sab smbhal lega jo hoga dekh lenge

"par aaj apne premi se aise chori chhupe milne jane ka aanand kuch or he hai"or muskura rahi thi

baldev idhar nadi par pahuch kar ek ped k niche chhote se pathhar par baith jata hai or apne hath me kuch kankar le kar nadi k chalte hue paani par maarne lagta hai

devrani tabhi nadi par pahuch kar charo ore dekhti hai or purnima ki raat ki roshni me baldev baitha hua ped k niche dikh jata hai

devrani ek muskan k sath"kitni shiddat se intezar kar raha hai mera premi"

Devrani dheere dheere chal k baldev k paas pahuch rahi thi andar se devrani ka dill zor se dhadkne laga hai or uske hath or pair halka kanpne lagta hai

baldev dheere chal se mastani devrani saji savri apne kase hue badan ko ek chhote se blouse or sadi me lapti or apne laaj sharm ko chhupate hue uske paas aa rahi thi

baldev:man me)sharmao mat maa tumhare sare laj sharm nikal dunga

Devrani ab baldev k samne khadi thi wo apne pair k anguthe ko apne anguthe k bagal wali ungli pr chadhaye thi or uski aakhe niche thi jaise intezar kar rahi ho k baldev kuch kahe

Baldev apni maa ka roop dekh kho gaya tha or nihare ja raha tha par andar he andar uski bhi thodi dill ki dhadkan badh gayi thi q k ye bhi uska pehla pyar tha

devrani bhi apne pehle pyar or apne pehle yaar k samne saji sawri usko apne apko padosne aai thi

aakhir kar baldev he himmat kar k chuppi todta hai

Baldev:maa bhut der kar di

devrani sar utha kar baldev ko dekhti hai jo apne mucho par tav de raha tha

devrani:han wo sab k sone ka intezar kar rahi thi

Baldev:muskura k " acha aao mere paas baitho"

baldev k ache bartav se devrani uske paas he pathar par baith jati hai

Baldev:khana kha lya aapne

Devrani:hmm

Baldev:jhut
Devrani:hmmm
Baldev:kha kar aana tha me thoda samay or pratiksha kar leta
devrani:thode der me he to tumhari halat aisi ho gai or muskurati hai waise deri maine nahi tumne ki

Baldev:wo kaise
Devrani:tumne batane me wo to kamla ka bhala ho

baldev muskura kar "acha ji"
Baldev:me darta tha k kahi tum
Devrani:han himmat nahi tum me

Baldev:aisi baat nahi
devrani:kya aisi baat nahi maine he patra likha jab tum madeera me doobe rehte the to tum milne aaye

baldev or devrani apna muh abhi bhi nadi k traf kye the or bate kye ja rhe the bina dusre ko dekhe

Baldev:dhanywad maa

Devrani:chup karo dhanyawad kitni baat ka karoge ,tum itni q peete ho? han ?

Baldev:wo hmm

devrani baldev k zor se puchti hai jiska baldev uttar nahi de paraha tha tabhi devrani usko apne samne aane ko kehti hai

devrani:idhar aao mere samne mere aakho me aakhe daal kar kaho

baldev uth kar pathhar par baithi devrani k samne khada ho jata hai

devrani:badh kar vriksha ho gaye par ek chhoti si baat kahne ki himmat nahi jutai or madeera me lipt ho gaye

ye keh kar devrani baldev jo 6.3 uchai ka tha usko niche aane ko kehti hai
Devrani:niche aao tum itne uche ho k me tumhare aakhe nahi dekh sakti k kya jhut kya sach keh rahe ho

baldev ye sun kar apne ghutno k bal devrani k aage baith jata hai

baldev k aakh aasu se bhare the

devrani:agar tumhe kuch ho jata to
kya karti mai? kaha jati mai?

or tumne kaise soch lya k agar tum apne pyar ka izhar kar dete to me kya tumhe jaan se maar deti ?

or to or tumne to mere lye pati bhi dhund lya or us din mujhe kisi or k paas bhi le ja kar rakh dete ?
Devrani:baldev sun rhe ho na
Baldev:hmmm
baldev chupchap sune ja rha tha or uska dard uske aakho me pani bane dikh raha tha

Devrani:kya tum pagal ho
or ab devrani k aakho se aasu behane lagte hai kya tum khush reh pate mujhe kisi or ko saunp ke?

Devrani:tumne aisa socha bhi kaise han
devrani apna hath le ja kar baldev ko halka thappar maarti hai or zor se rone lagti hai

"tum mere pehle pyar ho or mere bete bhi me tumhare pyar ki qurbani de kar kabhi jee nahi pati or tum to do din marne k haal me aagaye the tum to mar he jate "

Baldev:han maa
Devrani:or tumne kaha tha k tum jaan de doge apni agar mai nahi mili to

Baldev:hmm
devrani rote hue uth khadi hoti hai or sidha. baldev k baaho me aakr uska gardan pakad kr latak si jati hai

Devrani:khabardar agar tumne apne marne ka socha bhi to tumhare jaan se pehle meri jaan jayegi
or fafak k rone lagti hai

apni maa apni premika ko aise apne latke dekh apne dono hatho se apni maa ko pakar leta hai or maa ko utha leta hai

baldev:nahi maa mujhe muaf kar do

devrani:mujhe bhi muaaf kar do jo me dusre purush ka soch rahi thi

Baldev:tumhe me jeevan bhar apni bana kar rakhunga

devrani:mujhe to baaki k har janam me tum he chahiye
or fir se dono gale lagte hai

thode der tak gale lagne par dono ka dill thanda hota hai

devrani:ab utaaro mujhe niche tum thak gaye honge

baldev:me tumhare bhar se kabhi thak nahi sakta
Devrani:me koi halki nahi jo tum aise uthaye rahoge to chal jayega tumhari nas na chadh jaye

baldev devrani ko utaar deta hai

baldev:waise meri qabiliyat pe itna bharosa hai k me tumhara dugna bhar raat bhar utha k rakhu to tass se mass nahi hounga

devrani:ha aaye bade pehalwan kahi k ,chalo ab jaldi chale ghar

devrani aage aage chalne lagti hai baldev abhi jana nahi chahta tha wo bas ruk gaya tha
devrani usko palat kar dekhti hai
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Devrani:kya ullu ho niharna band karo or chalo
Baldev:ullu nahi me chakor hu or tum chand ho
devrani bhalibhanti janti thi k baldev uske pichwade pe nazar gadaye hua hai ,devrani ab halka apne gand ko hila deti hai

Baldev:thodi der or ruko na
Devrani:apne mastani chal se jane lagti hai or jan bujh kar baldev ko tadpa rahi thi or dheere par aith k chal rahi thi

Baldev:ruko me bata ta hu meri baat na manti ho

Devrani dekhti hai baldev uske taraf tezi se bhag rha hai to wo bhi bhagne si lagti hai par baldev jhat se usko piche se pakad leta hai
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Devrani ko kase hue baldev ab uske piche ss chipak jata hai
devrani:uff hey bhagwan
Baldev:kab tak bhagogi
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ab baldev ka land devrani ko apne piche mehsus hone lagta hai or uske muh se siskari nikalne lagti hi
baldev:itni sajti sawarti ho tum kahi koi bhaga na le jaye
devrani:aah" mujhe bhaga le jane wale k pas sher ka dill hona chahiye " uhh"

baldev k is trah masalne se devrani machal rahi thi or uske sadi ka pallu gir jata hai
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baldev devrani k kamar me hath rakh kar devrani k kandhe ko chumta hai jis se devrani baldev se door hoti hai or uske samne seedhi khadi hoti hai
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bina pallu k blouse me kase gendo ki traf baldev bade chav se dekh raha tha
baldev:man me)ye sach me itne bade hai k Ghatrashtra me itne bade kisi ki chuchi nahi ho maa tum sach me pari ho

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Mangalsutra or sindur lagaye devrani qayamt dha rahi thi
Baldev:maa blouse ache hai
devrani:sirf blouse or kamukta se dekhti hai

baldev:wo bhi bade ache hai
Devrani:bass sirf bade ache hai or koi shabd nahi

baldev:Bhut bade bade ..ache hai
iska arth smajh kar devrani sharma jati hai

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or baldev se door jane lagti hai baldev uske sadi ka pallu pakad k uske pas jata hai or uske bade vaksha ko dhak deta hai

baldev ka aisa karne se devrani bhut he khush hoti hai
Baldev:ab chale maa
Devrani:chalo beta ji

raste me chalne lagte hai or baldev raste m kuch kankar utha kar fir unko paani me fekne lagta hai

devrani:tum dheere dheere bachpana me jate ja rhe ho
Baldev:pyar me aksar log bache ho jate hai

devrani:han ye pathar he marte raho pani me bacho ki trah..

baldev devrani k aakho me dekhta hai
Baldev:Abhi to pathar he hai kuch milega to wo bhi maar lunga

aisi khullamkhulla maarne ki baat smajh kar. devrani ka muh khula ka khula reh jata hai
devrani:besharam..

To be continue..
 

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Dosto me chhota sa job karta hu kabhi time milta hai kabhi nahi or kaam dhanda chhor kar sirf kahani nahi likh sakta is baat ko samjhiye aap xforum pe un stories ko dekhiye jinke updates mahine ya hafta me ek aate hai
fir bhi log us stories per writer ka sath dete hai
 

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Me ek baat clear karta hu please kabhi update nahi de paau to aap ye samjhe k mujhe samay nahi mil paya or jaise he samay milega me update dunga

aap logo ko me guarantee nahi de sakta k me roz update dunga chhota dunga ya bada dunga


me apne taraf se puri koshish karunga k me update roz du or jab mujhe time milega me ek ak extra de dunga iska matlab ye nahi k me roz do ya teen update de du

agar aap aisa expect kar rhe ho to aap umeed chhor do
 
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